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Content warning for sexual themes. Not so much a visual, but a chart of the characters and their different relationships with each other. I will go through how each character sees the other characters and what their relationship entails. I did want to try a visual, but I was too lazy, lol. Tagging: @ratracechronicler, @maple-writes, @pen-of-roses, @drabbleitout, and @grailfish!

Chess, she/her, panromantic pansexual:

Creed: Friends with benefits, having sex with them is fun, but neither of them want a full commitment, it's fun to have adventures with them, though

Vesper: She's gorgeous but a little serious, Chess loves trying to get her to have fun, and sometimes it's nice to also just lie her head in Vesper's lap and listen to Vesper talk about something she's passionate about, totally has a crush on Vesper and wants/will achieve a relationship with her at the end of the story

Thorne: Loves getting into shenanigans with him, and they totally both get horny with adrenaline, so there has totally been a heist they've finished and then banged afterwards, also wants a relationship with him

Jude: The best of friends, they talk about stealing and messing with people while braiding each others' hair and painting their nails

Naivi: Ultra mega crush on her, enemies to lovers at its finest, Chess gets flustered over Naivi's muscles and passion and knowledge of machines

Vortex: One of the first people who was nice to her and hung out with her when he was able to, they've both had similar traumas, and that connection leads to romantic and sexual feelings for him, trauma bonding at its finest, he's calm and helps calm her too

Irina: Thinks she's so cool and loves Briar, her android dog, wants to be friends

Creed, genderfluid (he/him, they/them, or she her), aromantic pansexual:

Chess: She's amazing, and they look up to her, friends with benefits, wants to help Chess not just have to survive

Vesper: They love snarking about the different rich people with Vesper, since they both had to endure all of it, hates Maisa for manipulating Vesper and keeping her under his control

Thorne: Both snarkers, but not sure if they'd get along super well, Thorne might think that Creed would too easily leave everyone behind

Jude: Friends who snark together with Vesper

Naivi: Wary of her and has totally threatened her that if she hurts Chess, she'll have to deal with the whole found family

Vortex: Totally wants to bang him, but Vortex is not interested at all

Irina: Finds Irina's desire to have connections and some kind of family fascinating as they don't feel the same and are only now during the story learning about the importance of friendships

Vesper, she/her, demiromantic bisexual:

Chess: The moment she met Chess, she had the biggest crush on her, she respects and is in awe of her strength

Creed: She's baffled by how carefree they are, but she does love snarking with them about the rich people they both know

Thorne: First only saw him as one of the demon twins, who was on the side of the rebels who wanted to solve problems with violence, but when she's able to actually listen to his side, she realizes that she's not as set in her convictions as she thought she was, and then gets a huge crush on him as they keep debating the different sides

Jude: She's baffled by his jokes a lot, but she respects him and thinks he's cool

Naivi: She respects her intelligence, but even before she really learned about what was really going on, she didn't approve of Naivi's methods, as the story continues, she sees the same stubbornness she had had in Naivi and is worried that they won't be able to convince her otherwise

Vortex: Probably doesn't encounter him too much, but she respects his humanity

Irina: Super respects that she is on the run to protect her android dog, thinks she's amazing and super cool, probably has a crush on her

Thorne, he/him, biromantic bisexual:

Chess: Totally has a crush on her and thinks she's super cool, I bet the rebels have already been using her as an inspiration even before the start of the story, so I could see her being his hero

Creed: Thinks Creed is too lighthearted about thinks that need seriousness, but respects them but thinks they need to learn to rely on others

Vesper: First starts thinking she's a stuck-up person calling for absolute peace and not helping people who truly need it, but then they get to debate each other and he learns she's been manipulated and brainwashed too, and a crush follows

Jude: His partner in crime, they're inseparable

Naivi: Doesn't trust her, but once she goes to their side, I can see them bonding over mechanical stuff

Vortex: Respects him and wants to help him gain freedom, potential crush here

Irina: Wants to help her gain freedom too, if only Irina had met Thorne and Jude after she ran away, they would have probably kept her well hidden, lol

Jude, he/him, aromantic asexual:

Chess: The resident chaos gremlins, whenever they're together, they're getting into something

Creed: They snark together all the time

Vesper: It's his mission to make sure Vesper understands that what she went through growing up and with Maisa was abuse, very protective of her

Thorne: They're inseparable, they're called the demon twins for a reason

Naivi: Impressed that she was able to let go of her beliefs and join the found family

Vortex: Trying to get him to not be so serious and to have some fun

Irina: Totally teaches her how to steal

Naivi, she/her, lesbian:

Chess: Naivi has seen her strength even in horrific conditions, and she thinks she's amazing, has had a massive crush on her since she met her, so much so that she will give Chess an upgrade to her prosthetics, helping the person who's fighting against her, lol

Creed: They're both wary of each other

Vesper: Respects her but believes that the peace beliefs are bullshit, respects her even more when Naivi learns that Vesper was able to admit that her beliefs were flawed

Thorne: Feels guilty because he's the son of victims of the experiments, even if this happened before she was in charge of them

Jude: They snark back and forth at each other, no one knows if they're being serious or not

Vortex: She is so fascinated by him and she wants to study his machinery, not in a mean or disrespectful way

Irina: Wants to learn everything she can about Briar and how her parents make the androids

Vortex, he/him, demiromantic demisexual:

Chess: Trauma bonding at its finest, she saved him from being raped, and he follows her around like a puppy whenever he can, he thinks she's so cool, and that she is the only one he can really open up to about his trauma because she'll understand

Creed: He's unsure about them, they're too lighthearted

Vesper: They can sit together in silence and both appreciate it, the best unlikely friendship

Thorne: Thinks he is very interesting and wants to learn more about him, might also be a potential crush

Jude: Confused by him but wants to learn about what fun he has in mind

Naivi: Amused by her excitement about learning about him, he doesn't feel like he does when the workers work on him, he loves Naivi's questions

Irina: Constantly baffled and in awe of her compassion and why she insists that he's a person when he even knows he isn't a person, he definitely falls in love with her during their adventures

Irina, she/her, not really sure what her sexuality is, probably biromantic bisexual:

Chess: She thinks Chess is so cool and strong and wishes she can be like her, I don't think Irina is polyamorous (but wants Vortex to be with whoever he wants so wants an open relationship with him), loves how excited Chess is whenever she sees Briar

Creed: Not really sure, I think they could maybe be unlikely friends

Vesper: Wary of her to begin with because she was the face of the peace beliefs that she doesn't like, but Vesper has grown and Irina thinks she's cool

Thorne: Instant friends, Thorne teaches her to steal

Jude: Also instant friends, they'd probably become the demon trio, lol

Naivi: Probably helps Naivi to see different ways to see the world, Irina shows her the most compassion besides maybe Chess

Vortex: Insists he's a person, becomes attached to him during their adventure and is terrified of losing him, she gets a crush on him really quickly

It's not a love triangle or even a love square. It's a love dodecahedron (polycule) and Chess is in the middle of it.

#writeblr #All's Fair #this is subject to change but this was fun to write

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concealeddarkness13 · 25 days

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So...All's Fair is Now a Sci-Fi!

Content warning for mentions of rape and violence and death. Tagging: @ratracechronicler, @maple-writes, @pen-of-roses, @drabbleitout, and @grailfish!

I've been rethinking the plot of All's Fair, thinking about how to change it, to make it feel more manageable and make it better. And I think I've figured it out. Change this story into more of a sci-fi/cyberpunk. I am also merging this story with Irina's story!

Instead of the species ganging up on the humans and putting them into an enclosure, a group of corporations (led by humans and other species) joined together to form an empire that controls the citizens through religion, corporations, and force. A majority of the citizens are relegated to the "undercity" (name pending) where they are exploited and used and have to scrounge for survival.

This empire wants to put all humans and other species under their control, and they are doing a good job of it so far. The only free peoples left are most of the faeries (the Kage aliens from this one but revamped), all of the Venus girdle species, and some groups of humans and Shades who have escaped the empire. Outside of the empire, a lot of the world around it has been destroyed and left a wasteland, so much so that it's hard to travel on your own out there without plenty of supplies. It's why Chess hasn't left the empire herself. But first, let me talk about the species and then how the empire works.

There are three other species besides the humans this time. The Shades are honestly still the same, so I won't go into details there. The faeries rarely ever show their true form, but I imagine it looks similar to the Snakes, with scales, fangs, slit pupils, and tails. They have powers that if their prey is within a certain distance of them, they can give an order, and that prey has to obey it. They can do some devastating things with that power. They drink blood now, but their young are parasites that eat a full humanoid as they grow.

The Venus girdles are very similar to their original iteration as adults, but as young, they are small enough to infect an insect and eat its brain, which they then use the zombie insect to go to a human or other species and inject their young. Which that young will eat the humanoid's brain first and then slowly eat the rest of the insides until the young bursts out of the corpse fully formed. Their "hair" as an adult is how they eat a humanoid's soul (don't have to eat a full soul, and they usually don't), which also causes a feeling of euphoria in the humanoid. All of the species honestly generally target humans because humans don't have magic (unsure if that's true or not), so they're not as dangerous.

The empire has the wealthy corporation owners or other aristocrats who live extravagantly in the skyscrapers that look down on the undercity. A lot of the humans, especially the wealthy ones, are deeply connected to the Celestial religion, which states that the Celestials left humanity because humans were too violent, so it preaches peace and condemning and ignoring those who don't follow that peace. Which this religion will be a big deal in this story, with the Celestials just being more plot-important in general. There are cops to enforce the empire's will, but what most people fear are the soldiers. Victims of the cyborg experiments which are now fully endorsed by the empire who were taken at young ages, and a chip was put into their brain which allows their overseers to control them. Controlled and brainwashed soldiers who are used to "cleanse" the undercity and to fight the species and humans who are trying to remain free. The magic is still about the same. Naivi is trying to find a way to make the magic less harmful to the victims. I think now it's time to talk about the characters.

So, of course, the first person I must talk about Chess. I still want to keep most of her trauma and how she sees the world because I love the character she's become, and I don't want to take that from her. Her original name was Ezra Vesperia. Her parents were murdered when she was 10, and the government immediately took her to become a victim of the experiments. Aeflin took special interest in her because she was strong and angry and fought back against the species' powers even before she got the chip that made her immune to that. I will talk about Aeflin's plans in her paragraph, but Aeflin still wants to use Chess as her special weapon. Chess was sent out to fight the species (probably did get sent to "cleanse" the undercity as well at one point), and when she was 20, the Venus girdles sent a swarm of their young to the soldiers, and Chess got infected, but one of her friends in her squad (Torryn, I think) used his lightning magic to try and kill the young in Chess, but the young had already ate through the chip, and when the lightning hit her and killed the young, it hurt her as well, causing her to have a seizure. The overseers decided to just abandon her as defective, but a Shade decided to heal her and take away all her memories. Which he then sent her to Ashont who did the things that he did to her in the original before dumping her in the undercity the next morning. The residents hate her and fear her and call her a monster, because her prosthetics are a symbol of the very empire that hurts them. And she is hurt and abused and doesn't really trust anyone. There are a few people who try to help her, and she does meet Vortex and help him and make friends with him, but mostly it's just people either trying to use her or hurt her. And it's the only life she knows now. She will meet Creed somehow in this story. And she will meet Naivi and still have the rivals to lovers with her. And I'm thinking that the rebellion against the empire decides to use her as the image of the rebellion without her permission, and she has to deal with that as well as Aeflin trying to find her again once she learns that Chess is still alive. (I promise the rest of these character paragraphs won't be so long, lol)

Vesper is the daughter of some nobles, and her faith is extremely important to her. With Maisa's advice, she has come to believe that leaving behind the people of the undercity will be the only way to become the peaceful humans the Celestials want, so she makes speeches about that, about focusing on peace over trying to help anyone who has been hurt by violence. She believes that when the Celestials come back, they will heal all the pain and strife. She will learn better and become a more active advocate who condemns the passivity of what she had been preaching. There is a certain reason why Maisa has shown interest in her.

Thorne was born of two soldiers, and when the overseers learned that his mother was pregnant, they killed her and cut him out to kill in front of his father, but someone decided to let him live, and he grew up dumped in the undercity (not sure how that all happened, but we'll figure it out). He despises the empire and thinks it should be all burned down. He met Jude when he was stealing from Jude's parents' mansion, and they have been friends ever since. They are part of the rebellion, and they are known as the demon twins.

Creed is a "project" that a noble couple took into their home to prove that the citizens of the undercity totally have opportunities. He has proceeded to be the biggest nuisance, but if they drop him, they disprove their "project". He'll probably meet Chess at a bar, but I don't think they knew each other before she lost her memories. He is also half-Shade.

Killian is a hurt Celestial who has come to the surface of the world to help where he can, since he can't fight and protect the planet anymore. He is a tattoo artist who gathers information, and some days, he goes outside the empire to talk with Primary's seed and plant plants and trees where he can to help heal the earth. He knows too much and can't meddle too much, but he'll do what he can.

Irina is the daughter of the CEOs of an android company. She has always shown empathy towards androids, and she ran away when her parents became too much. She ran away with her beloved dog, Briar, but Briar got an illness and was going to die too young, so Irina paid for an android dog that looked exactly like Briar and would have her memories. She paid fully for her, but the company decided after a few months that they needed to take Briar back, and Irina has been on the run ever since. At some point, she will become infected with a Venus girdle young, but she'll talk to the young and try to see if they can coexist. This infection will cause one of her eyes to turn gold (part of one of Chess's eyes is gold too).

Vortex is an android made by Irina's parents' company. He was first made as a pleasure android for the wealthy, but he was abused and hurt and raped, and when he finally fought back, the company took him back and punished him and rebranded him as a hunter for the people stealing from the company (like Irina is considered). I will say that the day that he fought back, he does meet Chess and becomes friends with her, and they remain friends. He'll make sure to tell the other androids that Chess is really nice if they need someone. When he learns that Irina isn't abusing Briar, and that she did pay fully for Briar, he finds loopholes in his orders that allow him to not capture Briar.

Maisa is one of the leaders of the empire, but he prefers to work in the shadows, so no one knows that he is a leader. He was around when the Celestials were still on this world, and he hates them. The Celestials showed special treatment towards the humans, so he wants to use human suffering and death to convince them to come back so he can kill them and prove that the empire is better than the so-called gods. He took special interest in Vesper because she is actually half-Celestial, but he took her powers secretly, so she doesn't have them anymore. He gave the contained powers to...

Aeflin! Everyone's favorite bubbly scientist who is such an asshole is still here. She wants to be able to dissect a Celestial, and she will do anything to let that happen. She knows how to fix the prosthetics to give the victims good magic, but she will only do that for her weapon once she has absolute control over her. And she chose Chess for the job. She's been planning on having Chess receive the half-Celestial powers and receive her overpowered fire magic so she can go fight a Celestial, under Aeflin's control, of course. She doesn't care about the politics of it all, she's just excited to finally dissect a Celestial.

And last, but not least. Naivi. She is a half-faerie. Her mother was taken by a faerie and taken to their city and treated as a pet and raped and is still stuck there. She doesn't even really know what's going on. Naivi saw the truth and the horror of how the faeries were treating humans, and she ran away and joined the empire because she believes that only by being under the empire's rule and laws will humans be safe from the other species. So, she enthusiastically works on the prosthetics experiments to bring everyone fighting against the empire under their control. She despises the free species and thinks that they just want to be able to abuse humans any way they want. She does think that the victims of the experiments are volunteers who want to be here, and she doesn't know about the controlling chips, and she would be horrified if she knew, but she has a lot of learning and growing before she'll be able to be lovers with Chess. It'll be fun!

And I think that's about it! The aesthetic is a little more cyberpunk too. I think Chess will wear a muzzle sometimes, either of her own choice or because the cops catch her and put one on her. And she still has her long, green, curly hair, but she'll have an undercut to one side. And that's all I can think of for right now! Thanks for reading!

#tw rape #tw death #tw violence #writeblr #All's Fair #I hope this is coherent lol

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