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Review Response, Nov 18-24 2018

The new system will now cover the other reviews from the week that were not covered by the first 10 reviews for the newest chapter.

Destiny #001:

1) Awesome chapter! Things are really hating up!

Not sure if this was supposed to be for the newest chapter, but… thanks!

Destiny #041:

1) shit … my faves … u killed johtrio? the whole squad? my god damn heart lmao … orz

I believe the saying goes as… TRIPLE KILL! … Though not really, since Silver died like… years ago. Damn loner. Can’t even die with his friends and just has to go alone. Heh. … Too soon?

2) Awesome chapter

Thank you!

3) So this is A pretty cool story rip johtrio tho

Thanks. And yeah, yeah, the Johto trio is gone. Oh, boohoo. … Poor Crystal though. Heh.

4) Well… now we’re down a whole generation of dexholders. Crys deserved better and Gold’s stupid ass spared emerald the same fate. And not only that Ruby and Sapphire are probably gonna be offed because of they did to their home. Emerald’s probably gonna need threopy after this all ends

Indeed Crystal deserved a better death. … But “better”… er… Which is better? A painless death, or a more painful, but more focused and quite possibly a glorious death? Hmm… Well, at the very least, Crystal did not deserve having her neck broken and 3 of her 4 limbs hanging by a thread.

Will Ruby and Sapphire die because of what they did to Hoenn? … You will have to see in two chapters. I say that because Destiny will end in two chapters.

Let’s just say that… Crystal is dead. And Emerald got along pretty well with Gold, who is now also dead. All that remains for the 10th Dex Holder are his two don’t-want-to-admit friends, Ruby and Sapphire. If something happened to those two as well… Kind of like what Platinum was supposed to go through back in SA. Interesting…

5) Well, I have never reviewed before, so I guess it’s time to start now.

For the first section: I’d say it’s a good way to start things. Sure, I prefer the later sections, but with a battle, you always have to start somewhere.

For the second section: Their decision was sensible at first, but… That was probably one of the riskiest and stupidest outcomes that these three decided to make. Sure, it’s wartime, I should not be surprised that not everything is always the smartest decision, but everyone else… Well, it’s kinda their fault (It’s ENTIRELY their fault.)

For the third section: Well, it’s not over yet. Sure, they think so, but they shouldn’t be off their guards so soon.

For the fourth section: … Yeah… They. Are. Going. To. Die. (Obviously. Unless you have something else in mind, of course, for I already know you have this planned out.)

For the fifth section: Well, they’re dead. Certainly violent, I’ll give you that.

For the sixth section: That last line creeps me out to no end, and I am absolutely excited and terrified at the same time for what’s next…

(That’s all for now. May review the other chapters in-depth later.)

I kind of wish I knew what sections you are referring to.

The first one, I assume you mean the little scene with Gold saving Blue? Sure. Start off slow while the falling-apart 50% Zygarde forme slowly crumbles.

The second one… I assume you mean the scene with the Sinnoh trio? What was the risky and stupid outcome? Diamond and Platinum leaving the battlefield, or freeing Platinum thus inadvertently slowly freeing the Mega Hunter? Given how Zygarde lost the mind control upon fully breaking apart, and the Mega Hunter was mind controlled the whole time…

Third one… Yeah. Can’t lower the guard even if the opponent clearly blew up. And it just so happens that there were three people who noticed that the fact that Zygarde literally exploded was very unusual and alarming. Platinum got frozen thus was saved and removed from the battlefield. Blue was too tired and hurt to really think about it, and Crystal was going to, but then Gold kind of interrupted her train of thought and then stole her attention. Alas…

Fourth… Ruby and Sapphire? … Of course I have a plan for them. Even Latias and Latios said so… kind of. Huhuhu…

Fifth… yep. D. E. D. DEAD. I think Crystal’s death has been the most violent one in all of my stories. Not the most focused or descriptive, but definitely the most violent. For now at least. We will see.

Sixth… “You… have already… lost…” Yes, C’thun. Yes. There are a lot more like it. “Flee… screaming…” “Death… is close…” “It was… YOUR fault…” And on and on.

“Hope… is an illusion…”

Look at all those eyes. Kind of like Zygarde in a sense. Which is why WAY back then when I first played Undertale, I made that comment during the genocide path. Because this was going to happen.

Plan ahead. Even if that’s YEARS in advance.

#qna

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