Chapter 6 event notes are finally here.
Sorry this took so long, it seems this was the chapter people were most excited for, but itās finally finished. I didnāt have a beta reader this time so I hope theyāre still okay.
[Character Notes] [Chapters 1-3] [Chapters 4&5]
Specter Carlo AU Chapter 6
ā¢ Upon entering Rosa Isabella Street in a lie playthrough Gemini will still have his regular dialogue, but there will also now be new dialogue with Carlo.
Carlo: āThe Opera House, huh? Myā¦ friend, loved the Opera House. He was big into theatre.ā
Gemini: āHe was? Did you two ever go there together? What were the shows like?!ā
Carlo: āWeā¦ We never got the chance to go.ā
Gemini: āOh. Iām sorry.ā
Carlo: āDonāt worry about it. Please.ā
ā¢ The White Lady will not be aware of Carlo.
ā¢ Upon the White Ladyās death Carlo will comment: āWhat a waste. She had such a beautiful voice when she was still able to sing.ā
ā¢ Julien will not be aware of Carlo.
ā¢ Carlo will have different dialogue depending on whether Julien was lied to or not:
Truth: āWould it have killed you to show the guy a little compassion? Puppet or not, he seemed to really love his wife.ā
Lie: āDo you think a human and a puppet can really have a relationship like that? Hmmā¦ whatever makes them happy.ā
ā¢ Carlo will be unable to comment while Pinocchio travels up the road toward the Opera House due to the over abundance of fire.
ā¢ Upon entering the Opera House, Carlo will be as active as he was at Krat Grand Central Station in the floors reflections, though the inconsistencies from Chapter 1 will be far more obvious rather than subtle
ā¢ The first thing Carlo will say, when he gets the chance to, is about the Mad Clown that Pinocchio had just defeated, āI donāt know what was going through their heads when they designed that because that is NOT child friendly.ā
ā¢ Once Pinocchio is first inflicted with disrupt Carlo will comment: āBe more cautious with the puppets around here, a lot of them have ergo disrupting attacks. Getting hit with those feelsā¦ bad, to say the least.ā
ā¢ After defeating the first opera spider Carlo will comment: āI think this might be my least favourite puppet design.ā If itās a truth playthrough he will add: āHmmmā¦ maybe my second least favourite.ā
ā¢ Adelina is not aware of Carlo, her dialogue remains unchanged, thought he will comment on her both after talking to her the first time and if she is given the apple.
ā¢ After the first conversation Carlo will say āIsnātā¦ this who the White Lady was talking about? She thought Adelinaā¦ā
ā¢ If Adelina was given the apple Carlo will say, āHope she enjoys that. I donāt think thereās another apple left in all of Krat at this point.ā
ā¢ If Adelina is not given the apple Carlo will say, āIām pretty sure you donāt eat so what on earth are you saving that for. Just give her the damn fruit.ā
ā¢ Carlo will have new dialogue options before fighting Romeo
These dialogue options are:
āWould you ever go to a show here?ā
Carlo: āIf thatās what my friend wanted, and we had the money to, I wouldāve gone with him without hesitation.ā
āHow can disruption hurt so much?ā
Carlo: āSomething to do with you ergo, Iām not the best when it comes to explaining this stuff. I just know that whatever was disrupting you could disrupt me too and it did not feel good.ā
āTell me about this boss.ā (He will have multiple responses to this.)
1. [Truth] āNot sure what you expect me to tell you that you donāt already know because I donāt know jack about this thing.ā
2. [Lies] āYour guess is as good as mine, so keep your guard up.ā
3. [Truth] āItās bigger than you, Iām sure.ā
4. [Lies] āitās probably going to try to throw you around like that giant cop puppet. Make sure your healed up before we go in.ā
5. [Lies] āI wish this wasnāt the reason I was able to visit here for the first time.ā
Battle dialogue for phase 1: King of Puppets:
1. āI didnāt like the look of that play. [Lies] It felt like a threatā¦ or a warning.ā
2. āThat voiceā¦ā
3. āWait- No I have to be hearing things.ā
4. āNo it canāt be him-!ā
Battle dialogue for phase 2: Romeo:
ā¢ Note that Carlo will refuse to fight during phase 2, if Romeo targets him Carlo will only block.
1. āRomeo!ā
2. āPlease, you have to stop this- weāre not the enemy!ā
3. āDonāt hurt him!ā (Whether heās talking to Romeo or P can be taken either way depending on the playthrough)
4. āRomeo you canāt keep this up, please I canāt lose you again!ā
ā¢ Upon defeating Romeo a short in game cutscene will play, Romeo will drop to his knees and Carlo will rush to his side. They will then have the following dialogue:
Romeo: āYouāre just as strong as I remember you being, my heart. A truly unstoppable force, you and your new puppet friend. Iām sorry it took me this long to come to my senses.ā
Carlo: āDid you see yourself? You were quite literally on fire. (Carlo forces a laugh) Now letās justā¦ letās get you back to the hotel. We can get you fixed up there.ā
Romeo: āOh Carlo, I donāt know if I can make it that far, you might have to- ugh- put me out of my misery.ā
Carlo: āDonāt talk like that! As long as he helps us weāll make it! He has to help us- I- please. Heās all I have left.ā
ā¢ Pinocchio will now have the option to either spare or kill Romeo.
ā¢ This choice will have the most drastic consequences of the playthrough as it will cement the way Carlo views Pinocchio for the rest of the game.
ā¢ Depending on the choice a different cutscene will play out for both scenarios.
[Kill]
Pinocchio will approach the duo, blade at the ready to strike Romeo down. The tip of Pinocchioās blade will be raised to rest upon the center of his chest, the light ātinkā of metal against metal could be heard for miles in the quiet of the room. Carlo will exclaim, āNo! Whatāre you doing?! We can make it back to the Hotel, just help me get him there, please! Please!!!ā
Carlo will then attempt to push Pinocchioās blade away, but since he is the Specter his hand will harmlessly pass through the blade.
Romeo will place his hand on Carloās shoulder before calmly saying, āMy heart, itās okay, itās better this way. Iāve already hurt both you and your friend, I donāt know what Iād do if I some howā¦ killed you again.ā
Carlo will then spit back, āScrew this puppet! If he kills you heāll never be considered my āfriendā! In fact, Iād go as far to call him a dead man!ā
Romeo will get serious, his face stern as he firmly replies, āDo not hold it against him. You and I both know this is for the best.ā
Carlo wonāt reply, instead choosing to firmly press his lips to his boyfriends one last time. The kiss will hold for a few seconds before Romeo gasps, Pinocchioās blade sinking into his chest far enough to pierce through his back.
Romeo will quickly go slack, sliding lifelessly off the blade before hitting the floor with a loud metallic thunk. Carlo will stare in stunned silence for a few seconds before a scream of ānoā will be ripped from him. If he were human, the scream wouldāve caused enough strain on his vocals to draw blood. Rather than throwing himself on Romeoās body before he vanishes, Carlo will snap to look up at Pinocchio, eyes red and waves of energy flaring off his body as he stands.
Carloās hands will be shaking at his sides as he hisses through clenched teeth, āYou. Iāll KILL you!!ā
As he lunges for Pinocchio, hands raised and aiming for the puppets neck, Carlo will vanish just as the tips of his fingers would make an attempt at contact at fair skin.
Pinocchio is then left alone as the scream of fury rings through theatre.
[Spare]
Pinocchio will approach the duo, blade at his side as he kneels in front of Romeo. His gaze will snap to Carlo as the Specter speaks, āPlease. I donāt know if it will even mean anything to you, but I-,ā Carlo will look to Romeo briefly before looking back, face certain and voice confident, āI love him more than life itself.ā
At that Pinocchio will blink and tilt his head slightly before his gaze once again lands on Romeo. A beat will pass before he repositions his weapon in his hand, holding the majority of its handle out to Carlo. Carlo will look between him and blade before hesitantly taking it from Pinocchioās hand.
Pinocchio will then position himself to help the other puppet up, using his legion arm to throw Romeoās arm over his shoulders and positioning his human arm around the others waist to steady him.
Clenching his teeth and grunting in pain, Romeo will finally speak up, āAre you sure you can do this? I donāt want to slow you two down.ā
Pinocchio will remain unfazed, having more than enough strength to flat out just carry Romeo. In response to the question he will nod.
Another hiss of pain, āAlright. Thank you.ā
Carlo will release a shaky exhale, taking the lead in front of the two in order to fend off anything that might get in their way. Romeo will strain a laugh, saying, āI know heāll say it later, but heās very grateful, trust me. Thatās the most emotion Iāve seen from inā¦ quite some time.ā
The scene will fade as they make their way out of the theatre doors.
From here notes will be more heavily separated between lie and truth playthroughs as the dialogue differences and interactions between Pinocchio and Carlo will be much more numerous.
[Truth]
ā¢ If Pinocchio has chosen to kill Romeo, the rest of the chapter will play out as normal. Carlo will not comment again until returning to the hotel.
ā¢ Dialogue from Gepetto, as well as everyone else in the Hotel, will remain unchanged.
ā¢ Carlo will have new, and much more hostile dialogue, when spoken to at the mirror.
These dialogue options are:
āAre you okay?ā
Carlo: āDonāt you dare ask me if Iām okay. Youāre lucky I canāt get my hands on you because if I could I would rip that heart right out of your chest and watch as the light leaves those glass eyes of yours.ā
āIām sorry.ā
Carlo: āNo. You arent. Youāre programmed to think you are and even if you were actually sorryā¦ it isnāt going to bring back the one thing that made my life worth living.ā
āWhat are you thinking about?ā
1. āIm thinking about how great it would be if you got the hell away from me.ā
2. āWhy do you care? Why donāt you go suck up to that bag of dust you call a āfatherā instead of pestering me.ā
3. āYouāre going to get whatās coming to you. Just you wait.ā
4. āI wanted it to rain again butā¦ whatever. Leave me alone.ā
[Lies]
[Optional]
ā¢There is an optional moment where the player will play as Carlo, he will help lead Pinocchio and Romeo through Krat to reach the hotel.
ā¢ Pinocchio and Romeo will act as followers in this scenario and will have seperate walking animations depending on speed.
Walking: Romeo will walk while leaning against Pinocchio.
Jogging: Pinocchio will be stabilizing Romeo as he leans more heavily against P.
Sprinting: Pinocchio will have no choice but to just pick Romeo up and carry him to keep up.
ā¢ Since Carlo does not have a legion arm himself using the legion button will cause Pinocchio to use whatever arm he has equipped to help if needed.
ā¢ There will not be any mini bosses, but there will be more minor enemies than when passed through with Pinocchio
ā¢ Upong returning to the hotel, with Carlo and Romeo in Pinocchioās company, the next time he talks to Gepetto will be more of a confrontation between him and Carlo
ā¢ The father and son will bicker back and forth while Romeo and Pinocchio watch
Gepetto: āAh, my son, youāve returned. I trust thatā¦ youā¦ā
Carlo: āHello, āfatherā.
Gepetto: āCarlo? How can you-ā
Carlo: āThe better question is: how can YOU? How can you go around calling that puppet your son? How can you suddenly act like you care even the SLIGHTEST bit about me OR him?!
Gepetto: āJust let me-ā
Carlo: āNo! I donāt want to hear it! All youāve done is use him to do your dirty work and whatās worse, you tried to have him kill Romeo! You knew how much he meant to me and you STILL tried to have him killed and on top of that youā¦ Look at what you did to him.ā
Gepetto: āDestroying him would have been for the greater good-ā
Carlo: āThe greater good? My ass for the greater good! You only chose killing him over any other option because you knew how close we were.ā
Gepetto: āYou donāt know-ā
Carlo: āI know enough. Iām out of here.ā
Carlo will then storm off, the sound of him stomping down the hall and finishing with the sound of Pinoccchioās bedroom door slamming shut.
ā¢ Carlo can be found in Pinocchioās room until the next time P leaves Hotel Krat.
ā¢ Romeo will be taken to EugĆ©nie where he will recieve repairs throughout the rest of game.
Talking to Carlo again before leaving will yield more dialogue options:
āAre you okay?ā
Carlo: āā¦ Iām fine. Donāt worry about me, Iāll get over it. Shrugging off my father has become second nature to me at this point.ā
āGepetto is your father?ā
Carlo: āI shouldāve told you sooner, but can you blame me? You were pretty much made to be my replacement or something. All those years I was left to rot in that holeā¦ at least two good things came from it though. Something about Sophia isā¦ off though.ā
āWill Romeo be okay?ā
Carlo: āRomeo is stronger than he looks. I bet by this time tomorrow heāll be walking around like nothing happened, hehehā¦ At least, I hope he is.ā
āWhat are you thinking about?ā
1. āItāsā¦ really good to have Romeo back. I wasnāt expecting to ever see him again.ā
2. āSophia is going to be surprised to see Romeo and I again, itāll be nice to talk to her.ā
3. āI wonder if can play the piano with this body, maybe I can finally give you that show I promised.ā
4. āI my favourite book is still downstairs. I never get tired of reading the story of Pinocchio, you should read it sometime.ā
Most of the Hotel residents will also have something to say about Romeo and Carlo:
Antonia: āItās been so long since Iāve seen those boys. Itās good to be able to see them again, even in the states theyāre currently in.ā
EugĆ©nie: āDonāt worry, Romeo is in good hands with me and Venigni, weāll make sure he gets patched up. His friend is welcome to come oversee his repairs anytime. Carlo was his name, right?ā
Gepetto: āPlease, leave me be, son. You have much more work to do in Krat.ā
Venigni: āAh, so good to see young Carlo and his āfriendā again. He deserved so much better than what happened to him, itās good to see heāll have a second chance.ā
Polendena: āMaster Carlo has changed in many ways since weāve last met and yet, heās stayed the same in some ways as well. Iām sure he and Romeo will fit in nicely at the Hotel.ā
Sophia: āTheyāve both changed so much, but I suppose I have too. It will be nice to have a chance to talk to them again, thank you for bringing them both back.ā
ā¢ Even if Carlo isnāt spoken to before P leaves he can be recruited as a follower, a prompt will ask if P wants to bring him along.
ā¢ Carlo will head back to the hotel before his health can hit zero, once he heads back heāll have to be recruited again.
ā¢ He will act pretty much the same as he does in boss fights, but he will only attack something that is actively trying to harm P rather than running off to fight whatever he sees.
ā¢ If P doesnāt see an item Carlo has a chance to point it out to him or he will ask to get it himself to which he will either stay with P or run off the grab it.
ā¢ Carlo will have his own weapon that will change every chapter like with regular boss fights, but if he is acting as a follower itās possible to change it through Pās inventory.
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So, I followed the scent of angst and ended up finding ur trollshock au, LOVIN IT so far!
Had to look up what bioshock was and its context and characters since Iām not a gamer, but I am still a bit confused bout the whole situation. U donāt have to, but do u think u could give a brief rundown of whatās going on?
Thank you!!! Iām glad youāre liking it!! I hope to do more for it soon!!
Where do I start? I havenāt gotten a comeplete timeline from begining to end, so some things arenāt difinitive, but I can give you run downs on a couple things.
Sorry this got kinda long, Iāll put it under a read more, if you have any more questions please donāt hesitate to ask!
John Dory and his parents were invited to move to Rapture for their scientific knowledge, which works for them because morally their parents are extremely bankrupt so they can get away with anything down there. JD was aiming to get into the music industry, heās a great song writer (not naming them though) and heās ace with a guitar, but their parents managed to talk him out of it. They claimed his entertainment skills would be put to better use by demonstrating plasmids and tonics, of course back then they werenāt comepletely aware of the side effects excessive and heavy use could do to somebody both physically and mentally.
So for a while JD was the face and name of plasmid use, his favourites being Enrage and Incinerate. The first side effects he had were horrible migraines so he uses a pair of tinted goggles to try to avoid bright lights, and around this time heād been told they would be having another baby soon. JD, excited at the thought of being a big brother, recorded a few songs for them via audio diary and one in particular being written specifically for his sibling.
Not long after Bruce was hatched the effects of constantly destroying and rewriting his dna finally caught up to him and they quickly pulled JD from any sort of spotlight and practically erased his existance, claiming that he had to be sent back to the surface for business reasons. In reality they signed him off to the new Protector Program, Bruce was signed to the Little Sister (Brother) Program. Any male subject they tried to use for the LSP hasnāt worked, but they managed to make it work ask long as Bruce was paired JD and ONLY JD.
Unfortunately the slug they planted into Bruce had the side effect to make him age incredibly fast and while they saw it as a benefit at first, since the rest of the children in the Program were 5-6 years old, but by the end of year 3 he had the looks and mental capacity of a 30 year old. He was not happy to say the least, since heād been put through multiple experiments to try to slow the process before he reached his ā30sā.
They went through the same thing with the rest of the brothers, slowly perfecting the aging problem with each one before getting it right with Branch. Each brother also still has their slug in their bodies, leaving them with the residual effects they caused when they were LB, but they donāt know how long theyāll last since Clay and Floyd donāt get Adam unlike Bruce.
B, C, and F, are desperately trying to get to Branch without hurting JD or causing his body to shut down from Branch being taken from him. Floyd quickly became reckless in his attempts and constantly takes mortal damage. Bruce is trying to keep Clay and Floyd safe even forbidding them from using Plasmids and Tonics so they donāt destroy their bodies or minds. Clay is constantly torn between his two brothers, wanting them to just be a family, but knowing trying to seperate Branch and John Dory safely will most likely be impossible.
John Dory still has some part of him left, doing little things to keep his personality like the way heās still a showmen when he uses plasmids, heāll hum along to any of the songs heās written if theyāre played through a diary. When he hums you can hear the barest undertone of his regular voice mixed with the guttural voice of the Big Daddyās, itās very comforting actually. So heās aware, but sometimes he isnāt.
Viva and Poppy were also put through the PP and LSP, Viva forcefully put through rapid aging to fit the role of a Big Sister and Poppy put through the conditioning. Viva is fully aware of everything happening around the city and does her best to keep Poppy as safe as possible. Viva and JD have a steady protector relationship due to the friendship through Poppy and Branch.
Viva also ocassionally tries to keep the other brothers informed of whatās happening around the city when she isnāt watching the kids. Her and Clay are very close, being friends before theyāre conditioning and experiments took over their lives comepltely and eventually forming a romantic relationship. Viva, at first, is not happy with the way Bruce conducts things, thinking that he just wants to kill JD and be done with it until she see how he reacts to one of his brothers old recordings.
Thier goal is to make it out of Rapture, together, as a family. There are three endings, havenāt decided which would be canon, but Iām running off the ideas from B2.
The Good Ending: everybody makes it out alive and in one piece, John Dory is able to get the same treatment as Sigma in the canon games, getting freed from the conditioning and his suit so he can live aā¦ ānormalā life with his family. They probably all get a big house together and help take care of Poppy and Branch as they attend school and shit and Bruce gets some help for the mental state heād be in after the genetic issues.
The Neutral Ending: John Dory dies in order to save his brothers and the sisters. Viva would extract JDās Adam and distribute it amongst his brothers so theyād all have a piece of him, kinda like a shoulder angel type of deal. Itās unknown if theyād all stay together.
The Bad Ending: John Dory and Bruce both die, the conditioning would end up being too much for JD to fight against and comepletely lose who heād use to be, causing him to lash out at the rest of them. Bruce at this time would also feel his sanity slipping, using what consciousness he has left to protect them all from JD, leading them both to their deaths. When the rest finally make it to the surface they all break off, Floyd taking Branch, Clay going solo, and Viva taking Poppy with her.
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