#𖥨. ݁︀ 𝐝𝐫𝐨𝐩𝐛𝐨𝐱 ꒱ ֺ💌ৎ

[venusiansilk]

im actually salivating a part 2 to my favorite quirky boy tuesday!satoru?? i would die actually

(would wait until the sun dies out for that to come out if it’s not ready yet)

hi anonieeee! 😭 you’re so fucking sweet. it isn’t quite ready yet, but it’s 7k deep and we’re making progress lmao. but um. if you wanna get a general idea of what it’s going to be, look under the cut. 🥰 love you!

satoru follows you out the door, huffing quite frustratedly. he has absolutely no idea what’s going on with you, where all of this came from, or what you’re trying to say to him. of course he likes you. of course he wants to be with you. why else would he do all of the things he does? why else would his hands move to grab you without even thinking? how else could touching you start to feel like muscle memory, small instances of affection that are now ingrained in his routine? “where are you going after your whole theatric display and zero explanation?”

“satoru,” you spit, turning to him with a glare. “you don’t take me out. i’m not allowed to go into your room. you said you don’t want to come into my room. we never do anything other than what we’ve always done as roommates, and it is absolutely not for lack of trying on my part. so what i need you to do right now is figure out if you actually want a girlfriend. if so, act like it.” he stands there, completely dumbfounded. he isn’t sure what to say. he thought things between the two of you were perfect. although he hasn’t found enough courage to vocalize it, you’re his first love. when he thinks about the last three months, he sees glimpses of you giggling and falling into his chest, standing on your tippy toes to kiss him, kissing you on your temples, resting his palm on your head while he smiles down at you. he doesn’t understand. “y-yn, i…please…” he whispered. “i don’t understand. are you not happy with me? are you…are you losing feelings for me already?” his voice is low, and he looks at his feet. you don’t answer right away, making his heart sink to the pit of his stomach. here he’s been falling deeper and deeper while you’ve been clawing your way back to the surface. “i adore you, satoru.” you say quietly. “i just didn’t think our dating would be exactly the same as us being roommates. we just kiss sometimes. it’s not…it’s not enough. and i’ve been trying, but…you’re not exactly receptive.” it’s like you’ve taken a dagger a pierced it through to his quiet, little heart. he swallows hard, trying to keep his emotions at bay, but his chest tightens, and his throat suddenly feels so full that it aches. “i have to go to work. we’ll talk later.” a soft murmur. you leave him standing in the middle of the hall with his fists clenched and his heart shattered. he had no idea you weren’t happy. he had no idea that the little moments he clung to that made him fall in love with you were the same moments that didn’t feel like enough for you. this is the first time a girl has ever made him cry. his chest is rising and falling; his lower lip is trembling. he turns around to see yuji's head poked out of his door. when he sees satoru's face, he frowns, and it just makes him feel even more humiliated that the obnoxious neighbor he hates sees him right now in the center of one of his weakest moments. he already can’t stand him, but now he feels inferior to him, too. “is everything…uh…okay, satoru?” he asks worriedly. satoru sneers with tear-filled eyes. “mind your own fucking business.” the pink-haired boy wears a sympathetic expression, completely devoid of any taunting or jesting. he seems genuinely concerned for satoru, and it’s unusual. he’s grown accustomed to trading glares with him in passing, both committed to their initial dislike. yuji nods, seeming to understand satoru's position and not taking it personally. “it seems like you’re really upset. i won’t bother you.” satoru says nothing and makes no acknowledgment or reaction to him, teeming with too much hurt to bother. he turns and walks inside, slamming the door behind him. when he’s back in the safety of the apartment, he’s standing in the doorway staring at his feet, watching tears fall and go diving towards the ground.

when he looks up and sees his home, the home that you cultivated together, all of it just reeks of you, and he has a feeling that soon it won’t. this is the first girl he’s ever loved and likely the first to break his heart. it doesn’t feel good. he went for it at the encouragement of his work friends, and he’s been thrilled thinking that he did well by coming out of his shell. but he left himself too vulnerable, and now…he can’t fucking breathe. he doesn’t want to lose you but doesn’t know what you want from him. he doesn’t know anything about dating or dates. he doesn’t know how to plan those things or even what you like in the context of those things. normally, as long as he has all the information down to the finest detail, then he can perform adequately, but you’ve given him an explicit task without explicit directions, and it’s left his mental state reeling. his anxiety hit him like a tsunami, heart dropping repeatedly. he feels sick to his stomach.

i don’t want to lose her. i love her. i’ve never lost anyone before. i’ve weaved her into every aspect of my routine. i gave her all of me. i don’t want to take it back.

a sob escapes him, and he slides down to sit on the floor. is this what people love for? as a measure of how much hurt they can endure and carry around in their body? he understands now that love can give you life and love can destroy you at the exact same time. “fuck,” a heartbroken whimper and a whisper follow. “fuck,”

#em.wip #୧ ‧₊ ☁️ ⋅ 𝐚𝐧𝐨𝐧𝐢𝐞. #𖥨. ݁︀ 𝐝𝐫𝐨𝐩𝐛𝐨𝐱 ꒱ ֺ💌ৎ #re: tuesdays. #re: taming of the screwed. #𐙚 ‧₊ 𝐬𝐰𝐞𝐞𝐭𝐞𝐬𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐬.

[venusiansilk]

Io !! You like FF7??? what do you think of the turks?? (new mootie here, apologies if this is old news 😓 )

hai no it's not old news! i'm being exposed to it via forced proximity n i'm captivated by the world! the lore! the history! the characters! the implications of time and dimensions! i can't say i hardcore like it as a whole bc i am watching it be played n i'm experiencing it by proxy so i'm literally just starting to try n get more familiar w. all the lore after falling desperate for cloud n tifa lmao. as far as the turks, the drip is clean but none of them can join the team lmao.

#𖥨. ݁︀ 𝐝𝐫𝐨𝐩𝐛𝐨𝐱 ꒱ ֺ💌ৎ #୧ ‧₊ ☁️ ⋅ 𝐦𝐨𝐜𝐡𝐢. #it's nice to moot you! i'm io :3 i didn't see your name on your blog so is it okay to tag you as mochi? if you'd prefer smth else just lmk!

[venusiansilk]

Hi!!! Sorry if this is vague but do you have any writing tips? I live the way you write so much! From ur characterization to dialogue (especially your dialogue)!! It’s all so wonderful!

hai anonie! omgee thank you sm. <3 ah i really appreciate your kind words n even that you’d wanna ask me on something like this. although i don’t know if i’m the right person, i’ll do the best i can to help you. here’s some things that i personally do.

i’m sorry bc this is really long. i tried to be descriptive bc i personally need an excruciating level of detail when having things explained to me, but feel free to skim lmao.

1. write. as much as you can. even if you hate it ( me lately ). i think any writer will give you that advice first and foremost. do drills with a purpose in mind if you have a specific thing you want to get better at.

— i really want to work on prettier descriptions of simple things. so i’ll write a short scene. probably 100 words or less. i’ll write it as simple as it can get, and then i’ll expand that small scene by rewriting each line in a more ~ poetic ~ way.

example:

he looks into your eyes and smiles.

my goal would be to portray some sort of emotion, both the feelings that prompt him to look into your eyes and feelings that result from doing such. i like to use metaphors of things i find pretty to write an emotion that feels pretty. so in my case (and many other writers) the concept of spring is always a great way to throw in some ~ pretty ~ imagery while conveying a feeling. you can also use this to describe your characters or highlight their features. so say i’m using this line in the context of gojo, i might rewrite it to include the color of his eyes and the emotions he feels before his action. you might also use this time to try out different words that mean the same thing.

result:

sweetness fills his gut; adoration blooms in his eyes, a garden of lapis lazulis coming to life as he peers. it’s involuntary, the way fondness stretches across the span of his lips when he takes in the sight of you.

it’s time-consuming to do this, which is why i like to practice it in small drills. but also, you can just do sprints that aren’t to correct or expand on a particular thing but more so to get into a habit of writing a stream of thoughts as they come without interrupting them. sometimes i set a timer and simply write. doesn’t have to be pretty. or perfect. or good. i don’t stop to correct my typos or fix my mistakes. i literally just go and go and when my timer is done, i’ll go back, read what i wrote, and make corrections.

2. read. read fics. books. poetry. essays. articles. epics. scripts. mythology. multi-cultural literature. read a myriad of material. equip yourself with a big variety of voices, styles, and word play. there’s so many things to gain from so many different types of reading material. the best way to enhance your own vocabulary and narration dexterity is to get familiar with tons of them. find things you like about them. practice doing those things and incorporating those techniques in a similar way on your own (i wouldn’t advise publishing things you make while practicing likeness. it’s really just a mental exercise to get your brain making those connections on its own without material being present and across tons of differing contexts).

3. submerge. this next thing is a little hard to describe as everyone has different ways of thinking/imagining. personally, i see pictures and words as well as hear audio when i’m thinking. when i have a scene in mind i press play in my brain like a film lol and watch it pan out. and then as i’m writing i recite the dialogue out loud. i also write dialogue before i touch the descriptions; i get the back n forth out of my brain stream first. then i go back to watch the scene in my mind again on mute. i study the body language i see and i write that. you can also recall conversations you’ve had with others or observed others having and reference your own body language or someone else’s. reciting helps on this front because often times, when i say the line, my body language speaks along with it. so say a character’s trying to express annoyance or exasperation.

example:

“what do you want?”

when i said this to myself out loud two times, there was emphasis on two words, depending on context. if the exasperation is centered on the other person, the word ‘you’ was emphasized. if it was a general exasperation, the word ‘want’ was emphasized. but no matter what, i closed my eyes and sighed before i said it.

result:

frustration bleeds out of her sigh, eyes squeezing shut before asking through gritted teeth, “what do you want?”

or

upon seeing him, her eyes squeeze shut and she breathes an exasperated sigh. “what do you want?”

4. study up! being technical isn’t always necessary but i think getting familiar with different literary devices and tools is a great way to add some flare to descriptions/exposition and develop your own writing voice.

5. build aesthetics. playlists! pinterest! moodboards! webweaves! whatever your medium, find a way to make a sort of map for your characters n the story: their ideals, personality traits, mannerisms, beliefs, values. a general aesthetic. helps you build an image of them in your mind so you can hear the way they’d talk, quips they’d make, how their temperament would make them react to certain situations. it just makes them feel more real to me. playlists help me with overall vibes of a scene while moodboards/web weaves help me with a person navigating the scene in question.

this is really all i can think of. if anyone else happens to read all of this n has anything additional to add that may be more helpful to anonie, please do!

#𖥨. ݁︀ 𝐝𝐫𝐨𝐩𝐛𝐨𝐱 ꒱ ֺ💌ৎ #୧ ‧₊ ☁️ ⋅ 𝐚𝐧𝐨𝐧𝐢𝐞.

[venusiansilk]

drops him gently into your inbox ….. he loves you <3

(ALSOOO i hope you’re doing soso well io :3 resting n taking care of yourself !!! i love you lots <333)

my ari!!! ilysb! i'm doing a bit better today :3 thank you for sending me yet another to add to my roster. i'll go back n keep playing genshin just to meet him lmao. how are you, love? is your semester all done?

#𖥨. ݁︀ 𝐝𝐫𝐨𝐩𝐛𝐨𝐱 ꒱ ֺ💌ৎ #୧ ‧₊ ☁️ ⋅ 𝐚𝐫𝐢.

[venusiansilk]

♡ HELLLOOOOOOO IIIIIIOO!!!!!!!!!!! ♡

thankie thankie for your tags on my nanami drabble!

omfffg gggg imagine he tells us "it smells nice" with a hand on the small of our back???? and he's peering over our shoulder at the stove top all curious n cute???? and he wouldn't even realize it at first, but once he does he'd probably apologize jnfeofieahei bc he would never wanna make us uncomfy!! wah! the<3 sweetest<3 man<3

little does he know!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hehehhehehe

weellllll that being said, i'm wishing you a day that's just as delightful as you are!!!

hi my loveliest mona!

MONA I LOVE HIM SO MUCH. i wanna be his personal chef so damn bad. OH MY GOD HIM BEING A LIL NOSY PEEKER 😭 this nanami will fill my head with the wildest delusions. imagine one day he decides he wants us to show him 😭 how to make a recipe a really likes that we've made 😭 and him struggling a little to put on the apron 😭 honestly him struggling to do everything. hyper-competent man finds skill he does not have and cutely faces obstacles. 😭🤍 and omg imagine he's got to knead dough. 😭 how his lil tongue pokes out in concentration 😭 i'm IN LOVE WITH HIM.

ah i love you so bad. thank you for writing it. it was such a lil treat 🥰 i hope you had a good day today too. 🫂

#i'm sorry bc i really still have even more thoughts about him fr. #awearywritersworld. #𖥨. ݁︀ 𝐝𝐫𝐨𝐩𝐛𝐨𝐱 ꒱ ֺ💌ৎ #୧ ‧₊ ☁️ ⋅ 𝐦𝐨𝐧𝐚.

[venusiansilk]

darling,

I absolutely adore you and your pretty words so much, and you have no idea.

lily xo

lily! you are so fucking sweet. thank you sm :3 i absolutely adore you. also, we have the same name ꒰ my real name means lily in its origin language ꒱ i appreciate you taking the time to drop by. wishing only the sweetest bestest things for you!

#𖥨. ݁︀ 𝐝𝐫𝐨𝐩𝐛𝐨𝐱 ꒱ ֺ💌ৎ #୧ ‧₊ ☁️ ⋅ 𝐥𝐢𝐥𝐲. #𐙚 ‧₊ 𝐬𝐰𝐞𝐞𝐭𝐞𝐬𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐬.

[venusiansilk]

Shuffle your favorite playlist and post the first five songs that come up. Then copy/paste this ask to your favorite mutuals. 💌🩵

hai jazz! ooh this looks fun! thank you for sending :3

◞♡ preloved, peach fur. ◞♡ get away, mac ayres. ◞♡ if you let me, alina baraz. ◞♡ she's a baby, zico. ◞♡ lyric pieces / book 1; op. 12: arietta, edvard grieg.

#𖥨. ݁︀ 𝐝𝐫𝐨𝐩𝐛𝐨𝐱 ꒱ ֺ💌ৎ #୧ ‧₊ ☁️ ⋅ 𝐣𝐚𝐳𝐳.

[venusiansilk]

CLOUD CONTENT OMG IM FROTHING AT THE MOUTH

chile me too i want this man so bad i don't know what to do. i have the softest thoughts about him. like they're so so so so soft. idk what's wrong with me but i see a stoic boy plagued by harshness as a necessity n i want to save him with love n tenderness lmao.

#𖥨. ݁︀ 𝐝𝐫𝐨𝐩𝐛𝐨𝐱 ꒱ ֺ💌ৎ #୧ ‧₊ ☁️ ⋅ 𝐛𝐥𝐮. #<- lmk if you want me to use a different name for your tag <3

[venusiansilk]

Io! Come and get your man Rafayel! The man is trying to take Dr. Zayne’s spot in my heart 😅😂

girl i will come get him!!!! he needs to come home in his lil god attire because WHEW. i saw it today n i immediately was like "great ... now i'ma have to work my ass off to bring this man home." ꒰ ͒ ඉ .̫ ඉ ͒꒱ i'm alr so gone for loser fish boy in general but this god form is GOD TIER I NEED HIM FOREVER. n don't even get me started on mc's fits bc oh my god baby das ME. ugh i fuckin love this game but i can't go broke over these boys. i won't let gatchas getmes 😭🤚🏾 i refuse!

#𖥨. ݁︀ 𝐝𝐫𝐨𝐩𝐛𝐨𝐱 ꒱ ֺ💌ৎ #୧ ‧₊ ☁️ ⋅ 𝐠𝐢𝐠𝐢.

[venusiansilk]

I LOVE THE INTERIOR DESIGN OF YOUR NEW PLACE IO :3 the pink… the venusiansilk… the PICTURES oh it’s all so pretty <: the gojo residence looks BEAUTIFUL - @dollsuguru <333

ahhhh my kairo thank you so much 😭🫂 we are so in love with the place. you n sugu come by whenever okay? ilysb!!!!

#𖥨. ݁︀ 𝐝𝐫𝐨𝐩𝐛𝐨𝐱 ꒱ ֺ💌ৎ #୧ ‧₊ ☁️ ⋅ 𝐤𝐚𝐢𝐫𝐨.

[venusiansilk]

Hi Io! Happy Valentine’s Day! Hope your day is going well. I love the new theme, super pretty.

So in the spirit of Valentines Day, how are you, Satoru and Kento going to spend your day or night?

hi giselle! happy luv day to you, too ໒꒰ྀིᵔ ᵕ ᵔ ꒱ྀི১ n thank you for the love on my theme. i rly like it 😭🫂🤍 how was your day? did you get up to anything?

as for ionago luv day tings…we’re introverted and so going out isn’t really a go for us. but kento is gonna bake some cookies n i’m gonna help ofc :3 satoru’s tall buff big body ass will just be in the way doing NOTHING 😭 asking if he can eat the dough repeatedly, being told no REPEATEDLY.

#thank you for asking abt ionago :3 🥰 #𖥨. ݁︀ 𝐝𝐫𝐨𝐩𝐛𝐨𝐱 ꒱ ֺ💌ৎ #୧ ‧₊ ☁️ ⋅ 𝐠𝐢𝐠𝐢. #ෆ 𝐢𝐨𝐧𝐚𝐠𝐨.

[venusiansilk]

i am oooo-ing and ahhhh-ing at ur new theme!!! sooo beautiful. the shade of red u chose scratches my brain so wonderfully!

&&&& happy valentine's io!!! i hope it's spectacularly lovely, just like u are!!!!<333333

monaaa! ꒰ ੭＾ν＾꒱੭♡ hai, my dear. thank you sm :3 happy love n hearts day! did you have a good day? i hope so. i cleaned up my house today n did hw lmao but at least it’s all done.

#awearywritersworld. #you’re so sweet mona i truly adore you 🤍 #𖥨. ݁︀ 𝐝𝐫𝐨𝐩𝐛𝐨𝐱 ꒱ ֺ💌ৎ #𐙚 ‧₊ 𝐬𝐰𝐞𝐞𝐭𝐞𝐬𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐬.

[venusiansilk]

OMGGGGGG I AM OBSESSED WITH YOUR WRITING OF RAFAYELLLL kid you not ur probably the best one out here. these are no fanfictions i am convinced these are poetry.

wow this is so kind i could fr cry my eyes out ( ͒ ඉ .̫ ඉ ͒)♡ thank you so damn much for reading my lil stories n for being here.

#𖥨. ݁︀ 𝐝𝐫𝐨𝐩𝐛𝐨𝐱 ꒱ ֺ💌ৎ #cosmicswan. #𐙚 ‧₊ 𝐬𝐰𝐞𝐞𝐭𝐞𝐬𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐬. #also i received your request! very specific lol but that’s dope! i’ll work on it when i can! #i can’t promise it’ll be soon. i still have a geto request from last year to finish 💀 #but i will get around to it. so i’ll keep your req in my inbox for the time being :3 #thank you again for how sweet this ask was. #it really warmed my heart <3

[venusiansilk]

hi! I came across your nanami kento baking fic and it was quite literally one of the best things I've ever read c:

I love all your stuff, I hope you're having a great day/night and I look forward to seeing more from you!

꒰ᐢ. ₊ .ᐢ꒱

hello hello! ah your ask made me smile so hard omg :3 thank you for reading my work n enjoying it n being here with me! it means a whole bunch you even came here to tell me. as for the nanami fic, i have another part for it that was stuff i left out of bc of word count and another idea given to me by someone else who read. it warms my heart how much people enjoyed that work 😭🤚🏾 it’s so crazy considering i was feeling so iffy abt it when i dropped it, but i feel better knowing y’all like it. thank you again! you’re so so sweet. i hope you’re have a good day/night on your end, too, wherever you are. ( ˘͈ ᵕ ˘͈♡)

#luotea. #re: man of indulgence. #𖥨. ݁︀ 𝐝𝐫𝐨𝐩𝐛𝐨𝐱 ꒱ ֺ💌ৎ #𐙚 ‧₊ 𝐬𝐰𝐞𝐞𝐭𝐞𝐬𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐬. #୧ ‧₊ ☁️ ⋅ 𝐡𝐢𝐬𝐚𝐧𝐚.

[venusiansilk]

wait! omg i followed bc of the baking influener nanami but i had read the tuesdays satoru fic a while back i didn’t realize that was you! that was such a good fic i don’t think words can describe how hard id fall for someone that incorporated me into their routine like that i still think ab him

hi anonie! okay this ask fr made my lil heart burst at 9 am :3 ahhh, it’s so cool that you read n enjoyed both!!! thank you for being here bb. i’m so glad. 🥹 both baker!nanami n shy!satoru both love n adore you as much as me! n yeah, i got a thing for hyper-domestic men lmao what you said is spot on. a man integrating me into his routine? o that’s MY man! lol i hope you’ll stick around n enjoy more. ily nonie!

#i gotta say ppl enjoying my sfw longfics makes me so unbelievably giddy. #𖥨. ݁︀ 𝐝𝐫𝐨𝐩𝐛𝐨𝐱 ꒱ ֺ💌ৎ #୧ ‧₊ ☁️ ⋅ 𝐚𝐧𝐨𝐧𝐢𝐞. #𐙚 ‧₊ 𝐬𝐰𝐞𝐞𝐭𝐞𝐬𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐬. #re: man of indulgence. #re: tuesdays.

[venusiansilk]

io omg !!!! i listened to your song the other day, and you are so so talented <33 you have such an amazing voice, i feel like you are just good at everything HAHHA. love u loads <33

eep! rylie how have you been?! ah thank you so much for listening to my lil song bb :3 i appreciate you n my cheeks are burning you're so sweet. i wish i was good at everything lmao. I LOVE YOU TOO! I HOPE YOU'RE DOING WELL MY LOVE!

#𖥨. ݁︀ 𝐝𝐫𝐨𝐩𝐛𝐨𝐱 ꒱ ֺ💌ৎ #୧ ‧₊ ☁️ ⋅ 𝐫𝐲𝐥𝐢𝐞.