#seriously I’m willing and giving full permission and am lusting for it

[neosaysno]

FantineAquane (Danganronpa)

So I decided to come back to this blog after a year, and I took on a new character. Meet FantineAquane, the SHSL Secret.

...

I’m already scared.

(CONTENT WARNING: Mentions of pedophilia and noncon. Seriously.)

Warning! Because of the nature of this fandom, I will be going into spoiler territory.

Name:FantineAquane Gender: DOB:13 October Blood typeO+ Height:1.78 meter Weight:55 kg

Okay, let’s unpack this, because there’s a good bit here. And we already have problems.

... FantineAquane is NOT a name. That looks like a username of some kind, and when I googled FantineAquane, I discovered that it was indeed used as a username! I also managed to track down the creator, but I’m not really going to bother...

Why is the Gender thing blank? Even if you’re nonbinary, agender, whatever, that would be listed. However, the rest of the profile uses “she/her” pronouns and calls her a “girl”, so I’m going to go ahead with calling Fantine a girl for the rest of this.

No issues with the birthday, but she’s slightly underweight, which is an unfortunately common thing in OCs. Thankfully it’s not too egregious (Less than ten pounds underweight).

FantineAquane is tall-slim girl.She has long straight-wavy purple-black acid type haired.She weared purple short jacket with a long sleeves,old white worned brassier and worn daisy dukes.She has big blue-bright cerulean eyes with long eyelashes.She has a faded scars inside her jacket.

That grammar... Ughhh. It’s not /that/ bad, but it clearly tells me the writer isn’t a native English speaker. Or if they are, they’re flat out terrible at it.

Pray for me while I decipher this. It feels like I’m solving a worse Metheus puzzle.

Tall and slim... Okay, she’s about 5′8, so she’s actually decently tall for a... wait, how old is she?!

This is an actual problem. We don’t even have a listed age range. This is a problem for a Danganronpa OC! Even the DR1 students at least had age ranges, from sixteen at the youngest, presumably. (Well, they were a year or two older because of the lost memories, but that’s not too much to bring up.) What IS the problem is that we have no listed age. Yes, I am nitpicking that.

And “acid”... I’m gonna assume that’s neon hair. I am not going to provide a visual reference because that would mean your eyes will hurt.

That’s not even that appropriate! We don’t see Danganronpa students walking around with neon hair! Ibuki and Souda are the only people who remotely fit that, and their hair is toned down enough to not be painful to the eyes. Our solace here is that the art doesn’t hurt to look at.

And why is she only wearing a jacket over her bra?! Where’s her shirt?! Even Aoi had a shirt! While yes, girl power and all, that’s just flat out inappropriate! I’m assuming this is JUST killing game garb, but I sure as hell hope Fantine wears the uniform during school years! Most, if not all schools would take disciplinary action if you walked in wearing that kind of outfit!

(Note, Angie technically is wearing a swimsuit, so I’m not going to bring that up, but the clothing description confirms that this is a full out bra that Fantine has, not a bikini top.)

No comment on the eyes, but the scars (or... scar? See, this is why you need to have decent grammar) don’t seem to be brought up elsewhere, so -1 point.

FantineAquane is a kind,curious,sociable,clueless,funny,sensitive girl.But instead she’s the revengeable and up raged girl as someone who insulted her as a prostitude and insulting her friends.She kinda bitchy as she loves the lust and sexual things.But it doesn’t mean she’s an idiot and prideless person.She wants to be a hopeful person who saves the suvivors from death.She can knows someone secret only a sight.

AUGH. This is pure word vomit. Gibberish. Nonsense. Whatever you want to call it. What the shiny mystical hell am I looking at?! None of these line up! This is complete nonsense! It’s like the creator just slapped all these personality things on without thinking about how they work together, or in this case, don’t!

And... “ She can knows someone secret only a sight. “

Oh god... is she a mind reader? PLEASE do not be a mind reader. I’m now actually scared to read through this more...

Super High School Level Secret

Super High School Level Hope (Her dream to protect the innocents)

Super High School Level Tackler

Super High School Level Fate

I should have known better than to wish for things. I have no goddamn words for this. This is in no way feasibly possible. I’m almost tempted to give up right here.

WHY is she the SHSL Hope?! Nothing we’ve seen here shows that she is a candidate! What the hell is Tackler? Secret? Fate?! These talents are an absolute disaster.

♢ Possible Execution ::

Gangbang Or Reveal Her Secret Until Death(Insane Diary)

I AM VERY TERRIFIED RIGHT NOW WHAT THE FUCK. DEATH BY GANGBANG?! SERIOUSLY?! WHY?!

Get me. The hell. Out of here. Insane Diary-whatever, how does that kill her? How does any of this work? I’m not talking about this further, I need to get out of this so I can get through the rest of this. This is the worst execution concept I have EVER seen.

FantineAquane was an orphan since she was a baby.In her surrounding,she become one of the insulted person in the homeless city.She been pedofilia with some citizens as her attraction makes all the men want to sex with her.All the fate has been changed as one city was ruined and rule by Super High School Level Despair.As she know the person who ruined all people lives,she attend the Hope Peak’s Private Academy as she wanna to prove that insulted person can help this city and ruined or realise all the Super High School Level Despair’s members.Without any letter that she needs to be that school student,she makes a bargain with Monokuma as she need to save the world with HOPE or die in DESPAIR.

WHAT THE HELLLLL

THIS IS JUST AIFURYEIULKEYHRLIUHE NOOOOO

I... I have no words. This so. BLATANTLY. Defiles canon that I feel like this person tried to rip Danganronpa off to make their own story.

And what the shit? I’m sorry, but this girl is not that attractive. Not nearly enough for “all the men” to want “to sex with her”. What the hell. This backstory is a mess. How can she attend Hope’s Peak without an invitation? HOW IS SHE STILL ALIVE IN THE POST-DESPAIR WORLD?! How is she not batshit insane?! Most people like her would be dead or have already fallen to despair by the time the first game takes place! And how-- How did Monokuma not let her in without wiping her memories first? What the hell is this?! Why is she trying to be the protagonist?! At least it potentially explains her horrendous choice of clothing...

I’m not even going to talk about this more. This is just a disaster and makes me want to get through this even further so I can scrub this OC from my brain.

♢ Likes :

Sex,electronic items,helping people,socials,solving clues,willing to friends someone,Yaoi

SELF INSERT SPOTTED, SELF INSERT SPOTTED!

No, seriously, whenever an OC has ‘yaoi’ in their likes, I default to Self Insert. And the creator legitimately put THIS in their profile. “Pro in Doujinshi,Hentai & Yaoi“ So... Fantine over here is a self insert on top of all of this.

Back to the actual review... yeah, if she was forced into prostitution, I have a feeling she wouldn’t actually like sex all that much, especially if she’d been forced into it from a young age. I don’t have much comment on the rest, as FINALLY something lines up with the rest of her.

♢ Dislikes ::

Being insulted,Having sex without taking permission to her,Being advice about her clothes,up of rage,her secret has been revealled

Welp, we’re back to impossible grammar. Semi-readable was good while it lasted, I suppose. The hell does “up of rage” mean?

Also, nonconsensual sex being in the dislikes makes sense, but... why not just bring normal sex over too? And what’s her “secret”? That she used to be a prostitute?

Aaand she doesn’t like criticism on her clothes. Lady, you’re wearing something that would get you kicked out of half the places I can name.

♢ Friends ::

Best friend:Nagito Komaeda,Aoi Asahina,Alter Ego,Leon Kuwata,Makoto Naegi,Sakura Oogami,

GODDAMMIT SHE’S A SEVENTEENTH STUDENT. AND HAS PROTAGONIST SYNDROME. Also, why is Nagito top of the list? He joined SHSL Despair. And she’s supposedly fighting despair. God damn, Fantine.

And I’m pretty sure NONE of these people would want to be around her, except maybe Makoto because he’s a nice person and would feel bad for her.

Friends:Souda Kazuichi,Gundam Tanaka,Hagakure Yasuhiro,Hifumi Yamada

Why is she friends with Hifumi? Oh, right, she’s a fujoshi. And I don’t think any of THESE people would want to be around her either. Ewwww.

Crush On:Chihiro Fujisaki,Alter Ego,

God damn. I think this chick would scare Chihiro more than she’d actually be a potential romantic partner. She’s like Chihiro’s total opposite, and no, opposites attract isn’t a thing here.

And is she using Alter Ego as a substitute after Chihiro dies? Not exactly unexpected...

Enemies:Monokuma,Junko Enoshima

Boriiiiiiiing. Generic good guy stuff. Because of course the bootleg SHSL Hope hates Despair. I’m going to give her the benefit of the doubt-- Wait, how would she know Junko was behind this? Did she somehow manage to not get herself murdered or executed? Ugh.

♢ Quotes ::

“Don’t judge the book by it’s cover”

“You have to kidding me?”

“Although all of you loves to insulting me,it doesn’t mean I been insulted.But you all gimme a great support”

“Don’t kill all these innocence suvivors except me!”

“You’re got it wrong”

“Monokuma,I challenge you for a fight between HOPE & DESPAIR”

“Although they’re diffent in executions or death,their hope is to kill and put you all in the hell!”

“Although I’m atheast,it doesn’t means I disrespect all others religions,especially Islam”

That grammar is back! How do you mess up the iconic quote?! How has she challenged Monokuma like that without dying?! How can she handle others insulting her like that even though she clearly dislikes it? What the hell is going on here? Well... She’s got a poor judge of character, because she’s saying all the killers’ intentions was to damn everyone else. Nope. Not true.

And that last quote seems a little out of place. I’m gonna assume it connects to the creator in some way.

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Final Verdict

Unsalvageable.

I’m (not) sorry to say this, but FantineAquane, the SHSL Secret, is UNSALVAGEABLE. There’s just too much wrong with her to be considered remotely salvageable, and it’s better off to just scrap her and start from the beginning. This OC was a disaster from beginning to end.

#neosaysno #that's not a name #that grammar #word vomit #what's dress code? #put some god dang clothing on #impossible talent #no no no no #impossible backstory #2muchangst #canon defilement #self insert #self contradictory #seventeenth student #protagonist syndrome #generic good guy #unsalvageable #danganronpa #mod neo

[kimthwariru]

Muse II

Genre: Smut, Angst, Fluff

a/n: This is sinful. Just saying.

Description: You get upset over Jungkook’s immature behavior so a friend of his comforts you a little too much.

Part1 Part2 Part3

His kiss was rough like he wanted to prove something to you. Whatever it was he did a great job because yes, he indeed is good.

He slowly stopped kissing you, removing his face from yours “I’m not paying you off with sex, this is just something I want to do with you, got it?”

You smirk “Who talked about sex?”

His eyes turned big, he looked embarrassed “I’m- I thought”

You laugh “You’re cute when you turn red”

His expression turned into a deep stare, you stopped breathing for a second from the intensity

“Cute is not a thing I am” he pulls you over to him biting your lower lip.

He throws you on the couch and begins to trail kisses down your neck. He was rougher than before, his nibbles turning into bites and kisses into hickies. He slowed down for a moment taking in every inch of your body as he kissed his way down your stomach and past your belly button teasing you when he got near to your panties.

“Y/N, may I taste you?”

Fuck. Him wanting your permission turned you on so much more. And he could tell it did

He gave you a cheeky smile “Do you enjoy me asking?”

“Mhmmm.” It was about all the response you could muster at this point, and it seemed to give him more confidence.

From what you knew he didn’t really taste woman. He was good with sex so it kind of made up for the lack of action down there. At least nobody complained. But why was he willing to eat you?

“I’m sure you taste good, I can tell”

At this point you were on fire. Just the sight of him looming over you, telling you these things, had every nerve in your body tingling.

He started playing with your folds. He didn’t slip a finger in, he just circled his tongue around your clit making your stomach tense.

“Will you be tight for me?”

His words had your pussy drenched and clenching around nothing.

“Pl-please Jungkook, finger me, do anything, please”

He smiled. Hungrily, he lapped at your folds, and then he backed off, gently flicking and licking your clit in all the right ways. You were a moaning hot mess when he started thrusting his tongue into your wet heat. He suddenly puts in two fingers. You weren’t ready so you push back your head letting out a load moan off his name.

“Say that again” he says as he pumps his fingers in faster

“Jungkook” you moan again loving the fact that he enjoys hearing you moan out his name.

“How can you make my name sound so angelic-like when I’m over here doing these things to you, God Y/N”

You love it. He makes it too easy for you to come, and so you do. You drench his fingers with your juices. He crawled his way up to your face, kissing you sweetly. You could taste yourself on his lips.

 You sit on his lap removing him from every piece of clothing he had, revealing his god like body. He reached his hands around your back to give you support. He lifted you up and slowly guided you back down onto his thick member.

  He was big so he gave you time to adjust to his size. When you had him fully seated inside you, he began peppering sweet kisses all over your face and neck. After a moment he reached down and put one breast into his mouth, swirling his tongue around your sensitive nipple. He detached and made his way to the other breast. You grabbed a hand full of his hair and began rocking your hips back and forth. Immediately, he took your hint and began thrusting himself up, meeting you. It didn’t take long to find rhythm, the head of his cock brushing your g-spot perfectly.

“You feel amazing”

Hearing him gasp and moan was driving you crazy. At this rate, you were surely going to cum again soon.

“Oh god Jungkook, Go harder” you moan closing your eyes

You could see the lust on his eyes “Are you sure? If I go hard on you now Y/N, I’m not sure I could stop”

“That’s exactly what I want, please jungkook”

 He starts speeding up and you could feel your entrance stretching because jungkook was both long and thick. The sound that your butt and his thigh did when they met was turning both of you on. Jungkook was now very fast, too fast and it made you almost loos consensuses from the pleasure. He grabs your hair pulling it down as he goes even faster. You are hearing him groan and your body can’t take it anymore. You were so close, and he wasn’t far behind you. You could feel the pressure building up begging for release. As your walls started to flutter, Jungkook lowered his head and bit down on your neck, and it was your undoing. Screaming his name, you held onto him for dear life as your orgasm ripped through you. A few thrusts later and he was groaning, right on the edge. He comes and you feel the warm liquid swim around you.-Thank god you were on the pill-. You stay like this for a while, admiring each other’s beauty.

He gets a strand of your hair and tucks it behind your ear. “You’re beautiful when you come, it seriously eludes me”

You smile. Will you ever see this boy again? Will he call you? Do you want him to call you? He seems fun and interesting but you’ve heard a lot of bad things about him. He is trouble, nothing like what you need.-but he might be something that you want-.

He gets dressed and so do you.

“So, do you fuck all of your models?” fuck, why did you say that? This is none of your business and he clearly looks offended now. But you couldn’t help it. You don’t know why but even though he is definitely not yours you were uneasy about him fucking all of them.

“The ones that ask yes I do have sex with them” he pauses and sees your look. It was a look that screamed ‘What have I just done? I just had sex with a fuckboy’.

“Y/N, I said I wanted this and I really did. But that’s all there is into it okay? Don’t ruin it”

He’s right, he never promised you the stars so don’t ask him for the sky. If you knew what he was why did you do it in the first place? Where you that weak to leave your stupid pleasures unfulfilled? Or were you just weak in front of him?

“Im sorry, that was stupid of me, I’ll go” you stand go towards the door. You hoped he would stop you but he never did.

 A couple of weeks later you find yourself at a party. You feel an arm around you so you turn to face a blonde beautiful young man.

“Hey there” he says

“Hi”

“Have we met before? You look very familiar”

“I don’t leave around here, I only come here for university, maybe we have met there?”

“What do you major?”

“Mathematics”

He shakes his head “No, no definitely not it. I major in contemporary arts”

“You might have mistaken me then”

“Wait, I remember. Did you model for Jungkook?”

You haven’t heard his name since that day. You never called him and he never called you. So when you heard his name your heart skipped a beat.

“Y-yes I- I modeled for his competition”

“I remember seeing that photo with my mouth open, you were truly a piece of art, one of Jungkook’s best works if you ask me”

“Your friends with him?”

“Yes, and I remember that he told me you were the only one he didn’t fuck. You have done the impossible mam.” he chuckled

You quickly sealed your mouth and tried not to leave a gasp upon hearing these words. Jungkook told him what? Why would he even mention it? Was he embarrassed about fucking you?

“Anyway I was supposed to arrange the first pretty girl I saw with jungkook today, this boy has been fucking everyday these past weeks. Sorry for being like this, but you know him so there is no point in hiding things am I right?” the boy chuckles but what the fuck is funny about the whole situation is that you still think Jungkook is kind hearted even after you learn he’s been fucking everything that moves.

“I’m Jimin by the way”

“I’m Y/N, nice to meet you Jimin”

Jimin’s phone starts vibrating and he picks up

“Oh Jungkook hey” you feel your heart go numb

Jungkook P.O.V

“Oh Junkook hey”

“Jimin you’ve been missing for seriously too long, is it that hard to find a girl?”

“Why don’t you get one yourself? I’m in the middle of a conversation”

“You’re my wingman Jimin did you forget about that? Plus what chick is more important than me?”

Jimin coughs like he was nodding me to act proper and watch my language. Pfft who is he? My mom?

“I’m here with Y/N”

You don’t know if you heard right or you just think of her so much that you heard her name. After that night no one was like her. Not only sexually but under your camera also. No one was good enough to model for you after her. You never told her but you recently got the results from the competition and you came first. You wanted to call her and thank her but you never had the time to. That’s why. That’s why she doesn’t need someone like you. You didn’t even have the time to fucking call her and thank her. What made you think you could be with her all the time like you wanted, like she deserved. You’ve been fucking nonstop to forget about her. Maybe find someone who could feel as she felt but nobody feels like her. Nobody is her.

“Jimin you’re not fucking with me now are you?”

“Fuck off why would I?”

“Jimin tell her to wait there, I’m on my way”

Jungkook P.O.V end

 He comes into the club and runs towards you

“Thanks Jimin” he pulled you by your hand outside of the club not even letting you say something to him. You wave at jimin in response and you don’t try to let yourself go off his grip. Why do you even like this douche?

“Get in the car” he says

“I’m not in the mood for this Jungkook”

“We need to talk”

“If talk means sex then I don’t want to talk.”

“Just get in” he sighed “ I have good news”

“Tell me those good news outside of your car would you?”

“Why? Is your boyfriend going to be jealous?”

God had has got in to him? Why is he acting like this? Is he really that childish?

“How old are you? 12?” You scoff

He comes closer. Foreheads almost touching eyes extremely close to each other

“Y/N get in the fucking car and don’t make me say it again”

“Is everything okay here?” You turn to look at a tall brown haired man.

“Taehyung this is none of your business” Jungkook says

“There are plenty of girls inside Jungkook, if she doesn’t want you go find someone else”

He gets away from you, now moving towards Taehyung

“It’s not like that. Now go Tae”

“No Jungkook, I’m going” You say making both of them turn around. You’ve had enough of this nonsense. You want to go home. Never listen to the name Jungkook again.

“Y/N” Jungkook yells but he is held back by his friend. ”Don’t leave”

“You should have said that that one day Jungkook… Now it’s too late”

“Y/N please”

But you ignore him. It hurts you but what has even got in to him? This kid is not on his right mind and him acting like this makes you even more confused. You wanted to have a piece of his mind but you couldn’t. It wouldn’t be healthy for you.

 A couple of hours later you’re still at the bus stop for some reason. Not a single soul in the street and you are waiting for the buss. There are two street lights but only one works, breaking the darkness a bit.

In the meantime your phone didn’t stop buzzing because of jungkook’s texts that you didn’t even bother to read.

“Are you okay?” A voice makes you shaken up in the middle of nowhere. You turn to face Jungkook’s friend. Taehyung, is it?

“I didn’t mean to scare you I’m sorry”

“Why are you here?”

“After I saved your ass Jungkook left and I didn’t have a ride home so… here I am” He points to the space next to you “May I sit?”

You nod. He has an enjoyable sent

“Thanks” you simply say

“Don’t mention it, Jungkook has been crazy with girls lately so I did more good to him than to you trust me”

He definitely doesn’t know who you are because why would Jungkook even tell him? Jimin didn’t even know you two had sex for god sakes. You clearly meant nothing to him. And why would you? He never told you something about being with him. He only hired you to be his model.

“It’s good that you didn’t give in to Jungkook, he is no good for you trust me”

“And how do you know what’s good for me?”

“You’re lost honey, you need someone to guide you” he came closer.

Is he flirting with you? I mean you kind of doze off every time you look at him in the eyes-and that boxy smile of his- but that doesn’t mean anything. Does it? All that matters is that you can only think of Jungkook right now so you don’t pay much attention to him. But he is still there and you could feel his presence. At the end of the day would it be that bad to give in? Why would it? You’re single, Jungkook isn’t your fucking boyfriend and he will never be.

“What do you know about guiding?” you turn to look at him. He looks so comfortable that it almost makes you feel like home.

“I can show you”

And with that he leans in and kisses you. His lips are so soft and you almost feel bad about biting them but you can’t help it. He pulls you even closer to his body making you feel him. He feels warm and you’re not so sad anymore.

 The bus ride was intense. There were only a couple of drunk people on the front sits and you and him on the back. You were teasing him and jerked him off a bit while he was still clothed.

You get to his place still kissing while both of you throw all of your clothes wherever possible.

You slowly go down where his length is and you could see him tracing your eyes as you went, enjoying the sight of you kneeling in front of him.

You take his dick in your hands and it felt fucking hard. You slowly lick the head as you look at him teasing him with your tongue making circles around his member. When you finally take it all in he lets out a loud ‘fuck’ and grabs your hair.

“Let me throat fuck you”

You nod and you let him stabilize your head. He starts going in and out very fast and everytime his dick hits your throat you gag. He stops when he sees tears running down your face.

Your mouth lets go of his dick leaving strings of saliva along the way. He kisses your collarbone roughly pulling on your neck’s soft skin.

“You’re such a good girl” he groans as he continues to leave hickeys everywhere.

He grabs your ass giving it a squeeze and you’re sure he left a bruise there because it fucking hurts. You feel his dick touching your entrance and you’re so ready for him. You take his dick and place his head in between your folds.

“Can’t wait can you?”

“I need to feel it”

And that’s all he needs from you. He puts his whole dick in and earns your loud moan. He smirks and starts going in and out slowly letting you catch up to him. He throws you to the wall and takes your hands from the wrists putting them over your head exposing you to his mouth that kissed every inch of your breast area. He started going in harder and harder and you could feel his dick thrust into you, rubbing your g-spot. Pain from both is dick and his teeth that were in between your nipples. God it felt good. You were in pain but in pleasure at the same time. You were so close and you just let him do whatever to you.

“Where do you want me to come baby?” he says as he goes in and out

“Come on my fucking boobs, please”

He pulls himself out and you knee down looking at him jerking off trying to release his cum on you.

“Fuck” he yells and white juice is now covering your breasts.

He pets your chin and you stand up to kiss him. He kisses back gently “You want to shower?”

“Yes please”

  You open your eyes adjusting to the brightness of the room. He is still sleeping next to you like a little child –completely efferent of what he was last night-. You get your phone and you see that Jungkook didn’t stop texting you. This guy doesn’t know how to give up.

{Y/N I swear to god if you don’t answer me I’ll come find you}

{Y/N! I’m not messing around. I need to talk to you.}

{I know you are reading my texts Y/N, please I can’t say this over text, don’t make me}

{DON’T MAKE ME DO THIS Y/N}

{Fine. Thanks for posing for me. It really meant a lot. We won 1st place at the competition and it’s thanks to you. You nailed it Y/N, I’m really sorry for that day. I was never like this, I never actually liked a girl I fucked but with you it was different. I felt like I made love to you. I didn’t want to admit it to myself but I think I like you. I really fucking like you. You inspired me so much ever since you left. I made 2 new photographs inspired by you. I think I finally found my muse and it’s you Y/N. Please answer me}

Oh my god. What the fuck did you just do? You just slept with his fucking friend.

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