#I really thought I’d only say a few sentences djdjdjjd

[mchaelscofield]

okay but what were your favourite parts, feel free to get long winded even though i know you commented but i still wanna hear your thoughts because i enjoy getting your perspective on the chapters 😁😁😁😁

Crying cause I just reread the chapter this morning 🤣 idk how long this is gonna be but lemme get into it *cracks knuckles*

Ok so obviously that nasty ass sex scene was definitely one of my favorite parts. Look, I’m a sucker for good smut (which is something you got down pat like idk how the hell you’re able to that) and the fact Dick was taking charge and had my sister Kory acting UP??? Ain’t no way I’m not gonna add that to my list. I also like seeing Kory being a bit submissive in bed because she’s usually the one leading things, so it’s a nice change of pace.

This isn’t necessarily a favorite part, but all the little glimpses and scenes of Dick being down BAD definitely are my fave. Which is why I love when you write from Dick’s perspective, because trust, when you get into Dick’s internal monologue, trust he’s gonna be going through some pining and suffering. When it comes to Dick and Kory, I feel like in most media it’s always Kory chasing after Dick. Kory suffering from loving Dick too much while being unsure bout how he feels or waiting for him to sort his shit out. So it is MOST pleasing to me to see Dick being the one put in that position. It’s truly what he deserves and you just write it too well. Like when I say you give me everything I want, I am not being sarcastic 😩

Oh girl this definitely got a lot longer than I thought it would be but that’s just the affect your writing has 🤷🏾‍♀️ Thanks so much for the dope ass, nasty ass chapter cannot wait for what you got next!

#answered #jonskory #cryinnn one thing about me I’m gon TALK #I really thought I’d only say a few sentences djdjdjjd