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[aoyama/zaizen] i'm feelin' heat in december (when you're 'round me)
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Rating : T
Fandom : Keppeki Danshi! Aoyama-kun
Ship : Aoyama/Zaizen Kaoru
Words : 995
Summary :
Aoyama's phone chimes again but this time it's a Twitter notification from none other than their Matsumoto.
@matsupanda09 tweeted :
"I want to suck the vaccine out of his titty"
Attached is a picture of their TV screen displaying Kaoru with his open shirt.
Aoyama feels a flare of irritation at the picture.
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This is the scene Aoyama walks in on when he is the last one to come out of the showers : The Urawa Reds Football Club is gathered in their locker room and the boys are on cloud nine — they have won the first game of the season and it's a very good start too.
The room is packed full — twenty boys, now clean, milling about and chattering at the top of their voices.
Aoyama grimaces and carefully makes his way over to where his lockers are. He mentally thanks the boys who scooch over to give him his space.
His ears catch interrupted conversations about the weather, anime, girls and then parties.
Ah, right, it's a Saturday night after all.
Over to his right, Kobayashi loudly asks if anybody wants to go out drinking. It ends up with the boys erupting in cheers and they quickly pile on him, to pinch his cheeks and tease him.
"Aoyama-san, are you in?"
Kobayashi looks hopeful, and even though Aoyama feels a little upset to squash his feelings, he has other priorities.
"No, I have some plans."
"Oooh, with your bae?" Ibuki pipes up from behind him.
Aoyama nods.
The whole common room echoes a chorus of loud ooh’s and aah's and Aoyama feels himself blushing. He quickly covers his head with his towel, beginning to dry his hair.
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29daffodils · 15 days
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Writing Pattern Tag Game
Rules: List the first line of your last 10 posted fics and see if there’s a pattern.
(saw this on the TL, thought i should do it since i probably won't get to do it otherwise lol, so here we go)
1. i'll keep you close to me
Ray Pakorn is a rumour flying on the summer wind.
ship : sand/ray, only friends
2. here i stay, pray
It's a song Ray doesn't know. But it doesn't matter.
ship : sand/ray, only friends
3. secrets i have held in my heart
The sudden flash of want that zips down his spine upon hearing that quietly curls up and sits low in his belly as his eyes fall upon Sand's face, and that is the first time the thought creeps in.
ship : ray/sand, ony friends
note : the actual first line is a direct quote from sand in OFTS ep. 12, so. not counting that.
4. i dreamt of you last night
Amidst the pitter-patter of an unsurprisingly wet London afternoon, a pigeon outside his office window coos.
ship : yohan/moogyeong, the shape of your love (manhwa, park nodeok)
5. take my whole life too
In the aftermath of it all, when Katsuki wakes up in the hospital, groggy with painkillers and various other drugs, he oddly still feels his right arm.
ship : katsuki/izuku, boku no hero academia
6. i'm feelin' heat in december (when you're 'round me)
This is the scene Aoyama walks in on when he is the last one to come out of the showers : The Urawa Reds Football Club is gathered in their locker room and the boys are on cloud nine — they have won the first game of the season and it's a very good start too.
ship : zaizen/aoyama, keppeki danshi! aoyama-kun
7. we'll meet in the spring
Moogyeong is forty-nine, pushing fifty, and is seated alone in a cafe with a cup of coffee that has long gone cold.
ship : yohan/moogyeong, the shape of your love (manhwa, park nodeok)
8. and the world sang along to it falling apart
“Sir, we are here.”
ship : yohan/moogyeong, the shape of your love (manhwa, park nodeok)
9. just me and the stars can get lonely
There is a moon in the sky tonight, round and hanging low, bright like the bottom of a firefly, casting a soft glow on a sleeping town while Yohan sits awake and misses love.
ship : yohan/moogyeong, the shape of your love (manhwa, park nodeok)
10. all my love to give
“I do,” Yohan’s voice echoes within the walls of the packed church.
ship : yohan/moogyeong, the shape of your love (manhwa, park nodeok)
pattern :
huh. okay, i have thought actually, for a long time, that there's some pattern alright but never gave it that much importance. i think it's mostly something that lands the reader right in the middle of the story? or at least like, bait, yanno? i don't like starting with too much descriptive text, that i am aware of. so it's mostly either dialogue or something that hints directly to the story so that the reader won't be bored to death before they even begin reading.
at least that's my usual thought process when i sit down to write. huhhhh.
I'm also very surprised i've written 41 fics till now. that's not a lot, but at some point when it was just 11 fics, i was wondering if i will ever write more. guess i did. this is also your sign to not quit your art!!! keep going!! fighting!!
(p.s. : I'm much happier with my writing now than i was when it was 11 fics, or even 20, or 30.)
tagging ;
@skyfish7 @justfionn @peachym00 @ae-azile @thisautistic @goodbyeapathy8 @fawndlyvenus @semantics-error
(feel free to ignore this!)
(these are also the few people who i know have an ao3 for writing, apologies if you actually don't write and i got confused lol)
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curestardust · 6 years
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Dust Watched: Keppeki Danshi! Aoyama-kun
Genres: Comedy, Sports, Seinen [PG-13] // 12 episodes
A comedy wearing the body of a sports anime.
✧  art  ✧
There are some very pretty individual shots but it’s mostly average. Not to mention all the times they turn into chibis. Don’t get me wrong, it’s cute! But with the frequency it’s used makes me think that they had a tight budget. Couple that with an incredibly lackluster colour palette and you have a pretty meh visual experience. (6/10)
✧  sound ✧
It was fine, nothing particularly stood out to me in the OST but the OP and ED were reminescent of the old “football anime” (well I was obsessed with Captain Tsubasa as a kid and it reminded me of that anyway). The VA’s did an excellent job as is expected of a comedy. (7/10)
✧  story  ✧
There isn’t really a story arc. They wanna go to the nationals but the anime doesn’t even get to that part. Despite being the main character, Aoyama-kun rarely takes the spotlight during the episodes, instead we have a pretty big side-character cast whose stories are somehow connected to Aoyama. This story structure reminded me of Handa-kun and if you read my review of that (x) you can see why I was worried that this was gonna turn into a clusterfuck. But thankfully the story didn’t ignore Aoyama AND it didn’t feel like we were laughing at him but with him. His “quirks” (it is clearly said in the anime that he is germaphobe which is amazing) aren’t used as jokes at the expense of his character but instead it’s part of his character.
The jokes are a hit and miss, the timings are usually well done but you still have a bunch of overused jokes and comedy based on “RanDomNeSS” which was...yeah. As I said,  hit and miss. (5/10)
✧  characters  ✧
Unfortunately the side characters are pretty generic and boring not to mention usually only show up for 1 episode so it makes it hard to feel anything for them. I’d have liked to see more of Aoyama but the above mentioned characters took the focus 90% of the time (I still love him tho). What I felt like would’ve been the right thing to do was focus on Aoyama’s teammates and build on the “brotherhood” and chemistry. Instead they singled out a group of 3 of them who were the “funneh teammates” and sometimes they felt more like the main characters than Aoyama or Zaizen.  Speaking of, those two’s interactions were fascinating (and shippable) and I wanted to see more of it... (6/10)
✧  OVERALL ✧
There is barely any football in this. So if you are thinking of watching it for that, just skip it. If you want a few mindless laughs and the above doesn’t annoy you, go ahead. If you’re looking for a similiar anime but with more focus on the main character I’d recommend Sakamoto desu ga?.
My Rating: 6/10
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[aoyama/zaizen] only bricks to break my fall
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Rating : T
Fandom : Keppeki Danshi! Aoyama-kun | Clean Freak! Aoyama-kun
Ship : Aoyama/Zaizen Kaoru
Words : 547
Summary :
Kaoru was in love even before he knew it and oh, was it glorious. But it will not be the first time he experiences heartbreak.
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Kaoru's heart is a fragile being, especially wherever Aoyama is concerned.
In their haste to find out about Aoyama's secret abode, it is easy to think that said clean freak lives in the first house they see him walking into — which happens to be a dojo of all places.
Let it also be known that wherever Aoyama is involved, Kaoru's decision making skills are shot and he reverts down to his primate mode, cue him screaming at the top of his voice :
"We're storming the place!"
Backed by their friends' loud and hearty "GO GO GO GO!!" , Kaoru, of course, like the idiot he is, goes, flinging the doors to the dojo open, Aoyama's name a challenge on his tongue.
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rewordthis · 3 years
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Hi this is pretty odd but can you write a zaizen x aoyama fic pleaseeee. There is nothing on this pair on tumblr and you are the only one who wrote something about them.
 Oh, Anon! Anon! Anon! I'm so terribly sorry for the late reply! Sumimasen!!! m(_ _)m I just happened to be away for a couple months (de-structured program - that's how I call it - happens every now and then in my life).  And nothing odd about it, dear Anon! No worries! It’s just, in all honesty, I thought nobody wanted to read ZaizenAo stories on timblr. Mostly due to the community guidelines, plus the fact that there aren't as many fujoshis/fudanshis in the fandom as there are in other ones. Or at least they aren't as prominent. Or Idk.  But, I'm so glad I got an ask like this! You get me out of my dilemma as I was thinking how I have one other story planed for those two (and a series to boot), but It's too dark and tumblr might just delete it before it sees the light of day (has happened before) and thankfully you're in luck, because I also had a "fluff" one summarized in my files (which admittedly - I had completely forgotten about... (^_^;)). So to answer you, yes! Do expect at least one more story (until I come up with something "not offending" to community guidelines that is) in the next months (unfortunately I can't be more specific due to RL stuff).
  And if by any chance you have something particular you want to read in mind, don't be afraid to ask for it. I'll be happy to try and give it a go if I can. ( •̀ᄇ• ́)ﻭ✧
 Again, thank you for this message and do drop by even if you want to just talk more ZaizenAo things. I'd love it just as much. 💜
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