#( I just.. falfksjg try to give it my best when writing these muses bc I love them

[gazelessmenagerie]

*crackles knuckles* if anyone if this is incomprehensive it's because I'm about to pass out BUT. holy hell from what I've seen on dash and read of your threads with Broly it is SO GOOD. the feralness while also still holding that brevity of exhaustion or tiredness is perfect. Your descriptors and dialogue are always so on point and reflect a good balance of thoughts and actions. If there's something to critique on or just in general want to see more of; I think Broly's thoughts on the rest of the Saiyan's, more dad:tm: content, and other similar stuff to that length :> In the end I love seeing how you've really made Broly you're character while also holding the original canon really close to heart. I also love all the relationships he has, also the drama of goats makes me laugh.

Also I'm not gonna just leave without mentioning your N'doul. If I haven't praised you enough on him already, you already know I will now and many times after. His balance of moral and relations with others. I love what you and boba have done with his son, also just any kids he manages to pick up along the way--julya included. You are araki istg when you write N'doul because every word and action he does I could see him doing in the manga. Excellent work. love you Kuro, you're spectacular!

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#|| Tag: OOC #|| Beep Beep Hows the Portrayal Meme #( NAMI. IMAFLSJG ily and thank you??? jfc i try to really get that point of just this depressed thot down. ) #( oooo. his thoughts on the rest of the saiyans?? ooo shit.. that might be interesting tho jfc im gonna need time to think on that. ) #( LMFAO DAD CONTENT. IVE BEEN THINKING ON THAT HERE AND THERE. just not sure how to yet bring it about yet. but ooo yeah ) #( give the paragus content. afsdljg I'll see what I can cook up ) #( oh yeah I try to keep it close but also allow that room for development. just?? jfc its hard at times but its worth it to have something) #( i enjoy writing and also allows that room to wriggle around. and yesss im proud of him for managing to get that far with relations) #( LFMAL THE GOATS. YES. HE JUST HAS GOAT DRAMA AND I LOVE IT. ) #( and ohooho YES. N'DOUL. LISTNE you can give all your words on that blind man till I grow deaf and I'll still listen. ) #( just. jfc.. i love that guy so much. and just im so proud of how far along he's come along too in those points u made. ) #( o lmfaooo he has 8 of them. i just haven't gotten around to doing like 3 pages for the 3 I picked up so far. ) #( and YES JULYA IS INCLUDED ALWAYS. I.. omfg agnlsdg please. thank you ;;;; im fucking flattered beyond fuck ) #( I just.. falfksjg try to give it my best when writing these muses bc I love them?? hearing all this and knowing what I can work on really- #( fuckin makes me happy. so thank you again for just everything you gave ;w; #( you're spectacular as well just al;fskjgsd absolute wonderful friend <3 )