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shavynel · 8 months
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Writing comments for fanfic
tl;dr -- Write one thing you liked about the fic (a phrase or moment) and how you reacted or made you feel! Also, keep it fun! Make no demands of fic authors who write out of love and Owe Us Nothing.
It took me a while to figure out how to write comments. I went through an evolution. There's lots of stuff on how to write stories, probably even giving crit and feedback, but commenting? Not nearly as much. So here's my not so short ramble on writing comments for fic. Includes my Ways of commenting and Tenets of commenting.
Examples here will be T-rated (by AO3 standards) and most are taken from or newly written with specific fics in mind. They are, ahem, almost all Genshin Impact.
Commenting is, I believe, a personal thing. I've been told I have a bit of an enthusiastic presence, so what feels true to you may vary. I also like to write words (can you tell?). And smash keyboards.
Leaving comments is, in fact, effort! But it's also a skill that can be learned and honed. And honestly, I think my fic experience is improved by it. I don't always leave a comment. But, I don't know... that random internet person authored a Whole Thing. For Free (likely). And I just get to read it?? Yeah, I'm going to leave a little appreciation. Just a little snack in return for this fulfilling meal you have fed me.
I also find writing a comment is also a way for me to just bask in a fic a little bit longer, linger in that feeling of oh, wow, this was so good, and I don't want to leave yet. (And then sometimes there's a response, and then I get a bonus dose of nostalgia!)
Ways of commenting
These are roughly ordered by amount of effort required. I would say the comments I leave are a mash up of these, really. There aren't actual hard lines between them.
1. An extra kudos.
Kudos are nice. Knowing the kudos button isn't enough is one layer deeper! Comments like
"Thanks for writing!" "<3" "i mash kudos button but no more kudos come out what's wronnnnggg????" "yay an update!" "this is so good"
Level of effort: slightly more than a kudos.
Honestly, copy-pasteable. Personally, I would always write these out. Somehow, to me, as a commenter, feels more real if I tippy tappy the letters myself even if Author can't tell. It's a nice way to let an author know you're coming back chapter after chapter when we can only kudos once on a fic. I like to leave a little something more, but I still often start or end with this.
2. Fic reaction.
Sometimes a fic just leaves me a certain way. Invoked a particular mood or visceral reaction. So, I let the author know!
"Awww, my heart is warm!" "Jaw on ground. WTF!" "Literal chills." "My eyes are wet. How did that happen?" "This fic is pure comfort." "AHHHHHHHHHHH!" "Heart on floor, smashed." "WHOLESOME!" "This has left me completely feral and ready to punch something."
Level of effort: you need some emotional intelligence or other awareness of you reactions.
As a starting point, was the fic -- wholesome, sweet, chaotic (in a good way), funny, heartwrenching, sad, delightful, shocking, calm, peaceful, I just want a hug now, terrifying, creepy, comedic?
How do you then turn this into a comment? "This was so ___!!"
Honestly, my crutch here is to just keyboard smash. What does it mean? Your guess as good as mine. I'm speechless, and I cannot words properly, but please participate in these Feels I'm having.
3. One detail I like. (My default comment style)
This one covers a lot of scope. If I read to the end of the fic, there's probably something I liked. Maybe
a turn of phrase. "Diluc drinking grape juice like a man chained to an interrogation table. sfjfskkdz" "Bedsheets twisted up like cooked spinach is SO accurate." "Itto-to is such a cute mashup name!" "We have years ahead of us. That was just one day in the past. The feeeeeelllssss" ":) as punctuation" "Barbatos and Nobles as a bookstore. Sdjjsfjdw I love it"
a particular character moment, action, interaction, or dialogue. quote or paraphrase it! "Diluc kicking Childe into the water was hilarious." "Childe is such an adrenaline junkie. I can't believe he would lean out the window while he was driving." "I'm so proud of Zhongli for actually admitting his feelings!"
some specific moment you emotionally reacted to. I've only recently trained myself out of stoic facing through fic. I mean, it's a useful skill, don't get me wrong (especially in public), but it's less useful when it's just me by myself. I now laugh at 3am reading fic, and my life is brighter for it. Comedy fic writers, you are my fave. "Can't get over when Diluc walks in on Kaeya and Childe. AHHHHH!" "Qiqi drying Childe's hair was so sweet!"
Level of effort: you have to actually remember something you liked or reacted to.
The number of movies I watch and number of times someone asks how's my week, and I just stare blankly because I know it was good but don't know anything else? High. So yeah, this isn't trivial.
I've gotten to the point where usually while reading I notice a moment of "wow I love this!" I don't go looking for them (because I want to stay in fic headspace not comment material hunting headspace), and I don't spend much effort trying to remember. If I forget, that's fine. Not like I'm not writing a book review for a grade or anything.
Just, what's a moment you just got to call out? (And bonus, what's your reaction?) Authors out there seem to like to make us feel things. Show them we're just dangling from their puppet strings!
I usually leave comments like this. Just popcorn style, as many things as I remember, whatever comes up as I recall it. I'm aware that sometimes I end up basically quoting a fic back to its author completely out of order interspersed with commentary or keyboard smashes. I'm occasionally embarrassed by how much I'm smashing into their comments, but the reception seems overall positive.
4. Between the lines and spin off thoughts.
Sometimes fic make me think. I mean, canon makes me think, and then people go and make fanworks off of that, so of course I'm bound to run into fic that makes me think. Sometimes the things I notice or think about aren't directly in the text, but implied or spin out thoughts. An interpretation, a mini analysis, or a reflection. Like,
a new thought or take on a character. "Aro-ace Venti! I like this take!" "Please don't break Klee. She's just trying her best to hold all the adults together. Oh no. You've already broken Klee. T_T" "I bet Jean is the only person who could have kicked Diluc's ass, and he really needed it." "Kaeya what are you doooinggg?? Why is he like this???" (An extra note, it's cool to disagree with a character, but not the author. Character did that makes you want to scream? Go for it. Author wrote the character in a way you disagree with? Don't comment. Leave the fic if it bothers you that much.)
noticing foreshadowing or a detail that isn't fully explained / only alluded to. "Is that Scara working at Scarabucks???" "Wait, something about what Venti said makes me think this isn't just a modern day AU ..." "Did that count as a geo construct for the purposes of the contract?"
some sentence or moment somewhere that just hits you in the brain. This one I don't actually know if author's like. On the one hand, I can imagine it being flattering. On the other, maybe it's too personal? I'll usually center these on the characters, kind of like character analysis. "Diluc sharing his anxiety with Kaeya, and that being what made Kaeya look at his own anxiety... really hits. Like, I don't even think Diluc could have said something sooner without Kaeya running, which says so much about how Diluc loves Kaeya. And the fact Kaeya can see this as a mirror of what he's doing and learns something from it. Just. Oof. Wow." "The conversation between Zhongli and Childe is just so real. Like Zhongli is trying so hard but his ass just can't understand Childe just wants him to tell them things and his not telling things is Not Helping even though he just wants to protect the boy!"
Level of effort: some amount of analytical thinking, reflection, or willingness to share when you get sucker punched by words.
This one I absolutely never go looking for, so I don't leave many such comments. When it does come up, it usually smacks me in the face, and I let it (roll with the hit and into the comments). On occasion I am wailing in the comment box when the revelation (like having broken Klee) just dawns on me. Am I Feelings Processing in comment boxes? Uuuhhhhhh, no comment. (Don't mind the lack of delivery on the pun.)
I'd like to think authors appreciate when we reflect back to them we get their interpretation, but I can also imagine it might be a little too much for authors if we get too personal. In which case, sorry. Your work is great! Please take it as my intention to flatter you since you've touched my heart or brain or soul with your words.
5. Craft appreciation.
This one, *head scratches* yeah, I don't often end up here. But sometimes it's not one moment, but something about all the moments, something underlying, or something in the way it was all put together. If I do end up here and write a general statement, I like to point to specific bits that made me think that (which is where I lean back on One Detail I Like). Actually, yeah, usually I use this as flavor to One Detail I Like, but I think it's sufficiently different to pull out separately. It's a writerly meta layer. What falls here?
dialogue. "Your dialogue is so good. I can hear it in in the VA's voice." "I love the contrast between how Zhongli talks and Childe talks."
imagery. "Can't get over the imagery of Childe releasing dandelion scenes. Such a kid!" "Childe sleeping with Tranquil Statlight is just so peaceful."
characterization. "The little nuggets you give characters like Rosaria doing community service at the church for Crimes just gives me life." "I love the way you write Childe. He's so aggressive!"
setting, world building (more for AUs but wow there are some authors good at expanding on canon lore). "Your world building is so cool. Like the abyssal graffiti on the walls?? HNNG!"
writing style. "Your style is very dreamy. <3" "This is genuinely so heartwarming, and yet at the same time what is this underlying feeling of something is wrong????" "I feel like people appreciate the art of comedic one liners but you've got angst one liners. AND THEY SLAY."
pacing, timing. "This fic reads like a high speed express train. It just never stops or slows down!!" "What is this cRaFT! Like. Para 1, comedic. Para 2, thoughtful. Para 3, WHY DO MY HEARTSTRINGS HURT."
use of language. "Using he for POV character and they for the other is LINGUISTICALLY MIND BLOWING." (Please, I want this to catch on more. I do absolutely respect people's pronouns. These fictional characters (and people who have pronoun flexibility)? She and they instead of she and she?? THE CLARITY WE COULD HAVE??!? I'm incredibly greedy for it.)
premise. "Pierro Dad gives me so much life." "The Bachelor but it's Diluc?? Let's go!!"
plot twist, or cliff hanger. "The reveal!!! *screaming*" "I can't believe you would do me like this." (No, I can't in good conscience leave a specific example and give a fic away. Yes, I am thinking of specific fics still.)
Level of effort: be able to map details you like to writer's craft.
Let's not pretend we're here to do crit. Even if we're using writerly words, we are not here to do crit. Well, I am not because I don't believe the comments box is the right time or place for it, but I am happy to lay on the praise and point out the things that worked for me.
Usually, I think it's harder to look across a fic and be like, yeah, the dialogue hit, or this writing style or pacing really does it for me. It's more nebulous. And sometimes it kicks you out of fic reading headspace and into a writerly meta land to notice, so I don't, and I just let the fic wash over me. And if something here strikes me, I will offer my praises. Again, I think it helps to think of this more as an additional kind of One Detail I Like.
Tenets of commenting (and a little of reading)
Okay, so those were some do's, but I also have don't's. These are my boundaries that I keep. Maybe yours are different. I suspect most of these stem from the place, Author did this for free and Owes Me Nothing, so that's the one real tenet. I keep these in mind so that I can keep fic a nice, fun, safe place for me (and hopefully the authors too).
1. I will never ask for updates. I never expect a next chapter.
I've seen enough content creators stressed out and burnt out about putting something out over and over again. I feel for them. That sucks. They probably just started doing it for fun, and now ... The demand and expectation they continue to perform for free? Yeah, it's not going to come from me.
Once upon a time, because of this and a desire to have complete stories, I wouldn't read incomplete fics. I now am The Biggest Fan of incomplete fics. Yes, hang me off the side of a cliff. I will scream at you. And if you don't haul me back up? Well, fine. I'll live. Some other author's got my back. Probably. There's still so much to love between world building, characterization, good moments, jokes -- and you sometimes get the experience of seeing familiar faces screaming at the fic with you update after update. It's precious. It's fleeting. I could go on, but maybe a different day. Back to commenting!
Flip side, as an author, I will say the desire for more is, in one case, why I plan to continue a fic from years ago. I was very firm at the time I would not be extending the one shot, but I guess time changes things, and the fact people were like, I would read more story contributes to that.
So this one is very much a personal tenet. There's some line between I love this so much I want it to continue, and expecting there to be more. Where is it? I don't know. So I just stay away. Surely Author will get I want more if I just say how much I love everything and have commented on their latest chapter. Rather than leave snacks that taste like burn out to some authors, I will focus on other flavors of comments!
2. I will not say what I dislike.
Not my ship? I probably won't read. Not my preferred ship dynamic? Tropes I don't like? Characterization not hitting it for me? Paragraph formatting not doing it for me? I just x out of there, find something I do like. People be writing things for free! Let them have their fun!
If I did read it, snd I stayed, something else must have grabbed my attention. I'll focus on that. Writing style not quite doing it for me but I love the details added to the world? "Wow, the world you flesh out is so complex." No mention about how much of a drag it is to read, because hey, I still read it, and I had reason to not put it down!
3. I will not give corrections.
Authors (and maybe a beta) have put in tremendous effort and time, and to be like, "you missed a typo" or "actually, the canon lore says X" often detracts from the beauty of the shared fic experience. I interpret random grammar and misspeaks and typos in daily conversation and texts all the time. Surely I know enough to employ this skill. And if I figured it out, other readers probably will figure it out too. If I can't, I usually assume the author was too big brain for me and skip merrily along to the next sentence. (And if it's too much for me to handle, I click out.)
Yeah I get it! I get the urge to want to be helpful and contribute to other people's experience! I know that feel! Because, well, I learned this one from experience. I tried once. Watched an author wilt a little when what I wanted was to be helpful. Yeeeaaah, not doing that again.
So, I suspect this often comes off as a little entitled that just by that bit of you say something and kinda underlyingly expect the author to do something about it, and again, Author Owes Me Nothing! Even if the author is asking for a beta, I'd reach out first and make sure they are now in a headspace to be expecting beta thoughts from me.
Wrapping it up
I love fic, the world is rich with it, and I am full of love for authors and their craft. It fills my heart with joy to know I can return a little smile to someone who has let me hop on their ride for free.
It does take effort. Writing comments, turns out, is writing. Writing is a skill, therefore writing comments is a skill. And writing takes practice to improve, so, guess what, writing comments takes practice to improve. Who would've thunk. (Not me, I assure you.)
I've wanted to write this for me for a while, capture what I've learned because I noticed my ability to write comments change over time. Then recently, I was rec'd a fic and told to definitely leave a comment because the author deserves it and I write good comments. Dispatched because I write good comments! Now my commenter feathers are fluffed up, and so I have actually written this. But I definitely didn't start out the comment writer I am today, so I wanted to share that, surprisingly there is a progression path! (Maybe this is only surprising to me.)
I do find commenting adds to my fic reading experience. And I love reading other people's comments. Sometimes other people notice things I didn't or have very cool interpretations, and that is an extra wow right there. (And look at all these other people who like the thing I like!)
And if I leave a comment, sometimes I get a reply! Author noticed my little comment! Extra dose of happy for everyone!
And sometimes, sometimes, (and again I would never expect it, but it is a gift much like fic itself is) an author will write back full of their notes and what they were thinking about writing those moments, and I treasure that so, so much. It's both a delight because of the usual Author saw my effort commenting and I get an extra behind the scenes! The craft behind the craft! (Now how do authors leave good replies? That is still a mystery to me.)
Sometimes I write a lot and then it goes into a black hole, and that's sad. Hmm. I'm pretty sure this is what authors feel when we don't leave comments. Hmm. Guess it's time to write more comments! (Sometimes, like fic updates, replies show up months later, and that's honestly <3)
So, let's go leave some comments and show those authors love and tell them how much they delighted us! Or ... how they smashed our hearts into the ground with angst/no comfort because sometimes that's just what one wants to read.
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dearbraus · 2 years
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— Nsfw Alphabet A-J
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Starring; Beel & Belphie.
Warnings; 18+ minors dni + afab reader + oral (receiving) + fruit fucking + masturbation + pillow humping + other general nsfw themes.
Word count; 1.4k
Note; This is my first time writing for any obey me characters so please be kind and enjoy <3
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A = Aftercare (what they’re like after sex)
Beel; He puts in the effort to take care of you before wandering off to the kitchen to satiate his neverending hunger but he is a lot more attentive once he’s had something to fill his belly. He’ll get you all your favourite snacks too and make sure you’re feeling comfortable. Beel knows that sometimes he can get a bit rough without meaning to, it comes with his brute strength and large build so he always makes sure that if you’re sore that he looks after you.
Belphie; When it comes to aftercare, Belphie struggles a bit. He loves and cares for you with all of his heart but after such strenuous activities, the call for sleep is just too strong. He does his best to check in on you and to give you what you need but if there's one thing you can count on is for Belphie to make the bed as comfortable as humanly possible so that when the two of you do turn in for the night, you’re both cozied up.
B = Body part (their favourite body part of theirs and also their partner’s)
Beel; If he had to pick, it’d probably be his arms. He likes how strong he is and likes how you marvel at his muscles. There isn’t any part of you that he could pick as his favourite, every part of you is his favourite but if he really needed to give you an answer he’d probably say your tits because he likes to play with them.
Belphie: Rather than a specific favourite body part, Belphie would say he prefers his demon form over his human form! Belphie unlike his twin, has no issue picking a favourite and will blatantly tell you, your thighs are his favourite part of you. They’re his favourite place to nap and yeah maybe he does like the way they feel wrapped around his head.
C = Cum (anything to do with cum, basically)
Beel; Beel’ll go down on you after he’s fucked you into next week, he doesn’t care that your puffy cunt is still dripping with his cum. When he wants to eat you out, he’s gonna eat you out; nothing is gonna stop him from enjoying your pretty pussy.
Belphie; He loves cumming on you; your face, your tits, your ass, your thighs– it doesn’t matter where so long as you’re covered in his cum. It’s a demon thing, he thinks but it might just be something that strokes his ego. He’s a possessive guy, that he can’t deny so there’s something just so satisfying in the sight, it shows him you’re all his.
D = Dirty secret (pretty self explanatory, a dirty secret of theirs)
Beel; Beel has fucked quite a number of fruit, in part due to boredom and just sheer curiosity. Not that he’d tell anyone other than you but he did enjoy the feeling for the most part but that was always overshadowed by the disappointment he felt when his stomach started rumbling and he realized he couldn’t actually eat it anymore.
Belphie; Belphie doesn’t really have any secrets, his sex drive is fairly low so he doesn’t get around to much unless it’s with you and even then you two aren’t particularly kinky.
E = Experience (how experienced are they? do they know what they’re doing?)
Beel; He has a fair amount of experience, but still preferred to get to know your body and what you liked as opposed to just assuming you’d like what his previous partners did.
Belphie; He had no experience until he met you. Belphie was very embarrassed and a bit ashamed to admit it but he found it gratifying for you to teach him how to please your body and even how to please himself.
F = Favorite position (this goes without saying)
Beel; Missionary, he prefers to look at you and be able to hold your hand and kiss you whenever he wants to. He feels closest to you in that position but doggy style and anything where you’re on top is a close second. Beel is a big guy, he knows that so he likes when you’re ontop so he does not have to worry about overwhelming you with his huge frame.
Belphie; Cowgirl, admittedly Belphie is a bit lazy. It’s not that he doesn’t want to make your feel good or pay attention to you but rather he just can never muster up the energy to be on top. Though, he does make sure to make up for you carrying the brunt of the work by making sure you cum at minimum twice on his finger and his tongue. Having you sit on his face or laying between your thighs doesn’t require much energy, so he makes sure to show you just how much he loves you.
G = Goofy (are they more serious in the moment? are they humorous? etc.)
Beel; He doesn’t go out of his way to be serious or humorous but on more than one occasion his stomach has rumbled while the two of you were having sex and you both errupted into a flurry of giggles.
Belphie; He tends to err on the more serious side, his brows stitched together in concentration. Sure there are the occasional ackward moments here or there, but if you were to laugh he might feel a bit more insecure than he’d like to be but he can’t help it.
H = Hair (how well groomed are they? does the carpet match the drapes? etc.)
Beel; His pubes are a touch darker than the rest of his hair, but they’re still clearly ginger. He has a neat happy trail a curly bush that he trims every so often but he doesn’t actively look over his pubes since he isn’t super hairy.
Belphie; His pubes are just as dark as the rest of his hair, and is a bit messy and unkempt. He unlike his twin is very hairy. He doesn’t think to groom himself until he finds himself watching porn to get ideas to spice things up for you and him and sees that most of the men and women in the videos are hairless. Belphie has no idea where to start but he’s lucky that you don’t mind helping him out.
I = Intimacy (how are they during the moment? the romantic aspect)
Beel; It depends on the day. Beel can be very romantic after a night out to a fancy Devildom resturant or things can be very casual.
Belphie; He tends to prefer for things to be intimate, always having his lips attached to some part of your body and his hands tightly intertwined with yours. He likes the intimacy of it all and the feeling of closeness.
J = Jack off (masturbation headcanon)
Beel; He doesn’t jerk off as much since he started dating you, sometimes in the mornings when he can’t get his hard on to go away he does in the showers, lewd images of your always on his mind but other than that, if Beel is feeling needy he only has make his way to your room and the two of you are always quick to come to a solution.
Belphie; He jerks off more now that he’s got a partner, you haunt his dreams, your moans and body seared into his memories, he wakes up with his pants soiled but his stomach still in knots and so needy that it frustrates him. Belphie has no choice but to pull up your Devilgram profile and hump his pillow ‘til he’s satisfied.
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auttumnmai · 9 months
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I redesing Chloe
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So Like you know that I did some redesing for mlb, for fun yk.(here's the link if you're curious : +
I have always wanted to do Chloe, but I knew that she need it a lot of work for my part. Like, from all the years of watching the show I found myself really like "liking" Chloe. We all love a mean girl.
I going to do give some thoughts about her desing an d why I landed on this one and comment a little bit of her writting as character.
small note: When I do this redesings I always thought about them like 16-17 ish years old, it just when I think of what I would have done with the story is them being just a lil bit older.
Desing
So for Chloe I had a few key words to go off. It girls( from the 80´s,60´s and the early 2000´s),very femenine, a lil bit of preppy and french girl. it was really dificult to balance all of this because I wanted to gave it a really iconic look but at the same time very effortless becuase of "nepo baby". Also I used "french girl" becuase I thought "she's the daughter of the most famous fashion editor of French, she would be an it girl just for the nepotism" So she should have a really unique style that breaths nepotism .
Also some time it can be similar to Mari's because of something that I'm gonna' explain later.
I'd made a pinterest board as usual for this. + (the link).
also I made some really bad explorations on options,like really fast to cutr down options.
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For some reason gogo boots were like the shoe to go, like confier than a heel but it has a hell, also i despise flats shoes. Also I wanted to make her have like a supermodel fisique, becuase when I saw her mom I thought "it's like a fusion of Anna Wintour and Yolanda Hadid" so like yeah.
I also had to some skechtes of her face, not because I did not like her face,just becuase it did not translate as well to my style.
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As you can see I even found a face for Zoe(unintencional) that looks like angelina Jolie for some reason. At the end my references are the ones on the bottom.
now for the writting
If it's not clear I do really belive that Chloe was like mistreated, because one thing is that you wanted to make her an antagonist and the other thing is what they did to her. Like keep her as a bad guy but do it with respect to the character and the work that has been done the character.
some notes about her .
-A thing that I do not remember being used in the show, the similarities between Mari and Chloe. Like literally sometime they have the same delusion and do stuff like without thinking of the concequences. Like it's simple Chloe can be a reminder of what happens if you loose the tracks and idk becomes to self absorb. And Mari is for Chloe like what she saws a "weak".
-Also a very important thing, I'd belive that Chloe should have a really meaningfull reason to bully Mari. Like it does not excuse her behavior but give it more flavor. Remeber Style Queen and Audrey acknowledeges Marinette for her talent. This is the moment. So Mari should represent all the things that Chloe was teach by her Mom to be "weak", "unusefull" ,so when she sees her mom be nicer to someone "meah" than her own daughter, she gets mad.
So I do have more notes, but I would enter to the territory of fanfiction (iamalredythere?), also If there' s any mistake in the writting, (which I know that there's) please be patience, english is not my first language and I'm def not used to write this long, at least not anymore.
have a nice day or time!
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amethystina · 3 months
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Fanfic Tag Thingie
I am choosing to be tagged by @miss-ingno because this sounded like fun and I need an escape from the realisation that I am literally on the edge of burnout and my life is a mess. So here we go! :D
How many works do you have on AO3?
76
What's your total AO3 word count?
2 237 636
... and I have around 200k more just sitting in my WIP folders. I can't write short things x'D
What fandoms do you write for?
Right now it's mainly various Kdramas (The Devil Judge, Black Knight, plus my bold venture into Strangers From Hell) but, before that, it was mostly The Losers, Marvel, Pacific Rim, and Teen Wolf. With the occasional detour here and there.
What are your top 5 fics by kudos?
Who Holds the Devil (The Devil Judge, Gahan) at 3 390
Tech Support (MCU, Winteriron) at 3 217
Autonomy (MCU, Winteriron) at 3 137
I Won't Hold My Breath (MCU, Winteriron) at 2 914
Conflict of Interest (MCU, Winteriron) at 2 173
It's honestly a little wild to me that Who Holds the Devil has somehow managed to race to the top despite the other fics being at least four years older (sometimes more). And for a much bigger fandom, at that. You guys are not fucking around.
Do you respond to comments? Why or why not?
I do! Every single one if I can, though it can sometimes take a while before I get to all of them. And I just can't help it, I guess? Partly because I want to show that I've read the comment and appreciate the time and effort that went into writing it, but also because it often gives me an opportunity to talk about my writing and the choices I made in the fic.
And, apparently, the fact that I reply to all comments has become a bit of a thing at least when it comes to Who Holds the Devil, where readers will search through my replies looking for tidbits and extra information about the fic, characters etc.
(you guys are so weird and so dedicated and I love all of you xD)
What is a fic you wrote with the angstiest ending?
Grief (The Losers (Comics)). Because it is, predictably, about grief and how to keep living after someone you love has died. Though I would argue that the ending has a hint of hopefulness to it since it's also about moving on from said grief?
But yeah. Definitely that one since it's Major Character Death that I choose not to fix.
What's the fic you wrote with the happiest ending?
Literally every single fic except for the one above xD I LOVE my happy endings, okay? And it's kind of difficult to rank them since it depends a lot on the setting, characters, and the personal preference of the reader.
Heck, I even managed to give my Strangers From Hell fanfic a sugary sweet happy ending! That's dedication right there!
Do you get hate on fics?
Yeah, from time to time. I've gotten everything from childish insults calling me a bad writer to backhanded comments questioning my choices, writing style, grammar, spelling, dedication, intelligence, etc. I've even received more targeted, personal hate where people I thought I could trust were making fun of me behind my back in private chat rooms.
Most recently, though, it's less hate and more the "I simply must tell you that you're not writing this fic as I want you to write it" type of deal. Often paired with "It's my personal opinion and I have every right to express it." Which, fair enough. But that means I get to do the same, which I've noticed is something those kinds of commenters kind of hate. Especially when I point out that they've now made me a lot less keen to write the fanfic they're supposedly so fond of.
Turns out people don't like being reminded that their actions have consequences.
All in all, though, I've learned to just delete the comments I find too offensive or hateful.
Do you write smut? If so, what kind?
Oh god no. Sex scenes are the bane of my existence and I spend the entire time writing them looking like this: ლ(ಥ益ಥლ)
I've been told I'm not bad at writing them (the ones in Until Death Do Us Unite were quite appreciated) but anything involving sex or sexual tension is just a nightmare for me. Even more so when it's supposed to be kinky or extra spicy.
So why is one of the main ships I write for right now clearly a Dom/sub ship, you ask?
Because I'm an idiot. That's why.
Do you write crossovers? What’s the craziest one you've written?
I rarely do. The only crossover I've written is Resurrection where Derek Hale ends up in Purgatory together with Dean Winchester and they fight their way back to the world of the living (so Derek replaces Benny, basically).
I also have this one random fic (yet unposted) where Tony Stark and Eddie Brock are a couple (from the MCU and Venom movies, that is). But they're technically both in the Marvel universe so I'm not sure if that counts?
Long story short, crossovers aren't really my thing. I rarely write or read them.
Have you ever had a fic stolen?
Not that I know of, no.
Have you ever had a fic translated?
I have! Several, in fact, from various fandoms. Mostly into Russian, Spanish, or Mandarin. And I am honestly so flattered every time someone asks me if they can translate one of my fics 💜
Have you ever co-written a fic before?
I have not, no. I made plans to write a fic with a friend once, but we never got to the point of actually writing it. And, in all honesty, I think that might be just as well. I'm a perfectionist and writing a fic with me would probably be very exhausting for the other party xD
What's your all-time favourite ship?
I really don't know. Like, I'm tempted to say Jensen and Cougar from The Losers, or maybe Destiel or Stony, but I think that's partly founded in comfort and nostalgia. My ships change as I do and I really can't pinpoint an all-time favourite.
But CURRENT favourite? Definitely Kang Yo Han and Kim Ga On because they present such a wonderful challenge to someone like me, who loves to go real deep into character motivations, behaviour etc. They're a delight.
What's a WIP you want to finish, but doubt you ever will?
I'm not sure. I plan to finish all the ones I've started posting but there might be some in my folders that I'll decide to abandon if I truly can't revive my interest in them. But, usually, I can.
And, speaking of that, to all my MCU peeps (if there are any of you still out there): I know you've waited six years for the Tech Support sequel but it's finally been written and just needs to be edited. It's coming, my darlings. I promise.
Basically, when I say I'll do something, I will do it — even if it takes me six goddamn years, apparently x'D
What are your writing strengths?
Characters, tone, and emotions. I'm good at capturing the essence of the characters and write them in a way that feels believable and close to canon. I'm also really good at making people feel things with my writing, I've been told. According to testimonials, my readers can often see what's happening play out inside their heads like a movie, and feel the characters' emotions as they're living through them.
What are your writing weaknesses?
Aside from the aforementioned sex scenes? I think it's my inability to keep things short. I use a lot of unnecessary words and could definitely get better at being more concise. In a similar vein, I sometimes focus so much on the details with lengthy, wordy descriptions that I accidentally forget about the big picture, which is understandably confusing to my readers.
Thoughts on writing dialogue in another language for a fic?
I've done it from time to time (since my man Cougar speaks Spanish) but I'm pretty careful with it. And if it's longer sentences I always make sure to double-check with a native speaker.
First fandom you wrote for?
Teen Wolf! Which, admittedly, was because I didn't care if I fucked it up x'D I enjoyed the first two seasons of Teen Wolf, make no mistake! But I chose it mainly because it wasn't the ship I was the most emotionally invested in and so I figured it wouldn't feel as bad if it turned out that I sucked. Luckily enough for me, I didn't xD
Favourite fic you've written?
Just like with the all-time favourite ship, I'm not sure if I can answer this one. Because I like all of my fics but in different ways.
I'll always have a fondness for that first huge Teen Wolf series I wrote, for example, and had a lot of fun with Autonomy because of the world-building. Same goes with Hyperborean. But Who Holds the Devil is definitely my favourite when it comes to character work. While Allies is my favourite when it comes to tone, since it ended up just the way I wanted it to. And Until Death Do Us Unite was an absolute BLAST because I got to write horror and some really weirdass shit, which I've never done before.
So, truly, I can't say. Each one I've written has something I cherish and while some definitely stand out more than others, I wouldn't be able to just pick one.
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And that's that! I tag whoever wants to do it! :D
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kenz1e · 1 year
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Hey, nice to meet you! I saw that your request is open & you write for One Piece 😌❤️ May i request fluffy headcanons for Monster Trio with Fem!Reader? 😳 What if the reader is the devil queen. I hope my request is safe, do tell me if you feel uncomfortable 😔 Thank you!
a/n: nice to meet you too!! and ofc! oo! devil queen huh? interesting!! oh, and it didn’t make me uncomfortable at all!<3 please do excuse me if i’m a little shitty though💀 but i had so much fun writing this! and i’m sorry for it being a little late:( my sister wouldn’t quit bugging me about going to the mall, but i tried my best to write inbetween shopping! i hope you enjoy this!
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FLUFFY HC’S WITH THE MONSTER TRIO
fem!devil queen!reader
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MONKEY D. LUFFY
i feel like luffy would most DEFINITELY a touch your horns, wings, and tail, in a playful manner way of course, *smirks* that is if you have them though. otherwise he would probably bug you about using your powers 25/8!
yk whenever he catches fish? yeah, he would ask you to fry them with your fire so he wouldn’t get beaten by sanji (AGAIN.).
oh boy and once he sees you in battle, you bet he has STAR EYES! you look so cool!? he’s so happy to have you as his girlfriend AND a crew mate! whenever you get out of the fight and back onto the sunny, he’s gonna be yelling about how cool your powers were while attached to your back with his arms wrapped around you.
he definitely brags about you to zoro, and to basically everyone (cue sanji sulking in the corner). he can’t help how cool he thinks your abilities are! if i’m honest he probably thinks it’s cooler than sanjis raidsuit😭
and during cuddles in winter he wraps himself around you tenfold with a dorky smile on his face at your natural body heat.
in conclusion: luffy thinks you’re an absolute BADASS
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Roronoa Zoro
zoro definitely plays with your wings/horns/tail just to mess with you, (if you have any ofc) he smirks and mentally takes a picture of your reaction when he sees your expressions.
whenever it’s winter, and he’s taking a nap on the sunny, he may just wake up for a few minutes, go and get you from whatever you’re doing and plop you right down beside him! he might have the physique of a god but he still gets cold sometimes…
since he has a horrible sense of directions at times, yes, you will have to wrap your tail (if you have you yk the drill) around him in order to keep him on the actual path and not off wandering. (totally not requested by the whole crew….)
whenever he sees you in battle, he most definitely looks like he is in the gif. (bonus points if you’re using a sword!) he quite literally goes over to you, and says, "when did you learn that total badassery babe?!” (he may be a little bit sour if you stole his spotlight)
he’d most definitely call himself your devil king though
in conclusion: zoro loves every bit of this
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Vinsmoke Sanji
oh boy, i’m sure you know how sanji is with nami and robin? yeah, he’s like that with you, but tenfold. each time you fight he’d most definitely be like, "Y/NNNNNNN! MY LOVEE~ YOUR FIGHTING STYLE IS ABSOLUTELY DEVIL-ISH!~" and he would be proud of his little pun. (don’t ruin it for him please</3)
he would help you with trimming up some of the spikes on your wings if they got outrageous or uncomfortable, same with your horns! yet ofc while praising you, saying how beautiful you are either way
if you ever believed that he should get with somebody else because of your powers, or how dangerous you are, or any other reason, he might just get on his knees and start saying how you’re a goddess besides how you’re a devil queen, saying how he wouldn’t want anybody else
in conclusion: sanji is madly inlove as always
none of these characters are mine! they all belong to Eiichiro Oda!
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roomofshroom · 1 year
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kyman headcanons part 2 !!!! SFW (cartman oriented!!!)
since yall liked my kyman headcanons so much i thought id give it another try and write down sum more ! :D
part 1: here
cartman would plan little fucking schemes to see if kyle really loves him (text him from a fake instagram profile, pay a girl to make a move on him, shit like that)
motherfucker craves attention so much, so he like pretends he's sick or dying or that something really serious happened to see if kyle comes running to him
kyle quickly realizes this is not a one time thing and is really annoyed w him but manages to come running everytime cartman pulls something like this, eric always treats him with a big smile when hes at the doorstep ("you came! :D " "ofc i came you said ur fucking mom was dying?! where is she?" "oh she just went shopping" "so you made it up?! you know how fucked up that is?!" "technically, my mom IS dying, we are ALL dying every second of every day ever since we were born, kHAL...")
cartman uses like an unhealthy ammount of emojis in every message, sends shit ton of tiktoks, reels, youtube shorts and has a completely different types of conversations w kyle on every social media platform all at once (like on instagram he's venting to him about how he doesnt feel appreciated enough by the world while hes sending him memes on discord and streaming himself playing fall guys or smth i dont fucking know)
kyle's style of texting is very simple, he doesnt like long messages, he doesnt really send memes or tiktoks or anything but he religiously watches everything eric sends him, responds to him asap and writes medium sized messages with emojis because cartman is super fucking clingy and goes on a rampage if kyle doesnt respond for more than 3 hours or if his response isn't "enthusiastic" enough (*eric sends a meme of cats with a "this is so us" comment* kyle: <3 eric: do you hate me? kyle: no wtf i dont??? why? eric: idk just seems like you hate me)
cartman hangs out w kyle's mom and makes kyle's mom unknowingly share embarrassing details of kyle's life just to tease him w the information later, they also look through baby pictures together
eric and kyle's mom love gossiping together and they watch say yes to dress together and critique the dresses ("the mermaid style dress with HER LEGS!? i thought she'd wanna show them off!" "yes, such a shame, wasted potential")
sometimes cartman just goes to kyle's house solely to hang out with his mom ("oh hey cartman, i wont be able to hang out today, i need to-" "no worries, I'm here to watch tlc w your mom")
cartman's love language is words of affirmation, obviously, and he makes kyle say everything he loves about him at least twice a week as a "communication exercise, so that their relationship stays good and they both feel appreciated" (its honestly just a way for eric to get praised, he loveeees that shit)
he knows kyle's love lang is acts of service (hes known him for years, kyle didnt even need to tell him) so while he's at his house he'll wash the dishes and fold his clothes but he won't admit to it, he actually hides it and feels embarrassed, kyle just knows ("hey, did you clean my room while i was downstairs?" "no?" "look, its clear you did, just say so" "i don't fucking know what you're talking about, khal" "...thank you, eric" "...shut the fuck up, jew, as if I'd touch your dirty ass room")
cartman's actually very shy with showing affection when its just two of them and when kyle says something sweet unprovoked, cartman usually blushes and shuts him down, turns it into a joke or straight up ridicules kyle ("you're actually very pretty, cartman" "yeah, you're pretty too... pretty gay, HAHA")
kyle's shy with showing affection in front of others and cartman fucking takes that and runs with it sometimes, doing everything to make kyle uncomfortable, he's being all lovey dovey infront of kenny and stan to see kyle cringe internally and awkwardly smiling on the outside to 'not seem like a bad boyfriend' (cuz when he once couldn't take it and told cartman to shut the fuck up, cartman got fake sad and stan came to kyle afterwards and gave a speech about "sometimes having to put up with stuff you don't like to make your girl, uhm sorry, to make your... significant other happy")
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daphnedauphinoise · 8 months
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Dear Daphne,
I was wondering if you could advice me on topics or skills I must study before I head to university next year? Apart from the obvious skills required to live by myself. Interpret this and give advice however you so wish, and hope you have a lovely day x
Hello!!
First of all congratulations! I have done quite a few of these kind of posts so I am going to keep things brief...
Your first year is for you to enjoy BUT remember all years count. Your grades in first year aren't terribly important but important nontheless. Make sure you are doing well enough and by that I don't mean barely passing.
Join societies and find one or two that you can see yourself sticking to and stick to them. Building good rapport with that society and its memembers will make it easier for you to get onto the committee later on. I think if you really want to stand out, aim to be the president of your subject society later on.
In taht note, being a student rep for your year is a great way to get to know faculty and know people in your year. I don't really think you can ever know too many people and everything has it's own benefits.
You are going to have and should have stand in friends. 'Stand in friends' are people you are friends for the sake of being friends with, and despite what everyone says they are good to have. During your three-four years you are going to be fast friends with so many people and 90% of them aren' going to stay ( you will also be this for so many people too). One key skill you will need to learn is to differentiate who are your solid friends and who you just want to sit next to in the lecture hall so you are not alone. I am all for deep meaningful friendhsips but you also need people who you are just having a good time with and there is nothing more. Don't underestimate the power of going into a hall of 200 people and having at least 5 different people you can talk to.
There is no universal way of taking notes and you need to find a method that works a) for you b) for your subjuect area c) the teaching style of your professor. This is especially for those doing double degrees in polar subjects (eg. philosophy and maths ). I feel like there is only one note taking style you should use universally and its such a big fat lie. I will probably write another post on this but in short, use the first couple weeks to figure out what style of note taking works for that specific class.
Going back to making friends, stop wasting your time and money at clubs. Going out once a while is great for you and your mental health but if your bank is dry, you are catching something every week and you are barely awake for classes... get a grip. Maybe this is my own prudeness coming in but you are wanting to make the most of your time at uni and being a student you need to be better at striking work/play balance.
Just turn up to classes. There is a galaxy of difference in your understanding between when you were there to listen and process and watching the recordings. I skive lectures sometimes and that sometimes is fine but attendance for tutorials should be a must (again i have first hand experience of not turning up and then it impacting my grade) Far too many people skive and trust me teachers do notice because in our last lec of the year last semetser, a girl got the worst attendance prize... that she wasnt there to get
find an exercise you like and stick with it. This is mainly for your mental health. I used to make myself run outside in winter because I knew it would be good for me. Yeah, its cold and a little tiring but that is a measly exchange for the endorphines you need during exam season.
Other things I feel like you already know. But I will say, do the things you know you should. Keep on top of your notes, have weekly phone calls with your high school friends, eat well, sleep well. Wishing you all the best
D x
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annawayne · 10 days
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💕if you get this, answer w/ three random facts about yourself and send it to the last seven blogs in your notifs. anon or not, doesn’t matter, let’s get to know the person behind the blog!
Hi Moon!
Thank you so much for asking (even tho you already know a lot about me, what else I can tell you...) (⁠〃゚⁠3゚⁠〃⁠)
But let's try!
1. My biggest inspiration for my art style is Preraphaelites and some details from Impressionism artists.
I don't know if I should have aimed for something different and sometimes I ask myself - if I would choose another style, would it be better and would people like it more? - but I guess, you don't choose the style, but the style chooses you, both in writing and art. It's always a reflection of the creator themselves, so I guess, it's not something that can be changed. So yeah :D
2. My knees are weak in art galleries, art exhibitions and art museums. I just adore spending hours and hours there. Unfortunately, I didn't attend any for stone time for different reasons, but I REALLY like it.
3. I'm so used to my writing routine on my laptop, that it's really difficult for me to write, for example, from my phone. I'm used to how my screen is divided in half and I have in one window the document I'm working on opened, and in the second half - all the resources to check/explore etc
Thank you so much for asking Moon, I really appreciate it and love you (⁠。⁠・⁠ω⁠・⁠。⁠)⁠ノ⁠♡
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k4katsujin · 10 months
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"yeah my boyfriend's in a band"
aftershow hobie x reader where he shows his lover <33
note: im already in love with this man (/srs), so :3
uhhh lil context? hobie is facing some batshit fan at a concert, but he only has eyes for you and he wants it to show
content: hobie is reader's boyfriend, slight smut, not proofread, reader is gender neutral !
enjoy the brainrot ;D
song: brooklyn baby - lana del rey
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as usual when your boyfriend was performing, you looked for him in the first row of the scene. he was pretty famous in town, so he made sure he always took you with him on tours.
even though you were insecure about him cheating on you when you could not attend his concert, you trusted him enough to not to.
sure he had a flirty personality with everyone, but you never spoke your mind about this to home so he didn't bother changing (but sure he would if you did tell him)
"doll? d'ya want to come tonight? it's a huge performance, and ima need you with me, " he said with a begging pout.
you simply couldn't resist when he did this to you, so you obviously accepted.
the show went all smoothly, it was amazing as usual, you took a lot of and videos of your boyfriend to later on show them to him and cover him in compliments during your aftershow seances - in which you gave him a honest feedback of your boyfriend's concert, and sometimes a bit more...
starting to get overstimulated, you headed to hobies room.
"can i help you?" you say, disturbed at you noticed a girl was waiting there.
she was wearing a very short skirt with a very tight crop top and was rearranging her red lipstick in a very provocative way.
"i'm waiting for hobie." the girl said. "and what are you? another fan ?" she asked condescendingly.
"i'm hum.. his manager." you lie. "im here to review stuff for the next concert." you reply dryly, starting to get a bit pissed off.
she was still putting on her makeup, probably waiting for your boyfriend.
speaking of the devil, hobie made his entrance.
"how d'ya liked the show, doll?" he asked holding your waist and kissing you from behind.
"someone is waiting for you." you say dryly after kissing your boyfriend.
he stiffened at the sight of the girl sitting on the counter.
she waved at him, slut style, pouting.
"hobieeee" she says, standing to hug him. "the concert was amazing as always."
"back off sarah" hobie said, avoiding the girl. "i already told you a thousand times i don't want to see you around anymore. i called your best friend, she's outside waiting to take you back home."
"you're no fuun, hobiee" pouted the girl. "bet i could treat you way better than your (she paused, looking down and up at you) that.
she headed outside before giving hobie a last slutty look.
hobie locked the door behind her, and took you up to the counter where she was sitting earlier.
he puts his hands on your waist, starting to kiss you, before asking:
"how'd ya like the show,doll? hope you're gonna like the surprise i have for you next."
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i had sm fun writing this aaaaa
PLEASE REBLOG ☹️☹️
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nerdysleepybunny · 10 months
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Hey, lovely! I need some Riz fluff! I'm in major writers block at the moment and can't write at all. I've had to respond to all my asks in my inbox and tell them I can't write their request. They were all super nice about, thankfully.
Anyway, I just started my garden, and I thought it would be a cute idea to have Riz and reader work on the garden together! Planting stuff, just doing the daily water, even just going and looking at the progrss they've done, and be super proud of it! (I sometimes just go outside and stare at it bc I'm so proud of it, lmao)
It's also not May 15th yet, so it can still frost, which means the garden as a chance of freezing and dying. And Riz comforting reader after their garden died would be very sad but also very good. My garden died last year because of the frost, and I was so sad. And Riz is wonderful at comforting people, so this is just perfect!
(Also, I saw your post about specifying pronouns, I would like he/they/it pronouns! And 3rd or 2nd person works as well! And if you need to know gender, trans!male! Would be appreciated!)
You pick either one, dear! Love you sweetie/p
THIS IS SO OLD JUST LIKE ALL MY OTHER ASKS SKDHAKDJHAD but I’m trying to get back to the fanfic grind. 🥲 Time for some Riz comfort! Thanks for the pronouns hun. <3
🩷☁️N E R D Y S L E E P Y B U N N Y☁️🩷
Fandom(s): Beastars
Character(s): Riz
Reader: He/They (male, 2nd person)
TW: N/A
Style: Short hcs
Summary: Riz comforts you after your garden freezes over!
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You had went outside to your garden to water your plants, but dropped your watering can when you saw the condition your plants were in.
You rushed over and crouched down onto the soil, taking a closer look. They were covered in ice. You touched one of the petals/leaves with your finger, and it broke right off the stem. You felt tears fill your eyes from the sight.
You did your best to care for these plants, but sadly, the winter had taken them. You got up and rushed inside where you knew your boyfriend Riz was.
“Riz!” You called out for him, your voice a bit shaky as tears flowed down your cheeks. The bear heard your cries and quickly came running for you.
His face became one of concern when he saw you crying, and he slowly walked closer as to not startle you. “What happened, Y/N?” He asked gently, softly pulling you into a hug when he finally reached you. He allowed you to cry in his shirt, not minding that it took you a bit to respond.
“My plants died…” You finally sniffled out after a while, and Riz gave you a sympathetic look. He knew how much you cared about those plants, so he tried to think of a way to comfort you.
Riz crouched down to your level and took your face in his hands, wiping your tears with his thumbs. “Don’t cry, handsome… How about we cuddle for a bit?” He suggested softly, with that adorable smile on his face. You couldn’t help but smile back, and gave a nod of agreement. Riz nodded back and grabbed your hand, leading you to the bedroom you shared with him.
Riz moved the blankets out of the way before climbing into bed, opening his arms for you. You climbed right in, wrapping your arms around his fuzzy figure. He was warm, so you didn’t exactly need a blanket. It was winter though, so maybe a thin one would work.
Once you were both comfy, he held you close and ran his hand up and down your back. There was a comfortable silence for a while, until Riz spoke. “I’m sorry about your plants. We can get new ones when it’s warmer, yeah? We’ll even buy some protection for when winter rolls by again.”
His words caught your attention, and you looked up at him with a smile. “Really?”
“Of course, wouldn’t want them dying again.” You laughed at his kindness and cuddled further into him, stealing his warmth. You didn’t know where you’d be without Riz.
🩷☁️N E R D Y S L E E P Y B U N N Y☁️🩷
SORRY I TRIED SO HARD TO ADD MALE PRONOUNS BUT IT’S SO DIFFICULT FOR ME. 😭I hope you like it though! Love ya! <3
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smallestapplin · 2 years
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I'm gonna have to go find the Adaman x nonbinary masc reader x Volo one damn lol. I'm really happy to see that you do write any gender reader =D Ok though, my actual request lol. So preferably Guzma and/or Piers finding out that the cute, polite and quiet masc librarian moonlights as a loud and lewd (and clearly out of the closet) rock star. If there are any other characters you wanna write for with this prompt I thoroughly encourage! -FTM Anon
Finally, I get to be gay and do crime.
Reader is male!
🔞18+🔞 for lewd language!
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💀Guzma💀
- probably has never bothered you aside from one time.
- He thought, from what he assumed, the shy polite librarian would be an easy target to bully.
- But he was wrong, your Pokémon are stronger than he thought.
- But it made him respect you, especially with how you didn’t insult him, just thanked him for the battle and went right back to work.
- He found you adorable anyways, he kinda pictures protecting you with how cute you look.
- Never thought he had a chance though, sure you’re a book nerd but that doesn’t mean you’d go for a guy like Guzma, or another guy in general.
- So imagine his surprise when he sees you in such a setting. He almost didn’t recognize you.
- The sweet cute librarian, who speaks in such a mellow and calm voice. Screaming at the top of his lungs about some of the raunchiest things he’s ever heard.
- You were singing your heart out on that stage about getting railed by another man and the crowd is thriving off it.
- Guzma takes it all in, from the outfit, your words, and your act, it makes it clear to him he does have a shot.
- So the next time he is by your library he lays it down thick.
- It was a slow down and you were just happily putting books away when he suddenly appeared pinning you against the book shelf.
- “And to think I thought you were shy and cute!”
- “I-I’m sorry?”
- “That little rockstar ‘sona of yours was a delight to see.” Guzma laughs at your flushed face.
- “Now tell me, I gotta shot at givin you a wild ride?”
- You stammer and stutter over words, not at all expecting this, a full minute of this before you can get out a squeaky “yeah sure.”
- “It’s a date then! Pick ya up after your shift.”
- You can only sink to the ground after he leaves.
- this is it, this is how you go.
🎸Piers🎸
- Piers has met you a few times at the library you work at. He use to go there all the time for books for Marine.
- And while he shows up less he also kinda had a crush on you.
- You run that library. And you dress in such a cute way fitting for a librarian. If you wear reading glasses and look up at him over them he melts.
- You’re such a soothing person to just exist around, and it’s nice. It’s different from his usual life style on stage.
- Your voice is even and you’re so kind to him when he walks in.
- He is stunned at the turn of events.
- The usual sweet, mellow toned librarian, who seems like he’d never yell a day in his life or flush at such lewd topics.
- Belting out possibly the lewdest and rock song about riding a man.
- Piers can’t take it, his brain is melting and face burning bright red the more you sing.
- It doesn’t help he loves your voice is perfect to him.
- The rockstar wanted to stay and watch but he was getting hot under the collar and had to leave to cool down.
- And when he saw you again, in your sweet librarian outfit and calm voice, welcoming him in.
- But he is acting so off.
- “I apologize if I overstep, but are you alright sir?”
- Oh he could hardly look at you without blushing. But he knew a bit more about you now! Maybe he can take Marnie’s advice now.
- “Sorry I just…uh…”
- “Piers, sir? Are you feeling okay?”
- “Yeah, yeah, I just…do you want to go out for a coffee sometime?” Piers spoke quickly, eyes locked onto the wall behind you.
- He feels himself melt and his heart break at your cute laugh.
- “I’d love to, my shift ends at six if that works.”
- He haphazardly writes down his phone number and gives it to you.
- “Great! See ya then.”
- He goes home and screams in his at home studio.
- TWO ROCKSTARS GET TOGETHER-
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Dating Eddie Munson Headcanons
@nate-the-writing-whore
I'm helping you (but I don't really do hc's so... I tried :)
Eddie Munson being your boyfriend would include but is not limited to
Okay, so.
He's fluffy as hell
He'll bring you flowers and shit regularly
Picking you up for a date?
Flowers
Randomly showing up?
Flowers
Your locker smells like flowers because he'll randomly bring you flowers at school
"Eddie."
"Yeah?"
"Stop bringing me flowers, asshole!"
He doesn't stop because he knows you love it
So you constantly are carrying flowers or smell like them
Your room is practically a flower graveyard (among other things, be honest)
Moving on
He's a druggie, you know this
He lets you smoke with him sometimes, when you beg him (he's a sucker for begging, for future reference--)
But he doesn't let you leave after that
"You smoked."
"So? I have to go home, Eddie."
"You're not leaving. Your parents will smell the... whatever the hell you got out of my box and kill you. Or just never let you see me again."
"Fine."
LOTS of cuddles, because I said so
Wearing his Hellfire shirt after fucking--
Fucking anywhere and everywhere
Quckies in the school bathroom, your house, his house, even the Wheeler's basement on one occasion, his van
The possibilities are endless because you're both constantly horny don't even tell me I'm wrong
You borrowing his rings, his clothes, his last name--
Playing DnD but not knowing what you're doing so you're the loud, dramatic, assistant Dungeon Master
P D A
All the time
Holding hands, kissing, playing with his hair
Alright, you love his hair
Trying different styles on it
Straightening it, on one occasion but you both hated it so you vowed to never do it again except you got french braids out of it, so...
Boyfriends DO lie. You've experienced this firsthand
The night that Chrissy died, he told you that you couldn't come over because his uncle would be home
You went anyway and ended up a pariah because you'd been accused of murder #couple goals
Having what feels like a huge-ass wedding but there's like 10 people there
But let's back up
He asked you out with a DnD pick up line that he probably stole from Dustin
"Are you a Beholder? Because I'd like to be holding you around my arm."
"No."
Your first date went a little like
"You're an idiot."
"Yeah, and?"
"You're my idiot... right?"
"Yeah. I'm your idiot."
He never wants to push you further than you're willing to go
Cause consent is consexy
H I S R I N G S
Anyways ✨WEDDING✨
Steve, Robin, Nancy, Jonathan, Argyle, Edith, Suzie, the party (that's six more, so total... thirteen.)
SUPER informal
Like... he wore jeans and a suit shirt. Like the fake ones that are printed on the shirt. Yeah.
He actually pulled his hair back into a man bun
Dustin officiated because Eddie loves his son little friend
Y'all drove three blocks down the road just out of sight of everyone else before you had your first married life sex
It wasn't mind blowing, but it was pretty great
Eddie's always terrified you'll just up and leave, or realize you're way out of his league
You know, it's whatever
He'll have panic attacks about it and you get to rock him and hold him and he's basically just a soft baby who needs love all the time
NO KIDS
thank you for coming to my TedTalk
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columbiastapshoes · 5 months
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so if a modern version of frank-n-furter, janet, columbia, and magenta from the rocky horror picture show formed a riot grrrl/rock/sometimes other genres girl(ish) band would that be crazy or what?
AU TIME YIPPEEEEE!! made this one with irl friend @hatsunerandal a while back and i’ve been meaning to post about it i just keep forgetting LMAO so yeah!! band au!!
this band is called the transsexual pussycats because. yeah.
we have everyone on vocals, janet on drums and guitar, frank also on drums and guitar (they switch which one does which (that was a lot of rhyming)), columbia on bass, and magenta also on guitar and keyboards :D
“don’t be cringe about it” NEVER. COLUMBIA IS SCENE NOW RAAAAHH 🦅🦅🦅🦅
janet’s style is just. lana del ray vinyl. and magentas goth and franks punk yaaay!!!
irl friend and i have put together a total of. 4 albums i think? and i am almost done with the fifth one! our process is just. find already existing songs, plop them in a playlist, and then write paragraphs about who sings what and who wrote what and what they wrote the songs about etc etc! quite a fun process if i do say so myself :3
albums 1, 3, and 4 were done by me, album 2 was done by irl friend!! their names are “mcpussy meal” (we almost named the band mcpussy but after i said “old mcpussy had a farm eieio” we changed our minds), “lord of the lesbian jellyfish”, “one girl, 69420 women”, “honestly,” and the fifth one which im not quite done with is “rose blood”!! we’re slaying with the names as u can see! the songs mostly stick to a rock/riot grrrl sound, but they can also do some more pop/hyperpop or electronic songs, and i felt REALLY silly and added a folk song to rose blood :3
now. u might be asking. where is the rest of the cast? what part do they play in this au? well!! for one thing columbia and eddie broke up (she’s with magenta now i love lesbians) and she has written at least one song about him per album 🫶 but other than that he’s out of the picture, along with pretty much everyone else…
EXCEPT FOR BRADLEY MAJORS.
i told my friend about brad in this au and they just said “brad def has groupie energy that 1000% works” and i think about that a lot LMAO he’s not actually a groupie he’s just their biggest fan ever even though he doesn’t even listen to their style of music. he attends every concert, has all the merch, is basically just so embarrassing about it i love him dearly. he’s also in a qpr with janet and dating frank yahoo!! i fucking LOVE the brad/janet dynamic in this au because all of her concert outfits are so slutty and so pink and after the shows and after hugging her aggressively he’s like “you’re wearing so little are you cold :( wear my jacket i don’t want you getting sick” and in one of the songs she is quite literally screaming her lungs out and im just imagining him watching that at a rehearsal and being like “Yay!! :-D” he’s the silliest ever actually
it’s also a canon event that the band got interviewed by that one guy with the hat who goes WHO ARE YOU i hope u know who im talking about if u don’t im so sorry that was so vague
ok those are the basics!! if ppl see this and enjoy it feel free to ask me questions about it i love talking about my silly guys so very much and thank u so much for reading this far 😭😭
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lloydfrontera · 5 months
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Hihi Nali eonnie :D ((hope you don’t mind being called that
Is the English TL up on Yonder is the furthest/most updated TL available? Coz I’m all caught up over there and just got pass the solution by the Jewel of Truth TT and after reading your (very deliciously written) spoilers on all that yummy angst that comes afterwards, I really can’t wait to read it all ahhhhh
btw would you say the Korean novel has easy to read language? Like really flowery vocab or complex sentence structure vs more common words & straightforward phrasing, bc I just started learning Korean lately and I’d love to read the OG novel some day but I also don’t think one introductory course is gonna be able to tide me through like 400+ chapters of novel? 😭 yeah I just wanted to get a general idea of how challenging it’d be
oh hihihihi nonnie you just became my favorite person online today i love that <33!!
and as far as i know, yes yonder is the furthest along translation available as of right now! sorry! and i know exactly how you feel, personally i simply couldn't stand it and just,,, brute forced my way through the mtl akjsdhks
and yeah! i do think tged has a pretty simple style! sometimes the technicalities get a little too complex, tbh i did not get most of what lloyd was thinking about when he started to get into the details of his projects, but other than that i would say it's not overly complicated or flowery! even in english i think the writing style is very straightforward and easy to follow along. i think if you're thinking of reading a novel in korean without being fluent on the language this is a pretty good one to do it with!
also. the mtl is also pretty easy to parse through. i lost a couple braincells here and there but it's really not that bad. so if you have trouble reading it in korean a peak here and there to the mtl will probably help too sjkdhdskfjs
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penguin--person · 6 months
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Um um. I don’t know what to say but. Yeah, alík facts and song stuff! I don’t really know what the words I am saying even are anymore. I’d say an invitation to ramble, but you can always do that! I guess it’s like “I’d love to listen to you ramble” which is true. So. Eehehhheh. I’m not actually doing it but I feel like I’m like, twiddling my fingers and kicking my legs up and down in excitement lmao
also, the ask you are talking about on penguin—rat may or may not be mine. Hehe. No but literally I don’t know. If it’s the one talking abt your art style, then yeah, that was me! I never really know how to end these. I’m guessing it’ll be morning when you read this, so good morning! Yeah okay that should be all goodbye
-Nonymous
heheee!! thank youuuu!!! i dont get as many asks as you think, i reckon hehe.. alík stuff under cut
so!! some songs that i think she'd sing, or at least the vibes
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she's def marie ork, not kasane teto hehe.. but she'd d growls like this!!! growls sooo much... if you gave her simple enough lyrics, smth like this, she'd bang out!!! if they were too much she'd go "pfft no im gonna sing my own stuff" .. i actually once wrote some lyrics alík would sing.. make on her own.. but.. uh.. not sharing those..
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sped up version go brrrr !!! she'd more like this song than sing it.. she'd like doing the backing vocals for this. tsar sings while she goes bark bark bark
then, basically any will wood song where he screams hehe.. i think chemical overreaction
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i think there'd be times where she'd just scream and howl at the people listening.. i think, sometimes the gang arent big fans of her.. but, hey! she takes care of the gang, shows up on time, is true to her word (most of the time), loyal, and like, they could tell her to go run around in traffic and she'd listen to them . they all of all people know how not-dangerous she is (out of her wolf form)
here's alík voiceclaim
and some more songs she'd like (or try to at least) to sing
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(^^^ this song is also very tgirl yura to me)
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(^^^ she would need help to write the lyrics for this one but she could i think.. something something the facility is a sort of god to my loser lads, but a diferent one to everyone.. to artyom it is heaven, to nastya its salvation, to alík its hell/purgatory.. etc etc.. this song vibes with all my loser lads, not only the mutants)
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devilbeez · 4 months
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Let me take you through the journey of me speed running my portfolio, smile
Mostly because I need somewhere to write this and word doc wouldn’t give me feed backs
Note that this will be very wonky because I have not thought of anything but the concept— I have 1 out of 6 characters figured out so imma color code them and call them by alphabet
Concept and inspiration:
What I wrote for my portfolio: Artist’s emotion and upbringing always had been reflected in their art. So what would happen if in a world where that part is intensified for the viewer to see
What actually started this: I want sport anime type of story but with Artists. Also this scene from Ouran host club that inspired Aster don’t question why just take it.
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Story:
I’m still debating on what I want to use as the final story, they both are essentially revolve around the relationship of college kids’ relationships from friends to lovers to found family and they’re all in an art club and have specialized methods and styles; graphite portraits/landscape, Abstract expressionism, animation, graphic design, Dada-esque sculpture and then there’s the one guy that can’t draw cause every art clubs always have that one member that only join to not do anything.
Plot option 1: Anne Certayn is a college kid who doesn’t know themself. They know what they’re good at— well good enough to graduate and make money, but there’s no passion in it. Anne were hoping to float through the rest of their school year so to avoid all invitations to join a club they join an art club, what they assumed to be a club they can just sleep though. Sadly, Anne new clubmates’s energy are too much for them.
Note about this plot:
Each character’s relationship with their art, e.g. Aster’s desire to be perfect and uphold his family’s legacy and all of it being reflect in his art. His art had always be something that lean heavily toward realistic in every way, dull color, proportion, reflecting how his passion and desire are tugged away for something more refined. Meanwhile his boyfriend, Carter is someone who contempt with his life and where he is, he have more abstract and colorful art reflecting how he’s putting his true self out for everyone to see, both perfect and imperfect.
Anne’s journey to find their passion for art again after a lifetime of being discouraged from being interested in art by people who told Anne to dial down any of their passion for things they don’t care for.
This is honestly a very slice of life, fluff, maybe comedy story that doesn’t have heavy lore. It just friends being pals
Plot option 2: A love story between members of a college art club.
The couples:
One of the leader (Carter) x his friend (Aster) since high school. They had been dating since first year of college but Aster had always held himself back because his family’s legacy. Their story is going to be revolving around Aster’s struggling to choose between Carter and his family because Carter’s family is not exactly on the same level as Aster’s family
Shezaraya x D no idea what will be their plot yet but D is an animator and concept art who occasionally fight with Anne because she doesn’t like how they joined without any sort of passion for art. She also sometimes fight with E who keeps riling her up by saying “digital art is not real art” without meaning it. Shezaraya is an graphic designer She’s more chill than D but she will still shit talk with her
Debating on giving E a lover(s) or not because she’s very much the agent of chaos. You ask about her love life and it would be like “oh yeah my ex almost framed me for fraud so I ended it” and if you ask her “isn’t your ex the barista down the street?” She’d go “oh not her, the other one— not the one that crashed my car because I broke up with him, the other other one”
Characters:
I have one character designed but I’m write as much as I have. Note that these are like— barely coherent concepts of the characters
Carter Wassily
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- He’s the leader of the art club.
- His specialty is abstract art, specifically abstract expressionism.
- He major in marketing, minor in communications in his 3rd year.
- His design is inspired by abstract art in history; Constructivism and De Stijl
- He’s fun loving, enthusiastic about anything and everything he love. He does not afraid to put himself out there and be his truest self. He do have tendencies to get too invested in his art to the point he forgets all time and necessity he need.
- He’s dating Aster since first year of college but they know each other since high school
- He somehow didn’t know Aster is rich until last year of high school
Aster Richman (edited)
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- He’s the vice president of the art club
- He’s majoring in law in his 3rd year.
- He specialized in Realism painting
- His name will be revolved around stars because I want it to come back to Carter’s tattoo
- He also have a red ring, matching Carter’s other tattoo since his family frown on tattoos
- He’s more serious than Carter. He try to be more stoic and calm though he do have his moments where Carter make him flustered or someone make him irritated. He pride himself on being good academically.
- His family is rich. Yes his name is a pun, I’m trying make all of their name a pun
- His designed was inspired by Victorian aesthetic but the palette came from realism period of art where the color is more dull then later he have an Isabella moment where his palette become lighter and less monochrome.
- He also wear glasses after his development because we really need the reverse “took off glasses and become beautiful” trope cause we had that in Cloudy with a chance of meatball and we need more of that
Shezaraya Sunshine
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- She major in Music in second year.
- She specializes in Graphic Design with the style similar to Art Nouveau
- She’s dating/going to date D
- She’s the most passionate in her work after Carter
- She dream to make music and create her own album covers
- She’s similar to Carter but she’s a bit of a perfectionist when it come to her work. Other than that she’s one of the most chaotic person in the club
- She’s also very kind and optimistic
Anne Certayn
- They major in Engineer in first year.
- They have 0 artistic skill
- They lost their passion for things they like because when they was younger people tend to dismiss them or make them feel bad for being excited about things they enjoyed
- Weirdly they’re close with E the most
D
- She major in Communication in second year,
- She also have a few Communication classes with Carter
- She specializes in Animation with soft color and visual, reminiscing of Impressionism movement
- She’s passionate, a bit snarky, very spiteful to the people who deserve it
- She was raised to be more like Aster but she rejected that lifestyle
- Funny enough despite having the same world view of “anything can be art” as E they butt head a lot, mostly because E just like messing with her
- She absolutely hate Anne at first because how they joined the club but they bond after a while and she learn to tolerate them
E
- She major in Literature in third year
- She specializes in unconventional take on art, aka Dada. She mostly do mixed media and collage
- She is an agent of chaos. Little gremlin that just here to stir the plot and yet somehow she’s one of the chillest people in this club.
- She believes that anything can be art and that art have no rule but will absolutely throw that away for the sake of chaotic debate with D
- She have ex lovers….no one know how many but she have exes
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