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Review Response, July 14-27

I didn’t do one last week because... ... well, just because.

DE #031

1) I'm so happy you write sun and moon story's and I can never find any these too don't get enough love by the fandom

And I’d like to write more, if enough people gave a damn about those two.

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And now, this is what DE looks like. Nothing really has changed. The only Sun & Moon chapter still remains as the absolute minimum.

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Destiny #001

1) Just finished this and took a look at your other are the best pokemon adventures writer i have ever seen.

Thank you very much.

2) Wow one of the best stories i have read on this site

Thank you very much too.

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Destiny #014

1) Omg that cliffhanger at the end. Hmmm Green has a lot coming for him right now hm. I mean he kinda deserves it ngl, after all he did to Blue. Some friend he was, didn't even talk to her. Blue really has no reason to call him his friend. And I found Crystal's behaviour rather odd. Surely she should have realized how she treated Blue when Bleu told her no? True, Crystal didn't do anything outright to harm Blue, but still. Crystal should have been mature enough to realizer her mistake, but then I don't blame her for not as she was under a stressful situation. And being in a stressful situation makes you lose some of yourself. Speaking of stressful situations, the whole battle strategy that Platinum came up with was really good. There were some flaws, like how she thought that Peter would just allow them to back-off and heal, when he could very well just send out more pokemon and interrupt that process. But using the dexholder's powers to their advantage was very nice indeed. It helps make them perform at their best and in turn help churn out the best possible outcome.

Not that that happened of course, she didn't anticipate Blue (which who could've) but one things she should have anticipated was a battle where anything could go wrong. Again, not that you could blame her. Stressful situation, not much time... It all adds up. But kudos to her for coming up with a plan that did (at first) work better than the last. At this point it all seems like trial and error. Which again you can't rely on, because at any point it could turn into the "final battle" and then you wouldn't have a chance to correct your mistake. But then that's all they have to go on now. That and type advantages will work, you touched on that this chapter (which I thought was really nice 'cause I had been thinking about it!).

I also very much liked how you wrapped up any loose ends. Like how Peter was healing his pokemon. I hadn't even thought of that. He could spend money at the poke mart and buy a bunch of potions and whatnot but that would cost soooo much money. And that's not really the effective way to go out as there is free healing lmao. But Green also should have thought not only to close the poke centers (which is an iffy idea because what about all the other people that need to heal their pokemon, but necessary because what else can ya do) but also the poke marts because this dude somehow got all this shiny pokemon. He has his connections and resources, he might have the money to buy the potions and whatnot for his pokemon. But that's only my humble opinion as closing the poke centers itself will be very problematic.

On another topic, I was thinking about something somebody said in a previous chapter (I think it was Peter) about legendary pokemon. And how he needed them to defeat the dexholders. Which I believe was also a reason he chose Blue as an ally (I say ally hesitantly because he forced her into it) because she had previously caught three legendary pokemon. And I do think it would be a great help to the dexholders if they got some legendary pokemon as well to fight Peter. That would certainly help no? Simply training their own pokemon I don't think will be enough against this guy. But that was just a thought.

Now I had something else to say but it has slipped my mind. Ah yes, it was something quick on how Sapphire was overcoming her fear over Salamance and I just thought that her asking Crystal about her Salamence was a great idea. I mean it was inevitable, Sapphire overcoming her fear that is, but I didn't even think about Crystal and her insane poked entries lmao.

Anyways that's all for now, I would write more but I wanna read the next chapter. Thank you.

This is pretty much the only reason why I’m making this post now instead of next week or whenever I’m doing better.

I don’t think Crystal was being particularly odd in this chapter. I mean, she had no way of knowing how Blue would react. All Crystal knew was that Blue and Green were in a fight that he forgot about, and thus ended up inadvertently neglecting her. So at this point, all Crystal would assume was that Blue had just got up and left, just wandering around the world on her own. Not show up during a struggle against an overwhelming opponent, and certainly not attacking her former friends.

Platinum’s strategy is a very good one, but this battle happened before the Dex Holders were properly prepared, and before she even saw all of the opponent’s Pokemon. In short, she didn’t know all about her opponent, and she was not fully familiar with everyone on her side. So... a loss.

Closing Pokemon Centers might be problematic, but... martial law? Hm. Also, there are other ways of healing without using items or Pokemon Centers, such as Softboiled (which is usable in the field). And since the Mega Hunter was based on a real life person and I know he has at least 3 Pokemon with Softboiled...

Blue’s importance to the Mega Hunter isn’t really for the Legendary Pokemon, but... you’ll see. And while Legendaries may be useful for the Dex Holders... Destiny does use a mix of game mechanics. Some Legendaries will not be able to do sh*t.

Since Destiny is WAY before Dex Holder team overhauls, no one has a Salamence, So the only reasonable solution was to ask Crystal, who has canonically completed the Pokedex, at least to first 3 Generations. ... Makes you wonder why Crystal is still using the sh*tsack team in Destiny...

I look forward to seeing more reviews.

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Destiny #017

1) I made it this far into the story, however I find it to be very cringy...dropping it here

To each their own.

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And now Destiny looks like this.

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Legacy #007

1) TBH This story (no actually ALL your stories) deserve more attention. I really love the way you manage to bring out the character's actual personalities instead of using some random-ass character traits as I see in most fanfiction. Can't wait for the next part!

Thank you. And... well, I probably will be updating Legacy “soon”.

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Still a downhill trend, but ignoring the outlier... it’s not too bad, I guess.

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Heart #004

1) Filler chapters are good. I'm a sucker for it so yeah sjdjndn it's good TwT

Fillers are often necessary. Especially if it’s not in a discontinued time from the plot.

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And Heart now looks like this.

#qna

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