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#ANYWAY this is such a lovely message tysm it's got me full ๐Ÿฅบ
searidings ยท 2 years
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Ngl the whole "She wld have ripped national city apart at it seams" was ..truly life changing and I liked it so so much I screenshotted that part of the fic so I can look back on it wherever I am when I want that extra OOF to my heart. Its like I know Kara loves Lena and would do anything for her but to know she would have absolutely gone ape shit and berserk if anything happened to Lena? Lena trying to escape but slipped down the cliff and Kara just swoppong in because she heard her scream? And Kara not being on speaking terms with Alex and even using her sueprgirl status as leverage to protect Lena? Kara choosing Lena over absolutely any and everyone? Kara making sure others KNOW she is ready and willing to choose Lena over them? Can u even imagine how Lena feels knowing Kara has her back like that? Like sure the whole lying thing caused a strife but I imagine Lena would probably be shook to her core to see Kara defending her with everything she's got.
God, I love that fic so much every part was screenshot worthy tysm for ur service ur a hero I cantlrave enough kudos
nobody look at me im losing my shit
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peterthepark ยท 2 years
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just got back from reading part 1 of "to build a home" which, btw, how many parts do u plan on doing? just curious. anyways: thoughts.
before getting into the nitty gritty, let me just say: I LOVED the way you wrote tasm!peter in this. it was genuinely so good the way you wrote him, he's so soft for Y/N I love it!! ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿฅบ
I liked how, in the beginning, Y/N was kinda described as the shadow of wanda maximoff. yes, we see the MAJOR similarities between the two and with Y/N also being a witch with similar powers, we can see WHY she's portrayed as this "shadow"/contrast to wanda. so that a neat touch.
the whole dinner date scene between peter and y/n, AHHHH!!! so soft. love it! and the way they had kissed eachother was just so good in the sense that it's a sign of how much they truly love eachother and how well they are with eachother.
now: that beef/argument scene between dr strange and Y/N. literally was like: ๐Ÿ‘€๐Ÿ‘€๐Ÿ‘€ as they went back and forth with one another, lol. + the line in which Y/N said: "and what would you know about love, strange?" really had me saying: ohhhh shit! reader really said that huh?!?!?!? that was also a pretty interesting scene and has me wondering how far Y/N is gonna go in order to stay in a universe where she WANTS to stay, WANTS to be with the 1 person she cares for and loves. kinda is given the whole "wanda/westview situation".....
one other thing with the whole "dr strange" thing too and I guess with y/n's perspective as well is the ringing that occurs in y/n's mind. I find that to be a small yet also pretty important factor and it's interesting with the way strange contacts her through that ringing.
I LOVED how you portrayed peter and y/n being domestic together, AHHH!!! love it, LOVE THEM.
and finally: ring alert! this proves that peter and y/n's love is present and that, like I said, they are WILLING to give eachother their love because they love eachother so much. then again, I fear things are gonna start getting in the way.
anyway! there u have it, my thoughts on the first part. I'm VERYYY excited to see where this goes and the first part is already building things up. pretty excited!!!! (btw so sorry this is already long, I just needed to get the thoughts out. and u might see more of these in the future when it comes to the series, just hope they don't get superrr long.)
I LOVE EVERY PART OF THIS!!! long descriptions like this are my absolute favorite. im a sucker for messages like this :) i honestly have no clue how many parts this will be - im thinking about 4 but then again anything can change with my writing ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
and god yes the love b/w reader and peter have me floored i just WANT that and i know i have full control over this series bc itโ€™s literally MY writing but i hope they get a happy ending ๐Ÿ’”
i appreciate u writing such an amazing message tysm this really made me feel seen as a writer :))
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