Me, editing: I can't believe I wrote the phrase "hard concrete." It's concrete. Readers know that it doesn't have the density of a marshmallow. It's freaking concrete. What awful writing, unreadable, complete trash. No one should ever read this reprehensible filth. My shame is eternal and my regret absolute.
*deletes the word "hard" and then stares at the screen for half an hour*
Me: . . . I feel like this sentence needs an adjective.
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