#it was a mock fight but with a terror so Real. bc holy Fucking shit lmfao

[orcelito]

literally anytime im like ‘how is discacc so popular, im just putting stuff from my brain on the doc’ and then i write 3k words in one go of some frankly Intense shit and im just left there like ‘holy Fucking shit’ as i was simply a conduit for something. More. 

and im just like. Ah. okay. i kinda get it, actually

#speculation nation #discacc shit #like Y'ALL. MAYBE IM GOOD AT WRITING. #ive seen posts around that's like 'oh man describing specific ways people move is so hard' and like kinda yea #but also. idk. i dont struggle with it usually #honestly im a little amazed by how accurately i captured what i had in mind for this fight #the speed. the Urgency. the desperation turned to panic. #it was a mock fight but with a terror so Real. bc holy Fucking shit lmfao #there's just one part that's a pretty weird movement that i need to workshop. but everything else im pretty satisfied with #of course gonna workshop those too to make it better and better. smth that's good to start with can become Amazing with work #i think the key to capturing movement is to not worry too much about the intricacies of it #you just have to fill in the most important parts. people will intuitively fill in the rest. #but i think that's a pretty good rule for writing in general #in a medium where Every word is measured. you just cant include every single detail. #so the goal as a writer isn't to capture everything 100% accurately to what you have in mind #but rather to capture the Spirit of it. using diction and word shapes and paragraphs to literally shape the way people perceive it #so a detailed fight getting more disjointed in narration the further on it gets. capturing the way things devolve into single-minded focus #im. really happy with this scene y'all lol #i cant wait to show it to u guys. AND I WONT HAVE TO WAIT LONG....... #i should go to sleep soon. if i go to bed soon i may be able to write a bit b4 work. hmmm