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An Error List for “Evillious Chronicles: 101“

What it sounds. I was very incensed at seeing this latest of Evillious “explanation” videos that not only was full of misinformation, but also repeatedly insults mothy as a writer for things that are clearly misunderstood or misremembered by the presenter (who doesn’t seem to have actually read the novels). Given that this video is over 2 hours long, it feels more likely than other cases that people might take the information in it seriously, and so I felt it was worthwhile to write a comprehensive (but not all-encompassing) list of the errors in it.

I am going to try not to argue with the writing critiques and just focus on factual errors.

In the interest of transparency, here is a link to the video that I am responding to [here] (epilepsy warning--the first 5 seconds or so of the video has flickering bright colors as the camera starts up).

Under a cut for length.

NOTE: I am not including errors that were later corrected (such as saying that Levia studied alternate worlds when she was a psychologist), and just to be nice I am going to leave be areas where he leaves out information or characters (which he does quite a bit especially near the end) unless he explicitly claims that the information or character does not exist.

1. The Second Period is not a real universe. It is entirely a simulation. The people within it are real, insomuch as spirit data has been made indistinguishable from real souls, but the world itself is not. They were believed to be parallel worlds because the Second Period did not realize it was a simulation and mistook the real world for an alternate universe.

2. Behemo is not a Len in appearance and Levia is not a Rin. Mothy himself said that he and Levia are not VOCALOIDS in design.

3. Behemo was not married to his maid, they were simply dating.

4. Behemo was not a member of the team that made the Second Period, he was a relative of one of the programmers.

5. HERS does not affect the First Period. It is more strongly suggested that the First Period was destroyed by nuclear fallout. HERS was deliberately created by the Second Period programmers.

6. Behemo does not go into the Second Period as himself. He creates an avatar of himself to enter into the program. At the point where Levia goes to the First Period and meets Behemo for the first time, there is no physical transference going on--all of the "inter dimensional" crossing is entirely "spirit data" ONLY. As in, no one from the Second Period went to the First Period without having bodies made to put their soul data into when they arrived.

7. The Climb One was never a real rocket ship. Behemo in the First Period tricked the programs into thinking they were on a ship going to another world, but what he actually did was create bodies for them in the First Period that he downloaded them into, using a real world equivalent Climb One to make them think they'd traveled there physically. This is why the Second Period individuals believe they are on a new world, rather than realizing they are on Earth (which they renamed Gudnatia, incidentally).

8. No one survived the Climb One crash (except Luna Hadzuki, I believe). This is why they were trapped in the ship, because they had no physical bodies to leave with and their data was stuck onboard.

9. Levia's motivation to destroy the world does seem to be implied to be a result of her HER, however Behemo's motivations are slanted more towards "starting over and doing a better job next time". This is why he drops it later when the world has already progressed.

10. The phrase is "Mem Aleph", not "Mem Alpha".

--. The Venom is not why Eve's twins were stillborn (however, with this note I am going to forgive anything that goes against recent revelations in the OSS novel because it may not be widespread fan knowledge at this point).

11. Pretty much the entire timeline of Project Ma as he describes it is wrong. Adam and Eve were a part of the first Project Ma, not something separate from it, and Seth only became in charge of the project after Adam and Eve disappeared. The Clockworkers only became involved in the 7th iteration of the project, not the first. Meta's part of the project took place during the 2nd iteration (his notes indicate he is aware that he f--ed up the timeline, but they don't adequately explain what the correct information is so I am still counting it as an error).

12. Seth does not spread HERS unintentionally--HERS is not a disease that you can catch during your lifetime (except in Judgment era when all the rules are being explicitly subverted). It is a genetic anomaly that you have from birth. It is extremely rare, though less rare if your parents have it.

13. It is actually explained pretty well--there's an entire segment of the Venomania novel's prologue that explains how it works.

14. Levia and Behemo's motive for reaching out to Kiril is because they were tired of waiting for the project to succeed (given its numerous failures) and wanted to use him to get a body to escape the arc with. They did not tell Kiril to kill everyone, they simply told him to put Elluka's body in the arc. The explosion was an unintended consequence of his actions.

15. The Climb One is not in a dungeon, it is in a religious temple.

16.The cat that becomes Irina is not a live cat. It is a cat plushy with a Black Box inside it.

17. The spelling of “Grettle”.

18. Meta very explicitly has HERS.

19. Hansel and Gretel are kidnapped some time after Meta escapes, not the very same day.

20. Hansel and Gretel are abandoned by Adam and Eve in the woods, and they kill them once they find their way back home. They do not kill them just because they discovered they were adopted.

21. Eve's soul was never split into 7. The demons were people from the Climb One, yes, but they were reborn into demons via Hansel and Gretel. Eve simply "became" the Demon of Sloth.

22. Irregulars are explained. They are people born outside of the world's rules who are able to perform "Re_Birthday events", which destroy and rebuild things (often on a large scale such as reshaping the world, but it can be on a small scale as Hansel and Gretel show).

23. The explosion did not bring Elluka back from the dead. The Clockwork Secret Art Kiril used before the explosion repaired the decay of her body so that it was a usable vessel, which is how Levia and Behemo were able to get inside.

24. Behemo does not go to the moon after the explosion. He goes inside Elluka's body with Levia, but remains dormant. He only goes to the moon after Ma is formed.

25. Levia was not cured of HERS (this is vague, but her HERS is suggested to be why she tried to destroy the world as Nemesis).

26. Elluka's original body does not become "decrepit" after swapping with Lukana, it just ages normally.

27. Her name is Banica, not Bianca.

28. The deal with Gluttony was to keep Banica from dying of her morbid obesity, and to pursue dangerous cuisine. It was not because she wanted to be thin.

29. Carlos is not in line for the throne of Marlon.

30. Carlos got over her being overweight, but he did think negatively of Banica for her weight on first meeting her.

31. Carlos never cooked human meat for Banica.

32. Arth does not give birth to Allen and Riliane, Anne does (yes, I know he probably just misspoke but he said it multiple times).

33. Riliane was possessed by Gluttony in the childhood incident that separated her from Allen, not Pride. Pride only occurred later.

34. Elluka was the one who went to Held looking for new apprentices, Held did not call her back.

35. Michaela and Gumillia were forest spirits in between being crewmember data and becoming human.

36. Kyle is not a descendant of Conchita. He is the descendant of one of Carlos' brothers.

37. Allen killing Leonhart is closer in the timeline to Riliane's downfall than the video implies.

38. Michaela was not employed by Kyle in Marlon. Michaela and Clarith were employed by Keel in Elphegort, who was friends with Kyle.

39. Riliane's Green Hunting genocide was a result of not knowing which green-haired girl was Kyle's crush, and so killing them all to get this one person. It was not simply to get revenge on green-haired people.

40. Kyle and Germaine partially allow Allen's death for revenge (Kyle because he thinks Allen killed Michaela, Germaine because Allen killed Leonhart). It is not just for the sake of the public.

41. The demon of Pride was no longer in Riliane by the time of the twin switch (I don't recall if it's said explicitly but I believe the implication is that Ney took it when she escaped).

42. The doll is a doll. It does not look like a person--it is doll sized. People perceive it as looking human due to Eve's brainwashing power. There is of course also the issue of how this video describes Eve's soul as "breaking" is incorrect, which is made especially clear here, but that was covered earlier.

43. Kaspar was not a doctor. Margarita's father was the doctor.

44. The Duel of Merrigod Plateau does not occur during the Sloth event. It occurs much later.

45. Pere Noel is in Lucifenia, not Marlon.

46. Pere Noel is the name of the crime organization, not the name of its leader.

47. His name is Lemy not Lenny.

48. Irina is entirely behind Pere Noel, not just one of its main operators--she is the leader and founder.

49. Irina did not bring Lemy to the duel of Merrigod, he went there on his own.

50. Gumillia and Elluka did not have the vessel of Sloth during the duel. Eve was inside Elluka's body at the time, which is why she was present.

51. Gumillia did not die when she was sent to the Hellish Yard (this is, in fact, why she can't leave to the Heavenly Yard).

52. Seth does not promise to allow Gumillia to survive being in the Hellish Yard with demon powers. He promises to use his scientific expertise to solve the problem.

53. Kayo is not a hairdresser, she is...as the name of her song implies...a tailor. She cuts clothes. Not. Hair.

...Am I being trolled?

54, 55. Not only does he not bring up any of the plot twists of the Tailor novel (primarily that Kayo's actions were not done out of her psychosis but a result of a deliberate revenge plot), but he makes no indication that he's aware they're a thing, so I'm going to say that's two errors.

56, 57. The timeline for the Greed arc is messed up (again, does not seem to know what happens in the novel). Gallerian does not become a greedy judge until after he loses Michelle, which is waaaay after he met Ma, and way after their affair. He does not do this out of simple greed, but because he needs the resources to collect the vessels of sin, which he hopes to use to bring Michelle back to life, in a sense (I'm oversimplifying here but the point is I’m adding another two errors).

58. Gallerian is not actually a sin contractor.

59. Ma knew that Gallerian was her son and deliberately had a child with him while knowing this.

60. Nemesis is her birth name, it is not a name that she took for herself.

61. Ma did not put Eve into the doll, she put Irina into the doll. Irina is Master of the Court.

62. Ma does not have her own soul (this is why she tries to absorb other beings to, in a sense, create one for herself). She is consciousness without a soul.

63. Gallerian does not “abandon” Nemesis. He had no idea she existed until she came to kill him. He didn’t even know she was working for him in PN.

64. The "sins" do not "manifest" in the Theater arc until after Gallerian's death.

65. The way that the theater arc is described as coming about is wrong (Waiter is revealed to be Lilith Baldured, Gear is just Adam, etc). Again--doesn't seem to be familiar with events of the later books despite referencing reveals that are shown in them.

66. Seth as the mask is not able to shapeshift. It is Grim the End, the vessel that he is inside, that can shapeshift.

67. Hanma somewhat took care of Nemesis in her infancy--she was not completely alone.

68. Nemesis did not kill Michelle out of wrath. It was accidental. She didn’t even know that she’d done it.

69. Gallerian does not actually believe the Clockworker's Doll is human, he just believes that Michelle’s spirit is inside it.

70. The Pere Noel of Gallerian's era is not the same organization from Lemy's era. They only share a name.

71. Nemesis did not have to break into anything to get Punishment, she was in charge as the dictator of Elphegort.

72. No one is alive after the world's end except for Nemesis. They are still dead. They are disembodied souls.

--. Capriccio Farce is really the only primary, clear evidence that Allen is the one inside Master of the Court, Re_Birthday is not necessarily about the Irregular that she births, and Waiter's name does not necessarily mean she is waiting for Allen to be born to MOTC specifically (this is too contentious for me to list it as an error though, but my point is the level of retconning is not necessarily as severe as he makes it sound--I believe mothy began retconning this much sooner than people think).

73. Adam and Eve are blonde because they are Irregulars. This is also how they do the Court ending, not a result of “all the stuff their souls have been through”.

74. The Court ending people are not trying to kill the demons, they are trying to collect the contractors’ souls specifically--Ma tried to make a soul for herself using the demons but found them inadequate, and so she instead sought to use the contractors for the demons to sustain herself.

75. The contractors are not possessed anymore, but they do still have the abilities that their contracts gave them.

76. Very large inaccuracies here on how the confrontation with Ma goes but to sum up--Ma was lying dormant in Riliane's soul to stop herself from completely disintegrating into nothingness. She activates herself when all the sinners are assembled and draws them into her consciousness to remain stable, essentially becoming a conglomeration of all of them with Riliane’s appearance. This is incomplete because she does not catch Nemesis.

77. Gallerian is not part of the Court Ending, because he was drawn into the Ma conglomerate and was not present in the theater when it started.

--. Ironically, his (albeit brief) description of how the Court Ending functions is the one I believe to be the most accurate.

78. Most of the Second Period people did not ever learn that they were a simulation (save for Sickle and potentially Held).

79. It's not confirmed that Allen and Riliane fall in love in the Fourth Period (or that it's even them in 10 Minute Love).

80. Seth's motives for saving the world are explained. He is not "evil for evil's sake", he does things out of scientific curiosity. He still has HERS, but his goal as an HER has already been fulfilled with the destruction of the world.

All of this is not including the host of things he omits that, if present, would have made the events sound much more coherent.

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Honesty 101

1.Who was the last person you held hands with? Niya, my bebe ;3 2. Are you outgoing or shy? shy as shy can be 3. Who are you looking forward to seeing? Look at Q:1 4. Are you easy to get along with? sometimes 5. If you were drunk would the person you like take care of you? yeah, she does 6. What kind of people are you attracted to? smart 7. Do you think you’ll be in a relationship two months from now? yes, of course 8. Who from the opposite gender is on your mind? Look at Q:1 Q:3 and Q:7 9. Does talking about sex make you uncomfortable? no 10. Who was the last person you had a deep conversation with? the brother of mine 11. What does the most recent text that you sent say? ‘I want to do carpentry’ 12. What are your 5 favorite songs right now? i dont have such 13. Do you like it when people play with your hair? depends 14. Do you believe in luck and miracles? its complicated 15. What good thing happened this summer? Waake up, all of my people will taaake up, righteousness we are go maaake up nananana take up! 16. Would you kiss the last person you kissed again? YES 17. Do you think there is life on other planets? obvious it is, mh 18. Do you still talk to your first crush? no 19. Do you like bubble baths? no 20. Do you like your neighbors? yeah 21. What are you bad habits? breathing and consuming 22. Where would you like to travel? the universe and life 23. Do you have trust issues? yes, with myself 24. Favorite part of your daily routine? gaming and music 25. What part of your body are you most uncomfortable with? my body 26. What do you do when you wake up? sleep more 27. Do you wish your skin was lighter or darker? lighter! 28. Who are you most comfortable around? Niya 29. Have any of your ex’s told you they regret breaking up? lol 30. Do you ever want to get married? nah 31. Is your hair long enough for a pony tail? nope 32. Which celebrities would you have a threesome with? meh 33. Spell your name with your chin.v oikgtolr lolol 34. Do you play sports? What sports? is eating a sport? 35. Would you rather live without TV or music? pffff shun TV 36. Have you ever liked someone and never told them? a lot 37. What do you say during awkward silences? i create those 38. Describe your dream girl/guy? I am with her, aha 39. What are your favorite stores to shop in? Drinks&Booze 40. What do you want to do after high school? i do it atm (tumblr) 41. Do you believe everyone deserves a second chance? yeah 42. If your being extremely quiet what does it mean? i am being myself 43. Do you smile at strangers? aha 44. Trip to outer space or bottom of the ocean? inner space 45. What makes you get out of bed in the morning? idk, tasks 46. What are you paranoid about? im not too paranoid, so idk 47. Have you ever been high? lel 48. Have you ever been drunk? hue 49. Have you done anything recently that you hope nobody finds out about? meh 50. 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