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solargoose · 4 months

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Revised Thunderclan family tree for the Scrambled Rewrite, as of the start of The Prophecies Begin. I will not be updating this as I go (I will make new ones for each arc though). Underlined names are ocs, question marks represent cats that are either unknown to the clan or are unimportant and so I didn't come up with names for them. Described below the cut in case it's difficult to read/follow.

Moonflower and Stormtail's kits are Bluestar and Snowfur. The line for Bluestar's mate extends off the page. Snowfur's mate was Thistleclaw, their kit is Whitestorm. Whitestorm's mate is Willowpelt.

Thistleclaw's parents were Windflight and Poppydawn.

Willowpelt's parents were Foggyleap (oc) and an unknown tom. Her current mate is Whitestorm. Her previous mate is unknown, and their kit is Graypaw.

Amberwing (oc) and Applesnow (oc) were Brackenkit's parents. Brackenkit was adopted by Frostfur and Lionheart.

Lionheart's parents are Smallear and Speckletail. His mate is Frostfur. Their biological kits are Cinderkit, Thornkit, and Brightkit, and they adopted Brackenkit.

Frostfur's parents were Robinwing and Fuzzypelt.

Sandpaw's parents were Gingerstripe (oc) and Stoatclaw(oc).

Littlestripe (oc) and Acornscar (oc) had two kits: Longtail and Dustpaw.

Swiftbreeze and Adderfang were the parents of Spottedleaf, Redtail, Patchpelt, and Leopardfoot. Patchpelt and an unknown mate were the parents of Beetleflight (oc). Leopardfoot and Pine were the parents of Nightkit, Tigerclaw, and Mistkit. Beetleflight and Goldenflower were the parents of Swiftkit. Tigerclaw and Goldenflower are currently mates.

Goldenflower's parents were Sunstar and Tansypetal (oc).

Oneeye and Halftail are the parents of Runningwind.

Rainfur and an unknown mate were the parents of Thrushpelt, Tawnyspots, and Dappletail. Dappletail and an unknown mate were the parents of Mousefur.

Jake and Nutmeg are the parents of Firepaw, Princess, Socks, Ruby, and Scourge.

Volefang (oc) and Smokysky (oc) were the parents of Ravenpaw and Darkstripe. Darkstripe is currently mates with Brindleface.

Sweetpaw and Rosetail were siblings. Their parents are unknown. Rosetail and an unknown mate were the parents of Brindleface.

#Scrambled Rewrite #Scrambled Rewrite - The Prophecies Begin #You're welcome to ask questions about this #but also if the question is why did I change a cat's parents the answer is to make the clan less related to each other #as for how I decided which cats to change that varied a lot #and if you're looking at Mousefur and Runningwind going but wait neither of them had kits why does it matter if they're siblings then #it's because I plan on making some small changes to future families as well #breaking up large litters where multiple cats from the litter go on to have large litters etc #and Runningwind and Mousefur are both Free Real Estate for future kits #but I haven't decided which kits if any they'll have so I need them both to be totally unattached from everyone else

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loopy777 · 2 years

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The swamp is kinda interestig in that when i first watched it, i had no problems with Toph being introduced here, because i honestly almost immeditaly after her introduction became a genuine Taang shipper(They had SOO MUCH better chemistry than Kataang), who thought the ship could actually become endgame. As such, this prophecy introduction made perfect sense at the time. Of course looking back at it, it seems kinda silly that THIS was Tophs introduction, given her main role was aangs teacher.

Hm, now that's an interesting angle. I'm not really a fan of the Fated Lovers trope, but at least it's a good justification for one of the series' three uses of prophecy.

(That said, I have no idea how anyone could expect something other than Kataang as endgame. Katara narrates the beginning and highlights Aang's coming-of-age plotline! A rival endgame ship wouldn't be introduced mid-series like that unless the storytellers pulled a LoK and scrambled to react to overwhelming fan hatred of the main ship.)

Thinking again on Toph's introduction, then, I wonder how it would work as the first appearance of a love interest. She appears in her fancy clothes with the Bei Fong crest as a real live animal, making a big deal out of her being the heiress of this powerful family. The fact that she goes on to run away -- and only make use of her family's reputation to get tickets to a ferry the gAang never actually boards -- makes this a really odd introduction for the character. Its only narrative function is to serve as a clue when Aang is trying to find her after the Earth Rumble match, and that could have been handled by any number of other plot devices.

So, if I was going to do a canon Taang plotline spinning out of what 'The Swamp' had done, I'd want the Bei Fong family to play a larger role in the story. And it should be central to whatever conflict is keeping Taang from happening before the family. So perhaps, after the bounty hunters are thwarted in the Book Earthe finale, Toph's father could maybe go to the Fire Nation or otherwise get involved with them as a way of getting her back? And perhaps this in some way pulls Toph way from Aang? Actually, as long as we're rewriting canon, maybe Toph doesn't get away from the bounty hunters in Book Earth. Maybe they get her back to her father, and it isn't until sometime in Book Fire that she escapes and invents Metalbending.

The juiciest plotline I can come up with for this is if Toph is forcibly betrothed to Zuko. XD And so he knows her as Lady Bei Fong and she has to dress all fancy while she's with him, and she even comes to kind of like him when they bond about their family issues and not quite fitting into the royal life. But she gets to be Toph the Blind Bandit when she's with Aang, and that's where her heart is really calling her. A bonus could be Mai biting her tongue about wanting Zuko while forming a kind of friendship with Toph because she can relate to her situation. Never mind the interactions between Toph and Azula! Perhaps Zuko's leaving could tie in to Toph's escape- or perhaps Toph helps Iroh escape. And then she reunites with Aang and helps bring Zuko into the group.

Yeah, something really could have been done with that. Then I might actually like 'The Swamp.'

#loopy's least favorite atla episodes #taang

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sonickedtrowel · 3 years

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oh.. River/Eleven with 25 - things you said in the back seat of a cab. If it sparks anything for you that'd be amazing, in my head it's at least a little steamy

Hey, so I write very very slow! But I wrote this!! I went back and forth over how horny on main I wanted to be, deleting and rewriting the steamy part, and decided I’ll just put part of it here and link to ao3 for anyone who wants to read the rest 😂 Tbh it might be pushing explicit a tiny bit more than I normally do even though it’s brief so I had to put it behind a link lol.

Somebody say old Eleven young River? Just me? Oh well! Thank you for the prompt!!!

the whole thing on ao3

“Oh, here,” River said, waving to an approaching car on the street, “let’s catch a cab.”

“Don’t you want to walk?” asked the Doctor, sliding his arm around her back. “It’s a beautiful night!”

It was a lovely evening. Spring on Luna always was; it helped that the weather was engineered. It was breezy and warm, the air sweet with the scent of blossoming trees. But after dinner at the sort of restaurant that essentially required time travel to get a booking, River found walking back to the hall of residence a much less appealing proposition.

“I’ve got two hearts, sweetie, not two stomachs. If you want to walk home, you can pick a place with fewer courses next time.”

The Doctor amiably relented, dropping a kiss on her head as he turned to the cab, which had paused on the side of the street. In the 51st century they were sleek, shiny things, all black with tinted glass and a domed roof. “What is that one, a Lunar Link?” he asked. “They’re all autopilot in this decade, aren’t they?”

“All the ones I’ve seen. Why?”

“No reason.” He cleared his throat, opening the door for her to step inside. As he clambered in after her, he quickly produced the sonic from his pocket and aimed it at the control panel.

“Dodging the fare?” River asked as he shut the door. “That’s usually my area.”

“Um, no. Scrambling the CC feed and facial recognition.” She raised an eyebrow expectantly, and he sighed. “Let’s just say we’re… no longer welcome in several of these companies’ cabs.”

She let out a burst of delighted laughter. “And you’re always telling me to keep out of trouble!”

“Because I’ve seen the trouble first-hand!”

“Sounds like you were more participating than observing.”

“Yes, well. You’re a terrible influence,” he grumbled, with poorly disguised fondness.

“In that case,” she said, grasping him by the lapel, “far be it from me to break with tradition.”

“See?” The Doctor smiled as she tugged him closer. “Terrible.”

He hummed contentedly as his lips met hers, and a shiver went through River’s body. She’d just about gotten over being embarrassed by how easily he could disarm her. Imagine, if she’d killed him with just one fleeting brush of her lips, a mockery of a kiss, and never experienced the real thing. What a dreadful waste that would have been.

They were interrupted all too soon by a series of chirping beeps and a polite, slightly robotic voice requesting, “Please input your destination.” They breathlessly broke apart, and the Doctor fumbled for his sonic, buzzed it at the control panel once more, and was already turning back to her as the cab pulled into the street. Their smiling mouths crashed together somewhat messily in their eagerness, and then his arms were around her, his hand under her hip, pulling her to him. River went along gladly, throwing her leg over his hip and settling in his lap.

“Destination?” she asked, brushing a kiss at the corner of his mouth.

“Taking the long way round.” He lifted his hand to her face, tipping her chin up to kiss her properly.

She sighed happily. “Have you always been this agreeable?”

“No,” the Doctor said, his laughing breath fanning over her cheek and sending another shiver down her spine. “And if— god forbid— you run into me when I’m young anytime soon, I’d appreciate it if you tried not to give me any heart attacks.”

“Mmm. I bet you’d like it.”

“Well, yeah, but don’t tell me that.”

She laughed against his lips as he kissed her again, winding her arms around his neck. His hand splayed over her back, keeping her close, while the other lingered against her jaw, his thumb brushing gently over her cheek. He always touched her with a tenderness that seemed tinged with desperation; as though she might disappear if he dared to let go. He hardly had to worry. She didn’t want to be anywhere else.

It had been a few months now of settling into life on Luna, settling into being River Song, and beginning to learn her way around their life together, such as it was. Months of leaving her last lecture each Friday afternoon to find him waiting with flowers and dinner plans or an exploding planet they just couldn’t miss. It was good to escape into the wider universe, chasing some danger and excitement after a long week of lectures and essays and pretending to tolerate undergraduates. But this was better.

River wondered if the novelty of being wildly in love would ever wear off. It was her first time with anything like this, after all, and she felt a little at sea sometimes, unsure of what she should expect. If it would ever stop being so intoxicatingly good, and just be… normally pleasant. But the Doctor was much older. And judging by the way her insides melted at the pressure of his hands gripping her hips, the warmth of his breathing over her skin, the soft curve of his tongue behind her teeth— well, it seemed the honeymoon period wasn’t about to end anytime soon.

And that was another thing, she reflected as she fumbled blindly with the buttons on his trousers. There was something very settled about him, too. Something that was just solid: comfortable and trusting and content with her. She couldn’t seem to stop wondering, particularly after her latest bit of research, exactly what the nature of that settledness was.

Eventually, curiosity got the better of her. She’d barely broken away from his lips when she blurted, “Are we married?”

“What?” The Doctor blinked at her, dazed. In his defence, she did have her hand in his pants.

“Are we married?” she repeated. “I think it’s a reasonable question, in the circumstances.”

His eyebrows lifted and he shook his head slightly, huffing out a breath as he pushed his hair out of his face. “River, you know I can’t tell you.”

“I found a book that says we’re married.”

He groaned, his head collapsing back onto the seat. “I’m sure I’ve told you not to do that.”

“Also found a book that says I’ve killed you,” she added thoughtfully. “Which, in fairness, I did. But the place and the date are wrong.”

“See? A whole lot of nonsense, so no point in filling your head with it.”

“But once you’ve read your own personal future— once you’ve been told what it is, doesn’t it have to happen?”

“Only if it’s true. We’re not all beholden to the prophecies of gossip magazines.” He sat up again, wrapping his arms around her as he began to press warm, lingering kisses to her face, her neck, her shoulder. River stifled a whimper as his parted lips lingered on her throat, sending a ripple of want throbbing through her body as her mind filled with everywhere else she’d like him to put that sweet, soft mouth. Oh, he was far too good at distracting her. Well, she supposed technically she was the one distracting them this time; they’d been busy when she was overcome with the need to question him.

“And is it true?” she stubbornly persisted.

The Doctor lifted his head and watched her silently for a moment, rubbing his hands soothingly up and down her back. “I asked you, once,” he said at last. “Well, I asked if you were married. May have sort of accidentally proposed in the process.”

“Accidentally?”

“I was young.”

“And what did I tell you?”

“The truth,” he laughed, shaking his head and looking at her with such aching affection. “You really shouldn’t have done that.”

“Because once you knew, it had to happen that way?”

“No, not quite. River, the important things— they’re up to us. We always have a choice.”

She looked him over consideringly. “You don’t have a wedding ring.”

“No,” he agreed after a moment, fiddling with his bow tie as he glanced out the window.

“But you could just take it off when you come to see me, since it would be a bit of a giveaway.”

“River,” the Doctor said wearily, “you really need to stop. It’s all spoilers.” When she didn’t object, he pulled her closer, his hand cradling the back of her head.

“Would you even want to be married?” she asked, just before he could kiss her.

He exhaled, patiently studying her face. “Generally speaking, or to you specifically?”

“Is the answer different?”

“Yes.”

River swallowed, her hearts nervously fluttering. “Either I should be insulted, or you’re showing your hand a bit, Doctor,” she said softly.

“Well, I’ll leave that to your judgement, dear,” he murmured, and she finally stopped interrogating him long enough for him to kiss her.

#dr fic #dw fic #the doctor/river song #eleven/river #river song #eleventh doctor #yeeting myself into the sun now #dont read this i said a la elliot #idek why i just had to use a Noun and i'm suffering #travelwithmethen

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solargoose · 10 days

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I thought Thunderclan would have taken me the longest, but this one was weirdly difficult to untangle! It got a lot easier when I decided to just make most of Yellowfang's Secret non-canon for the rewrite.

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Brightflower and Brackenfoot's kits are Rowanberry, Nutwhisker, Mintkit, Marigoldkit, and Yellowfang. Yellowfang and Raggedstar's kit was Brokenstar. Rowanberry and Clawface's kits are Stumpytail and Cinderfur. Cinderfur's mate is Ashheart.

Darkflower and Scorchwind are mates.

Lizardstripe and Mudclaw's kits are Deerfoot, Tangleburr, and Runningnose. Deerfoot and Applefur are mates, and their kit is Oakkit.

Toadskip has two mates. Toadskip and Nettlespot's kits are Whitekit, Littlekit, and Cloudpelt. Toadskip and Poolcloud's kits are Foxheart and Wolfstep. Wolfstep and Fernshade's kit was Badgerfang. Blizzardwing had two mates. Blizzardwing and Hollyflower's kits are Fernshade, Blackice, and Flintfang. Blizzardwing and Featherstorm's kits are Mosspaw, Volepaw, and Dawncloud.

Finchflight and Dovemask (oc)'s kits are Crowpaw and Whitepaw.

Frogtail and Newtspeck are siblings. Newtspeck and an unknown mate's kits are Littlepaw, Wetpaw, and Brownpaw.

#scrambled rewrite #scrambled rewrite - the prophecies begin

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solargoose · 4 months

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Scrambled Rewrite - The Prophecies Begin Allegiances

Riverclan

Leader Crookedstar - Light brown tabby tom with a twisted jaw. Deputy Oakheart - Reddish brown tom. Healer Mudfur - Light brown tom. Warriors Mistyfoot - Pale blue-gray she-cat. Stonefur - Pale blue-gray tom. Apprentice - Shadepaw. Leopardfur - Dappled golden she-cat. Lilystem - Pale gray tabby she-cat. Mallowtail - Tortoiseshell tabby and white she-cat. Dawnbright - Ginger and white she-cat. Frogleap - Gray tom with a striped tail. Timberfur - Dark brown tom. Ottersplash - White and ginger she-cat. Apprentice - Mosspaw. Sedgecreek - Brown tabby she-cat Reedtail - Pale gray tabby tom. Loudbelly - Dark brown tom Apprentice - Silverpaw Beetlenose - Black tom. Skyheart - Pale brown tabby she-cat. Blackclaw - Black tom. Apprentice - Heavypaw Owlfur - Brown and white tom. Apprentice - Emberpaw Vixenleap - Black she-cat. Grasswhisker - Brown tabby she-cat. Whiteclaw - Dark brown tom with white paws. Greenflower - Brown striped she-cat with white on one paw and her chin. Apprentices Silverpaw - Silver and black tabby she-cat. Mosspaw - Tortoiseshell and white she-cat. Emberpaw - Dark ginger she-cat. Heavypaw - Brown tabby tom. Shadepaw - Dark gray she-cat Queens Ivytail - Brown tabby she-cat Mother to: Beechkit - Light brown tom and Nettlekit - Dark brown tabby tom Elders Graypool - Dark gray she-cat Softwing - White she-cat with pale brown tabby patches Shimmerpelt - Black she-cat Piketooth - Dark brown tabby tom with protruding teeth. Cedarpelt - Dark brown tabby tom.

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solargoose · 8 days

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The Windclan family tree for the Scrambled Rewrite! Of the 4, this was definitely the easiest.

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Palebird had two mates. Palebird and Woollytail's kits are Flytail and Bristlebark. Palebird and Sandgorse's kits are Finchkit and Tallstar.

Ryestalk and Shrewclaw's kits are Tornear and Mudclaw.

Mistmouse and Hareflight's kits are Doespring and Stagleap. Stagleap and Wrenflight's kits are Morningflower and Onewhisker.

Larksplash and Oatwhisker's kits are Robinkit and Tawnykit.

Meadowslip and Hickorynose's kits are Sootfang and Sorrelshine. Sootfang and Ashfoot are mates. Sorrelshine and unknown mate's kits are Whitepaw and Gorsepaw.

Plumclaw and an unknown mate's kits are Runningpaw and Webpaw.

#scrambled rewrite #scrambled rewrite - the prophecies begin

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solargoose · 4 months

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Scrambled Rewrite - The Prophecies Begin Allegiances

Windclan

Leader Tallstar - Black and white tom. Deputy Sootfang - Black tom with a twisted forepaw. Healer Barkface - Dark brown tom. Warriors Ashfoot - Gray she-cat. Mudclaw - Mottled dark brown tabby tom. Apprentice - Webpaw Tornear - Gray tabby tom. Onewhisker - Pale brown tabby tom. Doespring - Light brown she-cat. Morningflower - Tortoiseshell and white she-cat Apprentice - Runningpaw Aspenfall - Gray and white tom Oatwhisker - Creamy brown tabby tom Stagleap - Dark brown tom. Sorrelshine - Gray and brown she-cat Pigeonflight - Dark gray tom with white patches Plumclaw - Dark gray she-cat Cloudrunner - Pale gray tom. Ryestalk - Gray tabby she-cat. Flytail - White tom. Apprentice - Whitepaw Wrenflight - Brown she-cat Rabbitear - Pale brown she-cat Apprentice - Gorsepaw Bristlebark - Black tom. Apprentices Whitepaw - White she-cat Runningpaw - Light gray tabby she-cat. Gorsepaw - Pale gray and white tabby she-cat. Webpaw - Dark gray tabby tom. Queens Larksplash - Tortoiseshell and white she-cat Mother to: Robinkit - Light brown she-cat and Tawnykit - Golden brown she-cat. Elders Woolytail - Gray and white tom. Appledawn - Pale rose-cream she-cat Meadowslip - Light gray she-cat Crowfur - Black tom. Rushtail - Light creamy brown tom. Darkfoot - Dark blue-gray tom.

Cats Outside the Clans Jake - Orange tom. Nutmeg - Brown tabby she-cat Socks - Brown and white tom. Ruby - Black she-cat Princess - Brown tabby she-cat with a white chest and paws. Smudge - Black and white tom. Pine - Reddish brown tabby tom with many scars. Oliver - White tom. Barley - Black and white tom.

#Scrambled Rewrite #Scrambled Rewrite - The Prophecies Begin

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solargoose · 4 months

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Scrambled Rewrite - The Prophecies Begin Allegiances

Shadowclan

Leader Brokenstar - Long-haired dark brown tabby tom with a crooked tail. Deputy Blackice - White tom with black paws, ears, and tail tip. Healer Yellowfang - Dark gray she-cat with a flat face. Runningnose - Gray and white tom. Warriors Stumpytail - Brown tabby tom. Apprentice - Brownpaw Cinderfur - Gray tom. Rowanberry - Cream and brown she-cat Ashheart - Pale gray she-cat. Boulder - Silver tabby tom. Apprentice - Wetpaw Tallpoppy - Light brown tabby she-cat Toadskip - Dark brown tabby tom with white patches and white legs Clawface - Battle-scarred brown tom. Apprentice - Littlepaw Russetfur - Red tabby she-cat Apprentice - Whitepaw Tangleburr - Gray and brown she-cat Amberleaf - Dark orange she-cat with brown legs Mudclaw - Gray tom with brown legs Nutwhisker - Brown tom. Deerfoot - Brown tom. Mousewing - Black tom with thick fur. Lizardstripe - Brown tabby she-cat Wolfstep - Gray tom. Brackenfoot - Pale ginger tom with dark ginger legs. Nettlespot - White she-cat with ginger flecks. Apprentice - Crowpaw Scorchwind - Ginger tabby tom. Newtspeck - Small black and ginger she-cat. Frogtail - Dark gray tom Darkflower - Black she-cat Finchflight - Black and white tom Dawncloud - Pale ginger tabby she-cat Fernshade - Tortoiseshell she-cat Flintfang - Gray tom Apprentices Littlepaw - Brown tabby tom. Brownpaw - Brown tom. Wetpaw - Gray tabby tom. Whitepaw - Black tom with white paws and chest. Crowpaw - Black and white tom Queens Brightflower - Orange tabby she-cat with a flat face. Mother to - Marigoldkit - Tortoiseshell she-kit and Mintkit - Gray tom. Applefur - Mottled brown she-cat Mother to: Oakkit - Light brown tom. Whitekit - White she-cat with a blind eye. Denied apprenticeship by Brokenstar. Elders Nightpelt - Black tom. Ashfur - Gray tom. Archeye - Gray tabby tom with black stripes and a thick stripe over one eye. Featherstorm - Dark brown tabby she-cat. Crowtail - Black tabby she-cat. Hollyflower - Dark gray and white she-cat.

#Scrambled Rewrite #Scrambled Rewrite - The Prophecies Begin

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