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We all know about ryou…dont let these beautiful doe eyes fool you.

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#hoooly shit i love 2017 fandom. oh my god i wasnt even into ygo back in 2017 but this Exact Flavor of fanart is so nostalgic #fave #yugioh #suggestive #deathshipping #yami bakura #thief king bakura

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Can you tell I watched hell raiser for the first time ?

#YEAAHHHHHH YEEEAAAAHHHHHH 🦇🦇🦇🦇🦇🦇🦇 #yugioh #yami bakura

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name them. now.

#SIGHS. SIGHING REALLY LOUDLY #tkb resurrection au real in my HEART #i reread the same citron revival fic like every 2 weeks. im not fine #i haven't finished the manga yet because im so fukcinf sad that he turned him into SAND my WIFE they turned my WIFE INTO SAND. TAILS #stfu chris #im normal (rocking back and forth)

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Quick editing tip: Passing time

Hey all, here’s a quick tip about showing the passage of short amounts of time in a scene. I see a lot of beats like this:

She hesitated

He paused

A few seconds later

There was a long silence

He waited for her to answer

She didn’t respond

Instead of telling us there’s a brief moment of silence or pause in your scene, try showing us by creating the feeling that time has passed through action, description, or inner monologue. Here are a few examples.

Before:

“Are you coming or not?”

He waited for her to answer, but she didn’t respond.

“Clare? Did you hear me?”

“Huh?”

After:

“Are you coming or not?”

Clare scrolled through her phone, her face illuminating with a eerie blue glow.

“Clare? Did you hear me?”

“Huh?”

Before:

Jared lingered at the suspect’s front gate. If this guy didn’t answer Jared’s questions, he was screwed.

“Hey you!” a voice shouted. “Get off my property!”

Jared hesitated. Finally, he turned to face the man. “I’m afraid I can’t do that.”

After:

Jared lingered at the suspect’s front gate. If this guy didn’t answer Jared’s questions, he was screwed.

“Hey you!” a voice shouted. “Get off my property!”

Jared patted his holster. He had a gun, but he certainly didn’t want to use it. Taking a deep breath, he turned to face the man. “I’m afraid I can’t do that.”

Not only does creating a pause instead of describing a pause allow your reader to feel the moment more vividly, it gives you a chance to explain what exactly that pause is about. People hesitate, pause, don’t respond, etc. for all kinds of reasons. Give us as much insight as you can into your weird quiet moment.

Of course, you don’t need to do this every single time. Sometimes it’s fine to say “he paused” or “the room was quiet for a moment”—it could be the best choice for that scene. But look back through your draft and see if you’ve used those “telling” descriptions more often than you needed to. If so, try to create the feeling of a pause—perhaps one that gives the reader a bit more information—using these techniques.

Hope this helps!

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#whxrified #gore #organs

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Things I’m learning about All For the Game fans: a lot of y’all didn’t grow up with a cheese drawer in your fridge and it shows

#yes i do have a cheese drawer but my roomate likes to shove shit where ever and godddddd if it doesn't piss me off. jesus christmas #i get very upset when my methods of organizing are disrupted. very weirdly and aggressively upset #stfu chris

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#whxrified #suggestive

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#augh... so pretty..... #yugioh #yugi muto

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meet the artist / my two tumblr personas

#my art #stfu chris #persona art #havent drawn myself a ton lately… #doodles

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Something in common?

#oiuhhhhhh them..... #yugioh #yami bakura #ryou bakura

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my favorite british kitty

#trad goth freeeaaaaakkkkkkk #my art #yugioh #yugioh fanart #yami bakura #i wont him so bad its not even funny

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two Bakuras

#ohhh my godddd gorgeous gorgeous gorgeous #yugioh #yami bakura #ryou bakura

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I think they're neat, kiss kiss hold hands make out (lesbian style)

#ohhhh that dez outfit goes so hard #ibvs #rachel havenshire #desiree gonzalez #dazel

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I haven’t seen the original yugioh in like 10 years

#FAVE #fLFJSHBFLGJSKGLH #yugioh #yami yugi #yami bakura

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— Sylvia Plath, "The Bell Jar"

#whxrified #i need to read the bell jar so bad