Clone Wars Massacre
Oh, wow is that what
we’re really going with,
Don’t get me wrong
the tone has been better
but are you sure you want to take on something
like a massacre?
(Sla-very-
Kinda-
Aight,
Start,
(Also yeah whatever did happen to Ventress because she screwed up in attempt at Dooku’s life*, backing
down, and I thought she had just
cool-ed from the whole revenge thing-
-
*Not killing him
voluntarily
when she had the chance,
-
No
Lightsisters?
Did I-
hear that
right?
Yeah,
It honestly sounds like they’re saying
“Lightsisters,”
Instead
of
night sisters
as
previous,
Also yeah going back to the people that encouraged your toxic behavior and are toxic enabling generational breakers
Also, they don’t recognize
her?
I do have to admit I never got the idea of
plasma arrows,
Or possibly
coming to hold someone accountable,
That expression really
doesn’t speak of flee
Ing
Also I’ve vented my emotions and I’m going to go kick the
unaccountables to the curb
(With maybe
one more ro
-ast
before I do
so-)
Point being, she seems a lot more stable
(And center
-ed)
Uhm
?
What,
Ok there was a small
modicum of change
in the emotions,
Hid-ing
Hey, that’s good
Much
Hey there’s some accountability there,
Has forsaken
Okay never mind
it’s spiraling
downward
-s
N-othing
Sisters
Kinda the weakest relation of all
but this is actually pretty on top
Just replace sister with a “friend,” or “generation,”
and you’ve got a good idea
At least it wasn’t
“me”,
Yeah,
Sith
Okay, that’s some good
advice,
Us
That’s a bit of thought assuming,
Ordered about
Ah, lady that includes you
you know,
Sisters
Ok you know I’m all about loyalty to generation and humanity,
But this is feeling kind of supremacist right now,
Like
Maybe
a bit jumpy,
Okay this is a relatively validating
talk
Never mind it just got tox and
over involved,
Gosh darn it
The Bean wanted some actual non- over- involvement
affection/in
valid
ation-
And you turned it
tox,
Oof,
Ships
There are
lots of ships, by the way
Yeah, is this back to hunting down savage line or did
I just-
Oh,
Well this is an odd conversation
Grievous just bounding up
Not actu
ally the relaxed or cordial meeting
You’d expect from two people of
evil,
Two that know the location of each other’s
lair,
...summon
Pretty much out of nowhere because Dooku usually uses the
hologram, so far as we’ve seen,
And there hasn’t been any real big set up
to any sort of major event
That would require the
amassing of the
droid army,
Or an
in person
audience,
Seriously,
you called him here for
that?
Look my apprentice
tried to very weakly kill me
Pretty much up and
gave up near
the end,
But I’m still sore,
So I’m sending
you
Grievous; (internally)
I am a general
how would I be any
help in tracking down
one person, with
my pro-
fess
ion
in
Military,
A category so broad and
general (Area of
effect) that I would be
near to absolutely useless
in this quest,
Which boils down to very
specific
pettry
Again how is
Grievous going to be at all helpful in this?
-
Like that’s a small ragtag team of
rebels,
That is way below
his area of affect,
He’s more likely to bungle it up on the basic concept of it’s
really outside his thing,
Also yeah let’s send the one lone person to a place most known for its
gaslighting,
I know grievous is robot
but he clearly has emotions like a human
(Or any sentient)
Requiring/desiring stimuli
and companion
-ship,
(As
seen
previously)
Really this quest is really outside his
mode of
operation,
Like he’s used to strictly logical widespread
warfare, against multiple moving shapes
(large vessels)
And you’re sending him in to close range
restrained targets using emotional manipulation, at
high sp-
eeds-
-
(Similar to guerrilla warfare)
You’re setting this dude up for failure
Yeah he might succeed by numbers alone
But you’re going to lose a lot just
based on wastefulness and
just that not being his mode of operation
(Noting particularly the expedition where he crash landed on a planet and barely made out with his skin)
-abandoning
hundreds of
troops
-
(I’ve already talked enough about how this
just doesn’t work
and
how this should be seen as a stupid move)
And should be seen as more of an insult.
Bent
Back
Blue
Robe-
-
To
Battle
. . .
Against a small group of
rebels
(Like
seriously,)
Buddy, you can stop with the epic music I know that’s a lot of ships but there is nothing epic about this,
Any way..
Okay, never mind this got really tox,
I do
Loyalty is always been a weird concept to me because yeah it always changes because there’s so much to see and do
The only loyalty should be to the concept of
account-ability
(And not
being a dick
,)
Ven
-tress joins a death cult
[Seriously blood oaths and
life oaths
are cre
ep-
People and things changed and no amount of oaths or
false promises are going to
fix that,
It’s just something you have to except
or manage, correctly
You can’t control
other people.
Whelp she drank the whole thing of Kool-Aid,
(Also didn’t they just go over the con-
- sequences of messing with the stuff,”
Also guess he’s going to need a new name because
Ven-tress given to her by
her abuser
(Or was
so implied,”
)
?
Also I’m supposed to view this as advanced gaslighting
right
What hap-pened?
Her eyes?
Night
“M
-other,”
Yep she’s drinking that Kool-Aid
F-east
Oh it was going to be used to introduce us to anyone else because we know literally no one and everyone else seems to be just
extras,
Bo-nding
is
nice,
Will
ing
ly,
-
W-h
-
This is going
on-
?
Thank you
p-erson I barely know
-
Also Dooku coming into ruin good times
-
Buzz kill
-
Droid
. . .
You know if it’s been time building up their
bond,
This might’ve been more impactful-
[ It still works but
the weird creepy in humane behavior before hand doesn’t really help,”
]
Any way,
W-ar
So much for your plan
[oh so yeah attacking random [Neutral] planet just because you have a
hate bo
-ner
?
-?
You know this would be better if
it had occur-
red like right
-after,
Like, Dooku, was like;
Okay, well that plan went horribly,
So now I know that Ven-
tress and all of
Dathomir hates me,
Let me send someone
stealthy to do the job
You’re telling me Dooku doesn’t have anyone
Besides like the main three
four-
Bad guys?
-
Like this is chain of command where are the
gimmick minions?
[Besides evil, vengeance
And t
-ech,”
]
?
Oy why do you have the Clankers and the tanks marching next to each
other?
Like what do you want the
heavy artillery in the back,
Yeah I get this gives them better
range but wouldn’t you want some
pro-tection
-
?
Also yeah what happened to all the
males?
Like I know Ven-
tress
beat a couple of them
up,
But,
?
-
No, they’re here because
Dooku is an ass who doesn’t understand
strat-egic
planning,
And also he sent
Grievous,
Like you’re the
(Ex) concept of vengeance
-
The confidence
alone
-
you should kick his ass
Also,
sense it?
There was only four guys
to your entire
operation,
like 1/4
Chance..
W-h
That suck
-ed
Also
good job not dodg-
ing,
Seriously that was pure
rock that she could
see coming,
Okay, there’s no way
-she’s dead,
?
Okay?
Also where are the lines because you really didn’t have
her plan for this shit,
[Also this would be a really great moment right now Ventress to go to Bez-er-ker mode and get some revenge on her ab-
us
-er
-
I know this whole things theme
is “letting go of the past,”
Which you do,
after you get the past somewhere
where it can’t constantly
hurt you,
And pose
a threat
(Or
stress,
)
Point being emotions have a
reason as well as
(a time and a Place)
And while venting is fine
murder is not,
Don’t
conflict
the two
. . .
[Also
they’re just clustered together,”
also how is your
gaslighting
magic going to
work against robots?
[also is Ven-tress going to die because her arc is pretty much over and the only way I can see this ending is via redemption equals death
(Seeing as she’s around Obi-Wan’s age (or at least an adult around
Sky
-walker’s) so her window of absolute redemption and accou-
ntability is
pretty much
over..
Also,
Ok, I guess it’s against droid it’s not too much out of her
range,
(Though if it’s actual people she would probably
be dead,)
Or
daca?
At-
tack-
Also I guess she’s
lead-
er now,
(Also that line was a little
emotionaless)
Trees
Makes sense for the ar-
-chers
-use the surroundings,
?
Did she just
fall off a tree,
,
Good for
Them,
A-ight-
?
[so yeah sending the robots to deal with these sentient
person
least to say it’s no surprise that ended up terribly,
?
Witches
Again sending the tech guy was pretty much
guaran-
teeing failure,
As in any older Gen
-younger Gen
fight-
Metall
?
Cave?
Holo-
?
?
?
[again
I’m putting that down to gaslighting
magic,]
?
Why the look back?
Or is that just showing us the magic cave
(for future reference)
-
?
And apparently the attack just stopped
(or maybe it’s on a different front)
Point being those guys want needed and Mother needed two people to get the thing,
?
What
?
Ser-iously there’s just someone
be-hind there?
What’s the point of the
metal?
Not,
even the same species
(I think)
Also, resurrect-?
Look lady I don’t know what you know about resurrection but it doesn’t work like that,
Definitely not something
a boomer can perform,
Also,
Ah, movie you might not want to do that considering bringing people back from the dead tends to break any kind of tension, or suspension,
And she was presumably
an adult,
So yeah
that shouldn’t be possible,
?
Okay, you do not really
want to go there,
Ok yeah I’m going to have the bitch...
out about now
(I don’t there’s anything particularly tox
or that I should know any of that info-
rmation,
This is generally supposed to be some divine
zombie bullshit,
Which,
Is just a nope for me
personally,
[Honestly this episode is completely fine, clearly meant to be some kind of Grievous vs Ventress thing, and so long as the bring things back to the dead pothole gets closed up by the end of it
,I’m not too mad
(Otherwise the galaxy is pretty damn
screw.
-ed
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Reverb]
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The Clone Wars Duchess of Mandalore
Season 2 Episode 14
......
You know
I want to believe
this is going to be an episode
focusing
on Duchess’s actual character
. . . .
But the track record
of writing female characters
(Never mind blam
ing trauma for their personality )
Doesn’t
leave
much
Good
Faith
Or
trust
. .
(especially how often their
Characterization gets to
Ret-conned.
to fit the
episode,)
(Padme turned into a nag,
Ahsoka
In
unchildlike
abomination
that goes with a plot needs
her
to)
Duchess;
From
Relat
iv-ely
Reas
On
Able
Leader
. . .
Turned
exquisite
and
Ex-
- cess
-ive
(Pe
tty)
Con
trast-
With
Semi-
Constant
Smart
“laziness”
avoidant
Obi-wan
And
“Do
It
Sky
wal
-ker-
I don’t expect this to
stick
(Al-ways
the female
characters,”
Any. Way
And war, truth is the first casualty,
[It’s actually
accountability
but good try]
Deluding them selves of the
goodness usually comes after the bad action
Any way.
The
terribly designed ship
(I’m sorry but that thing doesn’t even look even slightly
aerodynamic)
(The shark
ship at least had that)
?
[it was one apparent smoke bomb and she wasn’t allowed to
do anything to try and fix it,]
But sure...
let’s go with that
.
Allies
[Never got a feel for that and
one dude was always
snarking at her,]
No
shit
everyone can see that
And
it was one dude
[They haven’t
heard of this yet]
[This plot-
isn’t very good]
Right
-
ok now they’re
im-portant-
Sit and and wait
As Duchess makes her case that this is just one splinter group that she can handle
Some thing you wouldn’t think would
need a trial
[Only
becoming a problem when it affects other people]
[suffering from the Luminara
problem, where if she doesn’t meet up to
high unreasonable standards.
In an unreasonable
amount of time
(Little)
Instantly lambasted by
her colleagues.
With the
nar-rative showing no signs of painting this is wrong
Or the fact of the
male characters can feck around
screw
everything
up,
And that
isn’t considered
serious
[Narrative’s
a
Cheater. .)
How long
These are
actual good evil minions
(No this could actually be good with them becoming something like the clone troopers to the, Darkside
Making up for a lack
of human faces in the ranks
up to this point,
Establishing that while they may be the
instigator of tox,
Actions are about
~now~
Less abhorrent than the
Empire’s
/
Coun-
cil-
‘the
Plot,’
Completely irrelevant
(And stupid)
Relying on everyone
being a complete
un-
accountable-
Idiot.
Great plan you got there
Dooku,
How’s Duchess’s explaining that’s-not-at-all-what-happened-and-we-don’t need a foot hold and all security,
going?
Like you think he’d be more mad
Considering what seems like the only plot,
Intercepting the
vehicle in transit,
Failed
horribly,
Unless, the guys didn’t tell
him - And he still thinks they have
Duchess -which would make
sense...because of course they sent troops for the lost
foreign
leader
(Would’ve been a
good episode for both
of them)
(Not sure that would cause
a riot though-)
(-Which would make sense if Obi-Wan was the last
one they saw around here-
Thinking, that a Jedi
captured their leader,
]
But I’m getting ahead of myself
let’s focus on the
actual plot.
.
Whoa rows
To Coursant
I thought you just said to
. . .sit still and leave.
What?
...
What
Oh so we’re focusing on another
cliché plot instead of the actual characters
(*Note;
Cliché
As
in
a
badly
established
already
done plot
. . .
There’s
nothing
wrong
with
doing
repeat
plot
so
long
as
you
do
them
well
What you bring
into it is the fun part
(Ideally)
Aight?
How?
They’re just
there
Also yeah you already know that there there you already know what they’re doing you still haven’t done anything about it
So?
[I was about to say where is the courier guy
but he’s dead]
R.I.P shortly lived villain
Killed off for a shitty
written romance-
-He deserved
better
Ok
Whatever
Why
[i’ve seen that image multiple times
but I never realized the city was in the ball
[also how is this the palace
where several important officials meet
And the nice forest is supposed to be this
mining hell hole
The environments-
They’re-
So yeah we know it’s there, but like last time we’re not going to do anything about it
[like I said Saltine did get back at some point and
everyone’s logic was just ok let’s go complain to the council
for no reason,]
[I
dislike this logic)
Why?
Just...?
Why
Also yeah who’s in charge
while she’s away?
I mean we’ve already got like a lot of
senators’ sus
What?
Things
Happen
Ing
Also yeah palace
right back to the way it was,
I guess it was a smoke
bomb. .
Right?
You left
the Boomer in control?
Also, so yeah I’m surprised he didn’t run out to be a
mastermind either
Like, yeah
That
can happen
But given the
“legacy and proud of everything
thing,”
You’d think he’d be the main target
[Makes a lot more sense than Random
Sen
ator
#4
And he was the only one in that
hallway with Obi-Wan-
-
During their
argu-
ment-
Prime
Minister-
It
Makes
Sense
-
You found
the deathwatch
armies
-
isn’t
hard
-
It
was like five guys last time
Now just like them, you have allowed, the situation
to get worse
Good job
smart guys.
Battle
Really because they seem like the same group of nerds
?
What?
??...
?
Deathwatch will never be strong enough
Yeah, no shit
Guess you
shouldn’t do anything stupid
[how long until something
stupid happens?]
Beyond
the normal
. . .
Here
Seriously how does this
plan make any sense?
Jedi- come here
- everyone-
Loses
their
shit
How?
- like
I know it be unpleasant to have some guys
stomp into
Your
House
But there’s literally no need for
that..
Considering
the situation
isn’t out of control
And
Satine should be fully capable of handling the situation
- And telling the Senate to feck off
- And don’t tell me he’s doing this because she’s
passive because he’s been everything but passive in defending her passive beliefs,
[Something
not really
elaborated
on]
Stop
NOT BE
AN IDIOT!
Also,
[I really don’t like this
plot
it makes no sense,”.
]
Whelp-
Fuck-
That
Got
Dark-
[but possibly make sense if this is how she
sees members of the republic,
As a dark
brooding force that will hurt everyone if
she’s not careful,
Significant deadly threat
How?
They-
smoke bombed one building
[That’s
juvenile]
[The situation is not out of control]
In the narrative’s attempt to over blow this isn’t done
,correctly
You need to have
self
aware
ness.
Bumper cars
Good
[Also you had to come to the
Senate to say that]
(This could’ve been an email)
Or a photo
op/
State
-ment-
?
Duchess
why did you come here
you knew they were going to pull this shit
Like this helped
nothing
And the narrative,
What was a good
situation that was supposed to come out of this?
You stand before a council of people who decided to fight, saying I don’t fight
[ and these are toxic people
mind you]
There was
no way this is going to end up good;
And I don’t.. know what the
narrative?
Padme?
Also what is with the weird bumper car
rules?
Because it seems like anyone can come up at any time and ask
any question?
[Like,
how is that not chaos?]
Wo rking under
toxic assumed authority.
.
“People-
‘ I call to the stand
Obi-Wan (Kenobi)
and Anakin
Of the Jedi
order, to
provide testament,”
That’s all
that had to be said..
On top
of;
“My government will submit to peace keepers
actual peace keepers -
Un-armed-
For
Eval
-uation,’
That would make sense
And work off
Satine’s
Ad-
vers
Ion-
To Obi-Wan,
and the Jedi Council,
True
Dick,
-Jedi
Yeah, she didn’t reject, she allowed the Jedi to do a full
investigation,
Also as
brutal as the scene is,
it is a good show of you
reap what you
sow
and enablers
turning on a enablers
Even though Satine
should’ve known better than
to argue peace
with a war
council...
Obi-won
says
nothing
. . .
Fuck
You
(Good)
Bad
Ass
Lots of politicians
speaking,
Wait-
Dick-
Appro
priate-
Ser-iously
touching
someone
without
their
consent?
Dick
entitled
move.
Spec.
Ifically.
After
he
stood
by
and
watched
that
happened
-
Senate
-
Yeah cause you were there
and you did nothing
Better;
Saltine calls Obi-Wan as a witness
(Both Obi-Wan and the others.
(Anakin) standing watch
over her
home planet
They failed to respond
due to being in the middle of some thing
Or just distracted
This makes looks
Satine
Look
extremely
bad,
That
Jedi
are
not
Re-sponding
On
her home planet
The vote gets passed
Satine is more than
distressed
When Obi-Wan
Coms her
In
They
argue,
Satine
Sni,pping.
A.
Bro-ken
Promise
“You said
you’d be there
for me
(This
Time)]
“You’re never there when I need you,”
“You’re never there when it
matters
most,”
With that,
the conversation ends
Satine possibly getting ready to defend herself against the
republic
Coming to invade
her home
Im-bittered
Sweet
Didn’t help at all but
okay,
We’re friends
Good
[To be fair
the romance was so forced,
that friendship is honestly best,]
Ah,
Lady,
You just got a friendship last
block,
No need
to act
surprised.
Nothing
More
Good because there was no chemistry
between you
up to this point,
State of mind
....
What?
What state of mind?
...
She’s
fine!
Yeah she
over reacted to the dude
But - got everything together when it
mattered-
THANK YOU!
That was an
asinine statement
Hysterical
No
they wouldn’t be
That isn’t a
compliment.
That’s
Invalidation.
Dick
Obi-Wan
Point!
So much
point in this!
I am so
pleased..
(Though
regular,”
I only -
Gas-
lighting
“I’m-
Yes!
Mhm
This is some
Bomb ass tea
De-licious
(I just realized
my phrasing
of words
I’m so-)
It’s good is the point
(Doesn’t it make up what happened in the
previous episodes,
But,
Makes
it
easier
to
forget
. . .
Accoun-
tability
-
Is
the
word
you’re
looking
for
(The
character,
not
the
writer,”)
They’re
doing
good
.
... You
live with a child
groomer
(Are
One)
Does make sense.
Obi-won closest to the problem
(Groomed
specifically
in benefit of it)
Still sad
that they just gave up
Even if he does
have a point
That Two generations
have essentially
grown up
Anakin
and
their time
as the present
is over
Bit too late to have a
regrets
(Only
when it
screws
you over..
Not
the
future
generations)
And...
My
sympathy
is
officially
gone
(Not
the
storytelling’s
fault,
I
think
they
work
-ed
this
conversation
pretty
well
-
Just
the
facts
to
narcs
arguing
-
Still
made
me
think
about
what
exactly
what
was
wrong
-
That’s
good
(narc)Con
versation,
Any way,
I love
this song
Obi-Wan gets roasted for all his bad
behavior 2.0...
It’s nice
Crusade
This
Convo was good
(It made me feel better about all the times the
writers used cheating tactics)
*Not for
giv-ed
just- better
?
[That expression-
was concerning]
There
Aight
That-
Was-
Chilling
[You just spent the whole time getting yelled out
for his deeds, just continued on,
emotion
less]
The
“respectable”
kind
(Approp-riate
for an
adult)
Aight
[Oh- no are they going to have the Obi-won rescue her and that proves that all her opinions are wrong?
Not actually; she made some really good
points
But in the
narrative
treating?
(I don’t
want to see
that)
Okay,
whelp,
Coursant has the
worst security ever,
How?
Damn
Frick
Is a
bad day for her,
Filed
Some random dude
hijacked your car
Who are you going to
sue?
Bitch
Queenie,
dude’s obviously an asshole
Leave
Also if there was no proof then why aren’t you charging her for vandalism terrorism, etc?
(See his logic is
bullshit,)
also this is a good example of
obstructive
bureaucrat
. . .
Or avoidant
Because how do three people
nearly dying not constitute as proof?
[Like if she
died.]
Also, what’s the plan
if she did?
Like; Oh yeah deathwatch is such a threat that they killed
a senator
Those
dudes
don’t care
They only pissed at her because she’s a pacifist coming into a
Offensive summit
Accident
[she accidentally
drove her car.
[Yelling
at the
villain]
Not
what
she
said
This dude could give
Obi-Wan a run
for his gas lighting,
Whelp
Fuck
Off
Oh yeah the council
of war mongers will really respect the
pa-
cifist
No bias
here
None
whatsoever
Satine
Hey
at least this time he had the
common decency not to
grab her-
dick
?
Oh yeah defender of the
gaslight-ing committee she’ll definitely help
Worry
You
Don’t give into the gaslight-
Also guilt tripping
“ i’m afraid on that account,”
No,
Dick
Valid
re-ac-
tions
Shit-
“Victim
blaming”
(Toxic
blaming)
Pretty sure
they’re all enablers
at this point
Tox-
Ma’am
Leave the
ball of tox
known as Obi-Wan
Man has turned from a
garbage fire
to a
gas
fire,
Coursant
Yeah,
you should leave,
Also,
That
Moment,
You
are
one
of
them.
You’re not
backing down
👉
This
Not,
Con
Don’t listen to
Obi-Wan
He
sucks
Also none of the guards are going to zap him for
touching their queen
unannounced?
- - -
Friends
You’re not her
friends
You’ve been
nothing
but a dick
Gas
lighting
Nope
Tox.
[like listen to that
ag-gressive tone,
How he’s holding
her
Tox
[Still
good on the animators who did that scene,
Very good
work,]
Occ-upation
Shit
Happen
Oh
Shit-
Obi-won
distracted
her?
Aight
Meeting
What
How-
Hm,
Wait-
Huh
[this is some kangaroo Court
logic
It’s
Good.]
Before
“Relying on the Republic is a mistake,”
Yesssss
More
Acc-
Toxic
initiative
(Since there’s
no to
little
way
they
end
this)
Based
on
circumstance
only
(No
different
sources)
Any-way
Um
Okay
Right
Just
Vibin’g
Aight
Whelp,
Am
I?
Oh is that the
Senator
guy?
Death
watch?
Also-
okay
Al-
right.
?
Wait
What?
Hm?
Green
We know
two greens
And one
changeling
That should be in
custody-
Wait-
?
?
What?
? ? ?
EXPLAIN
?
Who-
What
?
At-
This was a pretty a’ight episode
(Trust me I wish
I could give it higher praise)
However the
unfortunate
clankiness of the introduction
Keeps it stubbornly between a decent
and good
With that
being
said;
That does not
take away from the fact that is
a ____ whatever it is
-it has good characterization
for Satine
- it handles heavy morals like enabling, tox,
abuse and
pro-
blems
With
Assumed
Autho
rity-
Includ
Ing
Police
Bru-
tality
And
Fram
-ing
Very
Well
(With the
appro-
priate
dignity it deserves,
[there’s a small bit of better done romance/
fond-ness, near the
End]
*Villain was neat
[More of sidious
and on the [Main] villains
There
were
few
Moments
that
Made
Me
Go
Wtf
(Obi
Wan’s
Abuse
Of
The
Word
“Saw
You,”
The
Insist
Ence
That
Death
Watch
Was
In
Tim
i-
dating
As
For
Fix
-ing;
Episode; Instead of to defend,
Wise Saltine is called
To ident
ify a Death
Watch
Member-
Or
Re
New
Her
Neu-
Trality
Pledge
In
Person
(Due to
Change
ling
(Over
Lap)
Attack
Episode
Pro
Gress
Es
Arc
Fixes;
Obi- won delivers news, that he’s supposed
to escort
her
Pers
On
Ally,
Saltine expects everything to go over
swimmingly after all she hasn’t done anything wrong,
Quickly find out otherwise,
Loyalty over her
vs the government
Leads to a small
break
(Episode continues as
normally)
(Death watch-
if want)
Fix
Arc
Continue;
(Note no offense to the author meant
I just started some thing and I should finish it as an
accountable
writer)
Satine
Is
Forced
Into
Either
Defend
Ing
Or
Leaving
Anakin
To
Her
Irate
People,
Soon
After
Obi-won’s
In-
Cid
ent
Pri
med
Hope
Spot
Or
Depres.
Further.
Push
Ing
Ana
-kin’s
Dec-
Ision
To
Snap)
End
[Generally I thought this was a pretty
____ episode, the animation and set design will really good/
On par and it seems to have made up.
(Corrected)
A majority of flaws
I had with previous
episodes
. . .
Moving
On...
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