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lesbian-aura-36 · 7 months
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Winona Ryder as Veronica Sawyer in Heathers (1989)
"All we want is to be treated like human beings, not to be experimented on like guinea pigs or patronized like bunny rabbits."
A/N: I haven't posted in a while because I messed with my photos and it's made me redownload over 2000 photos
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majicmarker · 7 months
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welcome to my list of easily avoidable mistakes and also completely dumb shit* i’m sick of seeing in published books (usually romance, just in case any of these seem to have that particular mood), and how to stop doing them:
Baby, Sweetheart, Darling, and so on: ENOUGH. terms of endearment are not capitalized, not even when they replace a person’s name; titles are. for example, in the case of D/s romances, you would capitalize common titles such as Daddy, Sir, and Master. (you would not, however, capitalize “sir” in day-to-day conversations.)
flirtily: NO. flirtatiously.
breath is a noun, breathe is a verb.
till is a cash register, ’til is the abbreviation of until.
on that note, ’ is the correct apostrophe when shortening words, not ‘ (this one might not seem like that big a deal, but since we’re here i’m gonna say it).
ya’ll is the (incorrect) abbreviation of you all. the ’ replaces the -ou, so the correct result is y’all.
the floor is inside, the ground is outside.
High School, highschool, etc.: 😐. high school.
he grins, she smirks, he shrugs, she blushes, and other such action statements are not dialogue tags. “I thought that was you,” he grins. = wrong. “I thought that was you.” He grins. = right.
(personally, i think you can get away with he snorts, she laughs, and similar actions that also affect the character’s tone of voice, as dialogue tags. but! when in doubt, end the sentence.)
...that about covers it for regular mistakes off the top of my head. i'll be back to add whatever else comes to mind.
*apologies for being an asshole about it? but these crop up Too Much in professional, published works, and none of us should be cool with that. it’s thoughtless at best.
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alicenttully · 7 days
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THE GREEN COUNCIL
An alternative version of the script for The Green Council
(One month after the departure of Rhaenyra’s departure from court.
From above, we see Viserys in his bed.  It is a miracle that he is still here, but it is a wretched existence.  There are no traces of the jovial king that we were introduced to. 
 We sense death.)
VISERYS
Please.
Alicent comes into view.   We see the shadows under her eyes as she lifts the cup gently to Viserys’ lips.  When he finishes, she puts it aside.
VISERYS
I’m sorry.
Pity and confusion war on Alicent’s face, as she ceases her stroking of Viserys’ hand.
ALICENT
For what, my king?
VISERYS
You wanted to know… if I still believe.
VISERYS
Don’t you remember?
(Viserys’ voice is desperate.  Every word is a struggle.
Understanding shadows Alicent’s face, as she remembers a long-forgotten memory.)
ALICENT
It was a long time ago.
VISERYS
I know. You were a girl.
ALICENT
I wouldn’t say that husband.  I was carrying our daughter, then.  Helaena.
VISERYS
But-
ALICENT
Rhaenyra and Daemon returned to Dragonstone a moon ago.
VISERYS
Forgive me.
ALICENT
Shhh.
(We see that Alicent’s thoughts are not with her husband.)
 (We cut to Alicent in her bedchambers later, after being awoken by Talya.)
ALICENT
Are you sure?
(She looks shocked.)
TALYA
With his own eyes, Your Grace.
ALICENT
(Alicent sniffs as she hurries out of bed.)
ALICENT
Stay here. Tell, tell no one.
Help me dress.
(The camera focuses on Talya’s face, who smirks as Alicent turns away.)
(The Hand’s apartments)
OTTO
Who knows?
(He is staring into the fireplace.)
ALICENT
Just Talya.  Some of the servants.
I was with him, last night.
It’s a mercy.
(Otto locks eyes with Alicent.)
OTTO
Did he say anything?
(There is a silence.  Alicent looks torn.
Then she shakes her head.)
ALICENT
Nothing of importance.
(Small Council)
TYLAND
What is it that could not have waited an hour?
Was Dorne invaded?
(He looks pleased at his own joke.)
OTTO
The King is dead.
(Otto’s voice cuts like a knife.
Tyland’s smile drops.)
OTTO
May the gods give him rest.
But now we must prepare.
GRAND MAESTER ORWYLE
Indeed.  The Silent Sisters must be sent for, and if I dispatch one of my swiftest ravens now, it should reach the Princess of Dragonstone before midday-
OTTO
All needs must wait until the matter of succession is settled.
BEESBURY
The matter of succession IS settled.
(His eyes blaze.)
TYLAND
Is it?
(He smirks)
ALICENT
The Iron Throne by rights must pass to His Grace’s eldest trueborn son.
BEESBURY
Am I to understand that you are plotting to replace the King’s chosen heir with an imposter?
(He looks around in disgust)
WLDYE
His firstborn son is hardly an imposter.
ALICENT
He did not choose his daughter. He spurned his brother. He said as much to me years ago. Or does that little detail inconvienance your outrage?
TYLAND
And do we not remember the scandal when they wed? Even His Grace was most wroth with their audacity.
BEESBURY
Hundreds of lords and landed knights swore fealty to the Princess.
WLDYE
That was some twenty years ago.  Many of them are now dead. Would their kin do the same now, while Viserys had three living sons?
BEESBURY
If they are honorable men! This is usurpation.
(He slams a fist on the table.)
SER CRISTON
Words have meaning, my lord.  Prince Aegon cannot usurp his own birthright anymore than you or I can pluck a star out of the heavens.
(Otto speaks soothingly)
OTTO
We ARE honorable men, Lord Lyman.  That is why King Aegon will give Princess Rhaenyra a path to peace, with generous terms.
TYLAND
Of course, generosity always has its limits.
BEESBURY
No. No.
GRAND MAESTER ORWYLE
Lord Lyman, please…
(Beesbury rises to stand)
BEESBURY
The King was well last night, by all accounts.
WLDYE
(scoffs)
Well.
TYLAND
Which of us are you accusing of regicide?
BEESBURY
Whenever it was one of you, or all of you, I care not.
I will have no part in your schemes.
ALICENT
You call it a scheme to defend my children? My sons challenge Rhaenyra, simply by living and breathing.  Even Helaena and her little ones will never be safe.
I do not believe Rhaenyra to have the cruelty of Daemon, but I do not believe that she will temper his cruelty with mercy if it comes to it.
(Her voice is dangerous.)
BEESBURY
It would break Viserys’ heart to see you think so little of his daughter.
(He turns to leave-)
SER CRISTON
Sit down!
(There is a struggle. A crack.  Blood.
Alicent gasps.)
TYLAND
Seven hells.
(GRAND MAESTER ORWYLE checks Lyman’s pulse.)
GRAND MAESTER ORWYLE
Let us have Lord Beesbury removed.
OTTO
No. The door remains shut until we finish our business.
We must determine our allies now, should Princess Rhaenyra refuse our terms.
She is currently in confinement on Dragonstone, so we have an advantage.
WYLDE
Perhaps she will die in childbirth.
ALICENT
(Alicent, still shaken from Beesbury’s death, looks appalled at such a blithe comment.)
OTTO
My lord.  That is still the King’s daughter you speak of.
(Wlyde looks suitably chastened)
OTTO
Time is of the essence.  Ser Criston, gather your men and assume the custody of any Blacks that remain at court.  Do them no harm unless they resist.  Those who swear fealty to King Aegon will live.
GRAND MAESTER ORWYLE
And those who do not?
LARYS
Are traitors and shall die a traitor’s death.
(Alicent’s apartments.  Helaena is there, sewing.  She smiles at her children, Princess Jaehaera and Princess Jaehaerys who play happily on the floor.
Alicent rushes in.)
ALICENT
Where is Aegon?
HELAENA
N-not here.  Nor in my bed.  Feel free to search beneath the blankets.
(Helaena looks annoyed.)
(Alicent sits down beside Helaena, who moves away.  Alicent, used to Helaena’s sensitivities, takes no notice.)
ALICENT
Your father….
(Helaena is odd, but she is not stupid.)
HELAENA
When?
ALICENT
Not long.
HELAENA
I don’t know why I’m surprised.  He was sick.
ALICENT
Oh, my dearest love.
(To Alicent’s shock, Helaena squeezes her mother’s hand, then drops it.  She avoids Alicent’s eyes, and turns to look at her twins, who continue to play on obliviously.)
(Aemond walks in)
AEMOND
So. Is Aegon king, or is the cunt queen now?
OTTO
Where’s the Prince?
SER ERRYK
Forgive me, Lord Hand. I do not know.
(He looks flustered.)
OTTO
But you’re sworn to protect him.
SER ERRYK
He exploits his authority to order me away, and then he evades me, my Lord.
I believe he may have left the Keep secretly, gone into the city.
I-I think he has a mistress.
OTTO
Find him.  Take only your twin and remove your white cloaks.
SER CRISTON
Prince Aegon’s not to be found within the castle walls, Your Grace.
Your father has sent Ser Erryk into the city to find him.
ALICENT
Ser Erryk is just one man. Ser Criston, you must go as well.
Everything you feel for me… as your Queen.
(They are so close, they could kiss.)
SER CRISTON
I will not fail you.
AEMOND
I’ll come with you.
ALICENT
That would not be my desire, Aemond.
If anything has befallen-
AEMOND
Cole needs me Mother.
Ser Erryk isn’t the only one familiar with Aegon’s doings.
(Aemond’s voice is almost gentle.)
AEMOND
Aegon brought me to the Street of Silk on my fourteenth-name day.
It was his duty, he said, to ensure I was as learned as he was.
SER CRISTON
I don’t follow.
AEMOND
“Time to get it wet.”
(Cole grimaces.)
SER CRISTON
Every woman is an image of the Mother, to be spoken of with reverence.
(He knocks on a door.  It is opened by an attractive woman in her mid forties.)
SER CRISTON
Sometime last night, we… lost our drinking companion.
Knowing that he has been, in the past, a patron of your fine establishment, we thought to inquire here as to his whereabouts.
LYLA
Describe him.
SER CRISTON
That is a delicate matter.
You see, the man we seek is the young Prince Aegon.
I may trust, I hope, in the discretion of your trade.
LYLA
The Prince is not here.
I wish you luck, good Ser.
Perhaps when you find him, he can return here with your friend.
How you’ve grown.
(Aemond looks uncomfortable.)
OTTO
You once swore your banners to Rhaenyra.
Now pledge them to the rightful King.
LORD MERRYWEATHER
I must confer with my house on this matter.
OTTO
You’ll not leave this room without declaring your intention.
LORD MERRYWEATHER
I am no oathbreaker.  I will not bend the knee.
OTTO
Anyone else?
LADY FELL
House Fell… keeps its sworn oath to the Princess.
OTTO
Very well.
(They are dragged out.  The rest kneel.)
ALL
Long live the King.
SER CRISTON
Your brother could be anywhere.
AEMOND
He could be in the hands of mercenaries, on a ship to Yi Ti.
He could be dead.
SER CRISTON
Let us hope not, for your mother’s sake.
SER ARRYK
How old are they?
(He looks ill.)
SER ERRYK
About ten years, I’d think.
They have them grow their nails and file their teeth.
Makes them more formidable.
SER ARRYK
Has Prince Aegon ever visited here?
SER ERRYK
A few.  He found it amusing.
SER ARRYK
Do you now see what he is?
AEMOND
 Here I am, trawling the city, ever the good soldier in search of a wastrel who’s never taken half an interest in his birthright.
‘Tis I the younger brother who studies history and philosophy, it is I who trains with the sword, who rides the largest dragon in the world.
It is I who should be…
SER CRISTON
 I know what it is to toil for what is freely given to others.
SER ARRYK
Aegon is unfit to rule.
SER ERRYK
You forget yourself. It is not your place to say such things.
SER ARRYK
Have you no mind of your own, brother?
(Hilly, approaches them. She is nineteen to twenty years of age.)
HILLY
I can take you to Prince Aegon… for a price.
(She smiles confidently.)
SER ERRYK
Deliver him, and we’ll consider your price.
(We are in a manse.  Aegon lies asleep in bed, having just enjoyed a good fuck.  His paramour, Mya, lies asleep besides him, her breasts exposed.
Ser Erryk shakes him awake and averts his eyes from Mya’s figure.)
SER ERRYK
Get up.
KNIGHT
 Halt! Hold the gate!
(horse neighs)
CASSWELL
Unhand me!
LARYS
He was fleeing from the gate.
CASSWELL
 Do you know who I am?
LARYS
A friend to the Princess, I’d wager.
CASSWELL
What say you?
The Lord Confessor presumes.
CASWELL
I have no love for the Princess.
LARYS
And where were you going then with such urgency?
Let the King’s Justice take him.
CASSWELL
 Let go of me!
No! This is not right!
(Rhaenys’ apartments)
RHAENYS
I will do you the considerable courtesy of assuming there is a good reason for the outrage of my treatment this morning.
ALICENT
My sincerest regrets for the lack of ceremony.
RHAENYS
The King.
And you are usurping the throne.
(Rhaenys scoffs.)
ALICENT
Viserys’ firstborn son is no usurper.
ALICENT
Believe it or no, it is of no consequence.
Aegon will be king.
I came here to ask for your support.
RHAENYS
Well, I must credit you for your boldness.
ALICENT
House Velaryon has long allied itself with the Princess Rhaenyra and what has it gained you?
Your daughter dead… alone in Pentos.
Your son cuckolded.
Rhaenyra’s heirs are none of yours.
It is your husband who grasps so heedlessly for the throne.
And even he has abandoned you: gone these six long years to fight a desperate battle, returning grievously, if not mortally, wounded, leaving the Lady of Driftmark to chart her course alone.
(Rhaenys grits teeth.)
RHAENYS
The word of my house is not fickle.
(Alicent smiles sadly.)
ALICENT
No.
Princess Rhaenys, I was fond of my husband, but I will speak the truth we both know.
You were robbed at that council.
RHAENYS
I little thought to hear those words from you.
ALICENT
Viserys was the child of a second son, but you… The Iron Throne was yours by blood and by temperament.
Viserys would’ve lived his days a country lord, content to hunt and study his histories, but… here we are.
So while we may not rule, but we may guide the men who do.
Gently… away from violence and sure destruction and instead toward peace.
RHAENYS
Is it in the name of peace that you’ve imprisoned me?
And what of my dragon?
ALICENT
If we are overmatched, Rhaenyra will be tempted to strike, and war will ensue.
Without your dragon, she may be persuaded to negotiate.
RHAENYS
A true queen counts the cost to her people.
ALICENT
If it’s Driftmark you want, you shall have it for you and your granddaughters to pass on as you see fit.
RHAENYS
You are wiser than I believed you to be, Alicent Hightower.
(pause)
And yet you toil still in service to men.
Your father, your husband, your son.
You desire not to be free, but to make a window in the wall of your prison.
Have you never imagined yourself… on the Iron Throne?
(Alicent looks incredulous.
Heavy silence.
Then-)
ALICENT
I do not need to imagine myself on the Iron Throne, Princess, when I can stand beside it.
ALICENT
I’ll leave you with your thoughts. May the Crone guide you to wisdom.
OTTO
We have relied on one another these many years.
And now it is the good of the family that we both desire.
If I had known that Viserys would…
The Princess would not have lived long after Aegon was born.
OTTO
That said, I would have been too reluctant, daughter.
ALICENT
Reluctance to murder is not a weakness!
ALICENT
We will send terms.  True terms, such that she may accept without shame.
My husband would have desired this mercy be shown to his daughter.
OTTO
Your husband?
Or you,  his daughter’s childhood companion?
ALICENT
I have been a mother longer than I was her childhood companion.
My son will be anointed tomorrow at dawn.
The whole of King’s Landing must witness his ascent.
He will assume authority. There will be no more dithering.
My son will take the crown of his namesake, the Conqueror, and carry Blackfyre, his sword.
Let the people remember the ancient strength of House Targaryen.
OTTO
You look so much like your mother in certain lights.
ALICENT
I don’t remember the sound of her voice anymore.
LARYS
Your Grace.
(Alicent looks exhausted.)
The hour is late, Lord Larys.
LARYS
I’ve found out something that you should know.
Have you asked yourself, I wonder… how it is… that your father found Aegon first?
There is a web of spies at work in the Red Keep.
Along its threads travels news of all our doings.
Your father knows this, but has left it in place.
More than once, it has proved advantageous to those willing to… feed the weaver.
(Alicent looks perturbed by this revelation.)
ALICENT
And this weaver watches me?
LARYS
Um…
One of the little spiders is your lady-in-waiting.
ALICENT
Talya? But she-she has been faithful-
(Larys shakes his head.)
LARYS
Only to herself.
(Alicent chokes back rage.)
ALICENT
I will have her head.
LARYS
Of course.  But there are more like her.  Even  I do not know their number.
There is one way to destroy his advantage.
It must be taken out at the head.
When the Queen dies, the bees fly without purpose.
Begging your pardon for the turn of phrase, Your Grace.
ALICENT
I assume this task falls within your expertise.
LARYS
If you wish it, it will be done.
(Royal carriage.  We hear the bell tolling, shouts of people outside.
Aegon is dressed in kingly raiment, looking severely disgruntled.)
AEGON
My father never wanted this.
He had 20 years to name me heir and he never did.
Steadfastly, he upheld Rhaenyra’s claim.
And I have no taste for duty.
ALICENT
No. You do not.
But your father was weak.
(Aegon snorts in agreement.)
ALICENT
He refused to see the truth.
ALICENT
Do not play the fool, Aegon.   Rhaenyra will never sit the throne safely while you and your brothers live.
If you love them, you will take the throne.
(The camera focuses on Aegon’s face, who has tears in his eyes now.   Alicent crushes her annoyance at them.)
AEGON
Do you love me?
(Alicent looks taken aback at his question.  Then she smiles.)
ALICENT
I love the very bones of you, you imbecile.
OTTO
People of Kingslanding… today is the saddest of days.
Our beloved King is dead.
But it is also the most joyous of days….for he leaves a son.
COMMANDER
Guards! Out of the way!
Move!
COMMANDER
Halt!
Turn!
OTTO
It is your great good fortune and privilege to be here to witness this: a new day for our city… a new day for our realm.
A new king… to lead us.
SEPTON EUSTACE
May the Warrior give him courage.
May the Smith lend strength to his sword and shield.
May the Father defend him in his need.
May the Crone lift her shining lamp and light his way to wisdom.
SER CRISTON
The Crown of the Conqueror passed down through the generations.
(He places the crown on Aegon’s head.
Beside him, Alicent places a crown upon Helaena’s head.)
ALICENT
My queen.
SER CRISTON
Let the Seven bear witness:
Aegon Targaryen is the true heir to the Iron Throne.
PEOPLE
Aegon the king!  Hail Aegon!
(Above the cheers, we hear a dragon’s roar.
It is not Sunfyre, Dreamfyre, or Vaghar.
It is Meleys.)
(We cut to Rhaenys flying away on Meleys, music swelling.)
A/N
I wanted to write a version of a script where the Greens aren't perfect heroes but they're not used as props for Rhaenyra's existence
On the other hand we have Aemond calling Rhaenyra a cunt, Otto admitting that he likely would have killed Rhaenyra if he could predict that Viserys wouldn't change the succession, Aegon still taking his brother to a brothel so he can be "learned" and finding child fighting pits amusing.
Alicent Hightower has the energy of episode 6 and episode 7. As @agentrouka-blog said once in a reply to an ask, a desire for peace coming from a place of genuine enmity is more meaningful.
Aegon II is not a rapist (so no Dyana) but he's not a stellar person either, considering that he has visited the child fighting pits a couple times.
Alicent is not S'A.
Major changes were Alicent not misinterpreting Viserys words, the Green Council where they go more in depth about the Greens motivations for taking the throne, Alicent not tolerating Rhaenys bs' speech, no Mysaria (although her presence is felt), Alicent deciding to behead Talya for her betrayal (this was a deleted scene), no Aegon chase scene. Alicent explaining to Aegon why he needs to be king
"I love the bones of you, you imbecile." Is a mixture of the show line + Olivia Cooke commentary on her character's thoughts during that scene.
No Rhaenys dragon nonsense, however it is made clear to the audience that she has escaped.
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HEY
Ik I haven't msde official posts in a long time but do you guys want vore stories again? Idk
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loksven83 · 10 days
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Sorry for the crappy quality, but..
Bagel's going into shed!
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You can tell by her blue/milky eyes,
Shes so sweet, I love her. Also, right now she's extra chill since she can't see very well, so I gotta be really careful with her!
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katmajik · 9 months
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hi, all! a quick note for anyone who’s read/is reading what’s your vibe? (or any books, really, especially indies)—
please be sure to rate + review, particularly on amazon! books need to hit something like 50 reviews before amazon will auto-promote them, such as including it in people’s suggested buys and the “more like this” lists of similar titles.
the hardest part of indie publishing is just getting your books in front of people. so if you read something you like/love, pretty please with rainbow sprinkles on top help out the author with a review! 🌈✨
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frownyalfred · 2 years
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sometimes I want to write the most unhinged of author’s notes (my life is crazy enough, I could do it) just to end up on that one blog
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rbb-au · 19 days
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ok so reason why the comic take took long.
i was focusing on making it release chapter by chapter and it did not work out on me....i found out that I am a page by page kind of guy...so yeah.
Also for this Chapter, there's going to be alot of talking so I keep having to rewrite the script so it make sense.
Drawing a comic page is not hard or long for me to do it...it's the planning and doing something way over what I can do. Sorry for a huge huge delay.
Also, i have started a PMD comic series as well so I am planning to do those side by side with my RBB AU.
I am just glad that you all are patience with me.
So from now on. IT'S PAGE BY PAGE AGAIN BABY!!
-LOVE [ NovaArtz ]
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wenutted · 18 days
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mishtay · 2 years
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My eyes find you {crush x reader}
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Key:
Y/n: your name
C/n: crush name
F/n: friend name
A/f/n: another friend name
C/c/n: class clown name
A/n
Yooo I'm back cuz I got a new crush and there is a possibility he likes me and this happened in class so :)
Y/n was bored.
The geography teacher kept talking about how winds and sea breeze affected the temperature of the climate and it took so much willpower for her to stay awake.
Her eyes drifted to the back of the class where C/n sat, and it was so normal for her that she didn't realize she was staring at him till they suddenly made eye contact.
Flustered, she trained her gaze on her textbook, her heart beating out of her chest.
"F/n, can you check if C/n is looking at me?" She asked her friend.
F/n smirked at her but listened to her friends request.
"Yep." Her friend said and Y/n could practically hear  the teasing tone in her voice.
Her breathing faltered as her friend informed her that he stopped.
She looked over at him through her eyelashes and smiled as he raised his hand at a question the teacher asked.
Nerd she thought adoringly.
......
The national anthem blared through the class speakers as everyone stood up to pay their respects.
Y/n was giggling at a joke her friend said when the familiar anthem stopped and everyone started packing up.
As she was fitting everything in her book (or trying to) A/f/n came up to her.
"Hey Y/n, C/n was staring at you the entire time the national anthem was playing?"
"WHAT" She screeched, then realized where she was and lowered her volume.
"Are you sure it was me?" She asked.
"Bro of course it was you, im sure." A/f/n confirmed, lips pulled into a teasing smile.
"Oh we talking about Y/n's crush?" F/n came over.
"No!" Y/n said at the same time A/f/n said "yes!"
"Hmm, no wonder she's blushing?" F/n said and then lowered her voice, "he was staring at you during English period too. Also when C/c/n made a dirty joke, I saw him look at you for your reaction."
Y/n blinked, not quite believing her ears.
Just then the bell rang and everyone ran out of class to catch their bus, leaving Y/n with a flush to her cheeks and confusing thoughts.
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ficnation · 30 days
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Halfway done with the next chapter of “Eat Your Heart Out” 😎
I'm adding something spicy in there for ya'll 🌶️
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sw1mmingfoolz · 2 years
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A SLIGHTLY DISJOINTED LIST OF WRITING TIPS
hey peeps 😌 a whole zero people asked or showed interest and true to my style I'm posting anyway lmao :) this is a collection of writing tips I remind myself of all the time! some are from online (mostly reddit), some are from writing workshops and classes i've taken, some are just commonly traded around by famous writers and some come from my own experience! i've been writing for 15 years, since i was a literal child, and i think it's safe to say i've learned a lot since i wrote 15 pages of what i was absolutely sure would be my debut novel "The Ratticator" when i was, like, 6. so i think ik what i'm talking about 😎 without further ado, here is the list!! it isn't very organised, for which i do apologize :')
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If you have writer’s block, change your document font to Comic Sans. No idea why this works, but it’s a known tip and it really does!
DO NOT edit as you go. If you just can’t seem to stop yourself, set your document to Wingdings. This is especially helpful in your first draft. I personally call my first draft document WORST VERSION JUST PURE GARBAGE or some variation to take the pressure off.
Treat all writing as practice. It’s better to write pages and pages of pure garbage than to be too paralysed by fear of failure and not write at all as a result. At least with garbage you can edit it, see what issues you have with your writing, etc.
If you struggle with editing, try writing everything longhand on paper or printing out a particularly hard chapter (double spaced so you can annotate it) and rewrite it. Also, run your work through text-to-speech to catch typos or little errors you might otherwise overlook!
Google “filter words and how to avoid them”, especially if you write in first person. Focus on showing and not telling, and be wary of using too many adverbs (I’m so guilty of this) and verbs after dialogue. Also avoid epithets! By all means necessary! For example; “the short haired man”, “the brunette”, “the [job title]”. These are common in fanfiction but do not sound good or flow well. They’re often used by novice writers. (I’m guilty of this too! Again, these kinds of things take practice).
If you’re struggling to plot, it can help to write “draft zero”, in which you write out chapters in the least words possible without needing it to sound good. This can give you a skeleton to fill out. You also don’t have to write chronologically; write the fun scenes first or whatever scenes you already have in your head out and build around those!
Speak your dialogue out loud. If it doesn’t flow well, it doesn’t read well either.
Similarly, come back to a chapter / work after a minimum of a day has passed. Looking at it with fresh eyes after a break away can help immensely with weeding out awkward parts, errors or parts you’d like to change.
“Said” is not a bad word; don’t go to insane lengths to avoid it!
Not every piece of dialogue needs a tag; trying to add one to everything without having dialogue by itself makes writing clunky.
For both dialogue and inner monologue, have your characters miss the mark just slightly on what they're trying to say. In reality none of us express ourselves perfectly off the cuff, and you can even communicate a lot about a person through what they omit or avert or misread. (from u/frozenfountain on Reddit)
Usually when people talk, they’re not just talking. What facial expressions are they making? What are they doing with their bodies? Are they just ‘saying’ something or are they stuttering, shouting, or whispering (don’t go overboard with this kinda description, though). You also don’t always have to specify who is speaking; you can establish the people initially and, especially if they speak in distinct ways, it should be clear. Also, learn correct grammar for dialogue. A new speaker should be on a new line.
Vary sentence structure. This is probably the main cause of people feeling that their writing feels "off." A lot of people try to solve repetitive sentence structure with epithets or with unnecessary synonyms, but it only masks the problem, it doesn't solve it.
For example:
"What's going on?" said Bob.
"I don't know. Jill just stormed out of here," said Abigail.
"That's weird. She seemed fine this morning," said Bob.
"I think the stress is finally starting to get to her," said Abigail.
It's boring, right? How NOT to improve it:
"What's going on?" said Bob.
"I don't know. Jill just stormed out of here," said the blue-eyed woman.
"That's weird. She seemed fine this morning," pondered the older man.
"I think the stress is finally starting to get to her," surmised the greenette.
Instead maybe something like:
Bob looked around at the confused faces in the room. "What's going on?"
"I don't know," said Abigail, fidgeting with her necklace. "Jill just stormed out of here."
"That's weird. She seemed fine this morning."
Abigail shrugged. "I think the stress is finally getting to her."
The other problem I see: unless you understand what third person omniscient is and are using it intentionally, it's probably best to pick just one point of view per scene and stick to it. (u/DemyxDancer on Reddit)
Don’t focus on stuff your character wouldn’t just to fill a word count.
Try not to use the same word twice in a paragraph unless they’re connecting words or names/pronouns. At the same time, try not to overuse the thesaurus and use a million synonyms for something - find different ways to describe things. 
Write as though there is no formatting available to you. Adding bold or caps or images or footnotes is cool, but the story should be understood exactly the same without them. This is also an accessibility consideration, since screen readers will miss this extra context if it’s purely visible.
Localised spell check! I use British spell check on Google Docs because I am British but sometimes accidentally use the American versions of words. This can also be immensely helpful if you’re writing dialects / a different form of English than what you’re used to. 
Let go of perfectionism before it kills writing for you. Coraline took Neil Gaiman over a decade to write. Ursula K Le Guin banged out three Earthsea books in 4 years before taking a 12 year break between the third and fourth books in which she took a big interest in feminism and entirely changed the way she wrote female characters. Nothing is going to be perfect initially, and expecting it to be so dooms you before you can start.
Paragraphs!! Punctuation!! So many times I have clicked on a promising looking fanfiction but backed out because I couldn’t read it properly - commas, semicolons and hyphens (and em dashes!) are your friends :)
If possible, shut out everything else during a designated time period and just write. I know this isn’t possible for everyone but should you be able to set a window and have a schedule you’ll find writer’s block to hit you less!
Starting with a lot of exposition can be boring. Short, snappy first lines and/or coming right into the action at the beginning can help hook the reader better. Or alternatively, have a prologue if there’s important exposition that needs to be established at the start!
Writing is inherently hard, even for well established writers. Accepting that will help you more than you’d expect.
Read as much as you write, if not more! Reading makes writing a lot easier. A lot of writing is being inspired by other writers. NOT copying, or plagiarising, but drawing inspiration from them. For example (as we spoke about a couple of days ago), my lovely mutual Livvie @greenlivvie has a colder, more direct and more formal writing style as a lot of what she reads is nonfiction, whereas I read so many gooey romance webtoons and poetry anthologies that my style is extremely warm, probably too descriptive, and rather poetic.
Find the joy in writing! I know engagement is extremely important, especially in fanfiction, but if it’s your only drive you’re destined to burn out. You should write first and foremost for the love of writing. That’s not to say you shouldn’t want engagement, however, and that readers should not give it (PLEASE readers, learn that likes on Tumblr are absolutely useless compared to on other platforms and start reblogging, tagging, and commenting! Here are some relaged posts with creators expressing their frustrations (x) (x) (x) so you can understand WHY it matters so much to us. On AO3, comments mean the world!)
Bad writers tend to think they are amazing and infallible, while good writers tend to think they are terrible. It’s about not letting that self doubt stop you from creating entirely! Also, if possible, find someone to beta your work and give their concrit, especially if you find yourself hating your work but not knowing why.
“Abandon the idea that you are ever going to finish. Lose track of the 400 pages and write just one page for each day. It helps.” - John Steinbeck
Write through the eyes of the character, not the lens of a camera (for third person).
“No matter how worried you are about that chapter, no matter how badly you think you botched something, do not tell your readers this, and if you can't help it, put your notes/concerns at the end of the chapter. If you tell a reader at the beginning of a chapter "this chapter is not my best", they will read it in a different light than if you had said nothing at all. If you're looking for feedback on the chapter, put your notes at the end. Let the reader read the chapter "fresh". They'll form their own thoughts and opinions, and then only after that, they'll read your comments/concerns/questions and are more likely to respond to them candidly, rather than having the chapter flavoured by worry or doubt. Your work is good, don't tell people otherwise.” (from u/Panoramic_Vacuum on Reddit)
Don't write your scenes/chapters differently than you originally wanted just for the sake of ''censorship'' to be able to maybe target a larger/different audience! Always write stuff exactly the way you always imagine(d), no matter how dark, bloody, sexual, whatever it might be. A story that is deliberately ''pruned'' will never have the same significance an ''uncensored'' one has. And for characters, always remember the one tenet:
''It doesn't matter how small or unimportant a character might seem at first, they always should be interesting and compelling in their own right, not just be means for the purpose of another character.'' (from u/JokeyZockey on Reddit)
Always remember the five senses as you write
Note down ideas or lines you think of when you think of them. You will probably forget them otherwise. I am totally not talking from experience 😭
In writing fanfiction, you’re writing for free! No apologising for slow updates, no apologising for hiatuses, again Coraline took OVER A DECADE to be finished and published yet you feel bad for not pumping out work every day? Readers do not get to be entitled, they are consuming free content from you and that in itself is a privilege. Readers, please be mindful that we are regular ass people with school and work and other commitments, and also be mindful that if you do not interact with our work that’s only going to serve to motivate us even LESS.
Reward yourself! Wrote a chapter, or hit a word count goal, or finished a plot? Watch a film you like, or buy your favourite snack, or have a long ass bath with a bunch of shit from Lush that makes your house smell like a perfume shop for years afterwards. Rewarding ourselves pleases our primal little monkey brains and makes it a lot easier to get past writer’s block, knowing there’s something in it for us at the end. 
AND FINALLY! Ignore everyone as much as you want to. You should be writing for fun, for yourself - hell if you wanna ignore these points that’s entirely your prerogative. People will tell you not to write certain tropes, or leave unnecessary criticism, or be demanding when they could totally just go write the fics themselves if they care that much. Write because you like to, and you will find your audience :)
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i hope you could find even one tip in this list helpful! reblogging with your own tips is encouraged actually :) much love to my fellow writers, it's thankless sometimes and difficult basically all of the time but it's fun and i meet absolutely lovely people on here doing so 💞
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loksven83 · 5 days
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BAGEL CULT, ARISE.
Bagel is currently Superblue! She's really close to shedding, and in these pics it's hard to tell but her scares are A LOT darker than usual.
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Lil lass is gonna be looking extra pretty!
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sarcastic-kaz · 7 months
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day 3: comfort/rest
a/n: ok so it’s day 3 in a superhero au! my sbi fanfic roots are showing again, because there aren’t many kny superhero fics but a whole bunch on dsmp. i wrote a quick power system down, to help with genya’s strange demonic abilities, and to showcase all the breathing styles as superpowers. i honestly didn’t care much as long as these two got their fair share of hurt/comfort, with the comfort being really fluffy. i didn't really struggle writing because i think i’m getting used to gyo and gen and how they interact, but yes, azuki shows up once again to save the day.
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