*crackles knuckles* if anyone if this is incomprehensive it's because I'm about to pass out BUT. holy hell from what I've seen on dash and read of your threads with Broly it is SO GOOD. the feralness while also still holding that brevity of exhaustion or tiredness is perfect. Your descriptors and dialogue are always so on point and reflect a good balance of thoughts and actions. If there's something to critique on or just in general want to see more of; I think Broly's thoughts on the rest of the Saiyan's, more dad:tm: content, and other similar stuff to that length :> In the end I love seeing how you've really made Broly you're character while also holding the original canon really close to heart. I also love all the relationships he has, also the drama of goats makes me laugh.
Also I'm not gonna just leave without mentioning your N'doul. If I haven't praised you enough on him already, you already know I will now and many times after. His balance of moral and relations with others. I love what you and boba have done with his son, also just any kids he manages to pick up along the way--julya included. You are araki istg when you write N'doul because every word and action he does I could see him doing in the manga. Excellent work. love you Kuro, you're spectacular!
beep beep how’s my portrayal ?
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actually I lied...I do in fact have many thoughts about a trans zuko mulan au now. only problem is..would it be in the ATLA universe? I feel like it'd be fun to have it be a historical fic set in China just because I love researching history BUT...how could I make all the ATLA characters meet? will some of them just not be in the fic and I'll just live w that? would it just be zuko and a bunch of OCs because fuck it I love OCs??
I don't think I'll follow through w writing a fic for this, but IF I did and I had it placed in China I would probably need/want a Chinese sensitivity reader. but again I am not writing this fic rn so I am not looking for one rn but if I do end up writing it- but idk I probably won't I'm too busy- I will need to look for one.
also! just the plot of mulan but then apply it differently so that it's abt being transmasc instead...like especially that song about the reflection or whatever damn that song HITS SO HARD. it always makes me so emotional aaaaaaa 😭
I do in fact have thoughts about this though and I could post a synopsis or what not...or like headcanons idk...hm
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she is just barely an adult
when she develops a habit.
again and again the result
she soon becomes an addict.
alone everyday by choice
with only her drug.
nobody heard her voice
as if her grave was already dug.
so much time she had wasted
and things she had missed.
her mind nearly fully sedated
suicide seems like pure bliss.￼
looked in the mirror & began to cry￼
her reflection she truly hated￼￼.
it was the last time she got high
before her whole life faded.
she fought a battle against the ice
as she let it fill her head.
a hollowtip must have been the price
because now she is dead.
twenty one years she lived,
before taking her own life.
but anytime someone asked, the answer she’d give
was “no, nothings wrong”... she said she was alright.