I'm with you on how terrible we found Fantastic Beasts. Now let me ask, how would you have written/built the Fantastic Beasts storyline?
I have not watched the 3rd movie so itâs possible that they have managed to turn it all around, but to start with I would give some actual connection to the movies beyond the title and characters. Otherwise it just feels like those children books: âX goes to the parkâ, âX in the supermarketâ, where we see the same people in different situations but they are disconnected from each other.
I probably would have gone a different route all together, but suppose Warner has already hired the actors and started building the sets so we must use at least some elements from the movies. In that case I would make a story of discovery and reflection in three parts, with narcissism being the main theme.
First movie
Newt goes to NY with his magical bag. Most of the film is the same, but we get a sense of Newt being less childish (less painfully obvious and thinly surreptitious wand waving around muggles) and a bit more selfish. However, we should like him more for it.
Newt is, to the society of the time, completely mental. Rather than going on hunts and collecting trophies, he is recuing animals! I would emphasize that the animals he keeps have been compromised and canât be safely returned to their habitats and since conditions and wizarding zoos are deplorable, he keeps them with him. The exception is that thunder bird he has come to release.
And thatâs his goal, releasing the thunder bird, which he pursues with extreme focus. He doesnât care about anything else which is why he is so open to Jacob the Muggle. Newt could be imprisoned* and Jacob would be obliviated into a stupor, but Newt doesnât care about personal risks so he doesnât care about the danger he poses to others. He is selfish that way. A generous kind of selfishness, sure, but dangerous.
Iâm sorry, but the President of the MACUSA is not a woman nor a POC. It must be a white man surrounded by white men, one of whom might be either Catholic or Jewish and thatâs all the diversity you see. Are there POC wizards? Yes. But not in positions of power. There is a bigger emphasis on the separation of wizards and No-Maj, with waaay more surveillance and harsher punishments. Suspicion alone may be enough to break your wand in some cases.
* And thatâs how I could believe that POC wizards and witches (WWs from now on because âmagicalsâ sounds weird) arenât intervening in muggle spaces. They must be suffering similar levels of racism. They are tolerated, maybe they have better prospects that POC muggles, but thatâs it. I canât believe none of them would show some solidarity to the Non-Maj, unless it meant being summarily executed.
(Oh, and there would be this scene in which we see law-abiding and conscientious Tina stalking the house of an African-American muggle family. Nothing is said of it, other that Tina used to work with a muggle-born partner but now she works alone. Keen-eyed viewers will notice some hoodo trinkets in Tinaâs flat, and a photograph of Tina with an African American woman, and then we will know).
I donât remember Credenceâs storyline very well, but it doesnât matter. What is important is that Graves (powerful white man Graves) develops some sort of empathy. He doesnât want it, but itâs there in his heart now. Maybe something with Newtâs animals. Some âbeastâ (look at how they say beasts and not animals) should have maimed and eaten Graves, but doesnât because Newt is there in all his animal-loving glory. Graves gets to see the monster as merely a scared and hurt animal and learns to treat others with some decency and kindness.
That would be a nice classic movie, (prejudiced man gets over himself), but we canât end it here. I would even allow for Tinaâs scene stalking the house to be cut in order to have time for the climax: the moment when Graves realizes his society and his government may not always be right and defies direct orders by helping Credence. As I said, I donât remember what the deal with Credence was, but Graves fixes it. There will be a personal cost to his career, but losing a promotion is nothing compared to saving a life, which is what he does. No ambiguous explosion or cloud of smoke. Credence is evidently and irrevocably safe at the cost of Graves being demoted.
There is no Gellert Grindelwald whatsoever, except maybe some government secretary mentioning they like that guy from Europe.
Second movie
Set in London rather than Paris. Newt receives the visit from a lovely, lovely, gentleman who, as it turns out, doesnât think Newt is a fool. The charming gentleman asks Newt about the dragons, specifically the ones in Gringotts and oh, oh, Newt is against it. Itâs abominable and unethical. But Newt would rather not think too much about it because, what can he do? He would rather focus on helping those he can and on spreading his thoughts on animal conservation. He is publishing a journal, although he admits it doesnât do too well. He has twelve subscribers and seven of them openly mock his papers during dinner parties.
The charming gentleman says, but what if Newt could do something about it? What would Newt be willing to do? Would he break the law?
Newt laughs. He is forbidden from leaving the country. He is no stranger to jumping, crossing, tampering or breaking the law.
Marvelous! The charming gentleman reveals that he, like Newt, is unhappy with their society. It is weak and corrupt* and someone must do something about it. They have to fix it.
So the charming gentleman introduces Newt to some other like-minded friends and together they plan a heist to get into Gringotts and release the dragons. It is time to build a society one can feel proud of!
We get the heist, which is clever and delightful. The charming gentleman is brave, smart and powerful with his magic. There is a moment when some of the co-conspirators, and even the charming gentleman himself, get inside some vaults. This is not what they had planned! Not at all. But the charming gentleman assures Newt that he has good reasons.
They get out. And here comes the Nagini moment. Meaning I really, really, really, donât need to see an Asian woman condemned to whatever that was in the second movie. I donât need to have beautiful Neville kill a woman who has been turned into a snake and then a Horcrux.
But, do you want an âoh noâ moment? Here it comes.
Because of the heist, Gringotts revises their security measures. That poor dragon in Deathly Hallows? The one with scars who had been conditioned to fear a certain sound? Newtâs fault. And the charming gentleman doesnât care.
We have established in the previous movie that Newt is somewhat selfish and short-sighted. He rejects his society and cares only about his animals which is very nice. Newt is well intentioned, but that is not enough. Not caring about politics is the privilege of those in the elite (and despite Newtsâ eccentricities he is very much the elite). The previous movie had Gravesâ awakening. The man discovering something about himself in this movie is Newt.
Newt realizes that he must be an active participant in society. Sadly, he only realizes it after he has helped Gellert Grindelwald steal a number of very important artefacts as well as some gold to fund his project to reform Europe.
The epilogue of the movie has Albus Dumbledore visiting Newt, telling him not to be too hard on himself because he, Dumbledore, also fell for Gellert lies. And if Newt wants to do something about it, Dumbledore has some ideas.
* History fans might not realize immediately, but hopefully they will catch on the fact that all of the beautiful arguments from the charming gentleman are about weakness of the state, which is a common fascist trope.
Third movie
In which characters from previous movies are brought back without having to completely destroy their personalities.
Graves is in Europe and he pays a visit to Newt to ask for his help. Graves is using his new found empathy (that he didnât want) to investigate a series of highly suspicious murders and incidents. The victims were all Latinas so it was dismissed, but Graves thinks there is something.
Two scenes later in comes Tina, who has quitted her job in order to track the murderer of some friendâs friend. An African American child is dead, no it was not the No-Maj, it was someone else, someone who wanted to cover their tracks and leave no witnesses and Tina is going to eat their heart.
Is it possible that Graves and Tina are after the same person? Yes and no. It is two different henchmen but Dumbledore has no trouble going beyond the small picture to see the pattern. He knows Grindelwald always had an interest in powerful artefacts, not just the Deathly Hallows.
Grindelwald has stolen the Macguffin, a powerful artefact belonging to a Latin-American community. With that and the Elder Wand he will be unstoppable. Oh no!
But! Newt realizes there is something missing. The raven is not a symbol of death in all cultures. Grindelwald might not fully understand what he has taken or how to use it.
So Graves and Tina go fight Grindelwaldâs organization and be awesome together, delaying Grindelwaldâs big coup. Meanwhile, Newt illegally leaves the country, goes back to NY, takes Queenie and deploys her. Because Queenie is nice. She plays the vapid pretty woman, but she is above all nice and if someone can make a hurt and distrustful community open their door to strangers, it is going to be Queenie with the help of Jacobâs bread.
And, indeed! They succeed. The bruja Latina explains about the Macguffin. Grildelwald doesnât understand what he has stolen. It is not meant to be used like that at all.
They go back to Europe quickly, Newt relays this information to Dumbledore and he steps to his duel with Grindelwald armed with the knowledge and insight that comes from showing some measure of respect to other people for once.
(And if it seems that Dumbledoreâs victory rests on other peopleâs work, well, Dumbledoreâs main trait is his ability to earn peopleâs trust and devotion. But I guess Newt and Queenie could have brought the bruja with them and after a nice chat with Dumbledore she agrees to share their secrets with him, so he has the opportunity to show he is different).
Rather than having a man realize something, this movie is about the consequences of not opening your eyes: Gindelwaldâs fall. It would also nicely establish Dumbledoreâs best manipulative traits. If we must have het couples, Tina saves Newtâs from some mook and taker a kiss. Graves goes with the pretty Lestrange, I guess, to have a long life of morality sanctioned crimes.
(A TV show. Twelve episodes. Cancelled after the first season. Graves and Lestrange are back in the States helping oppressed communities and dodging the MACUSA and whatever the equivalent of the FBI was back then).
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âThatâs it?â Steve asks. âYouâre not going to go to prom because you donât know how to dance?â
âIâm uncoordinated enough! I donât need to be out there making even more of an idiot of myself in some floofy dress,â Robin insists.
âRob, no one at prom knows how to dance. Everyone kind of looks like an idiot, thatâs half the point,â Steve says.
âOh yeah, Steve, youâre really selling me on the experience,â Robin drawls.
âNo, listen, Iâm not done,â Steve says, giving her a nudge. âThe other half of the point is just⌠going and having the memories, yâknow? You get to dress up and take the dumb picture with your date, and avoid the punch because someone probably spiked it, and you get to dance and be close to someone and just, like, be carefree for a night.â
Robin says nothing. She doesnât agree that prom night is paramount to the teen experience, she doesnât tease the shit out of him for having such stereotypical expectations of a dumb high school dance, sheâs just⌠watching him. Sheâs turned sideways on the sofa, one leg drawn up to her chest, and sheâs looking at him like heâs something between a fascinating puzzle and the saddest thing sheâs seen all day, and he knows what sheâs thinking.
Steve hadnât gone to senior prom. Heâd been planning to, of course, at the beginning of the year â heâd had Nancy then, and even as early as October, heâd been fantasizing about the flowers heâd bring her and the dinner theyâd go to and the way they would sway slowly to whatever shitty songs the DJ put on. But by the time spring had rolled around, he not only hadnât had Nancy, he hadnât really had any friends in school at allânot real onesâand so he hadnât seen the point in attending.
He'd gone to a movie with Dustin that night, instead (heâs at least eighty percent certain the little shit had set it up as some kind of pity outing, since heâd known Steve wasnât going to prom, but it had been kind of nice that someone had cared enough to even try). It hadnât been bad, but it hadnât been exactly what heâd wanted.
Stiffly, Steve glances away from Robin and shrugs. âOr whatever. Thatâs what itâs like in the movies, right?â
Robin opens her mouth, but her eyes are still soft, and suddenly Steve doesnât want to hear what she has to say. Instead, he levers himself up off the couch and turns to her, holding out a hand.
âCâmon, Iâll teach you,â he says, cracking a grin. âThen you wonât have an excuse not to go.â
âYou⌠want to teach me how to dance,â Robin asks flatly.
Steve shrugs. âYou got anything better to do tonight?â
Raising a sharp brow at Steve, Robin starts to smile, too. âYou sure you wanna subject your feet to that?â
âI think I can handle it,â Steve shoots back, and then Robin is up off the couch and helping him push the coffee table out of the way.
They rifle through Steveâs collection of tapes until they find something he deems just the right tempo, pop the cassette in, and stand in the middle of the living room.
âOkay, give me your hand,â Steve says, taking her right hand in his left, âand your other goes on my shoulder.â
Robin does as he says, glancing dubiously down at her feet as Steve places his hand on her waist. âIâm not actually sure this is a good idea,â she says with a grimace. âI might be unteachable.â
âWe havenât even started yet,â Steve reminds her. âSeriously, relax, this is super easy. Itâs just a box step waltz.â
Despite her uncertainty, Robin canât help but smirk at him. âA waltz, huh?â she teases. âDid your parents make you take fancy-pants, rich kid dance lessons when you were younger, or something?â
Steve rolls his eyes. âNo. My mom taught me,â he says, and then rushes on before Robin has anything to say about that. âSo youâre gonna start by stepping back with your right foot when I step forward, alright?â
Brows furrowed, Robin nods and looks down at her feet again, and Steve squeezes her waist gently to get her attention.
âLook up at me, not at your feet. Itâll be easier, I promise.â
âHow am I going to know what my feet are doing if Iâm not looking at them?â
âYouâre attached to them, Robin.â
âThatâs debatable.â
Steve tries not to laugh. He really does. âOkay, youâre in marching band, right? This cannot be harder than following whatever steps that involves while also playing an instrument.â
âThis is different!â Robin insists. âI canât step on the French hornâs feet! The French horn isnât gonna judge me if I fuck up! Like, the worst thatâll happen in marching band is that the drum major will yell at you, and the drum major is always yelling, so it doesnât even make a difference anymore, andââ
âHey,â Steve cuts in, squeezing Robinâs hand this time. âIâm not going to judge you if you fuck up, okay? I am literally the last person qualified to do that.â
Robin huffs out a little laugh. âRight. Two of a kind,â she says.
âExactly.â Steve grins. âNow câmon, Buckley, I know youâve got this. On one, back with your right foot.â
Nodding, Robin glances down at her feet, but looks right back up at Steve. âOkay.â
âOkay. Oneââ
Steve steps forward with his left foot, and Robin immediately steps forward with her right and kicks him in the shin.
âOw,â Steve says, dry and flat because it hadnât really hurt.
âSorry!â Robin ducks her head, laughing nervously.
Steve shakes his head. âLetâs try that again. Back with your right foot.â
âAt least I had the right side?â
âYep, now aim for the right direction, yeah?â
This time, when Steve counts off, Robinâs right foot goes back, and his left follows her.
âOkay, now what?â Robin asks, looking down again.
âNow, youâre gonna bring your left footââ gently, Steve judges the top of her left foot with his right, âback,â as she begins to slide back, he moves and taps the inside of her ankle, âand to the left. Just like that.â
âNo injuries this time,â Robin quips, and Steve smiles.
âNow move your right foot over next to your left.â He nods as Robin gets her feet back together. âForward with your left foot â good,â he encourages as he steps back to mirror her. âAnd now forward and to the side with your right. Like you did with your left before, but opposite.â
âUh.â Robin makes the move slowly, still staring down, but she looks back up at him when she gets her right foot planted. âLike that?â
âYep. Now left foot over, andââ Steve follows her, bringing them back to the same position they started in, âthatâs it!â
Robin blinks at him. âThatâs it?â
âEasy, right?â Steve says.
âYeah.â Robin nods hesitantly. âI think I can handle that.â
âOf course you can,â Steve insists. âNow letâs try it again. Back with your right foot. Oneââ
Robin steps forward with her right and kicks Steve in the shin.
âSorry!â
Steve quickly becomes glad theyâre both in their socks, or heâd be sporting much more serious bruises by the time they reach the end of the tape. Robin doesnât have any trouble keeping the order of the steps in mind, but keeps moving in the opposite direction of where sheâs supposed to be going, and Steve has been kicked and stepped on more times in the last half hour than he thinks he has been in his entire life.
âThis is ridiculous,â Robin groans. âThis is the literal definition of women having to do everything backwards and in heels!â
âYouâre not wearing heels,â Steve points out.
âI would be at prom,â Robin says. âWhy do I have to go backwards?â
âBecause youâre following.â
âWell why canât I lead?â
âBecause you donât even know how to follow!â
âExactly! Iâm starting from scratch either way!â Robin aims pleading eyes up at Steve. âCanât we just try it in reverse? How much worse at it could I be?â
The thing is, Steveâs only ever led when dancing â heâs never had reason to learn how to do the follow part. But then, heâs already been reversing the steps in his head all night in order to instruct Robin; following couldnât be that hard, could it?
âFine,â Steve groans, letting his head hang back for a moment. âFine. Trade me.â
âYes! Trade!â Robin pumps her fist once in triumph, and Steve canât help but laugh.
He lets go of her right hand and instead takes her left before putting his other hand on her shoulder.
âHand on my waist.â Steve nods to his to his left side, and Robin moves into position. âRight, so youâre gonna step forward with your left this time, okay?â
Robin nods. âForward with my left. Okay.â
âOkay. Oneââ
Steve steps back with his right foot. Robin steps back with her left.
They stand there, each half balanced on their back foot, staring at each other, before Robin bursts into laughter. Steve follows suit.
âIâ I told you I was unteachable,â Robin giggles once theyâve caught their breath, her forehead resting on Steveâs shoulder.
âNope, this is a personal challenge now,â Steve insists, still grinning. âIâm a lot of things, but Iâm not a quitter. Youâre going to learn to waltz if it kills me.â
âShouldnât it be âif it kills meâ?â Robin draws back to ask.
âMy death is looking a lot more likely at this point,â Steve says, and Robin snorts.
âGod, youâre so dramatic.â
âYeah, okay, Miss Unteachable. Ready to try again?â
Robin takes in a breath, wiggles her shoulders, and puts her hands back in position. âReady.â
âGreat. Just rememberââ
âForward with my left foot,â Robin echoes, overlapping Steveâs instruction perfectly.
Steve grins. âOkay, then. Oneââ
Somehow, Robin makes a better leader than a follower. Once she gets over the initial nerves, she manages the reverse order of steps just fine, even getting confident enough to stop looking at her feet after several sets.
(The fact that Steve has no trouble immediately reversing the steps himself and still instructing Robin receives no comment, though it does receive a brief glare, which gets a smug grin in return.)
They rewind the tape again and keep going. Steve lifts their joined hands to spin Robin around when they hit the second song and she follows with a laugh before insisting that, since sheâs leading, she should be the one spinning Steve. He has to duck a little to get under her arm, but they feel the maneuver is quite successful.
Robin offers to try to dip him, but Steve declines, insisting he doesnât feel like getting dropped on the floor today, earning a pinch at his waist even as Robin laughs.
As the evening wears on, they give up their carefully-held waltz positions and lean in close, until Robinâs head is resting on Steveâs shoulder again, her arms wrapped around his waist, while Steve drapes his arms over her shoulders and leans his head on top of hers.
âThis is the kind of slow dancing I wouldâve expected from Steve Harrington at prom,â Robin says as they sway in gentle circles to the beat of the music.
Steve hiccups out a little laugh. âYeah, well, I had to make sure you knew how to do the real thing, first.â
âAnd?â Robin asks. âDo I pass?â
âI think youâve got the hang of it,â Steve says. âNow you have no excuse not to go.â
âSteve,â Robin draws back a little, enough to look up at him without pulling away, âwho the hell do you think Iâm going to be dancing with at prom? Itâs not like I can askâ anyone Iâd be interested in.â
Steveâs heart sinks a little, the same way it always does when heâs reminded of how fucking unfair the world is to Robin and to other people like her. He shrugs a bit lamely. âYou could go with friends?â
âI guess,â Robin says, staring at the front of Steveâs shirt, suddenly lost in thought.
Steve frowns. He doesnât even remember what had gotten them onto the subject of promâitâs January, the dance is months awayâbut what had started out as something fun is starting to make Robin feel bad, and he canât have that.
âHey, I didnât meanââ
âYou should go with me,â Robin cuts in, looking back up at him.
âWhat?â
âTo prom,â Robin says. âYou should be my big olâ platonic date.â
âRight,â Steve drawls. âBecause going to prom the year after youâve graduated doesnât scream that you havenât moved on from high school at all. Definitely not sad, or anything.â
âSure,â Robin agrees wryly. âAbout as un-sad as not going to your senior dance at all.â
Steve cuts a sharp look at Robin, who just smiles at him.
âI mean, Iâm just saying: who better to give me the whole prom experience?â Robin shrugs, tone entirely too innocent to be trusted. âIf you go with me, we can dress up and get the dumb picture together, and we can avoid the punch, and you can tell me all the gossip I know for a fact you still know about at least half the people there, we can dance⌠The whole shebang.â
When Steve had been imagining prom night with Nancy the year before, heâd imagined romance. Heâd imagined meeting her eyes across the dinner table and sneaking kisses on the dance floor. Heâd imagined going back to his place afterwards and making love, spending the rest of the night worshipping Nancy and making sure she knew how beautiful sheâd looked and what a wonderful time heâd had with her.
But when he thinks about it now, he thinks about making jokes at dinner with Robin, about standing around in the tinsel-strewn gym and making catty remarks about whoâs dressed terribly and whose dancing is even worse. He thinks about them dancing together, still, and maybe theyâll still go back to his place afterwards, where they can watch terrible movies for the rest of the night.
It doesnât sound at all like what heâd wanted a year ago.
It sounds perfect, now.
âYouâll have to buy the tickets,â Steve finally says, and Robinâs face lights up. âAnd I expect my corsage to be very fancy.â
Robin laughs. âShouldâve known you wouldnât be a cheap date, Harrington.â
âWe can go Dutch on dinner, if you want,â Steve says.
âHow generous,â Robin deadpans, and Steve doesnât bother to hold back his own grin.
They both know heâs probably going to pay for dinner. He doesnât mind.
âYouâre serious, though?â Robin asks, looking up at him. âYou really want to go to prom just to waltz with me?â
âWell, I went to all the trouble of teaching you.â Steve shrugs.
Robin bites her lip around a smile. âDo I get to lead?â
âFor the sake of my shins, youâd better,â Steve says, and Robin laughs, leaning back in to cinch her arms around his waist again.
âYou are my favorite person, you know that?â she says softly, just audible over music still crooning from the stereo.
âYeah,â Steve says, pressing his cheek to the top of her head and closing his eyes. âYouâre mine, too.â
[Prompt: Slow dancing]
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