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dramionecommentfest · 3 years
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The Anatomy of a AO3 Comment + Cheat Sheet
Want to tell an author that you like their work, but stuck on what to say? Maybe this can help!
Before we jump in, any comment from a “I loved this” to a keysmash will make an author’s day. There is no obligation to leave a comment at all, but know that whatever nice thing you say will carry weight with an fic author. You do not have to follow any format. 
I’m putting this together because people have said they get stuck on what to say when they want to leave a positive comment on a fic. So feel free to consult this when you’re not sure what to say. 
Anatomy
The anatomy of a meaty comment can be broken down into a few building blocks:
Telling the author you liked the fic 
Complimenting an aspect of the story 
Pulling a line from the story and talking about it 
Talking about how the story made you feel 
Ending line 
So an example could be:
I wish I could leave another kudos on this! I especially liked your characterization of Ginny - she’s spunky and hilarious, and her comments about Hermione’s love life cracked me up. This line in particular made me actually snort out loud: “insert line you liked here.” This one shot was so fluffy, it’s going to make me smile for this of the day. Thanks for writing and sharing with us! 
Cheat Sheet 
Going a step further, here are some examples of things that fit within each building block:
Tell them you liked it 
This kicks off the comment - it could end here and that would be fine!
I wish I could leave another kudos 
This was lovely! 
OMG this was so good!!!
I wish I could read this story again for the first time
This was so well done
Hi, I love this! 
From the example above: “I wish I could leave another kudos on this!”
Compliment an aspect of the story 
Adding this shows what you liked the best. This essentially boils down to: “I really like how you did [x thing].” [X thing] could be any of the following:
Characterization of a character: [x character] was so on point, reading your [x character] was basically like reading the canon character you captured them so well, each character was so well-defined, you built out [x character] and gave them so much more depth, [x character] was hilarious/sweet/terrifying
Character development: I enjoyed [x character’s] journey, I love how [x character] grew in [y] way, I never imagined how [x character] would react in [y] situation before 
Pacing of the story: this was so quick and engaging, I loved the pacing here, this slower pace helped underline the emotional turmoil [x character] was going through 
Description of a place/scene: you described [x location] so well that it was basically like being there, your descriptions are like poetry, I appreciate the way you set up a scene, I could see [x location] perfectly in my mind’s eye
Nonverbal cues that set the scene: the little things you add to help highlight the emotions like [x character] biting their lip when they are nervous really build the story, I enjoyed the nervous ticks you gave [x character], the details of their first kiss showcased the emotion they both poured into it 
Dialogue between characters: the dialogue was captivating/emotional/real/raw, I love the banter between these two characters, I thought [x character] had the best lines, the interactions were perfect  
Small details that pulled the story together: I appreciate how you wove [x] into the story, the little clues in the background were a great hint for the reveal
Writing quality: this was so well written, the writing was gorgeous/haunting/poetic, this was executed perfectly 
From the example above: “I especially liked your characterization of Ginny - she’s spunky and hilarious, and her comments about Hermione’s love life cracked me up.”
Pull a line from the story and talk about it 
By pulling something specific you can dissect further and showcase your own reaction to the material. You just copy a favorite/funny/meaningful line and explain why you liked it or how it made you feel. You can do this with multiple lines if you’d like, don’t be afraid to mix in simple reactions “omg” with more in-depth examples. Here are some examples:
This line made me laugh/smile/cry/cringe/squeal/scream/snort/want to vomit
I nearly jumped out of my seat/cried/jumped for joy when I read this line
Her line here was especially powerful given the extra backstory you gave her
I could totally see [x character] a saying that
You nailed his voice
The comedic timing of this line was perfect
From the example above: “This line in particular made me actually snort out loud: ‘insert line you liked here.’” 
Talk about how the story made you feel 
This fic melted my heart 
I’m still crying, that was so haunting 
I feel like I need to go take a cold shower now 
The angst here killed me 
This fluffy fic made my day better 
From the example above: “This one shot was so fluffy, it’s going to make me smile for this of the day.”
Ending line 
If you’re not sure how to wrap up, try:
Thanks for writing this!
I wish there was more, this was delightful
What a refreshing take, thanks for sharing with us!
Such a great read, I loved it!
Now I want to read more 
I love this fic!!!
This was beautiful <3
Going to go read more of your work now, bye! (only use this if you plan to)
Bookmarking to read again! (only use this if you plan to) 
From the example above: “Thanks for writing and sharing with us!” 
Wrap Up 
You don’t have to use all of these at once, of course. Just take whatever building blocks work for you and build a comment from there. 
And if you want to level up, feel free to talk about how this touched you personally. One of the nicest comments I ever got was how a fic of mine helped them while they were struggling during COVID and that made themselves tea and sat down to enjoy each update. They didn’t need to tell me that, but it made me cry that something I wrote provided that kind of moment for someone. 
Hope this helps!
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dramionecommentfest · 3 years
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THAT'S A WRAP!
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Thanks to everyone who participated in the first-ever Dramione Comment Fest! We appreciate all of the readers and writers who spent time to be a part of this event and look forward to future fests🥰🥰🥰🥰
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DCF is almost over! 😭
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This kitten is hiding from the truth, but DCF ends this Monday, March 15. So if you need some weekend plans, hit up the list of stories, break out your commenter hat, and leave some comments for our amazing authors!
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the real MVP right here -- new job! snowmaggedon! chasing a toddler! and STILL managing to participate the DCF. you're the best, @bethelson 🥰
I got to participate in the @dramionecommentfest this last month, and let me tell you it was a challenge trying to find time to get. these. stories. read. Between starting a new job, and the snowmageddon, and just chasing around a toddler my time was divided and taken. But I’m so glad I finally made time to read them, because lovely they are!
Instead of sharing my comments let me just bring attention to the stories and writers!
[wet] by @thesuperjane
A little oneshot that takes place deep below ground as our duo search for a lost shrine. Beautiful words and beautiful depictions of our lovebirds. And there’s a lot of moments leaving us wanting more 😉
three questions by @houseofpercypotter
A sweet little thing that keeps you snickering the whole read all about the three questions you shouldn’t typically ask someone outright. Also a realistic and brazen version of Draco.
Glowing Embers by @o0sarena0o
A ritual/pureblood culture oneshot that truly feels like you’re reading something much bigger. You get a glimpse of Samhain through the eyes of Hermione and her complete oblivion at the hints Draco has been dropping.
Catch Me Always by @lilhawkeye3
A set of drabbles and oneshots based on prompts! I’ve only read the first one so far, but was a lovely read nonetheless. A nice, crisp style of writing, so come see what’s been hidden in this gem.
So please go give these a read and a kudo when you have the chance!
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I want to thank reylomama87 (no tumblr), @internct and @peaceisalwaysbeautiful for leaving so very detailed comments in the @dramionecommentfest 💛💛💛
Honestly, they've helped me very much and it made me so happy you took the time to give me your opinions 💕
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dramionecommentfest · 3 years
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AHHH YOU MAKE THE BEST POSTS! What a lovely manip!!!! <3
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Finished reading all of my assigned stories for @dramionecommentfest
This one was such a great read - it included tattoo artist cool girl Hermione with her own tattoos, tattooed redeemed!Draco with a praise kink, oh and did I mention chemistry in the tattoo chair? 😏💚
It inspired this little manip!
Highly recommend 5/5 💚💚💚💚💚!!
Read it!! Skin Deep by cnova @eccentricallyfabulous
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dramionecommentfest · 3 years
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DCF Halfway Point: Comments due March 15
Hello everyone!
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We are at the HALFWAY point of the Dramione Comment Fest -- two weeks down, two to go. Thank you to the many of you who read with such enthusiasm at the beginning of the fest. If you haven't started yet, no problem! There's plenty of time. If you have read all your assigned stories, well, there's a long list of fics somewhere and I know the authors would be thrilled for even more comments.
Check out the assignments and keep scrolling to see some of the fun posts that people have shared about their participation in the fest. I've had so much fun reblogging your comments and enthusiasm so please keep 'em coming!
Thank you all for participating and happy commenting! <3
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Just left comments for @dramionecommentfest on Crumbling Bricks by @caitlincheri! This fic is POETRY, with such gorgeous lines. I quoted so many of them that a screenshot of my comment would basically spoiler the whole fic 😂 Go read, go read! 
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love this thoughtful commentary on what sounds like a really interesting fic! 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰 
The second fic I read for @dramionecommentfest was Catch Me Always by @lilhawkeye3.
This fic was a series of one shots in non-chronological order that formed a really beautiful story! Some moments include Draco and Hermione post-Hogwarts, before the final battle, in 6th year after Dumbledore’s death, Draco in the aftermath of Hermione’s torture at his home, and more. @lilhawkeye3 did a wonderful job of weaving the moments together with tenderness, laughter, angst, and fluff.
I loved reading everyone else’s comments, too! ☺️ Give this fic a read!
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omgggg @amypc1 look at this NOVEL of a beautiful comment  😍 😍 😍 comment GOALS
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Ok but stream of consciousness comments are my new jam now! AmyPC left me such a blessing with this review on Glowing Embers, I’m still smiling from ear to ear 😁💚😁. It’s just so full of joy! I also appreciate your concrit about what was unclear to you! It’s a great help for my future stories. Thank you so much for making my day! 🥰
I’m so happy that @dramionecommentfest assigned so many wonderful people to my little story. I can’t stop repeating that I enjoy this fest it so much 💚💚💚!
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oh gosh dear TAKE CARE OF YOURSELF. dramione comment fest can come later when you are safe and well. crossing my fingers all is well soon <3 
Just wanted to let those know who have stories assigned to me for the @dramionecommentfest that if you have not yet seen comments from me, it’s because I am Texan, and live in Texas, and if you weren’t aware we kind of just went through a mini apocalypse this past week that resulted in the loss of power in our state for a few days.
I personally just got internet and steady phone service back yesterday, so I can get to reading and leaving you lovelies some kind words soon, but just know that if I get to your story late, it is because I’m putting the safety of my family first for the time being since there’s still a lot happening here. I know there’s still plenty of time left before comments are due, but I honestly just don’t know what to expect anymore after the week we just had. I’ve seen some stuff y’all 😅
So thank you for your patience, and I can’t wait to get into your stories to leave you oodles of love 💜
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omg reblogged with the wrong account again 🙈
Sending some love and a shoutout to my "Housemate" @houseofpercypotter for three questions. This fic really lightened my stressful week. What did I find funniest? You'll just have to read the story and comments if inquiring minds want to know. When you leave your own reply tell us your fave funny zinger. There are so many good ones. Having a blast with the @dramionecommentfest.
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I LOVE that you’re posting every story you read 💗 💗 💗 and your reviews are so lovely. keep ‘em coming!
Third story read for
Dramione Comment Fest 💚
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Moments by @notamugglemiss
This story gives us a snippet of real life moments for parents!Dramione, that many often can relate to!! 💚
The author has an amazing ability to paint a big picture within a short story!!
Recommend 5/5 💚💚💚💚💚!!
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@vofastudum ‘s response to @beautyberrywrites ‘s comment is making me cry. vofastudum, congrats on honing your writing and making your writing goals come true  💗 💗 💗 💗
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@dramionecommentfest is truely a gem! 
I’ve been working on the format of my stories for YEARS! And especially  this comment from @beautyberrywrites makes my heart soar! This tells me I’ve succeeded (at least at some level) to do what I was aiming for: To tell a little and still so much, to make the reader FEEL the story, and to create an unique format I can be known for as a writer. 
A huge thank you for organizing this fest! And also for everyone who paricipated! 
❤❤❤❤
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🥰 🥰 🥰warm fuzzies forever!!! 🥰 🥰 🥰
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It was such a pleasure to get the email notification of Anilcadz91’s amazing review! (again, I’m not sure if you’re on tumblr, but I need to express all the warm and fuzzy feelings).They took part in the comment fest organised by @dramionecommentfest, and Glowing Embers was one of the lucky stories they got assigned to. Thank you so much for your encouraging words!🥰💚
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😭 🥰 😭 🥰 😭 🥰 😭 🥰 you deserve it all!!!!
participating in the @dramionecommentfest has been such an uplifting experience as a writer 😭 I haven’t responded to comments yet but please know that I have read them all like a dozen times and I am tearing up at how sweet everyone has been!!!!
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well I’m melted into a pile of sweet. just read Perfect Moment by @tanchimo and based on comments by other DCF-ers, we ALL just think this is the sweetest thing. as @foxfoots​ said this is a “slice-of-life” fic and I agree! seeing this little slice of their life is just adorable and lovely. thank you for this fic, tanchimo!
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