DITM Extra #1: Original vs. Edit
I’ve finished editing Drawn Into The Music, and now all that’s left is to add the epilogue! I’m only doing this for one scene, but I wanted to show the differences between the original and the edit. Some parts were basically untouched, but this scene is one of the more heavily edited portions. I've lined up each paragraph from the original (left) and each corresponding paragraph from the edit (right) for the very first scene of DITM. This picture is over 3000px, so you kinda need to open it up to read it, but this was the most elegant way to compare it that I could find.
18 notes · View notes