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Every episode, Discord has an active live chat channel! We text throughout the episode, especially during commercials, and have a fantastic time every time.
Donât have a way to watch live? FInd a link on server! We always find a reliable link for streaming, for those that need it, in chat so we can be sure to flail over the episode together.
We watch at 8PM EST, 7PM CST - but there is a channel for Brazil liveblog as well. Canât watch til the next day? No problem! We keep all channels, except the ones in the well marked as SPOILERSâ in the title and designated SPOILER ZONE, spoiler free for the first 24 hours after the episode airs to give people time to watch!
If you are already with us on Discord, come join in with us on chat as the episode airs (and after!)! Stick around and flail about episodes, trust me, we will be full of hearteyes and screeching!
If you arenât set up on the Discord, no problem - message @jughead-jones @shibbycat @theheavycrown or @tory-b and we will get you set up in no time flat! Our requirements for joining is kindness and a love of Bughead!
We canât wait to watch 3.03 with you, Buggie Fam!
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Mini PSA!
Weâre having trouble with author @ mentions on our long posts in our queue.
If you have a fic that has been recâd - and it was on one of our queued posts⌠you probably didnât get notified.Â
Weâve got an ask into tumblr support - but please bear with us as we try to sort it out. Weâll tag you all in a reply until the problem is fixed.Â
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Today, October 2nd is Jugheadâs birthday!
We will be celebrating just the way he likes it⌠with a double feature!
Get your popcorn ready and come by the #movie-night room on the Bughead Family Discord server at 7pm EST (4pm PST, 12am BST) to watch with us.
Not part of the BF Discord yet, no problem! This is the perfect time to join! We have a great community, reblog all of your Riverdale creative work here to @bugheadfamily, do fun events like this, live watch episodes, and flail about all things Riverdale (especially Bughead)! Just send us an ask (off anon) or DM one of us - @jughead-jones @shibbycat @theheavycrown @tory-b, and we will get you set up. The only requirements to join are kindness and a love of Bughead.
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How to Comment on Fics and Encourage Authors
(Bughead fandom edition - but applies to every author everywhere)
Listen. Itâs hard being a content creator. If youâve been in fandom a while, this is not the first time youâve heard this. It takes time, planning and research to put together a cohesive story. For many, itâs a labor of love and itâs a vulnerable experience putting up your work for all the world to see. Itâs perfectly understandable to crave validation for something so personal beyond the click of a button. Especially on a medium that is essentially about human connection. We arenât shouting into a void. We know thereâs life out there. Weâre seeing the hits and kudos rack up and we know that weâre reaching people. And someone speaking out from the voidâsomeone with a name!âsaying, âhey, I like your storyâ is something special because they have liked this thing so much that you put so much of yourself into so much that they stood up from the anonymous masses to connect with you. Very few things in fandom feel quite as good as that. And for many writers, there is nothing more encouraging than seeing the evidence that REAL ACTUAL PEOPLE ARE READING WHAT IâVE WRITTEN.
Unfortunately, commenting is often a rarity in fandom.  A lot of people would like to comment but never know what to sayâor theyâre too shy or erroneously donât feel like their comment will count for much. But the truth is, almost all writers appreciate comments. Even simple comments like âI love it!â or âI enjoyed this update, thank you!â mean the world. I donât think people quite understand how simply speaking up and counting yourself as present in the mass of hit counts can inspire an author. You donât have to share a complex literary analysis of the story if you donât have the time or arenât in that state of mind. But if youâve read a story and liked it, do consider saying something.
I love it. I canât wait to read more.
I really like how you characterized _______ here. Youâre amazing at this.Â
I liked this quote. It made me laugh.Â
This was great. Thank you for sharing.
Just a few words like this and that author will be glowing for a few hours, I promise you. Youâll see the words flowing, the updates coming, authors feeling encouraged, and a lot more contentâwhich is always a net positive for any fan community. More content means a more active and populous fandom; more opportunities to make friends and to keep celebrating the thing you love. Really. Support your content creators. Theyâre the ones keeping most of you here!
But in case youâre still short on ideas on what to comment on, or wanted to go the extra mile, I decided to go into our fandom and interview a couple of writers and see what kind of comments made them feel the best about themselves and what they were writing. Here are a few of their responses under the cut:
Keep reading
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Words that describe someoneâs voice
Adenoidal: adj: if someoneâs voice is adenoidal, some of the sound seems to come through the nose
Appealing: adj: an appealing look, voice etc. shows that you want to help, approval or agreement
Breathy: adj: with loud breathing noises
Brittle: adj: if you speak in a brittle voice, you would sound as if youâre about to cry
Croaky: adj: if someoneâs voice sounds croaky, they speak in a low rough voice that sounds as if they have sore throat
Dead: adj: if someoneâs eyes are dead, or if their voice is dead, they feel or show no emotions
Disembodied: adj: a disembodied voice comes from someone who you cannot see
Flat: adj: spoken in a voice that does not go up or down
Fruity: adj: a fruity voice or laugh is deep and strong in a pleasant way
Grating: adj: a grating voice, laugh, or sound is unpleasant and annoying
Gruff: adj: a gruff voice has a rough low sound
Guttural: adj: a guttural sound is deep and made at the back of your throat
High-pitched: adj: a high pitched voice or sound is very high
Honeyed: adj: honeyed words sound nice, but you cannot trust the person who is speaking
Hoarse: adj: someone who is hoarse or has a hoarse voice speaks in a low rough voice
Husky: adj: a husky voice is deep and sounds hoarse often in an attractive way
Low: adj: a low voice or sound is quiet and difficult to hear or deep sounding
Matter-of-fact: adj: used about someoneâs behavior or voice
Monotonous: adj: a monotonous sound or voice is boring and unpleasant because it does not change in loudness or become higher or lower
Nasal: adj: someone with a nasal voice sounds as if they are speaking through the nose
Orotund: adj: an orotund voice is loud and clear
Penetrating: adj: a penetrating voice or sound is so high or loud that it makes you slightly uncomfortable
Plummy: adj: this word shows that you dislike people who speak like this
Quietly: adv: in a quiet voice
Ringing: adj: a ringing sound or voice is very loud and clear
Rough: adj: a rough voice is not soft and is unpleasant to listen to
Shrill: adj: a shrill noise or voice is very loud, high and unpleasant
Smoky: adj: a smoky voice is sexually attractive in a slightly mysterious way
Silvery: adj: a silvery voice or sound is clear, light, and pleasant
Singsong: adj: if you speak in a singsong voice, you voice rises and falls in a musical way
Small: adj: a small voice or a sound is quiet
Strangled: adj: a strangled sound is one that someone stops before they finish making it
Strident: adj: a strident voice or sound is loud and unpleasant.
Taut: adj: used about something such as a voice or expressions that shows someone is nervous or angry
Thick: adj: if your voice is thick with an emotion, it sounds less clear than usual because of the emotion
Tight: adj: a tight voice or expression shows that youâre annoyed or nervous
Thin: adj: a thin voice or sound is high end unpleasant to listen to
Tremulous: adj: is it not steady for explained, cause youâre afraid or excited
Throaty: adj: a throaty sound is low and seems to come from deep in your throat
Wheezy: adj: a wheezy noise sounds as if itâs made by someone who has difficulty breathing
Wobbly: adj: if your voice is wobbly, it goes up and down, usually cause youâre frightened, not confident or youâre going to cry
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This is an ongoing project that is affiliated with our own Beta Readers List! Please sign up!
Hello, hello beta readers & fanfic authors!
(thank you @betty-cooper for the gif!)
In an effort to better pair our betas with potential writers, @bettscooprâ and I ( @buggggheadâ ) have teamed up to create a short survey to catalogue your experience and expertise.
Before filling out this survey, please be prepared with details regarding your past beta experience and your personal strengths and weaknesses. You do not have to answer every question, but the more information we can gather, the better your potential writer matching process could be!
Bughead Familyâs Beta Survey
Fields required:
-ao3 & tumblr handles
-Ratings you are willing to beta
-Avg turnaround time for a 3-5k word chapter
-What you can help with (i.e. characterization, spelling, etc.)
-Beta experience (**PLEASE LIST ALL STORIES/AUTHORS**)
-Story types/topics you will not beta
-Would you consider being a long term beta (for a full fic)
Optional fields:
-Strengths
-Weaknesses
-Days of the week most available
(The survey link can also be found in the #beta-reading channel on the @bugheadfamily discord!)
This is an ongoing project so keep an eye out moving forward for another announcement!
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The Riverdale Register Weekly Review
Your one-stop shop for all things Riverdale! Issue 9: September 3rd-9th
Editor-in-Chief: Lyss (@bettscoopr)
Managing Editor: Tori (@tory-b)
Graphic Editor: Katie (@betty-cooper)
Layout Editor: Sarah (@theheavycrown)
Spotlight Editor: Mila (@jughead-jones)
News Editors: Summer (@srainebuggie), Cat (@shibbycat), K (@bugggghead), and Holly (@my-broken-bones-are-mending90)
Spoilers and Leaks Weekly Roundup
By Lyss, @bettscooprâ
Some leftover articles from last week⌠Lili and Madchen discussed The Farm, and Skeet mentioned FPâs marital status while still staying quite tight-lipped about his wife and daughter.
RAS posted a photo of our favorite (or potentially second favorite, for you Archie fans) redhead in a killer bikini to cure our Labor Day back-to-school blues Monday.
Cami, Cole, ân Co. had no such blues, except for the blues of the ocean they spent the day swimming in. (Honorable mention: KJ and Liliâs comments, which several pop culture websites LOVED.)
On Tuesday, KJ teased that Season 3 is a âwhole new beast.â Looks like Archieâs ready for whatever comes his way.
Entertainment Weekly Wednesday gave us our first look at Penelope Ann Miller in her role as Ms. Wright, Riverdaleâs town prosecutor and apparently the biggest pain in Archieâs ass so far in Season 3.
TV Line was quick to add that the courtroom plot burns itself out fairly quickly to make room for explorations of The Farm and the Jones women. Hopefully, this info from the showâs EP indicates the showrunners have finally give up their dream of having at least 50 plot lines per season.
RAS, the official Riverdale Instagram account, and some of the showâs stars (notably Ashleigh) shared a new promotional poster for Season 3!
Comicbook.com took a more in depth look at what the posted might mean, citing RASâs tweet and interviews with KJ and Madchen. KJ is hyped for prison!Archie.
Alvin Sanders was back on set as Pop Tate spreading some cheer.
The Keller-McCoy family shot a wholesome scene together at Popâs. Donât tell me that scene isnât wholesome. Kevin is drinking a glass of milk, you guys. MILK.
Hereâs Ashleigh and Robin without the boys.
And a nice BTS shot of Popâs.
Betty will be sporting some bell bottom jeans this season, and less (or more?) importantly, Cole trolled Melton (pictured below).Â
Cami chatted with WKRJ news about the addition of Hiram in season 2 and Veronicaâs versatility and emotional range.
The CW used the Nun Run sceneâ˘, Vanessaâs personal favorite, to promote Season 3 Thursday.
Marisol was back on set (pictured above).
Cole and KJ had some fun on set, courtesy of Lili.
Skeet posted a rather vague Instagram story of his and Madchenâs cast chairs side by side with a Serpent jacket draped over both. I guess the question is⌠whose is it?
RAS got himself a Southside Serpents sweatshirt! Where can I get mine?
Lili posted a few Instagram stories Friday, including a dig at Archie, a mysterious look out Bettyâs window, and a joke about Skeet.
Madchen is right, weâre not ready for Falice.
Cami and Marisol filmed a scene together.
Casey was next up for the promo videos.
Lili was sleepy between takes.
As if any of us forgot, but just in case, Saturday PopSugar wrote up 10 things we should make sure we remember before Season 3 airs.
RAS posted âCâ FOR CHONI!
Lili chatted âBettyâs evil legacyâ Sunday for another promo video.
Ashleigh said Monday that she had the most fun performing Milkshake, Out Tonight, and her duet with Madelaine in the musical episode.
Highlights from the Cast
By Lyss (filling in for Summer, @srainebuggieâ, this week)
KJ shared a video of himself strumming an electric pink guitar Monday, while Cole, Cami, and others took to the sea.
And for those who are interested, Cosmopolitan posted an article featuring side-by-side photos of our wonderful leading ladies with and without makeup. Spoiler alert: they look beautiful either way.
ASOS shared photos of their fall cover stars Tuesday, including Lili.
If you canât get a copy of the magazine, @amab1060 shared clips from her interview and @gershwinn posted a video.
More from ASOS here.
Lili Reinhart by Danielle Levitt for Glamour Magazine.
And hereâs the cast for Rolling Stone! Arenât Cole and Lili the cutest? KJâs clearly the troublemaker of the groupâŚ
On Wednesday, Cole posted a new row of photos on Instagram. The photos, which you can find here, here, and here, will appear this month as part of a self-portrait story in Vogue Hommes, the international edition of Vogue for men, Cole announced.
Lili shared a photo from a shoot she did with H&M. Later in the week, H&M shared another. Here she is rocking the first outfit again. More from H&M here and here.
RAS showed his support for the cast Thursday.
Cole was the Game Master.
Marisol used to rock blue eyeshadow back in the day. Not sure if Hermione would approve of that lookâŚ
There are now enough shirtless photos of KJ to fill a periodic table.
Shannon Purserâs new movie came out on Netflix Friday. Co-star Noah Centineo has this to say about Shannon.
Cole, KJ, and Cami were nominated for Peopleâs Choice Awards.
KJ attended the premier of The Hate U Give in Toronto and showed some love for star Amandla Stenberg while rocking an all-white look. He also had this to say on Instagram.
Dylan and his girlfriend Barbara Palvin attended the Harperâs Bazaar Icons Party. Hart was there, too.Â
Mark and Kelly attended the Ralph Lauren 50 year anniversary celebration.
Asha Bromfield (Melody) attended the Toronto International Film Festival.
Madchen attended the Creative Arts Emmys Saturday. She shared some of her favorite moments and presented Stephen Root with his award.
Cole and Lili were being hermits, probably maybe, according to anonymous sources. And then, after I wrote this, according to Lili herself.
I guess they got bored though, so they decided to break the Internet again.Â
Fandom Events
By Tori, @tory-bâ
Donât forget to follow @buggiebreak, because we recently announced our KINK WEEK. This is a fandom event for creation of NSFW/Kinky creations. All will be reblogged and tagged appropriately. Check out the full announcement post as well as the other events weâve held if you havenât had a chance!
Is anyone else going to RiverCon in NJ October 6th-7th?? I am! And so are a few of my friends. What would people think about arranging some buggie meet ups? Iâve created a google sheet where you can write if youâre interested in meeting up with fellow buggies, what days youâll be there, and your username. Hopefully thisâll be a good way to know whoâs going to what when, and to meet some of your friends.
Cami and Lili will be there Saturday, Skeet and Cody will be there Sunday, and Lochlyn and Melton will be there both Saturday and Sunday.
The cast apparently has a jam packed weekend, because New York Comic Conâs Riverdale Panel is being held October 7th from 10-11 AM In the Hulu Theatre. KJ, Lili, Luke, and Madchen, as well as RAS will be there.
Thereâs also a Archie Comics Panel taking place October 6th from 11-12 in Room 1A24 â Javits Center.
Fics Updated this Week
By Lyss and Summer
Heartunsettledsoul ( @heartunsettledsoul ) posted Chapter 2 of âA Great Language.â
IndianSummer13Â ( @itsindiansummer13 ) posted Chapter 4 of âDandelion Clocks.â
Toryb ( @tory-b ) posted Chapter 8 of âKiss Me Like Iâve Never Been Kissed.â
Squids ( @shrugheadjonesthethird ) posted Chapter 4 of âCollege, Love, and Other Harsh Realities.
SqueegeeBecksXo ( @detectivesqueegee ) posted Chapter 11 of âIf you had asked me to stay.â
Nurseholliday ( @thenurseholliday ) posted the final chapter of âKing of the Clouds.â
CrashHale ( @crashhale ) posted Chapter 21 of âThe Bet.â
LoonyBibliophile ( @elizabethbettscooper ) posted Chapter 14 of âThe long way home.â
NefariousNiomi posted Chapter 7 of âMr. and Mrs. Jones.â
Shakkinmovin posted Chapter 12 of âThe Kingdom Come.â
For a more complete list of Bughead fics updated this week, check out Sarahâs side column!
Hidden Gems
By Lyss and Summer
âHome is Where We Areâ by ariquitecontrary ( @ohkingsteve )
âOne Shot, Thatâs All It Takesâ by OldTsuki ( @moonâmama )
âHappily Ever After Insteadâ by Bughead2017
âPromise Me Foreverâ by SummerRaine14Â ( @srainebuggie )
âMy Sun and My Moon and All of My Starsâ by daisy_chain_gardens ( @daisy-chain-gardens )
Fic of the Week is âI like me better (when iâm with you),â the latest from noorakardemmomesaetre ( @noorakardemmomesaetre )!
If you have a fic youâd like to see spotlighted next week, please send a message to @lyss.
Rating: T+
Tags: Enemies to Lovers, southside serpents, flirty banter, School Project Trope, Riverdale High Merge, Northside Princess x Southside Prince, Slow Burn, LikeâŚREALLY slow, Happy Ending, Light Smut, Not Actually Unrequited Love, Mutual Pining, Love/Hate
Summary:Â Betty Cooper and Reggie Mantle are Riverdale Highâs dream couple. But when Betty is forced to partner with infamous Serpent Jughead Jones for a school project, she finds herself questioning whether her relationship is really a dream she wants to be a part of.Â
AU: Riverdale High and Southside High merged two years ago. While the students have found their places amongst each other, the line is still clearly drawn.
Blue and Gold Office Wanted: Missing in Action Fics
By K, @bugggghead
Help us find an answer to a question in the Blue and Gold Officeâs inbox!Â
@hannadoâ is looking for a story where Betty had recently give birth and thinks Jughead is cheating on her. She finds a lipstick stain on the collar of one of his shirts and panics, but turns out the lipstick was Jellybeanâs (she hugged Jug when he went to pick her up from the airport). Betty and Jug get into a fight, which ends when he finally tells her the secrecy was because heâd been planning a trip for them after noticing sheâs been stressed.
If you know of this fic, send a message to @blueandgoldoffice to help them identify it.
Bughead Family Discord Member Spotlight
By Mila, @jughead-jones
This week the spotlight is on Cat! Our fearless admin! Click here to get to know @shibbycat!Â
Easter Eggs of the Week
By Cat, @shibbycat
Chapter 8: The Outsiders
The Outsiders: A gang of wealthy kids. A gang from the wrong side of the tracks. A fight resulting in a wealthy kid dying, and finally, the wealthier gang looking for a fight with the rival gang. Sounds right up Riverdaleâs alley, right? Sans death, it could be the overall plot of Riverdaleâs Chapter 8 and not 1983âs The Outsiders. The differences are in the details, of course. In Riverdale, weâve got the Bulldogs and the Serpents as our gangs (interesting to note Season 2 features the Bulldogs becoming much more ganglike via the [Shirtless] Red and Dark Circles). While the Bulldogs volunteer to lend their time to help Fred on the SoDale project, Moose gets a beatdown wrongfully attributed to the Serpents. Archie ân Co then go in search of the Serpent perpetrator at the Whyte Wyrm where they, no shock, all but come to blows. Rather than rehash the same exact plot, instead Riverdale had the rich, shadowy yet looming figure of Hiram Lodge enact the violence upon Moose. One of our first indications that what Riverdale needed wasnât a civil war between the North and South sides, but perhaps to instead come together to fight a common enemy.
Stepfords of Riverdale: The Stepford Wives is both a 1972 book and 1975/2004 film which takes places in a seemingly perfect town with perfect wives who lack individual thought, emotion, or unique fashion sense. Being âStepfordâ has come to be synonymous with over-the-top creepy levels of perfection. At the seasonâs start, we actually get the double whammy of the Coopers AND the town emitting these perceived levels of perfection, and as the season progresses, it turns out that neither is true.
Archieâs a comic book fanboy: If you take a look at Archieâs room in Season 1 (or the screenshots Iâve got here), there are DC posters littering Archieâs walls. And the game Jughead and Archie are playing this episode? Itâs DC Universe.
War is Hell: Sure, âWar is hellâ is a statement made famous by William Sherman during the Civil War. However, given that Archie is Archie, into comic books, and this was said while playing a video game (different universe though), I find it more likely that Archie was referencing the Marvel comic series titled War is Hell which ran from 1973-1975 with a short revival in 2008. This comic series was firmly planted in the genres of war and horror. Extra fun fact: A gigantic Marvel collection of Chris Claremontâs work, Marvel Universe, featuring 7 volumes of War is Hell was published in August 2017. Very close to the time this conversation would have taken place.
Hell is other People: Jughead cites Jean-Paul Sartreâs iconic line from the closing of his 1943 play, No Exit. Sartre himself said, âI mean that if relations with someone else are twisted, vitiated, then that other person can only be hell.â Hell is other people in the sense that weâre permanently at the mercy of others judgement and how that makes one uncomfortable unless truly alone. Could be there be a more perfect Archie/Jughead exchange than Archie coming out with some comic goodness and Jughead replying with ruminations on the judgemental nature of other people? This writer doesnât think so.
Family Photos IRL: The photos on the Andrewsâ fridge of a young Archie are real life pictures of a young KJ Apa.
âWeâre bruiser studs, Mr. Andrewsâ: Moose describes himself and fellow teens (sans Jughead) as âbruiser studs.â Basically, âweâre strong tough guys who can take care of ourselves,â and then he promptly gets the crap kicked out of him. Whoops.
Wyrm: Given that the Whyte Wyrm is Serpent hangout No.1, letâs take âwyrmâ a bit back to its origin. Wyrms have been described as type of dragon and more importantly for our purposes, enormous, traditionally wingless serpents.
Ouroboros: The most common image on the back of Serpent jackets is an ouroboros. An ouroboros is a serpent, or dragon, depicted eating its own tail. The word is Greek in origin with âouraâ meaning tail and âborosâ meaning eating. Thatâs right! Ouroboros legitimately means âone who eats the tail.â Â The ouroboros represents a life cycle - life, death, and rebirth. Creation through destruction.
Bonus Hilarity: The Jonesâ trailer has a Billy Big Mouth Bass hanging on the wall. Even Jughead & Betty are confused by it.Â
Discord and Tumblr Updates
By Tori
If you didnât get a chance to check out the @bugheadfamily post about positivity, I would highly suggest that, as it expresses our creed as we slip closer to Season 3
Roles! Roles for you and you and you! Everyone gets a role! Weâve created the @binge-watcher role for when we do Riverdale Rewatches and the @movie-buff role so youâre notified whenever we start the movie on one of our movie nights! Donât forget to ask an admin or a moderator for the role if thatâs something youâre interested in!
I would also like a minute to spotlight all the blogs weâre affiliated with. You should definitely go check them out!
@buggiebreak: a blog run by the same gals who bring you the Discord, where we host various events throughout hiatuses to keep the fandom a little more lively!
@bugheadcentral: a blog for all sorts of bughead content, including fan creations, sneak peaks, etc!
@cherylstanclub: do you love Cheryl? I definitely do. This is the place for you, feature gifs, edits, etc of our favorite HBIC.
@dailyriverdalegifs: daily posts of creative Riverdale gif making from a bunch of insanely talented fellows
@bugheadwritersguild: where bughead fanfiction aficionados can get together and learn a little bit more about the art
@dailychoni: a blog dedicated to celebrating choni on the daily, feature gifs, edits, fics, and more!
Riverdalefanforum ( @fanforumcom ): a website where fans of Riverdale can get together and chat about their favorite content!
Riveredalecouplesfanforum ( @fanforumcom ): your place to chat Riverdale couples!
Donât forget you can always apply to be an affiliate with us :)
The Week Ahead
By Holly, @my-broken-bones-are-mending90
Movie Night! On Wednesday night we will be watching Sierra Burgess Is A Loser with Shannon Purser and Noah Centineo at 6pm PST, 9pm EST, and 2am BST. It will be followed directly by To All the Boys I Loved Before with Lana Condor. Itâs a double-Noah feature! Join us for some cute rom-com fun. Please note, the times are subject to change.
Book Club! Weâre reading Black Widow: Forever Red by Margaret Stohl. If youâre a Natasha fan, this is the book for you. The ebook and audiobook are available in the #book-discussion channel, or you can purchase it for $5.99 on Amazon.
Saturday Movie Night! Lili is the starring act this week in our âCast Of Riverdaleâ theme. Weâll be watching The Kings of Summer at 7pm PST, 10pm EST, and 3am BST. Get cozy and settle in for a coming of age story. Weâll see you at the movies!
Riverdale Rewatch: I will be hosting the episodes on Sunday at 2pm PST, 5pm EST, and 10pm BST. Â Weâre going to be watching 2x14 âThe Wicked and the Divineâ and 2x15 âThere Will Be Blood.â I hope to see you there!
If youâre not a member and would like to join for any or all of these events, DM me or any of the admins/mods for an invite!
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*arrives a day late, with starbucks*
Sorry everyone! Lost track of time! Also losing ideas for these, so a reminder that submissions are always greatly appreciated either here or here
Anyways, welcome to lesson 4: speech!
I believe this topic has been covered on the discord server, but I have not looked into it to prevent plagiarism.
The basics are that you put speech in quotation marks. You also have to start a new paragraph for each person who is speaking, which may seem tedious but is meant to avoid confusion over who is speaking. If it looks awkward, I recommend just writing it out and then going back to fix mistakes like making sure itâs clear who is speaking. You may need a beta reader to double check that itâs clear, especially since as a writer you may be biased because you already know who is supposed to be talking.
It can get pretty redundant so try to mix up your word choices so itâs not âBlah blah blah,â said Name. Hereâs a helpful list for alternatives for said, but coming up for alternatives for names (especially when pronouns are not useful, such as when there are two characters of the same gender talking): http://www.spwickstrom.com/said/
Other important things to keep in mind are punctuation.
âNot fair!â
Sometimes thereâs enough context to just have a sentence in quotation marks and call it a day.
âI live on Elm Street,â stated Betty Cooper.
When you follow speech, you use a comma instead of a period, as the information about who is speaking is consider a part of the same sentence. If you arenât using a period, then a question mark or exclamation point by itself is fine also.
âI live on Elm Street,â stated Betty Cooper, âin the house next to Archieâs.â
Here we have the same thing, but with more information. Sometimes youâll interrupt a sentence to give that information and if theyâre related then you keep them together like this. If itâs a new sentence, itâs not split and will be done with the second part capitalized instead.
Thatâs all I can think of today, but feel free to let me know if I missed anything major. Iâll probably do another lesson on speech in the future.
-Kelsey/Betty ( @brownhairedbetty )
Sources and additional resources:
https://mcckc.edu/tutoring/docs/br/english/Rules_for_Writing_Dialogue.pdf
https://www.nownovel.com/blog/dialogue-words-other-words-for-said/
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*Notice*
I am switching the schedule for English 101 with Betty to every other week, but because of this they should be better and more well researched.
-Kelsey/Betty ( @brownhairedbetty )
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Attention Fanfic Writers & Betas!
( gif by @betty-cooper )
Hey everyone! If youâre a part of the Bughead Family Discord, you may have been to our last writing workshop (and if youâre not, learn how to join here).
Our last workshop was on characterization, and had a lot of incredible information! This weekâs workshop will be on writing smut (18+ please)! Kayla ( @lilibugâxxâ ) will be leading the discussion and sharing advice she has on the subject.
We want to make sure all of your questions are answered, so please submit anything youâd like addressed to either Lyss ( @bettscoopr ) or K ( @bugggghead ), OR feel free to drop them in this Google doc.
JOIN US ON THURSDAY, SEPTEMBER 6TH FOR THIS HELPFUL RESOURCE ON WRITING SMUT! THE DISCUSSION WILL RUN FOR ONE HOUR AND BEGINS AT 10AM PST (1PM EST & 6PM BST).
Hereâs how itâll work. Weâll all gather in the brand new #18plus-writing-workshops-live channel on Discord (no discussion in there, please!) at a predetermined time (10am PST, 1pm EST, 6pm BST), and weâll give the leader the floor for about 30 minutes to discuss tips, examples, and to address the pre-submitted questions.
Feel free to message us on Tumblr or Discord with any questions. Happy writing, and hope to see you over on Discord!
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ISO: Writing Partner
Hello all! As some of you now I have been battling a lot of writerâs block lately and itâs been very frustrating. Iâd like to ask if anyone is interested in proofreading, collaborating, brainstorming and generally just bouncing ideas off one another. This could lead to future projects that we write together or just support for one anotherâs works.Â
HMU!
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Reblogging for the time difference
Welcome to lesson 3!
Common spelling mistakes.
So we have the basic your vs youâre or their, there, theyâre. Itâs vs its. Stuff that is often taught early on but a lot of people forget over time (side note: a lot is another one as quite a few people spell it alot). So your and their are possessive pronouns which means you are talking about things that people own or otherwise poses. âHey Jughead, I like your crown beanie.â âWe should go to Popâs, their milkshakes are the best.â Its is also a possessive pronoun as opposed to itâs which is a contraction of âit isâ. This can be confusing because possessive pronouns with names involve apostrophe s (eg: Jugheadâs treehouse) so it would stand to reason that itâs is just following this rule. Unfortunately, the English language doesnât always follow rules and does not agree with that sentiment.
Like itâs is a contraction of it is, youâre is a contraction of you are. Think of that apostrophe as the glue holding the shortened words together and if the sentence works just as well with âyou areâ then youâre is the spelling youâre going for. Same goes with theyâre. They are going to Popâs. Theyâre going to Popâs.
There is a place. Over there, for example. Your character might also say âthere thereâ in comfort, though the reasons why people do this is a bit convoluted (youâre welcome to fall down the google rabbit hole if youâre curious).
There is also then and than. Simple, then is in relation to time. Betty and Jughead kissed for the first time and then Betty had an epiphany about the car Polly had mentioned. Than is a comparison word. Betty is taller than Veronica. We went to the Whyte Wyrm and then Popâs because milkshakes are better than beer.
To go back to contractions, another common spelling mistake (and admittedly, one that I have strong personal feelings about and it brings me out of that immersive state when I come across it, but itâs okay if youâve made this mistake before) we have should of. Thatâs not a contraction, right? Youâre right. It also doesnât make sense according to the English language. Unfortunately, could have is not commonly used it conversation. Couldâve, the contraction, is infinitely more popular and if youâre mostly hearing it out loud, it does sound suspiciously like could of. Itâs not though. Side note: Please do not check out the definition of âcould ofâ in urban dictionary as it is quite rude.
Thatâs all I can think of today, but feel free to submit more ideas for next time! If you donât help me out, I have to come up ideas all by myself.
-Kelsey/Betty ( @brownhairedbetty )
PS: For those who are in the discord, or who are interested in the discord, there are further resources available through channels writing 101 and the weekly writing workshops (live) that are announced regularly. If you need further resources, these are heavily recommended, though our blog is always one ask away as well.
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âThis is your daily, friendly reminder to use commas instead of periods during the dialogue of your story,â she said with a smile.
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Welcome to lesson 3!
Common spelling mistakes.
So we have the basic your vs youâre or their, there, theyâre. Itâs vs its. Stuff that is often taught early on but a lot of people forget over time (side note: a lot is another one as quite a few people spell it alot). So your and their are possessive pronouns which means you are talking about things that people own or otherwise poses. âHey Jughead, I like your crown beanie.â âWe should go to Popâs, their milkshakes are the best.â Its is also a possessive pronoun as opposed to itâs which is a contraction of âit isâ. This can be confusing because possessive pronouns with names involve apostrophe s (eg: Jugheadâs treehouse) so it would stand to reason that itâs is just following this rule. Unfortunately, the English language doesnât always follow rules and does not agree with that sentiment.
Like itâs is a contraction of it is, youâre is a contraction of you are. Think of that apostrophe as the glue holding the shortened words together and if the sentence works just as well with âyou areâ then youâre is the spelling youâre going for. Same goes with theyâre. They are going to Popâs. Theyâre going to Popâs.
There is a place. Over there, for example. Your character might also say âthere thereâ in comfort, though the reasons why people do this is a bit convoluted (youâre welcome to fall down the google rabbit hole if youâre curious).
There is also then and than. Simple, then is in relation to time. Betty and Jughead kissed for the first time and then Betty had an epiphany about the car Polly had mentioned. Than is a comparison word. Betty is taller than Veronica. We went to the Whyte Wyrm and then Popâs because milkshakes are better than beer.
To go back to contractions, another common spelling mistake (and admittedly, one that I have strong personal feelings about and it brings me out of that immersive state when I come across it, but itâs okay if youâve made this mistake before) we have should of. Thatâs not a contraction, right? Youâre right. It also doesnât make sense according to the English language. Unfortunately, could have is not commonly used it conversation. Couldâve, the contraction, is infinitely more popular and if youâre mostly hearing it out loud, it does sound suspiciously like could of. Itâs not though. Side note: Please do not check out the definition of âcould ofâ in urban dictionary as it is quite rude.
Thatâs all I can think of today, but feel free to submit more ideas for next time! If you donât help me out, I have to come up ideas all by myself.
-Kelsey/Betty ( @brownhairedbetty )
PS: For those who are in the discord, or who are interested in the discord, there are further resources available through channels writing 101 and the weekly writing workshops (live) that are announced regularly. If you need further resources, these are heavily recommended, though our blog is always one ask away as well.
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some writer snob somewhere: Do not start sentences with But or And because doing so is grammatically incorrect.
me, writing my fic: But I donât care. And you canât stop me.
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