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#in my defense: that line was properly contextualized 🙈 but i get it!!!
worldoftom · 4 years
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The only criticism I have for Eloped is that somewhere there’s a line “I love inflicting pain on you” or such which was kind of yikes to read but that said, ELOPED IS SO SO GOOD it’s written so realistically and like I can tell u put so much effort into it like you’ve researched this! I love it so much! Also it’s so long and I love that and IT DOESNT EVEN DRAG ITS JUST PERFECTLY PACED. And like unexpectedly realistic a la the skinny dipping and it not working out in the cold (1/2)
Just things most don’t pay attention to or take into account when writing fics which is so !!! I love it so much! You’re a wonderful writer and I can’t wait to see more of your work 💕💕 (2/2)
So sorry if that line made you uncomfortable 💙 I understand. It’s not the kind of talk for everybody.
Thank you for your kind words 🥺 it was an intense month and a half of planning and writing and editing, I’m not gonna lie, so I’m very happy that I was able to convey all of it into the writing. And I love long, detailed stories, so what can I do? :) Thank you!!!
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