Hello writerā¦ Ryen is it? Sorry kinda nervous I donāt do this kind of thingsā¦ my wife forced me to do this, she said something about people wanting to hear a manās perspectiveā¦ thoughtsā¦? About your story so yeah here I am š Hello
I started to read your story mainly out of curiosity, my wife likes to read a lot, on line and of line and Iām always willing to listen to her rant about the characters or stories she reads, it makes her happy and thatās the main goal am i right? so when she started to tell me about your story, first of all I was a bit shocked, itās veryā¦ risquĆ©š and I teased her because she was basically reading pornā¦ š but then she told me how it developed, and I was even more intrigued so after I listened to her talk, and of course after a lot of teasing she told me āshut the fuck off and read it, itās goodā her exact fine wordsā¦ so I did.
First of allā¦ I understand tangerine man (Yoongi) as a man that once felt unworthy of the love and affection of a perfect girl (talking about my wifeā¦ making it clear in case she reads this š
) I understand where heās coming from. you see thereās a voice inside your head that keeps telling you youāll never be good enough, and let me tell youā¦that fucking voice makes you act stupid, even say things that you donāt mean but mostly makes you so fucking scared and lonelyā¦
I would say my favorite chapter was his interlude it really dived into his internal struggles and man did I feelā¦ I donāt knowā¦ understood?
I sympathized with him after all I was on his shoes onceā¦ not that long ago honestly, so yeah, I sympathize with Yoongi, and I really like how your main character is trying her best to understand him, itās nice to read about a girl that has that patience, determination and kindness, because let me tell you thereās a lot of shitty people that donāt even try to understand the demons that their partners battle withā¦ (Not talking about you dear wifeā¦have to make it clear or she might cut my balls off) Moving on ā¦probably thereās a lot of shit that they, my man Yoongi and reader, will have to endure but hopefully they know that at the end itās so fucking worth itā¦
Shit, Your story hits really close to homeā¦
I hope this makes sense, keep the good work, and yeah bye šš»
āI donāt know how to name myself, Ki told me I had to use an emojiā¦? I donāt know you can choose something if youāll like.
P.S. Keep your imagination wild pleaseā¦ kinda benefits meā¦ if you know what I mean š (Sorry dear but itās true)š āš»
Holy crap. I... I don't even know what to say? This is incredible feedback and I'm having a bit of an out of body experience right now wow! This is more than I could ever ask for, so thank you for taking the time to say all of these things (and for even reading in the first place!) All my love to you and your lovely wife who I am dubbing a queen already ahahahah. Thoughts and response under the readmore!
I started to read your story mainly out of curiosity, my wife likes to read a lot, on line and of line and Iām always willing to listen to her rant about the characters or stories she reads, it makes her happy and thatās the main goal am i right? so when she started to tell me about your story, first of all I was a bit shocked, itās veryā¦ risquĆ©š and I teased her because she was basically reading pornā¦ š but then she told me how it developed, and I was even more intrigued so after I listened to her talk, and of course after a lot of teasing she told me āshut the fuck off and read it, itās goodā her exact fine wordsā¦ so I did.
I will admit that there is definitely a lot of spice in here. But it's so much more than that, and I'm glad she was able to convey that to you in a very lovely way (her wording made me laugh out loud, incredible LOLL)
First of allā¦ I understand tangerine man (Yoongi) as a man that once felt unworthy of the love and affection of a perfect girl (talking about my wifeā¦ making it clear in case she reads this š
) I understand where heās coming from. you see thereās a voice inside your head that keeps telling you youāll never be good enough, and let me tell youā¦that fucking voice makes you act stupid, even say things that you donāt mean but mostly makes you so fucking scared and lonelyā¦
If you understand Yoongi in that way, I'm both proud as a writer but also quite sad as a person. Obviously I wish you never felt that way, but I've seen it so many times. Even I myself found myself thinking those thoughts and hearing that voice in my head - saying stupid things, acting out in ways that are just not good. It's a universal feeling but.. to hear that you connect with him? Damn. I truly don't have the words to describe everything I feel. (Also, "tangerine man" makes me so happy LOL)
I would say my favorite chapter was his interlude it really dived into his internal struggles and man did I feelā¦ I donāt knowā¦ understood?
Let me tell you about the interlude: it ripped me to shreds getting inside this man's head. It's dark in there, it's foggy and alarming. But there's also so much good in there - just like for you, too. He was being so protective, he was thinking about reader so much. If only he wasn't so horribly hard on himself.. But. You got out of that, and I know he can, as well.
I sympathized with him after all I was on his shoes onceā¦ not that long ago honestly, so yeah, I sympathize with Yoongi, and I really like how your main character is trying her best to understand him, itās nice to read about a girl that has that patience, determination and kindness, because let me tell you thereās a lot of shitty people that donāt even try to understand the demons that their partners battle withā¦ (Not talking about you dear wifeā¦have to make it clear or she might cut my balls off) Moving on ā¦probably thereās a lot of shit that they, my man Yoongi and reader, will have to endure but hopefully they know that at the end itās so fucking worth itā¦
You're right about there being people out there that won't even try to understand. OR they give up after a few attempts and dub things not worth it. But if you find the right person, they are gonna stay and fight and that feeling of having someone there for you is indescribable. I bet your wife is fantastic just from how you talk about her! ARGH you're both so cool. And yes, it seems like things may be a constant battle even if they get better, but I believe in them. You're right, it really is so fucking worth it.
Shit, Your story hits really close to homeā¦
Three Tangerines is a story about life. Humans just getting through despite all the shit that they go through. If it hits close to home? For anyone reading it? Just know that there is also a theme of hope here.
Ki is an expert on this blog already! I can give you the š emoji (and oh trust me, there is so much more to.. explore with these two so look forward to more!)
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Hello writer š here. Itās been a minute..
I was talking to Ki last night and she mentioned you have been feeling under the weather. Iām sorry to hear that. It has been a difficult time in our household as well. Many things going on..
I hope this message brings you at least a bit of a smile.
Alright.. here I go š¤£
Ki was very sick (I know very dark way to start the message) after thanksgiving she had to be admitted in the emergency room, it was scary as fuck.. knowing that the love of your life might not make its .. pff.. yeah. But she did because sheās strong like that..
Anyways the reasoning of my message to you is that during the time she was in the hospital I wasnāt able to stay with her 24/7 even if I wanted to I couldnāt, but you could. Whenever she was alone she would read your stories, particularly 3tan (Iām not supposed to say this but she made some nurses hooked on tangerine man š)
I wanted to thank you, for creating a safe space for everyone, an incredible world that made my wife feel accompanied even when I couldnāt be there and she was indeed alone.
Iām not even jealous of Yoongi anymore.. š
I know life is hectic, sometimes we go through really dark moments, really shitty moments.. but know this author.. you should be proud of the community, of your words, of your work. And Iām thankful, really really thankful that your words kept the love of my life smiling..
I hope that knowing that at least can give you a smile.
Kind regards. Have a wonderful day. āš»
-š
P.S. You donāt have to reply to this or repost it if itās too much, this is mostly for you. Smile, be proud, and letās keep this life rolling!
P.S.2 I know I ramble a lot, and that maybe my message doesnāt even makes sense. Sorry about that. š
Oh.. oh my goshš„ŗ Book, this is quite something, and the first time I read this today I stopped what I was doing and sat there for a moment. Just. Thinking about life and purpose and direction, and how in my lowest moments of the past couple months, I was still with someone and telling them itās okay. Thatās not something Iām ever gonna take for granted and Iām just. Idk. Speechless?
Iām glad Ki is all okay and that youāre both here, truly. And Iām happy that 3tan was there for her when you couldnāt physically be present (because we know you were there in spiritš¤) Thatās comforting to me as an author to know and something that I will think about when Iām feeling quite lonely and down myself.
Iām happy that yāall are here (and now some nurses know about 3tan?? Oh god LMAOš
) We built something really fcking special and I know thereās no way I couldāve done this on my own. Itās a collective effort and everyone here should be just as proud. But yeah, Iām glad everything is fine! Happy to hear from you again and I hope you two and the family have a wonderful holiday/new years seasonš„³
Iāll always be here. Or there. Whenever and wherever you need me to be. So will 3tan yoongi. and reader, and anyone else in these stories.
Thank you for reaching out. This made my whole day and I will cherish it for a long timeš„¹
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