Good Lines Tag
Thank you @avrablake for the Tag. I've not seen this one before but I love it, so I'm going to pass it onto a few people...
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What's a line that you're tremendously proud of writing, and what's a line that's just out-of-context ridiculous?
CW for the snippets: One talks about death and dying. The other talks about womens monthlies.
Line I'm Proud Of
It's a line Andric Roche says to Lizzy in Changeling, and I remember writing it, pausing and going. "Wow. Where did that come from?". It's stuck with me as a very quoteable line, and it's one of my favourites in Changeling.
"Survival is always about chance, Lizzy. Everything in the world wants to kill us. Even time."
Out-of-Context Ridiculous
I wasn't sure what to share for this one, but then earlier this evening (May 9th) I was doing a bit of writing practice with some characters from a future book and one of them spat out a line that's just perfect.
"Are you asking me to... to speed up my moonflow?!" she hissed out, and something on her face or in her voice must have warned Nik how close he was to igniting her fury because his hands raised fully, palms out, as he shook his head.
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me everytime harry/louis announce their 'asia tour '
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thank you :) everyone for liking my judy hopps drawing
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15 Minute Writing Exercise
Prompt: Fight
He was so irritating.
She was incredibly frustrating.
If only he would listen to her, instead of demanding that she adhered to his whims!
If only she would be silent on occasion, and realise that he knew best.
Mallory aimed a furious kick at a pile of leaves, and her foot slipped as the wet mud gave way beneath her feet. Her back hit the ground and her head spun as a sharp "Ooof!" was forced from her lungs.
She could hear Nik's own furious steps halt at her fall, and bit her lip with mortification. He'd been ahead of her, leading the way out of the forest she'd gotten herself lost within. Sher words and angry retorts had been spat from both their lips.
He had better things to do than look for her.
She hadn't needed the help of a monster.
She'd still, reluctantly, been following him home. He'd, reluctantly, kept his speed to that of a human, unwilling to let her out of his sight.
She waited for the taunts, the teasing, as she slowly pushed herself onto her elbows, blonde hair falling around her shoulders and clumping together with wet mud. She knew she looked a state, and after their fight it would be in character for Nik to proffer up a fresh taunt.
Instead, she heard him sigh wearily. She didn't hear the furious stomp of his feet against the ground, but a moment later he was crouched beside her.
"Are you alright?" he asked, and when Mallory braved glancing at him, he kept his blue gaze away from hers. Sharp eyes were scanning the forest, as though seeking to hunt down that which had hurt her, despite it being the pile of leaves she'd attacked in a temper.
She considered spitting his concern back in his face, but bit back the acidic words, swallowing them down hard. He was trying. He could kill her with no more effort than it took her to crush a spider, and he hadn't. He wasn't. Despite her pettiness and temper, and their blazing fights, Nik had never hurt her, and he tried very hard not to scare her.
"I could do with a hand up," she offered quietly, eyes on her knees when his head snapped around to stare at her.
It was an offer, an olive branch, and the surprise on his face hurt. He'd continuously reached out to her, but this was the first time she'd returned the offer and slowly Nik stood up.
For a heart-stopping moment she thought he was going to walk away. To stalk off and leave her, tossing her soft words back at her feet as she had done to him countless times already, but he didn't.
His feet didn't move from her side, and when she glanced up, his hand was held out to her. Patiently waiting for her to notice.
And wasn't that just a metaphor for their entire relationship.
Clearing her throat, Mallory lifted her own hand and grasped his arm. His fingers mirrored her own pressing against the skin just below her elbow. Firm, grasping… gentle.
Nik tugged her to her feet with ease, and didn't release her until he was sure she had her feet firmly beneath her. Then he lingered for a heartbeat longer when he met his eyes.
It was his turn to clear his throat nervously, releasing her and stepping back.
"Come on. We should attempt to return to civilization before the moon rises," he said simply, their earlier fight dissipating into the evening air, and Mallory shivered at the reminder of the monsters that resided within the woods.
They turned together, and walked side-by-side and neither commented on the tenuous peace that settled between them.
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24 घंटे में Kidney stone कैसे बाहर निकालें? हमेशा के लिए
24 घंटे में Kidney stone निकालने के लिए हाइड्रेटेड रहना बहुत जरूरी है ऐसा करने से गुर्दे की पथरी को तेजी से बाहर निकालने में मदद मिल सकती है। सेब का सिरका और नींबू के रस सहित कुछ पदार्थ गुर्दे की पथरी को घोलने में मदद कर सकते हैं, जिससे kidney stones आसान से चूरा बनकर बाहर आ जाती है।
24 घंटे में Kidney stone कैसे बाहर निकाले? हमेशा के लिए
हाइड्रेटेड रहना महत्वपूर्ण है?
अगर आपके गुर्दे में पथरी…
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DAY 5879
Jalsa, Mumbai Mar 23/24, 2024 Sat/Sun 10:23 AM
🪔 ,
March 24 .. birthday greetings to Ef AMIT Trivedi .. 🙏🏻🚩❤️
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March 24 .. World TB Day .. prayers .. 🙏🏻
Spending the time with the words of Babuji is not just an education but a revelation of a poet's mind and soul .. a mind that wanders in the visionary hemisphere unknown and unseen in a relative World, but yet possessing the intelligence of the probability of a higher philosophy ..
For it all to come to me now , is a shame .. a shame of lost opportunity and time to have been spent in the research and his presence to be able to understand the deeper meanings in his thought ..
I did on the odd occasion give intent of his interpretation and reason for many of his thoughts .. and they were most revealing .. but then .. time passed away .. as did his presence ..
It is a known and accepted fact that genius of creative art, writing, painting, music or whatever form, has always been overlooked and never given its due during the lifetime of the artist .. and it has been recognised fact of this phenomena that coerces me to, yet again , mention here for consumption of the mass ..
A pity ..
But the efforts of time , or whatever is left in it for me , shall endeavour to give some exposure to Babuji's works and his incredible genius ..
The World has very seldom seen or experienced the greatness of such ..
Last night I spent time on one such random thought of his from a published work :
नई से नई, पुरानी से पुरानी
it contains works of his in short verses, or abstract from , blank verse - short and expressive , but of immense value for us all to think and wonder of how certain thoughts and the express of them , do get created ..
The title of the Poem :
KAVI KA RAKT .. A POETS’ BLOOD
meri band mutthiyaan dekhkar .. seeing my closed fists
jis-jis ne mujhse poocha, .. all those that asked me
“ismein kya hai” ? .. ‘what is inside them’ ?
maine imaandaari se bataya , .. i told them with all honesty
“ismein kya hai ? .. ‘what is in them
ismein kadamb ka phool hai “ .. in them is the kadamb flower ? "(Neolamarckia cadamba, with English common names burflower-tree, laran, and Leichhardt pine,[2] and called kadam or cadamba[2])
aur logon ne is par .. and the people on this
sahaj vishwaas kar liya .. did keep their instinctive believe
vo to jab .. that is, when
meri mutthiyaan se .. from my clenched fists
rakt ki boondein choone lagein .. drops of blood did start to drop
tab logon ne mujhe avishwaas ki nazaron se ghoora, .. then, did the people did stare at me in disbelief
mujhse kaha .. and they told me
“mutthiyaan to kholo ।” "at least open your fists"
aur jab maine mutthiyaan kholein .. and when I did open my clenched fists
to unmein .. in them
kantkeela dhature ka pahal nikala । .. did come out the thorn laden datura fruit !
(Datura is a genus of nine species of highly poisonous, vespertine-flowering plants belonging to the nightshade family. They are commonly known as thornapples or jimsonweeds, but are also known as devil's trumpets. Other English common names include moonflower, devil's weed, and hell's bells.)
main sharmaya, .. I was ashamed
mera jhoot pakda gaya ,.. my lie was caught
mujhe apne par aashcharya hua, .. I was filled with wonder ,
kyunki maine apni ankhein kholkar .. because I had with my open eyes
kadamb ka phool apni mutthiyon mein liya tha । .. taken the kadamb flower in my clenched fists !
shayad mai apni bhavatishayata mein ।.. perhaps in the belief of my aatma , the self , the soul
kante ko phool samjha, .. I thought the thorns to be a flower
par kaanta , kaanta hi kaise reh gaya , .. but how did the thorn , remain a thorn
phool kyun nahin bana , .. why did it not become a flower
usnein toh ek kavi ka rakt piya tha । .. it had consumed the blood of a poet !!
the word भावा ति शय यता , bhavatishayyata seems to have been taken from a form of the mention in the scriptures of Hindu philosophy, saints and religion , which is why i believe it refers to his aatma, his soul , his inner .. perhaps a more 'cultured way' 😁 of expressing his thoughts ..
DATURA
KADAMB .. CADAMBA 👆🏼
My love and more ..
Amitabh Bachchan
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Ghar...
(poora padhna yaar warna bilkul mat padhna)
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Purane Lucknow ke chawk se phle chaupatiya hote hue dubagga wali sadak par jaana
Uspar kuch dur chlne par baye haanth par ek sadak mudti hai uske saath mud jaana
Kuch dur chalne par teesri gali me
Chautha makan milega
Khaali pada makaan
Us makaan ke bahar ek bujurg 13 saalon se
Phool bechrhe hain
Usse 2 dhai saal phle se wo makaan kaali pada hai
Beetey kuch saalon ke sawan ne us makaan ka rang dhul diye hai
Ab koi us makaan ko dekhta hai toh usko sirf wo budhi deewaren Nazar aati hain
Samne hi neem ki lakdi se bana ek darwaza hai
Jiska deemak aaj tk kuch naa bigaad paayi hai
Uspar kareegar ne kya khoob nakkashi ki hai
Us darwaze pr bada saa taala laga hua hai
Us taale ki chabhi wo bujurg apne gale me kisi taavez ki tarah taang kar rakhte hain
Har Diwali aur Eid ko us ghar ka darwaza khol kr usme diye jala dete hain aur namaz padh lete hain
Mere bahot kehne par mujhe us ghar ki chaabi dehi di unhone
Maine tala kholkr jb darwaze ko dhakka mara toh
Esa laga waqt ruk sa gaya hai
Fir maine phla kadam rakkha us ghar ke andar
Phla kadam rakhte hi esa laga maano waqt me peeche jaarha hun
Itne peeche ke Jahan se wapas aana shayad mumkin nhi
Wo darwaza ek patle se galeeche me khulta hai
Main aage badha toh maine bheeni si mitti ki khushboo mehsus ki
Diwaron pr seelan lagi hui thi
Wo seelan un deewaron ki umr bakhoobi bayan kar rhi thi
Thoda saa andar chala toh wo galeecha aangan me khul Raha tha
Ek aangan jiske chaaron taraf keyaari bani Hui thi
Aur usme Lage hue they alag alag paudhe
Unme se ek thaa gulab jiski ek Kali bas chatki hi thi
Main us Kali ko dekh kar soch me pad Gaya yeh sab jinda kaise hain
Maine us Kali ko aankh bharke dekha
Par jaise hi nazar hati seedha Jaa padi aangan ke beechon beech lage Tulsi ke ped par
Maine haanth jode aur aandar ki taraf chaldiya
Samne hi tha baramda jaise hi maine baramde me kadam rakha meri nazar padi baye taraf lagi kuch tasveeron par
Un tasveeron me ek chota baccha dikhrha tha jo us Tulsi ke aas paas khelraha tha
Kuch bujurg the jo shayad ab is duniya me nhi honge
Aur ek tasveer me kursi par baithe they us makan ke Malik aur unki khawateen unke dahine taraf chai ka cup pakde hue khadi thi
Meri nazar jaise hi un tasveeron par se hati seedha us kursi par Jaa padi
Jo tasveer me thi
Gerua rang se rangi Hui saafed plastic se buni hui kursi
Maine Bina kuch soche samjhe jeb se rumaal nikala aur us kursi ko saaf karne laga
Aur saaf karke baithgaya
Baith kar maine aakhen baad ki toh us seelan ke beech se jagah banati thodi us Kali ki aur thodi Tulsi ki khushboo mujhme samane lagi
Main aakhen band karke sochne laga ke ye makaan abhi bhi jinda hai
Sochte sochte mere Dil me yeh bhi khayal aane laga chlo andar chlete hain
Main us kursi par se uth khada hua
Maine apne kadkon ko andar ki taraf badhaya toh aamne samne 2 kamre dikhai pade
Unme se ek pr tala laga tha
Apni shirt ki aasteen se maine us kamre ki khidki ka sheesha saaf Kiya aur andar dekha toh samne ek bed tha jiske upar bistar laga hua tha jo thoda astwyast tha
Maano wo aakhir baar istemal kiya ho aur fir sahi naa kiya Gaya ho
Us bistar ke bagal me ek table thi jispar kuch kitaben bikhri Hui thi aur un kitaabon ke paas ek chashma rakha hua tha waqt ke saath jiska kaanch peela padgya tha
Bistar ke dusri taraf ek palna tha lakdi ka bana hua
Ek taraf deewar pr almaari thi jisme kuch saman rakha hua tha kuch kitaabein thi kuch tasveerein thi
Maine peeche mud kar dusre kamre ka darwaza khola toh usme lakdi ka sofa pada hua tha bilkul us buni hui kursi ki tarah uske samne ek lakdi aur kaanch se bani Hui table padi thi us table ke upar ek guldasta rakha hua tha aur uske bagal me thi ek ashtray jisme ek aadhi bujhi Hui cigerette thi
Sofe ke ekdam peeche thi almari
Jisme bahot saari trophiyan rakhi Hui thi
Kuch tasveeron ke saath
Maine kamre se bahar nikla aur seedha bahar chala gaya
Jaakar tala daala, chabhi wapas dedi
Aur seedha aapne ghar aagya
Main ghar toh aagya lekin wo khusboo mujhme rehgayi
Wo makan mujhme rehgaya
Maine shayad jindagi me dusri baar waqt ko rukte hue dekha tha
Us makan ka sukoon mujhme ghar kargaya
Pata hai maine phli baar waqt ko rukte hue kab dekha tha?
Jis din college ka phla din tha aur main jaise hi class ke andar ghusa tha meri Nazar seedha tumpar padi thi
Us makaan ko main ghar hi kahun toh accha kyonki wo ghar tum ho
Uski khushboo tumhari khusboo hai
Uski seelan lagi deewaron ko main khud apne haanthon se sajana chahata hun
Tumhe andaza bhi hai kitni khoobsurat ho tum
Un tasveeron me tumne qaid karrkha hai ek choti si bacchi ko jo kabhi kabhi bahar aati hai
Kuch bujurgon ko jo badi badi baatein kar jaati hai
Aur shayad mujhe bhi
Maine tumme jeena chahata hun
Us gulab ke paudhe ki tarah us Tulsi ki tarah tumhe mehkana chahata
Wo waqt se purani meri mohabbat tumhari hifazat karti hai
Har Roz tumhare dar pe aakar sajda kartib
Ise esa karne ki ijazat dogi kya??
Mujhe khudme jeene ki ijazat dogi kya??
~ Sehr
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“mere liye kya ho tum?”
fajr ka pehla sajda
meri tahajjud ki har duaa ho tum,
jaise thand mein kohre ki ows
barsaat mein behti hawa ho tum,
koi puche agar zindagi ka matlab mujhse
toh mere labon se nikala pehla alfaaz ho tum,
tadap raha tha jo raygistaan mein musafir
uske liye barf si thandi hawa ho tum,
iss azeeyat-naak zamane mein
jaise shifa ka koi jismani wajood ho tum,
dil ka sukoon kahu ya zindagi ka suroor
khuda hi jaane kaisa noor ho tum,
raat bhar khwabon mein mashoor
meri har subah ka pehla khayaal ho tum,
khuda ka karam ya jaise ho koi karishma
meri rooh ki ibadat,
mere mehboob ho tum...
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When azhar nawaz said " Wo bhi akhir teri tareef mei hi kharch hua , jo waqt nikala tha meine shikayat ke liye "
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Guys guys y'all know I'm crazy about barbie aaj mene apna purana collection nikala do you want to see😭😭😭😭
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Belated OC Kiss Week
I was sick when Kiss Week was on this year, and I was very VERY much looking forward to those prompts.
So I'm taking advantage of the fact that I need some promotional posts next week across all my socials, and completing the prompts a month late.
And I'm loving some of these prompt fills I've come up with tonight.
My favourite part about OCKissWeek is that I get to play with characters that are either on the back burner, or who don't always have POV scenes of their own within the main books I'm working on.
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Hara Nikala
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Crazy when a mutual likes a post that's ages old😂😂 like bro? Ye kaha se dhund nikala
But that's Tumblr for ya
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Nik: We all know which of us is more invested in this relationship.
Mallory: Don't be ridiculous. I confessed how I felt before you did.
Nik: Ah, but I was attracted to you first.
Mallory: Well, that—
Nik: And I pursued a relationship with you first.
Mallory: That's not—
Nik: And—
Mallory: And which of us was the first to say 'I love you'? Me, that's who!
Nik: I proposed first! (Pulls out a ring)
Mallory: Well, I— Wait… What?!
@faelanvance
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tere liye hi jiya mai khudko jo yun de diya hai teri wafa ne mujhko sambhala sare gamon ko dil se nikala tere saath mera hai naseeb juda tujhe paake adhura na raha
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