please talk about writing styles /nf -seb
BRRRBRRRR OKAY. sebastian my friend you have activated the thing that makes me ramble incoherently bc i get really really excited okay okay okay SO SO SO SO SO
I REALLY LOVE THINKING ABOUT WRITING STYLES becuase i think it goes under talked about but like there are SO many cool mechanics people can use in writing and its so interesting to look at differences in writing styllistically. like! i love seeing how people handle DIALOGUE if they use dialogue as their central propeller and stylize their description around the dialogue, if they are sparse about it, fi they you description to describe what the dialogue WOULD HAVE BEEN which i ALSO think can be pulled off relaly well and i think the way that people handle dialogue
also leads into how they handle perspective!!!!!! is some dialogue / some thinking done internally in the narration , does the narration stick closely to the narrator so you hear their thoughts as if they're just observations (sky is blue , XYZ thinking pattern, equal playing field) do these biases color the way they view everything can the reader SEE these biases or do they have to uncover them where are the contradictions all of these things
you can take a step back in narration and i think thast REALLY cool can create so much dramatic irony and just irony in general!!!!! an di love tragdies that are a step removed from the characters because you get very immersed in the situation as if youre in a theatre watching it happen not like inside the characteres head but i ALSO think that being in the characters head can do so so so so SO much and
i also think that the way you write can also play into it if you write in a more formal way more verbose way is that how to most accurately encapsulate the setting? is that how the main characters talk therefore thats what youre doing with narration? i think its so interesting to look at word choice bc when is word choice good, the other day i was obsessing over my usage of ad nauseum in a piece bc does it make sense there? does that fit?
and wriitng casually GOD one of my faves bc u cant write TOO casually not because its an outright detriment but like mechanical writing skills spelling etc they're avenues to access the plot much more efficieently but dont actually DO anything bad like a fic with bad spelling can be so much better than a fic that has perfect spelling but doesnt have heart but ultimately having that better spelling makes it easier to understand you know ?? and like sorry rambled but same with casual writing you can do it SO os well but when you get too casual and things get muddled thats another thing you have to examine is the narrator actually well aquaintd with us
is the narrator a character do we have to understand the narrator to get the story hell is the NARRATOR biased i love that i love when not just the protagonist is biased by the actual narrator is biased it requires such a specific set up in writing but its so fuckignng cool
oayy im ramblbingn a lot but rbbrbrbrbrbdfkhhdfhdfgyayehah!!!!
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Kurohina TW angst/fluff
In this AU hinata is a girl Hinata also offically known as shoyo miya kept that hidden as is oikawa who is also a girl in this AU because why not
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⚠️TRIGGER WARNING⚠️
TOXIC KARASUNO
SUICIDE ATTEMPT
USE OF ANIME GRAPHICAL IMAGES OF SAID TOPIC
SOME CUSSING (NOTHING TO MAJOR JUST NORMAL ME)
Ship kurohina
Lets start
Sho was a hopeless romantic at heart she believed in the fairytale ending but she forgot the bullshit you have to go though to get the happily ever after she so desired the heartbreak the hurt the Tragdy just to achieve a good ending to a bad story sho would do it hell she was willing to die for that happy end in her life as well Now lately Sho has not been herself why her team is so toxic apart from the two managers and the forgotten trio the team can’t wait to put her down and slag her off even her own boyfriend has noticed a change and it’s worrying him so much that he took to the GC to find out why
In the Haikyuu GC
Kuroo:guys has anyone notice a change in sho my kitten seems so down
Bokuto:yeah my disciple Isn’t her sunshine self
All the other teams minus karasuno agree
Kita:so what do you know about this crows you seem quite even your simps are quite
Kiyoko:you want to know kita the team minus five of us put her down slag him off slander her
Ennoshita:true after everything she had done for our team they treat her like crap
Kinoshita:can confirm
Narita:i even heard kageyama wishing she was dead
Yachi:can back that up
Everyone: you are all vile
Sho is on line
Kuroo:Kitten are you okay are you safe please anwser my calls
Sho:🎶 Would anyone notice If tonight I disappeared? Would anyone chase me And say the words that I need to hear?🎶
Kuroo:kitten what do you mean kitten what do you mean disappear
Sho:🎶 That I'm no burden Not so worthless Bent so much that I just might break All-consuming So confusing The questions that keep me awake🎶
Atsumu:of course you aren’t a burden why would you think that
Daichi:why are you lying to her she is a burden she is useless
miya twins:what did say about our baby sister you fucking bitch🔪
Karasuno: BABY SISTER?!
Everyone else: we knew
Sho:🎵 Would anyone care, would anyone cry If I finally stepped off of this ledge tonight?🎵
Sho sent an attachment
This is sho by the way
Tori:No No No excuse me WHAT?! you’re my sister too that's besides the point say you are joking and you are in your room or with Kuroo
Kuroo:she is not with me
Osamu:she is not in her room Nee san
Atsumu:can back samu up
Sho:🎶 Would anything change, would you all be just fine? 'Cause I need a reason to not throw the fight It just might save my life🎶
Suga’s thoughts 💭 we may have gone too far shit this might be serious what have i done i am meant to be the team mom
Sho:🎶 Would anyone want me If they knew what was inside my head Would anyone see me For the person that I really am?🎶
Kuroo:kenma could you track her
Kenma:I have been trying to since she sent that image
The miya siblings: if anything happens to our baby sister we will sue karasuno and make sure the volleyball team gets shut down
Sho:🎶 I won't lie So hard to hide I've never felt worthy of love I would give up Everything I have Just to feel good enough🎶
Bokuto:have you all made her feel that low and degraded you disgust me especially you Daichi you are meant to be a captain you are not worthy of that title if anything happens to my student i will see you will never be allowed in any other team🔪
Akaashi:this is the first time i am scared of my own bf so i know he is being serious
Sho:🎶 Would anyone care, would anyone cry If I finally stepped off of this ledge tonight? Would anything change, would you all be just fine? Cause I need a reason to not throw the fight It just might save my life🎶
After sho said that he went offline
Kuroo:no no no kitten come back online please kenma location
Kenma sent location
Kenma sent the location kuroo jumped in his car and sped off breaking all possible speed limits he saw shoyo he ran in the building up the stairs he was out of breath but he didn’t care his kitten was more important
Kuroo walked to the door as shoyo was getting ready to jump and Kuroo made sure he made a group call for his siblings
to see
Kuroo:🎶 If you're dying inside Sick of being alive Let me in, let me share in your pain From my lungs through the dark Spoken straight from the heart Let me give you a reason to stay🎶
Sho:Kuroo I-
Kuroo:🎶 If you're out there still lying awake If you're out there still wondering Would anyone care, would anyone cry If you finally gave up and turned out the light🎶
Sho:Kuroo please stop its been made clear i am not wanted alive
Kuroo:wrong kitten you are you see 🎶The world would be changed if you left it behind You can't be replaced, no, tonight is the night You take back your life🎶
Osamu:🎶 You take back your life🎶
Atsumu:🎶 You take back your life🎶
Tori:🎶 You take back your life🎶
Sho smiles and was ready to come down to safety but her legs gave out and she fell everyone in the GC saw this kuroo yelled
Kuroo:KITTEN!!!!
He ran down the stairs hoping to make in time he told kenma to contact the ambulance he ran like a maniac to sho when he got there she was on the floor every could see
Everyone: this is all your fault Karasuno you did this🔪
Kenma managed to get an ambulance to get there fast
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Shoyo is on a life support michine its the only thing keeping her alive right now kuroo and the miya family came in to see her they started a group call so everyone can see then kuroo suddenly started singing hoping she may respond to his voice alone
This is how shoyo is but he is a she rememeber that over too kuroo
Kuroo:Hey kitten please if by some miracle you can hear me or at least hear the next think i have to say come back to me please honey remember
🎶You're not alone, together we stand
I'll be by your side, you know, I'll take your hand🎶
(Shoyo in coma):kuroo i can hear you i am holding out for you
Kuroo:🎶 When it gets cold and it feels like the end There's no place to go, you know, I won't give in No, I won't give in🎶
Akaashi:Come on sunshine please come back to us its dark with out your light around
Kuroo:🎶Keep holding on 'Cause you know we'll make it through We'll make it through Just stay strong🎶
Karasuno is starting to feel regret seeing the Kohai like that they are disgusted with themselves
Kuroo:🎶 'Cause you know I'm here for you, I'm here for you There's nothing you can say, nothing you can do There's no other way when it comes to the truth🎶
The truth is kuroo was madly in love with her and call him crazy he was going to ask her to move in with him that day she fell off the roof but fate decided hey i wanted to do some fuckary there and now here we are
Miya twins:🎶 So keep holdin' on 'Cause you know we'll make it through We'll make it through🎶
Kuroo did a small smile to the twins
Kuroo:🎶 So far away, I wish you were here Before it's too late, this could all disappear Before the doors close and it comes to an end With you by my side, I will fight and defend I'll fight and defend, yeah, yeah🎶
Atsumu:His a keeper sis
Osamu:I agree he is willing go to hell and back for you but you have to come back to us
(Shoyo in coma):I will please wait for me i want to go back to you come on body react a finger that is all i ask a finger
Tori:🎶 Keep holding on 'Cause you know we'll make it through We'll make it through Just stay strong🎶
(Shoyo in coma):Let me show some sign of life so i can get off this damn michine the beeping is diving me loopy
Miya twins:🎶 'Cause you know I'm here for you, I'm here for you There's nothing you can say, nothing you can do There's no other way when it comes to the truth
So keep holding on 'Cause you know we'll make it through We'll make it through🎶
Kuroo:🎶 Hear me when I say, when I say I believe Nothing's gonna change Nothing's gonna change destiny Whatever is meant to be will work out perfectly Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah🎶
Sho move her finger only a little but it was enough to catch Tori’s attention
Tori:Keep singing i saw her finger move
Atsumu:You sure
Tori:Yeah watch
They did
Tori:Come on sis 🎶Keep holding on
'Cause you know we'll make it through
We'll make it through Just stay strong
'Cause you know I'm here for you, I'm here for you🎶
Again sho’s finger moved
Kuroo:She’s right omg she can hear us
Atsumu:🎶 There's nothing you can say, nothing you can do There's no other way when it comes to the truth So keep holding on 'Cause you know we'll make it through We'll make it through🎶
Kuroo:🎶 There's nothing you can say, nothing you can do There's no other way when it comes to the truth So keep holding on 'Cause you know we'll make it throughWe'll make it through🎵
Sho’s eye’s slowly fluttered open and kuroo ran to her and hugged her
Kuroo:Omg kitten you’re okay i really thought i lost you my love
Sho:Never atsu nii can i move schools i want to be with my bf
Atsumu:I approve that
Osamu:Second it
Tori:And i third it
Sho:I also want out this hospital it really gives off horror movie vibes
Bokuto:Hahaha
Miya twins:By the karasuno we are suing you
Karasuno: sho we are sorry
Sho:Talk to the ✋🏼bitches because because the face😊ain’t listen 🧏♀️
Kuroo:Kitten you don’t need to be polite after what they did
Sho:Really well in that case 🖕🏻off
Bokuto:Baby owl has spoken
Kuroo:You maybe my bro but i won’t hesitate to throw hands
Yaku:Bokuto stop hitting on my new daughter
Sho:Bokkun you know i love you and look up to you right but kuroo is my bf your his best bro
Bokuto:I know thanks sho
Sho:Hey bo take akaashi on a spa date just the two of you for a few days help him relax
Bokuto:🥺 nice idea thanks
Akaashi:So what were you two whispering about should i be jealous
Bokuto:Nope and nothing you need to worry about
That is what bokuto did and as for sho she moved in with kuroo as he planned and is now offically going to nekoma and what about karasuno the miya twins sued them and then it suddenly got around what they did the volleyball team got disbanded they became a disgraced school no student wanted to go there the coach quit he didn’t want to be associated with a school like that anymore so he went back to the store.
Years later after graduating kuroo and sho go to college together on the same course
They are also now engaged sho was also expecting her first child
Have her ex team mates tried to contact her yeah they tried she has blocked and changed her number she has blocked all toxic assholes from her life and trying to stay stress free because she is pregant and the last thing she wants is to be stressed out
Time skip
Their daughter Juno was born and kuroo and sho got married and was expect baby number 3 i say because its twins this time round
Sho looked back on her past and thought maybe not all stories have a tragic ending some can. Find there happy ever after its just knowing where to look
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