The main issue that needs to be modified in this animation is the action of waving the shovel, as this action lacks a sense of power and requires changing the background color of one frame to create an impact in the animation effect. In the power struggle between two cats, it is necessary to increase the range of arm movement to enhance the sense of strength in the struggle
The teacher gave some suggestions based on my old storyboard, changed the order of appearance of some scenes, and changed the framing of some scenes, which made the story clearer. At the same time, I deleted two scenes. Firstly, I displayed the screen of barbed wire at the beginning, which was a good idea, but it had nothing to do with the next scene. Secondly, I deleted the scene of two cats facing each other because it was not very necessary in the plot
I drew a picture of the last dinner, and for a better texture, I thought about the color of the table for a long time. Finally, I chose a red color close to black as the shadow of the table and the color of the backrest on the chair. Paired with a slightly greenish yellow as the backrest of the chair
Give the picture a rusty feeling, as if it has been soaked in blood
I have revised the color tones of these scenes, removed background noise, and made the colors lower in saturation, making the red flag look more prominent when it floats
I wanted to display the barracks at night, so the first picture was my first attempt, but the teacher suggested that I change my strategy. In the end, I successfully drew a more flat picture, but I kept the part of the moon
This is an almost symmetrical composition, but the orientation of the iron wire railing is consistent, breaking this symmetry. The style of the first coloring is brighter, but I prefer the style of the second coloring, so I kept it and broke down each part into different layers
This is my first attempt to color this scene. The teacher thinks the colors in these pictures are too bright and wants me to make changes. The teacher wants me to highlight the red part of the flag and make the other parts a bit grayer
The teacher suggested that I look for different materials to create a collage effect, so I found some newspapers from that time and made a collage, placing it on the background