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EFZAL ANWARE MUFTI
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mostlymaudlin · 2 years
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if you're worried about repetitive sentence starters in narrative writing (ie: frequently starting with "I" or a pov character's name), i think the most important thing to focus on is not the kind of words you're using, but rather the moving parts in your story that are being highlighted.
english is best suited for a subject (I) - verb (wrote) - object (this) sentence structure; that's the format that the reader will inhale without noticing, easy as breathing. it's also the easiest for you to write (hence, your draft full of sentences starting with pronouns). for a lot of the delivery of your story, you should be in that "stealth mode" so that the lines you want noticed can really leap off the page in comparison. messing with the subject-verb-object pattern signals to the reader that there's something to notice, and writing is awkward when it's full of sentences that say, "look at me!"
if you're worried about variation of sentence starters, you want to zoom out on the narrative and think about the scene you are trying to show, or the point you are trying to make. let's do an example from my own writing:
That’s not all true. Baz had already mapped out the best regular flights from Heathrow to LAX. He was talking about weekend trips in the middle and FaceTime date ideas he’d found on Pinterest. It filled Simon with dread. Baz wasn’t taking any of it seriously. As silly as the role was, everyone knew Bad Blood was going to be huge. Baz was the exciting, fresh face joining a star-studded cast for the most audience-friendly teen vampire show in history. Simon wasn’t going to let him blow it.
all the blue sentences follow, in general, that subject-verb-object pattern. the pink sentence is the outlier, and it's also the most significant line in the paragraph; in this story, this is the moment where you finally learn simon's motivation for previously breaking up with baz. the rest of the sentences all start with a noun, but they're different nouns based on what needs to be said.
here's another way this could be written:
Simon knows that's not all true. He'd watched Baz map out the best regular flights from Heathrow to LA and look up FaceTime date ideas. Simon worried that Baz wasn't taking it seriously. He knew Bad Blood would be huge, despite the concept being silly. But Simon knew Baz was the exciting, fresh face joining a star-studded cast for the most audience-friendly, sexy teen vampire show in history. Simon wasn't going to let him blow it.
this probably looks more similar to the kind of paragraph people get nervous about. simon simon simon -- like, stfu man! what's really happening is just that simon is not the best subject for all of these sentences. it's true that "simon knows" and "simon watched" and "simon knew," but we already know all that, because we know we're in his head. when you look at paragraphs like these, you want to identify the true subject of your sentences. even in the most introspective of paragraphs (like the above example), the narrator is usually not the Most Important Noun.
let's do one more example for when you're writing really menial tasks -- this is where i most commonly have this problem:
Andrew turns on the TV, puts the volume almost all the way down, and crouches in front of the DVD collection. His fingers trail along the spines for a moment before he pulls a case from the shelf. The player swallows the disc as Andrew crosses the room to turn out the lights. Tinged blue in the shadows, he comes to stand in front of Neil again, hand extended in demand.
so, same thing: the subjects, the nouns taking action, are andrew, his fingers, the dvd player, and then andrew again with a modifier. the first time i wrote this, i'm sure "andrew" or "he" was the start of every sentence, because my man is just doing his lil task here and sometimes that's not the most exciting thing to write. but again: it's not all about him! other nouns deserve the spotlight. the last sentence breaks the pattern, but it's also the completion of the task: he has successfully set the movie-watching scene, and this sentence is transitioning us to them watching the movie.
there's lots of ways to write and i definitely don't have all the answers, but i do think that any writing advice that asks you to focus on mechanics rather than structure will ultimately not help you solve the root of bad writing habits. when i write, i'm thinking: what's the main player noun in the action taking place? that's what becomes the subject of my sentence, so my starters are naturally a lot more varied. it's less intimidating to think about the purpose of your story (which you're already excited about!) when you're writing than it is to put that focus on mechanics.
good luck! you've got this!!
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er-cryptid · 6 months
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Verbs with Strong Preterit Forms
poder
poner
saber
venir
hacer
querer
decir
traer
ser
ir
dar
ver
estar
tener
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sarenhale · 4 months
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Thinking about yesterday's finnish class, where my lovely teacher (this sweet 60 year old lady that gives off precious aunt vibes) was giving us some verbs to conjugate with her in call to practice conjugation/different verb types, and then gave me the verb 'Kiroilla'. I don't know what that means, but she always tells us what new verbs mean when we do exercises so I'm just there chilling with no reaction to it, but I see she's struggling to find her words and she goes like 'Kiroilla means... uhm... eh... 'to curse'. You know what Marina, just do the negative conjugation for this' NJHSDGHCHUJKSDGVVYUHGRBJABOIFCHBIOGBVIOJUERGFBDVOIURFE She looked so mortified... it was so funny oh my god
She said 'Well I needed some verbs to conjugate that end with 'LA'... sometimes there's not enough and I had to pick one...' dshjgvjfdgbvhjfd
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kariachi · 2 months
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I may do something weird with Imperial Erinaen, don't know, have to figure out how fucking verbal moods work before I decide on anything.
As it stands I think I have a grasp on basic aspects and my desire to express a lot of information in a comparatively few words with the language is clashing with my desire to not re-do my fucking verb conjugation system.
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marnz · 3 months
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if I’m real with you I do believe most people are capable of learning most skills at most jobs. However work is not ONLY skills, I think there has to be a wide variety of things at play—training, mentorship, temperament, aptitude, funding, benefits, etc—but skills are how we learn and why experience is so highly valued.
if I remember correctly, in a Marxist school of thought, you as a worker are selling your labor power to your employer for $$$ and your employer is then applying it to labor that needs to be done. you don’t hold the work, you hold the power to do the work. I think given the amount of economic coercion our society operates under, this power is forgotten until strikes happen and remind us.
and I think this framework does account for experience. you get paid more as an experienced worker (in theory) because your employer is paying for all of your past labor power! so we can say labor power accrues over time and is not depleted by being applied to labor. I would not say labor power is a measurement of your CAPACITY to do labor at any given point though, only that it does not work like capital where you “spend” it. Marx probably does a much better job of laying this out but it’s been a long time since I read Capital.
But say you are not a Marxist and the idea of labor power is too much like trying to do physics equations that calculate force. Fair enough! Let us return to skills. “Skills” have, for a long time, been used to devalue certain kinds of work—as if manual labor, customer service, retail, agricultural work, teaching, cleaning, etc, require no complex and difficult to acquire skills your average office worker does not have in their repertoire. all work takes skill! this is a labor slogan. and it does.
however I think there are other skills we must hone in the work place (and in life), and there’s been a lot of talk (anxiety?) recently about skills that are not being taught. tech skills! I also think it takes skill to learn and retain information and schools do not always do a good job of teaching this for whatever reason. resourcefulness.
so if we have established all of this…why say “it’s not hard” and devalue yourself as a worker? just because you can do it DOES NOT mean it’s not hard.
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tj-crochets · 1 year
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What plushie should I make next? I feel like designing a plushie pattern but idk what to make
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arcadianico · 7 months
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a hobby of mine is reading scots poems to english speakers and watching them realise they can’t understand 80% of it
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calenturian · 10 months
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How come you speak romanian as an australian? Do you have family, a partner, friends or workmates that are romanians or is it just a personal interest?
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I don't know anyone in person who even speaks Romanian. I knew a couple of words already because of Dragostea din tei, and I knew it was the language with the intriguing hyphens, but I never considered learning it until these guys came along and before I knew it my playlists were full of Romanian songs and I was starting to pick up actual grammar and I figured I ought to do the thing properly. Now I have a 376 day streak on duolingo and an entire pastoral ballad in my brain and I regret nothing.
I love it so much. It makes me want to write poetry that doesn't start with foaie verde lol
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mishkakagehishka · 1 year
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I will continue telling everyone that Shu is actually jacked up until they lock me away, he just looks skinny, but he's not. I know what his profile says about his weight, they're lying. He's buff. I know this in my heart.
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miabrown007 · 2 years
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eugh, words
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edenavari · 1 year
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my toxic trait is i get the urge to bite murder kill anyone who tells me what to do in any context whatsoever
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plushslug · 5 months
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I fucking love writing endless strings of clauses that make sentences incredibly difficult to follow. Almost as much as I love adverbs.
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brisketrotater · 9 months
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squoze >>>>>>> squeezed
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slutforwings · 11 months
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"language change is inevitable and while language purism can slow it down theres no stopping it" and "we should stop looking at british or american english as the standard and let deviations be their own standard instead of mistakes" can still go together with me being irked by the regularisation of payed instead of paid. i know its the most human thing out there (overgeneralisation baby!) but i hate it and it stays wrong in my eyes >:(
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anragaire · 1 year
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The problem with having studied Old English is that I now apply defunct grammar rules to modern English when I'm tired
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