Yandere! Stereotypical! Emo x Stereotypical! Popular bitch! Reader
Okay, so this is a songfic... NSFW at it's most, a lime at it's least.
Not the songfic that has lyrics on them, but fics that are heavily inspired by songs. And this time, it's Emo Boy by Ayesha Erotica.
I'm not that knowledgable with Emos to be fair... I'm only doing it in a way where the fic reads like a stereotypical late 90's and early 20's teen flick! I think. I hope.
Also, the bitch here means someone who sleeps around quite a lot, and not the mean type. Just wanna put that out there.
So, I do apologize if I offended someone ಥ‿ಥ
Like any song fic, I recommend listening to Emo Boy while reading.
Yandere! Emo name: Ashton
TW: stereotypical Emo, stereotypical popular bitch
Ashton always had a fascination with the Emo lifestyle. He loved the music associated with it, especially the people indulging in the lifestyle. He loved how emotional and in tune they are with their emotions and is not afraid to show who they are.
When the got the opportunity to study senior high school in a small yet lively town, he knew he had to grab it.
And when he finally got out of the grasps of his conservative family, he felt free.
No more people calling him demon worshipper, finally (although, now that he thinks about it, aren't the goths the one being called demon worshippers?)
So with black skinny jeans, long, dark black hair that covered his eyes, rings, piercings, chains, sneakers, and a graphic tee shirt, he knew he was ready.
But what he didn't expect was being ostracized by being Emo.
But then, don't people like him always get bullied?
With a grumble while sitting on his chair, all alone, he gripped his pen while in the middle of writing a poem.
"Nobody understands me." Ashton muttered, his dark eyes a stormy grey.
This school he's in is filled with stereotypes, he just realized. Mean Jocks and Cheerleaders, two faced popular bitches, pushover nerds, slobbery otakus, social outcasts... He wonders if his life is a real life teen flick.
So rather than dive into the complicated social hierarchy, he just sits in his seat, reading and listening to MCR and P!ATD just like a true stereotype.
His life filled with such deep melancholy as he trudged in this hormone filled prison that he calls a school.
Hmm. He should write that in his journal.
But then he woke up in his bedroom, his hair having a cowlick he can't put down.
Okay... That's weird.
Then, when he tried to tease and straighten his hair, it won't budge, forcing him to let it stay wavy/curly and covet his eyes just like that.
Then, his favorite graphic tee was eaten by rats...
And his sneakers were accidentally bleached...
Then, as if the day was mocking him, it was really sunny and hot, smiling and cooking him in his dark ensemble.
"What the fuck..."
He suddenly felt a foreboding dread inside of him.
When he got in the school and sat down at his seat at the back, he heard whispers of a new person transferring to this school.
The talk of the town, y/n, was now being speculated which clique they will belong in.
And when they rolled in a pink rover, the school crowd knew they're going to be in the popular rich kids.
Immediately, you integrated into the clique like it was a natural thing to do.
With your quite the revealing clothes, your bimbo/himbo like personality, and your knack for bedding people if you wanted, you got into the social hierarchy just like that. Labeled as the slut, you paraded around the school with that title with your newfound friends.
Trendy, social, quite the airhead, yet charming in your own right, and such a seductive figure too. Nobody can resist your charms.
Not even Ashton.
He tried to fight back the attraction he had with you, and your fashionable pink fit, and fluttery eyelashes.
But he can't.
The hierarchy said no, and his brain also says no.
Yet his heart sings yes.
And he always follows his feelings and his heart.
It was small efforts at first. Poems, love letters filled with such romantic words.
All slipped in your locker, in a cute pink envelop and a sweet sampaguita smell on it.
You knew who it was from, and you loved it.
"Are you really interested in that Emo boy in the HUMSS department?" One of your friends asked, sipping on a disguised flask of alcohol.
You and your friends are in the rooftop, hanging out and skipping classes. Gossip flies out of your mouths and recent "relationships."
"Yeah I am. He's cute and funny... And him being soooo in touch with his emotions is soooo hot." You said, a typical valley accent on your tone.
You twirled your hair and bit your lip, a hot feeling in your body.
You really don't know why you're so attracted to him.
"I just really want to see and feel how good in bed he is." You nonchalantly added, fanning yourself a bit.
Your other friends grimaced a bit.
"... Really? But he's so..."
"Dark."
"Weird."
"And so complicated with his words."
"He's also always alone and listens to those sad emo bands."
You huffed and cocked your hips to the side.
"Hey! He's emotional and deep!" You rolled your eyes. "Besides, I just want to fuck him. I mean, I haven't been with an emo boy."
You thought back to how Ashton walks away from you in those tightest skinny jeans, his ass round and his legs toned.
You wondered really as to why you're so... Desperate to fuck him. Because most of the time, other people are the ones who want to fuck you.
Frustration welled up inside you as you groaned.
"Yeah I truly wonder why myself." You grumbled.
You grabbed the letter from your back pocket, reading Ashton's poem for you.
I burn for you.
Your lips so tantalizing,
So pillowy and so sacred.
It's something I, so lowly am I,
Cannot dream of locking with mine.
I do not need to know if you're the devil,
Tantalizing as you are,
Or the deity you claim to be in my dreams,
Bringing retribution to my dark and dreary life.
Your body so tempting,
I want to embrace and bury myself within you.
I want to claim and mark you as my own,
My bleeding heart corrupting your alluring self.
But I know I can't.
So I only look at you with starry eyes,
As you shine the most beautiful in a pedestal that I molded in your visage.
You understood the poem a bit, and it irritated you.
"What do you mean you'll not pursue me?!" You yelled, gripping the letter. "I can't believe he'll confess like this and not... Go for me?!"
Your friends chuckled and read the poem and was surprised to see how whimsical this confession of lusty attraction is.
"Wow... Okay, I give you my blessing to bed him." One of your friends said and you rolled your eyes and snatching the poem away from him.
"I know. And I'm trying." You spat out. "I need a stress reliever. Let's go shopping."
What you didn't know is that Ashton is listening to your confession, and is fighting the urge to take you then and there.
He smirked and tried to calm his fast beating heart as he slowly unbuckled his pants, lust filling him as he continued to replay your confession of wanting to fuck him.
Maybe next poem will be an invitation to his house.
The sound of bed creaking filled the dark room, along with the pants and moans of two people indulging in the desire of flesh.
"Hmm fuck... Ashton..."
"Y/n you're so tight..."
You moaned as Ashton continued to thrust inside of you, his throat audibly clearing as sweat trickled down his throat.
Your eyes trailed down his body, loving the feeling of being under this man.
The hot and damp air encased the two of you, giving a secure and secret paradise, away from the prying eyes.
"Harder Ashton!" Your raspy voice demanded, gripping his arm as he pushed your thighs to the sides of your torso, bending your back as he went deeper, faster, and harder.
"God you make me feral..." Ashton groaned out, feeling your walls squeeze around him stubbornly, not wanting to let go as he pushed you into a mating press in an animalistic need to bury himself deep within you.
The bed creaked violently, accompanying the orchestra of your moans and groans as you both desperately reached your high, and when he spilled inside of you, you knew that you wanted more.
So you kissed him on the lips deeply, interlocking your tongue with his as you both worked into getting into it again.
Yet, as Ashton smirked and gripped your thigh once more, ready to go, a stray perfume bottle rolled under the bed from the movement, a label on the bottle printed "love potion" on it.
A sweet smell of sampaguita permeating as a drop fell on the floor, glowing.
So if you don't get it, Ashton sprays the love potion on the poems he gives you, making you irrationally desperate for him as he is for you xx.
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So now the portion of the tour for 2022 is over, l'd like to share my (and fan!) favorite (and iconic) moments from it :)
Sorry in advance for the long ass post :P
Europe:
Live debut of Foundations (Eden night 1)
Disappear for the first time since 2010!
Live debut of Surrender the Night <3 (my first MCR song ever so I FLIPPED when this happened)
Live debut of Boy Division!
Gerard crawling on the floor
Frank moaning in Destroya for the first time in years
FINALLY being able to hear Mikey's line in Vampire $$$
Cemetery Drive for the first time since 2012 (Eden night 2)
Only Hope for Me for the first time since 2012
Tour debut of House of Wolves
Ghost of You for the first time since 2011
Tour debut of S/C/A/R/E/C/R/O/W
Headfirst for Halos for the first time since 2009
Live debut of Mastas
The first two shows having Gerard in normal dad clothes then the third show has the bloody mess we all know as Meta Man (MK night 1)
Deathwish for the first time since 2007
Saying moan instead of actually moaning during Destroya
Bulletproof Heart for the time since 2011 <3 (MK night 2)
Ray and Gerard kissing after Destroya
“How'd you get that off my closet door”
Rat attack documentary played before the show (MK night 3)
Mikey dedicating Helena to Rowan and Kennedy <3
Cancer for the first time since 2012
Rowan dancing on stage before MCR goes on with the crowd cheering for her <3
Piss and vinegar
Tomorrow’s Money live debut (Dublin night 1)
The “fuck the queen” chant
Frank's moans during Destroya
Frank telling a fan to listen to Gerard
Frank picking up a (fake) rat
Piss on stairs (Dublin night 2)
“These are my best friends”
Fuck the queen chant round 2
Ponytail Ray
The birthday balloons for Bandit's 13th birthday (Warrington)
Gerard dedicating Teenagers to Bandit for her 13th birthday
“My little bee keeper”
Gerard cardboard cut out
Save Yourself for the first time since 2011 (Cardiff)
“I'm just giving myself an ass pat, sorry”
Frank attempting to toss a hat onto his head
Oil Gerard (Glasgow)
Na Na Na being dedicated to Grant Morrison
Sleep being dedicated to Kristan Morrison
“It's time to drink my piss”
Grant getting the drum head from the Glasgow show
Frank completely shredding it
Mikey Mouse shirt (Paris)
MERCI POUR LE VENIN
Gerard taking a leap of faith
Joke about drinking Frank’s piss
Video of the band making pancakes (Rotterdam)
Ray playing guitar with his wine glass
Fans recreating this
Mikey wearing a happy birthday Kennedy shirt for Kennedy's 3rd birthday <3 (Bologna)
The crowd singing happy birthday to Kennedy for her 3rd birthday <3
Gerard stating that they hope it won’t be a long time before they come back :)
SHORTS GATE (Munich)
Discussion of Twilight
The Da Vinki twins went to the show in Budapest
Slow clap moment
“How many of you are MCR Veterans..Trademark”
Na Na Na played a second time in Warsaw but faster
Engagement during Teenagers!!
Gerard taking down Stuart
Heaven Help Us played for the first time since 2008 (Prague)
Another mention of wanting to return
Clown Gerard (Berlin)
Story time about playing in Berlin for the first time
Hearing Frank laugh when he’s nowhere near the mic
“THEY ARE GONNA HAVE TO BURY ME IN THIS MOTHERFUCKING FILTHY CLOWN SUIT! I AM NEVER TAKING THIS OFF”
The interesting drum
Poncho Gerard (Stockholm)
“I went a little hard the other night with filth clown”
Pointing a rainbow out to Gerard
Mikey’s crooked heart <3
Pink shirt Gerard (two nights in a row in Bonn)
Admitting to googling their own lyrics (Bonn night 1)
Ray's hair being half up half down
Coughing during Destroya instead of moaning
Gerard talking about Hayley Williams
Frank watching Gerard perform Cancer (Bonn night 2)
Llama on stage (a toy but a real one would’ve been cool too)
Closing off the European portion of the tour with Cancer </3
North America:
Clown Gerard 2.0 (Oklahoma City)
Gerard laughing with sparkling water in their mouth
BURY ME IN BLACK FOR THE FIRST TIME SINCE 2003
BEST DAY EVER FOR THE FIRST TIME SINCE 2005
Sleep with an alternate outro
The shirt incident
“Lighten the fuck up, buttercup!”
Ray breaking his wine glass against his guitar
HANG ‘EM HIGH FOR THE FIRST TIME SINCE 2011 (San Antonio)
Sleep with an alternate intro and different outro
Second unintentional Frerard moment
Besties moment from Ray and Mikey <3
Iero on the floor
Debut of the Sunshine intro leading into Sorrows
CHEERLEADER GERARD CHEERLEADERGATE (Nashville)
Summertime being dedicated to Kristin, Rowan, and Kennedy <3
Kristin livestreaming the show!!
Everyone (except Gerard) wearing Mikey Fuckin Way shirts!
The World Is Ugly for the first time since 2008; live debut of the studio version
Gerard almost drinking their microphone
Gerard twirling around and Ray cheering <3
Rowan and Kennedy’s drawings make their debut <3
Mikey doing a livestream prior to the show!!
Gerard singing on the floor (Cincinnati)
Frank stealing Mikey’s line in Vampire Money
SHORTS GATE 2.0 (Raleigh)
Gerard's story time about Bandit trying to make advil m&ms
Everybody Hates The Eagles live debut (kinda)
LIVE DEBUT OF BURN BRIGHT
Gerard in a bloody eyepatch
Gerard shushing the crowd (jokingly) so they can take advil
Sleep with an extended outro (Elmont)
Shorts for the second night in a row
Everybody Hates The Eagles for the second night in a row
Weird ass mask debut
Two fans wearing Petekey shirts
And someone else had the Petekey arm notes written on them
Anddddd two other people had matching Frerard shirts
Shorts for the third night in a row (Philadelphia)
Vampires for the first time since 2012!!
Pool Boy at the Vampire Mansion <3
Gerard calling Mikey Lil Mikey
Debut of the mystery shirts
Sunshine intro leading into FLW (Albany)
Shorts for the fourth night in a row
Mikey watching Waterparks perform
Priest/bloody eyes Gerard (Uncasville)
Eagles returns to the setlist
Ray and Mikey brushing their teeth before the show
Sunshine intro but with S/C/A/R/E/C/R/O/W
Skeleton Gerard (Toronto night 1)
CAUSE IM HER KIND OF GIRL AND SHES MY KIND OF BOY
Mikey wearing the happy birthday Goose shirt (Goose is what he calls his mother in law)
CAT GERARD (Toronto night 2)
Frank attempting to kick Mikey (jokingly)
Black Swan Gerard (Boston night 1)
Wholesome picture of Ray and Christa <3
Ray and Gerard colliding then hugging
Best Day Ever being dedicated to Thursday (Boston night 2)
Mikey blowing a kiss to Kristin <3
Frank wearing a headpiece
Ray rocking out with his sons <3
Crowd singing happy birthday to Mikey!! (NYC night 1)
Mikey dedicating Helena to Rowan and Kennedy again <3
Everyone except Gerard wearing Mikey Fuckin Way shirts for Mikey's birthday!
Drum is a Mikey shrine for Mikey's birthday
“How ‘bout you birthday boy?”
Fans wearing party hats for Mikey’s birthday
Gerard wearing the outfit he wore when he witnessed 9/11 (just a special moment honestly; NYC night 2)
DESERT SONG FOR THE FIRST TIME SINCE 2008
Lily pointing Mikey out to Rowan <3
Frank crossing himself during Sorrows
Bathroom photoshoot
Gerard’s story time about running into one of the openers while with Bandit
Frank posting a picture of his ass and getting a ass tattoo (Detroit)
NURSE GERARD
Hey Chris in Detroit
“Lucky for him…I had other plans.”
Crossing out Cancer for Helena (not a favorite or iconic, just offensive lol this is a joke dw)
Hawaiian shirt Way Brothers (St. Paul)
Teenagers being dedicated to Gerard's mailman
Bullet hole makeup
Jackie O Gerard at Riot Fest
Wholesome Jamia moment from the LS Dunes set <3
Wholesome family moment from Frank during Weezer's set <3
Hey Chris at Riot Fest
Frank wearing a bandana around his neck
Frank facetiming his dad just before his set with LS Dunes <3
Mikey watching TBS (Taking Back Sunday) perform
CROP TOP GERARD (Alpharetta)
Teenagers was dedicated to the band's crew
MIKEY WORE EYELINER
First of the hometown shows and Gerard performed with Thursday!! (NJ night 1)
BAT GERARD
I NEVER TOLD YOU FOR THE FIRST TIME SINCE 2008
Best Day Ever with Geoff of Thursday
DEMOLITION LOVERS FOR THE FIRST TIME SINCE 2004
Frank Sinatra Gerard (NJ night 2)
PLANETARY GO FOR THE FIRST TIME SINCE 2012
Teenagers was dedicated to Midtown
Cover of Frank Sinatra's My Way
Cherry taking a pic/recording Mikey :)
Miles getting excited when Frank said “trust me” <3
Gerard performing with Thursday
Gabe being one of the reasons why FOB8 is Pete’s villain origin story (iykyk)
BLOUSE GERARD!! (Firefly)
The entire band signs a mannequin leg
“You'll get this at the end of class”
Ghost Gerard!! (Sunrise)
Gerard took the trans flag during WTTBP <3
Frank going out on stage with HGP
Mikey going out on stage with Midtown
Gerard being unable to pronounce Florida
Ended off the east coast portion of the tour with Cancer </3
Dress in Houston!!
“I thought about wearing a dress in Texas before...but that's a story for another time”
Ray posting a peanut with a penis after the show
Mikey going out on stage with Midtown (again)
The return of dad clothes in Dallas
Teenagers was dedicated to the opening acts
“Get fucked at an airport bar”
Mikey wearing a Midtown shirt
Dad clothes again in Denver
Frank interacting with his kiddos <3
Teenagers was dedicated to Sydney
Adam of Taking Back Sunday said opening for MCR was the only way to get Mikey to return his calls
Ray moaning during Planetary Go
“Just sit back, daddy’s gonna take you where you need to go” Adam Lazzara, 2022 (Portland)
Gerard dedicating Teenagers to Taking Back Sunday
Gerard grabbing their phone to look at something
Tomato soup…hm
“Your turn!”
Meta Man cardboard cut out (Tacoma)
Sign for Gerard’s two cats, Mitch and Lotion
Frank going on stage with Kimya
Meredith and Andy went to the show!!!
“Cause if you think Mikey fuckin Way is coming out here to a cold audience, you’re mistaken”
VACUUM GUY AT THE VAMPIRE MANSION
RAY IN A PONYTAIL AGAIN
Teenagers was dedicated to Panda (Kimya’s daughter)
Gerard simping for Robert Pattinson in Batman
Gerard wearing a Twilight shirt
One of Frank’s kiddos giving a fan a paper set list
Smiley face drumhead! (Oakland)
Cum sign
Idk why someone did this but yeah
“Ray and I’s home state. We’ve lived here for...14 years?”
“I see a lot more flesh than usual. It’s fleshy out there”
Mikey and Frank almost bumping into each other before Skylines
Gerard chasing the tech off stage
Singing happy birthday to Worm
Mikey petting Worm’s beard
Gerard in an all black outfit with a rose (Vegas)
Ray rocking out with his sons <3
Ray patting his son’s head <3
Gerard dedicating Teenagers to Bandit again <3
KRISTIN WENT LIVE AGAIN
The drum was for Bandit <3
Engagement during Helena!!
Mikey having a random book signing (Aftershock)
Crowd surfing a…a sex doll during the LS Dunes set
Frank attempting to do a bottle flip at the end of the LS Dunes set
Ray, Jamia, and Frank’s kiddos watching Frank from side stage <3
Gerard’s shirt saying scabs
Gerard gagging on the microphone
The drum saying choke me which goes perfectly with the point above
A deer running around during WTTBP
THEY SOUNDCHECKED DESOLATION ROW (LA night 1)
GERARD WITH A FLAMETHROWER
CHEERLEADER DRESS IS BACK
“This song is about my favorite fucking human” spotlight proceeds to go onto Frank
Gerard got a haircut
THE SHOW WAS FILMED
Teenagers being dedicated to Quentin Tarantino
DESOLATION ROW FOR THE FIRST TIME SINCE 2011
Mikey with his family during I’m Not Okay <3
GERARD COSPLAYING PRINCESS DIANA (LA night 2)
I Never Told You being dedicated to glow in the dark skeleton man
“DO YOU HAVE THE KEYS TO THE LAMBORGHINI BECAUSE IM GONNA DRIVE THAT MOTHERFUCKER INTO A TARGET”
Dedicating Teenagers to a fan
Frank singing Teenagers to Lily <3
Frank hugging one of the twins prior to encore <3
Frank waving to his kids prior to Foundations <3
THEY SOUNDCHECKED ALL THE ANGELS (LA night 3)
THEY SOUNDCHECKED I DON’T LOVE YOU
THE SHOW IS BEING FILMED AGAIN
Foundations being dedicated to Doug </3
I DON’T LOVE YOU FOR THE FIRST TIME SINCE 2019
Teenagers dedicated to a random fan again
KILL ALL YOUR FRIENDS FOR THE FIRST TIME SINCE 2008
WTTBP being dedicated to Doug’s wife and kids </3
ALL THE ANGELS LIVE DEBUT
THEY SOUNDCHECKED SING (LA night 4)
GERARD IS DRESSED AS DRACULA
Teenagers being dedicated to Bandit for the third time as well as dedicating it to her friends <3
Bandit attending the show with her friends
RAY SLAPPING GERARD’S ASS AGAIN
Ghost of You in the encore!!
Mikey bringing Rowan on stage for Kids <3
Rowan making heart hands at the crowd <3
THEY SOUNDCHECKED SISTER TO SLEEP TWICE (LA night 5)
VACUUM GUY COSPLAYING GERARD
SISTER TO SLEEP FOR THE FIRST TIME SINCE 2003
SING FOR THE FIRST TIME SINCE 2012
Teenagers dedicated to the crew
Dinosaur in the pit
GERARD HAS WRITING ON THEIR ARM
FRANK POSSIBLY WROTE ON GERARD’S ARM
LIVE DEBUT OF FAKE YOUR DEATH
Gabe’s son having to be “evicted” during Midtown’s opening set
Ray rocking out with his son during Kids <3
Gerard throwing fake insects to the fans
The final bow </3
Luigi cosplayer comforting emos at the first day of WWWY (cause it was canceled)
Katy Perry welcoming the orphans/emo kids to her Vegas residency show due to the first day of WWWY being canceled
Katy bringing an emo kid on stage with her and starting a mosh
THEYRE ALL IN THEIR REVENGE OUTFITS (WWWY night 2)
FACIAL PROSTHETICS
Opened with I’m Not Okay!
BAT BUCKLE
MIKEY HAS BLOOD ON HIS FACE
FRANK WENT BALD
CONFETTI WAS LITERAL VAMPIRE MONEY
Secretary of Salmonella
Gerard misaddressing the crowd as Utah
First time Foundations isn’t on the setlist since it was released (not a favorite or iconic, just really strange cause we’re all so used to it every night lol)
Frank walking onto the stage like an actual old man
Gerard flipping the crowd off before the show even started
Hayley (from Paramore) mentioning and thanking MCR <3
Person who did their prosthetics last weekend is back! (WWWY night 3)
Adam from TBS sitting on a whole ass person (ik it’s not MCR but it’s too funny to not include)
Foundations returned to the setlist!
Gerard dressed as an army general
GERARD WORE LIPSTICK
OPERA MUSIC BETWEEN SONGS
Mikey wearing the Kristin Fuckin Way shirt <3
GERARD GOT A MEDAL
GERARD BROKE THE MIC STAND AT THE END
Closing off their final US show with Kids </3
Jamia, Kristin, and Christa taking a photo with each other <3
MCR’s first time in Mexico since 2008!
Another sex doll for some reason
“You look good today baby boy” Anthony to Frank during LS Dunes’ set
GERARD IS JOAN OF ARC
Gerard spelt fuego wrong
GERARD SPOKE SPANISH
“WATCH ALL THE SHIT YOU DO”
Mikey winked and smirked at the camera
Gerard playing a telephone sound
FILMING NOTICE BEFORE MAMA
Gerard shouting out Frank and the rest of Dunes <3
NEW INTRO BEFORE FLW
Gerard got an axolotl plushie <3
Ending the North American tour and the final show of 2022 with Kids </3
If you’ve made it this far, first of all, hi! Secondly, ty for looking through this haha.
I’ll probably do this again when they’re in Australia, New Zealand, and Japan next year, so stay tuned! :)
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Traduction française de Fear & Hunger 2 - Termina - #2
Comme prévu, nouvel update sur la traduction française de F&H2. Ça avance lentement mais sûrement, en espérant que je puisse la sortir avant la prochaine MAJ du jeu. Haha.
Traduction faite durant le mois :
Les objets : les noms et descriptions des objets, de la nourriture, des objets de soin, des livres et les morceaux de gens ou d'animaux ou d'autres bestioles pas protégées par la SPA.
Les noms des ennemis et de leurs membres.
L'extérieur du train. Comprends la discussion du début de jeu, ainsi que les discussions de hub.
Première rencontre avec Per'kele.
Maison de l'homme des bois. Avec le sous-sol.
Une partie de la vieille ville, qui correspond à la zone du soldat 1, de l'extérieur du manoir du maire et Karin à l'entrée de la maison.
Petit sneak peak juste en dessous !
Il y a quelques points que je veux particulièrement remonter. Par justification de traduction, d'appel à l'aide, ou parce que c'est particulièrement intéressant.
Les ennemis
La majorité vont être traduit : Villageois/Villageoise, Fusilier, Homme-Pillier, Vieille aux rats, Dance Mécanique, Clébard Fétide, Cocon Imparfait, Lunette Chialeuse...
J'en profite du coup pour proposer la traduction de Moonscorch, qui serait du coup Flambelune. Cela donnera le cancer de la Flambelune, et un Flambeluné.
J'hésite grandement à traduire les nom Needles et Stitches, qui pourrait être traduit par Seringues et Soutures, mais ça ne sonne pas top. Mais ça fait flic de laisser des nom en anglais dans une trad française.
En parlant de flic, je comptais traduire Bobby par Flic/Flicaillon/Poulet, mais ça enlèverai le contexte du nom. En Angleterre, bobby est un mot familier pour désigner les policiers londoniens, avec leur casque bombé. Vu le design de l'ennemi dans le jeu, le nom restera.
Par contre, Bellend sera traduit par Gland. C'est très important.
Avis à la population, mais surtout aux experts : pour l’ennemi Sew Job, le mot existe bien en anglais, mais je ne trouve pas d'équivalent en français. Enfin si, ce serait Travaux de couture, mais ça sonne faux. Pour le moment, le nom placeholder pour cet ennemi serait Peau Rapiécée.
Question pour les gentils messieurs et madames de mon PC qui font de la couture : est-ce que vous avez un mot pour Sew Jobs, dans votre domaine ?
2) Première rencontre avec Per'kele
Point général, car il concerne tout le texte, mais j'ai dû bidouiller un peu pour garder le texte le plus neutralement genré possible.
3. Extérieur du train
La manière dont est fait le jeu, chaque zone comprend tous les dialogues et textes possible dedans, que ce soit les Party Talk, les diagnostiques médicaux, les discussions avec les NPC, lorsqu'on fouille dans des objets... En même temps, des textes se répètent entre chaque zone, alors qu'ils devrait être dans l'onglet Common Events...
Après, ce sont des textes que je ne traduit qu'une fois, puis je les recopie dans les autres zones. Je n'aurai pas à les retraduire et ça m'avancera le travail.
Cette partie là a été longue à traduire, car elle comprend à la fois la discussion du début de jeu (et les alternatives selon le personnage qu'incarne le joueur), mais aussi toutes les discussion de hub (Marcoh et Tanaka qui boxe, Olivia qui creuse la terre, Henryk qui fait sa popotte dehors, Daan qui clope).
Il y a d'autres zones comme ça, qui sont pas mal chargée de texte, comme l'intérieur du train, le bar jazz, et l'intro des personnage.
Pas mal de dialogue sont des ref à d'autres média, comme par exemple la référence à Jimmy Buffet quand on demande un coup à boire à Daan au bar (je reviendrai sur celui-là plus tard). Là, lorsqu'on essaye de l'embrigader dans notre groupe alors qu'il est au complet, il refuse en disant qu'il sera juste un "party poison". Je n'ai pas réussi à trouver si c'était une expression idiomatique ou bien une référence. La seule référence que j'ai trouvé, c'est un titre de MCR (qui est nul à chier imo).
Du coup, dans le contexte, je pense qu'il voulais dire "plombeur d'ambiance".
Les "Bremen pigs" de Karin. On n'a pas l'air, en français, d'avoir un équivalent de l'insulte "pigs", sauf dans le cas de la police, où c'est poulet. Du coup, Karin dira dans la traduction "chiens de Bremen" ou "chiens brêmois", qui gardent le côté insultant et la comparaison aux animaux.
Je crois avoir bien passé en revu sur quoi j'ai taffé ce mois-ci. Avec les vacances de Noël, je devrais pouvoir mieux travailler dessus et bien avancer.
Prochaine update le mois prochain !
Joyeux Noël et bonnes vacances à tous !
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