#i just have to rewrite the entire thing

[cloudysfluffs]

REALLY considered not posting this one.......might delete later

ns//fw and/or ki//nk blogs please dni!!!

#PLEASE READ THESE TAGS: #I AM NOT A VIV///ZIEPOP SUPPORTER!!!!!!!!! I ACTIVELY DISLIKE HER #i have been watching haz/bin with my boyf. and for funsies weve been rewriting and redesigning it in its entirity bc....yikes #imm not adding this to my fandom list bc i dont like. the shows lol. so im not gonna do requests or anything probly #this is a one time thing featuring my redesigns bc i refuse to draw them how they really look you cant make me #anyway please dont unfollow me for posting this 🙏 (/j you can do what you want) #tickle art #hazbin hotel tickle #lee!husk #ler!angel dust #my art #please dont send me discourse about this i dont care if you Like The Show just take this at face value <333333333333

[demadogs]

“robin talks to mike about him being gay-” “lucas talks to-” “vickie talks-”

NO! you guys are all wrong. no one talks to him. mike just accidentally sees robin and vickie kissing and laughing and he has an out of body experience when he realizes that people like him can be happy and find love and that is enough to push him to talk to will.

#also HE ALREADY KNOWS HES GAY NO ONES GONNA POINT IT OUT TO HIM HE KNOWS DAMN WELL #i am so confident about this prediction PLEASE ITD BE SO GOOD #but this would be like after a whole lot of shit goes down #like i imagine this would happen after mike kisses him in the upside down but then when theyre back in hawkins he shuts him out again #and wills like wtf bro youre gay and hes like we cant be gaaaay and then he sees robin ans vickie and it changes everything #you know my giant ass post i used to have pinned that was mikes entire s5 arc i kinda wanna rewrite it and post it #itll mostly be the same just new stuff #byler #stranger things #byler predictions

[suddencolds]

people who write long fics who somehow manage to keep the sneeze/symptom descriptions feeling fresh throughout and not repetitive - please teach me your ways 🤯

#i only know of so many mannerisms... #i only have a finite number of symptom descriptions to draw from... #trying so hard to not feel like i'm just repeating myself but #somehow this latest chapter is proving to be v difficult to write #semi unrelated but #even after spending 3 years getting a minor in creative writing i somehow cannot approach revision in #a normal way... having to go into a scene to add more and rearrange things then having the evaluate whether the end result still flows is #excruciating to me and i more often than not skimp out on that process entirely by just rewriting a scene from scratch instead of properly #doing revision 😭 but i do not have the energy to rewrite all of chapter 3 so #let's see

[thecrimsonjaguar]

i think when it comes to the F+C finale it's important to see where the writers were coming from. And it's easy to do that, the lesson/moral they gave simon is fairly clear: Simon needs to appreciate his life because Betty sacrificed so much to get him here. alright, cool, that's good on paper.

I do Also think that the execution was poor.

up until this point, the crown has represented/could be viewed as many things. Alzheimer's, substance abuse, and anything else people have called it. In this series, a newer interpretation has arose: Suicide. And I'm certain the writers were aware of this. Depression and suicidal ideation are such strong themes in this series that they can't NOT be purposeful.

So their attempt at teaching Simon to appreciate Betty's sacrifice can ALSO be read as: Simon, the suicidal, on the verge of a relapse-man, gets put into a body of a child, (and that is very powerful imagery that does not help, actually) and is told nearly expressly that he fucked up in his relationship with the love of his life. He is told he should have sacrificed more for betty. And he says to himself: "Maybe i wouldn't have even found the crown". Basically it's simon pinning the blame on himself for his 1000 year curse on his mistakes with Betty. Which of course can be read as Simon's self loathing but the show does nothing to refute his statement, which i also have issue with. Simon putting on the crown was stated to be a Mistake. it was an accident. No matter what, the crown cursing him Was Not His Fault. Ever. It's not Betty's fault, it's not Simon's, it. was. a. Mistake.

regardless on if they should or should not have introduced these new flaws into simon's character, having simon learn his mistakes like This feels. icky. to me.

#adventure time #simon petrikov #at spoilers #at fionna and cake #I've been thinking about what I would do to change this #because i feel the need to put my money where my mouth is #i cant just say “this needs to be written better lol bye” #i need to prove that alternate ideas WOULD work #and right now my script has actually deleted casper and nova entirely #because i don't know how to keep them #casper and nova were really fun ideas #and the execution was fun too #but i cant seem to make the whole “simon possessed shermy and plays casper and nova” plot point work with my rewrite :( #will accept any suggestions if anyone's got anything! #another thing about the lesson simon learned #is that it -in universe- could have backfired so badly #simon could have Doubled Down #simon was already so depressed and prepared to throw his life away for someone else #and then he gets confirmation that “Actually. You Didn't Sacrifice Enough.” #Simon lets betty go in the bus scene #but what if he just... failed to learn the lesson she was trying to show him? #what if he goes “you're right betty. I should have sacrificed more for you like how you did for me.” #“i can't sacrifice anything for you now. i'm sorry. but for fionna and cake's world... i still have that chance.” #sorry im in fucked up thoughts land #at thoughts

[altocat]

More cringe memes. Lucrecia Edition.

#ff7 #ffvii #final fantasy 7 #dirge of cerberus #lucrecia crescent #Hojo #sephcanons #And don't @ me for this #I recognize that Lucrecia was very much in the wrong for her involvement in the Jenova Project #She is just as guilty as everyone else #HOWEVER there's lots of room to suggest she had no idea what she was really getting herself into #And unlike Hojo she isn't doing this to be a sadist nor was her intention to have her own child taken from her #Lucrecia needs a rewrite but what's there has some serious layers #Also I feel like there's an ugly underbelly of misogyny within the fandom when it comes to its hatred for Lucrecia #Lucrecia is allowed to have done horrible things without being the villain #Good people can do horrible HORRIBLE things #Lucrecia isn't evil she's a stubborn dumbass who kept trying to fix her mistakes and dug herself deeper as a result #But she never wanted Vincent or Sephiroth to suffer #She wanted Vincent alive #And she wanted to hold her son #There's nothing saying that Hojo wasn't manipulating her the entire time #Remember in the OG it's implied he was drugging her into compliance #Part 3 may very well clear some things up

[muckyschmuck]

mostly bear but deaddog’s there too

#hi sug #i clean my room when i woke up and instantly fell back asleep #why #my art #oc art #sona art #doodlings #digital art #traditional art #mostly #hahahahhahahaha hiii #can i coffee #no also i didn’t find a good bear documentary to draw bears too thanks for asking #i think i spelled go wrong but unfortunately because mobile tumblr sucks massive nuts i can’t edit that without rewriting the entire thing #was gonna say something about simply not having the time for that however i am #continuing to write multiple long winded tags thats probably taking me longer than just #shut up?

[noahtally-famous]

it's been a hot sec since I watched both action and all-stars but bear with me here.

I don't rlly mind action's finale too much (which might be surprising to most of the fandom) and all-stars finalists were meh (except for the spotlight on the newer gens during an all-star season, but whatever). but here's the vision I randomly came up with two hours ago:

action's finalists: (trustin 😶) or beth and lindsay or smth similar--all-girls finale would've been cool plus the besties vs. besties drama. nothing more needs to be said, I think y'all understand the gist, I don't think I need to explain that any further...

duncan's time to shine should've been during all-stars' finale against mal. og contestant vs. newer contestant (made more highlighted due to mal being dormant until the beginning of tdas). it would've been interesting and impactful imo to see duncan, one of the characters to get the most development in that season, war against his own moral beliefs (or lack thereof) while facing off against his former juvie pal who's way more chaotically evil/chaotically neutral than he has been during this season. like imagine a duncan who's already teetering bc he got dropped into the 'heroes team' and ppl keep thinking he's 'gone soft' and all he wants to do is prove them wrong, but here he is, somehow at the finale, facing someone he knows personally is worse than anything he can ever be, and a side of him does admire that, ofc, but also there's the million dollars to think abt. imagine imagine...everything abt that finale being one big irony, they both trade barbs back and forth bc they know each other from juvie so they know each other's ticks, the entire episode is just easter eggs of their individual pasts under the guise of certain things being said/done to mess with the other. so many internal dilemmas. and smth smth happens, mike fronts again in the middle of the finale, mal ends up relinquishing control of the host, no reset button involved, some sort of 'truce' between them occurs beforehand, mike's naturally confused but is rolling with it all, zoey could've still been one of the helpers, same with alejandro and heather, maybe chris's "cottage" does get blown up somehow, yada yada

#brb gonna rewrite the entirity of all stars /hj #also i guess you can take this in a romantic sense if you want to?? i suppose?? idk #i mean i envisioned this whilst thinking of the juvie commanderies (or lack of) duncan and mal must have had basically #like they rlly just tossed that tidbit there canonically and didn't mention it again after smh #imo that was one of the many things that should've been explored in tdas #im rambling abt random stuff again #td mal #tdas #total drama #td duncan #total drama all stars #td lindsay #td beth #tda #total drama action #noahtally-famous #kit stuff #td mike

[snowtimeisbesttime]

all classpect interpretations are equally canon- and this is why:

sburb/sgrub/sname is many things, but the first of those things we see is a computer game. said game's source code can be found in carvings in the frog temple, which comes from a Reckoning meteor; so each sthing version's code comes specifically from itself!

and considering every session we've seen has had an unique frog temple (beta kids: 4 land spires; beta trolls: two separate temples with 6 land spires each; alpha kids: 8 land spires, alpha trolls: at least one temple (with 12 land spires??), possibly located on beforus' moon), there's no reason to assume each and every temple's carvings are exactly the same…

therefore, two swhatever instances can have drastically different classpect definitions because they're running different versions of the game! for example, my own mirrorbent's sgame was compiled in a way where i won't have to go into too many specifics from their own, separate, 12 land spires temple (as opposed to being widely distributed like the beta kids' sburb), and classwise features active knights and passive pages, to pick an example that was recentlyish polled about.

of course, this mini theory thingy would be most applicable to fanventures, while most classpecting theory revolves about homestuck proper for obvious reasons. luckily, i've got some Key Insights about the canon classpects, just beyond this readmore:

get mutie'd lmao!!!!

413 zillion kitys attack!!!!

#no jumpscares or anything below the readmore- just two gifs #homestuck #homestuck413 #classpect #classpecting #fanventures #homestuck fanventure #fwiw my own classpect interpretations would be something like. retro plus #as in i developed most of them All The Way Back When but ofc ive absorbed New and Cool things that have been popping up #and of course same goes for Mirrored Bench my most of blorbos. like especially so. #so like (active/passive) witch/heir (manipulate) maid/sylph (create) knight/page (exploit) mage/seer (understand) #but no 'mages get screwed over forever by their aspect' as Actual Class Definition And Requisite #and ofc no gendered classes #But Also yes inversion theory (arc flavor) because im already going to have to rewrite Enough Shit without jettisoning an entire act orz #and also a few custom aspect palettes (earlier tealer fanon mind; richer less gray life; void with. more than like 3 shades) #also also Every godtier has super deep and convenient pockets. All of them. Pockets for Days. #And more things i'm probably forgetting.

[x-gon-give-it]

how's your writing process?

I think I've got a pretty good system down--at least for me.

Step 1 is the rough draft. And I mean the roughest rough draft to ever draft. Lot's a run-on sentences. Nonsense descriptions. Awkward dialogue. Really just getting the bare bones of writing on the page. The type of writing I wouldn't let anyone see lest they judge my writing capabilities.

Step 2 is something that every writer dreads hearing, and when I first heard of it my knee-jerk reaction would be to self-destruct instead of doing it, but it actually really works. That would be rewriting the entire thing from top-to-bottom. Full on blank page, retyping the whole thing word for word, but at a slower, more detailed pace.

I initially though it would be like pulling teeth, but actually, it helps me slow down and flesh out the world, scenes, and dialogue way more. It's easier to catch it if something isn't flowing right.

Sometimes, if I feel like the draft really needs it, I'll rewrite the entire thing 2-3 more times.

Step 3 is transferring the entire thing to Google Docs (I write on Scrivener), changing the font, tidying up the format, and going over it again in a new, fresh layout. Sometimes, I'll also edit it on my phone to give my brain a different perspective of it.

Step 4 is putting it into a editing software, like Grammarly or ProWritingAid (<- I prefer this one, personally). It has a lot of cool settings. The ones I typically put my stuff through go is grammar, flow, style, and echos.

Step 5 is then listening to the chapter in a text-to-speech app, which makes it way easier to any spot clunky sentences, weird dialogue, grammar mistakes, spelling mistakes etc.. that I might've missed in my previous run-throughs.

Sometimes--this is more like a side-step--I'll then have a beta go over it, because as any writer knows, the more you look at your own writing, the easier it is to not see mistakes T.T After the beta goes over it, I'll listen to it one more time, just to be safe, and then:

Step 6: Prosper. Post that shit on AO3 and obsessively check my email for immediate validation >.<

Writing it all out, the whole thing seems a bit complicated, but it works for me, so it's the general process I follow when writing stuff ^.^

#I really like rewriting things it turns out #If you told me to do that a year ago I would have told you to take me out back and shoot me behind the shed #it's becoming an obsessive thing though #Now I want to rewrite all my stuff #It's rapidly becoming a problem #I can't leave my own shit alone #I've developed this process through many many years LOL #I remember my fanfic days where I wrote the entire chapter in one go and just posted it #no edits #just raw-dogging it #Later I would go over it once for mistakes #And then the process just started evolving T.T #But yeah! #There's my writing process! #anonymous #Anon #Asks

[littleoddwriter]

Because I keep questioning my own writing a lot; especially in terms of ending a short story... sometimes, it really is easier to just treat what you write like a movie or a TV show you're watching. Especially if it's a short fic that is basically just a single scene. Like... Would there be a scene change now and it'd feel complete? If yes, then it's an appropriate ending. If no, then either you write one more paragraph or let it rest for a bit, come back to it, and see how you feel. Or you find a spot a little earlier because sometimes scenes can drag on for too long and need to be cut shorter in order to be satisfying and make sense.

#i treat all of my writing like it's a movie or something because i'm a very visual thinker and i imagine everything vividly #so it comes naturally and that's the only way i can somewhat assure myself that the cut i made or the ending is appropriate enough #sometimes i'll still be unsure but heyyy it is what it is i guess #if i keep rewriting it any more i'll delete the whole thing eventually so whatever #anyway this is about the fic i just posted because holy fuck i was so proud when i finished writing it this morning #then i kept re-reading it to make sure it all makes sense and there aren't any grave mistakes #and every time i read the ending paragraph i got more and more confused #until i had rewritten it like 10 times and deleted the entire paragraph to end the scene a little earlier #because if this short fic was a scene in a movie or a TV episode it'd have been fine #there's no more to it necessarily #and the ending paragraph was just to wrap it up some more but it wasn't at all necessary #hopefully it doesn't feel too abrupt now tho omg hdsffhkds #jesse.talks

[jay-birds-fly]

#I just want to talk Duffer Brothers #You have some explaining to do. like c’mon guys #season 3 and 4 really took a massive dump on Mike Wheeler’s character and I- #it was bad writing imo #I will personally rewrite this entire series if they don’t do something better in s5 #like s1/s2 Mike would kick s4 Mike in the face for this BS #will byers deserves better #stranger things meme #stranger things 4 #stranger things #stranger things netflix #stranger things spoilers #byler #mike wheeler #will Byers #stranger things eleven #nancy wheeler #joyce byers #jonathan byers

[nonwal]

hiii!! I absolutely adore every single one of your critical role fics, your writing is absolutely brilliant!!! i had a question: is the sea the stars the dreamers back now that a body in absentia is presently wrapped up or is the among us thing you referenced something different? whichever it is, I'm so stoked to keep following your writing! Sending you the most excellent of vibes

yeah that's the Among Us AU I was referring to, sorry for the confusion. I'll be returning to the sea, the stars, the dreamers at...some point, soonish? Ideally before the end of the year, but at this point I'm trying not to make promises. I've hit an editing block and (spoilers I guess?) we're nearing the "all five stages of grief, simultaneously" chapters, which I really don't want to leave on a cliffhanger.

So I'm trying to at least get that part completed before I begin posting again.

#essentially my process for this one was to write an EXTREMELY rough draft just to get through the whole thing #and then retype the entire thing to edit it into a readable format #and then final edits before publishing #which probably doesn't sound like an efficient process but for something with this many moving parts it's easier to have multiple phases #because that way I don't put too much effort into a scene only for it to have to be rewritten due to a plot hole #unfortunately it also means that I am stuck rewriting all the 'that's a problem for future me' bits and past me was a bastard #tStStD

[robotsafari]

god more i think about ansem in dream drop distance the more upset i get.

#robo ramble #hear me out. there was some missed potential there <- STATMENTS DREAMED UP BY THE UTTERLY DERANGED. #while im all for completely cutting the entire shit with riku and ansem out #i feel like there could’ve been something interesting done there. #idk maybe im just a big reverse/rebirth fan and the pandering to me specifically was done so fucking atrociously #how can you pander to reverse/rebirth fans if you like. miss the entire point of it. #also i think the ansem and terra fight should’ve been separate fights instead of 2 phases. #what if ansem was guardianless during the fight that would be interesting. #I HAVE IDEAS GRGRGSHGA #also i think the fact that the ansem fight is immediately after the black coat nightmare fight was a bad fucking move #GIVE ME A BREAK I JUST FOUGHT THE MOST BULLSHIT BOSS IN THE GAME AND NOW YOU WANT TO SUDDENLY CUT TO ANSEM WITH NO BUILD UP #i need to continue playing ddd but man am i so disappointed #no wonder why my sibling didn’t remember a single thing from this game LOL #just realized i didnt getmy thoughts out about rewriting the story aspect. well. #would you actually want to hear my deranged thoughts because no you dont.

[orbdotexe]

decided Fuck It We Ball, and now I'm putting together Lore Bits important to The Forsaken Exile, so here we are after way too long of trying to find the names of them. if you even care:

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Post-Red War private celebration - Short and sweet, making fun of Cayde! Important to those characters in particular—Zavala, Cayde, Ikora, and Wolf. Common point of reference in memory lane-type thought spirals.

The Young Wolf's Howl and its promise - Obviously. A promise Wolf still carries, and one Saladin believes them to now either be delusional for or mocking him with by continuing to carry it, especially after murdering Lakshmi.

Aunor accuses/suggests the Guardian could've lied about Cayde's death - The interaction itself is non-canon to Exile, but the initial viewpoint of Wolf on Aunor's side stands very strong, and very wide-spread. The guilt on Ikora's side stands as well.

The Sundial - Always good lore, but specifically the end part of Osiris and Drifter's conversation. That interaction is the context to the Drifter short (or, A Questionably Fortunate Encounter).

Drifter's hallucinations from The Nine - Aids in understanding why, shortly before Beyond Light, Drifter hints to Elsie that there's Something Wrong, and it might be worthwhile to teach Wolf how to control Stasis. While not entirely certain, he recognized the signs of someone trying to ignore whatever they were seeing or feeling, and connected the dots.

Important because of Prime Brainrot: "For Fear of the Conquering Hero" - Actually the name of another page in the same lore book, but thought I'd shove it out here too. As Cayde is still alive in Exile, it's not wholly canon. Honestly not sure of its level of canon at all, as I've no idea what to do with Shin in TFE. But this specific lore page ("A Fire Inside") always makes my brain scream, so have it. Quite honestly, the entire lorebook screams at me, but this one and "Echoes Followed By Silence" in particular.

#because i may be rewriting the story but i sure do love Lore!! #the forsaken exile #destiny 2 #< might as well main tag! Beeg Lore! and even if this is for an AU. everyone should be exposed to new lore. always #hm. it seems quite a bit of Exile lore was propped up by Drifter and that box of characters/storylines. #i know more about him than i thought i did! amazing #anyway yeah trying to find specific loretabs by searching 'drifter' is hell. i read so many #not a bad thing mind you #just. oughhhgghghgh i went through so many pages on ishtar. sifting through all of it #should've just checked First Knife's Drifter posts... i probably wouldve found these there- #THANKFULLY i remembered with Shin lmao so didnt have to do as much digging! still had to dig through the lorebook but hey #anyway yeah i am never okay about Exile. never #even if i give up on it for some reason. i will be haunted by it far into the future #but anyway. you should definitely read the entire lorebook from Shin. its only 5 pages and its great - exile or no #but i WANT it to be canon. problem is how does that even work #Drifter again?? they're working together so. feasible i think #this is what i get for adapting canon lore instead of going the *sane* way of writing an AU

[keeps-ache]

'you're too technical' no i'm not!! you're using the wrong phrase and the wrong words and equivalating two things that are nearly complete opposites and/or irrelevant to each other !!

#just me hi #do not tell me a thing and then use forms of speech that don't align i will mentally explode and sit silently for 15 minutes hvfbhs #/'you're talking back' YOU are using IRRELEVANT information as LEVERAGEEEEEE #sure you know a lot. but you are making my brain funkin ITCHY with this kind of nonsense #she said it jokingly but it really does make my brain bad-itchy hsfbs #'think before you speak' your sentence structure will be sitting on my vertebrae for days. do you understand this #actively lowering my blood count every time they say a thing that just wouldn't make any sense on paper #am I the crazy one here? probably!! but ouhghhghhghhh #//Anyway aside from the brain-itching vertebrae-vibrating blood-count annihilating things lol #i have finished chapter one at last!! only took me two days‚ which is pretty good actually!! :D #did i mention i was rewriting p.space again ? cuz i forgor loll :> #i am pretty happy with it i think ? give it a month or so hfsh #i gotta work on the last couple paragraphs and maybe just the three last pages entirely and then boom! fineshed (finished with finesse) #i'm gonna go do that right now actually lol #or might end up watching youtube‚ who knows ! the world is full of wonder and happenstances :>

[lighthouseas]

idk i just think if you are going to be a teacher of a higher level class and not teach the class itself at that level but then grade our writing like we are all in college + also be a snarky bitch about it + tear said writing apart while you're at it, idk i think that might be a tad unfair,

#@ my english teacher #who literally ripped my essay to shreds and basically told me to rewrite the entire thing and subsequently made me sob for an hour #-because i don't have Time to do that . #my mom offered to help me thank god but ohhh my god #my teacher just sucks. she sucks. and she was being shitty and all it did was make me cry not make me want to revise and make my essay #-better. #🫠 #bee.txt