Illuminae, Writing Styles, and Some Final Thoughts
Disclaimer: This is not meant as an insult either author! They both put out an amazing series and I love it. I just wanted to make an observation that may or may not be wrong and offer my thoughts on how I’d have preferred some things be handled.
I shouldn’t have to say unmarked spoilers before the cut, but you never know.
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So last week I discovered this series and loved it to bits. Naturally, I went to check out what else the authors have written, together and independently, because I can’t get enough of having my heart dragged across a cheese grater. While I was looking through Jay Kristoff’s website, one thing caught my eye:
“He does not believe in happy endings.”
And suddenly, things clicked. I sometimes felt there was a sense of disconnect in Illuminae, and this is why. It’s their two styles clashing. Now, I haven’t read anything else from them yet, but on his website, Kristoff admits LifeL1k3 and the Aurora Style are dark--and Nevernight and Empire of the Vampire are darker. I don’t think it’s presumptuous to say that he likes writing heavy material, or that the darker parts of Illuminae are from him.
Looking at Amie Kaufman’s books, they’re lighter in comparison. Epic adventures and romances, which are in no way inferior to dark stories. Notably, The Starbound Trilogy has a basic structure that’s a spitting image of Illuminae’s. A trilogy, with each book following a different set of protagonists, but still tying together into an overarching plot. The protagonists from the previous books will appear, and the new ones will hook up with each other. And I was like ‘oh, so that part of Illuminae was her’.
This ‘interwoven’ style worked wonderfully in the first two books, but by the third...by the third, I didn’t care about the new protagonists. I felt I could predict how it would go: they would hate each other, they would be thrown together by circumstance, they would almost die, they would actually be alive, they would live happily ever after. Why get invested? Especially when I have much less time to connect with them than the previous four (six counting AIDAN and Ella)? And beat for beat, I was right.
Speaking of, AIDAN had to be all Kristoff. He said AIDAN was his favorite character to write and he’s very different in tone from the rest of the cast, so I’d bet he handled him. It also explains why his ‘enemies to friends to ???’ with Kady stands out compared to the other relationships; it builds over three books instead of being wrapped up in one.
Ignoring how I feel about the relationships themselves, I think it would have been better if Asha and Rhys got the third book all to themselves and the climax was a fourth. I’d have missed the cast I was familiar with and been excited by any small mentions/cameos, like in Gemina, but I wouldn’t have felt impatient whenever the newcomers were on screen. Kady, Ezra, AIDAN, Hanna, Nik, and Ella just had so much going on and I cared about them way more than the newbies. I think trying to have the climax and introduce new players at the same time was to Asha and Rhys’s detriment.
So onto my other big criticism with Obsidio: it’s ending.
To be blunt: I think it was out of place. Not the part about BeiTech getting their just desserts, the part where all the protagonists come out alive and all their relationships work out.
(This excludes AIDAN again; he gets stuck drifting in the network watching the love of his life be happy without him. But, deciding that he should just stay away feels like a culmination of his character arc: emotionally destroying, but fitting.)
Obsidio opens with Hanna saying “not all of us made it off Kerenza IV”. When the author makes the decision to have that be in the opening, they create expectations in the reader. So when everyone makes it off Kerenza IV...the reader feels cheated. I love happy endings, but they need to feel earned, not granted as a cop-out. There are too many fake-outs for the leads in the series, and after a while, they stopped working, because I stopped expecting them to stick. And I think Obsidio’s ending was Kaufman’s input, too--because Kristoff “does not believe in happy endings”.
I feel like if Kristoff had been the sole author of Illuminae, Ezra would have stayed dead after the first book, Rhys would have betrayed Asha for real and died, Kady and AIDAN would still end up as they were in canon, and Nik and Hanna would survive but their romance wouldn’t.
...Of course, if Kristoff was the sole author of Illuminae, we might not have gotten the other five characters (or at least, not the way we did, with them as main characters). And losing Nik, Hanna, and Ella would be a tragedy.
That said, the first two are still things I think should have happened.
Like, my thinking Ezra should have stayed dead has nothing to do with him as a character or shipping preferences. I like Ezra. He’s a big sweetie. A good guy. I thought he and Kady had genuine chemistry, probably the most out of all the love stories—Asha and Rhys haven’t seen each other in years, and Nik and Hanna have known each other for a couple of days (though granted, that is mentioned).
I digress. Ezra really charmed me. And to learn that AIDAN had been impersonating him for half the book and he was actually dead? Was heart-breaking. I was speechless. Blown away. Killing off the YA love interest is one thing, but killing him off and having the antagonist pretend to be him is another entirely. I’d never seen it before. So for him to suddenly be alive at the end of Illuminae, in a way that wasn’t really foreshadowed…it lessened the impact. He didn’t have much to do in Gemina and struggled to compete with the other seven main characters for screentime in Obsidio, which didn’t help things. So yeah, I would rather he stay dead (sorry Ezra).
Rhys and Asha, I’ve already covered as “I don’t care because I know how your story will go and reading it takes me away from the characters I do care about”. Asha’s sisterly/motherly relationship with Katya was far better in my opinion. Her relationship with Rhys ending in blood and betrayal would have been the one thing to make it interesting to me. Barring that, again, they would have benefited from more time they didn’t have to share with the established characters.
Nik and Hanna are in this realm of ‘cute enough’. It makes me happy they worked out, but I wouldn’t be sad if they broke up. It would have been a price I’d paid to get a more tonally-appropriate ending. What I really would have been upset about was if the trio of them and Ella as platonic, ass-kicking buddies was destroyed.
I said I’m pretty happy with where AIDAN and Kady ended up, as a pair and as individuals, and that’s true. That said, I still want to see Kady hunt down his digital ass and drag it back as the culmination of her half of the relationship. There was a distinct lack of closure on that part.
(I guess there’s a chance Kady and AIDAN would have died at the end of Illuminae as well, with just Kristoff in charge, but the last two books would have needed serious rewrites. Actually, the entire premise would need to be rewritten since Kady’s the one gathering those data files. So they probably would have survived, nvm.)
tl;dr--the best relationships were platonic and the best romance was the one that never took off, because the endings for the actual romances were jarring with the series overall, and that’s a byproduct of having two authors with different styles.
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