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artist-assassin · 10 months
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its my bday next month
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allen-arthur · 11 months
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I don't really have the time to be a beta reader but I do have a little advice if you want it!
You seem to use a lot of flowery and fancy language and, despite the story being good, it kind of detracts from it.
That may be because I'm a bit stupid and have to pause and think over the word but it breaks up the flow and loosing yourself you get in writing if that makes sense?
Sorry if this is a bit mean I really don't mean it like that.
Howdy Anon! I don’t mind some advice and you seem pretty kind ✌🏻.
I will admit I’m not very good at writing at all so I do use other resources to help me explain scenes and other items which probably does use a lot of big words (and NO I don’t use AI as a resource for anyone who asks - I work in IT I get grumpy about that easily)
This is the first run through of me re-writing the story and trying to make it longer with detail. I’ll definitely go back through and see if I can change up some items and get rid of some of the language.
Also once I find a beta reader that will help a ton too! But if you’d ever like to see updates or re-works just shot me an ask. Keep me in check if I use to many fancy words 🤠
(Also you’re not stupid 💚 no one is ever stupid when it comes to reading. It’s hard to read and write - I’m mainly used to reading 0’s and 1’s from certain machines.)
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soraeia · 1 month
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Person A: She's fast in her attacks. But she'll exhaust her magic eventually. I just have to wait her out.
Person B: *keeps attacking. relentlessly. with no sign of slowing down*
Person A: On second thought---
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Susie and Allison Angel with their respective pride flags?
The. Gals.
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(Requests are open! :D)
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thedetectiveofinaba · 4 months
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Kingdom Hearts is one of the examples on how I see game design and prequels as & how they should function in theory. It's one of the few anomalies in some ppl's opinion and sth I kinda... Agree to disagree? In most cases it's probably the best case to play the base game before spinoffs so you get the main idea of game-relevant terms, themes etc.
KH1 is good groundwork but if you decide to do what I did and play BBS first w/ a PSP emulator you're not really ruining your experience with the series. It's going to be a clusterfuck anyway and everyone is on Nomura's Wild Ride and enabling him to go batshit. If possible, KH1 is a good start but BBS ain't a bad start either. Starting at the beginning is a good conclusion.
In the best case scenario on you being able to do both you SHOULD be able to play them in chronological order and get the whole picture that way. It's most likely different to the one who played it in release order but neither is inferior or superior. Your own experience will always be personal either way and how you want to do things & ppl have their preferences in gaming.
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donuts4evry1 · 9 months
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I just remembered my coworker showed me a picture of the immortal jellyfish and I was like... completely unimpressed.
I mean, the immortal jellyfish is certainly cool- but it's a little too overrated imo.
I'm not ungrateful for common jellyfish knowledge, of course, but idk perhaps my standards for a "cool jellyfact" is a little high 🥲🥲...
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freedomarrow · 9 months
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31. Writer’s choice
"I should thank you for that last battle, Leonardo."
The archer blinks upon hearing his name before turning, forced to crane his neck to look in the eyes of the Hawk King as he approaches him. The words take him a moment to process, but he cannot help but find himself befuddled.
"Thank me... for what?" His voice is quiet, as though expecting a negative reaction. "Didn't I just... kill a bunch of your men?"
"Hm? No, not at all. Were that the case I'd have to hate myself as well just now," the large man huffs. There is a smile on his face, and yet in spite of that, somehow, Leonardo can feel he is absolutely and fully serious. Indeed, the expression vanishes the instant he continues speaking.
"You helped free my brothers' souls from torment." He crosses his arms, his voice falling as he talks of something clearly difficult for him; briefly, his eyes falter, looking away from the archer. "To become a Feral One is torture beyond imagination. It can and will break any laguz out there. It has broken any that met this fate. And then, that wretch would not even let their souls rest peacefully, forcing them to fight for him." He shakes his head. Leonardo can see it, the urge in every muscle of the Hawk King's body, wishing Izuka would resurrect himself just so he could tear him to shreds again. And again. And again - but it subsides as the violent impulse fades from him (funny, they always told us the sub-humans could not do that) and addresses him again. "So for helping me free them from this fate and send them to a peaceful rest, I have nothing but thanks."
Leonardo remains silent for a moment, considering the weight and meaning of his words. It takes a bit before he can think of something that would feel appropriate to reply with.
"... I still don't think you need to thank me for anything, King Tibarn," he says quietly. "I did... what I had to, and what was right."
"To do what's right can sometimes be the most difficult thing of all," the Hawk responds with a good-humored huff. "At any rate, we are all in this together now. Do remember that if you need any help, I've got your back, alright?"
There is something about the other's posture and expression that makes it unusually easy for Leonardo to relax a little. "In that case... there is a favor I'm thinking of that I would like to ask."
"Oh?" The laguz king tilts his head slightly, curiosity visibly piqued. "That was quick. Let's hear it, then."
A light, shy smile creases the archer's lips. It feels like a silly request, a little out of line perhaps - but one he feels he simply must make. "Would you... allow me to team up with you? I'd like to learn more about you and your people. I mean... being from Daein, I've only ever been taught about how to kill your people. I'd like... I'd like to know more than just that."
He is not certain at first what the reaction will be - but then the smile on the Hawk King's face widens, and finally he lets out a laugh, patting Leonardo's back with his wing; a friendly pat, and yet with enough force to make the blond stumble forward a step.
"By all means, kid. I like your way of thinking. So be it! We'll learn about each other together."
Leonardo chuckles as he regains his footing. "Thank you, King Tibarn. Let's do that, yes. It will be an honor."
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And perhaps, one day, I will be able to make the skies of Daein safe for your kind.
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haresvoid · 5 months
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I did not realize until recently that the "Survival Instinct" tadpole ability is gained through letting Ome investigate the parasite I'm a fake fan
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specialagent836 · 7 months
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>>ACK Tumblr just notified me that this blog is a year old. This goo man has been gracing the dash for that long. Thank you to all who love him as much as I do :3
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mz-pixie · 11 months
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Hello June 💜✨🏳️‍🌈🌸🏳️‍⚧️🌈
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artist-assassin · 2 years
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im almost 21  😳 mentally i feel like im still flunking math in highschool. is this what its like to Grow Up
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korinthiakos · 10 months
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I wake up, I put on AHS and I begin to wonder why
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soraeia · 4 months
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wifi is being wonky so I suppose I will just doodle
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misteria247 · 2 years
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So I managed to get my hands on books one and three of IDW's TMNT and bruh-
Raph is apparently missing?????????? Like my boy how the hell did this happen?????????
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ghoulguise · 2 years
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redxriiot · 10 months
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I forgot how much I love Snake aaaaaa
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