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r3b3lgrrrrrrrl · 4 years

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A LunaTic and her Gunn (Part 99) "Shows in Different Country Codes"

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Waiting for the Xanax to kick in that Luna had given him in their uber, Colson's leaned back into his seat. A thousand thoughts swirling through his head as he stares out the airplane's window.

"FUCK... I hate leaving them...." He sighs at the thought of Casie and Luna. "I wonder if she got in touch with that planner Emma gave her..." His mind drifting to their weddings. Being more nervous for EstFest, there's a lot to do just festival wise. "I'm glad no one gave me shit about adding the extra day..." He thinks of the vendors. Sighing again, his mind wanders to a place it tries to never go. "Maybe I should call my dad.... He should probably meet Luna...." His heart worries as the Xanax helps his eyes close.

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Luna lands in Mexico City around 5A. She wanders around the gift shop for a moment, buying a new shirt before making her way outside. It's pouring, so she pulls her Yankees hat on backwards before she hops into a taxi.

Once checked in at The Four Seasons, Luna doesn't know what to do with herself. Ashley's sharing a room with Dom, leaving Luna alone. Lighting a joint, she tries on the shirt she bought. Heading into the bathroom, she stands on top of the toilet to Snap Colson.

Finally crawling into bed, Luna flicks on the TV as she lights another joint. Drifting off to the sounds of Parks and Rec once she's put it out.

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The Bus is parked in the back of the venue, Colson's playing The Knitting Factory tonight. In the back of a cab, he catches the Snap from Luna. Laughing out loud at her once he opens it.

"She's so fucking adorable..." His heart aches for her as he pays for and climbs out of his ride.

Opening the door to their bedroom on The Bus, Colson isn't shocked to find Baze and Sam. He's definitely not pleased though.

"Yo. Wake the fuck up and get outta my bed." He states, kicking the bottom of Baze's foot.

Both of them wake with a bit of a startle. Looking at each other, slightly embarrassed. They like to think they're on The Low but everyone knows about them. Silly Wabbits.

"FUCK man... I didn't think you'd be back till later..." Baze says groggily as he collects himself.

"Clearly, Truck." Colson rolls his eyes with a chuckle as he turns around so they can dress.

Not one to cock block but desperately wanting to lay down, he really doesn't care. He knows Luna will though. As they begin to leave his room, Colson calls out a Yo. They both turn but he talks directly to Sam.

"You know she's a cunt.... I'd get these sheets washed before she gets back." He says with a light warning.

Tired, Sam stares at Colson. She hates that he knows Luna well enough to be right.

"I got it." She responds, uncharacteristically trying to hide the annoyance in her voice.

With his door shut, Colson Snaps Luna back before throwing himself down. Hoping to find her smell, he can only find other people in their bed. Pissed, he rips the blankets, sheets and pillow cases off, throwing them out the door.

Grabbing her pillow and tucking his nose inside his hoodie, he catches her faint scent. Images of Luna dancing in his head as he falls asleep.

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Luna wakes up to a hard banging on her door. It's just after 2P. Touching the empty side of her bed, Luna wishes Colson was with her.

Hating The World, she let's them bang. Finding her phone, there's a Snap from Colson.

"He's such a dirty Motherfucker..." Luna thinks with a grin.

The door still pounding.

"SHUT THE FUCK UP!! I'M COMING!" She shouts as she climbs out of bed.

Winging the door open, it's Ashley and Dom. Impatient fucking Assholes.

"WHY!?!" Luna demands. "Why the FUCK do you need to bang like that?" Luna complains as she let's them in.

"To wake your bitch ass up." Ashley snarks, pushing her way into the room.

"Mornen' Loons." Dom greets her to her silent nod.

"You really are a DICKFUCK sometimes...." Luna says with annoyance.

"Whatever...." Ashley brushes her off. "Got any bud?" She asks, already knowing the answer.

"Yeah.... But it was shoved up my asshole, so do you really wanna smoke it?" Luna deadpans.

"Shut the fuck up." Ashley laughs as she turns to Dom. "She didn't shove it up her ass." She reassures him.

"Oi... Bum smoke is no problem fo me!" Dom responds, making both Girls laugh.

Dom knowing Them well enough to truly understand the nature of their friendship. Rolling one up as Ashley and Luna climb onto the bed together. Luna's ring catching Ashley's eye for the first time.

"HOLY FUCK! WHAT IS THIS!!!" She exclaims as she grabs for Luna's hand.

Admiring the large, sparkling stone, she moves Luna's hand all around as it catches the light. Shining brighter with every different angle. It's definitely NOT a guitar string.

"He picked this out on his own?" She asks in amazement.

"I think Rook might've helped him a little, but yeah... I had nothing to do with it." Luna answers.

"Good job, Kells." Ashley compliments his choice.

Luna, Ashley and Dom burn and chat. Talking about Colson, the ring, what they've both been up to and the upcoming weddings. It feels like forever since The Girls last saw each other. In reality, it's only been three days since the show at The Roxy.

"Alright... We gotta motor. Go shower, we have rehearsal in less then 2hrs. Come meet us in room 202 when you're ready." Ashley directs Luna.

"Alright......" Luna yawns loudly.

She heads into the bathroom as Ashley and Dom close her door behind them. Lighting another joint, she rails three 30s as she gets ready for the shower. Forgetting to Snap Colson back due to her unexpected visitors.

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"Cool..." Colson thinks when he finally opens his door. His angry linen fit is gone from the floor. "Thanks Sam...." His brain grateful even if his actions are sometimes dickish.

Walking to the front of The Bus, everyone's lounging, burning and waiting for him. Plopping down next to AJ, he asks Rook to throw him a bag of chips. Colson nonchalantly munches on them as they all talk about tonight's show. Working on the setlist, he hates when he has to cut Bad Things as he finishes his snack.

"Dawg... Raise that shit to your face!!" Slim hollers at the picture on the bag.

Looking at it, Colson asks "What like this?" Lifting it up just under his nose.

The entire Bus erupts into laughter. It fits so perfectly. Colson tosses his phone to Slim.

"Here, take a picture.... We'll see if this is wedding acceptable." He laughs.

Tossing it back after he takes one, Slim laughs out a Definitely Not as Colson shoots Luna a Snap asking the same question. Colson shrugs with amusement... You never know with Loons.

"We ready to fuck this day up?" He asks as he begins to lead the rest of them off of The Bus.

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Throwing on jeans, with a band T and flannel, Luna has her hair up. Red bandana securing it. Only having one pair of contacts left, she chooses to wear her glasses. The sun being her eyeballs mortal enemy today.

In the front seat of an uber with Ashley and Dom, her phone goes off. It's another Snap from Colson.

What the SHIT!!" Luna can't contain her thoughts or laughter. "Look at this crazy Asshole!!" She laughs.

Screenshotting the Snap before passing it to the backseat. Both of them erupt into laughter also.

"Oi. E wears it so well!!" Dom laughs.

"No... No, he doesn't. He looks like a fucking pornstar." Luna laughs as she takes back her phone.

"Pornstache!!" Ashley laughs out loudly to Luna's hysterical agreement.

Catching the older driver's amused eyes, Luna shows him. Bursting out laughing, he agrees... Yes, I'm sorry but Your Boyfriend Looks Like a PornStar. Tickling Luna's funny bone to the core.

"FUCKING JOHNNY WADS!!!!" She shouts, turning in her seat to look at Ashley before she Snaps Colson back.

She's referring to one of the pioneering PornStars of the 70s. John Holmes. Huge cock. 15 inches... If not more. A wild and extremely violent true story. The two of them watching the movie dozens of times as teenagers. Amongst many others.

Even with with one's own solid influences, false advertisements are still intriguing. Filling their young, rebellious souls. Recommending the fucked up movie to anyone who loves drugs, violence, Val Kilmer and unhappy endings.

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"Oooh.. Christ!!! You better hope not, Phoebe!!" Ashley laughs.

"Fuck you... I'd be a Smelly Cat BEFORE a fucking SHARON!!!" Luna flicks her off with a laugh and a grin.

Dom chiming in to sing Smelly Cat as they step out of their cab and head into the venue to rehearse for the Awards Show. The Girls singing along with him.

"Wait... What are we doing and why are we in Mexico again?" Luna asks, slightly confused.

"It's the MTV Latin Millennial Awards." Ashley answers as if Luna's supposed to just get it.

"Annnnnd....?" She leads.

"And I'm nominated and performing. They requested Without Me and Nightmare so you HAVE to be here." She teases Luna while draping her arms around her shoulders from behind.

"But we're not Latina....?" Luna's still confused.l

"Dude... I don't know. I just played the Brazil one a few weeks ago. Without Me is a nominee for Global Hit... Maybe that's why." Ashley shrugs. "We've got more important things to worry about. I want us do some choreography with four dancers."

"You fucking what?" Luna asks in bewilderment.

Ashley has her at an Award Show in Mexico and now she wants her to dance like some fucking pop star. She's gotta be out of her God Damn mind.

"Yeah!!! It'll be fun!! Come meet the girls." Ashley says with a grin as she pulls Luna along.

"Fuck my stupid fucking life...." Is all Luna can think.

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Colson is rehearsing with The Boys. Deciding to take a Burn&Board Break, they head out back. Reaching into his pocket, he finds a Snap from Luna.

Laughing at her smart ass response and missing her voice, he calls her. It rings straight through. Colson can't resist leaving her a voicemail.

🎶Off that fat ass//Imma do a line or two//Before we//Have our own private shoot//Where I//PornStar Fuck//The shit outta you//Be ready//When you come back//Boo//Cuz it's//Only Bad Things//That we do🎶

Laughing after he finishes, he shouts "LOVE YOU, KITTEN!! CALL ME!" before hanging up.

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Luna's BackStage as Ashley and Dom sit in the audience. She's trying not to freak out over the performance Ashley wants to pull off. Even with Patti making her take ballet and gymnastics, Luna is not a dancer. She's a musician, a songwriter, a photographer, a painter, a sculptor. An artist. You could even call her an activist, a feminist, a bitch and an outlaw. What you can not call her is a professional dancer.

"This is gonna be a fucking shit show...." She worries as she hears Ashley's name called. "OH FUCK!! SHE WON!!!" Luna's brain bursts. Any other thoughts disappearing with the excitement for her bestfriend.

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Catching up in the dressing room they're sharing, Luna congratulates Ashley with a tight hug. Popping into the bathroom while Ashley puts on her first outfit, Luna shoots Colson a Snap. Not paying attention to her voicemail as she comes out of the bathroom. She always has an unchecked voicemail.

"Change. We're on next." Ashley instructs her, pointing to the latex and chain garments sitting on a chair.

Wiggling into the tight pieces, Luna checks herself out in the stand up mirror. Her outfit consisting of a latex crop top, VERY small booty shorts with metal chains dangling securely around the hips, fishnets and a pair of Docs. Ashley has the exact same thing on under what looks like a 1980's prom dress.

"You know I'm keeping these right?" Luna asks as she slides her hand up her smooth ass.

"Yeah, I figured..." Ashley laughs as a tiara is placed on top of her head.

"See you out there, Miss 2019." Luna smiles, referring to the sash Ashley's wearing as she makes her way out the door.

Luna double checking herself before following behind. Thinking about Snapping Colson again, she decides to wait. He loves the feel of latex and she'd rather show him in person.

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Colson's phone goes off just as he's about to silence it. It's Luna.

"Fuck, she's gorgeous...." He thinks staring at her picture. Wanting to put his hands on every inch of the bare skin she's showing. More so on the parts she's not.

"Yo!!! You gotta go!!" Ashleigh hollers at him.

Walking quickly down the hall, Colson Snaps Luna back before heading OnStage. Grabbing his guitar, he shouts to the crowd WHAT UP EST FAM!!!! making the factory explode in excitement.

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Ashley presents Without Me almost as a performance piece. Standing alone OnStage in her pretty dress, sash and tiara initially until black, shadowy figures begin to push and pull at her. By the end of the song, they've ripped the gown off of her. Leaving her on the floor.

The lights go down as the opening chords to Nightmare come on. Ashley running to the MainStage to meet Luna. It's a long runway with a large circular stage at the bottom.

Luna and Ashley bounce in between the four similarly dressed dancers. Ashley kicking her leg out high as she begins.

🎼I!🎶

She shouts the opening chorus as the two of them run, bounce and jump down the straight away towards the camera. Of course it's being televised. Stopping MidStage, the dancers squat down. Surrounding them as Luna hits her mark.

🎶I'm out for blood//And it won't be sweet🎶

She sings, dragging her hands around her body as the dancers and Ashley tilt their heads back and forth to the beat. On que the six of them stalk to the center of the stage, Ashley and Luna in the middle. Back to back the dancers pull at them as Luna bellows.

🎶Society has us//Pinching our skin//With our own fingers//Wishing we could//Cut our parts off//With some scissors🎶

None of their performances together are the same but they do carry similar tones. Luna and Ashley still mocking each other about Giving Each Other A Smile. Instead of jumping wildly, they move in sync with the dancers to their sides. Fire exploding as they drop out and let the audience shout that WE DON'T OWE YOU A GOD DAMN THING!

The six of them sit down on the ground, sat behind the other like a human train. Leaning forwards and backwards as Ashley sings how she's No Sweet Dream But A HELL Of Night. Standing up and collectively circling around Luna and Ashley, the dancers move behind them as Luna comes in again.

🎶No, I won't smile//But I'll show you my teeth//And I might let you breathe//If you just let Us be//We've been polite//But we're done with this trend//Of men thinking//They can tell Us//What we can do in our beds🎶

Rolling their hips and hitting different moves together on certain lyrics, the choreography isn't nearly as awful as Luna had anticipated. Fire bursting around them as they squat and move easily with the dancers. The performance rolling smoothly.

"Thank you, Mexico City!! Thank you for having us. Thank you for the honor of my award..." Ashley shouts to the crowd as the song begins to come to it's end.

Luna comes up to Ashley, putting her arm around her. Looking at each other, Luna turns back to the room.

"Yes!! Thank you!! This woman here is AMAZING!! Can you do one thing for her? On this last verse can you go WILD!?!" Luna asks to their roars. "THEN, HERE WE GO!!!!"

Ashley and Luna sing together strong and fierce. Fire and lights exploding around them. Fuck the choreography, they're fully enjoying losing their minds OnStage together. To their credit, the dancers are completely professional and stay on point. Somehow managing to avoid crashing into the Maniacal Girls

🎶I!//KEEP A RECORD//OF THEIR WRECKAGE//AND THEIR LIES//WE'RE STARTEN' TO WEAPONIZE//OUR POWERFUL MINDS//THEY TALK SHIT//BUT//WE WON'T TAKE IT//THIS TIME//AND//THEY'LL FINALLY REALIZE🎶

Coming together again, arms linked around each other and the dancers waists, The Girls yell in unison with a wave.

"THAT WE'RE NO SWEET DREAM BUT WE'RE A HELL OF A NIGHT!!! THANK YOU AGAIN, MEXICO CIIIIITYYYY!!!"

The two bestfriends laughing and holding hands as they walk OffStage. Thanking and complimenting the dancers along their way.

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"THROW THOSE HORNS UP AND SIIINGIIING!" Colson shouts as he grips the mic, guitar hanging from his body.

🎶Woah, Woah//She said//You need to let me go//Woah, woah//She said I'd die for you//You're like my drug//But I can't get high off you//You're not mine anymore🎶

His Est Family erupting with him as they sing along word for word Let You Go with him. There is NOTHING like thousands of people singing your words along with you.

The Band runs through El Diablo and Rap Devil. Colson climbing onto the top of Rook's kit hitting a guitar solo during Alpha Omega. Bad Motherfucker follows with them finally ending on 27.

It's a great show. The Boys are raw and fearless. Colson jumping and climbing on everything he can find. Shouting THANK YOU, IDAHO! as they exit the stage.

Without Luna there Colson feels a bit lost. Heading straight BackStage, avoiding his dressing room. Grabbing a beer, he slams a shot with The Crew. Random Girls floating in around them. Falling all over themselves to get to Rook, Slim, AJ, Baze and Colson.

Sam is sitting on a couch between Colson and Baze talking about tonight's show, if anyone's heard from Luna and other random stuff. It's when two girls slither over, each perching themselves on the arm rest next to one of the boys. Touching them to get their attention.

Sam looks left. Then Sam looks right. Reaching in her back pocket, she pulls out her blade. Popping it, she looks back and forth between the two females again.

"I'd get the fuck up if you cunts like your tits." She states with a snarl.

The two quickly moving away as Colson laughs. Sam and Luna truly are two peas in a pod. Looking over he catches Baze kiss Sam's cheek. It makes him miss his LunaTic even more.

"Knock it off." He tells them. "If I'm not getting any, neither are you motherfuckers. Now, let's get FUCKED UP!!" Colson declares as he grabs a bottle of Jack.

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Luna's doing the same. Only in Mexico with Corona and Mezcal. Sitting at an After Party with Ashley, Dom, the boys from BTS and a few other artist, they bullshit and talk about the night. Everyone stopping to congratulate Ashley on her win and compliment both Girls on their performances.

"You won't eat the worm..." Ashley dares Luna as she swigs the bottle with the little guy floating inside.

"Nothing happens if you do...." Luna blows her off.

"Yes hunh.... You start trippen'. Isn't that right, Luis?" She asks as she turns to one of the other artist.

"For dayyys, Mami..." He drawls.

Rolling her eyes, Luna takes the last of the fifth to the head. The other's watching with wide eyes as the worm slides down her throat with it.

"We'll see... But I call bullshit." Luna states.

"Aye..." Luis nudges Ashley. "She's no gallina." He says impressed to her nod.

"Nah, mucho perra." Luna counters to his surprise.

"Aye...." He grins with his own nod, amused by the tiny white girl.

The music is loud as smoke and Mezcal continue to flow. Everyone is drunk. Ashley tries to follow with Dom as Luis teaches Luna to salsa. Politely declining his advances as his hand slips from the small of her back down to her ass.

"I'll be back...." She calls over her shoulder as she goes to check her phone.

There's a Snap from Colson hours ago.

Both sets of Luna's cheeks instantly flush when she reads his words. Missing him, she calls instantly.

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"Hi, Bunny...." Her voice is low and warm when he answers.

"Oooh, Kitten. I miss you." He sighs.

"Me too... I miss your face. And your eyeballs. And your hands on my body. The way they run threw my hair when I suck your cock..."

Colson's dick had perked up at the sound of her voice but her words have him full on hard now. Wanting to fuck her, touch her.... Shit, just seeing her right now would probably make him cum.

"Where are you?" He demands

"I don't know.... Somewhere in Mexico?" She answers.

"Find somewhere alone and FaceTime me right back." He tells her firmly.

"Okay." She simply says as she hangs up.

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Luna heads towards the stairwell. Popping in her air pods, she FaceTime's Colson right back.

Colson had made his way into a bathroom while they were off the phone. Answering, he can't help but break out into a smile.

"Hey, Gorgeous... You alone?" He asks after greeting her.

"Mhmm... Just me and your pussy." She coos. "She's lonely without you...."

"Show her to me." Colson taunts as he adjusts his phone on the bathroom sink and unbuckles his pants. Both of them are drunk and horny.

Luna props her phone against the wall across from her. Standing up, she slips off the black jean shorts she has on. Sitting on them, she drops her left leg on the step below and lifts her right to the one above. Spreading her legs for Colson. Only a screen and Luna's black panties separating them.

"I want you to touch her." He requests as he starts to pull on his hard cock.

Luna can see him playing with himself through the phone. Obliging him, she pulls the cotton to the side. Exposing her bare lips. Opening them for him to see her pink insides. Colson tugs harder on himself as Luna slips her fingers inside her sopping cunt. Letting out a low moan as she arches her back.

"That's right, Kitty... Play with my pussy. Rub that clit with your thumb the way I know you like." He directs her.

Following directions, Luna uses her free hand to yank the Japanese Star Wars shirt she has on up. Exposing her full breasts. With her fingers still inside of herself, she grips one tit. Playing with it's piercing between her thumb and index finger. The sight of his ring on her hand makes Colson rage even more.

"Does that feel good?" He pants as he watches her, feeling close to exploding.

"Unh hunh.... She moans with closed eyes as she bucks against her own hand. "Be better if my mouth had your cock in it." She lets out with another moan, she's close too.

"I'm gonna fuck you so hard you can't fucking walk by time I'm done with you." Colson threatens to Luna's delight as he grips the sink.

With Colson's deep voice wrapping around her brain and the memory of his touch hitting all her senses Luna cries out for him as they masturbate for each other.

"AHHHH FUCK! DO IT, LOONS!!" He shouts as his dick shoots his seed everywhere, keeping his eyes glued to the screen.

Luna's spread eagle as she finger fucks herself on the steps. Bucking wildly as her hands please her body. Cumming all over herself as Colson watches in pleasure.

Out of breath, Luna opens her eyes. "Fuck, C....." Is all she can get out as her knees fall together.

"Lemme see her one more time.... Bring her close." He instructs.

Opening her legs back up, Luna pulls her phone up to her box. She can hear Colson telling her pussy that She's A DIRTY Girl. Looking down when she hears him making kissing noises, all she can see is his lips. He's kissing his phone screen.

"Are you trying to kiss my fucking vagina?" Luna asks with a drunken laugh.

"Damn right I am." He grins.

"I fucking love you." She laughs again as she shakes her head.

"Not as much as I love you. Now put your fucking pants back on before I have to kill someone." He smirks.

Doing as she's told, Luna slips her shorts back on over her soaked panties. Staring at each other, both of their heads are dancing in ecstasy.

Luna and Colson sit on the phone for another 45mins just talking. About anything and everything as usual. Luna telling him about the choreographed performance. Colson chuckling, saying He'll Be Finding It On YouTube to Luna's Fuck. Agreeing to meet in Seattle tomorrow, they exchange sweet Love and I Miss Yous before hanging up.

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"Jesus fucking Christ, that girl can make me cum from ANYWHERE!" Colson thinks as he walks out of the bathroom contently.

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"Holy cock on a cracker...." Luna sighs to herself. "That fucking voice gets me every time...." She thinks as her heart throbs for her Lover.

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Still on the same continent, they both head back to their respected parties separately. Colson eventually moving his party to The Bus. Luna moving her's back to The Four Seasons.

He'll ride through the night while she'll fly out tomorrow. Bringing Dom and Ashley with her.

Even apart, they're still on each other's minds. Even with shows in different country codes, they still mange to fuck only each other.

Truly showcasing A Day In The Life of a LunaTic and Her Gunn.

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To be continued.....

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daydreamingabouthockey · 5 years

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Red Bull Mix Up- Mitch Marner Imagine

Summary: Mitch orders over a hundred cans of red bull but they accidentally get delivered to the wrong place. Whoops

Word count; 1,200

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Authors note: No idea where this idea came from I was probs in work drinking a can of red bull. Can they sponsor me though? I feel like this would be something Mitch would really do too. I love that boy and his chaotic energy. I don’t know the dude or claim to this was just a random idea I had. Also not my photo I borrowed it from google.

Amelia opened the door, to a delivery man. “Hi, I have a delivery for Mitch Marner,” he said looking down at his clipboard. “Oh he’s next door,” she said trying to close her apartment door, but the delivery man Jerry” as his gold name said and he wasn’t letting her get away that easy, he had managed to wedge his foot in the door “He doesn’t seem to be in, so can we leave it with you?” he asked

I guess,” she sighed opening the door wider, just put it there she sighed signalling to a small space in her doorway. “Oh Miss your going to need a bit more space than that,”

“How much more?” she asked suspiciously

Fifteen minutes later Amelia was staring at twenty crates of every flavor of red bull which towered well above her and took up over half of her hallway. “how do I get myself in these situations?” Amelia sighed to herself.

Amelia didn’t know her neighbour very well. She didn’t know a lot about him at first, since he wasn’t at his apartment an awful lot. But when he was home Amelia knew she would hear his music, occasionally singing along, partying with his friends and playing video games. Most people would find it annoying but she didn’t mind. Mostly because he was hot and his friends were also super hot. Also whenever she tried to talk to him, she found herself stumbling over her words and embarrassing herself.

Her best friend was one one who had nicknamed him hockey sticks after seeing him carry a pile of hockey sticks into his apartment the day he had moved in. Not that they had been peeping through the peephole for the front door or anything ””I mean what does one guy need all those hockey sticks for right?” Cassidy asked stretching out onto her sofa.

”maybe he likes to make sure he’s safe keeps one in each room ,in case someone breaks in?”

”pft you know this apartment block is like fort knox, every time I come to your flat every week and security still quiz me every single time like i’m some sort of criminal,”

“You obviously have a suspicious looking face,”

”maybe he’s a hockey coach?”she suggested ignoring Amelia’s previous comment.

”yeah I guess, he looks a little young, but maybe, ” she said taking another piece of popcorn and throwing it into her mouth

She had later bumped into the mysterious hockey sticks. He was tall with brown haired guy who was even cuter close up with his bright blue eyes and an infectious smile, he wore a backwards red bull baseball cap . He had introduced himself as Mitch, she had awkwardly introduced herself as they got into the lift and made polite conversation until they got to the ground floor where he left for the parking garage and she left for the street.They had become friends since greeting each other in the hallway, having a quick chat about their day. They were no where near best friends.

Amelia spotted Mitch in the corridor, she ran after him “hey Mitch,”

“Oh hey,” he said turning around clearly surprises to see her.

“So, why do I have twenty crates of red bull in my hallway?”

“Shit what?” He said looking slighty startled dropping his sports bag by his front door.

“The delivery man couldn’t bring it to your flat because you weren’t in,”

“Oh no no no,” he groaned running his fingers through his hair, “They were meant to be delivering them to the rink, not here there must have been some mix up,” he groaned pulling his hat off and putting it back on again.

“Why do you have this much Red Bull anyway you know it’s bad for you right?” She asked “I’m there brand ambassador I get paid to drink the stuff and if it’s free so I’m gonna take it,”

“But all this,”

“I was giving it to the boys at work, they wanted us to try some new flavours,”

”You we're going to give kids red bull isn’t that a little irresponsible?”

”What?”

”the kids you coach?”

”I don't coach kids, well I do a little bit over summer, ” he rambled

“Oh I figured with all the hockey sticks you were carrying…”

”when did you see me carrying hockey sticks?”

“The day you moved in,” she said blushing and looking down at her feet.

“So the sticks are mine but I play in with team,”

“Oh cool, like for fun,”

“Are you serious?” He laughed but he stopped when he saw Amelia’s surprised face.

“Oh you are I thought you knew who I was,” he said looking sheepish ”I mean not in a cocky way,” he stuttered. “Help me carry a couple of these boxes to my apartment.l he asked. Giving her those cute puppy dog look that she could never say no to.

Amelia stepped into Mitch’s apartment. It was huge, much bigger than Amelia, but that wasn’t the main thing she noticed because all around was hockey memorabilia ”Wow, ” she gasped looking around.

Then she noticed the jersey on the wall. She recognized it as a Maple leafs jersey, because although she had never bothered with ice hockey, she had seen plenty of these jersey’s around Toronto. This leafs jersey was framed up on the wall, next to another framed jersey, a green one that said London Knights. It was the surname on both the jersey’s though that had caught her attention. Marner, wait what had Jackson from work has been saying about the maple leafs last week? Oh, “That kid Mitch Marner was pretty good, ”

No wait isn't that what the delivery man had called her cute neighbour? Mitch was it the same person?

”you don’t just play for a rec team to you?”

“No,” he answered slowly “I play for the maple leafs,”

Amelia dropped the crate only missing Mitch’s foot by a couple of inches. “Sorry sorry,”

“Its okay, I’m kind of use to that reaction,” he laughed, just at that moment his phone started to ring. ”Sorry, i’ll me back in a sec i have to take this , ”Mitch says signalling to his phone, ”make yourself at home,”

Amelia sank into his leather sofa, trying to take in this information, her neighbour the boy she has been crushing on for months was a star player for the Toronto maple Leafs?, the guy Jackson hadn’t been able to shut up about?. She looked around finally surveying the apartment properly. It was like most really, fairly messy hoodies and shoes scattered, there was an area in the counter of the apartment dedicated to gym equipment

“So Red Bull called and said they’ll send some more to the rink but they can’t pick up this stuff,”

”what are you going to with over a hundred can of red bull?”

“What are we going to do,” he correctes ”Drink it?” he suggested giving her a coy smile.

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Ameliaflowers: Anyone want a red bull turns out I have over a hundred cans in my apartment now.

Cassidy_smithy: why do you have 100 cans of red bull are you suddenly rich or being sponsored by them or both? Either way I want in

Ameliaflowers: long story come over for a drink and i’ll explain basically it includes hockey sticks

Marner_93: dude your welcome, also hockey sticks???

Ameliaflowers: your nickname ��

#toronto maple leafs #mitch marner #mitch marner imagine #toronto maple leafs imagines #maple leafs #nhl #nhl imagine #nhl imagines #leaf imagines

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‘Something tragic occurred,’ the experts repeated over and over. ‘It was a Rapture-like phenomenon, but it doesn’t appear to have been the Rapture.’ — Hello there Kel! I was hoping we could get an opinion, please? We're a brand new town and skeleton roleplay based on The Leftovers series on HBO, where two percent of the world's population just mysteriously disappeared. Thank you very much!

of course ! enclosed is my full opinion of @thechosenrp. please keep in mind that i am just one person with one set of opinions, so please don’t take anything i say personally or at face value. if you have any questions or clarification, don’t hesitate to ask !

FIRST IMPRESSIONS ( ICON, URL & MOBILE THEME ) — so right off the bat, i’m a big fan of your url, but less so of your icon. i’m a major leftovers stan, and while your url doesn’t immediately hit the nail on the head for me, it’s definitely intriguing. your icon gives me way more beachy vibes than anything else. i understand from navigating onto your main that ashgrove is a small new zealand town close to the water, but there’s a distinct disconnect between your url, icon, and overall theme of the rp. i think if your icon were more town-oriented rather than beach, and maybe zoomed in more it would definitely be remedied ! i love, love, love your mobile theme – no complaints there !

THEME — i love this theme ! i’m definitely pro header and sidebar themes over containers, so i’m 100% on board ! your sidebar feels a little cluttered; i think there’s some information that could be left to the navigation. for example, i would cut the links under your description – i personally wouldn’t navigate to the guilty remnant or the sudden departure before reading your plot, rules, etc. and they’re easy enough to get to through the nav. as a side note, your story so far link is broken ! your navigation, while comprehensive, also feels a touch cluttered and all over the place. i appreciate the note before applying, but i would suggest keeping your links to two sub headings – before and after acceptance, for example. right now, my eye doesn’t quite know where to go or start.

PLOT — it’s comprehensive, while also being to the point and avoiding unnecessary verbosity, so good job ! i’m maybe at more of an advantage having seen the show, but i think you’ve given a good baseline explanation that won’t leave anyone too out of the loop. while i like the image you’ve included, i think it’s slightly too big and overpowers the page. my suggestion would be to either crop it thinner or make it a header. that way, my eye goes to your plot, not just the picture !

RULES — the standard stuff ! your tone is to the point without coming across as stern or overbearing, which can be a difficult line to toe, but i think you do it well. i would be cautious about allowing your members unlimited characters, and consider adding an addendum that after x number you’ll accept at your discretion. your activity rules leave ambiguous on whether warnings will be part of activity checks, so i’d recommend clearing that up in case someone else has a similar confusion. i would also further clarify if you consider answering ask memes to be included in ‘in character’ posts – i do personally, but i know plenty of people don’t. otherwise, everything looks great ! my only other suggestion would be to include a rule on respecting member and character pronouns. it sounds obvious, but it covers your bases.

SKELETONS — i like the character nav, but just a heads up your link to taken roles is broken ! i love, love, love your character psd and your colouring is to die for. seriously, unless one of the admins made it themself please link me ! i’m loving the gender diversity here, but i would’ve liked to see more non-binary faces playing non-binary characters. i would be more than happy to link you to trans and non-binary masterlists and resources. additionally – and this is entirely my opinion – i would suggest you consider leaving gender and pronouns UTP except for characters that are explicitly trans or non-binary. that way, while some writers might gravitate towards cis characters, it leaves the option of the skeletons also being played as non-binary or trans. as a side-note, it looks like some open skeletons have pre-determined nicknames, and others don’t. unless there’s a stated reason for that that i missed, i would suggest keeping it standard across the open skeletons.

APPLICATION — standard stuff ! no complaints here, other than my own personal distaste for defining a characters gender & sexuality from the get go. sometimes i have a clear idea as i write the character, but more often than not its something that i decide on as i flesh out the character through interaction and chemistry. defining it so early can sometimes feel constricting, but i know that’s just personal taste ! your sample app link is also broken at the top of the page. i’m a little surprised by the lack of writing on behalf of the applicant. aside from the traits, how do you determine if the applicant’s interpretation is the right fit for the skeleton? or, if there are two apps for the same character, how will you determine who’s accepted? just some things to think about. the writing doesn’t have to be much, even something like a short in-character para sample or sample starter could do the trick.

ADDITIONAL PAGES — very comprehensive ! again, you do a good job of laying everything out for your applicants without drowning them in information or leaving those who haven’t seen the show floundering. the images you’ve included for the sudden departure and guilty remnant are again a touch too big for the page size, i think. i think for your GR page the image could be kept at its current dimensions, just cropped smaller. the sudden departure page isn’t as egregious, but it is a little jarring to the eye.

ANYTHING ELSE — i think that’s it ! all my complains are fairly minor, so this rp is a big REC from me. i love the leftovers, and i love this group. if i had the time to dedicate to what looks to be an amazing rp i absolutely would ! my best of luck to the admins, i hope it thrives.

#thechosenrp #rpt #rpo #rph #rpc #rp rec

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