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saltpepperbeard · 6 months

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*laying on my back staring at the ceiling* no okay that second kiss is driving me insane actually lmao--

because, contextually, what would be the reason for NOT including it? what would be the reason for cutting it?

because, to ME at least, it would make way more sense that ed would want to go in for another kiss. even if it's just a short peck, a brush of their lips, i would think he'd want to delight in that newfound intimacy as much as he could. the walls have been torn down, the doors have been opened, so one would think he'd be so very willing. "this just WORKS."

was it something that only existed in photograph staging, maybe? same with that iconic face caress picture. like, was it maybe only taika and rhys hamming it up for pictures but not actually following exact canon?

OR, was it indeed in canon, but they wanted to just focus all energy and "oomph" on their first kiss? they wanted it to have its own iconic breathing room?

which, makes sense, i suppose. but hsdjksd you CAN'T JUST SHOW ME ANOTHER KISS THAT NEVER MADE IT ON SCREEN AND NOT EXPECT ME TO BE LIKE 🔪

#OFMD #Gentlebeard #Blackbonnet #Edward Teach #Stede Bonnet #biting max biting max biting max biting max--#but also begrudgingly kissing them for even showing us that in the first place PFFFF #LIKE YES YES THANK YOU I'M SORRY #I AM INDEED GRATEFUL FOR ALL THIS CONTENT #I'M FEELING SO FED BEYOND BELIEF #BUT ALSOOOOO DO YOU TAKE CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM SHDLKJSDHSLK

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andromedaexile · 10 months

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Still trying to figure out how to use Procreate but this guy is pretty cool!

#tng #data tng #data soong #star trek #commander data #data fanart #tng fanart #digital painting #yes I cheated with the screenshot reference AND WHAT #ignore the hands #guys help how do I do art #I’m so serious how does this shit work #the more i look at it the more i hate it #I will take constructive criticism pls #totally didn’t rush this #I did #maybe I’ll upload a better version later

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naniyo · 28 days

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Here I go, speed-translating KUUMAA lyrics instead of working. Just in case lovely peeps who don't speak Finnish wanted to understand the lyrics to the new song that are, once again, disgustingly bojere coded, excuse me.

Behold: Tuhoaisti - KUUMAA (English translation by me)

I want everything, I want your everything Even though I haven’t slept at all It’s the destructive sense that confounds Prevents the ignited from going out

We don’t speak with words We were coded to fall in love in a different way We’re somehow the same and the opposite But no one else has struck through me like this Come through the wall without asking for permission And every cell of mine aches But I want, I want

Yes, I want everything, I want your everything Even though I haven’t slept at all It’s the destructive sense that confounds Prevents the ignited from going out And you’re the exception, the only exception That can make me break down It’s the destructive sense that confounds Prevents the ignited from going out

When you’re not here Your shadow paints my walls I keep the lights on But your voice keeps moaning in my ears And you’ve won It’s no use trying to pretend I’m stronger What I ran from before Now I want it, I want it

Yes, I want everything, I want your everything Even though I haven’t slept at all It’s the destructive sense that confounds Prevents the ignited from going out And you’re the exception, the only exception That can make me break down It’s the destructive sense that confounds Prevents the ignited from going out

Original Finnish lyrics here

#bojere #bojan cvjetićanin #käärijä #kuumaa #tuhoaisti #my brain might just be too bojere coded for its own good #I heard the first lines of the first verse and immediately went 'yes by god another one for the collection thank you johannes'#I took some liberties concerning the expressions but tried to keep it fairly directly translated when it comes to overall meaning #this was very quick and just for funsies so I do not take constructive criticism thank you #also #you can freely use my translation if you like but please let me know if you do and credit accordingly

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mistyriousness · 1 year

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-The Davesport Kids-

The first two doodles are old, featuring the biological ship baby of Dave and Jack, Fitzgerald Kennedy! You’ll probably be seeing more of him in the future!

The third is Dave and this grumpy purple security guard he found (and instantly claimed as his own)

#digital art #my art #fanart #dayshift at freddy's #dsaf #dsaf fanart #dsaf jack #dsaf dave #dsaf oc #dave miller #jack kennedy #fnaf fangame #fnaf mike #michael afton #yes I did say fitzgerald is their biological child #no I do not take constructive criticism

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aegagrusscholarship · 1 year

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contributions to the 2021 madness day canvas collabs

#madness combat #madcom #mc deimos #hank j wimbleton #actual art #yes i’m posting these now. no i do not take constructive criticism #(i… don’t know what i was thinking tbh?? didn’t want to post too much to tumblr? not sure.)#(better late than never though)#(so here you go)

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mornings-of-gold · 6 days

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Academic Labyrinth essay coming up!

My wonderful English professor let me use Labyrinth for my movie review essay. Hehe

I got a bit carried away.

Whoops

#yes I write all my essays with a quill and ink #no I do not take constructive criticism on this #it’s my Hogwarts fantasy #makes homework so much more fun also #labyrinth 1986 #david bowie #jareth the goblin king #sarah williams #jim hensen

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catkin-morgs-kookaburralover · 4 days

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I hate those posts that are like "I didn't feel sick and then I went to treatment and I was the sickest person there teehee". I get it. Denial/minimisation of your own unwellness is a hallmark of true anorexia. But I hate those posts. As someone who has never caused real worry, never been hospitalised, never passed out, and probably never will, those posts reek of superiority, of being a better anorexic than I'll ever be. Maybe I'm bitter. Who knows. The only health effects I've had disappeared when I weight restored, and I wouldn't have even known my heart rate was that low if I hadn't happened to be at the doctor's then. There's this one post I've read several times about the unicorn effect, how we all think we're invincible but we're not, blah blah blah. But I'm literally not unwell enough to have permanent health effects. No matter what I do within my capability, I never will be unless I straight up start to refuse food, which I'm sometimes incredibly close to doing. I also literally do not care if I get sick. Why should I? And besides - I only will if I start throwing up or something. I'm making moves to get my bike here rather than four hours' drive away, so I can exercise more, but if I end up dependent on exercise as compensation? That's fine. There is nothing wrong with that. I will be fine. And call me an idiot but I hate that, and I cannot express that to medical professionals or I'll sound insane. I am insane. Anyway. I'm currently trying to convince my friends on Discord that I'm totally fine and in recovery, which is a hilarious joke but don't tell them that. I'm not depressed, however: I think this current ED relapse is compensatory. Whatever. I don't care - except that I do, terribly. I don't know how to fix this.

#tw ed #vent #do i Want To Get Worse? yes absolutely #and i am not taking constructive criticism at present.

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jiminsproof · 6 months

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tag game 🌙

I was tagged by my lovelies: @hopeinthebox, @seoksao & @cordiallyfuturedwight to do this test and post my results. Thank you sm sweethearts, hope you're having a lovely weekend!! 💗🫂

I don't know that many of those characters but getting Marianne so high does feel like coming out again 🤣🤣🤣

Tagging some of my mutuals, 0 pressure and lots of love 💗🫂: @aprylynn, @bts7svt13, @epiphanytear, @india-stoker, @ihamtmus, @deukaeism, @dearedwardteach, @jeongguks-s, @lesovoj, @blueside-hobi. 💗

#tag game #moots 💗#salma 🏵#kayla 📚#hope that everyone is well <33 drink some water today!!#and if you're as cold as i am change that to some hot tea 🥰#SENDING YOU THE BIGGEST HUG 🫂#also @lizzy - i think i don't have an emoji for you??? this should be punishable by death and i am thoroughly ashamed ..... ....#no emoji for such an icon in our fandom??? smh.....#anyway thoughts??? ->#lizzy 👑#yes you are the queen of bangtan tumblr in my head for how hilarious you are.#no i do not take constructive criticism #(except if you prefer another emoji WHICH IS FINE !!!!)

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copiasblair · 4 months

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went and saw house of 1000 corpses for my movie class thing and before the class started they showed rob zombie music videos and i just want to say it's wild that the music video for living dead girl is based on cabinet of dr caligari, my all-time favorite movie, when that song is used in the best opening scene of any movie, in bride of chucky, which is also one of my all-time favorites

#like what a weird coincidence/crossover #anyway i had seen ho1000c before and i still don't totally love it #but i appreciated it more this time around #baby is one of the characters of all time #also yes the opening scene of bride of chucky is the best opening scene in any movie no i do not take constructive criticism <3 #what do you have to say doll?

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yinses · 9 months

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there is just something so spiritual about hearing hanguang jun and gege in weiwuxian's voice

#yes im watching mdzs again and no i do not take constructive criticism about my actions tyvm #dont @ me about it #knowing the significance of wangxian in the 2nd episode is its own trigger warning

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bluberimufim · 4 months

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"What is your OC's pain tolerance like?" And "What is the worst thing you have put your OC through story-wise?"

You didn't specify an OC so I'm just gonna spin the character wheel since I've been doing that a lot lately

What is your OC's pain tolerance like?

Oooh, this one's kinda fun!

In short? Inhuman. Jane probably has the most ridiculous pain tolerance known to man.

Apart from the "half-human-half-god except the god part is a whole lot stronger", she was also raised by the Goddess of Time, who tried to make her into a perfect warrior for almost 20 years. She's done almost nothing but train her entire life (she never ate or slept before coming to the Mortal Plane because that's just not a Thing in the Garden). She is, in short, the most perfect soldier ever created.

(Highly specific reference, but you know how in Once Upon A Time (In Space), King Cole specifically built the Rose Reds to feel pain and fear so that they could become better soldiers by overcoming them? Yeah, like that.)

Jane is built to be Theo But Better. She is literally made from a copy or echo of her soul. And towards the end of her life, Theo was in constant pain due to excessive healing and she still kept fighting and acting mostly normally. (I'll post a snippet about that when I write it, I haven't gotten there yet.)

The Goddess of Time also fucked around when she made the souls the Theo clones (Jane is the only one who was stable enough to survive because she basically malfunctioned) by giving them self-regenerating souls. This means that Jane's soul self-replenishes instead of withering away like her sisters', which can cause her to overload when she doesn't use magic for a while. Basically: it's like a closed container to which you constantly add air, with no holes for it to escape through. At some point, the container is gonna explode under all the air pressure. And that's what her body is like.

The only moments she gets overwhelmed by pain are when her soul gets too full, and it causes her to get extremely aggressive, more as a reflex because the only way she learned to use magic was through violence and magic can decrease the "volume" of your soul.

Wow, that was longer than expected...

What is the worst thing you have put your OC through story-wise?

Ooooh boy. The wheel has served me well.

For this one, you need context on Reiner and Allana, the two people who make up the whole that is Flick. They got soul-fused and it's weird.

Allana is a daughter of the Goddess of Love born during the 20-year cease-fire. And during this cease-fire, Edward Fallin, Master of the Order (Theo's brother? remember him?), is sending his men to kill any demigoddess he can find so the war doesn't re-start.

Well, the first one he manages to kill, two decades into the cease-fire, is Allana (the demigoddesses are slippery, ok?). The Goddess of Love is kinda bummed out about this. She's not mourning like the Goddess of Time mourned for Theo, but she thinks it would be funny if she did. So, for pure entertainment, she decides to get revenge on her sister's pet human (Edward) by cursing one of his children. Because it is a known fact to anyone with eyes that Ed loves his kids more than anything in the world and he's preventing the war mostly because he wants them to live in a time of peace.

Stay with me.

His youngest son is named Reiner (hey look, he finally showed up!) and she decides to fuse the remains of Allana's soul with his, binding them together with a curse. This results in some identity issues, body dysphoria, and general confusion. But that's not all!

The curse binding their souls together is a love curse, meaning that anyone, if exposed to Reiner for too long, will fall in love with him (we're going with the name Reiner for now because they only pick "Flick" a while later). Sometimes this love is platonic and sometimes romantic, but it's extremely intense and always borders on obsession.

"But, Muffin," you ask. "What does this curse have to do with Edward? Wasn't this a revenge against him?"

Yes, and I think you can probably see where this is going.

This curse extends to Reiner's father, Edward. He's the main target actually. There's a whole lengthy analysis about this situation, but basically: the effect of the curse is the most horrible, disgusting twist of a parent's love for their child.

And Reiner knows his father is affected by it, despite him never actually doing anything. He can recognize the look in his eyes and the emotion in his voice because he's seen and heard it so many times before. The curse can't be turned off, it's divine magic. And knowing that even his father, whom he loves dearly and who has taken care of him his whole life, is also a victim of the curse's influence is what makes him run away and try to rip his own soul apart, in the hopes that the curse will be ripped from him as well. And that's where we meet him at the start of book 2.

So, uh... that one felt a bit dark...

Actually, this has plot relevance, so I'm using the tag list: @little-mouse-gardens @wildswrites

#god i digressed so hard into Edward's life #i ended up answering for Flick AND him #tbh i'm kinda unsure of this particular plot point #just bc i feel like it can be branched out in ways that haven't occurred to me yet and it's driving me insane #yes i do take constructive criticism on this one but pls be nice #i like the way it is right now actually but it feels incomplete or smth #needs development #i'm also kinda self conscious about it bc i always get like that with darker themes #anywayyyy #onto the tags #writeblr #writing #my wips #devourer of souls wip #asks #ask game

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prisonerposting · 1 year

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