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teamsarawatshusband · 3 years
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Word Of Honor - 1st watch insta thoughts - Episode 6
First of all, as I gained a lot of new followers, just an FYI: This is me watching Word of Honor for the first time and writing down my thoughts as I go. Mostly it's me being confused as hell and giving all the characters weird names, because I can't remember the real ones. If this is not your thing, feel free to skip these posts and maybe blacklist "smirklord"
If you do choose to read along, please know that these are the most important characters:
Zhou Zi Shu = Baby Zi Shu/ Zhou Xu lord guy/alcoholic tanned tragic hero lord guy Wen Ke Xing = Smirky Xing/Smirky fan guy Gu Xiang = Purple Girl/my Purple Love/my Purple Queen Smirklord is my personal ship name for Zhou Zi Shu and Wen Ke Xing.
Previous episodes are here.
To anybody who was here before: Sorry that it took me so long to continue this. I accidentally came across a spoiler about my purple queen and I was pretty bummed about it. So I stopped watching for a while. Also, the show is getting more complex and I'm having a harder time remembering who everybody is. But anyway, let's go!
Episode 6:
LOL, Smirky Xing called Baby Xu Mom and wants to be carried. He's so cute when hallucinating.
Anyway, I'm glad Smirky Xing saved Baby Xu. Now, what's the thing he captured?
Baby Xu is hurt, thankfully he's also like a travelling pharmacist.
Oh, Smirky Xing, can I just point out that I have never before seen anybody accuse another person of being a serial killer with such a lovestruck expression on their face. And why do you keep insisting that you’re a good guy when nobody accused you of anything?
Oh, so the zombies and mummies weren't dead, but... living people controlled by someone? What?
LOL, "Do you have a dagger?" and Smirky Xing instantly pulls one out of his sleeve like it's no big deal, and who knows what else he keeps in there.
Ewww, is Baby Xu going to go stabbing at his own wounds? Please no.
Ewww, ewww, ewww. Oh, he's sucking out the poison I guess.
Waaah, what is Smirky Xing going to. - Oh. OMGOMGOMGOMG, eww, but also YESSS, you go for that shoulder kiss, honey, YES!  (Sorry, I had to rewind that moment a couple times). Let's rename Smirky Xing to Kissy Xing.
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Oh, and this once and for all gave Baby Xu's diguise away. He didn't put make-up on his shoulder.
'Can you show me your real appearance' my ass. He wants to see you naked. And Baby Xu reminds him of consent. I mean, trust. But, really... consent.
OMG, "you can touch it." Yes! Touch it Baby Xu! Touch it!!!  Kissy Xing gave his permission!!!
Oooooh, they're dancing again!!!
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OMG, they're going to the lake. Is this gonna turn into the dirty dancing lifting figure scene? PLEASE?
I don't even care, this 100% counts as the lifting scene.
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Dude, what? Can you not swim? Baby Xu? You okay? He fell into the water, okay. But why doesn't he get back to the surface?????
Does he want to be saved? Please tell me he's not drowning. :O Kissy Xing looks so worried.
Whoa, where did his mask go? :O :O :O
Okay, okay, okay. Clothes on the drying rack, they're basically in their undies. And kissy Xing can't stop staring at Baby Xu's real face.
Real face baby Xu looks so much softer. Still pissy though, did he seriously just wipe the bottle neck? Come on, man. You had his lips suck on your skin already. I'm sure you can take his spit.
So kissy Xing's name is really Wen Ke Xing. And his face is really his face. I do wanna trust him so much. His voice is so soft all of a sudden. Wahhhh.
Oh, so the item they captured was from hanging ghost? But not the real one?
Kissy Xing, you killed the ghost guy while Baby Xu wanted to interrogate him. You say it was a mistake cause you were worried, but you could still very well be nuts guy and make sure nobody gives you away!
I feel a bit like Brad Pitt in Seven. WHAT'S IN THE BOX???!!!!
Zhou Zi Shu! Kissy Xing said the name. HOLY SHIT, HOLY SHIT!!! He recognized him!!!! He knows who he is. But he doesn't say so to his face. Why is everything so confusing???
Should I call Baby Xu Baby Zi Shu from now on?
Noo, don't cut away from smirklord, I wanna keep watching smirklord!
Meh, some stupid guitar guy doing a Jimmi Hendrix impression and lots of dead guys, who might not actually be dead standing in line for the concert tickets.
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Some tall hat guy. Who is he? He gets VIP acess.
Is it just me or do you also find it annoying when they're playing instruments and the music doesn't match the finger movements?
Ok, Hendrix guy is scorpion king. Is he related to the scorpion assassins? Anyway, he's got really cool hair. Total rockstar vibes.
Tall hat guy is trying to be charming and coming across like a record label manager.
Okay, so they both don't know what happened and who killed the other ghost guy. Oh, wait, is tall hat guy the one who stole the glazed armor from uncle Zhao? Is the item that Kissy Xing and Baby Zi Shu captured a piece of glazed armor??? :O
Ok, tall hat guy is changing ghost.
Back to Smirklord! YES!
Okay, Baby Zi Shu figured out the item box thing? Is the blue glass thing the glazed armor??? Tbh, it looks a bit like the plastic part of some kid's braces.
Yooo, Kissy Xing coming in hot with the rabbit dowry.
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Whoa, Baby Zi Shu just throws the glazed armor over to Kissy Xing, like it's no big deal. He really really doesn't want it. Nice return gift, though.
Okay, what is this flirting? Baby Zi Shu keeps stating that he's a bad guy you need to be terrified of, much like Kissy Xing kept saying he's a good guy. And now he's calling Kissy Xing a trouble.
LOL, Kissy Xing agrees on the gift idea. He wants to carry it on his body. Nice.
K, k, it's uncle Zhao's glazed armor. The kid must have his own armor somehow. And the ghost guys are trying to play all the other parties and make them doubt each other. I see.
Kissy Xing is so whipped, wow. He'll do anything, including gutting the rabbits.
LOL, they're trying to give the kid food. Like that EVER worked before at all. No, uncle Zhao, you dimwit, he does NOT have a good appetite, lol.
Why is everybody giving the kid a hard time about crying. His family got murdered, his two adopted dads left him all alone with the two weird uncles... Of course he's gonna cry. Duh.
Ah, geez, Uncle Shen, just shut up. You know nothing. (he's not smart enough to be called a-hole guy anymore, sorry)
Okay, so, three glazed armor pieces have been stolen from their owners. But Uncle Zhao still has his? Then whose piece was stolen the other night? What? And who is brother Lu? Was that the kid's dad?
Now there's two more older guys, who are they? Oh, one is Lord of Broken Sword Manor. Wait, wasn't that magenta guy? Or was that his son? Somebody PLEASE fill me in here.
The other one is brother Yu, whoever that is.
Seriously, every time pleated skirt soldier boss jerk uncle shen a-hole guy opens his mouth I wanna slap him.
Kissy Xing and Baby Zi Shu are wearing new clothes. When and where did they change? Were they together when they changed? Hehe, I need to know. For science.
They are returning to the bamboo woods and the bodies from the previous night are gone. Kissy Xing asks why Baby Zi Shu had the antidote to the hallucination drug. Actually, good question. Baby Zi Shu, why DID you have the antidote? Oh, it's a Window of Heaven thing?
WHATWHATWHAT? The illusion makes people see what they WANT THE MOST? And Baby Zi Shu drops this knowledge just like that while WE know that Kissy Xing called him by his real name, i.e. saw HIM, whilst under the illusion??? WHAT???
Nooo, Kissy Xing, why are you lying? Why won't you tell what you saw when you hallucinated? I wanna know too, gah!!!
Yo, Baby Zi Shu DEVELOPED the illusion drug? As a sleep remedy, lol. Nice.
K, who's the guy in the carriage at Sanbai Manor? Han Ying. Who is that? Have we seen him before?
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Did Baby Zi Shu just tell Kissy Xing the truth about himself killing people, setting them on fire etc.? That came out super smooth.
They're talking about this heroes conference that was mentioned before, but I have no idea what it is, and what it relates to. I'm so bad at remembering TV series plotlines... I'm assuming that this conference is where the uncles take the kid to.
Aww, Baby Zi Shu keeps close by and watches over the kid.
Kissy Xing wants 30 copies of the glazed armor piece. And he is freaking rich, man.
Waaaah, my purple queen! I've missed her so much. And she's kept the other girls around. And they're playing strip mahjong, apparently, lol. Yes, good for her! Also, Bechdel test passed! Nice.
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Where are they anyway? Which town is this? Was this mentioned, did I miss it?
K, so Kissy Xing wants to pay the two girls out so they'll leave (very obviously), but they don't want to. Is he going to make my queen kill them after all? And she gives him nuts in return. Hmm. I mean, seriously. He MUST be nuts guy. There were SO MANY hints.
Oh, he lets them stay and become My queen's servants.
What? What is this secret plan? What are they gonna do with the fake pieces of glazed armor?
Noooooo, don't end here!!!!!
Wahhh
Okay, what have I learned: Baby Zi Shu's real name! And that Kissy Xing knows him from somewhere. Also learned what glazed armor pieces look like. My queen loves playing strip mahjong. And people are meeting up for some heroes conference.
Goals for future episodes: Find out how Kissy Xing and Baby Zi Shu know each other. Finally finish that name chart thing and add all the new people, omg.
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staliasjeronica · 3 years
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Riverdale S5 Ep15 Thoughts *Spoilers*
Thoughts under cut to keep tag clean!
- I’m so fucking excited and hyped for this ep. I saw my entire tl on twitter SCREAMING so I can tell I’m going to love this ep. I mean, why wouldn’t I, focused eps are *chef’s kiss*
- THE OPENING OMG ALREADY PERFECTION! I’ve missed Valerie and Melody 🥺🥺
- “babe” SCREAMING BYE “MY LOVE” “BABY” I CANNOTTTT
- When Riverdale is able to write relationships within two minutes, just not for bhva asdfghjkl; its so funny to me tbh anyways they’re so cute pls
- JOSIE 💞💞💞 TABITHA BEING A FANGIRL DAHFKJADSGF we love “in the flesh, in the faux fur"
- the song, the flashbacks… I’m gonna be dead by the end of this oMG CHUCK AND JOSIE </3 they deserved a chance. Archosie, another couple who deserved more AND SWOSIE!!!
- Omg Val and Mel joining in the song FUCK this is why they should leave the actual singers to the songs/musicals because when they force it, it’s all cringe.
- MS. NEWMAR? “No live music”… okay sure like it’s happened before lol. The ONLY people we know who live in the Pembrooke are Hiram and Veronica, and everyone else don't seem rich enough to live there (but again they never show anything to explain so we wouldn’t know) so like… suffer Hiram <3 Josie is more important
- “Nice to know you’re still a little bitch.” GO OFF JOSIE!
- TABITHARONNIE!!!!!!!!!!!! If only you didn’t buy a football team or a firetruck, but at least she didn’t do it anyways to fuck Tabitha’s idea up. But then again she’s not Betty lol
- Teaching a music class at Riverdale 🥺🥺🥺
- Alexandra Cabet?? Oh that’s the girl from the stills I was wondering who the hell that was lfajsdkf VERONICA HELPING FIND SOMEONE TO INVEST IN POP’S/TABITHA AWW we love our good girl Veronica Lodge
- JOSIE’S OUTFIT FUCKKKK and them singing broooooo
- Josie seeing Archie 🥺🥺🥺
- nO NOT THAT BEING MY RINGTONE NOO
- Jeronica sitting together muah
- JOSIE CALLING OUT JUGHEAD AND BETTY AND CHERYL we love that for her! But yeah guys chill tf out with making plans that involve her… without asking her
- SWEET PEA OMG “WELL YOU WANT A RIDE” I’M GONAN FUCKING FAINT
- THE MAKEOUT SESSION FIASUDJKHFBDSJKHFUGDBJNSDFIHKJ THE HAIR THAT’S DANGLING
- SP sleeping bby and him being soft UGH BABYYYYYY. HIM NOOT WANTING HER TO LEAVE FUCK MEEEEEEE god they’re so cute they deserved so much betttter
- OMG SP BEING A LITTLE LOVESICK PUPPY I’M GONNA BE SICKKKKK HOW CUTE the second I can make gifs of this ep……
- Josie being gobsmacked at their performance ahhhhhhh!!!
- VALERIE EATING UP THE STAGEE OKAY GIRL I SEE YOU
- OH HELLO TONI! Omg little shop of horrors!
- THOSE BLUE POP JACKETS…. I WANT!
- it was so weird that Kevin was just… there and then he disappears like what was the point of him being there?
- TWENTY YEARS? girl what—why so long?
- Josie’s dad died huh :(
- She knew Josie would go to Riverdale 😭😭
- Considering my mom died like last month this hits so fucking hard right now FUCK
- All of her dad’s songs 🥺😭💔
- Melody having Valerie’s back 😭😭
- NO WE ARE NOT CHANGING THE MILKSHAKES BITCH! First black owned business in town, a LEGACY! Go Tabitha 🥺🥺
- no but I’m crying. “I just wanna sing with you one more time.” STOP
- Josie and the Pussycats deciding to help save Riverdale 🥺🥺🥺
- Veronica next to Fangs my besties! Also of course curdle is a Josie fan fadsfjksdfhajs
- God their voices are just so good together
- That little Archosie moment BRUH
- ARCHIE?!?!?!? KISSING KEVIN!?!?!? BRO BRO BRO
- “There is no better spot to play music than here.” Yeah Alexandra or whatever your name is mmhm
- Josie singing a song for her dad 🥺😭💔❤️
- FANGS AND CHERYL HELPING TONI HAVE THE EBABY BRUHHHH also Sweet Pea in the back muah also also BARCHIE SITTING IN A BOOTH BY THEMSELVES!
- “Typical Riverdale, the Pussycats getting upstaged by something.” “Better a baby than a dead body."
- It’s a boy 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 also we see that foreshadowing for Freddie Andrews! Barpregnancy here we come!!
- Veronica in leather muah
- That fake baby love it. wasn’t her grandfather awful to her? But anyways Anthony <3
- I’M IN IT FOR THE LONG HAUL, MARRIED OR NOT <3
- Sweet Pea in plaid muahhhh Sweet Pea wanting to leave with her I COULD BE YOUR ANYTHING FUCKKKK I hope this isn’t a send off for Sweet Pea (but also that means they can’t fuck with his character, and if there IS a pussycats spin off as there should be, he might show up there because Swosie endgame!) this definitely gives off pilot vibes “You’re gonna be hearing from us again” THE OUTRO? Nah there HAS to be a spin off
- and back to the crazy for next week
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irskth · 4 years
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Haechan : Yes I hate you! - Part 1
Description : You and Donghyuck have a weird relationship, he appeared in your life during a stressful time and in a way helped you forget about it, by creating even more chaos as you got to know him better.
Warnings : Kind of a bad boy hyuck but still soft and funny savage ; Angst ; probably going to be suggestive (I don't know where to take this and I'm just going to write it as i go along) ; some fluff expected(?).
not proof read
A/N : It's not my first time writing a Fic but I haven't done it in some years and they have all been crap so let's see how this goes.
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- Hell no I am not doing that - you whisper to yourself after reading his text message, somehow leaving you speechless at his audacity.
" No thanks I want sleep " you text him back typing fast as you wanted to go to sleep soon.
" Why not? It'll be fun I promise! " he's persistent and annoying and you know he won't give up dragging you to that party he's been talking about all week.
" btw I'm at your doorstep, come down bish " he texts and you go down just to check and he really is at that damn doorstep.
- I already told you I'm not going - you said, stern look on your face but he just chuckled looking at your pajamas.
- You don't look that threatening with those bunny pants - he said annoying the shit out of you - come onn, you're always in your room never leaving your house, you're so boorinng - his whining face was cute.
- what's wrong with being boring?! -
- idk, being boring I guess? - he answered, ironic tone in his voice - come on, I'll buy you that game you've been talking about, just come this once pleaaasee - he begged, pout in his face.
you couldn't say no to the best game you've been dreaming about "Nier Automata" all you could talk about was playing it one day and hyuck was tired of your conversations being only about that game.
- fine I'll go, but only because of the game! - you said, going to your room to grab a sweater and some pants while hyuck was smilling proudly at your doorstep.
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still not happy about the idea of going to a party in the middle of the night you were still happy at the thought of your new game arriving soon, for free.
- what are we doing at this so called party? - you asked, the way to the house where the party was held was quite long and you were going on foot beside hyuck.
- well it's technically not a party - he said a little high pitched sound to his voice.
- so what it is then? - raised eyebrow on your face.
- kinda a sleepover? like just some friends hanging out, I don't even know why you dressed up lol - he said laughing at your fast combination of clothes and attempt at makeup.
- YOU TOLD ME IT WAS A PARTY! - you said, angry tone, still hyuck could only laugh at your angry expressions.
- yeah I know, I wanted to know if you'd still come if I said it was a party - he said low laughing.
- yeah okay, only for my precious game tho - you said still daydreaming about your game.
- man you and your games, could you pay a little more attention to me? - he said pouting while hitting your head.
- Ouch? why would I pay attention to you wtf? we're not even friends lol - you said, savageness in your eyes.
- yeah I hate you lol, idk why we even hang out, don't even know your name clown - you roll your eyes at his nickname.
- yeah lol wtf, you're kidnapping me - you say laughing at the end for how stupid you sound.
- I don't even like that much lol.
- yeah but you don't hang out with anyone else - he responds, tone in his voice deeper than before - you're a loser lol - he laughs it off before taking your hand to arrive at the so called house.
it seemed quiet, no loud music or flashing light so you assumed it was just friends hanging out.
- so like what are we going to do? it's not like I know any of your friends - you said before entering the house.
- relax and just try to get to know people, you might like them - he said reassuring you.
upon entering the house a guy greeted donghyuck and then motioned at you.
- is this your girl? - he said pointing at you, funny look on his face as if mocking you.
- no, actually we just know each other and she was bored so I brought her here.
- liar, I was not bored and I'm only here for the game you promised to buy me. - you said crossing your arms.
- yeah yeah, I know - he laughed it off - so what we doing tonight?
- just some drinking and games, you up for it? - the guy said arriving at the living room.
- you know I'm always up for it jeno - hyuck answered, arm around jeno's shoulder.
we sat down on the floor covered with blankets to make it comfortable and some girls were there already under the influence of alcohol.
- damn you brought all the pretty girls around - hyuck said smiling cheekily at some girls and obviously flirting.
you felt out of place, and he noticed that smiling and introducing you - so like this is Y/N and I don't really know how to explain our relationship cause like, I don't even know her - you rolled your eyes, smiling at the people around you.
- well you could've brought someone prettier - some guy commented, arms around two girls while drinking from a bottle.
hyuck didn't answer and only laughed it off, so you took it as your chance to throw a comment - glad you didn't find me attractive, didn't want to end up as one of those chicks - you said, not amused with the atmosphere you were ready to leave when you hyuck grabbed your arm for you to sit down.
- come on he was just joking right jaemin? apologise to her - hyuck said, as if warning him - yeah whatever - that dude said back? paying more attention to the other girls.
hyuck offered you a drink but you refused - I am not drinking in an unknown person's house -
- come on, just to help you relax, no one's gonna hurt you, at least not physically - he said joking tone in his voice.
- no hyuck, I don't risk my life like that - you still refused and he just took the drink to his lips turning to jeno to ask him something.
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the night was going along, you looked at your phone and it was already 4 am, worried you decided to leave but hyuck turned his attention to you for the first time after offering a drink.
- hey where do you think you're going? - he asked clearly drunk.
- to my house, I have one you know? - you answered ready to leave.
- noo come on you haven't played a single game, you're no fuun Y/N - he was clinging to you.
- hyuck get off I have school early tomorrow - you tried to get him off of you but he was to persistent.
- she calls you hyuck bro, just fuck her already what are you even waiting for? - jaemin guy was really getting on your nerves this night.
- sorry I am not interested, besides I don't even know this guy and he is no one to me - you said angry enough for the night.
- she ain't worth it anyways - you heard hyuck said while still on top of you.
you pushed him off and got up going home at a steady pace, angry plastered all over your expressions and you swore to yourself to never hang out with anyone again, especially donghyuck.
- waiit - you heard behind you and someone grabbing your arm
- I am not interested in listening to anything you have to say, i shouldn't have come here and I don't even want that stupid game anymore, why do I even bother hanging out with you?! - you sad angry still walking foward.
- you have no one else to talk to, everyone hates you and your bitch personality - hyuck said and you stopped on your tracks.
you turned around only to meet a drunk donghyuck, cheeks flushed red and eyes almost closed his posture giving away how drunk he was.
you slapped him hard, making a sound through the night that people could clearly hear amidst the silence - you do not know me. - you said calm yet your angry tone was clear you turn away from him and kept going to your house.
as if unbothered by your slap he stood there with a sarcastic smile - actually I do know you miss Y/N - all he said before he also turned away to go back to his friends.
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a/n : working on this with enthusiasm, also is this too short or is it okay? please let me know.
part 2
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breaniebree · 4 years
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A Second Chance Chapter 219
I received an amazing number of reviews on this chapter and I wanted to share them/address some of them here to show my immense appreciation for those who take the time to drop me a line or two for what I write.
Some of you have decided after this chapter you can no longer follow my story and while it saddens me, I expected it.  I write first for myself and I know where I want this story to go and while I hope you all keep reading it -- I know that not everyone will continue it. 
Devereaux13: I can’t. You really just did that to us? Started this story with a oh! Sirius is gonna live! But NOO u had to frick us all over. Oh my god. I love you for this story but hate you for this story. I cried more this time than the cannon one. Goddamn
Lightningscar: Huh, well, judging from the reviews, this chapter is getting you a lot of heat... personally, I though it was great in many ways, both in action, description of thoughts/feelings and great descriptions of what was going on. My biggest beef, though, gotta be this: *Ginny grabbed Luna's hand and the two of them climbed onto the wolverine's back* Ehm, it is likely it was explained in previous chapters, and if memory serves, Animagi are generally slightly larger than their natural counterparts, but... a wolverine is generally about the same size as a medium dog, shoulder height being around 30-45 cm (12-18 inches), 65–107 cm (26–42 in) long (not counting the tail). Basically, Ginny and Luna are crawling on top of a Spaniel or a Golden Retriever (on the small size) Yes, wolverines are ridiculously strong compared to their size, capable of carrying prey many times its own size... carrying dragging it. One big difference between carrying something in its powerful jaws, compared to carrying something heavy on its back. A few other minor beefs Ehm, why did Voldemort pull a Jafar on the cat (Lady G, was it?) and not outright kill it? So they got giants wandering down mid London without anyone being the wiser? I'm sure you have thought of the logistics about it :) Well, all in all, great chapter. Things have advanced rapidly compared to canon, for better (less Horcruxes) and worse (Ministry bye-bye)... though, in the latter case, it can be interpreted somewhat ambigious. Fallen as in the place (which was a given, seemed to be completely overrun suddenly... makes one wonder where all of the defence forces went, guess we will find out sooner) or if it has fallen as an orginazation like they did in canon. Curious to see what happens next. Yours sincerely, Lightningscar
Menna Taha: Ok let me just say.. Sirius was going into battle with the intent to save his son, knowing that his Fiancée who he was very much in love with was pregnant with TWINS. I mean you’d think he would be more careful than in the books where he was reckless, lonely, rusty and under house arrest in a place he hated. Also the ministry fell! Just like that! After all the preparation and the relations with the french, Bulgarian and Russian ministries AND the fae and the army they made AND the warning they recieved! What were they fucking sleeping! I love you please don’t hate me.
They were not sleeping, but they weren’t prepared like they should have been.  It’s a problem that will be addressed.
HGRHfan35: Well...shit... This was a really bad idea: to read this in bed. How the blazes do you expect me to sleep, now?!
Daddy: WTF! Why end it here. WHY!
Wade Bradford: Noooooooooooooooo!
AZfangirl: i cant believe you killed sirius. this one really hurts
Ofglitterandgiggles: I’m broken
axelvaz: Started this about a week ago and I’m finally all caught up! But oh my gosh! What a cliffhanger! Sirius!
Emeralds and Rubies: I thought we might get off easy when Pettigrew fell through the veil, butI’m heartbroken for Harry and Zee, but you definitely did this whole plot point justice.
maximusrexmundi: Eeeeeehhhhh so I was with you until the very end. I just can't imagine a Voldy who is objectively in a weaker position (than in the books) being able to muster a force that could attack and defeat a FULLY prepared ministry who both knew he was coming AND had international allies
Runningtwiceasfast: I have to say I am incredibly impressed with this chapter. I am obviously sad as I was in canon when Sirius died but due to the more uplifting tone of your work overall that you would shy away from a turn like this. Sirius' death is so important in canon a it really is a turning point in the story. Obviously when Cedric died it was sad but Sirius' death made everything all the more real. Your Harry has gotten so much more of a life and childhood than canon Harry but he too is now faced with the reality of life without Sirius. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Joanne: Wow! I’m so sad. I’ve been listening to Led Zeppelin in honour of Siri. I had hoped that this part of canon would be ignored but alas. War is war. Amazing storytelling: you made us feel this loss and that takes talent. I both dread and look forward the next chapter. Will Harry take Ginny with him? Will the breakup occur? Did Remus and Tonks make it out? Will there be a funeral? So many questions! Enjoy your birthday and rest while we all grieve.
Ahugefun: I need you to undo sirius death. Im not joking He shouldnt Not with zee pregnant and harry so attached to him Its not fair to us the readers who enjoyed your story so much andddd already mourned sirius a little bit when he was kissed before you changed that.. Im hoping that you wont kill remus and tonks in the end of the war. U are your own story and if somthing happen in jkr world doesnt mean it should here!
Everything that happens in JKR’s world is what inspired me to write my story so of course it affects it.  Some will be the same, some will not -- includes character death.  Not everyone will die who did in canon, but some will, and some who survived in canon, will die here.  
jakegarrett94: nooooooo not sirius
Leaf Ranger: ...I'm sorry...but this...this is exactly why I called fucking bullshit in the last chapter. Because of all this. This. My problem isn't the pacing of your story. My problem is all this death and carnage and bullshit happened...not because of something realistic...but because the Grey lady, for no reason, was a cryptic dumbass. That is my problem. While it'd be hard to swallow, I'd have accepted most of what happened in this chapter if there was an ACTUAL reason, in the story, as to why they weren't able to be told where the diadem was. but there wasn't. The only reason was solely because YOU wanted it that way. And it's your story, fine, but at the very least, there should be a damn good reason WHY, in the story itself, things happen the way they do. It should never...EVER be just because you, the author, want it to happen that way. because then it breaks the immersion of the reader, if something happens solely for the sake of you, the author, having it happen that way. *sighs* To be honest? I'm sorry, but this, this just is too much. You killed off Sirius and had the Ministry fall DESPITE the preparations they had already made, despite the warnings they had. That just...no. I'm sorry, but no. I'm done. Thanks for what was a pretty entertaining story up to this point, but after this? Just nope. It's not worth it. It really isn't.
Sorry to hear that, but again, it is obvious to us the readers where the diadem is, but not to them.  The Grey Lady can be cryptic if she wants as she’s dead and has nothing to lose, it’s up to our heroes to find the answer.  Sorry you feel it’s not worth it, thanks for reading as long as you did.
Redplayer1998: Please tell me it's a trick sirius can't be dead not after 200 chapters of building his character please no
Dutchie: Oh man Sirius died, bummer! Still a great story.
Whiton: Hey I’m a bit late but I wanted to say happy belated birthday. I love this story it’s fun it’s sad it’s thought provoking and is just a wonderful thing to read. Hope this finds you well and hope you keep writing.
AkashiyaHyrule: What the... this can't be it. What's the point of creating all that military platoons, and gathering allies-if the Ministry are just going to fall so fast? This feels waaay to early for this story plot to occur. But that's just my opinion. Hopefully you got a plan that works, and it's believable. It's also in my opinion that if Sirius Black's "death" is true (hope it's not), Zacharias should not be with anyone else or find someone else to replace him. I suspect you might do something of that nature. You haven't shy away from all the random romances that occurs, even in minor characters. Don't think I haven't notice your tendencies to ship characters! Anyways, it would be annoying, weird, not the same, awkward, and off-putting. I hope that will never happen. But then again, this your AU, so you have the final say on what you want to implement. I invested a lot of my time in this piece of fanfic, so I don't wish for it be ruined by very disagreeable choices (it's all subjective, of course). I mean no disrespect, as I know writing is a tough pastime, and you deserve to be commended for the amount of time you put into your AU. So, good luck. You deserve your break, and hopefully things will be explained Chapter 220! P.S: He's really dead, isn't he? I guess I would have to expect the death of Remus, Tonks, Fred Weasley, Colin Creevey, Lavender Brown (at least in the movies), Dumbledore, Snape, Moody, Dobby, etc, etc. P.S. Why the hell am I just naming character deaths?
Guest: There . Are . No . Words. Saz J
Guest: I, like so many other readers here, have absolutely loved the changes you have made to the story of Harry & Sirius - it has been a wonderful story that we have looked forward to reading every week. However, as much as I love your story, I am upset and disappointed that you had this last chapter play out the way it did. You have, for 218 chapters, written about great changes and strengths for Harry, all the others, and especially Sirius. To have this last chapter happen almost like the original version (book & movie) is a bit of a let-down to your earlier chapters. I will still look forward to reading your story, but maybe without the enthusiasm I have had this past year.
KittenWithAnAx: damn it! I'm crying! Why do I always hope that Sirius survive? even when I watch the movie I hope he don't die! I hate and I love you! yes A break is need! let us mourn in peace! my baby died! and I know that in two weeks I will be back! because I'm too curious and I love how you write! I will still mourning Sirius but I will be back... anyway I will go cry in the shower! have a nice two week break! (and Happy Birthday!)
Blitz90: Hello Breannie ! First of all, I wanna say that your story is awesome ! I really like many of the change that you bring to the HP world! Congrats on that ! Now, about chapter 219, nice chapter all around but I felt that the training they got change nothing but maybe because of the stress to fitgh Death Eater explain it to... maybe you can show me the light on this ? Second, the death of Sirius... I must say that I am disapointed about that. I know that you said in the beginning that it will be ultimately a Hinny story but for me, Sirius was the heart and soul of you fiction. Lets hope that he is just in shock or king of a coma !
Qarz: You put a lot of effort into this, writing so many words is nothing to sneeze at and it shows dedication. However, you don't seem to understand that actions have reactions. If you make changes in Canon then the whole story has to change to make any modicum of sense. You didn't do that and the more than 1.5m words are a waste since it led to the same place and somehow things are even worse than in said Canon. I truly pity those who read this huge story just to be disappointed.
nesciamema: Kinda disappointed by Harry's shoddy fighting since they've all been training for a while, the only one who seemed to be thinking strategically was Ginny before she was taken out. Hoping Zee doesn't miscarry and fights for the babies rights as heir to the Blacks. No way in hell should any Malfoy hold the title with what just happened.
goldenone: thank you for posting this on my birthday it was a great gift but also HOW COULD YOU IMA CRY
aj613: ohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygod I was hoping Sirius would be spared holy shit oh my god whyyy? Amazingly written as always, BUT WHY?! THEY WERE GONNA GET MARRIED AND HAVE BABIES AND HARRY CALLED HIM DAD I—
Rufus777: I understand why you had to kill Sirius. But it still makes me sad. Well written as always. I've been a fan since chapter one. I had forgotten about the Dursley stuff. Good on you to remind everyone of those memories. Keep up the awesome -rufus
kyle.grimm90: I am so sad that Sirius died again... I was really hoping he would survive this time. I love you story is so addictive but I wish that would have gone different. I was so excited he didn’t go through the veil I was jumping for joy and then wammm he died. I won’t stop reading but it killed me when he died.
Haillie: WHAT! OH COME ON!
yunkol76: HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Thanks for the present! Now time to enjoy another GREAT chapter
coloredwords: First things first. A very happy birthday to you. I hope you have (had) a wonderful day. Second I wish you no riot reviews for your birthday. As much as I want to know what happens next, I respect you too much to shout and riot. But what a chapter! Damn. When Peter fell through the curtain I thought for a second Sirius would be safe. But alas. My last hope lies within some time turner or time room miracle. And all of a sudden we skipped right to the beginning of DH. I'm so curious to see what happens next. Have fun writing and enjoy your two weeks off. I will be here, waiting patiently.
Fruitcake49: I would rather this entire chapter be a nightmare. Why do Sirius and Harry always get the short dirty end of the stick? Such terrible childhoods and Sirius has to die leaving Harry alone. I gotta tell you if anyone other than a character in a story were put under this much pain and unhappiness they would crack and cease to function. As much as I like this story, Harry needs Sirius. I'm tired of people killing him off.
Steelcode: NO NO NO NO NO! HE WAS GOING TO GET MARRIED...HE HAS KIDS! WHAT ABOUT HARRY'S KIDS! WHAT ABOUT SIRIUS' FUTURE! PLEASE TELL ME THIS IS ANOTHER JOKE PLEASE!
X.pix.X: Happy birthday, and great chapter
Undead Gothic Princess: you are mean and a god all at once! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time reading this, then took a sigh of relief when pettigrew died cuz I thought "hey, Sirius will be fine now, he survived!" then wham! I dont think he's really dead dead though. they'll either be a way so that it was polyjuice or maybe they use a time turner. something better happen so that he just appears through the front door/hospital wing and is like "whys everyone so down when my hansome face is here?!" please let it be true, otherwise I dont think I can go on in this cruel world xxx
HarryPotterLover2422: Such an amazing chapter! I have enjoyed reading this story for quite some time now and look forward to each new chapter. I am so sad with what happened to Sirius, but I am looking forward to what’s to come! I loved the Lucius called Theo his son that was amazing! I think one of my favorite things about this story, other than how amazing it is, is how you humanize especially the Malfoy family in terms of Draco and Theo. Amazing as always! Happy belated birthday! Can’t wait for more! ️
Leo: Happy Birthday! I was so excited to see that you have written this chapter, until I read it, I can't believe you've hit us with the double whammy. This chapter both made me cry and amazed at your incredible writing skills. I hope you carry on and finish this story. However, most importantly, please, please please, please, puppy eyes please can you post the chapter. I know you said you won't but imagine puppy eyes, you know you can't say no to that. Keep us the brilliant work.
I am imagining puppy eyes, but no, I’m sorry.
GoldenPotterFan: Chapter 219 and the first time I am commenting. Started reading this story between Christmas and New Year 2018 and read all chapters up to then by the time I went back to work. Since then I have waited for updates every week. Somehow, I don't believe that Sirius is dead. Just a feeling I have. I also think Lucius might be working against Voldemort while still not quite working for the Order. I would not be surprised if he saves Sirius somehow. I cannot wait for another update. PS Happy Birthday, I hope you had a great day :)
devonleney27: HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY! Thank you for the gift of this chapter, sorry I didnt get you anything!
DoodleBug78: OMFG cannot believe that! Really?!
witchyromy: mmmm i would have thought that with the time living in the magical world, and all the extra training harry has done, with sirius and remus and mischa and the rest of the group as well in the extra defense lessons that this would have gone better, they almost only used stupify and some 1st year spells. The whole thing is 80% the same as the original... i have to say i am a bit disappointed.
Sorry to hear that, but I kept what I needed to keep in there for a reason and I hope you will stick around to see that, but if not, well thanks for reading.
Guest: Welp, I’m crying. I’ve been following this story for a while, and honestly didn’t expect to be so upset about Sirius’ death, again. You’ve done wonderful work at recreating this moment. There are so many tiny complexities in this rendition and I can’t wait to see what comes next. Hoping zee’s fall didn’t hurt those babies. Thank you for your work. ️
snowball0709: Happy birthday! Hope you have a great day:) Now to the story.. HOW COULD YOU KILL SIRIUS? This story is all about his second chance! And the wedding, the twins... come on, siriusly! I really hope you have something up your sleeve and that he miraculously lives somehow. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Lolikiano: I'm so excited you posted early! I can live with the cliffhanger as an exchange! Your stories have inspired me to write my own fanfiction and I can't thank you enough for that! I'm looking forward to your next update in two weeks! P.S. I love the "Surprise" pregnancy (which i TOTALLY called when Zee got ill!) I can't wait to read Harry's reaction!
Maggie1874: I'm so sad and disappointed that Sirius died. I was really hoping he'd live in your story.
Krazyasibe: Happy birthday! But why would you do that! I love Sirius!
alix33: No need for anyone to shoot Nott senior in his undersized wanker, Ginny will just have bat bogeys coming out of it rather painfully (and satisfactorily for us readers) in a jiffy. Dumbles had sweet fanny adams to do with the six being able to turn into animaguses. I like Lady Godiva's way of dealing with Death Eaters far better than I do any of the light side's humans' only effective for a couple of seconds stupefying. That vile bitch Bellatrix killed Sirius! I wonder which charm was used on the statue which made it keep Harry away from Dumbles and Tom Riddle junior.
wheezing-reader: Happy Birthday! Your story is probably one of my all-time favorite fics! Saying that WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK! No. This is not okay. I'm not okay with this.
Josh: Can't believe you killed Sirius! Hope something miraculous is going to happen. This is supposed to be about "A Second Chance" for him, so he needs to be alive!
Menna Taha: Happy birthday! But still how fucking dare you
jmdaz44: I know Sirius canon-ly dies in the fifth book but I was hoping you’d spare us somehow, especially after the proposal and pregnancy. Instead you were just fattening us up to be slaughtered. You’re cruel. I love the story and your writing but it hurts. It hurts. I truly hate your Bella. I should have waited to read this until this evening because now I feel like my whole day is ruined and it is just starting. I hope you’ve got something feel-good planned because I’m pretty down on this right now. I guess that parallels where we are in the story; things are getting real and nothing is for certain anymore. Hope is a dangerous thing.
alyson3il: First of all, HAPPY BIRTHDAY! I hope you have a wonderful day, and short hiatus to get everything straight! Second of all, WHHHHYYYYYY?! WHY? Why? Y? y? WHHYYYY! I thought Sirius would be SAFE, you lured us into security with Peter, but then it just HAD to happen. I got my hopes up that it wouldn't be him, he had Zee, he had the twins on the way, HE WAS GONNA GET MARRIED! I get that things happen, BUT THIS THING DIDNT NEED TO HAPPEN, or maybe it did. You're the author, you have a plan in place, and you know what you're doing. I'll just be hurt for the next two weeks.
Miss Elyon: 1) Happy birthday dear ! All good for you! 2) Thad Nott - It was too late! (I loved that Lucy killed this son of a troll) And Wormtail ... I'm sure you will be very well received in hell! 3) Bella ... fucking crazy bitch ... something will come to you and it won't be pretty! 4) More importantly - You made me cry so fucking hard with Sirius. I went into depression until you post again. I truly love your story (although it makes me cry like a baby!). The pain at his death was more brutal than the book. I know you have something planned (I hope) and I will be reading (with a sniffling nose) the next chapter! To cure this chapter I'll read the whole story again and cry all over again ... I think I like to suffer ... kkkk See you in the next chapter ;)
chefke: o.m.f.g. omfg. I'm freaking out
xcherry91x: OMG NOOOOOO! I was hoping that Sirius wouldn’t die. I cried when I read that. The babies! They gots no daddy
SuperBossy: Not happy at all.
rolly21: I can’t believe you killed Sirius. I was really hoping that you wouldn’t.
LilyBlack18: I was so not expecting that. I was sure Sirius wouldn't die . My god, reading his death again was pure torture. At least Harry still have Zee, Remus, etc. I'm so sad, though... I really thought you wouldn't keep that part of the story, and you gave me false hope when Peter died x)
greg.is.wilson: You are evil.
Mutt N. Feathers: Yes my dear, I do trust authors. Needless pain is never inflicted by them. I made readers think I killed Sirius too, but instead had other plans. You love him too much. I live in hope. Mutt
supersandman86: Oh man! Not Sirius! He just got his life to perfection. Loving son, a fiance and a child on the way. Nice to see Wormtail redeem himself by shoving zee out of the way and Thaddeus got what he deserved. Now we just need to give Crouch and Bellend Lestrange pain that even they can't endure. This was always the dark point in the whole franchise in my opinion, where Harry felt the most hopeless. Let's see how it goes.
Sirius black411: You are so cruel...so so soooo cruel. They were going to get married...have twins and raise them.. How could you?! I can't imagine what Zee must be going through but she is still there for Harry. She will be a great mother.
Wodril: This Sirius didn't really seem like the guy to be done in while taunting. Not being hit by the killing spell, and the whole "he'll writhe in pain as he dies" spiel makes it a bit more uncertain. I never really appreciated him coming back to life after the dementors, and kinda hope, for the sake of the story, he'll stay dead this time. He will probably show up as an inferi anyway?
Jewels46: Omg... I’m crying! You’ve reduced me to tears. I know it was a very real possibility, but I hoped it wouldn’t actually come to fruition even though I understand the significance. I do really like how you wrote his death though, a much more fitting end. The bit you added with Peter had led me into a false sense of security that the lovable mutt would be safe. I just can’t even right now. Wonderful chapter. I’m going to cry some more and eagerly await the next one
Dianne: Yes I need atleast 2 weeks to emotionally reconstruct myself after this bombshell of a chapter. Deep breaths in and out. Curious about how you've brought a 7th year canon event now itself. I'm not sure I even took in everything coz I was crying so hard and couldn't read clearly, was reading this at clg and I surprised everyone by suddenly crying out loud and sobbing :'( and everyone was baffled when I said one of my most favourite characters just died painfully and I was crying for that, but they don't understand the power of reading or the power of HP thankyou for an early update and kudos you're an amazing writer!
purplevictory: That wasn't nice. I mean, happy birthday and everything, but did your present to yourself really have to be the torture of your fans? I know Sirius will be fine, I just don't know how you're planning to get there. Thank you for the early chapter. But, when your birthday celebrations are over you really ought to write "I will stop being mean to my readers" 50 times. You don't have to use a blood quill.
Write lines as punishment?  I don’t have time for that, I need to write the next chapters.
xXMizz Alec VolturiXx: Noooooo I can’t believe that after all this you still killed Sirius! When his life was finally all good with babies on the way!
eternal king of fire: wow this chapter was a tear jerkier poor sirus and zee
speedsONEandONLY: No. Nope. No. I refuse to see this as a real chapter. None of this happened. I mean what was the point of letting them be happy, of getting rid of the Horcrux early. Only to fucking destroy them. To make him want to sacrafice, kill himself anyway. This chapter didn't happen. This is a "what couldve been" I doesn't make any fucking sense. Nor does it for the narrative. So, No. I refuse to think, Believe, You could be so heartless to characters/people you love. That you made us love. I don't see anyway how the story Could really go on, if this chapter actually happened. It reads more like the last Twilight movie from when Aro rips off Carlisles head. Sorry, but no.
Sorry, I guess I’m heartless.  Comparing me to Twilight though, that’s heartless. 
Ari Black-18: I know that this is a war, but please let Sirius escape death again, don't do this please, please make this better, tell me that Remus and Tonks somehow save him, tell me that even tho he is in bad condition he's still alive, don't leave his twins and Harry without a father, don't live Zee without her love, don't rip away Remus's brother from him, give him a second chance from the original story, let him be there with Harry at the end, the world it's already too shitty for it even to suck in a fanfic. Call me naive or delusional, but I actually believe that this is not over, I trust you enough to know that you wouldn't do this, your story it's to damn good to lose such a character just like that, so I know you are going to fix it, you're going to pull a surprise under your sleeve and make us love it so much. I believe in you, I mean you wouldn't just kill Sirius like that, not this Sirius, your Sirius. I trust you, I know you wouldn't do this. Please enjoy your break, chill, eat a lot of snacks, maybe even party a little, and then, please, bring our uncle Siri back.
Seriuslypadfoot: Hey Breanie, very well written as per usual. I hope Sirius isn’t actually dead, as this story is one of the few Sirius and Harry fics that I have thoroughly enjoyed and don’t want his character to end this way. Powerful moment with Malfoy in this chapter, but I wish he showed more backbone and fully went against the death eaters like his family wants. Again, hope Sirius doesn’t end here, the death will really hurt the story in my opinion. But this is your story so write it how you will. Thanks for your hard work!
Thank you!  Malfoy doesn’t have much of a backbone, but I do have a plan for him.  I’m sorry you feel that Sirius’ death hurt the story, I think it’s important for what’s next.
DetroitNate: A review? I hated this chapter. Oh the writing is great as usual, but what happened in it? I hated, loathed, detested it. I hope justice comes and comes quicker than Hinny did in this story cause it is getting too difficult to read of how these vicious bastards seem to get away with anything they want. JKR did two things I can't stand in canon kill off Sirius and Fred and now I'm wondering if this story will follow her on that pattern... I hope not, I really do.
Thank you and I promise, justice will come quicker than Hinny -- as in it won't take another 197 chapters, maybe 196, just kidding! 
Paola1991: So is this death for real or is he coming back? I mean you tricked us once. I guess i kind of assumed you’d never kill him off because it was kind of a sirius fix it story? Where he gets a better life? This took me by surprise. Its primarily why i hate book 5. I thought someone else was gonna die instead. Hes the one character i would never kill i guess. Especially with zee having his kids! Not sure how i feel.
Guest: can i honestly beg something? can you please bring back sirius alive? please? i know u wont do it.. u have a plan with ur story... but as a big big fan of ur story im really really begging will u please?
Queen Raja: Wow. And I thought the book’s death was heartbreaking! Seriously, bravo. I don’t cry easily, and this chapter made me UGLY cry! Waiting until two weeks will be very hard, but I’m glad you’re able to take some much deserved time for yourself and Dusk. Happy Birthday, Breanie!
Maisie: how and why could you do this to mee im cryinggg please say its looking better in the next chapter
midnitewanderer: Dumbass went and reread it. Not gonna lie, it was a brilliant chapter but I am still this close to hunting your ass down and forcing to rewrite Sirius back in. Where’s my angry emoji when I need it. I can’t help but feel that you wrote Zee the way you have specifically for this chapter. Not only does she come into their lives and becomes the best pseudo mom ever written in any HP fanfic, she basically adopts Harry into her entire family. Sure there’s stories out there with the Weasley’s treating him as one of their own but not like this. ZEE’S ENTIRE FAMILY ADOPTS HARRY. Your sneaky ass has been prepping us from the beginning of her intro! He calls them all Grandad/Grandpa, Grandmama/Grandma, etc. so that eventually he sees that he’s never truly alone. Then enter the Weasleys, McGonagall, Rem&Tonks, Andi&Ted, Dumbles, Nev, Lu, Mione, he’s surrounded by so much love. I just know the next chapter is going to be hard for me seeing as I’m a crybaby but damn it to hell, I can’t wait. 2 whole weeks. What am I gonna do?
Thank you.  I guess I was kind of sneaky like that, wasn’t I? 
Zacnelson0628: Breanie... I kinda had a feeling that was going to happen. Still really sad though. I hope you kill of bellatrix in a spectacular manner.
I will do my best -- I do know exactly how it will happen and who will do it.
notthatchhavi: Oh, wow!  I don't know what to say!  This was a extremely well-written chapter When Lucius said that Theo was his son...it was such a moment I went ooooooohhh Well other then that..I cried I literally cried when Sirius died and yes I am still in denial I hope atleast Remus and Tonks will be okay.. Harry needs some support from one father When Sirius died.. it broke my heart.. Harry calling Sirius Dad.. and Sirius saying that Harry was the best thing ever happened to him I feel that he was not saying that just to Harry.. it was to James too because the Potters were the best thing which happened to Sirius I feel really bad for Zee...being pregnant with your fiancée's children and then him dying is not an easy thing to go through But the most importantly...this chapter made me cry I have read many fanfictions.. but i have never cried.. they might have been super good.. but has never made me cry I think the ability for a writer to make the reader both and laugh and cry is extremely important and difficult...I think by this story you have proven yourself as a damn good writer
Having Harry call him dad was vital and every time I tried to change it, I came back to it.
josht1987: Just know, that I am very mad at you you right now. We'll see what happens after the next one. An extremely well written chapter, but... You know what you did.
Daerwin45: not Sirus oh please he is so important it was going so good im sorry i am just a fan and it has been such a great story i did not mean to question your reason. i just was enjoying harrys and Sirus' relationship.
PotterBlondie: Oh my god, I wasn’t expecting Sirius to die! Or for anything to go this badly in one chapter! I hope he gets to escape death again? Pretty please? I hope you had a wonderful Birthday!
midnitewanderer: Nope. I’m done. I’m done. I AM FUCKING DONE! I will have no more toilet tissue by the end of the night. My chicken is currently burning on the stovetop. My emotions are freaking fried right now. Not only was he... UGH! I can’t. I literally can’t right now. I know this is fiction and whatnot, but my heart is hurting. How in the hell did I get so emotionally invested in this damned story?! Now, I’m going to remove my burning chicken and cry in a corner.
scrappy8: OMG what a chapter Poor Sirius is gone
Covley Hatake: Please let Sirius some how had lived. I like cheered when Pettigrew went in the veil instead and then that. You like ripped my heart out with Sirius. Like come on. Still good story but wanted Sirius to be there for the happy ending. I picture Harry though being the best big brother to those babies and protecting the hell out of Zee and the babies. Betting she tells Harry soon as well. Also question if he is dead what does that mean for them claim the Black title? With out him to claim them they would be seen as illegitimate and as the deal with Malfoy was made he could take it? curious on that one.
akshutalankar: well this is a really bad chapter to be posted on birthday... plz give us next soon... make Sirius alive pretty please
shooter124: O my god, I am crying. Please don’t take Sirius from us, Zee needs him and so does Harry! However that death scene was crazy good. I’m hoping that you have this elaborate plan as to why Sirius had to fake his death or something. Please please please say he is still alive, Sirius and Zee have not finished their story yet and Remus needs his best friend. This is my favourite story I have read on FF, you are a fantastic writer and I get excited every time you post!
Wolf's scream: Nice set of Bat-Bogeys, Miss Weasley! Yeah, a ticked-off wolverine is NOT something I'd prefer to cross. Greengrass is there? That's ... something I was not expecting. Yeah, Theo's advice to smash the Prophecy seems pretty sound to me. (With the possible caveat that certain DEs might lose whatever semblance of control that they have...) Seriously, Hermione? That's not a "baby." And in any case, Petrification is not intrinsically harmful: it merely decreases the probability that the Petrified one will pose a danger to himself or others. Sheesh. Somebody needs to get her priorities sorted. :-) I'm a little surprised that the DEs that trapped the teenagers in the Brain Room were using less-than-lethal spells. Granted, I'm rather glad that they did, but I don't understand whys. Well..! Lucy IS good for something, I guess... It's rather a pity that Harry hadn't smashed the Prophecy and grabbed another as a decoy. :-} Oh! What would happen if Harry were to chuck the Prophecy through the arch...? Ah - excellent move, Lady G! :-) Remus was dueling Dolohov? But Harry had Petrified Dolohov just a bit ago... maybe another DE released him, or the spell wore off? So - the Rat did something useful before departing... BTW, a fairly effective dueling technique might be to blast the floor/ground out from under one's opponent. Or merely make it incapable of supporting the opponent's weight. Especially if one is in a structure and not on the bottom floor. Well, at least there's no ambiguity at all regarding Sirius's fate. :-/ Well, laughing at Bella is a pretty good way to ensure that she's even more off-balance, yeah. It's good that Dumbledore addresses Tom by his given name (vs. the nom de guerre that he made up)
Guest: You cant do this Sirius can't be dead! Please let him live! P.S. happy Birthday Seriously though bring Sirius back.
dhnysports88: for the love of god tell me they planned to fake his death, DON'T DO THIS TO US
minerdude: Wow this is a great story, even if you killed Sirius, although with the next chapter I hope we discover thinking he was dead was part of the fog of war. If Sirius is dead it was truly well written to get our guard down by sending Peter though the veil
Old-fashionedAnglophile: What. The. ACTUAL. HELL?! Are you trying to destroy us? And you're making us wait for it? Damn your excellent and captivating writing. I'll be waiting for the next chapter with bated breath.
Thank you (I think).
littlehughesy: WHY? Why must you keep killing off characters that I love!? It's like Game of Thrones all over again! I get that it is canon for Sirius to die at the Ministry, but for fuck's sake can't Harry just have a little less suffering for once? For the love of God, if you kill Remus and Tonks in this story, I am done. Just done. I cannot handle my emotions right now. Okay, venting over. As much as I don't like it, your story is still fantastic. And hey, cheers for the early update and happy birthday!
Atea1793: You... are... absolutely... evil... YOU KILLED SIRIUS, KILLED DEADALUS DIGGLE, LEFT ZAHIRA A PREGNANT WIDOW BEFORE SHE EVEN GOT MARRIED, MAY HAVE LEFT HARRY AN ORPHAN AGAIN, AND HAD THE MINISTRY FALL A WHOLE YEAR EARLIER THAN IN CANON?! I'M STARTING TO THINK YOU'RE AS SICK IN THE HEAD AS VOLDEMORT IS! Excuse me while I spend these next two weeks gathering a mob to go after your twisted ass. The Death Eaters will seem like playground bullies when we come for you...
Guest: Omg. Omg. You actually killed Sirius. I cried. I honestly would have rather see Remus die, but maybe that’s what makes this story stronger and more intense. I definitely need 2 weeks to process this. Poor Zee and poor Harry.
lcwintersoldier: Goddamit how could you kill Sirius :'(
LifeonEarth: Oh come on you hand to bring Marauder into this. This hurts.
I’m sorry, but I thought Marauder deserved to be in Harry’s thoughts.
White Squirrel: Why does everyone feel the need to kill off Sirius even when there's good reason for events to play out differently? Honestly, this whole section felt like it wasn't up to your usual standards. You copied so much from the book, even when they had different people there and a different plan. It would have made more sense and wouldn't have been that hard to choreograph a different battle sequence.
I felt that it was important to keep it similar which I will explain later on, but of course you’re entitled to your opinion.
love reading20613: Oh god no please no
alistark94: What an ending! I gotta say I'm suprised you still killed off Sirius. Great story by the way!
Anixara: Wow, I find this story just in time for the latest chapter to be THAT. God damn it. Now I have to figure out if waiting for the next chapter is even worth it with how much that fucked with my emotions.
Breaniefan: This was so unrepresentative of your characters to just shove them back into JK's exact plot. This Harry would never have been so impulsive, Ginny and Theo would have escaped, the well trained Order would have been quicker on the mark and more effective. This was just lazy writing, taking so much of the original story and just shoehorning it in - I'm so disappointed! Also why the fuck would you kill Sirius? The whole point of fanfic is to FIX those stupid character deaths from the original, not go and do it again. I've followed this story from the start and loved it, but if Sirius is still dead next chapter... You've lost a reader.
I’m sorry that I’ve lost a reader over this, but as I said, I knew he would die from the first chapter.  Harry would be that impulsive because Ginny was kidnapped and there's no way he wouldn't try to save her.  She and Theo may have been able to escape but not unscathed.  I don’t believe that fan fiction is made to “fix” stupid character deaths because the original story is amazing and I’m getting the chance to play with the characters we all love so much and Sirius had a second chance on life and he lived it.
Adelite: AAAAH. aaAAAH. I came here for a BETTER WORLD and you killed SIRIUS BLACK of ALL PEOPLE and just when HE LEARNED HE IS HAVING TWINS?!?? I swear to god AaaaaahahahAH the original didn’t hurt this bad I read 219 chapters in 2 weeks just to be welcomed with this I am absolutely gonna riot and also what happened to Tonks? P.S if you kill Rem, Tonks and Fred in the battle of Hogwarts I will personally pee your pants
Pegg7: I can not believe it!!It has been chapter that i'm saying something bad was about to happen, but not this bad!!!!!The only think i can do now is wait and speculate: you had wormtail die through the veil and not Padfoot, so, maybe, there is a chance, i have hope! By the way, the chapter itselff is good, nothing less to say... I'm going to have a lot of speculation as how the thing are going to be next, so i'll dread this 2 next weeks Love you (a little less) as always
lovelyellie: that really hurt my feelings damn
phoenixmaiden13 (Lady Phoenix): I so hate this chapter, yet it was so good. Still can't believe you killed off Sirius, I thought he was safe for a minute but I guess not. At least they will have a body to bury. I'm going to go cry now.
They will have a body to bury and I hope that chapter makes you all feel the emotion as much as I did writing it.
MrToddWilkins: But he is still alive! The blood-Harry’s right!
Bosma18: Happy birthday but why did you have to kill Sirius he was one of my most favorite characters he and zee where supposed to marry and live happily ever after I wanted Sirius to die of old age while being surrounded by his grand children
Jmcglynn522: You killed him.... you killed him... he just found out that Zee was preggers, with twins(FYI: Taking antibiotic potions and birth control potions = Twins. Mine just turned 20.).And there’s no do over this time....no time turner.... just... you killed Sirius Black.I love your story, I’m bawling hysterically right now, but I don’t like you very much at the moment.... you killed him....why??? (Happy parts: Ginny preforming the “bat bogey hex” on Thaddeus’s dick for Theo! Lucius killing Thaddeus for hurting Theo, “his son!”. Ron touching “Uranus”. Lady G not dying. Zee not dying. And Pettigrew’s death was to kind.) And Happy Birthday!!!(Even though I may be traumatized for life.)
Pettigrew’s death may have been too kind but I think it was an important turning point for him in that he saved Zee for Sirius.
LordSmidgeon: I'm hoping so much all this was pushed in his head by Voldemort after the brain room to mess with his psyche. I'm hoping he comes to and they are just getting him away from the veil. Or it was all what he saw in the veil. Like honestly, if you have to have someone die please dont kill Sirius (at least not yet).
Siriuslover: Im in denial. He’s not dead.  How could you kill Sirius!! He was the main reason I’ve loved reading this!! Ugh please take it back I’m so sad
kellykat1889: Your evil.
RiverFord: I think I’m going to need two weeks just to recover from this. I’ve absolutely loved this story so far but you literally just killed off my favorite character and I can’t even...
archiveScrapper: Happy birthday! I'm a long time reader and first time reviewer, but I finally felt like I had something to say (plus wishing you a happy birthday is important). I'm actually weirdly... proud? of you for keeping Sirius's death at this point in the story. In the books it's kind of the point at which Harry has to officially grow up, and realize that even though he's a kid, he's the center of a really vicious war where his actions have very real consequences. And he has no one left to fully protect him either. Even in a fic where Sirius matters a whole lot more, and Harry is gonna be a thousand times more hurt by his death, that moment of change, and of Harry accepting his inevitable place in this fight is really important? So I just wanted to say that as much as I'm really sad about Sirius being gone, because I really did enjoy him getting to be happy for once, i think it's an important moment for the story and I'm really happy that it's one that you kept even in a version of this story that's a lot happier than the original story ever was. I've been wondering how you were gonna handle this moment for a long time now, and although I'm definitely gonna go cry about Sirius's death now, I'm really happy with what you decided to do.
xXQueenOfDragonsXx: NONONONONONONOSIRIUS! I WANT TO HATE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW BUT I CANT ‘T
TheOneWithWritersBlock: Please tell me this is a dream. Please tell me that Sirius didn't actually die. Please tell me that the ministry hasn't actually fallen. Please tell me it's all one big giant nightmare.
leflemmeenrose: Happy birthday!A break is definitely needed. I'm gonna spend it crying until you upload the next chapter haha. Take your time.
Zerius: Yay! Pettigrew's dead!I am struggling so hard not to say I hate you. I don't actually, but why did you feel the need to kill off Sirius?! He was Harry's family, he had Zee, he was in love, he had such an amazing life and now... Now he's never going to see Harry and Ginny get married, he won't see his children grow up... And Dedalus Diggle? What was the meaning of his death? Why did he have to die? And so cruelly... I love the new battle though. I've got a love/hate relationship with this chapter. Great job, can't wait to see what happens next. Please heal Sirius! Maybe he's not actually dead? Maybe there's a cure? Please say there's a cure! Again, amazing job! Update soon! I love it!
LaureWithAnE: I don’t really like you at the moment. But, happy birthday! How is it, after 17 years, the death of Sirius Black still makes me cry?
PurpleLotus (Person of Earth): Why did you have to kill Sirius? I just can't even process everything that happened. You made me cry and my heart is broken for Harry and Zee and the twins. I don't know what is going to happen and it's killing me. The ministry fallen already...I have no words for the desolation I feel. You have emotionally annihilated me, so congratulations. I understand the need for a break, I will be waiting impatiently for the next update. Happy Birthday and Happy Writing!
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dab7isbambam · 5 years
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Meeting Jaebum again
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„I don't wanna go!“
You whine as you sit on the couch.
“It's just a party! We always do that, what is different today?”
your best friend asks laughing and a bit annoyed.
“I am tired as hell. I just worked like 5 hours straight, you don't wanna know how I feel!”
you try to explain but she just shakes her head.
“You know that you can't talk yourself out of that.”
she says confident and applies her Mascara.
“I know... Anyways, why is everyone talking about Jaebum? I mean, did you noticed it or is it just me...”
you wounder and sit up straight watching her getting giggly.
“He is hot.”
she says and smiles to herself.
“I don't know... I mean yes, but he always kinda was, so why is he getting al that attention right now? Isn't it a bit late?”
you ask.
“He is new at our school? How do you know he was hot back in the days?”
she asks interested and opens her eyes wide.
“We went together to Poetry slams.”
you say confused about everything.
“What? You never told me! Together? So you are friends?”
she asks excited.
“No, not really... we talked maybe once? He has some good works, especially the one ab...”
with a high pitched squeal she interrupts you.
“Why didn't you tell me! You are basically Friends! You should introduce us!”
she ask while rushing over to you, looking straight into your eyes. A big puppy like smile is on her lips and you start to laugh, pushing her away.
“Don't say you really want to meet him! He is a player, I guess, everyone wants to be with him apparently, except for me.”
you judge her and laugh.
“Okay, don't look at me like that. I can have dreams and hopes, also... sure he is famous among girls, but I have you as an advantage!! You can just say something like 'hello, that is my Best Friend, she is really nice and lovable, and single!' and I'll be thankful for ever!”
she bets and kneels down.
“Quit it! I am not that befriended with him!”
you laugh and walk over to the mirror to put on some make up.
“What ever...”
she sighs and changes her outfit.
“Don't do that!”
you say.
“What?”
she asks innocently and continues changing.
“You know what I mean! Oh boy, okay, I'll do it! I'll introduce you!”
you sigh an she immediately falls around your neck.
“Go away, you owe me!”
you say laughing at her as she nods.
It takes a bit till you both are ready to go out. Her Mother drives you there and when you call, she will also pick you both up.
The car stops in front of the House and you both step out.
“It's going to be so much fun!”
she whispers pushing you to the opened door. Some people are standing there and smoke, but you both don't know them, so you just enter the House.
You say hello to the house owner, who also throws the party and then pick some drinks.
“Did you already spot Jaebum?”
your best friend asks nervous and excited.
“No, just let us have fun and if we see him I'll go to him and say something.”
you suggest and she nods.
“Okay, deal. But don't break the promise, I will be really disappointed and angry if you do!”
she says and you just nod. Deeply inside you hope that he doesn't come to the party so you don't have to get yourself in an awkward situation.
You drink a bit, talk to friends and also dance together.
Laughing you both are making your way to the kitchen to get some drinks, as you enter the room you both freeze.
“Oh, hi Y/N, I didn't expect you here!”
Jaebum smiles and looks at you in positive surprise.
“Hi! Yeah, me and my lovely friend here came an hour or two ago!”
you smile and point at your best friend, who is waving at Jaebum trying to stay calm.
“Hi, nice to meet you, I'm Jaebum!”
he smiles at her lifting his drink a bit.
“I know...”
she says smiling as much as possible.
“Okay, that's weird.”
he laughs and I punch her arm.
“I just told her about the Poetry slams and stuff, so I mentioned you.”
you try to apologies for her. Jaebum laughs and shakes his head in amusement.
“So you are remembering me and also talk about me?”
he grins as I pour some liqueur in a red Cup.
“Yeah, why not, she wanted to know about the poetry slam, and I told her that you are very talented and that you have a lot of amazing texts.”
you say trying to figure out how to help you best friend.
“Thank you, not a lot people know I do stuff like that.”
he smiles proudly.
“I was there when you presented some of your works. The are so well structured and thought-out, it must be a lot work and effort you are putting in there!”
you say handing your best friend, who is really quiet right now, a cup.
“I'm glad you like them! Did you wrote some to?”
he asks and you nod, not knowing where the confident comes from.
“I actually presented one, but I think you weren't there!”
you say shrugging your shoulders.
“I really would have loved to hear your work, what a shame I missed it!”
he says apologizing and you just laugh.
“Maybe in the future I'll go to a Poetry Slam again and you'll hear some of my work, and maybe my friends to!”
you say pointing at your best friend, who is now nervously looking between us.
“That would be great!”
he smiles as someone calls his name in an other room.
“Okay, ladys, I am needed somewhere else, nice chat, maybe we can talk later!”
he waves, mainly at you and leaves the room.
“He. Is. So. Hot.”
she says next to you and looks after him. You start laughing and take another sip from your drink.
You dance a bit again and then join a group of people who wants to play spin-the-bottle.
You follow them in an other room and you sit down in a circle.
“Okay, everyone knows how the game works?”
one boy asks and everyone nods.
“Can we start?”
he asks and almost everyone nods again.
“No, we need to wait just a bit, my friend wants to join!”
one boy calls out and we wait.
Jaebum is entering the room, everyone looks at him.
The girls are melting on their spots and you immediately turn around to your friend.
She forms a Oh-my-god with her lips and look over to him again.
As he sees you he smiles and walks towards you. He I almost there as his friend calls him over and he sits almost on the other side next to his friend.
“He is looking at us the whole time!”
your Bff whispers as the bottle starts to spin.
A bit surprised you look over to Jaebum. Your eyes meet and he fast looks away again.
“He does!”
you laugh and you Bff is just going crazy. In the first Rounds the bottle ever points at one of you.
“The next one the bottle points at, has to kiss Jaebum on the lips for 7 seconds or needs to lick the toilet.”
a boy calls out laughing.
“Is that okay for you?”
he asks and Jaebum nod laughing.
He spins the bottle Every girl is focused at the bottle and you smile amused.
It slows down and is coming closer and closer to you. A little bit more and your friend gets to kiss him. But it still turns three more centimeters, so it points directly at you.
You gulp and look over to your Bff, who looks disappointed and pouts, like almost all of the girls right now.
With a unwell feeling I turn to Jaebum, who grins.
“Kiss, kiss, kiss!”
the boys shout and I stand up to go over to him, giving your Bff a apologizing look. She just nods ans grins.
“Let's do this fast!”
you say and sits down right in front of him.
“On three! One, two, three!”
a boy counts as you put your hands jokingly on his cheeks.
He presses his lips gently on yours. You didn't expect his to be so soft and pleasant.
He smiles satisfied into the kiss and moves his lips a little so the other can't tell, but you.
The other count down to one really slow. Surprised about yourself you move your lips against his rhythm, so you both form a matching rhythm together.
“Two, Oneee!”
the shout in joy but Jeabum doesn't let go of you, so you start laughing a little.
Someone pushes you both away from each other. The boys are laughing and giving thumbs like crazy and the girls are giving you a mad look.
“Thank you.”
you laugh and go back to your face, while Jaebum follows you with his eyes.
“Let's go outside for a bit!”
your friend suggests, you know that she wants to talk or say something. You nod and tell them that you leave the game. On your way out you look back at the pouting Jaebum and wave him apologizing.
“Okay, you can have him.”
she says as you both reach the front yard.
“What?”
you ask confused.
“You can have Jaebum! It was hella cute as you kissed, it looked like you both would do that everyday!”
she laughs and you turn red.
“It was just a game!”
you try to convince her and the heat reaches your face.
“Come on! You loved it!”
she teases you as you both here someone leaving the house too.
You both turn around to see who it is and see Jaebum in the Door.
“Oh, am I interrupting something? I'm sorry!”
he quickly says and wants to go back inside.
“Noo! Not at all! You wanna join?”
your Bff says, more confident then before.
Jaebum turns around again and nods thankfully.
“I'm sorry, but can I talk to Y/N alone for a moment?”
Jaebum says looking at my Bff.
“Sure! Good luck!”
she says immediately and kinda runs back inside.
“Well, then, whats up?”
you say kinda awkwardly.
“Did I overwhelmed that much?”
Jaebum grins and looks down an you.
You laugh and look at him to.
“You wish!”
you punch him softly on his shoulder.
“Do we have to do it again, so you'll be overwhelmed that time?”
he whispers with a grin and passionate eye. Now you are melting too.
“That's actually a good idea.” you whisper back and smile, while stepping closer to him.
In the Moment Jaebum lays his hand on your lower back, you put your arms around his neck.
“May I?”
you ask while focusing on his lips.
He grins and you put your lips again on his. The Kiss is literally unbelievable and you hardly wanna let go of his lips again.
“I can get used to that!”
Jaebum grins as you let go of yourself.
“I can serve you even more!”
you are laughing and he kisses you again, smiling like an idiot.
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winryofresembool · 6 years
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Hockey player Ed x figure skater Winry AU chapter 3
i.e. gdi Tia come up with a proper name already. 
Chapter 1 - chapter 2
Next chapter: [x]
Happened in the previous chapter: Winry teaches Ed and his teammates some basics of figure skating, but while doing that, she discovers something’s not quite right with Ed’s right arm.
A/N: thanks again for the feedback I got for the latest chapter, it’s what keeps me writing ♥ This chapter is dedicated to all of you who have supported me in writing this!
Genre: romance, bits of humor, some hurt/comfort later on
Words: 1550ish
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“Ed, what’s wrong with your hand?”
Ed quickly pulled his right hand from Winry’s and tried to think of a way to avoid answering her question. However, from Winry’s stubborn stare he knew that wouldn’t be easy.
“N-nothing?” he attempted lamely, but Winry didn’t believe that for one moment.
She decided there was no point in tip toeing around the topic, so she asked directly: “Do you… do you have a prosthetic arm?”
What surprised Ed was that instead of sounding slightly scared, like many of those who knew about his automail had sounded when they found out about it, Winry sounded curious. And maybe slightly worried, but that wasn’t so surprising.
Ed lowered his voice so only Winry could hear his answer: “Fine, I do, but please keep your voice down.”
“Huh? I thought your teammates know about it?”
“Yes, but in a place like this you never know who might be listening… Hell would break loose if people found out about this.”
“What do you mean?”
“Well, can you imagine what people would do if they heard someone was playing with a metal arm on the national team? They would immediately roast me out of here.”
“Oh…”
Winry hadn’t considered someone could possibly have an issue with an automail, so she was embarrassed she hadn’t immediately realized it. Thankfully, Ed saved her from further embarrassment by continuing: “Yeah. My arm could cause someone some serious damage if I wasn’t careful, and not just that, it’s also a risk to myself. If I hit my shoulder in a wrong way and it got inflamed… that would be really bad.”
“But you’re still willing to take the risk?”
“Hockey is one of the few things that makes me happy, I’m not gonna give up on it just because of this… issue.” Ed looked at Winry darkly. “I feel I owe it to my brother who’s been rooting for me this entire time.”
“You’re doing this for Alphonse?” Winry asked in surprise.
“Mm. He’s the only family I really have left, and he’s reason why I didn’t quit when things got difficult.  He is expecting me to keep doing my best every day.”
“Wow. You know, you keep impressing me. I’m sorry, but my first impression of you was that you are probably someone who’s playing for the money or something of that nature. But sounds like I was wrong,” she added softly.
Ed was visibly flustered. He wanted to say he really wasn’t as noble as he had just made himself sound, but he didn’t have time because Winry asked:
“You know… this is gonna sound weird, but… can I see it? The arm?”
“Uh… I guess. But not here, let’s go to our locker room. It’s OK, no one’s there right now.”
Ed quickly informed his teammates that he’d take a short break and pulled Winry with him.
Back in the locker room, Ed took his hockey jersey off and rolled up the sleeve of his undershirt. A thick layer of bandage covered the arm made of metal, and he removed it too. He didn’t know how he had expected Winry to react to seeing his automail, but it hadn’t been like this: she started clapping her hands and made a high-pitched sound that couldn’t be anything but a squeal of excitement. Her eyes were shining brighter than he had ever seen so far.
“Um, so, here it is,” Ed said awkwardly as he lifted his arm, so Winry could see better.
“It is so pretty! One day I’m gonna build one of these!” she exclaimed happily as she examined the automail.
“Really?” Ed had a hard time imagining someone so graceful as Winry wearing overalls, oil and grease on her face and hands, but on the other hand, she hadn’t liked those stereotypical “girly” things as a child either.
“You’ll see! Oh, but… can I ask you… what exactly happened? Why do you have an automail arm?”
“It’s not something I like talking about… I was 11… and an accident happened. Afterwards I got a blood poisoning and it got so bad the entire arm had to be removed…”
“That… sounds… I’m sorry. I can’t even imagine how awful that must have been. But what made you decide to get an automail arm? I’ve heard the operations are extremely painful and difficult to do?”
“To be honest… It wasn’t really me who made that decision. Or it was, but Mustang helped quite a lot.”
“Your teammate?”
“Yeah, him. His organization had hired him to scout a few promising young players while he was scratched due to a lower body injury… And he came to Resembool. He had heard about me, but he didn’t know about my accident until we met. When he saw what had happened, he immediately told me about a surgeon who had helped one of his old playing mates in a similar situation.”
He stared at something Winry couldn’t see with an unreadable expression and continued:
“I didn’t make my decision right away, but Al encouraged me, so only like a month later I had my surgery, and after that I’ve been the most well-kept secret of the hockey world. There have been a couple of cases where someone has suspected something, but we’ve managed to make them shut up, and here I am.”
“What makes you believe I won’t tell anyone anything? Like you said, it is dangerous to play with that arm,” Winry asked curiously, even though she had no intentions to report him.
“I can’t say I know you very well, although I hope that’s gonna change…” He gave Winry a look that was supposed to be flirty. “… But I still got a feeling that you are someone I can trust. I wouldn’t have told you about this otherwise.”
“You are right, I’m not gonna report you to anyone…” Winry said and smirked slyly, “but on one condition.”
“Oh. What is it?”
“That you are gonna let me ask you questions about your automail – just your automail, you don’t need to tell me what happened to you if you don’t want to – and give it a proper check-up.”
“Huh? That’s an… extraordinary wish.”
Winry shifted uncomfortably on the bench, thinking that she was making Ed think she was a weirdo, but Ed didn’t seem too shocked when she finally dared to glance at him. Even so, she wanted to explain:
“This is going to sound like a very weird coincidence… But I want to become an automail mechanic when I retire from figure skating. You know, a girl’s gotta have dreams off the ice too… but yeah, how about it?”
“Well, if that’s all you ask… It’s a deal! Do you have anything to do tomorrow after lunch?”
Ed tried to not look too eager about this excuse to see Winry again, but couldn’t help but smile a bit when he asked his question.
“No, we always take our naps after the lunch, but if I’m honest, I’m not much of a daydreamer anyway, so that time sounds good to me!”
“Great! I’ll see you then. Oh, and by the way… you are not the only one with… unconventional off-ice interests…”
Ed had no idea what made him confess that, but it was too late to back out now.
“Hmm? What do you like then?”
“Biochemistry.”
“Edward Elric, the famous hockey player and the developer of a groundbreaking biochemistry theory… I like that,” Winry said, and rested her hand on his shoulder for a moment.
“Are you making fun of me?” Ed acted hurt, but Winry could see he wasn’t being too serious.
“Noo! Why would I? Chemistry nerd.”
“Automail freak.”
They both laughed at the names they had just given each other but realized then that they had spent too long in the locker room and decided to return to the ice. Mustang made an inappropriate comment about where he thought the two had been, but other than that, no one else made a scene about their lateness.
Winry continued teaching the guys the basics of spinning, and even complimented Ed a bit (Maes smiled knowingly on the background as she did that), and the duo finished the day by promising each other that after the season they’d have a skill competition at the Resembool rink.
The next day after the lunch Winry found herself in front of Ed’s hotel room. She knocked on the door once, but nothing happened. The figure skater didn’t think much of it; maybe Ed was in the bathroom or had fallen asleep on his bed. But when she knocked again after a minute and still heard nothing, she started getting restless. She was behind the right door, right? And they had definitely been talking about 12 o’clock?
“Ed! It’s me, Winry!” she yelled. Ed’s door stayed closed, but Roy Mustang had apparently heard her voice, and he peeked out of his hotel room.
“Uh, this is Ed’s room, right?” Winry asked him.
“Yeah.”
“Did you see if he came here after the lunch?”
“I was with Ms. Hawkeye so I’m not sure, but I believe he did because he always reads his chemistry books in his room on his free time…” “Oh. OK. Thanks!” Winry said, and Roy turned to go back to his room. But before he had time to close his door, Winry heard a bloodcurdling scream from Ed’s room.
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theres-no-paradise · 6 years
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Sorry not Sorry
Chapter 9 
Summary:  A random number wakes you up early on a Saturday morning. But it doesn't stop there. The stranger keeps on sending messages, and you have no idea what is happening, when you start to develop feelings for the unknown person.
Pairings: Tom Holland  x Reader [submit your name: How it works]
Y/N your Name
Word Count:  1415
Warnings: none
A/N: Sorry for the late update. This is more like a filler chapter, with the next one, the main part of the story will start, so we are working ourselves into the plot now! I hope you still like this little short update. :)
Chapter 1  •  Chapter 2  •  Chapter 3  •  Chapter 4  •  Chapter 5  •  Chapter 6  •  Chapter 7  •  Chapter 8 Chapter 10
A few days have passed since Tom had left the country and you were sitting on your sofa, home alone, staring at the little rectangular device on your table. You knew, he was busy filming this new film he had mentioned before during one of your conversations. It excited you a lot, thinking about it but there was also this weird longing inside you. A little twitch in your chest, that always appeared when you thought about Montreal and how far it was away from London. How far away he was. You grabbed your phone and opened the messenger, typing in a quick message for Tom.
You: How’s Montreal?
Once you pressed the send button, you stared a little while on the screen until it automatically turned black. A frustrated groan escaped your lips as you threw yourself backwards on the sofa. It was late in London so it must've been sometime after Lunch in Canada. Maybe Tom had a little break or day off, who knew but you hoped for an answer soon.
It felt like ages and it was close to midnight when your smartphone vibrated and indicated a new message. Tired and a little groggy you got hold of the device and checked out the message, that was shown on the screen. You sighed and rubbed your eyes from the bright light that was irritating your them before you got to read the message.
The Spiderman: Really loving it so far. How have you been?
You: Glad to hear! I’m tired.  And drowning in paperwork. I’d love to burn down my office at some point.
That was true. Work has been very exhausting the past few days and you had to work overtime most days. It was good on one side because it made you think less about Tom. On the other it still didn't matter because even if you had one single thought about him, you knew you missed him. A lot. It was too early to admit though, so you kept quiet about it and tried to avoid this topic at any cost.
The Spiderman: Someone needs holidays
You: not affordable lol
The Spiderman: You can have Tessa. She’s a great Stress relief and that's basically like holidays too :)
Did he really just write that? Did Thomas Stanley Holland offer you to have his dog for stress relief? You sat up in your bed as your re-read the message out loud. You weren't imagining this message but yet you still repeated what he wrote, just in case there could be a misunderstanding.
You: You'd actually allow me to have Tess? Like for real?
The Spiderman: I saw you two together. I trust you with her.
You: You're crazy!
The Spiderman: Well, I tried to help
It seemed that he really meant it but you didn't feel comfortable, having a dog in your apartment that you only met once. It was also unclear if there were dogs allowed on this property anyway, you needed to check that out for sure.
You: If my stress level rises even more, I’ll get back at your offer
The Spiderman: Sure thing! Any Plans tonight?
You laughed at his question as you made yourself comfortable on your bed once again.
You: Nah, just staying in, binge watching Stranger Things
‘And thinking about you’, you thought, but didn't write. It was awful how fast this boy had you curled around his finger even though you tried to tell yourself, that it needed to develop slowly. That was definitely the opposite of careful and slow but whenever you talked to him, you couldn't care less.
The Spiderman: Sounds fun. I’d love to join
And there it was again. The little attempt of Tom flirting with you.
You: I don't think you'd enjoy watching with me
The Spiderman: aww don't say that. I bet I would!
You: I’ll let you try it once
The Spiderman: Promise?
You: Promise.
And after that, you fell asleep peacefully in your sheets, the TV still on in the background.
The Spiderman: I’m bored. Entertain me
You were surprised when you heard your phone buzz as Toms message appeared on the Screen. You didn't expect him to message you so quick after the other night, since its only been a couple of days. Of course your exchange of messages got less than in the beginning but that was only because the two of you were busy working and the time difference didnt make it easy on you either.
You: Got nothing to do?
You messaged back, as you got into the train that’d take you back home from work.
The Spiderman: Sitting around and getting makeup done
You: lol your ugly ass needs makeup
You imagined Tom sitting still in a chair with a woman standing next to him, plastering all kinds of colour on his face to make him look suitable for his role. You giggled at the thought and reacted to the next message, that came in just before arriving at your destination.
The Spiderman: I need to look beat up lmao
You: Don't you always look like that?
There was no response until you got home. At first you thought he might be mad at you but his countermessage made you laugh out loud and you were pretty sure, that Tom was smiling as well.
The Spiderman: Well, I might look beat up but at least I'm no babyface grandma!
You: But even when I'm 50 I’ll still look like 30, So i've got that goin’ for me
The Spiderman: True though. A real keeper
You: Go away
The Spiderman: :)
Groaning, you put your phone back on the table. How was it even possible, that this guy made you laugh so easy? You shook your head in disbelief about Tom's words. Keeper. He said you’re a keeper but did he really mean it that way? ‘Stop Overthinking!’, you scolded yourself but it didn't help. You got this warm fuzzy feeling inside of you and liked it. You started to like the way Tom made you feel and the anxiety about the thought of you two dating started to fade.
It was the middle of the week and you were utterly bored when you arrived back home from work. Not knowing what to do with your time, you grabbed your laptop and started to surf the internet. You went from News sites to Facebook, checked out Twitter and at last you found yourself checking out videos on Youtube. Then something kinda hit you and you typed in Toms Name in the Search bar. ‘Okay, lets see what happens’ you thought, as you pressed the enter tab on your keyboard.
Many videos of Tom in different interviews popped up and you watched through some of them, smiling like a donkey in love. After you’ve seen a few, something else popped into your eyes and with a curious look you clicked the video. You had no idea what would come up next.
You: You have my heart and we'll never be worlds apart
The Spiderman: ??
You: Maybe in magazines, but you'll still be my star
The Spiderman: Oh no …
You: Baby, 'cause in the dark
The Spiderman: Stop
You: You can't see shiny cars
The Spiderman: I got it
You: And that's when you need me there
The Spiderman: This is hilarious
You: With you I'll always share BECAUSE
The Spiderman: I'm gonna block your number lol
You: When the sun shines, we shine together Told you I'll be here forever Said I'll always be your friend Took an oath that I'm a stick it out till the end
The Spiderman: You've seen the lip sync … I got it
You: You can stand under my umbrella, ella, ella, EH, EH, EH
The Spiderman: Are you finished?
You: I pissed myself watching it
The Spiderman: Would've loved to see your reaction :D
You: How did you do that?
The Spiderman: What do you mean?
You: The dancing!! Where did you learn to perform like that??
The Spiderman: Uhh, I went to classes and been in a musical? Lmao
You: What are you even??
The Spiderman: :D
You: No seriously. You're unreal. Some Alien or what not
The Spiderman: I can teach you some stuff if you want
You: Nah, I'm a potato. I'm not even able to stand next to you without tripping.
The Spiderman: Noo you’d do great. I'm a good teacher
You: I bet you are
The Spiderman: ;)
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h4rin · 7 years
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request: would it be alright?? if i requested a scenario where jaehyun has been in a rlly bad mood bc of smth while he's at the grocery and he looks like he's about to snap and the boys are a lil weary but then his phone rings and suddenly??? his eyes and voice are all soft while talking?? and when he hangs up the boys ask what's up he doesn't explain anything and just deadpans "love wants melon milk" then when they get back to the dorms his boyfie is there and they drink milk tgther - male nonnie
male nonnie i love you but i had no idea how to end this sjskdjkfjk
Jaehyun hadn’t been in the best mood this week. You had been busy with work, so you hadn’t gotten to see him at all. Unless you wanted to show up at the dorms around midnight and leave before he was up, around seven in the morning. You were so exhausted, you put a shot of peppermint in somebody’s lemon tea on Tuesday.
Jae’s bandmates hadn’t seen you either, and they assumed, based on his mood and you not being around, that you’d either gotten into a fight or broken up. Jaehyun, with his bad-boy exterior, kind of made the others in NCT think that you’d gotten into a fight and then broken up. They were a little scared to say anything, his threats to Taeil still fresh in their minds, so they just kind of ignored it.
It wasn’t like Jae wanted any help, anyway. He wasn’t mad at you, or his friends, or anything, but he was mad at your schedules. He’d had breaks lately, so he wouldn’t have been able to see you, even if you weren’t working ridiculous hours. Who needs coffee at two in the morning?!
So, in a terrible attempt to make him slightly less pissed off at the world, Taeyong, being the mother that he is, decided to take as much of NCT to get food. (This was so that he wouldn’t have to ask Jae what his comfort foods were, he’d just kind of pick them out.) So, that’s why Yuta, Johnny, Taeyong, Jaehyun and the China line ended up at the supermarket at two in the afternoon on Friday.
“Can we get something American?” Chenle asked as soon as they walked through the doors, before Taeyong even grabbed a shopping cart.
“What do you mean, ‘American’?” Johnny replied.
“Like…” Chenle trailed off for a second, thinking about what he really wanted. His eyes lit up as he answered, “Lucky Charms!”
“Yeah, yeah, Lucky Charms,” Renjun chimed in.
“We don’t have any food, and you want Lucky Charms?” Jaehyun questioned.
Renjun and Chenle pulled the face that white people do when they catch you staring at them, as Johnny pulled them off to the American section, muttering about how it’s not even what they always eat, and if they hadn’t had turducken, they hadn’t lived. (This is the face.) Yuta went off to the fruit section, after stating that he’d been craving watermelon since Cherry Bomb came out, for some reason, and then rolling his eyes at Winwin telling him that Taeyong’d been mumbling about melon in his sleep.
“But will you get melon?” Winwin called after him. Yuta threw him a thumbs up, a slight laugh emitting from him.
Winwin decided to wander off towards the frozen food section, and with a tiny basket, he grabbed everyone’s favorite types of ice cream, green tea for Taeyong. Ten and Jaehyun, “literally anything”, as Taeil had put it, for him(Winwin grabbed vanilla), and chocolate for Jeno, seeing as he said the same thing as Taeil. Not being an idiot, Winwin grabbed about four times the green tea ice cream than anything else.
Jaehyun and Taeyong, after being abandoned by their bandmates, decided to grab something alcoholic. They figured that, best case scenario, Jaehyun could black out and they could call you and ask what was up.
Taeyong, however, let it slip just slightly. So by the time Johnny and the China line showed up, Yuta still messing around with fruit, they showed up with ice cream and sugary cereal to Taeyong clutching a box of soju to his chest while Jaehyun was going off on him, a bottle of wine dangerously close to smacking Tae’s head.
Jae froze as his phone started to go off in his pocket, a light melody that didn’t
really fit his aesthetic. “Hello?” he asked as soon as he put his phone up to his ear. Any stress on his face immediately melted, but his shoulders were still tense. “Yeah, I’m at the store right now.” The volume on his phone was low enough so that none of the boys could really hear who he was talking to.
“Wait, really?” There was a slight pause. “That’s...amazing.” A grin grew on his face. “Just that? Okay! I’ll see you then.” He groaned in a quiet, joking manner before saying one last thing, “I love you too. Bye.”
By this point, Yuta had shown up. “What happened?” he asked, his basket full of fruit. Jaehyun wiped most of the grin off of his face, just the corners of his mouth turned up.
“Love wants melon milk,” he said, almost expressionless.
“Um, uh --” Taeyong began saying something, but Jae put the wine in the cart, and walked off towards the dairy section. “We could probably check out, it’ll take a while, anyway, we’ll probably be just about done by the time Jaehyun comes back with his milk.” The group of boys walked towards the check-out, and by the time they’d gotten everything sorted(and put $80 worth of Lucky Charms back), Jaehyun showed up with his pack of six melon milk. He put the light green containers on the conveyor belt, and the cashier gave him a weird look.
Not that she hadn’t been giving them weird looks the entire time, especially with their $100 of Lucky Charms(originally, of course), but seeing someone show up with a leather jacket and dead expression and put a box of melon milk with little ducks on the side probably ended up the weirdest thing of the evening.
“Hey, wait -- you’re (Y/N)’s friend, right?” the cashier suddenly asked, one eyebrow down.
“Boyfriend,” Jae corrected her, without hesitation. Taeyong and Yuta let out breaths they didn’t know they were holding, while the China line and Johnny were talking about something else, most likely Lucky Charms. Winwin had never had them, as it turns out.
“Oh yeah! I used to work with him, before I moved here. We haven’t talked much lately, how is he?”
“We haven’t talked much lately either.”
“Are the two of you okay?”
“Yeah, yeah, we’ve both been busy.”
“Oh, I understand! He never stopped talking about you when we worked together, so I hope the two of you can spend time together soon.” She quickly changed topics, telling Taeyong the total. He barely blinked before he handed her his credit card. It quickly went through, and there were about two bags a person. Yuta was very specific to hold the fruit, claiming that nobody else would treat it correctly, so he ended up with three bags, however, seemed to have no problem with it.
The group went back to the dorms, and as soon as Taeyong opened the door, Jaehyun close behind, you sprinted from the couch, almost running into Taeyong’s chest and/or tripping over the couch. Jaehyun dropped a bag full of Lucky Charms, but it wasn’t like anything happened, worst case scenario, he smashed a few marshmallows.
“My baby boy, I missed you so much,” he muttered against the top of your head, kissing your hair.
“Did you get it?” you asked, staring at him with stars in your eyes. He put an eyebrow down.
“You wanted strawberry milk, right?”
“Jae…” you mumbled, pushing your head into his chest. “I’ll walk to the market, if necessary.”
“Noo,” he responded, dragging the word out. “I think Chenle has it.”
Chenle looked up at the mention of his name, pulling melon milk away from his mouth, leaving a pale green mustache. “Oh god, that was for (Y/N)?” His eyes widened. “Oh god, I’m sorry.”
You laughed, having missed the youngest of the China line. “You can have one, Chenle, it’s okay.”
“Thank you!” He sat his milk down and ran up to you, hugging you. “Best hyung.”
You grinned, before Chenle released you from his death grip and you and Jae went to the couch. You spent the rest of the day cuddling, watching whatever cartoon you could find on Netflix, and drinking melon milk.
You had the next day off, and Jaehyun told the rest of his band that the two of you were sick, so that he could spend the day with you. Of course, as soon as Taeyong told him that they didn’t even have practice tomorrow, he felt a thousand percent better.
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maxdoesartimus · 7 years
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Just friends? Chapter 1
Word count: 2096 ( @ghostlyraptor )
I remember I wanted someone to play COD with and I get a message from someone. They also needed someone to play with and that was when I met.. Him. ‘Yo man you wanna play COD’ The message had read and we’ve been friends since. His name was Evan or Vanossgaming. And at the moment I hadn’t known it but he was a pretty popular youtuber. I myself wanted to pursue a career in Youtube and that was just what I focking did. It’s years later now and I am getting real close to 2 million subscribers. I never thought I’d get this far but I am so. So glad I have. Sometimes.. I feel like I got this far because of Evan though.. Not by myself. He just hit 20 million subscribers. We still messaged time to time and I felt like he was one of my best friends I had. I wish we talked more.. Slowly we talked less and less. I mean I’m not a very social guy but I feel like I need some interaction to live. I’ve been Depressed. I don’t even have anyone to tell that too. Even when I ask the question. ‘hey I have to say something’. Then my friends just blow me off and say crap like, 'what the hell you gonna be a downer or something?’ I stay quite. 'Nah never mind.’
I was just chilling right now. Playing some overwatch because why not? You can never have too much of that game. Then my phone buzzed. “Who the Fock?” I mumble as I grab my phone. ‘Look out your window.’ What? It was from Evan. He hasn’t messaged me in like weeks. Why should I look outside? I take in a deep breath and pull back my blinded looking outside. My mouth drops, “EVAN WHAT THE FOCK?” I scream and I open my door. “What are you doing at my house out of nowhere?” Evan walks in dropping a ton of bags on the ground and shrugs. “What? I can’t come and visit my friend? Brian are you throwing me out on the street?” I chuckle as he shoves me lightly and I wrap an arm around his shoulder and give him a good shake. “YO LET GO I GIVE UP. BRIAN NOO HUGS.” I hugged him anyways. Not for him. More for me. I really needed it. I feel him pull out if it and he looked me in the eye, “you okay man?” He asked I chuckle lightly as I brush my hand through my hair. “Yeah totally fine. What the Fock man why you asking?” I say as I force a smile. I was trying so hard. To you know be happy. I felt my face twitch as the smile slowly faded and now I was frowning as I looked down. “I don’t think you’re okay. Let’s sit and talk about it man.” Evan says as he lays his hand on my shoulder leading me to my own couch. “I don’t need to talk about anything I’m perfectly fine!” I say getting slightly angry. He hasn’t talked to me for weeks and then he just SHOWS up to my house. “Evan why are you even here?” I said getting annoyed, “I don’t like that we haven’t been talking man. I had the money to spare and I flew over here!” He did that. For me? I feel my heart like sped up. My stomach got upset and I felt nervous. Sweaty. “Really?” I asked and I felt myself smile.
It’s weird but I felt like a schoolgirl? What the Fock? “Yeah don’t get hot and bothered now man” Evan said as he laughed. Aw Fock his laugh.. “Shut up Evan.” I say as I shove him off the couch. “Wow! Wow! Ow my ass.” Evan says as he stands up as he sits back down. A little closer than me as he was before. I felt my heart rate racing. My breath hitched in my throat. What the Fock is wrong with me? “So what’s wrong man? You seem upset?” Evan said as he rested his hand on my head ruffling my hair. “I just been kinda depressed lately. Haven’t talked to anyone in like weeks and.. It’s lonely..” I said quietly. Evan just hugged me. When I needed it. And he didn’t let go. He didn’t let go. He didn’t let go and it was nice. “You feeling better Emoriser?” I giggled as I pull out of the hug rubbing my face. “Yeah yeah.” I look him in the eyes and for some reason I Wanted To Kiss Him. “What?” Wait.. shit did I think out loud? Please no..”Brian are you drunk? Or tired? Or something?” I sigh as I shake my head. “No..?” I said and he chuckled. Pulling me to my feet. “Wanna go get some beers?” I nod. That would actually be focking great. Drink away all this crap. Next thing I know is we get in the car I had.. but.. could not drive. Why do I have it if I can’t use it? So Evan drove us up there. Once we got there I opened my door and headed inside the pub. The atmosphere was very wobbly. People were falling over each other. Some were sipping on drinks that had close to no alcohol I would know I’m Irish. Some had many empty glasses piling up beside them. Some guy trotted on over to me and Evan. “Hey hot stuff.” The guy said and he had to be talking to Evan. Evan is so much better looking than I could ever be.. “I’m talkin to you man..” the guy said as he hit me in the chest lightly. He was obviously very drunk. “Wanna get out of here with me?” This guy was hitting on me. Oh my focking god. I felt myself.. Heating up though. Like back with Evan at my place.. “hey man leave him alone he’s with me.” Evan said as he shoved the guy lightly. Didn’t seem like he was trying to start a fight but he made the guy noticeably mad.
“Fuck off man he is his own man. Also he can do way better than you.” I. Got.. really mad. For some reason “hey Fock off hot stuff.” I said as I shove the guy more intently than Evan did. “I like a tough guy but fuck this.” The guy said and next thing I knew was a fist came at my face. “BRIAN!” Next thing I knew was I heard a snap. That. Focker. Broke my nose. I look up and see spots in my vision. Which I was able to blink away after a bit. “Mother focker.” I say as I rub blood on my shirt which hurt a Fock ton. Then I see Evan beating the absolute shit out of a guy.. for me.. but Evan looks stronger than he actually is.. the guy was beating the absolute shit out of him.. damn I was gonna get kicked out of this pub before I even get a drink.. “Get outta my pub!” Some guy comes at us screaming shoving Evan, this dude, and I out of the pub.. The guy had a knife on us. “Hey wow! Wow! Wow!” I say as I stand in front of Evan protectively. Why Am I willing.. To give my life for him. Why do I get these feelings when I get to talk to or see Evan? Why does he make me smile? Am I sick.. wait. This feels familiar. Like that one time I took a girl to a dance back in my school years.. But I can’t. Like him can I? “I just wanna bang you is that so much to ask for?” The guy said his words were slushed and almost washed out by all the alcohol he has consumed. “Yeah it is because I’d rather bang myself.” I say as I keep my arms up trying to keep this guy WITH THE KNIFE calm. “Please just. Don’t hurt Evan. You can hurt me all you want. You’re mad at me so Fock Evan?” I say and I apologize to Evan of course. The guy wobbled side to side.. any bit of water in his body was probably overtaken by the alcohol. He hiccuped as he walked slowly toward me. “You. Have. No. idea. How mad I am!” The guy said I could barely tell what he was saying but I get drunk a lot so I can decipher drunk speak.
The guy came at me with the knife and my first instinct was the dodge and move out of the way. The guy kept going at Evan though. “Shit.” I mumble as I try to get in the way so no harm comes to Evan But I’d like to not die. Or be in pieces. Next thing I knew was there was a burning slicing pain in my hand. The knife went straight through all muscle in my hand and wow. It looks pretty cool actually but SHIT THERES A KNIFE IN MY HAND. “HOLY FOCK THAT HURTS LIKE A BITCH!” I say as I grab the knife pulling it out of my hand. Which it hurt almost worse coming out then going in. I have the knife on this guy now. Drip. Drip. Drip. Was all I could hear. I look down seeing blood dripping from the wound in my hand. Well I’m not focking supriser a knife ripping through it! The guy pulls another knife out of god knows where. I don’t know maybe his undies? “What the Fock? Just leave us alone. You can’t be this mad just because you ain’t laying anyone?” Obviously I offended the man and he was indeed mad about not laying anyone. “Ew dude that spreads diseases. Anyone you bang and they have banged you are banging them and then anyone else you bang. Well you focking get it. That’s. Disgusting.” This guy didn’t seem to care though. I throw the knife I had in a nearby trash can. I didn’t want to fight this guy. Then this becomes like some shitty flick and he whistles making more guys come out and one grabbed Evan. “I would let go if I were you.” I said as I looked back. I glared daggers at this guy and he just laughed holding a knife on Evan. “Let. Go.” I say walking closer to this guy. I bite my lip hard enough that I draw blood. The guy slowly starts getting kinda scared. I grab this guys knife by the blade not caring about the pain that came with that as the guy tries to pull away. “Let. GO.” I was getting furious by now and I rip the knife from the guys hand. “Duck.” I say to Evan which he does and I punch this guy square in the face. Which made his grip on Evan loosen enough for me to get him behind me again. Then guys surround me. Maybe I shouldn’t have punched that guy. “Hey calm down just leave us alone.” I say getting annoyed but then I feel kinda woozy. Shit. The blood loss has probabaky gotten worse with time. I sway side to side. “You okay Brian.?” I shake my head as I try to stay focused. “Y-yeah just.. tired.” I say. Most of these guys had knives on us and I had the one I got from one guy who was now getting up from the ground.
“We cajt take all these guys Brian just RUN!” I can’t whimp out. Especially in front of you. “No. I can do this Evan let me do this for you.” The guy who started this seemed to back off. “You really.. like this guy don’t ya?” He said as he hiccuped. “Eh what’s the point in beating you up I ain’t getting nothing out of this..” the guy puts up his knife and tries to call off his guys but one had been coming at me and before I knew what was what. I felt another stinging pain except in my side. “Shit.” The guy said taking off. Most of the guys took off. Not wanting to get busted most likely. I sway and can hardly stay on my feet. I felt sick to my stomach from all the stress I just incountered. “BRIAN!” Evan screamed and I collapsed. Everything went Dark And the only thing I could think about was how I didn’t get that beer. The last thing I heard was, “did you mean it when you said you wanted to kiss me?” Did I? “Yeah” was all I said before I blacked out.
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lilyevane · 7 years
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ok so like this is probably the only ask game i will ever do (+ i have a constant track record of not doing ask games --> so this is like me saying sorry to all the lovely souls who tagged me in things i am SORRY it’s just my lazy ass tbh)
so i was tagged to do this by: @hiddenpolkadots / @prongsno / @paddfoot so thank u sm all of u i love you all to the moon and back ok xx (also i am sorry if you tagged me and i didn’t tag you here i suck at remembering things like that haha)
and i am going to tag: @fjrebolt @residentpotter @jamespottuh @ohpallas @katiebells @cupcakeblake and technically many others this list could go on hehe --> also anyone else feel free to do this and tag me in it i love reading these :DD
1: are you named after someone? hm hm am i named after someone?? well liyah is a pretty ordinary name tbh though i do know my mother was after something to do with flowers but no one acquiesced to that so i got stuck with liyah (dunno whERE that came from)
2: when was the last time you cried? i cry like literally all the time for no reason at all rip me but i guess the last proper time was when i watched fantastic beasts (*CRIES*)
3: do you like your handwriting? yes, i really really like my handwriting, though i hate it when i come out of like some cold place or it’s been a long while since i’ve written
4: what is your favourite lunch meat? um.. idk what to say though i’ll go with turkey :’)
5: do you have kids? hell to the noo i aint even married yet
6: if you were another person, would you be friends with you? hmm, i guess?? like i probably would bc i am quite friendly and all though i probably would get pissed at myself bc i’m so stubborn 
7: do you use sarcasm? do i use sarcasm? do?? i?? use?? sarcasm?? 
8: do you still have your tonsils? yes yes
9: would you bungee jump? asdfhjkl i’m one of those kids who piss their pants to jump over a fucking fence let alone from a cliff or smth
10: what is your favourite kind of cereal? hmm i remember i kinda just lost that kinda feel to eat cereal ever since i had to eat coco pops with warm milk once?? idek how and why that happened but ever since then i’ve been so stubborn when it comes to cereal though i guess just normal cornflakes are nice (oh yes and cheerios aren’t bad as well)
11: do you untie your shoes when you take them off? i hate wearing shoes with laces (bc i am crap at them) so i resort to flats or pumps or boots, though if i did wear them i’d probably take them off untied (if i could) and if not i would have to untie them
12: do you think you’re a strong person? hmm i guess i am kinda strong but in the emotional way i can get weak like that easily for some reason?? i mean sometimes i literally just see something not very triggering and feel like crying lmao (or maybe it’s just those mood swings)
13: what is your favourite ice cream flavour? hmmm (clearly racks their brain for the answer) probably mint choc chip because that’s HEAVEN but also fudge (i’ve had this before and i LOVED IT) wouldn’t go amiss
14: what is the first thing you notice about people? hmm idk?? i guess i just notice their facial expression pretty much and their full self?? basically whatever i see first
16: what is the least favourite physical thing you like about yourself? well i won’t say my height (even tho i want to) because i am tall asf but i guess my hair damnn can be really annoying bc it is quite curly and wavy and straight and BASICALLY HARD TO TAME
17: what colour pants and shoes are you wearing now? i’m wearing black leggings lmao and no shoes bc i’m in a room in my house (why do people wear shoes inside pls tell me)
19: what are you listening to right now? not atm nothing bc i am too lazy but if you find me ten minutes later i’ll be screaming to shape of you by ed sheeran so yeah haha
20: if you were a crayon, what colour would you be? maybe maroon?? or burgundy? idk why i associate myself with that colour but for some reason even my friends agree i suit that colour lmao
21: favourite smell? the smell when you buy new books and flick through the pages, wet grass, when you enter a new house and it just smells of paint adfghjkl and maybe just after it’s rained bless it smells so nice
22: who was the last person you spoke to on the phone? my dad probably to let him know i’ll be coming home late or smth
23: favourite sport to watch? i guess whatever just kinda catches my eye? probably football though, and that is only when i’m in the mood?
24: hair color? brown lmao though when i go into the sun it looks like light brown?? idk haha
25: eye colour? dark brown/black i have no idea
26: do you wear contacts? i hate the idea of something plastic in your eye so i stick to dear ol’ glasses
27: favourite food to eat? ok so like spaghetti is a FAVE it’s so nice esp the way my mum makes it and chicken roast and steak and lasagne (*muted screaming*) also brownies if desserts count (bc they are heaven i will slap whoever disagrees w/ me)
28: scary movies or comedy? i’m that kinda person who will get all over excited to watch a horror movie but then i’ll be screaming and regretting it by the end but probably horror (tho only with my friends) but comedy is nice too (but like.. i have a very weird sense of humour so lol)
29: last movie you watched? i was rewatching pride and prejudice the other day bless that movie i love it so much it makes me want to cry
30: what colour of shirt are you wearing? i am wearing a dress atm + it’s like kinda checkered with dark blue and red and white and all BASICALLY IT LOOKS LIKE TARTAN
31: summer or winter? ok so i like neither hate nor love either because both will be either too cold or too hot though i DIG SPRING bc it’s the season i was born in + it’s just perfect and wonderful and just spring-y
32: hugs or kisses? hugs hugs gimme all your hugs
33: what book are you currently reading? i’m not currently reading anything (which makes me vv sad) tho the last book i (re)read was pride and prejudice lol
34: who do you miss right now? my fRIENDS and my cousins rip me i miss them everyday 35: what is on your mouse pad? ew what’s that i have a laptop 36: what is the last tv program you watched? TEEN WOLF adfghkll i could talk abt it all day
37: what is the best sound? ok so i agree with you bri waves are just... so calming?? i love it sm also i love the sound of silence (like not that stupid song which my teacher annoyingly points out all the time) but just SILENCE in itself is so nice + the wind and the trees rustling along with it (it’s so rejuvenating)
38: rolling stones or the beatles? hmm probably the beatles
39: what is the furthest you have ever traveled? the furthest i have ever travelled would probably be new zealand (i mean it’s vv far away so)
40: do you have a special talent? idk tbh but i guess (according to my friends) i am ambidextrous?? i will never believe them bc i am left-handed and my right hand is shit but whatever @ that + probably procrastination (*cries because that’s the only thing i can do without fail*) i mean if you would believe i’m supposed to be finishing off an english lit piece rn but noope i’m doing this instead
41: where were you born? britain !!
ok so that was hella long and i would personally like to thank whoever actually read all of it thank u and bye let me go do that english homework before i end up resorting to doing it somehow in school tomorrow eep
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Alliance and Hierarchy pt.1
This is a Mass effect fanfic Idea I’d been playing with and I’m actually going to post the first two parts of because I think they’re just about as good as I can make it at this time. XD
Sibling Shepards, and I freely admit to making things up to fill in the gaps that I personally don’t know, so if that mismatches the official information on the background stuff, uh... Let me know, but handwave it all away as Lady Icarus making things up. Yeah.
This Jane Shepard is in fact the same one that I’ve got a (still) incomplete work on [here], so she is not going to be The Shepard (with a capital T in the article). But she is a Spacer/Sole Survivor Shepard, so Akuze brings issues.
Part 1
Part 2
3 June 2177
Akuze Colony Approach
04:38 Local Time
22:54 4 June 2177 Earth Time
"God damn!” Must have hit another sinkhole - how did anything stay on the surface with that much air under them? Her CO was still barking at her, pay attention. “Shepard, never drive a Grizzly again. Man the gun. Toombs! How’s your driving?"
“Good enough to pass!”
Jane shrugged and did as she was told, trading places with the Corporal. "Sorry, Boss, they didn't teach driving in field-tech school. Just how to fix'em."
She earned the light hearted laughter when the Odette called in. "Odette to Away teams, you're getting close to the beacon. We don't see the ship, nor the colony, but keep an eye out for the crew and civilians, over."
"Away to Odette, we copy that." The Commander flashed a grin over his shoulder. "Use your technical skills to find the ship, colonists, or crew, Lieutenant Shepard. Sending out the orders to the rest of our poor S-O-Bs who came with us."
“Yeah, yeah, on it, boss-man.”
"Atta girl. You owe us a round when we get shipside for your shitty driv- Toombs! Watch that mountain cliff! Jesus, Joseph, and Mary, did any of you learn to drive properly? Since when were these vehicles supposed to drive vertically?"
Jane grinned and tapped a few buttons on the Grizzly's cannon. Point three-oh-four percent power increase.
"LT, I'll pass on the drink if you'll just teach me how to make a gun stated to be performing at its best even better."
She started to laugh. And then stopped. "I see the beacon. Small camp around it. Ship must have crashed into or too close to the mountains, the colony’s not supposed to be that way either."
"Which way?"
"Three-thirty for the ship, Commander. The colony should be at about eleven-thirty. Unless I got North mixed up again."
“Spacers. Can’t tell North from East, but they can make a top-performing canon even better than it’s supposed to be.”
“Shut up, Rain.” She grinned to let their medic know she wasn’t serious.
The Grizzly turned and she adjusted to line back with the beacon. Toombs had apparently left the driving to someone else.
"Wonder how many survived?"
"Three structures, broken down Mako, one badly broken Grizzly that looks like it's been here a long time. Structures likely have lavatory, kitchen, showers. Can hold up to five comfortably each, but can hold three times that. Five, three, fifteen. Forty five about highest to expect. None at lowest. Must have been set here for a couple of weeks now."
"Shepard, I don't want to know how you calculated all that for the space."
"Spacer kid, it was a game John and I would play based on the size and class of a ship."
"I just said I didn't want to know."
"Check the comms, anyone on chatter?"
Toombs called out. "No. Just the beacon."
"Alright. Rain, stop the Grizzly at the edge of camp. If anyone's there, we don't want to be seen as a threat."
"On it."
"Shepard, status."
"No movement. No lights." She waited as the vehicle slowed before setting the sights to zoom in. "Wait! I see a couple bodies. Scientists. Think I saw one move. I think. Might have been us moving."
"Let's load out and look for ourselves."
She really didn’t want to, not after improving the canon, but more people out there meat the faster they could find the missing colonists.
They left the vehicle and looked around. Jane examined the beacon for news, cursing when the beacon's VI turned out to be damaged in an odd way.  The beacon worked, but it was also running a secondary signal, and the termination sequence couldn’t be completed considering the button was missing and in fact covered by solid metal. Cheap equipment, she frowned at the thought.
The other members of their team drove up and disembarked as well to join the search.
The ground shook.
"Alright, who stayed on their bear?"
The full team sounded off as being in the camp.
Second Lieutenant Araina “Rain” Sunny pulled out her medical field kit and started checking over the bodies.
"Sir, I think this was a trap. These bodies are torn-” The ground quaked as a … giant worm thing screamed to look down on the puny mortal humans. Not a worm. The Citadel reports had these things as- “Thresher maw! Shit! Into the M29! Go, go!" The great beast spat toxic ooze over the team medic as she screamed warnings.
"Damn it, Rain!"
Jane climbed over the cannon of the vehicle and popped the top open to drop down, eyeballing for the cannon's target. "Give me a rocket!" The Maw dropped below the ground as a head count was made.
"Damn, we lost four."
"And no more-" Jane was cut off as the vehicle was thrown into the air, she looked above her and saw the Akuze surface. "Shit. Missile!"
"In, Shep."
She fired the damn-fucking rocket and blasted bullets as they fell, turret first.
"Noo!" Screams echoed into her comms as four tons landed. Her hands stretched from her face. She kicked with one leg, but the other didn't respond. Her throat was raw. Maybe the screams were hers.
"Odette!--" Toombs, he screamed as the Thresher Maw dropped back into its hole, and his voice had an echo to it.
"Shepard here. Headcount? Fire your blaster into the sky if your mic's down." Nothing.
"--ette to ground team. Come in, ground team."
She tapped her helmet. "Shepard to Odette. Beacon was a trap or something. Thresher Maw attacked. I can't move one of my legs very well. I repeat, Thresher Maw attacked. I-I don't know what happened. I can't get up, or look around very well. Working my way out."
She repeated most of the message several times as she crawled out from under the Grizzly and made her way for the jungle. Out of open space where the Maw would attack. No fucking wonder there were sinkholes everywhere.
"Shepard! Odette here. We have your signal, and we're coming in."
"Thank-" She wasn't sure she finished when she passed out.
She was all that survived of the original ground team. The bodies of a lot of her people, and the original people to be rescued, couldn't be found and the rest were declared KIA. Her claims of Akuze being a trap were dismissed by the brass.
She couldn't feel one leg. The Grizzly cut and destroyed what remained of it. It was a clean amputation, messy with the infections that left her in surgery under the levo equivalent of Quarian-strength antibiotics. They had to cut the rest of the femur out, even the joint because of the toxins, infection, and bone rot.
"Fuck."
"Lieutenant Shepard."
She almost glared until she realized it was the Odette's captain. The reflexive salute was all she could do in-protocol. "Sir, I'd stand, but..."
"No, stay seated. How do you feel?"
"Angry. I know Rain wouldn't lie. She said it was a trap, I believe what she said. The beacon was weird too."
"The top's refusing to listen, I'm sorry. I believe you. We saw the recordings. You're getting the best cybernetic leg we can find, even if it means going to the Council for it."
Jane looked at the bandage on her hip. There wasn't even much of a stump anymore, just the ball joint left that was scheduled to be removed in a few hours. "Sir, I can't afford--"
"The Alliance is paying, and for the therapy too."
She glared. "To keep my mouth shut?"
"No. To prep you for N7 training. Staff Lieutenant Jane Shepard, as the last officer in command before the last of your team was lost, you’ve been field promoted to Lieutenant Commander. Your quick reactions, even when falling upside down impressed the brass to bump you into N7."
"I'm being rewarded for failing my team?" She shook her head. "That's... Fu-Messed up. And I know messed up."
"Yeah. I can imagine how you feel."
A small suspicious part of her noticed that something was up. "What is really going on?"
"I don't know. Your recovery will be slow, but they'll be starting the book training before the physical part when you return from medical leave."
Jane closed her eyes as she felt a pair of boxes be placed in her hands. "Fuck."
"My condolences, Shepard. Commander Trapper was my friend, too."
"Thank you, sir." The doctor shooed her guest away and pushed the button to inject the sleep agent again.
“You’re a strong, brave, woman, Shepard.”
Her leg hurt where it used to be, and she didn’t do anything very brave.
Name: Jane Shepard Age: 22 [As of 4 June 2177] Current Rank and Two-Character Vocational Code: N6 [passed to be N7] Lieutenant Commander [Field promotion, sole ranked officer left surviving and in command, recording of at least on person of lower rank than she when Commander Trapper and Lieutenant Commander Heath perished] Notes: Younger sister of John Shepard and the daughter of Hannah Shepard. Born on the SSV Elizabeth. High scores on practice tests that have not been submitted, but appears to self-sabotage certain tests to avoid something. May have psychological issues regarding what she calls "the Shepard Legacy" and highly protective parents. Took up N-training, possibly to escape rumors of nepotism from other Naval officers. Was N-classed before her older brother. Updated Notes: Older brother was the Hero of Elysium. Updated Notes: Sole official survivor of a Thresher Maw attack on Akuze. Promoted to Commander and N7. Artificial leg as a result of the attack. Uncertain psychological profile changes to come. Alert appropriate Cerberus Cells to upgrade defenses in case Shepard decides to follow through with her warnings of investigating the beacon and attack. Update: Thresher Maw toxin results in a higher tolerance and requirements for achieving the effects of drugs and alcohol. Observe Jane Shepard for signs of substance abuse.
A lit cigarette was lifted to the mouth of a shadowy figure. A woman became visible, walking to him as they observed a blue giant be devoured by its denser neighboring star.
"Miranda, report." The smoking person was male.
"The Alliance is uncertain about suggesting Shepard for active duty, even with the Captain of the Odette vouching for her mental health. While he was not acting under any of Cerberus' direct suggestions, I recommend putting his proposal through."
The other sighed and lowered the cigarette. "Jane Shepard is one of many candidates for Humanity's first Spectre. We have others."
Miranda lowered her head for a moment. "Then why put the investment into her replacement leg?"
"She didn't do much of anything spectacular in order to survive the Thresher Maw."
"Then why the leg?"
"She survived. I want to see what she will do now."
"Have her put into active duty. On Earth, she under constant Alliance watch, and wary of being locked away into a mental health facility. Or she would be, based on her previous psychological profile."
"An interesting thought."
Miranda's eyebrow twitched.
The man's silhouette hinted at a smile. "It is good to see you are concerned about all of our candidates."
"Yes, the other was not showing nearly as well as Shepard siblings. On Torfun, the Butcher was not our other candidate either, but two people we had not considered. It is a shame the Akuze Rescue turned into a disaster before Shepard even arrived."
"Report received."
"Thank you." Miranda disappeared.
The man hit a few buttons. "I explicitly said not to use Akuze, doctor."
"I'm so sorry. The signal was jumbled."
"You will be punished for your failure. But not today." He ended the call before looking at the stars around him. The Thresher Maw project had some prospect survivors who might revenge. "Or the younger Shepard will."
"It is fitting that Shepard, our most scarred mentally and physically candidate, be a Spectre. Too bad she will now be unpredictable after finding the truth about Akuze. If not her, then her brother will be a Spectre. But he will also be unpredictable after learning the truth, liable to seeking revenge for what had been done to her personally or through the justice system." He lowered his hand to tap off the burnt ashes of the stick. Taking in a slow drag he spoke again. "I will need to adjust our plans regardless."
There was only a slight, but low-ranged sound, creak of machinery to respond to him.
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