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BTSing my Fic w/Juno: DoTWD Chapters 6-9

Hey howdy! So I wanted to share a bunch of behind the scenes things with my fanfic, this time around there's A LOT. namely deleted scenes, added scenes and scrapped content! Let’s begin!

Lee’s would’ve told Ben about the messages on the answering machine

This was leftover from the original messages on the answering machine, from B.T.Sing Chapter 3. It would’ve come up in a now scrapped version of Chapter 9.

Travis would’ve attended dinner with the group.

Travis would’ve attended the infamous dinner with the group, but when I gave him Doug/Carley’s role of traveling with Lee I had him stay back with Doug, Ben and Carley.

Mark and Lee would’ve met Alfred in Episode 2

Alfred is a scrapped character that I mentioned in B.T.Sing Chapter 1-2. Alfred was originally a friend of Clementine mentioned in Episode 1, and was planned to make an appearance in a scrapped version of chapter 1. But when I scrapped that version of Chapter 1, Alfred was left in limbo.

At that point, I didn’t want to introduce Alfred from that old version of Ch.1, but as a different character (with the same name lol). So I’d written an entire introductory chapter for him. But the problem again, like with Debbie and Oliver (see B.T.Sing Chapter 1-2) was that I had no real role for him going forward, but I was so obsessed with his chapter that I tried to make it work before I started the artwork for Chapter 6, but just couldn’t.

Only other person I let read this version was @thecrusadercomrade lol, but if you want to see it for what it turned out to be here: [🪓]

Maybe I’ll get the chance to use him one day.

The dinner scene was extended recently

The dinner scene was originally way shorter than it is in the final draft. I extended it, inspired by cut background dialogue from Episode 2, so it feels more from the perspective of the guests rather than everyone hovering around until Lee came barrelling in.

Scrapped moment from the dinner scene:

Clementine originally went into vent instead of Rachel, and the locker room would’ve went down differently

Just as it says. Rachel was more disturbed than Clem was, visibly it appeared.

In a scrapped version of Chapter 9, Rachel would’ve managed to get away from the St. John’s before they reached the locker

Rachel would’ve freaked out and bit Andy’s hand, then rushed out of the barn, slamming the door shut. Since it was dark and raining, he couldn’t find her.

When Lee would awake, Clem would tell him that Rachel made a run for it and was out there somewhere. Lee would’ve been much more urged to escape the locker room. So when Larry had his heart attack, he would’ve helped Kenny kill him.

Meanwhile, with Rachel, she would’ve made her way up a haystack, over the fence and through the cornfield by the barn, and over a toppled over fence and made a cut through the dirt path they took to the dairy. There she would’ve run into Travis and company. We actually wouldn’t see them again until Lee escaped the barn and dealt with Danny.

The group originally took a vote to go to the dairy.

In a scrapped version of Chapter 6, the group would’ve taken a vote to go to the dairy. They would vote to go, and Lee, Travis, Ben and Mark would go. Lee was apprehensive on going. That version is missing.

However, when they meet Brenda and Mark offers for their whole group to come, Lee would interject and say they have to talk to their group first. That version of Chapter 7 is here: [🪓]

Travis and Ben had a cut argument on the way to the dairy

Instead of clicking his teeth and ignoring it, Travis would’ve turned around and asked Ben what his problem was. It was due to him thinking about what Lee had said about the answering machine earlier, along with scrapped dialogue with Travis about traveling and finding his parents. It was clunky, and once those messages were scrapped, so was this scene.

Instead of pencils it was Halloween candy

Rachel mentions Ben making her return stolen pencils, but the line was originally about Halloween candy. Not a big change, but I didn’t feel like Ben would rat her out on her birthday lol.

Margeret/Pidge, the fourth St. John

Now this I’m excited to share with y’all because it’s been MONTHS. Get ready because this is long:

Back in early pre-DoTWD ‘production’, like I’m talking before DoTWD was even called “Dawn of The Walking Dead” (it used to be something more ‘poetic’ before being changed to ‘Dawn of the Dead’ ,and finally ‘Dawn of The Walking Dead) , characters were being drummed up in my mind and written down before being fully modeled. Yes, every original character has a biography sheet saved on my writing laptop. Most outdated but still there, nonetheless. A lot of characters were written, but most were scrapped (about 10, iirc). One 2 made it to the sketch and model stages before being cut.

One of these characters was a girl named “Margaret St. John”.

As her name implied, Margaret (nicknamed Peggy) would’ve been a member of the St. John family. She was about 14-15, and was the niece of Terry, Brenda’s late husband.

Margaret moved to her uncle’s farm years before the apocalypse, and her dream was to become a horseback rider. After the apocalypse, and her uncle’s death, Brenda would’ve been extremely protective of her and kept her on the farm at all times.

Margaret would’ve been introduced in Chapter 7, when Lee and company arrive at the farm. Margaret head’s out the house with her aunt carrying a jug of water. Brenda introduces her as her niece, and Margaret tells them that her friends call her Peggy so go ahead and call her that. Brenda offers them the basket of bread, and Margaret accidentally mentions taking one before letting out a squeak (she had a speaking quirk, something along the lines of letting out a ‘hm!’ Whenever she was flustered, it was funny).

She mentions Maybelle’s sickness, to which Mark blurts out they have a vet. Brenda excitedly tells them to bring their group. Margaret asks to help, and Brenda tells her to show Lee and Mark around the dairy, much to Margaret’s chagrin.

Andy asks Lee and Mark to help secure the perimeter, and warns Margaret to stay away from the fence before leaving to go fuel the generator.

Before Ben and Travis head back, Margaret tip-toes around Lee and stops in front of them. She’d ask their names and then tell them to follow her down the drive. Confused, Lee would state that Andy asked her to stay. To which Margaret would reply that Andy ain’t her dad, and wasn’t the boss of her.

He’d ask about the tour and she’d quickly point at the barn, the generator and the fence around them before stating that there was nothing interesting to do around there and how she never gets to walk in the woods anymore.

Mark tries to say he doesn’t want her to get in trouble but she shrugs him off and tells them to cover for her if they ask. She picked up and skipped down the driveway with Ben and Travis in tow.

We would then get a perspective of them going to the inn from Ben. He has an inner dialogue about the events so far when Margaret interrupts him and asks if he was local. Ben tells her he’s from Stone Mountain, and she asks if he’d visit Macon to which he’d say sometimes but it wasn’t very interesting. Margaret mentions the woods were her favorite part out there. She’d then mentioned how she used to come out and feed the raccoons and play the guitar. But after the walkers came, she wasn’t allowed to go back into the woods or play the guitar outside.

And that was as far as I wrote for Margaret St. John.

Now here’s Pidge St. John:

Pidge (short for something else) was the second version of Margaret. Here the introduction was the same, saved for the bubbly lines, which were replaced with more mellowed ones. Pidge wasn’t as happy and energetic as Margaret, but more of a chill teenager.

Pidge had headphones instead of a headscarf, because picking up where we left off with Margaret, since Pidge could no longer play guitar like she used to, she started listening to tapes on a walkman she claimed from the lost and found.

Ben asks if raccoons had rabies, to which Pidge shrugs and nonchalantly replies that they never bit her so she wouldn’t know. Ben would say she reminded him of Rachel, and mention that she’s obsessed with animals that can easily kill you.

They arrive at the inn and Travis happily presents the biscuits. Pidge introduces herself as everyone digs in and would invite them for dinner, where they’d accept.

Scrapped because oh my God.

I have written and rewritten roles and characters for this project for so many months. But this character by far has had the MOST amount of back-and-forth I’ve ever seen. Ever.

First and foremost, Margaret/Pidge isn’t like Alfred 1 & 2, or Debbie and Oliver. No, Margaret actually had a bigger role in DoTWD. What had happened was that her role kept changing because moments in the story down the line kept changing. And for her to keep that role I’d written for her, I’d have to find a way to keep her with the group until the end of Season 1.

Thing is, she didn’t have a role with them in this season. If anything Pidge would’ve been an extra body until Season 2.

I can’t say what her role was because it spoils things planned for Season 2, but it did involve her being an antagonist.

Traveling back to Margaret/Pidge in Season 1 however, both of their versions were different, but the better version in my opinion was definitely Margaret.

See, Margaret was an energetic and friendly girl. But true to her namesake, Peggy was a St. John to her soul.

In the barn, where Lee opens the kill room door, Margaret would come up behind him and shut it. Lee asks her what the hell was all that blood, and she (albeit annoyed) tells him that her cousins clean their kills since aunt Brenda doesn’t like the mess, and sometimes she has to clean the room. She mentions that she’d “Really not clean anything else for a while, so just leave it be.”

At dinner, when Lee reveals the truth. She feigns terrified about her family’s cannibalism. When her cousin Andy comes back from escorting the prisoners to the meat locker, she’s seen continuing her meal as if nothing happened. He says she got sloppy. It’s then when Margaret's facade would finally drop. She snaps back at him and says that at least she tried playing dumb, unlike his stupid ass. Andy replies that none of this would’ve happened had she just locked the door upstairs after she was done doping up Mark with morphine. She shrugs him off and says she’s still hungry and won’t let something stupid like this ruin her meal she worked hard on.

Brenda comes down and tells her (a bit nicer) that she should’ve locked the door. Margaret says “That Lee fella broke the lock to the back room before, how the hell was a lock gonna stop him anyways? If he wanted to find out, he was gonna find out. It’s done. I’m taking a walk.”

We continue the story from the motor inn group POV. But in this version, Lee would’ve killed the St. John’s (Danny and Andy).

Clementine would tell Lee to look behind him as an enraged Margaret comes charging at the man at full speed with that pitchfork from earlier. Lilly shoots the girl in the stomach and she falls. Margaret curses Lee, screaming that everything was his fault and if he’d just minded his own business none of this would’ve happened.

Lee wouldn't bring himself to kill a child, so as she demands Lee come back so she could kill him he walks away.

With a vow to get revenge, Margaret would actually take the role of The Stranger. Which was interesting, because the ending was different as well.

Pidge, however, wasn't an antagonist. At least not immediately. She had no clue about her family's cannibalism and would’ve escaped with the motor inn group. More on that as the chapters go on, because as I said, Margaret/Pidge was written out beyond what I write here but then we’d be getting into actual spoilers, and I don’t want to do that just yet. Besides, her role was just recycled anyway.

So when the time comes, I’ll make a B.T.Sing for JUST this character.

And here’s where you can read Margaret’s introduction: [🪓]

And here’s Pidge’s introduction: [🪓]

#twdg #dotwd au #fanfiction #the walking dead game #the walking dead telltale #telltale the walking dead #BTSing w/Juno

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pogasm · 8 months

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i promise u… w3 on….

#sorry im btsing

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ask-serendipity-sky · 11 months

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https://youtu.be/-vbvkuMCr8M

such a piercing stare of jungkook to jimin at 12:57 mark. im a little sad not to see jikook interact much (or even horse around) in this video but i missed seeing them together i'll take what i can get! Jk looked a little glum as well but i don't want to think too much about it. I missed seeing all of them in one room and I wonder how next year's festa will be like..

Anon 2: Watch the new video, made around the period of busan concert. Jikook is not jikooking. I loved jihope interaction btw

Anon 3: What do you think about the BTS 10th anniversary project video that just drop? I saw one Jkker say it look like Jikook had a fight. To me it seems more like JK was feeling down and was really only smiling with Jin. So, what do you think?

Hello anons,

Jikook is not jikooking but also BTS is not btsing.

Jk wasn't being his silly self, only with Jin. And Jimin wasn't his funny self either, only with Jhope. And we know these two people are their emotional support people.

Jimin didn't play along with Suga,

(excuse the potato quality)

Jk didn't play along with Tae,

I felt Jhope tried to cheer things up the most but he was working overtime :( Jin and Jhope looked sad :(

I think that Jikook is sat away from each other on purpose (screw the company) because the moment they are next to each...eye contact and a smile.

Did you see when Jimin said he saw a bus ad for Jk's birthday?

And Jk said he saw an ad on a plane lol

and we know who gets the ads on the planes..

And did you FEEL Jk's piercing eyes on Jimin when he was dancing with Jhope lol

I think there is still Jikookery but, to me, tensions were there probably due to a lot of factors.

When Jikook is doing bad, they don't even look at each other or mention each other. In today's content they still did although things still felt off. Ms stuff, Jimin living with producers, Jk's Qatar trip, the company being shitty could be influencing all of that.

Thanks for stopping by.

#jikook #kookmin #jimin #jungkook #asks

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kookiecrush · 6 months

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I went on twitter to read the translations of Jimin's live and see the videos and gifs and of course it's a mess on there as usual with solos spreading their toxicity and bullshit 😡

Yep, I just went on there to do the same and saw that they're acting unhinged as usual. On a more positive note, Jin and Hobi in the comments! 🥺 And then Jungkook stopping by! 🥺 I love when bts are btsing, it really warms the cockles of my heart. It's so cute how the other members pop up out of the woodwork to show their support when one of them has something going on.

#ask #bts

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kaileakes · 1 year

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I posted 316 times in 2022

That's 296 more posts than 2021!

6 posts created (2%)

310 posts reblogged (98%)

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I tagged 151 of my posts in 2022

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Those who've followed me since I made this account should remember how much I 'fangirl' this dude. Ya'll over there BTSing (And I am not throwing shade, I dig 'em), well I've been a Rain girl long before them and he was global on their level before stupid military obligations. Well, I was nicely shared this video, and now I have to share it because...RAIN!! 😊 If you again, follow my series Sin Eaters: Devotion Book 1-2/Rebel Guardians and remember, I told ya'll that 'Take' is based on him though back when I wrote SE, I sadly didn't realize Rain was Korean at that time, it was my fail. Stop judging me. You learn and do better.🤣

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The Return...

Since Twitter is in chaos land, it looks like I'll be utilizing Tumblr again. Let's see what my random thoughts and posting more of my book trailers/things over here feels like again. (Note: 1st thing... EDIT, yesssss). I sooo am going to miss all my Twitter content, networks, and talking with everyone. *deep inhales* Woosigh.

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A Halloween Kind of Love

By Nikki-Michelle & Kai Leakes ❤️🍂🌾 ❇️NEW RELEASE: http://amzn.to/3rMSJa5 🌾Dreams & Insta-Attraction 🌾Small Town Autumn Magic 🌾Spooky Season Festival 🌾Pullman Car History & Music

"Her aura bloomed like jasmine and lilies in the sun. While she smelled like honeydew and fall, her curvy voluptuous frame was on display in a camel tan turtleneck, black jeans, and black walking boots. Lips that were plush and tinted in a color that accentuated her natural beauty unconsciously made me lick my own. To those not from my community—and those who saw the world through the white gaze— they would miss her classic Black beauty. She was what my people called a queen, like those old-school Ebony magazine beauties. Her long locs fell over her shoulders, and when her lips slowly parted, displaying a gorgeous, gapped-tooth pearl white smile, I found myself stuck in awe of her." ~Trent Tucker, Jr.

#bookstagram#booklove#bookcommunity#newrelease#IndieAuthorLove#romance#series#novel

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My #1 post of 2022

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crookedheartedlove · 3 years

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Me: *trying to be productive*

My brain: 💪 mic mic bungee/bright light jeonjin 🎶

#mic drop #btsing

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butterfly-child99 · 5 years

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I had to have a picture where Hobi stood! 🤭😂 still btsing! I was hobi-Ing! #bts #hobi #jhope #btsing @bts_twt https://www.instagram.com/p/B2rwlFtHmYd/?igshid=1k0ylvtr2gai7

#bts #hobi #jhope #btsing

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linaxart · 1 year

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My process of my last piece, for @theartguard sharing week

References credit, from left to right:

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#gradientprocess #the old guard #yusuf al-kaysani #tog #artists on tumblr #if you actually read this whole thing bless you #because it got waaaay longer than i planned #sorry to spam the tag #btsing

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justimagineok · 2 years

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BTSing as establishing a relationship

(ps: I missed you guys)

Taehyunging

#btsing #taehyunging #taehyung fanfic #bts taehyung #bts fake texts #bts #bts fic #bts fake chat #bts fake chats #bts scenarios

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juno-box · 6 months

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BTSing my Fic w/Juno: DoTWD - Rachel

I picked Halloween because I used to love Halloween as a kid, so I made it her birthday a few years ago.

To celebrate, here's some hilarious "B.T.Sing My Fic" for Rachel!

Rachel has had well over 10 models, plus numerous redesigns over the past year!

As I practiced and what have you, Rachel's model has changed... extremely over the span of this fic?

Since about 2014-2013, Rachel originally had pigtails. I don't know why, I liked doing my hair like that when I was younger so I passed it down to a plethora of my OCs growing up, Ray's no exception.

Here's EVERY Rachel model from start to finish, including the tests, get ready to laugh:

BOO!

Scared you bad, huh? Yeah they went from bad to decent to scrapped somewhere from Jan. to around August. Those pigtails fought DEMONS to stay in the final design just to lose lmao.

Here's where I started getting closer:

I still was bouncing between a tomboy look or not. Keep in mind, Ray's canon appearance is veryyyy close to how she was originally conceptualized in my mind space lol, save for the pigtails and the boots oddly enough, she actually just had flats.

Her favorite color was going to be red as a joke

There was a scrapped joke somewhere where Lee got her a yellow sweater between EP.1 & 2 which Rachel would go:

R: "Oh, yellow?" L: "It matches your rabbit." R: "Yeah, I know. My favorite color's red, though." L: "Red?" R: "Yeah! Red like my boots!"

Look, it was a reference to something my sister joked about as a kid lol, her favorite color was green but all she ever wore was pink. Get it?

Okay so, years ago, Rachel's end-game would been with Duck

Listen, this was 2015, I would've been at most 12. Don't believe me here's a screenshot from my old FF.Net page lmfao:

OG Clucks where y'all at lol-

Rachel used to be immune to walker bites... Yeah.

So she was going to have a whole Deus Ex Machina and be immune to the infection ala Ellie TLOU style. Look, you can GUESS why I eventually tossed that idea, okay, I was like 10-11 when I came up with it. (〜￣▽￣)〜

Rachel AND her brother were... were magic... people... from... a different... world—

Okay, OKAY SHUT UP. I was 11ish.

Harry Potter was the shit.

Percy Jackson was everywhere, we ALL loved Supernatural!

I was a HUGE nerd of Skyrim and--

QUIT BOOING ME （；´д｀）ゞ

At least y'all didn't read the fic when it was up on Wattpad years ago🙃

#dotwd au #twdg #fanfiction #dotwd rachel #i'm putting myself on blast here #happy halloweeeeeeen

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