Luz’s Not So Great Luck
Fandom: The Owl House
Relationship: Eda Clawthorne & Luz Noceda, Luz Noceda & Willow Park, Luz Noceda & Gus Porter, Luz Noceda & Amity Blight, Eda Clawthorne & Lilith Clawthorne
Characters: Eda Clawthorne, Luc Noceda, Willow Park, Gus Porter, Lilith Clawthorne, Amity Blight
Warnings: Implied Child Abuse,
Summary: Luz and Eda don't talk much about how the magical human stumbled into Eda's life. Literally. But that doesn't stop people from asking.
Theme: Unconscious (aka what kick starts this plot)
Notes: Okay got a few things to cover here before we start.
Eda's curse. This does get addressed in the next one (since we're still in the same verse) but for now for reassurance sake I'll say this. Yes Eda was still cursed in this verse. However after that things take a turn. I'll explain maybe whenever I get to the standalone for this. But she is still a disability rep.
Just how she is a rep is now different.I wouldn't remove the curse without putting something in its place. Eda's curse means far too much on a personal level to erase her representation entirely. I do have a plan. And it will make sense I hope.
Also in that same kind of vein yes there is a catch here with Luz doing magic. It is kind of referenced here but we'll get into more details later.
Last thing I can't fully go into the details as to why, yet, but Camila is absent from this Luz's life. Not by choice mind you. But that plays a part in how Luz ends up in this situation.
Last note. There ended up being a bit too many parallels for me between this and Campverse as the kick off point. And I decided rather than keep two separate stories, to integrate the Campverse idea into this where I could. Unforunately not everything could. But here we are. With this sort of fusion between campverse and orphanverse with some other stuff thrown in.
No orphanverse isn’t being dropped. Just campverse.
Anyways Ao3 link here.
Story is under the read more otherwise~
Eda, King, and Luz don’t often talk about the first time they met.
Mainly because Luz doesn’t remember any of it.
Sure she remembers the decision to run away from the camp. She remembers finding the portal door and stumbling through it. The last thing she remembers is a flash of orange that she now knows was Eda’s hair. After that though everything is blank for a few days.
Really to be honest she doesn’t remember much of those first few weeks if she is being completely honest.
The few times she asked Eda it went nowhere. Eda always gets this distant look when those early weeks come up. King’s answers are worded in a way so Luz is never sure if she can take him seriously.
In the end it doesn’t really matter to Luz.
She found Eda and she’s away from the camp that’s all she really cares about.
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Lilith is the first one to ask about it.
It’s a quiet moment between her and Eda. Amity, Luz, and King are elsewhere. They’re talking about some of the after effects of the curse.
Even now years after the curse had been removed. The effects aren’t completely gone.
Eda had paused for a moment to check on some potions she had brewing at the moment. Lilith of course had questioned what seemed like an abnormally large order compared to when she had seen Eda working before. To which Eda had simply said it was for a monthly personal stock.
“I wasn’t aware you took so many potions.” Lilith said, frowning. Not liking at all the implications at all that the five different cauldrons implied.
Eda shakes her head at that. “I don’t. They’re not mine, they're for Luz.”
“Oh.” Amity had mentioned Luz had said she had some health issues. Lilith had never really thought about the extensiveness of it before now. “I didn’t realize it was such a concern.”
“Yeah well they caused some hiccups when she first came to stay with me so I’ve had to deal with them front and center.”
Hell, part of the reason Luz had ended up with her was because of it.
“You know I never asked. How did you two meet in the first place?”
“There’s not much to tell.”
Really there wasn’t. All it had been was Luz stumbling through the door which she had forgotten to close. Fainting from a high fever.
Luz had originally ended up staying at The Owl House because Eda had no clue where she had come from. She didn’t know where the local landmarks were. Or where the human healers were. And she wasn’t about to kick out a sick child on her watch.
The following weeks were where the story really started arguably.
“There must be some story behind it Edalyn.” Lilith protests.
Eda pauses for a moment there seeming to consider how to best respond to that. “Maybe there is but do I ask you how you and Amity came to live together?”
That does the trick in getting Lilith to stop the questions.
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Amity is next though she’s a lot less direct than her mother figure.
Boscha was being her normal self. Though a comment directed towards Eda had managed to set Luz off in a way Amity wasn’t used to seeing before.
It had been only through some quick thinking and intervention no one had ended up in a fist fight.
“Why did you even go after Boscha? You know that’s just going to make things worse right?”
“I know but you don’t get it. She never goes after you and Lilith.”
Now it was Amity’s turn to get annoyed. “Only because of Lilith’s status and you know that.”
Luz realized she had accidentally stepped on some toes in her own anger. “Right sorry. It just hit really close to home this time. Too close.”
Amity frowned not for the first time confused by her friend’s behavior and history. It didn’t make much sense to her if she was being honest. “What part the part about Eda being a-”
“No, no. It's the other part.” Luz admitted with hesitance. “Eda took me in when no one else wanted me. If I didn’t have Eda, I don’t know where I would be right now.”
Dead probably. Eda had saved her in more than one fashion.
“How did she save you anyway?”
Luz didn’t like talking about her time before the Boiling Isles. Something that for the most part Amity respected. Everyone had skeletons in their closet. Sometimes a bit more figuratively then literal in the case of Luz. So Amity was always wondering how in the world a wild witch like Eda had essentially come to adopt a human.
“I wish I could tell you but I honestly don’t remember much after I first started living there. My...issue was uncontrolled back then and at its worst before Eda helped.”
Oh that’s what Luz meant by save.
Amity lets the topic drop from there.
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Then Willow.
Willow is more just curious about how they became a family to begin with when she asks Luz the question.
“Does it really matter?” Luz asks.
To her at least it doesn’t matter. Eda’s the first person that she feels genuinely cares about her. She never knew her parents and the foster families she had gone through had only tolerated her so much.
“Nah I get it. Family’s family. Regardless if it’s by blood. I was just being a bit nosey that’s all.”
Luz nods, she guessed the question was inevitable at some point. Considering whether to answer before saying. “To be honest I don’t really remember anything about the first few days.”
“Nothing?”
“No. When Eda found me I was sick, extremely so. I was in and out of consciousness for a few days. And even then after that it's all kinds of muddled until she helped me find the right potions to help.”
To be honest Luz doesn’t really remember much about her first month on the Isles.
“I didn’t realize it was flaring at the time.”
“Only because of the camp.” Luz grumbled.
Her opinion on the whole camp affair is complicated. She hates every memory attached to it. She hates how bad things got. However without it she probably would never have met Eda. Never found the Isles that had slowly become her home in the past year.
So, yeah it was complicated to say the least.
Willow’s look at first surprises Luz. Then she remembers that she almost never talks about how screwed up the camp was.
Eda is really the only one who knows outside of her healer. And Luz sometimes just prefers to keep it private.
The less she reflects on that time the better.
“Hey, I’m fine.” Luz assures.
“Still that that happened to begin with…”
“It’s messed up. I know that. However, without them I would never have met Eda or you or anyone else. So-” Luz shrugs. “It’s not all horrible.”
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Finally Gus thought of his way of asking if by far the least indirect.
“I just don’t get if there’s so much cool stuff on Earth why you left?”
Luz thinks for a moment picking her words carefully. Gus, of the friend group probably knew the least about her pre-Eda time. Part of Luz didn’t want to break his fascination with the human realm. Just because she didn't have a great history there.
Though that reality breaking moment was probably going to come at some point anyway.
“It’s...complicated. Not everything's sunshine and rainbows on Earth, Gus. I know you see the good side.” Partly because that was mainly what came up when it came to Human Appreciation Club things. “But not everything’s perfect.”
“Sunshine and rainbows?”
“Ah right you guys wouldn’t have that here.” Even after living on the Isles for a year Luz still got tripped up over the different metaphors. “I don’t know what the equivalent here is but basically means not everything is good and happy as it seems.”
“Ah so like there can’t always be moonlight and conjurings. Got it.”
Luz made a note to ask Eda about that later. Though she guessed it sounded similar enough.
Maybe she should ask Eda for a book on witch metaphors.
“So were things really that bad?”
Luz hesitates for a moment trying to think how to best respond to it. Sure not everything was bad. But for years the good had been buried under so much.
“I’m sorry.”
“Why?”
“It must hurt to think about Earth if you have all those bad memories attached to it.”
“It does sometimes.” Luz admits. “But talking with you about the good times helps me remember that not everything was bad all the time.”
Gus lights up. “I’m glad I can help then.”
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It’s only after Gus that Luz finally asks Eda what actually happened.
“Why do you wanna know.”
“I guess I’m just curious. I don’t remember anything after I arrived for several days. And by the time I really started getting better you had pretty much just taken me in.”
Eda seems to debate at first for a moment, finally saying. “Alright. But first let's start with what’s the last thing you remember before waking up here. And the first thing you remember after that.”
“Stumbling through the portal door and then waking up in your room a few days later.”
“Yeah that sounds about right.” Eda agrees. “Alright then-”
Owlbert had been running behind getting back from his human treasure run. So Eda had left the door open. What she hadn’t expected was for Owlbert to show up with a teenage girl in tow.
Before Eda gets the chance to question anyone on anything. Like just how did Owlbert acquire a human apparently. The girl passes out on her.
“What the heck?”
King walks up to her side. “Is she dead?”
“I don’t think so.” Eda kneels besides the teenage girl. Placing a hand in front of the mouth. Still breathing at least. Though what had caused her to turn into a heap is a good question.
Maybe it had something to do with going through the portal. Hand moving she passes by the kids forehead. Which she can now tell is radiating heat.
Fever. The kid was sick.
Which raised a whole bunch of questions that definitely weren’t going to get answered right now with her out for the count.
Probably the best thing to do was to take her to a human healer. But Eda doesn’t know anything about them. Let alone where to find one.
Well she did know how to treat an illness at least. Or at least a high fever. And as long as the kid was sick and out cold she was Eda’s responsibility. Whether she liked it or not.
First things first was to get that fever down. Eda reasoned, scooping the girl up off the floor. And then she could question Owlbert on a few things.
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Eda learns the girl’s name on her second day, Luz.
Admittedly she doesn’t learn much else. Despite her work the fever still has yet to break. And Luz is in and out of sleep most of the time.
Owlbert has been even less helpful in figuring out where Luz came from. He had said he had thought she was lost in the woods. And getting caught in the rain seemed like a bad idea.
He hadn’t even realized Luz was sick at first.
Of course naturally the easiest way to find answers would be to send him scouting to see where the kid came from. However right now she wants Owlbert closer to her.
So for now the mystery remains.
At least keeping an eye on Luz is easy enough. The kid is sleeping other than when Eda shakes her awake to make sure she eats or drinks something.
Day four post arrival throws a hiccup in that Eda had never been expecting.
Eda wakes up to an empty nest.
A quick talk with Owlbert tells her that he hasn’t left but has moved down to the kitchen. Moving down herself causes an eyebrow raise though as Eda finds Luz cooking. Or trying to if the way she’s falling asleep again on her feet is any indication.
“Kid?”
Whatever Eda expects, it's not Luz about jump startling herself back awake. Followed by a string of apologies.
“Kid-”
“Luz.”
Eda wonders why the correction for a moment before pushing the question out of her mind. “Luz, take a breath for a second I’m not mad. I was just concerned to see you cooking while sick.”
“But if I don’t cook then how can I earn my place.”
“I forgot I said that.” Luz interrupts for a moment. She hadn’t realized she had said anything of that nature. But then again Eda hadn’t really seemed surprised when she had first talked about what life on Earth had been like for her.
“It’s not the only thing you said. But it was the one that started setting off alarm bells. Because-”
“No one should have to earn a spot in a family.” Luz repeats what Eda had said to her so many times now. “I know you keep reminding me.”
“And I will keep telling you as long as you need it. Since you lived with some messed up people.”
Well if that didn’t raise a whole bunch of red flags Eda isn’t sure what will. “Luz it's okay you don’t need to do that. You’re sick.”
“But-”
“No but.” Eda cuts in. “Now are you actually hungry or were you just trying to help?”
“More thirsty than hungry.”
“Okay I can work with that.”
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Honestly part of Eda is starting to wonder if Luz is faking the memory loss.
Okay, not really but she was getting a bit tired of repeating herself to Luz.
The only time Luz doesn’t seem to have known where she was, was during the kitchen incident. And Eda thinks she was more on autopilot than anything else that time.
At least there hadn’t been a repeat of that she supposed.
Regardless Eda is almost at her wits end with trying to get Luz better. When a rather big surprise happens.
Luz casts a light spell.
It’s an accident. Luz still doesn’t have control over her magic. And her being sick only makes the situation worse. She’s trying to put the little ball of light out when Eda comes into the scene. Not having seen Luz casting but not being able to miss the floating ball of yellow light in the room no matter how hard Luz is trying to hide it. “Huh I don’t remember casting a light spell in here.”
Luz freezes in place. One hand still holding the light ball and staring at Eda wide-eyed. And proceeds to start panicking.
Okay, panicking over magic was definitely not something Eda thought she would ever see let alone experience. But at least she knows what to do. Grabbing Luz and pulling her in close so she can she starts taking her through the exercises she was taught. “Breathe with me. In…” Eda internally counts to 7 before talking again. “And out….”
Slowly but surely Luz’s breathing slows to a normal pace. Eda gives her a couple of minutes to collect herself before asking. “Are you feeling better?” A nod. “Alright do you think you can tell me what that was all about?”
There’s a pause before Luz shakes her head no.
Eda’s not sure where to go from there. There was some part of her that was confused. Why would someone panic over using their magic?
“You know now that-”
“That you were worried I was going to take everything the wrong way? Yeah I’m aware. But at the time kid you gotta remember I had just walked in on you panicking over a light spell. It didn’t make much sense.”
Really she needed some answers on what the heck had just happened. But she didn’t want to force them out of the kid.
“Could you at least tell me why you were panicking over a light spell?” Eda decides to try.
Luz looks up for the first time in the whole conversation. Confusion evident on her face. “A light spell?”
“Yes, a light spell.” Eda’s equally baffled but pushes it aside for a moment. She casts her own light spell as an example. “See? Just like yours.”
Except maybe not. Luz stares at Eda’s own spell with a sense of open mouthed wonder. And now Eda is left wondering if she’s ever seen anyone else use magic before.
It would maybe explain the panic attack depending on how other humans viewed magic.
“Can I touch it?”
Eda cocks her head slightly wondering why but decides it doesn’t matter. “Sure. It shouldn’t hurt you.”
The way Luz holds the ball gently in her hands cements Eda’s suspicions. “You’ve never seen anyone else cast magic before have you?”
Luz shakes her head no slowly. Some part of Eda’s heart breaks when Luz speaks her voice cracking slightly. “Everyone back on Earth just calls me a menace." If she's lucky as Eda later learns. Sometimes that's the kinder thing to be called. "I’ve tried so hard to control this but everything I do just makes it worse.”
“Magic can be difficult to control if you don’t know what you’re doing.”
“I know.” Luz has a distant look in her eyes for a moment. And Eda wonders what she’s remembering.
Eda’s not sure who's more surprised by her next suggestion. Her or Luz. “Would you like me to teach you how to control your magic?”
Luz stares at her for a moment. “You would be willing to do that?”
“Of course. No one should have to live in fear of something that is a part of them.”
Eda will take it to the grave that part of this is self motivated. Yes she wants to help Luz to learn to control her magic. No one should have to live in that much fear of their own self. She would know herself how hard and trying that could be.
However, a human doing actual magic is such a curiosity. She’s hoping that maybe having Luz around some more might solve how this was even possible.
Though part of her wonders if she is going to like what she finds out.
However, despite the self motivation there is some sincerity. She remembers what it was like when was freshly cursed. Being worried about turning into The Owl Beast on a moment’s notice.
That was part of the past now. However that didn’t mean she couldn’t sympathize with Luz.
“You know what that’s like?”
“Yeah but that’s a story for another time.”
No way was Eda going to explain just yet her troubled teenage years. Or her own magic based issues. That could come later. If ever.
On the bright side this does make things a bit easier. If Luz can do magic then she must have some sort of demon or witch blood in her. So a healer would be able to properly treat her. She just has to find a healer.
“And there’s not much else to say there really. You started getting better after Althea came out. And the rest is history.”
“So I basically wore you down into taking me in?”
“In a way I guess you could say that. I mean there was no one real moment I knew I was taking you in permanently. Though I guess learning you can cast magic was the catalyst. It just kind of happened. Whatever resistance I might have had left after nursing you back from a fever went away pretty quickly.”
What had started out as a strange want to help driven by a degree of curiosity. Had evolved as Luz had gotten closer to her. As Luz had gotten better and slowly started opening up to her and King. After Eda had found out the actual chain of events that had set up the two of them meeting in the first place…
Yeah, Eda had been more than willing to let Luz move in permanently rather than return to the human realm.
Sure the family thing wouldn’t come for a few more weeks. As Luz had wormed her way into her heart. But at first it was nice to have some other constant company besides King.
The continuing mystery of Luz’s ability was just part of the equation. At this point Luz was as much family as Lilith and King were.
“Thank you.”
Luz isn’t entirely sure if she’s thanking Eda or Owlbert. Since they both had a role in her finding a life and family on the Isles.
“Your welcome kid.”
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Haven Hotel: That’s Disengagement!
A princess with long black wavy hair walked out onto a high balcony. She wore a black undershirt with a white bow tie on top. A dark teal shirt, long white pants and white high heel shoes completed the look. Her face was pale white and teal blushes were present on her cheeks. Her eyes consisted of white pupils and dark blue sclera. Perched on her head was a black spiked crown. She was the inverted, antithesis of Charlie, the princess of Hell in a parallel world.
“For all my life, I’ve been taught that all angels have good inside them. But I know that to be a lie. Ever since Lucifer and Lilith, God’s closest angels betrayed Him… I don’t think I can believe in these flawed teachings anymore…”
The princess was Coerciona Egnam, Coercia for short. She was born and raised in Heaven…though she was not at all one would expect her to be in such a place. Self-entitled and pessimistic, nothing much could cheer her up except heavy metal music, rebelling against the rules and the occasional brawl.
“It makes sense that only a worthy few are able to be here in Heaven. Choosing them out of the sea of sinner scum. Yet ironically, even the saints and Heaven-born aren’t flawless all the time. It’s inevitable that all those imperfect beings will go to Hell. They deserve to deal with suffering and challenges. Best of all, they wouldn’t be bound by social expectations. Heck, I wouldn’t be too surprised if it were me. I do enjoy my comfortable life here, just not these restrictions.”
Her servants Pub and Chub were fat white naked cherubs with horns on their heads, small white feathery wings, and black eyes. One tested the strings on an electric guitar while the other shot out torpedoes from a small cannon.
Outside was a white clock tower standing tall against the blue sky. The numbers read 0 then changed to 365 days. Writing above the numbers read “Days until the next cleanse in Hell.”
The black Exorcists did their job in eliminating part of the demon population in 2P Hell like they did every year in the canon Hell. But at the same time each year, the Anti-Exorcists, risen white demons with white bat wings and horns, invaded 2P Heaven. They carried glowing black pitchforks and turned innocent denizens into demons. The Anti-Exorcists would carry books and tempt angels with their innermost desires. Sex, sin, self-expression, sorcery, whatever that need was. Then, once they were hooked, they were stabbed with the pitchforks, causing their wings to burn off and sending them plummeting down to Hell. Nearby families would grieve at their loss.
It was quite the entertaining show for Princess Coercia!
Coercia leaned against the marble balcony and began to sing in a low growl.
(“I’m Always Evading Shadows”)
“At the end of the journey, there’s suffering
Denying it, how often I’ve tried
But my life’s a disgrace
Just a slap in the face
And the harsh truths have all been denied”
“A sliver of despair in this world of light
I know this world’s not free of sin
I search for the good
But get misunderstood
And reality will always win”
“Why have I always been imperfect?
Lost in this brainwashed sea
I wonder if the world’s to blame
I wonder if it could be me”
“I’m always evading shadows
Trapped, drowning in the social flow
Free-will forbidden, my answers are hidden
Lying down below”
“Some people sugarcoat their speeches
I always blab out what I mean
I may be cruel but I am no fool
Things are never what they seem
Believe me”
“I’m always evading shadows
Waiting for people to awaken
In vain”
A nearby portal opened and out came the Exterminators, bloodstains over their wings and bodies and harpoons. They took off their creepy LED masks, their white angelic faces revealed. One by one, the citizens clapped and cheered. One of the Archangels with four black wings flew up to the front, his spiked halo glowing. He took off his mask, revealing a white stern face with yellow eyes and short black hair. In his utility belt were a few daggers, whips, chains and a bottle of emergency holy water.
“Another successful purge,” their leader Samael (Venom of God) praised. “You cleansed more sinners while still keeping the population in a good balance. Well done, all of you.” He cleared his throat and made a cross symbol over his heart. “For the greater good in the name of our Lord.”
The angels repeated the phrase.
“Until next year. Dismissed.” The Archangel soldiers saluted and then flew off separately to see their families. Several of the angels, having been brainwashed in their Exterminator states, shook their heads sadly at what they had done.
All around Coercia, Holy City was basked in a heavenly glow. The city was located up in the sky among the clouds, but no one had to worry about falling, even the ones without their wings out. A large church with the appearance of the Notre Dame Cathedral stood proudly in the city square, made of polished marble. Choirs and songs floated through the stained glass windows as the regular angels went in and out to pray and visit with their neighbors. A large fountain sprouted non-alcoholic wine of a golden color. It had a white statue of Mary and Jesus as a young boy at the top, both with welcoming faces.
The streets were spotless and clean. Roofs and roads were powered by the sun’s rays. The Cloud 9 supermarket had endless amounts of food for sale…no one ever had to worry about going hungry. Charity workers and volunteers worked by the dozens, passing out food and bestowing miracles for those who needed them in the lower levels of Heaven. Metatron, the highest ranking angel, was busy keeping records of human lives, deaths and the messages of God.
This version of Heaven was very similar to the Heaven in the realm next door, the one above the familiar Hell with the Hazbin Hotel. The architecture was almost the same. But unlike those angels with their blonde hair and red blushes, these angels most often had black hair and teal blushes on their pale cheeks. Like in the other Heaven, some of the bipedal angels displayed animal-like characteristics: some had heads of doves, others had swan wings and mannerisms. Many of them had fur, ears, and fluffy tails of dogs and wolves. It was the only place where dogs and cats could dance and prance together without conflict. Still a few others had faces of flowers or even objects like harps and musical instruments.
God’s Palace was the grandest place of all: it was settled at the highest point of Heaven like Mount Olympus. Only a few angels were allowed to visit there. God’s abode, the Empyrean, had an elite group of angels guarding it. Seraph angels with six fiery rainbow wings guarded the throne of God, chanting “Holy, holy, holy!” much to the annoyance to those nearby. There were rumors that in the palace gardens, the Tree of Life and the Tree of Knowledge were grown there, heavily protected.
Lucius and Lilian were Coercia’s parents, those who took the place of Lucifer and Lilith after they were banished. They were named the new king and queen of heaven (Under God and a few Archangels), thus Coercia became the princess.
Lucius had a white face, teal blushes on his cheeks and short dark hair. Lucius wore a gray suit with a dark blue bow tie and a black top hat with two white feathers attacked to the brim. Lilian’s hair was long and black, and she too had the teal blushes and typical angel features. She wore a golden halo crown and an elegant white sequined dress. Both had white wings which could turn black when they were angry or defensive.
In a nearby movie studio, Valentine the butterfly producer, Nil the TV angel and Ashen, the doll angel sat together playing a board game. Despite liking old fashioned shows and the like, they still controlled much of Heaven’s technology and media. Iris, owner of an emporium, cried as she crossed out the name of her former female colleague, Francesca.
Along the street, a red car stopped beside the sidewalk. A tall creature opened the car door and stepped out. The spider angel had a furry dark gray face and body, plus multiple slender arms: six in total. He wore tall boots, green gloves and a shirt with a teal bow-tie near the top. His shirt and sleeves had black and dark green stripes. Green dots resembling eyes were located under his eyes.
“Thank you for the ride,” said the spider angel.
“No problem, Devil Grit,” said the driver Sivart, a white furry owl guy wearing a top hat. He tipped his hat to him and drove away.
Devil Grit walked over to a vending machine and bought himself a granola bar. He then gave it to a homeless guy leaning against the wall.
He walked inside a building and onto a stage in an auditorium. His opponent was already standing nervously at his spot, a microphone rising from the ground and stopping in front of him.
Sir Anguis was the nervous white snake. He had a white face with large slightly teal eyes with white pupils. He wore a white bow tie with a blue circle in the center below his thin neck. Surrounding his face on a flap of skin were bright teal eyes against dark purple. His suit was light gray with dark purple vertical stripes. Finally, he wore a large light gray top hat with a large green moving eye in the center.
The crowd settled into their seats and the debate began.
“Those other brave do gooders will do great with helping me with my presentation. Anyone want to try?”
A couple of hands shot up. Mechanical eggs on robotic legs moved around to help out the white snake lord.
“Oh thank you, my Nestlings,” he said.
Air Anguis pushed a button and a presentation showed up on a screen titled “Heaven Economics and Invention Ideas.”
“I don’t like to fight,” Sir Anguis said, clearing his throat, “and I’m super nervous up here…”
The Nestlings rolled their eyes.
Devil Grit glared at his cowardly opponent who then yelped, “Don’t look at me like that!”
“Heaven doesn’t need any future technology,” Devil Grit argued as he stepped to his podium, “because we already have better things: friendships, food, and fun.”
Sir Anguis glanced down nervously at his note cards and read from them. “At this rate I will persuade the entire East end of Holy City by night’s beginning. Or was it day’s end? And nothing, not a single beauty in this paradise of bliss, will be able to change my mind or escape the constrictive grasp of persuasive argumentation.”
“Heaven will be ours, though it’s mine in my mind. And everybody will know the name of…”
“Scared Snake,” said a female voice.
“W-who said that?” Sir Anguis asked.
“You ready for a debate, old man?”
The voice belonged to Berri Blossom, the opposite of Cherri Bomb in Hell. She was a tall cyclops with black skin, with a single green eye with a black cross in the center. She wore a long dark green dress and white high heeled shoes. Her black skin was decorated in some areas near her shoulders with tiny teal specks. Her long hair was curly, blue at the top and black near the bottom. She pushed her thin dark rimmed glasses up to her face, looking at her organized set of notes in front of her.
She walked over beside her academic partner Devil Grit. “Why don’t you play with your tinker toys somewhere else while I go over the logistics of divine law school?” She looked professional and poised. “Seven Reasons Why Heavenly Traditions Never Fail.”
“You want to go, madam?” Sir Anguis asked, a spark of rebellion in him. He fiddled with a few gadgets before the well-dressed Nestling eggs…egged him on to continue. He flicked his hood back. “Well, let the battle for tenure and status begin!”
A neon logo appeared on the screen, saying “777 News” surrounded by a halo. The names of the news cast appeared on the bottom of the screen.
“Good afternoon, Holy City!” smiled a pale woman with short black hair, wearing a light blue dress. “I’m Catie Carejoy!”
“And I’m Ron Wrench!” said the man next to her, wearing a business suit and who had a wrench for a head.
After discussing the weather, various humane societies, and legends on Earth, Catie continued, “The debate battle is underway between inventor and coward Sir Anguis and professional economics expert Berri Blossom. Coming up next, we have an exclusive interview with the daughter of His Majesty Lucius, who’s here to discuss her brand new passion-project! All that and more after the break!”
Inside the break room, Phalla the romantic butterfly angel adjusted Coercia’s white bow tie. Nearby, a blue tinted sign read “No smoking.” Another sign read “In The Air” in large letters.
“Okay, you remember what to say?” Phalla asked Coercia.
“Yes, I’m ready,” Coercia stated.
Phalla brushed her long black hair from her face, the ends of her black hair teal. Like Vaggie in Hell, Phalla’s thick hair extended down to her legs, giving her hair the appearance of moth wings. She had a glowing green cross over her right eye and her left eye was purple with a white pupil. A teal bow was perched on top of her head. Her skin was light gray and she wore a dark gray crop top with white Xs over her breasts. She also wore leggings, her right legging striped dark green and light gray, her left legging light gray.
“Oh this is gonna be great!” Phalla squealed happily. “How about you make your speech sound more exciting?”
“Come on, Phalla, I know what I’m going to say,” Coercia answered, crossing her arms.
Phalla walked over to the pitcher of ambrosia punch on the table. Pub and Chub ate bagels from the table. Phalla got an idea. “Oh! What if you…”
“Sing a song about it?” Coercia asked, with a roll of her eyes. “I’m not going to. This is serious!” She curled her hand into a fist and brought it down on the palm of her other hand. “They won’t take me serious if I start belting out some random song. Life isn’t a musical.”
“But neither is it an emo tragedy,” Phalla pointed out. “Life is great, especially with all the cute guys around.” Her single purple eye shinned.
“Romance, bleh,” Coercia made a face and Phalla giggled.
“Hey,” Phalla brightened, pulling out a piece of paper. “I have some ideas about what you could say.” She bounced up and down. “The highlighted bits are the best parts!”
“They’re all highlighted,” Coercia replied, scanning the paper. “You call your childish drawing your ideas for me?”
“Sure!” Phalla said. “Look here.” It showed a list of different terms “sinners = winners” “Misunderstood are still good” and “demons and angels party between worlds!” Skulls were lined up at the bottom of the page: “we’re all connected by death.”
“Say, that’s actually pretty good!” Coercia said with a smile of sharp teeth.
“Thanks!” Phalla beamed.
Coercia snatched the piece of paper from her friend and tore it in half, much to her shock. “But you should know my ideas are always better.” She tossed the pieces of paper aside, gave a salute and walked out the door.
Catie waved with a smile. “Hi. I’m Catie Carejoy.” She held out her hand but Coercia didn’t take it, instead remarking, “You can put that away. I don’t touch commoners, I have standards.” Catie, looked stunned, pulling her hand back. “So this project of yours, when did you come up with this idea of creating a hotel in order to…break the law as the rumors say?”
The angel crew murmured nervously.
“I’m gonna keep this short,” Coercia said as she walked over to the desk. “You might think my idea doesn’t hold water, but that doesn’t matter to me. I’m too influential to give a flying feather about what some stuffy old news lady thinks of my proposal.”
The crowd gasped. Ron shook his head.
“Well, if you can’t take constructive criticism and be polite…”
“…and we’re live!” called a voice as a buzzer sounded.
“And we’re back!” Catie said, rushing over into her seat. “So, Carrie…”
“It’s Princess Coerciona Egnam,” said Coercia, sitting in a chair beside her and Ron Wrench.
“Sorry. So tell us about your project.”
Coercia took a deep breath. “As most of you know, I was born here in Heaven, and growing up, I’ve always tried to see the good in everything around me. But recently, I don’t believe that’s always the case. We just completed another Extermination. So many sinful souls lost but for what reason? God said in the Commandments “thou shall not kill,” yet killing random people is okay? If we can’t even trust ourselves with our actions and thoughts, is Heaven truly paradise? Not to mention that ever since Lucifer and Lilith betrayed Him, we don’t know who to really trust. Some people are given too many chances!” She pounded her fist on the desk, startling Catie.
Coercia stood up and made her way forward. “No one is truly flawless. Mistakes are made, but we get blamed for doing things we sometimes enjoy. Sex, drugs, partying, swearing, even violence. All because we don’t live up to impossible standards imposed upon us, both here and on Earth! I can’t stand idly by while the place I live is subjected to such lies and propaganda! So, I’ve been thinking…isn’t there a more liberating way to hinder forced compliance here in Heaven? Perhaps we can create an alternative way to express change through…recreation?”
The angels talked quietly amongst themselves. Phalla nodded in appreciation.
“Well I think yes,” Coercia continued. “So that’s what this project aims to achieve.” She walked back to the desk and sat down. “Ladies and gentlemen, I’m opening the first of its kind, a hotel that encourages moderate amounts of so-called sin!” She spread out her arms.
The audience stared in stunned silence. Many of the adults were shaking their heads.
“Who is that girl?” asked a dragon watching from inside a soup kitchen. “What’s her deal with trying to cause more trouble for this world?”
“She’s nuts!” added another angel with an eagle’s head and wings, wearing a suit.
Coercia added nervously while still trying to keep a glare, “I figure it would serve a purpose…a place to work toward self-expression. Yay.”
Among the crowd of angels watching the news outside, a tall man with a thin pale face stood toward the back. He wore a light blue dress suit, had blue and white hair, fluffy deer-like ears, and large blue eyes. His white wings were folded behind him. He watched the program with a look of worry. A deer creature made of light appeared beside him. A sign posted on the wall showing the same man as a DJ read: “Counseling and good times with the Techno Angel!”
A camera man shook his head at Coercia. Phalla walked up to him and pleaded, “Please give her a chance.”
Coercia sighed. “Look, I know every single one of you has insecurities and issues that need not be bottled up. If you could just embrace those sides of yourselves…”
Coercia then smirked. “Maybe I’m not getting through to you.”
Phalla clapped her hands and “ooohed” in excitement as Rub and Chub got the electric guitar ready.
Coercia showed a pair of sharp white teeth and black curved horns emerged from her head. Black feathery wings sprouted from her back and an X appeared over her right eye. A harpoon appeared in her right hand and a spiked halo appeared over her head. She was in her dark angelic Exorcist form. She posed over the desk and began.
(“Inside of Every Angel is a Sinner”)
“I have a dream
I’m here to tell
About a fantastic mind-blowing hotel
One of a kind, go and yell
A great place to dwell
Catering to specific clientele”
*Guitar starts and scream vocals*
“Inside of every angel is a sinner
Inside of every do-gooder is a beast
Inside of every jolly go-lucky mentality
Is a subconscious portion we know the least”
“Resist all the rules
You’re not passive fools!
With just a little time
Down at the Hazbin Hotel!”
“So all you rescuers, priests, and heroes
Gifted athletes, jocks, and cheerios
And the sheep citizens, relief is here!
All of you angels, leaders, and stars
Traditionalists with fancy cars
And the activists on Mars
Show no fear
No taboos, no laws
Embrace your flaws
You’ll be truly free
Check in with me
It’s the right path, you’ll see”
“There’ll be no more pressure
And no more status quo
Just friendship, fun, and endless bags of dough
Establishment put to rest
You’ll be like, “Yes!”
In the tunnel of darkness you’ll go!”
“So all your hierarchies, GMOs, politics, and isms
Lectures, labor standards, and diamond studded prisms
Ancient Indian elitisms
All must die”
“All you fantasizers, artists, servers, and lords
Spoiled children, winners of awards
Imposers of chores
Face your fear!”
“Be who you are
And you’ll go so far
Our service will raise the bar
You’ll be the star
Come from near or afar at the Hazbin Hotel!
Yeah!”
“Wow,” said an angel in a top hat. “That was…alright.”
The crowd clapped half-heartedly.
Catie shook her head. “What in the Nine Levels makes you think a single denizen of Heaven would give two feathers about becoming a sinful person? You have no proof that your little experiment even works! You want people to disobey God and the rules just…because?!”
Coercia lifted up her head. “Well, we have a patron already who believes in our cause.”
“And who might that be?” Catie asked.
“Oh just someone named…Devil Grit.”
“The grumpy old spider?” asked Ron Wrench.
“He’s not old,” argued Catie. “He just acts older than he is.”
“Anyway,” said Catie to Coercia. “You couldn’t even get that guy to do something bad, even if a gun was pointed at his head.”
“Oh I beg to differ,” Coercia argued. “He’s been troubled, dirty, and having conflicted thoughts for two weeks now.”
“Breaking news!” called a voice as the screen changed to a recent debate shown in a building.
The news came on, detailing Devil Grit and his recent TED talk about the 7 Heavenly Virtues.
“Well, it looks like the one discussing the Heavenly Virtues is none other than…conservative Devil Grit! What a coincidence!”
She and Ron did a “ratings!” and jazz hands.
Corceria rolled her eyes.
“I’m sorry to say, but it looks like your plan’s departed on arrival,” said Catie. “I hope you learned a good lesson here.”
Coercia’s eyes twitched, her teeth barred. “Lesson?! I’ll teach you a lesson, bitch!” The princess and Catie fought fist and claw on the desk. Ron called for security.
After Coercia was kicked out, Phalla followed her wordlessly to the white limo. Devil Grit, Phalla, and Coercia rode back to the hotel.
Devil Grit lounged in the far seat, wearing an outfit of black with green stripes and green gloves on his four hands.
“Devil,” said Phalla with concern. “I know you were trying to do good by doing your professional speech. But could you please try not to help society in public? Now people won’t believe us when Coercia says that people are free to express their earthly desires.”
“I’m sorry Phalla,” said Devil from the other seat, “But I have a reputation to keep up. Helping the greater good is His plan for all of us. Besides, a good professional debate is a reasonable form of self-expression right?”
“Not to everyone,” said Phalla. “What about the hotel? People are thinking that you don’t care about Coercia’s project at all.”
“I do care, senorita,” said Devil. “I just don’t think it’s going to be easy to accomplish in such a short time. So many angels are fixated on tradition, myself included.”
“I do appreciate all of your help,” said Coercia, still fuming after the interview, arms crossed. “But I will make this project work, even if I have to do it myself.”
The white limo pulled up in front of the hotel, a pristine building made of glass and marble. The group got out of the car and stepped inside.
White wings made of rainbow scales posed as part of the structure on the roof. The stained glass windows by the door were decorated with apples, a tree of life, and many shades of blue and green. The sign above read “Hazbin Hotel” in big letters on the roof. Inside the lobby, a painting of Adam reaching toward God was displayed on the high ceiling. The hotel had seven floors with seven rooms on each floor. There was even a lab down in the basement which belonged to a man named Baker, the opposite of the demon fish scientist Baxter from Hell. A bowl of blue berries and blue raspberries sat on a table below a welcome banner. Phalla rested on a couch while Devil Grit munched on a granola bar.
“It’s probably a good idea to stock up some more food in this place,” said Devil Grit. “Good or bad, people always seem to be greedy when they’re hungry.”
Devil Grit pulled out a chart and went over probabilities and graphs regarding the hotel and the potential number of visitors. Coercia just sighed and walked away toward the door. She went outside and took out her cell phone, calling her mom.
“Carol cakes!” called her mother through the phone. Coercia cringed.
“Mom, I told you not to call me that! I’m not a little kid anymore.”
“Sorry, I can’t help it,” said Lilian with a giggle. “How was the interview?”
“Meh. It was alright. I proposed my idea, but nobody seemed to buy it.”
Lilian’s tone turned more serious. “Coercia, why do you insist that everyone must go down to that horrible place? Why can’t you just see the good in people?”
“Because,” Coercia said, “Everyone has flaws and they don’t realize it.”
“Yes, but that also applies to you, too. Before you get involved with the lives of others, you need to look inside and critique yourself.”
“I’m a princess. Everyone else has more flaws than I do.”
Lilian let out a long sigh. “Young lady, we’ve been through this I don’t know how many times. You have to push your selfish thoughts aside and just accept the way things are. It’s part of a higher purpose.”
“And what is this “higher purpose” anyway? To be His flock of dazed sheep, dancing around without any care in the world? To not experience ecstasy and adventure, even for just a moment?”
“That stuff is dangerous and forbidden. Thousands of souls would do anything to get up to this level of Heaven. And you just want to throw your life away?”
Coercia paused in thought. “If it means proving myself and serving Him in a way I see fit, then so be it.”
“You have delusions of what entertainment and happiness is, Carol. Sometimes, you need to take the time and appreciate the beauty that’s in front of you.”
“Other than my own refection, I don’t really see beauty in many other things. Well, heavy metal and watching battles…oh and watching sinners beg for their last breaths…”
“You have a lot to learn, dear daughter,” Lilian replied. “I’ll leave you alone to think about it.”
“Whatever.”
“Love you.”
“Love you too. Bye.”
Coercia hung up and went back inside, shutting the door behind her. She leaned against the door frame, closing her eyes in frustration…trying to hold back a stream of tears from the stress.
Just then, there was a knock on the door. Two knocks, four ones, then a last one. Coercia turned around with a sigh to answer it. She swung the stained glass door open. From outside stood a tall slender man with a pale light gray face, wearing a light blue pinstriped dress coat. A white upward cross was part of the design on his light blue undershirt. He was carrying a modern microphone atop a staff in his left hand. His small antlers were white and his hair and deer ears were blue with white tips. A monocle rested under his left eye. Coercia narrowed her eyes.
“Hi, excuse me…” he spoke quietly. “Is this…”
Coercia angrily slammed the door in his face.
She opened it again.
“…the right address?” finished the man.
“No!” she shouted, slamming it again.
“Hey Phalla!” called Coercia.
“What?” her friend asked.
“The crybaby Deer Man is at the door!”
“What?!” she asked, blushes appearing on her cheeks.
“Who?” asked Devil Grit.
“What should I do?”
“Well…let him in!” Phalla cried, eye shining.
Coercia rolled her eyes and scoffed. She sighed and opened the door again.
“May I talk now?” the man asked in a radio voice.
“Sure, whatever,” Coercia said.
The man held out a white gloved four-fingered hand. “Rotsala, it’s a pleasure to meet you, miss.” He walked in. Worry was etched on his face. “I saw your interview on the picture show and I was worried sick! I was afraid you were never coming back after your argument. Why I haven’t been that upset since the 1929 Stock Market Crash!” He sniffed, “So many poor orphans…”
“Hello there!” Phalla called with a smile, staring up and walking in front of him. She greeted in Spanish. “I’m so glad you’re here to help out my friend with this new hotel! I’m a big fan of yours and just being in your presence is just…” She swooned. “Oh just take me already you cute, pompous, talk show, blueberry pimp lord!”
She embraced him and he stood stunned, his face blushing. “I do love hugs,” he whispered as she stepped back. “I bet all of you would be so nice and soft after we get to know each other for a while…”
Phalla blushed while Devil Grit and Coercia made disgusted faces. “Not gonna happen, creep,” Devil Grit said.
Rotsala gave a nervous laugh, and popped a strawberry and blueberry into his mouth.
“You’re not gonna cling to us are you?” Phallas asked. “Or, you know…”
“Dear, if I wanted to screw anyone here…I would’ve done so already.”
Rotsala tilted his head. His blue eyes briefly glowed with blue upside down radio dials in them. Electricity sparked around cyan colored voodoo symbols in the air. His eyes filled with tears, tears spilling down his pale gray cheeks.
Phalla watched in bliss, while Devil and Coercia rolled their eyes at the show-off.
Rotsala shook his head and his eyes returned to normal blue.
“No, I’m here because I want to relax and help out.”
“Say what?” Coercia asked, eyebrow raised.
Rotsala held up his staff which glowed blue. He said with a sad crack in his voice, “Goodbye, is this thing off?”
He tapped it. A blue sad looking eye appeared in the center of the microphone. It spoke in a mechanical voice. “You’re silent, quiet and unclear!”
“That’s your motivation motto every day?” Devil Grit asked, crossing his four arms. “Pathetic!”
“Tragic and mysterious, I love it!” Phalla squealed. “It’s like the opposite of announcing. It’s…denouncing.”
Devil Grit elbowed her. “Hun, could you not get attracted to every other man you see? I’m your boyfriend.”
“I can’t help it, love!” she cried. “I just get so distracted easily.”
“Um…you want to help?” Coercia asked.
Rotsala appeared behind them after morphing into light.
“With…” he spoke in her growl then his normal shy sounding voice, “…this random thing you’re trying to do. This hotel. I want to help you run it, if that’s okay.”
“Uh…why?”
Rotsala choked a bit on his words. “Why doesn’t anyone do anything? Sheer absolute lethargy! I’ve been partying around and keeping busy for decades. I would like to do something more relaxing and easier.”
“My work became overwhelming, lacking focus. I’ve come to crave a new form of disengagement!”
Coercia rolled her eyes. “Does getting into a fist fight with a reporter count as disengagement?”
“No,” Rotsala said. “It’s violent and messy, not really my thing. Life is truly strange…reality, fantasy, true tragedy. After all the world is a grave, and the grave is a world of disengagement!”
Coercia brightened a bit. “So, does this mean you think it’s possible to taint an angel? That life is meaningless without your own self to temporarily control it.”
Rotsala sniffed and held up a hand. “Who knows? Anything’s possible. Sinning, oh the vice of humanity! I think there’s plenty left that can change such marvelous saints. But then again, the chance that was given to them was the life they lived before. The reward is this!” He spread out his arms. “According to God, there’s no undoing what is done…or at least that’s the way it should be.”
“So then, why do you want to help me if you don’t fully believe in my cause?” Coercia asked.
Rotsala turned around to look at her. “Consider it an investment in ongoing knowledge for myself and others.” He let out a small smile. “I want to watch the blessed of this world struggle to give into temptation, only to repeatedly realize and raise themselves up the golden ladder of success!” His eyes glowed blue.
“Right…” Coercia began.
“Yes indeed,” Rotsala said, both of them walking off to the side. “I see you taking risks and who better to keep you grounded than I.”
“Ah, so what’s the deal with Mr. Frown over there?” Devil Grit asked.
“Wait, you’ve never heard of him before?” Phalla asked. “You’ve been here longer than me!”
Devil shrugged his shoulders.
“The Techno Angel, one of the most complex beings Heaven as ever seen?”
“Eh, I’m not too big on people.”
Phalla sighed and leaned in close to explain.
“Decades ago, Rotsala manifested in Heaven, seemingly in one day. He began to catch the attention of overlords and archangels who had kept to themselves for centuries. That kind of attraction and magic power had never been harnessed by a mortal soul before. Then, he broadcast his adventures all throughout Heaven just so everyone could experience some joy, tragedy and emotions. Saints starting calling him the Techno Angel, (as unoriginal as that is). Many have speculated what unimaginable force enabled him to rival our world’s most ancient and constructive heroes. But one thing’s for sure: he’s an unpredictable source of silliness, a depressed spirit of mystery and a loving being of order…or disorder, the likes of which we can get involved in, especially if we want to end up aroused!”
“You done?” Devil asked. “He looks like a blueberry businessman. Or a shady con-man. Either way, you’re delusional.”
“Well, I trust him completely!”
“Do you blindly trust any man? All men?”
Phalla skipped over to Coercia. Rotsala examined a family portrait of Lucius, Lilian and a young Coercia in the center. Young Coercia wore a white dress with a turquoise top to it. Her hair was jet black, braided in black barbed wire, her cheeks had teal blushes. Her mother had long black hair and wore a fancy white dress and a round gold crown. Her father was dressed in a dress suit of white and blue, with blue and black stripes in the center below a white bow tie. He wore a large light gray top hat with a dove and a green apple on it. His cane also had a green apple on the top. Both of them were smiling, showing rows of sharp teeth, white wings folded behind them.
“Coercia, listen to me, you can believe this dreamer. He isn’t just a sad face. He’s a miracle maker, pure good! But… don’t count on him to believe in your cause. He could be tainted and rebel, but we don’t know that. He could very well side with God and your parents. And he’s most likely looking for a way to hinder everything we’re trying to do if it means following God’s rules. But still, give him a chance. He’s really sweet.”
“I…” Coercia began. “…we don’t know that. Look, he’s a crying bitch, and he probably doesn’t want to change.”
Phalla put her hands on her friend’s shoulders.
“The whole point of your hotel is to give people a chance! To have faith things will be better and people can embrace their flaws, their true selves! How can you turn someone away? You can’t. It goes against everything you’re trying to do. Everything you believe in.”
Coercia looked downcast. Her friend had a good point. She hated when people made good arguments against her. But it also gave her a chance to consider her thoughts. Phalla kept her grounded and added some cheer to her overall fake afterlife. Coercia smiled at her.
“You take care of yourself,” she said to Phalla.
“Coercia,” warned Phalla, “Unless you are serious about responsibility, do not make a promise with him!”
Demons often made deals with each other that often resulted in gaining power at the cost of one’s soul or freedom. Usually the one who initiated the deal would gain advantage. A demonic deal was bad in and of itself. Breaking an angelic promise could result in rejection, eternal torture and damnation.
“Don’t worry,” said Coercia. “I learned one thing from my dad.” She mimicked his low voice, “Ya don’t break trust with other angels!”
Coercia marched over to the Techno Angel.
“Ok Mr. Rot... You’re prissy as fuck, and you clearly see what I’m trying to do here is a too-dangerous risk. But I don’t.”
Glowing blue symbols briefly appeared around a concerned Rotsala, then vanished.
Coercia continued. “I think everyone deserves a chance to prove they can be themselves. After all, it’s in their nature and the sooner they realize it, the better. So, I’m taking your offer to help. On the condition there be no lessons or lovey-dovey speeches made.”
Rotsala twirled his cane and held out his smallest finger from his right hand.
“So, it’s a promise, then?”
The room was surrounded by a pink aura as light spirits roamed around the walls. The wind blew against Phalla’s and Devil’s faces.
“Nope!” Coercia yelled, holding out her hands. The energy stopped. “No shaking, no promises! I…hmmm…”
She paused in thought.
“As Princess of Heaven and heir to the throne, I hereby order that you help out with this hotel for as long as you desire.”
A moment of pause…
“Sound fair?”
“Fair enough,” Rotsala said with a slump of his shoulders and walked on. His cane vanished.
Rotsala stopped and spotted Phalla to the side.
Phalla went up and tickled him under the chin, much to his shock.
“Smile, deer man!” she said.
Rotsala walked on, speechless.
“So…where is your hotel staff?” Rotsala asked Coercia.
“Uh well,” Coercia began. Rotsala peered at Phalla through his monocle below his left eye.
He stuttered. “You’re going to n-need more than that.”
Rotsala walked over to Devil Grit, who was sitting on a stool.
“And what can I do, my business fellow?” asked Rotsala walking over to the dark furred spider, blushing.
“You can suck a dick,” Devil retorted in a grumpy tone.
“AH! Ok,” said Rotsala, blushing and stepping back. “Can it be yours?”
“Fuck off,” Devil added, pulling out a long knife from his belt.
Rotsala summoned his cane. “Well this just won’t do. You want others to cause trouble, yes? I suppose I can cash in a few favors to deaden things up!”
He snapped his fingers and the wall beside the fireplace cracked. The circle went dark, the fire going out. Ice cold water appeared to fill in the circle and a shadowy figure solely formed inside. Rotsala walked over and removed the dripping figure from the water. A large single purple eye was revealed.
Devil Grit, Phalla and Coercia peered at the creature. With a balloon deflating sound and a puff of white smoke, the figure was revealed.
“This little rascal is Klutzy!” Rotsala announced with a worried smile, dropping the figure.
A black-skinned short cyclops female landed on her face on the floor. She stood up with a grumpy look on her face. She wore a dark green skirt with a white stray cat off to the left side. Her arms and legs were white and stick-shaped. Several blue dots stood out from the lighter green color of her skirt. Her shirt was black with cyan paint spots off to the right. Her large eye took up much of her pale white face; it was dark blue with a white pupil. Her short hair was teal with a dark blue spot off to the left.
“I’m Klutzy,” she grumbled, clenching her fists. “It’s a waste of time to meet you. It’s been a while since I’ve seen strangers.”
Her pupil narrowed from side to side.
“Why are you all men?” she asked. “Have any women here? Or video games? Screw this place.”
She briefly picked up Coercia, then let go.
“Oh man, this place is boring!” she exclaimed. She ran over to a vase and proceeded to knock it over with her elbow. It shattered to pieces on the floor. She tossed couch cushions aside.
“It really needs a more manly touch, disorganized clutter’s more fun.” She grinned as she poured dirt from a flower pot onto the rug.
“Yes, yes, yep, yeah!” she yelled as she proceeded to break windows and knock down more stuff. Then she plopped down on a couch once the room was messy. “I’m bored. Make me some food or something.”
Phalla, Devil, and Coercia looked on in worry, Rotsala just stared off into space. “She has quite the temper sometimes.”
A cat angel was working on a Rubik’s cube with colleagues. His furry face was black, framed by white fur. His little top hat was white with a blue band across it. A big teal bow tie was under his neck, over his black furry chest framed by white fur. His wings were a brilliant blue, with black and red mathematical symbols on either side: the pi symbol, E = mc squared, signs for addition, subtraction, multiplication and division, among others. More symbols were visible within his two pointed ears. His teeth were sharp and purple and his long eyebrows were teal. His eyes were purple and sclera white. The angel placed a Rubik’s cube in front of him. “Ha!” he declared in triumph. Read ‘em and weep, boys! Full…whoa…”
He felt himself being transported in a flash of light to the hotel. Part of the science room that the cat had been in was merged with the hotel lobby…posters of the elements, the solar system and Biblical works of art.
“What in Heaven’s name is going on?
Then he brightened when he saw Rotsala. “You!”
“Ah, Core, my old friend,” Stalaro sniffed, his head briefly looking like it was in between antlers from a stuffed deer head on the wall. “You made it.”
“Glad to see you, you son of the sun!” Core said. “I just completed my Rubik’s cube after just an hour.”
The cube vanished as Rotsala looked on.
Core raced over to Rotsala and embraced him in a side hug. The deer-like man blushed. “So, what can I help you with this time?”
Rotsala blinked nervously. “C-Can we snuggle?”
Core laughed. “I mean, seriously, why’d you bring me here?”
“My friend, I’m doing some dirty work, so I took it upon myself to volunteer your services. If that’s okay?”
“You must be joking,” Core said, laughing nervously.
“I don’t think so,” he replied.
“You thought it’d be a great idea just to pull me out of nowhere? You think I’m some kind of tragic boy?”
“Maybe,” Rotsala sighed, as crying sounds came from his microphone.
“I ain’t doing no dirty work.”
Rotsala appeared behind him. “Well I figured you would be the perfect face to greet and critique the guests at this fine establishment.”
He pointed his staff off toward a stand with vegetable drinks as claps and boos sounded from his staff.
“With your grumpy cat face and love of solitude…”
Core lifted up the corners of Rotsala mouth with his paws. “Aw come on, Al, Don’t forget to smile once in a while!”
His mouth frowned once he let go.
Rotsala walked over to the stand. “Don’t worry, my friend. I can make this more interesting…if you wish.”
He conjured up a bottle of catnip with his finger.
Core stared with wide happy eyes. “What, you think you can buy me with sad eyes and some cheap catnip? Well, you can!” He purred and took the bottle with him.
Coercia, Devil, and Phalla arrived.
“Yes, yes, yes!” Phalla squealed. “Brilliant idea to have healthy drinks!”
“No!” Coercia protested. “This is supposed to be a place that encourages sin! Not some kind of, frilly, Zen, child’s play…”
Core noticed Devil Grit and slid up to him. “Hey cutie,” he flirted.
“Go screw yourself,” muttered Devil Grit.
“Only if you watch me,” Core joked. “Or more likely, Rotsala will watch you.”
Coercia leaned in close to Core. “Welcome to the Hazbin Hotel! You are going to go insane here!” She grinned, her teeth sharp.
“We’re all mad here,” Core replied, sniffing the catnip.
Rotsala walked in, an ever-present frown on his face. “S-so, what do you think?”
Rotsala ran over to him. “This is horrible!” she spat.
“It’s amazing!” Phalla beamed.
Phalla leaned in close between Coercia and Rotsala, embracing them in a hug.
“This is going to be very disengaging,” Rotsala exclaimed. Dubstep sounds emitted from his mouth as he stared around with worry. He stepped away from Phalla. “Coercia, I can’t lose you. We can’t lose you.”
Rotsala changed his light blue suit into a dark blue funeral outfit with a matching top hat. He did the same with Coercia, Devil Grit, Core, Klutzy, and Phalla, who were all wearing black clothing from the early 1900s. Coercia wore a short tan flapper dress and a round matching ladies’ hat. She and Klutzy stared at their outfits in disgust, while Devil Grit, Core and Phalla smiled as they stared at theirs. The room changed, the walls now covered with Voodoo symbols, Christian crosses and deer antlers.
“Take it boys,” Rotsala said. Light spirits appeared and played violins, a piano, and a flute in a sad symphony.
Rotsala sang his reprise to Coercia as they did a slow dance. Coercia looked annoyed but Rotsala smiled.
(“Stalaro’s lament Reprise”)
“You’re on a mission
Your innocence fell
And it’s so dangerous but hey, I wish you well
Yes your blunt protests
Will send you straight to Hell
And I can’t bear to see you banished, or your soul up to sell”
“Don’t bring your life to an end
No matter what you say, I’m still your friend
We all have our wounds to mend
And you’re vulnerable feelings are real, don’t pretend”
“Inside of every angel is love and emotion
They have values and lasting devotion (devotion to God)
While you recruit those around
Don’t be swallowed by the ground
The authorities can retrieve you tight and bound (no turning around)”
“Here above the sky
Spread your wings and fly
They’ll spend a little time
Down at this Haven Ho…”
An explosion rattled the windows. Klutzy saw a door flying toward her face and she broke it in half with a karate chop.
The room and everyone’s clothing returned to normal.
Everyone looked outside and saw a podium in the air, held up by flying metallic eggs. A familiar snake debater appeared.
“Look who it is harboring the striped annoying opponent! We meet again, Rotsala!”
“Do I know you?” Rotsala asked.
Tears came to Anguis’ eyes. “Oh yes, you do! Watch this presentation!”
The eggs danced in the air, singing a song about Sir Anguis trying his best to rule Heaven. He read from notecards. “You all can’t compete with me. Your hotel sucks. I…shall…destroy it…with… my…”
Rotsala giggled and blushed. “Your baby weiner havor?”
Anguis looked up from his cards in anger. “Not like that, pervert!”
Rotsala snapped his fingers. A portal appeared and white tentacles shot out, knocking the podium off balance. The metal eggs knocked into Sir Anguis and he yelled, “Ow that hurt! Show mercy!”
Rotsala used a drop of his blood and the podium exploded in green smoke.
Sir Anguis emerged from the crater, arm shaking, fangs shattered. Rotsala waved a hand and the snake was healed.
“Shoot me with your ray gun,” said a metal egg beside him. Sir Anguis face-planted on the ground.
Rotsala looked on, sadly while everyone else stared, stunned.
“Anyone hungry?” Rotsala asked turning around. “Please don’t make me cook jambalaya. It’s way too spicy and it nearly killed me! I much prefer tea and sugared strawberries, oh the way they melt in my mouth… but anyway, you could say the kick brought me straight into Heaven.”
Rotsala lead the way back to the hotel, the group following him.
“Yes sir, new changes are about to take place. Now…”
Rotsala waved his finger at the lit up sign above the glass, gem-encrusted building on the roof.
The sign changed from “Hazbin Hotel” to “Haven Hotel.”
“Stay tuned.” He finished with low whimpers.
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