#haven't said this in a while but liz so pretty
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Stranger protector
You came to this stupid bar because you're friend forced you to join her and now she wants to leave with some guy. You hated being in stuffy places like this not to mention that she was your ride home.
"But where are you going!?" you said and she winked at the guy telling him to wait for her outside.
"Isn't he the hottest!!!?" she squealed but you were in no mood feeling stupid that your friend would just ditch you like that.
"How am I gonna get home Liz!?" you say and she rolls her eyes saying it's not a big deal and you can take an uber.
"Liz! Wait! Damn it!!" you say taking out your phone to dial an uber suddenly bumping into someone's strong chest. You looked up shocked to see Pablo Gavi in front of you...he was prettier than in the photos but this was no time for fantasizing about famous footballers.
"Perdón" you say walking past him and Pablo was struck the moment he saw you kind dark eyes. He looked after you as you walked towards the exit door notciing the drunk guy starting to follow after you.
"Vamos Pablito! La otra!" Ferran offered him a shot but Pablo kept staring towards the exit door getting a very bad feeling inside his stomach.
"Él la siguió..." [He followed her...] Pablo said more so to himself and Ferran furrowed his eyebrows shrugging and drinking the shot himself before joining others at the bar.
Pablo couldn't stop himself as he ran outside seeing her back as she tried to find signal and the guy getting closer quietly.
"BABY!" Pablo suddenly yelled and both the guy and you turned around as you jumped noticing how close the drunk man was to you.
Pablo walked up straight to you and your cheeks blushed when you realized he was indeed calling YOU his baby right now! Fuck! Was this real!??
"Puedo ayudarte en algo, tío?" [Can I help you with something, man?] Pablo asked giving man a death glare while he was still staring at your from top to bottom imagining God knows what! Disgusting!!
"How many times did I tell you not to go outside alone, huh?" he said to you now grabbing your hand and you swore your heard was pouding against your chest so damn hard!!! Pablo Gavi was holding your hand right now!!!
"I'm sorry..." you said with a pout that was driving Pablo crazy right now but he remained focused on the man.
"Your girl is very pretty..." drunk man spoke in a broken English and you held Pablo's hand tighter when he tried to move closer making him stand a bit in front of you and slowly caress your hand to calm you down.
"I know she is..so if we can't help you, how about you leave now?" Pablo was not kidding anymore and the man could tell shrugging his shoulders and walking back into the bar. Pablo just called you pretty!!! This has to be a dream!!!
You were hyperventilating your anxiety taking the best our of you once you finally realized in how much danger you actually were. You should have never came here with Liz!!! You were so stupid!!!
"Are you okay now? HUh?" Pablo asked snapping you out of your thoughts and you nodded although still holding his hand very tightly. When he started caressing it again, you realized the position you were in quickly letting go and apologizing.
"Hey, it's okay! You got scared, it's normal" he said and tears fell down your cheeks because you were still thinking what could have happened if he hadn't followed you outside. Everything around you felt so overwhelming right now.
"Hey..hey..shh..it's okay..you're safe now, I promise okay? I'm not going to let anything happen to you! Come here..it's okay I promise preciosa.." he pulled you into a hug and you were crying into his surely expensive shirt while he ran his fingers through your messy curly hair.
"Are you here alone?" he said raising your chin and drying your tears with his fingers after a few minutes and you nodded.
"Um...I came with my friend...but she left with some boy...and I wanted to call an Uber...I haven't even said thank you, I'm so sorry!" you were so overwhelmed that your voice was shaking but Pablo didn't mind smiling and saying that it was his pleasure entirely. What a gentleman! Don't go crazy! He's wanted by like half the Spain right now!!!
"What's your name preciosa?" he said reaching out his hand and you took it with a kind smile on your face.
"I'm Y/N.." you say and he smiled nodding his head
"I'm Pablo." he answered and your words left your mouth before you could think.
"I know! Um...my dad likes fútbol" you explain now very much embarrassed and shy but he liked it very much.
"He cheering for Barça?" Pablo asked and you were glad he didn't think you were just another crazy fan of his (which you kinda were lol)
"He's a Culé..." you smile back seeing that he was glad to hear it.
"And you? Are you a Culé??" he smirked now and you could tell he meant it in a flirtatious way but you were so socked that you blushed bright red like a tomato.
"Um...now I have to be...after you saved me" you say and he nods his head asking if it would be fine for him to drive you home instead.
"You know who I am..not a killer" he jokes and you giggle nodding your head and accepting his offer starting to walk towards his parked car.
"You haven't drank?" you asked a little cautious after what happened.
"No, I was a driver tonight...besides I rarely drink"he said and you nodded thinking that you were exactly the same way not really liking the whole drinking scene.
"How will your friends get home now???" you asked feeling bad that he ditched his friends the same way Liz ditched you.
"I will come back to pick them up after you're safely home preciosa" he winked and you blushed looking away in embarrassment. Nobody ever made you feel so freaking shy and excited before Pablo!!!
The whole ride you were talking about random stuff and quickly you were already in front of your apartment building. You felt sad..night was over and he will disappear from your life.
"You live here alone?" he asked and you nodded explaining that your family is back in the US while you studied here.
"Um..maybe I can walk you to your door?" he said a little nervous now which was unusual for Pablo but he really didn't want this night to end just yet.
"Sure! Thank you Pablo!" you say and he smiled nodding his head opening your car door before walking you to your apartment.
"That's me! Thank you again for everything!" you said kissing his cheek and Pablo melted feeling your lips on his skin. He couldn't let you slip away and his hands moved on it's own will snaking around your waist as you tried to walk away.
"BABYYY, don't go!" he said and once again hearing that nickname made a shiver move down your spine.
"If you keep calling me that, I might get used to it..." you admit snaking your arms around his neck and you two just looked into each others eyes for a few seconds.
"Maybe I want you to?" he said and you blushed looking away for just a second before meeting his eyes again.
"Maybe I want that too?" you answer and he smiled leaning into you closer before your lips found each others and you just stood there kissing one another like you were alone in the world. When one of your neighbors started unlocking the door, you quickly pulled away grabbing Pablo's hand and pulling him inside of your apartment.
"Hm...are you kidnapping me preciosa mia???" he smirked and you giggled going on your tip toes and kissing his sweet soft lips again and he smiled into the kiss holding your waist again and kissing your back.
Time passed and you were on your couch cuddled up together holding hands, chatting and exchanging kisses every once in awhile. You caught a glance of the clock on the wall as thought came to mind.
"Dios Pablo! Your friends!" you said and he giggled kissing your nose and then your lips.
"I texted my sister to pick them up an hour ago princesa...no te preocupes...unless you want me to go now???" he said and you held him tighter while nuzzling your face into his neck.
"Stay..." you whispered and he nodded his head kissing your forehead lovingly before carrying you to bed and cuddling up to you. He always knew he would find you suddenly...and now he finally did...his girl❤️
#gavigif#gavi#fc barça#fc barcelona#fc barca#pablo gavi x you#pablo gavi x y/n#pablo gavi x reader#pablo gavi icons#pablo gavi#pablo gavira#pablo martín páez gavira#gavira#gavi x vini#gavi x yn#gavi x you#gavi x reader#pablogavixreadersmut#pablogavixreaderfluff
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A gift for @turbulentscrawl i did my best bvhfvihiv
Rated T | Warnings: god why is this cute??
“Eyes are up here,” Not any hint of annoyance, just making you aware he knows where you are looking. “(Name).”
“I know.” Somehow you are aware of the cipher while staring, “Do you paint your nails?”
The Professor blinks and then looks at his hand, the one with fewer scales on it, “No, they grew out like this.”
“Do you file them?”
“When I have time. They are not easy to keep at this length.” This must be your way of trying to get to know him. He hears you are a chatterbox from the others, preppy, fairly excitable. A few hunters like to pick you out because you are easily frightened, a screamer. Luchino has heard it but sounds more silly than terrified, he even heard you giggling when Fool’s Gold caught you.
Maybe you are mentally unwell? Not unheard of for some to mentally break down in high stressful situations.
“Have you ever accidentally scratched yourself?” The cipher is almost done.
“Once or twice,” The cipher pops, “Go.” He runs in front of the hunter giving you time to find another cipher.
A tie, you got pity from the hunter called Disciple, not sure how. You claimed meowing back at her made her help you find a dungeon.
The next time you are around the Professor, you are staring at the snake in the case. He has passed you twice and you haven't moved from your spot. Maybe you are like Emil? Though you seem more stable than him.
“(Name), tell me something about you.”
“I like dinosaurs.” Speaking up, “Where I'm from there are a ton of movies about them. I like Godzilla.” Not a dinosaur but he is cool.
“Fascinating,” Luchino said at his desk writing notes, “You said you were from a time further ahead of Lucky Guy.”
“Yeah. Not by much.” You get up to see what the Professor is doing, “Oh, you don't name them?” Disappointed.
“Would you like to name them?”
You smile and point at each of the reptiles in the room giving them a name and nickname.
You are fairly harmless, too harmless, and fearless too. One who can stare down those like Undead deserves some matter of respect. Still, he wished you would have not taken the role of kiting the hunter when you have no known ability to help you.
“You stare a lot.”
“Sorry, this time it was your chest.” Looking at him, “Do you hate them?”
“Hate what exactly?”
You still are digging through the chest, “Your scales. I think they are pretty.” You are the first person to compliment them.
“Thank you.” Being polite, “Do you know how to use that?” Seeing you pull out a perfume.
“Nope! Gonna find out soon.”
You got chaired but not before you used the perfume bottom like ‘pepper spray’. The hunter was not happy.
After matches, you return to his room to look at ‘Carl’ the snake. You feed ‘Josh’ the gecko. And sleep in a corner next to ‘Liz’ the iguana. Simple names, he nearly found himself writing those names in his reports.
“If I could be anything,” You one day say out of the blue, “It would be a dragon.”
“And pray tell why a dragon?”
“Easy, because dragons are cool.” There is a charm to how your answers have the simplicity of a child. “You?”
“Hm,” He already has seen a possible future of himself as the ‘Evil Reptilian’, “A bird.”
“That sounds sad.” You say, “I thought you said cat so you can enjoy naps and stuff.”
“A bird can go anywhere it pleases,” He leans against the chair as he loosens his braids, “A cat requires a person to care for it.”
“Doesn't seem too bad. Just be cute and fluffy all day and be taken care of.” You stare at Liz who is staring at you.
“Is that something you want? To be taken care of?” Curious.
“Of course!”
“And what about being a dragon?”
“I can be a dragon and be spoiled by my human followers.” You laugh ‘evilly’ at the end.
Shaking his head as resumes working.
#idv#reader insert#idv professor#luchino diruse#luchino diruse x reader#luchino diruse x you#professor x reader#identity v x reader#identity v professor#professor x you#idv x you#idv x reader#identity v#identity v x you
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I love the story you did of the MC proposing to Derek! I don’t suppose you could bless us with the other scenario, of Derek’s proposal to the MC? Pretty please 🙏?
Yesssss, the Derek love! Of course! Here we go:
One thing about Derek is that if he's going to do something, he's going to take the time to do it right.
So when he decided he wanted to marry you -- or, well, he'd decided he wanted to marry you when you were kids, but when he'd determined it was actually something that could really happen -- he didn't feel the need to rush.
After all, he'd been waiting over ten years for you. He was good at waiting.
By the time he took you for a date at the boardwalk, ring in pocket and raring to, he'd put months into planning his proposal.
First, he'd made a quick trip out to Sunset Bird while you were at work to ask for your parents' permission: he couldn't go forward with his plan without their blessing.
After your moms hemmed and hawed over him and told him that of course he had their blessing, he'd walked across the street to ask Cliff the same thing. Derek knew that you considered him your dad, so it was important to talk things through with him as well. He didn't really imagine the man having anything bad to say, but it was still sweet when he teared up and hugged him.
He talked to Cove about it too, of course, but the next step in his official plan was to reach out to Liz -- he needed to pick out a ring, and he thought your sister might be a good resource for what you might like. She gave him some tips, along with a healthy amount of teasing, then advised him to call Lee, too.
"Lee is going through this crazy phase," you'd told him that night after he spoke to your cousin. "Like she's not even seriously dating anyone but she's all into weddings, she texted me all afternoon about what kind of engagement ring she'd like and what she'd want at her ceremony."
You went on about how she must have gotten into those wedding reality shows, and Derek smiled to himself. The next day, Lee got back to him with the intel she'd gathered.
He took his time shopping, wanting to make the right choice despite how eager he was to put a ring on your finger, but eventually he found one he knew you'd love.
There were several venues that would have felt right for a proposal -- the beach, the park by your house, even the grocery store by your apartment held some special memories. But in the end, the boardwalk won.
"We haven't been here in forever," you told him when you parked.
He stepped out quickly and jogged over to open your door before you had the chance. You smiled at him, then smiled bigger when he reached a hand out to help you up.
"Just when I thought you couldn't be any more of a gentleman," you told him.
"I'm full of surprises," he replied, hoping his nervous laughter didn't give anything away.
You did the usual boardwalk routine -- face-painting (he got his star, and you decided to match with him), rides, games. It was a blast, as always, and every moment made him more sure that he wanted you by his side for the rest of his life.
Finally, you were walking along by the sand, taking a break from all the activity and simply enjoying each other's company. He saw the opportunity, and he grabbed it.
"Hold on, my shoelace is coming untied," Derek said, bending down to fiddle with his perfectly fine laces. "What do you want to do next?"
He watched as you looked around in thought, as he knew you would, and quickly grabbed the ring from his pocket. When you looked back down at him, about to answer, he was there, on bended knee, presenting you with the loveliest ring you'd ever seen.
He'd had a speech planned, a long, elaborate thing to tell you about how much he loved you and how he wanted to spend the rest of his life taking care of you, but in that moment, when he realized that he was finally in this position -- for real, not in his fantasies or with some kind of long timeline or stipulation -- his brain sort of short circuited from the sheer joy of it all. So he kept it simple.
"Will you marry me?"
Derek was strong and solid, but you nearly knocked him to the ground with how hard you threw yourself into his arms. He laughed, wrapping his arms around you as tight as he could without worrying he'd hurt you.
"Is that a yes?" he asked, feeling a few tears welling up in his eyes.
"Of course it's a yes," you told him. "It's always been yes."
He stood up then, pulling you up with him, and he slipped the ring on your finger. He held your hand close to his face, marveling at the site -- not at the ring, he'd spent long enough picking out to have every bit of it engraved in his memory, but at what it meant now that you were wearing it. He glanced over at his own bare ring finger, so thrilled at the thought of his own ring that would tell the world that he was yours.
Then you were back in his embrace. He held you there for a long time as people passed by on the boardwalk, stroking your hair, telling you about how happy you'd made him.
"I'll always take care of you," he said, leaning down for a kiss. "I promise. Always."
You could tell that was an important point for him, but you had to tweak it a bit.
"We'll take care of each other," you corrected. "Always."
#our life beginnings and always#olba#our life#olba derek#our life derek#derek suarez#derek x reader#derek x you#derek x mc#derek suarez x reader#derek suarez x you#derek suarez x mc
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Goo Listener [NB/unknowable? F?] [goo] [breeding??] [monsterfucking] [alcohol mention]
It took months of vetting, interviews, and personal attestations from existing members for you to even step inside. But once you were in, you were shocked by how ... Normal it seemed. It was a well-appointed lounge with lots of comfortable seating, a stocked bar in one corner, and a few dozen people mingling and chatting.
But as you walked to the bar to order a drink and steady your nerves, you began to see what was different. Wings, fur, the fleeting glimpse of fangs. They weren't kidding when they said this was a safe space for the supernatural.
You ordered your usual rum and diet, opened a tab and took a sip. The anxiety crept up, unsure of what to do, so you downed your drink and fiddled with your phone as you ordered the next. I took a seat next to you and ordered myself a Grey Goose and tonic with lemon.
I took a sip and idly stirred it around before speaking up. "First time here, I take it?" You turned toward me, looking over my head and making me giggle. It took you a second to look down to meet my gaze; I was only 4'10, with a side shave and purple hair down to my shoulders. "Sorry, I promise I'm not laughing at you, I just thought it was cute."
You chuckled softly and said, "yeah, I just got in a few days ago. Finally worked up the courage to show up."
I took another sip, smiling. "Want to know a secret?"
"Sure; don't think much would surprise me, honestly," you said as you fiddled with your straw.
"Every human who comes in here is scared, but you scare us so much more."
You cocked your head to the side, a slightly confused look on your face. "Okay, maybe I'm more easily surprised than I thought. Why?"
I took another drink and thought of how to phrase my response. "The worst case for you here is that you violate a rule and get thrown out; absolutely no one here will hurt you in a way you haven't consented to. But for us, the risk of exposure is..." I knew I didn't need to say anything more.
"True. I hope it's not rude to say, but that honestly makes me feel a lot better," you said, your cheeks beginning to flush from the alcohol. "If it's not too personal to ask, what... are you?"
I snickered and said, "I'm Liz! But you probably wanted to know about this." I reached out my arm and extended it, the skin disappeared and a gelatinous tendril took its place. I stretched it across the bar and tapped the bartender on the opposite shoulder before it shot back and turned to its human form.
You goggled at me for a moment, before downing your drink and whispering, "holy shit."
"Sorry if I freaked you out a bit," I mumbled and sipped at mine. "I know it's weird, even for here. It's part of why I usually stick with this form." I gestured to my body.
"Um, I'm really sorry I made you feel self-conscious. I'm pretty sure words just kinda failed me for a second there. That's cool as hell!" I felt myself blush as you ordered another round for us.
"Thank you," I said and grinned at you. "Want to ask me anything? Nothing's off the table."
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I held the door to a private room open, letting you inside and letting my hand linger on the small of your neck just a moment longer than needed, finally locking the door behind us. I extended my legs, growing taller than you, and pressed you up against the wall.
I kissed you tenderly at first, but you moaned into my mouth and kissed me deeper, your tongue dancing around mine. My tongue turned gelatinous, sliding further into your mouth and gently into your throat before turning back. I pulled away and looked you up and down. "Just so you know, my pretty little toy, you can breathe while my goo is in you. Well, when I want you to at least," I grinned and started stripping your clothes off, then my own.
I transformed my arms and legs into goo and swept you up, floating us both to the bed like the tide moves ships. I laid you on your back and kissed you deeply as tendrils wrapped around your legs and pulled them apart. Even more tendrils grew from me, narrow as they slid into your holes, making you whimper and moan into my mouth. They expanded, filling you as much as was safe, causing every square inch of your sensitive walls to feel my power.
I started to pulse them inside you, shrinking and expanding rhythmically, then suddenly started to fuck them in and out of you. I knew you were moaning, but my gooey tongue slid down your throat and prevented any sound from escaping.
Feeling you clench around my goo, I drove harder and faster into you, tightening my grip around your legs. As I felt you go over the edge, I stopped your airflow, only intensifying it. For you it must have felt like hours, as I watched and felt your body writhing against me in blissful agony, but a few moments later I gave your air back. I continued to fuck you into a second orgasm, then slowly shrunk the bits of me that were inside you, only to unleash a flood of warm, viscous, creamy slime.
You could feel it filling you from every direction, expanding and pleasing you in ways you knew but could never possibly explain. I held you this way as you rode out your orgasm, then slowly slithered out of you. You were panting, flushed, and thoroughly fucked, with my light blue slime dripping out of your tender pussy.
I let your legs down gently and turned back into my human form, grabbing a bottle of water and offering some to you before cuddling up against you. I stroked your hair and softly asked, "How was that, my lovely little pet?"
"Oh. My. God." You drank some more water and squeezed your thighs together. "I... Words are hard." You took a few more moments, still panting. "I have no idea what just happened, but I loved every single second."
I grinned and traced a finger down your body. "Need another demonstration? Maybe a little slower this time."
You giggled at the touch and gave me a soft kiss. "Ready when you are, miss!"
#txt#nsftumblr#domme posting#the real monster was the friend we made along the way#monsterfucking nsft#slime girl#goo girl
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I've been seeing so many people making their own Shipwrecked OCs so I thought maybe I could give it a shot!
People of the beloved Shipwrecked community, your very own Luna Bruce's first ever Shipwrecked/BSB character..
Now presenting.. *Drumroll sounds*
Whiskerz!!!
Her pronouns are They/He/She! ^^ They're a kitten character who originated from Cogware's first game, but Liz while she was designing him kinda sorta forgot to..
Actually give him whiskers.
So she has none despite their name XD
Then later on when Liz, Connor, and Harry were developing Shipwrecked, they decided pretty early on that they wanted to put a nod to Blundedcover into it, to show how far they've come! Now they had literal Broadside Animations working along side them!! They were so close to being a successful game studio!! :D What would their little nod to Blundedcover be? They decided it would be the little whiskerless kitten Whiskerz! :D I haven't decided why yet. Maybe Patt made her! So Connor was more attached to them. I dunno yet!
So now they live on Nulla Terra!! As one of the few non-wulf inhabitants of the island! ^^ They also look up to Wulf, and probably Stumbler too! :3 Maybe they enjoy art like Stumbler too! Maybe because of him he decided to try out making art!! :D I haven't thought much about her parents, but I'm thinking he could be an orphan ;w; That being said, that's all I have so far for them! :D I hope to draw more of them now that I actually have an OC, they're a lil bean ^^
Alt versions of the art like without the name and or coloring below!
Transparent ver.
Without the name + transparent!
Only the eyes colored without name
Pure outline without name
Just eyes colored with name (I think it looks pretty nice like this)
#shipwrecked 64#my posts#ooc#sw64 fanart#sw64#sw64 oc#OC#shipwrecked 64 fanart#shipwrecked 64 oc#sw64 whiskerz#whiskerz#shipwrecked 64 whiskerz#SW64#SW64 fanart#sw64 art#shipwrecked 64 art#oc#oc art#my art
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I have thoughts regarding the Maka's mom discourse.
I am way more favorable towards Maka's mom (while not ignoring the flaws--in the writing for her in the anime and the manga, not flaws with her or her actions exactly), and without ignoring Spirit's obviously larger in-story role for his daughter (without ignoring Spirit's own flaws as a husband and still-there-but-not-as-bad flaws as a parent).
Short version, in case I can't respond in more detail: if the crux of the argument is, "Maka's mother abandoned her," that is a valid evidence-based argument--but it's not the first leap I make.
And it's not one that I think has enough evidence to address numerous counter-arguments.
These include in-story/Watsonian counter-arguments. We haven't seen or heard about all the times Maka's mother came back to town or wrote to her or what she was doing that necessitated her to be out of town. And the DWMA is pretty much a boarding school, while certain students have their parents in town there are enough of them who traveled from around the world to attend this school, Maka strikes me as someone who is self-sufficient enough to live practically on her own. And there are numerous ways a parent is there for their child, even if not physically present.
And these include the meta/Doylist counter-arguments, that begin and end with Ohkubo just not being that good at writing. The easiest fix was to just tell us what Maka's mother was up to. But for whatever reason, he didn't want her around, and the likely reasons aren't great: "it'd be boring seeing Maka and her mom getting along" (then figure out an angle--the anime already gave you one with how Maka describes her mom, just imagine this absolute beast who Maka admires as the greatest person ever), "writing women is hard" (even though, despite himself, Ohkubo has enough cases of being competent or even good at it, give or take fanservice-bait crap).
But there are enough justifications that at least mitigate how bad the writing is. Maybe this is done for an allegorical reading: a lot of children don't have all parents living near them, so Maka's experiences may resonate with audience members whose parents are divorced, too. And as I said, the DWMA is practically a boarding school, so why would any of their parents be there? The response to that would be, what about how Maka's dad, Black Star's adoptive dad, and Kid's dad are all here in Death City? My flawed response is, they are the main protagonists, of course they have parents here, we want to progress their characterization by seeing how they bounce off of parental figures. And, to the benefit of their progression, the presence of their parents largely helps the story. Showing Soul's parents in Death City wouldn't have helped when his story is all about angst; showing Liz and Patty's mom would undermine that they have trust issues with authority figures; showing Tsubaki's parents...actually would have helped her a lot (seriously, why do we see her dad but not her mom--what, was she on a mission with Maka's mom, too?). But we need Maka's dad here to establish her trust issues, we need Sid here to establish just how rambunctious Black Star is and how seemingly relaxed Sid was in taking care of him, and we need Lord Death here as a reminder of what Kid is aiming to become but also the risk of just how badly Kid too could screw up this job.
I don't really have a conclusion to this post, seeing as I hope to have a more detailed response to certain posts another time.
But thank goodness we got one last appearance from Maka's mother, that still didn't answer a damn thing about her, just gives us a picture to slap onto the wiki, all thanks to a prequel no one was asking for. (Yeah, I can't stop myself from derailing a post to beat that dead horse.)
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Hey I saw you were looking for questions about your Wtd aus? Well i couldn't pick one so here's a question for all of them!
Hazelnut tree: What's the alison in this au like? I would love to see his dynamic with more characters and we know he ends up with hazel. I wonder what his rule following personality would look like next to winnies moral roulette wheel.
Scaly secrets: You said some of the cast were dragons? Which ones!? And what colors. Are they all the same kinda dragon or different styles?
Cryptic Dreams: Is everyone a cryptid or are some of them hunters? What are some ways they avoid the hunters using their cryptid abblites?
Superhero: what are their powers? Understandable if you haven't got that all figured out yet. Superheroes are hard. So i'm also going to ask are they all heroes or are some of them villains and vigilantes.
Post cannon au: Who shares rooms? How many bunk beds? Or do they all get their own room?
Mixed marriages: Where did you get the idea for the kingdom names you wrote about in the snippet you posted?
Robotic fantasy (I LOVE EXTRA ANGST): I noticed we are in a lot of the same fandoms so what other fandoms exactly are being thrown into the mix here? And what's your favorite duo of a WTD character partnered with a non WTD character?
I'm sorry if it's a lot of questions I have a lot to ask! Hearing about cool stuff like this always inspires me! Gets me thinking you know? They just all sound so cool! Hope you don't mind the length!
Salty I am so fucking happy you don't even know, this is my favorite ask ever I couldn't even imagine this!!!!!! I don't mind the length the length lets me ramble about my ideas which I need to do!!!!!!
Hazelnut tree: Allison would probably secretly tag along with Hazel and Night Light, and therefore ends up talking to the whole little group that's building. Allison would hate Winnie before his redemption due to helping Litho so much. After Win's redemption though? They'd probably get along relatively well, helped by the fact that I'm pretty sure their related, and at the very least they are in HNT.
Scaly Secrets: Currently the dragons consist of; Sara, Wiatt, Carly, Mike, The Triplets, and Winnie! Sara is dark pink, Wiatt is blue, Carly is light pink, Mike is orange, the Triplets are their respective animatron main colors, and Winnie is purple. Kept the color choices simple. Currently I don't have any great ideas on designs/abilities for the dragons, but I'm working on it! (They're all technically dragon shifters btw)
Cryptic Dreams: The cryptids are all the animatronic possessers (minus Eric who has a different deal going on) and Sara and the Twins. The main plot revolves around Wiatt, Damian, Celio, and Oliver thinking all tge cryptids have been taken by cryptids since they don't know they are the cryptids. So they team up with actual cryptid hunters to find them. Carly is also in the team to try and keep everyone from finding out about the cryptids while also stopping them from getting hurt. They use their abilities in a lot of ways, mainly to trap the hunters.
Superheros: Decided to answer both at once with a list, not everyone had powers decided on yet. A lot of them use the animatronic names as alter egos, and those who don't have. Kinda bad names lol.
Heros: Starlight (Lewis)* [????? And Specialized Telekinesis], Glory (Alyssa) [Water Manipulation and Siren Song], Rex (Mike), Ribbon Dancer (Ribbion Dancer)
Vigilantes: ???? (Wiatt) [Tech Manipulation], Detective (Damian) [Power Sight], The Triplets (The Triplets), Cheer (Carly) [Super Speed]
Villains: Shadina (Sara) [Shadow Powers and Specilized Telekinesis], Tela (Oliver)* [Tech Manipulation and Specilized Telekinesis], Winnie (Carlos/Winnie), Litho (Litho) [Shadow Powers], Lolli (Liz)*, Pop (Ben)*
(*depends on where in the plot they are)
Post Canon: As a general rule, all couples and young siblings share a room. So we got:
Lewis/Wiatt
Mike/Alyssa
Oliver/Damian
Liz/Ben
Mascarade/Melody/Mimic
Eric(/Ribbion Dancer technically)
Carly
Sara
Celio (maybe, idk if they're gonna live with everyone else)
Fun fact, the house they live in is the mansion Wiatt was implied to have lived in during highschool!
Mixed Marriages: The kingdom names cam from me translating a word relating to the character who's a royal in that kingdom into Spanish and Russian before mushing them together and making it look and sound like a kingdom name.
Robotic Fantasy: Pretty much all of them. We got:
WTDW
SAMS
FNAF SB in general
ESMP
MCYT in general
Maybe some of my oc's???
Personally I like Lewis, Moon, and Pearl's dynamic. They go through some shit together.
Also!!! Bonus new AU:
Mcyt (mainly empires) and Wtdw popstar AU has been circling in my head recently, so add it to tge list of AU's
#welcome to dreamworld#wtdw#empires smp#sams#sun and moon show#hazelnut tree au#Scaly Secrets au#Mixed Marriages au#Wtdw house au#Wtdw super ah#Cryptic dreams au#Robotic Fantasy au#Crossover popstar au
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Devil's Bells snippet #3
Liz & Jack meeting Phil for the first time (requested by @dropdeadjack)
"Do you remember where the venue was when we drove by?" Liz asked Jack, laughing awkwardly as they climbed out of the van after finally finding a parking lot that wasn't packed already. Well, it was Paris, what did they expect?
"We gotta walk past this metro station right there of which I can't pronounce the name and then uh…" he tried to explain, but his confidence faded quickly. "I'm sure we'll find it. Eventually."
She raised an eyebrow but decided to follow the way he had just described and see where they were going. They arrived in the city early enough to have time to figure out where they needed to go before the show would start.
Walking past the metro station, they heard a young man's voice calling after them, accompanied by the sound of metal rings on the handrail of the stairs. "Salut ! J'adore vos tenues !" ("Hey! I love your outfits!")
The two stopped walking and warily turned around, spotting a tall and lanky guy with long wavy strawberry blonde hair, an earring, a half unbuttoned shirt, a black studded leather jacket, skinny jeans and sneakers scurrying upstairs. They had already seen some shady people in this city and didn't know what he wanted - at least Jack.
He wanted to open his mouth to say something along the lines of 'We don't speak French', but then Liz scraped together what she had studied at school and replied with a slight accent, "Merci ! Tu vas au concert de H.E.A.T aussi ?" ("Thanks! Are you also going to the H.E.A.T concert?")
"Oui, oui ! Vous n'êtes pas d'ici ?" ("Yeah, yeah! You're not from here?")
"Non, nous sommes… euh, je suis allemande, il est anglais. Mon français n'est pas super," she chuckled. ("No, we're… uh, I'm German, he's English. My French isn't great.")
Actually, her French was pretty good, but she was too lazy to make use of that more often than necessary if the alternative was simply switching to English, especially considering how fast French people spoke when they knew you understood their language but were a foreigner.
Jack watched in confusion as they talked without him understanding anything. He was relieved when they finally spoke English and the other guy came closer to them. "By the way, I'm Liz and this is Jack. What's your name?"
"Blaze. Phil Blaze," he answered in a low voice, taking a drag of his cigarette, before adding in a lighthearted manner, "Actually it's Philippe, but call me Phil, makes me sound less French."
"Your accent still gives it away," Jack joked and Phil shoved him in response, laughing "Buddy, that's about the best you get here."
The three of them hit it off right away. How often do you meet someone you can immediately joke around with like this? And in a foreign country at that.
As Liz and Jack didn't move and frankly looked kind of lost, he said, "I'm assuming you haven't been here before? I know the way to the venue, let's go!"
Making their way there together, they chatted enthusiastically about bands they listened to, bands who had influenced them, and concerts they had attended.
"What was the first album you bought?" Phil asked. "Mine was Van Halen's 1984, Hot for Teacher made me pick up the drums. Needless to say, it took me a while until I could play that song well enough."
Taking a pause to think, Jack replied, "Bella Donna by Stevie Nicks. I grew up on Fleetwood Mac's music and she was one of my first childhood crushes. Though I didn't actually buy it, I found it in a box with things to give away on someone's doorstep."
"Oh yes, she and Joan Jett were my bi awakening," Liz agreed before immediately adding with a contrived hair flip, "For me, Lizzy Borden's Visual Lies! I'm built differently I guess. Just kidding, I usually asked for CDs for my birthdays and Christmas so I owned a lot more before I started buying them myself."
"Can I ask you something?" After receiving a nod from her, Phil continued. "Is Liz your real name or did you take it from Lizzy Borden?"
She laughed, "You got me there! I'm not gonna give you guys my legal name though, it's not nearly as cool as my stage name, quite German."
Not too much later, they spotted a horde of glam rockers waiting outside what they were pretty certain was the venue. The doors were still closed so they had to wait a little longer, but even the way here hadn't seemed lengthy with their new friend and the last couple of minutes until they got in weren't going to be filled with silence either.
"Is this your first time seeing H.E.A.T?"
"Yeah, I love them and I've wanted to see them for a while, but bands always leave out all the other cities than Paris on their 'European tours', so now that I moved closer to Paris I finally get the chance," Phil told them excitedly before taking on a more frustrated tone. "Also to find some new musician friends because my old band just broke up three weeks ago and practicing drums isn't the same when you're just doing it for yourself. I've been playing almost non-stop in bands for about… five, six years now. Are you musicians?"
"Yeah! I mean, Jack plays bass, I sing and am a mediocre guitar player," Liz answered, mildly embarrassed, because despite all their desperate attempts, neither she nor Jack had been in a band before and Phil seemed like a professional.
"Hold up, do you guys have a band?" he asked full of hope.
"Well…" Jack started, glancing at Liz. "We would have one with you, and with a proper guitarist, so if you don't have any other plans…?"
"Fucking count me in!"
Just as they enthusiastically welcomed their new bandmate with a handshake and a pat on the back, loudly talking about how happy they were to get one step closer to forming a real band and discussing where they might find a lead guitarist, the other guests started squashing themselves through the entrance.
The group followed the crowd into the packed club where they were greeted by purple and pink lights and the further they walked into the main room, the louder the sound of glam metal blasting from the speakers and people chatting became. The walls of the corridor were covered in memorabilia like posters and signed instruments from the bands who had played here before. Many iconic ones of those Jack and Liz recognized and got annoyed they hadn't gotten the chance to see them here.
One thing was clear before the support act even started playing: wherever they would end up on their mission to find the last band member, they were absolutely coming back for concerts in the future.
#first of all i'm begging on my knees for forgiveness that it took so long and the fact that you forgot about it makes it even worse#meeting antonio snippet coming soon!#devil's bells#mel writes#yes i kinda described the local rock bar in the last paragraph what about it i don't know shit about paris venues but let me make things up
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Wasn't there a Winx Club au you mentioned some time ago? I could've sworn I saw it a long time ago but I can't seem to find it now. If you're still doing it how would things go in it?
Omg yeah quite a while ago lol I even tried drawing Reina close to the show's style but gave up after struggling way too long on it. The ideas have always been there, but my mind is always the equivalent of having too many tabs open on your browser. Winx Club au is just one of those many tabs, so my ideas are only pretty basic for now.
Changes to Setting:
All the schools are co-ed, including the big three of Alfea, Cloud Tower and Red Fountain. Honestly, I've always felt there was missed potential in not having male Fairies and female Specialists. I also remembered that RF was said to teach Magic as well as combat, so its students are Mages as well.
Even as a kid I always wanted to see more about the Witches outside of the Trix, but got frustrated with how the writers didn't really know or care what to do with them.
In this setting, Witches don't have the same negative reputation they do in the show. They don't initially work with the Fairies because of misunderstandings, but once that's cleared up everything's good. Some go as far as being friends with them cuz why wouldn't they?
The Squad:
This is basically which of the three schools Reina and friends would be in. Their respective elements are based on the ones I gave them regarding Vytarian Magic here, here, here, here, and here. There's still a few I haven't done yet so I'll include them here. I'll include the Quidditch squad cuz why not?
Alfea
Andre | Element: Fabric | Fashion buddies with Stella
Penny | Element: Potions
Chiara | Element: Healing
Victor | Element: Water and Ice
Diego | Element: Mirrors
Badeea | Element: Paint
Alanza | Element: Music | Good friends with Musa
Orion | Element: Equilibrium
Ricardo (Graduated) | Element: Dreams and Rainbows
Cloud Tower
Reina | Element: Roses | Good friends with Flora
Rowan | Element: Paper | Good friends with Tecna
Ben | Element: Lightning
Tulip | Element: Gel and Illusions (Transferred from Alfea)
Merula | Element: Gravity | Self-proclaimed "Strongest Witch at Cloud Tower"
Ismelda | Element: Dolls
Jae | Element: Shadows and Food
Liz | Element: Fauna
Beatrice | Element: Dolls and Poison (Transferred from Alfea)
Red Fountain
Talbott | Element: Wind | Weapon: Wand
Barnaby | Element: Earth | Weapon: Gauntlets (Transferred from Cloud Tower)
Tonks | Element: Transmutation | Weapon: Staff (Transferred from Cloud Tower)
Bill (Graduated) | Element: Negation | Shield
Charlie | Element: Dragons and Fire | Weapon: Sword
Erika (Graduated) | Element: Steel | Weapon: Club
Skye | Element: Fire | Weapon: Orbs
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hi there, tumblr
So after quitting all other social media (twitter, instagram, facebook), I found myself 1) pretty lonely tbh and 2) at a loss for how to keep myself creatively motivated and inspired with nowhere to share my work. I'd heard from several people that tumblr is way more chill these days, and while I hesitated at first, I finally decided to give it a try. After a few weeks of waiting from tech support to regain access to my account (pro tip: don't sign up for anything important with your college email address), I regained access yesterday and spent some time doing some tidying up (i. e. deleting most of my old posts and likes).
So...hi! Feels weird to be back. Life has changed so much in the past seven years. It was interesting going back through old posts to relive those times. Since I was last here, this is what I've been up to:
hollowforest and I got married in 2020. While he was unfortunately not able to propose to me at MAGFest after a particularly victorious round of Gundam Xtreme VS, which would have been rad, we settled for eloping at county jail, which is also a cool story.
Ringo, my cat, is still with us! But now we also have a dog, Haru (named after Persona 5 Haru). Yeah I like dogs now. I like pitt bulls now. 2012 me would never.
After years of self-doubt and self-loathing about my life choices, I actually became what I wanted to be when I grew up - a software developer! In late 2020 I took the plunge to do a coding bootcamp and got really lucky being hired into an apprenticeship program before I'd even graduated. Now I'm making those big coding $$$ working from home, literally living the dream and still kind of in awe.
I joined the Diagnosed with ADHD in My 30s club! (Also, I'm in my 30s now)
We bought a house in October, 2022! I did not think it would be possible for the longest time, but due to the big job upgrade we were finally able to afford it.
I've played a lot of video games, but not beaten that many.
I picked up game dev as a hobby and have made a few small games during game jams.
My mental health is overall a lot better now! Part of that is from therapy, part of that is from self reflection, part of that is maybe just growing up. See also: quitting aforementioned social medias.
Improved mental health aside, my hangups about my artistic abilities and creative capacity still haven't improved any in the past 10 years. It's one of my biggest personal insecurities, but also one of the reasons I'm trying Tumblr again! I wanted somewhere to post my practice routine to keep myself accountable, as well as a place to get inspiration from other artists.
I'm going to make a concerted effort to keep this blog focused on art and personal things that make me happy. After I left Tumblr in 2016 I started working on myself and trying to focus on bringing more empathy into my interactions with others. Whether or not I've been successful at that is another matter, but in general it has helped me be a happier person. I am not interested in participating in Discourse. I don't think you can judge the "goodness" of a human based on a handful of things they've said/done online, and I won't be made to cast judgment on anyone. I think we should spend less time tearing down people in our own communities and more time asking why it's so easy for the people in power to trick us into fighting each other. In general, the overall vibe that everyone's social media account is a personal soapbox where they can make declarations about what is Right and what people Should be doing makes me uncomfortable. So I'm going to try not to do any more of that here. I do like still having those discussions sometimes, but I prefer a more personal venue, where I feel like I'm talking with people rather than at them.
Let's be cool to each other!
-Liz / merlumina
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(I dislike arguing so please dont think im try to do that!) I was just wondering why you think the funtimes were created while evan was alive? I'm pretty sure fnaf 4 was made when scott was trying to made dream theory a thing, which explains mangle. Obviously we're not longer going down that route but there was a point where scott was steering us there. And i was always confused on why the funtimes were made to kill kids so far ahead, idk though
(Oh no this is very long my apologies! Also i do genuinely want to hear your opinion! :D!!)
-theorist anon
oh, the genuine answer as to why I think the Funtimes were already created while Evan is alive is because I think it's more interesting that way. It's not rooted in canon whatsoever; I just think Evan and Mike's story is more interesting if Liz's death caused a rift between them and if William was a killer from the start, rather than Liz dying later after William was "triggered" into being a killer by Evan's death.
I get the feeling this ask is in response to this post tho:
I don't get why people argue the Funtimes weren't created until after Evan died if there's literally a Mangle toy/prototype in Elizabeth’s room while Evan is clearly still alive
I've seen people say that there is "no possible way" Elizabeth could have died first because the Funtimes weren't made until after Evan died, since Evan's death is what made William want to get Remnant, and I don't think that's necessarily true.
I 100% agree with you that the toy in Liz's room was originally meant to be another clue to dream theory. That's what the original intent was, but like you said, the story Scott wanted to tell has changed and dream theory is no longer the "Right" interpretation (if it ever truly was; having a "Right" interpretation is a pretty subjective and meaningless concept in a fandom like fnaf).
So, taking the "Evan saw a couple of broken toys in Liz's room, including a broken Funtime Foxy, and his brain created The Mangle as a nightmare in fnaf 2" out of the mix, then other (all equally valid) interpretations include:
similar to the Toy animatronic models, the Funtimes first existed as toys. Then sometime after Evan's death, William recreated those toys as actual animatronics for CB Pizza World
The Funtimes already existed and had their own line of toys before Evan died
William was still in the planning phase for the Funtime animatronics during 1983, and they were still being created at the time of Evan's death. We do see the Funtimes blueprints, but we don't necessarily know whether the blueprints we saw detailing their murderous features were the originals (as in the Funtimes were always designed to kill even before Evan died) or if they were redesigns with tweaked modifications William put in later (as in William added the murderous features after Evan died, but the Funtimes weren't originally intended to be Death Machines).
or some other theory that i haven't thought of or seen others talk about
So, since dream theory is no longer the direction the story is heading in, I think the existence of the Mangle toy in Liz's room shows that it IS possible that the Funtimes already existed while Evan is alive, though I'll admit that the Funtimes only being toys or William still being in the planning phase for building the Funtimes in 1983 are also valid options to explain why Liz would have a Funtime Foxy/Mangle toy in 1983. It just so happens that "the Funtimes already existed" is the most interesting option to me, so that's what I'm going with :)
#also i vaaaaaastly appreciate you taking the time to point out that you just genuinely wanted to hear my thoughts /gen#tone can be difficult to interpret in text and i have a tendency to get defensive so that meant a lot to me anon#definitely saved me a lot of anxiety and stress and i cannot thank you enough for that lol#i've just seen a lot of people (mostly youtubers tbh) completely toss aside the idea that the funtimes could#exist so early in the timeline and it's like?? maybe? but there's other equally valid interpretations out there my guy#it honestly just depends on where you fall on the ''william was a killer from the start'' to ''william became#a killer specifically after evan died'' spectrum ig
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As always, would love to read your episode summary. Also, in case I haven't said so in the past thank you so much for putting yourself through this atrocity of a show and providing summaries of its stupidity 😗😗😗. Its my favorite way to experience RNM.
Oh, my friend, that is such a nice thing to say! I've been watching this clown show live since I think 1x07 or 1x08? While it has TESTED me, I've invested so much time and effort into it that I had to see it through to the end so I'm really happy that my nonsense reactions are fun for other people :)
Now that that sap is over with! Summary below the cut!
The episode began with a Liz voiceover which really felt like a s1 throwback. It showed a bunch of scenes while she was talking about how far you would go for love and obviously the only one that matters is the malex scene. Dallas and Bonnie were decorating the chapel and Bonnie put up a Malex Forever banner which while sweet was...ridiculous lol Alex looked so excited to marry the love of his life while Michael looked on sadly.
Alex does his vows and I just couldn't take the scene seriously with that godawful blue filter slapped on and Alex was wearing his beanie. I sear it was a Look and not a good one lol. Michael decides to say "I don't" for his vows because he doesn't want Alex to die and he thinks he can still figure out a way to get them out of there. Alex desperately pleads with Michael to not let him die without marrying him which woof yanno??
In the no-filter universe, Liz and Kyle are working on trying to recreate fuel to get them out of the blue-filter universe. Isobel and Kyle decide they're done waiting and they're just about to kiss when Max interrupts them. *shakes fist*
They go to the portal because Maria had a vision or something idk I wasn't really paying attention because I don't care? They realize that Clyde is probably in blue-filter hell so Max and Isobel decide to go into it as well and echo has a passionate kiss while kybel decide to take the plunge and do the same. All very moving het stuff (I say this bitterly only because I think the malex kiss was pretty tame last week...)
The storm in blue-filter hell is getting worse but they go to where the tree that grew fuel fruit so Michael can try to revive some of it. Which then Alex is like since when are you a plant daddy? Which btw makes no sense because didn't we find out in s2 that Michael wanted to study agriculture engineering? Or am I making that up from fics?? Anyway, Michael calls Alex babe and also that he wants to take a shower with him (this sounds like a total non-sequitur but everyone was talking about missing water and what they wish they could do in no-filter universe).
Clyde shows up and kidnaps Bonnie, easily incapacitating everyone else. Alex is steadily getting weaker and feverish. Max and Iz show up and then they go fight Clyde and free Bonnie but not before he takes some of her blood so it can get rid of the mark/tattoo on his shoulder (the alien symbol which It think is the mark of Ophicus but I'm going to be real with you, I don't remember or care...)
Liz is steadily losing her memory from her alien mist drug stint but is keeping it secret. Kyle finds out because of course he does, he's a smart one. She almost relapses but Rosa had locked the mist and told her later that she knew she wouldn't. It was a very sweet Valenti-Ortecho moment tbh.
They figure out what they need on their end of the universe so they head back to the spaceship portal thing while the blue-hell gang do the same on their end. They also have Clyde in alien handcuffs which he easily breaks free from once the portal is open. Because of Bonnie's blood, which for some reason has trace amounts of DNA from everyone she's ever kissed and their powers, he is super crazy strong now and kind of freezes everyone in blue-hell, destroys the fuel to the console that opened up the pocket universe, and pops on over to no-filter universe.
The aliens immediately give up in blue-hell and Michael goes over to Alex to tell him he's sorry for not marrying him when he had the chance and he thought with his heart not his head etc. And Alex is like my love, my sweet handsome cowboy, I mean this with all the love in my heart but please stop whining. There are 6 aliens here, figure it out. And then Michael is like, you're right, you're right! And tells Dallas to use his water power to pull the fuel from the ground from when Clyde broke the console. Max is holding back the storm while they get this all done and finally are able to reopen the portal. Where would they (and this show) be without Alex Manes??
Tezca shows up in the pocket universe to kind of coach Max into controlling his powers to hold off the storm blah blah blah who cares, Isobel feels sad about her being there because it means she can't get out because she also has the mark of Ophicus but she tells her to go and then she and Max leave and Tezca is no more.
I left out a lot of the nonsense with Shevani, Maria, and Sonia (Eduardo's daughter) but honestly nothing of value imo lol
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I got some tips from @rexxdjarin and was curious if you had any too
One of my friends (in her 20s too) asked me how to write smut. Do you have anything that could help? Thank you!
Hi Liz! Thanks for asking!💕
I know how difficult writing smut can be, especially when you're brand new to it or haven't actually experienced what you're trying to describe. Like a lot of people, I've been reading and writing smut since before I was probably supposed to, so here is my advice:
RESEARCH. It's incredibly important to educate yourself about the types of sex and the dynamics you want to write about. Don't be fooled by thinking something vanilla is easier to write than bdsm. Both require research because you're not just describing the physical acts. You're describing what the characters feel while performing those actions. This is so important because you must be aware of different relationship dynamics between characters for all sexual interactions.
Read other writers' smut and get a feel for the different voice, styles, and types of scenes you want to write. Obviously don't outright copy someone else's work, but it's really the only way to familiarize yourself with the lingo you're going to need to write your own. Don't think that the stuff with the biggest following is necessarily the best, though. I've read so many amazing scenes that have barely any following, and other scenes that were awful that have a huge following. You'll likely pretty quickly get a feel for the flow of the well-written stuff.
If you're comfortable with it. Watch some p*rn. I know this isn't for everyone, and it can be really unrealistic a lot of the time, but it can be helpful if you find yourself lacking inspiration.
First, second, and third (or however many you need) drafts are a must. Your first drafts are going to suck and that's ok. They are essential for you to build off of. You're going to find yourself writing bits you like and bits you don't, but get it all out on the page because you have to sort through it to find what works and what doesn't. Make note of your own spontaneous ideas, too. Like with all writing, you never know when you'll be inspired, so it's important to write it down when you are. You never know where it might lead.
Be descriptive about what is happening in the scene and when. It can be incredibly difficult to follow what's happening if you go from describing one position to describing a completely different position without saying the positions changed. Your reader will get lost and get frustrated. Sometimes I find that it's easier to draft a scene action by action and go back in and add flush out the emotion and dialogue later, but other times it's just the opposite where I will write the actions around the emotion, too. Just remember to describe what is happening and when.
Be mindful of word and phrase choice. You're going to find yourself using the same words over and over. Sometimes it's unavoidable because you're not comfortable with certain words. That being said, don’t think you have to find a dozen different words for “cock” or “cum” etc. It's important to try to change it up to avoid repetition and redundancy when possible. though. To help with this, make a reference list of words you do like when you read other smut. I have a miles-long list of words and phrases I’ve accumulated over the years that I always go back to whenever I can't immediately find the right ones to use.
Know your audience. While you should always write for yourself first, keep your intended audience in mind. Use warnings if your scenes describe stuff that some readers might not be comfortable with, but also use them to attract readers that are. I always recommend going through and using the warning tags that are easier to search for when posting on Ao3 first if you’re not sure what to warn for.
I really hope this helps you and your friend! This is all I can think of right at the moment, but feel free to message me if you have any more questions or if you need me to elaborate on anything. Here's a great post I found not too long ago with some other really helpful smut writing tips, too. Happy writing!
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The Guardian of Trollhunters Episode 7: Part 2 - An Offer He Can't Refuse
Pairing: Jim Lake Jr. x Liz Walker (OFC)
Episode Summary: Armed with an ancient troll-hunting tool, Jim and Toby set out to unmask the Changelings living among them while Liz confronts Jim about her forgotten childhood past.
Words: 1k
Warning: none (if I miss any warnings please lmk)
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The following day, Liz skateboarded down the sidewalk, stopping nearby at the sight of Jim and Toby, who were waiting for the cars to pass. She kicks the tail-end of her skateboard into her hand and walks up to them. "Mornin', boys."
"Morning, Liz." Said boys greeted back, prompting Toby to speak up. "Say what we saw wasn't just an illusion, and they really did move it. How could we possibly find it?"
Once traffic was clear, they walked across the street as Jim replied. "Well, I don't think we're gonna be lucky enough to stumble on it again, Tobes. But one thing's for sure. That curator did not move it by herself."
"Maybe she had help!" Toby exclaimed. "Other changelings, perhaps?"
Liz nodded. "Definitely. It could be anyone in Arcadia Oaks, even someone we know. But we need to find a way to reveal their true nature."
"How exactly are we going to do that?" Jim asked Liz, but just as she was about to reply, someone called out her name. "Liz!"
Turning around, Liz sees Claire jogging towards her. "Oh hey, Claire."
"Hey! What's up, Nunez?" Toby waved as Claire reached them. "Hey, Colby."
"It's Toby. Not that it matters. You can call me whatever you want." Toby leans on his bike nonchalantly before falling over, yelping. Before Liz could ask about Toby's wellbeing, Claire spoke up. "How are you feeling, Liz?"
"Well enough to return to school, unfortunately," Liz jokes.
"That's good because there has been a slight change in the play after we were looking for a certain someone." Claire glares over Liz's shoulder at Jim, who stands confused, pointing at himself. "You've been looking for me? Was it because I couldn't make it to rehearsal yesterday? Something kinda came up. Steve filled in. That's what understudies are for, right?"
Claire perked an eyebrow at Jim. "Uh, you haven't heard? Steve isn't the understudy anymore. You are. She's tired of you never showing up without an excuse, so she made Steve Romeo."
"No way!" Liz exclaimed as Jim argued. "Come on! But I memorized all my lines!"
"Doesn't matter. Ms. Janeth is on the warpath for you. I'd watch out." Claire warned Jim before tugging Liz along with her to their day's first class.
"Didn't Jim notify Ms. Janeth beforehand that he was going to miss rehearsal?" Liz asked. Claire sighs, shaking her head. "If he did, Ms. Janeth wouldn't have thrown a fit yesterday during rehearsal. Be grateful you were not there to see it, Liz. That woman is terrifying, and right now, she's out for blood – figuratively, I hope."
As the school bell rings, Liz glances over her shoulder, seeing Jim dash toward Ms. Janeth's classroom. Liz grimaced, seeing that Jim had math class with said teacher.
Algebra + Ms. Janeth x Missing Rehearsals = Math Class of Doom.
Yikes. Hope he makes it out alive.
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After school, Liz catches up with a glum-looking Jim on her way out of campus. "Hey, Jim! I see you survived Ms. Janeth's "Math Class of Doom."
"And, now, she's given me a mountain of homework I hardly understand." Jim looked at the ground as she watched with a hint of concern.
"You know, what? I did honors algebra last year and was pretty okay at it. What if you came by the restaurant for a study sesh?" Liz offers, sweeping her hair back from her face as Jim stops his bike suddenly, shocked at the offer. "Wow! Really? Are you sure?"
"It's no problem at all. Since we both missed school yesterday, maybe we could work together on the classes we missed out on."
"But I don't want to trouble you more than I already have." Jim rubs his neck.
"Oh, Jim, don't stress about it. I got your back, remember? We're in this together." Liz rested her hand on Jim's arm. He stares at her a moment until his lips curved into a smile, his once dull blue eyes shining bright under the afternoon sun. "Thanks, Liz."
For some unknown reason, seeing Jim's smiling expression sent a fluttering sensation to her stomach. Confused by her reaction, Liz pushes down the strange feeling and chuckled, lightly punching him.
"Come on, let's find Toby and get out of here. We have a changeling to catch."
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Okay phase three of marvel which is the most exciting one for me! Let's go!
Edit: I decided to do the first half of phase three for this post
Captain America Civil War: I'm glad they're making the point I was making, they are destroying major cities. I know that's not their intentions, but they save people while also affecting their livelihoods when they destroy their cars and homes. I'm excited to see where they take this and if they will do better. Please do not make a love story with Steve and Peggy's niece. I do not want the relationship to stay in the family that is actually disgusting. As an action movie, I know all the action lovers loved this. It was pretty cool. I haven't cried from any of their movies yet, but this one definitely had a more depressing tone to it compared to the other films (besides the incredible hulk). It also made me so conflicted because I understood everyone. Now I know why y'all got so hyped for the next movie.
Doctor Strange: I heard good things about this one. I don't know what to call it special effects and graphic design??? I don't know. But they outdid themselves with this movie. The plot was boring to me ngl, but I see why people liked this movie. It was so trippy and I really want to watch the behind the scenes of this one, but I'm staying away from any of those things until I'm done. What an incredible watch from someone who really wants to get into film editing.
Guardians of the Galaxy 2: Nope
Homecoming: He's supposed to be 15??? This was this first relationship I was kinda down for? Maybe because it's teen love or whatever, but Liz was cool! Too bad her father and Peter had beef. Once again the movies where they're by themselves or their "orgin stories" just tend to be boring for me. And their single stories don't help me connect with the characters? Like I understand their stories, but there's such a disconnect where I don't feel anything about these characters. But we're getting closer to the end!
Ragnarok: They changed Thor's character that's the first thing I noticed. I am wondering if that change will be permanent or if it will move onto the next movies. Not necessarily it's a bad thing, but why did it change? Did people have the same opinions as me where they found his movies boring so he needed a personality change? I looked up why the actor for Hulk changed previously and google said that it's because he didn't like the direction they were taking Hulk (he wanted the story to be more dark and gritty like the comics allegedly). If that's true, I completely understand. I don't like the direction they are taking Hulk. No offense to the current actor because I actually prefer his Banner. But Hulk's character feels like it's supposed to be funny for kids. I get it. Hulk acts like a child hehe haha, but I don't know I don't like it. I'm really not trying to trash Thor movies again because this one actually is better (maybe because no unnecessary love story). But it just felt so heavily targeted to kids with some alcohol and sex jokes to help the adult audience be entertained. Is this the direction we're now going with the avenger movies or is it just this one? I know kids watch it, but I never felt it geared towards them until now. Taika directed this one and I think the writers might be new??? I don't if that's what affected it, but... Marvel keeps adding new characters to the avengers story, but they can't even maintain the characters they already have! It seems like they have the stories written out, but don't actually understand what they want from their characters. But that's my opinion.
Onto the next half in the next post!
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Part 4
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"I'm so happy to see you guys!" Maggie streches her arms. "I'm a hugger!" She laughs while hugging Elizabeth.
"You too Aurora come here let's make a Lizzy sandwich!"
Great she already gave Elizabeth a nickname...
"I'm good thanks i don't do hugs..." Aurora refuses.
Aurora used to be a really outgoing girl and she had many friends. Human friends. But when the whole becoming a ghoul thing happened, she lost them all. They didn't want to be friends with a monster.
"I'm so excited you both came to meet me. I was so sure only Lizzie would show up!" Maggie laughs. "So whats up?"
"Well i bet you know already alot about me because of my blog, so tell something about yourself!" Liz says smiling.
"Damn this is like a job inreview...well where do i start... I love making new friends, i don't actually have any tho... I mean online i'm pretty popular but i haven't had a chance to actually meet anybody... Exept now you!" Maggie gets out of breath for talking so fast. "Sorry, like i said i'm pretty excited..." She laughs.
"I live with my dad at the moment but he is a realtor and is helping me to find my own place. Also i have a cat! Her name is Beans and she is the cutest thing ever. Wait!" Maggie takes her phone out and starts scrolling.
She shows a picture of a...cat?
"She sure is a cutie, haven't seen a cat like that before. Umm where were you're from? I mean you said you live near us in the message?" Liz asks.
"We live in Strangerville. It's a great place, tho something strange has been happening there lately. People are acting strange...but it's Strangerville, there's always something strange! Did i already say strange?" Maggie laughs. "Originally we are actually from another dimension, it's pretty cool. We used to come here for vacation. Where i'm from there's alot more monsters there than here, but dad says it's alot easier to sell houses for humans."
Aurora watches Liz is looking at Maggie. She looks mesmerized about her story.
"I know only little about you Aurora from Lizzies blog, i want to get to know you too!"
Her too? Maggie doesn't know Liz. There's so much more to Elizabeth than what she blogs.
"She can be little shy around new people." Liz smirks. "She knows how to play every intsrument in the world and has the best greenthumb in the whole universe. She had shit tons of plants and i have no idea how she manages to keep them alive...oh sorry Aurora, you can speak for yourself..." Elizabeth laughs.
"Well i don't know... I love music and plants..." And Liz... "I guess that's everything about me..." Aurora says quietly.
"SHIT!" Maggie shouts suddently. "I was supposed to be at an open house today! I really have to go i'm so so sorry! Let's hang soon again!" She rushes out before Liz and Aurora could say anything.
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