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Volume Two, Chapter One
“I have the perfect plan!”
After finishing her homework, Twilight Sparkle stared at the bulletin board on her wall as she tried to brainstorm her friendship plan.
She’d gathered information from other students at Canterlot High, and as it would seem, the hatred - or fear - of Sunset Shimmer was a universal feeling.
Twilight recalled her first meeting with Sunset.
It wasn’t the most pleasant either, but… on that same day, she had the privilege of discovering a different side to the seemingly mean girl.
“Are you really trying to get them to team up with Shimmer?”
Twilight turned around. The white fairy with dead red eyes stared at her from her bed.
“Oh, you’re here.”
“You’re wasting your time, you know? Magical girls don’t trust others that easily. Besides, Sunset Shimmer doesn’t have a contract with me, so she’ll just be a liability to them.”
“Sunset saved my life.” Twilight murmured. “She’s a good person, I just need find a way to show them that!”
Kyubey seemed to have caught onto something.
“How could a human like her save your life?”
She remained silent.
“Unless…”
“Listen, Kyubey,” She stopped him before he could say anything else. “I really appreciate your… constructive criticism, But I need to be alone to think right now.”
The little creature stood still for a moment, analyzing the human. Then, he simply nodded and leaped out the window.
Back to the bulletin board, Twilight thought to herself,
“Sunset and I became friends because I had the opportunity to see a different side of her when she saved my life.
She walked in circles, pondering.
“So all I have to do is make that happen another five times over again! Twilight Sparkle, you’re a genius!”
However, amidst her flash of inspiration, Twilight remembered something.
“Oh, right. How’s Sunset supposed to save everyone else if she’s a regular human and they’re magical girls? Agh! I didn’t think about that!” She lightly hit her own head. “Stupid! Stupid!”
At the corner of her room, her dog Spike barked softly. She turned around to see him sniffing a pink orb surrounded by a gold encagement. Her soul gem.
“That’s right!” She picked it up and held it over her head. “I’m also a magical girl! I can just create magical problems and help Sunset magically solve them!”
Spike whimpered.
“Shut up, it’s a great idea! I’ve got it totally under control.”
The next morning, Twilight Sparkle woke up earlier than usual and stopped by Sunset Shimmer’s house on her way to school.
Ding
Dong!
The doorbell rang. Sunset opened the door, to find her friend standing with a bright spark of determination in her eyes.
“Oh, hey Twi…”
“Sunset!” She enthusiastically interrupted. “I have the perfect plan to get everyone to totally like you!”
“Huh? You’re still on about that?”
“Still on? Hah!” She snorted. “I spent all night coming up with it!”
“What?”
“Don’t worry about it. Just listen. Here, see, this is a soul gem.” She took out the tiny fabergé egg out of her pocket. “Magical girls need these things to transform and use their magic. If we lost them, It would be pretty bad.” Twilight said with a tone that almost made it seem like she was trying to tell a joke.
“I-I guess it would be?” Sunset wasn’t really following her friend’s train of thought.
“So,” She put the soul gem back inside her pocket. “Here’s the plan; I’m gonna use magic to summon a fake witch. Then, I’m gonna call everyone to fight it. But, while nobody’s looking, I’ll steal Fluftershy’s soul gem!”
“You’re gonna WHAT?”
“Don’t worry. I’ll give it to you! And then, when she realizes she’s lost it and starts totally panicking, you can give it back to her and save the day!”
“Twilight!”
“What?”
“She’s just gonna think I stole it in the first place!”
“No way! Fluttershy loses stuff all the time. Just say you found it on the ground or something. Trust me, it’s the perfect plan.”
Sunset slapped her own face in distress.
“Twilight, I really appreciate you doing this for me, but…”
“You do? I’m glad! Let’s go then! We have a long day ahead of us!” She took her by the hand, not listening to anything else Sunset Shimmer had to say.
“We sure do…”
Lunch. The perfect hour of the school day when Twilight Sparkle knew all five of the magical girls would be together. They sat at a table in the corner of the cafeteria with no one else. Twilight reached out the hand with a magical silver ring on it towards Fluttershy’s school bag. She didn’t know how it worked, but she knew she had magic flowing through her soul. And magic can do anything. Repeating those thoughts to herself, slowly but surely, the Peach-colored soul gem fell out of Fluttershy’s bag, and dragged itself towards Twilight’s hands.
“Got it!” She yelled thriumpantly. A couple of students turned around and stared at her for a few moments. “Sorry…”
The commotion warned the magical girls.
“Twilight?” Applejack said. “What’re you doin’ on the ground?”
Alarmed, Twilight quickly hid the gem behind her back. This wasn’t how the plan was supposed to go, but whatever.
“Oh! Um, I-I came to get you guys, because…. There’s a witch! In the Gymnasium!”
“There’s a witch in the gym?!” They all shouted in unison.
Rainbow Dash jumped on top of the table, propelling herself forward.
“This one’s mine!”
“Rainbow, Be careful!” Applejack ran after her.
“Come on, girls!” Rarity stood up. Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie nodded.
As they were leaving the cafeteria, the fashionista turned back for a moment. “Twilight, we could use your help.”
“Oh!” Twilight suddenly remembered that she, too, was a magical girl. “Yeah. I’ll be right behind you.” She lied.
Once they all had left, She quickly strutted towards the rooftop, where she knew Sunset always ate lunch alone.
“Sunset!! I got it!!” She waved the soul gem in her hand.
The red haired girl nearly choked on her food.
“Twilight! You actually went through with that crazy plan?!”
“Yeah! And it worked! Here, hold this and be at the gymnasium in about, like, five minutes.” She handed over the soul gem. “I have a witch to conjure!”
Twilight left as quickly as she arrived. Sunset, however, was left standing shocked in place. She looked at the soul gem in her hands. It let out a strange glow, almost as if it were in pain.
“This can’t be good…”
Before entering the gym, Twilight quickly transformed into her magical girl attire. Breathing in deeply, she gently opened the door.
And she found
Four
Girls
Standing there
And
On the ground,
A corpse.
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Volume One, Chapter 4
“You just have to prove it to them!”
The distortion of reality around them slowly began to turn back into the beautiful hedge maze it once was, and the only remaining proof that a witch ever haunted the place stood perfectly still on the ground.
Fluttershy picked it up, looking somewhat disappointed.
“Only one…”
“You should have it, darling.” said Rarity, with a gentle yet sincere exprsssion on her face.
Applejack nodded in agreement.
“Yeah! You busted that thing down good! We’d have turned into witch food without ya.”
“Oh…” She nervously fidgeted with the seed in her hands. “I… I couldn’t…”
“FLUTTERS!”
“Ah-!”
Rainbow Dash tackled down her friend, laughing and crying at the same time.
“You were AWESOME out there! I can’t believe you finally made your wish! That stupid witch never stood a chance against you at all!”
“Oh… Um… T-Thank you, I didn’t really do all that much….”
Before she could finish her sentence, reality crudely downed upon her.
“No, Aj… You should have it. You used a lot of magic back there… I’d feel bad taking it from you…”
The cowgirl smiled.
“Don’t worry about it, sugarcube. If I do end up needin’ one, I can always go on a night patrol.”
“Ooh! Ooh! I’ll help!” Rainbow Dash let go of Fluttershy, excitedly skipping towards Applejack.
“What..?” Fluttershy seemed shocked.
“What’s wrong?” Rainbow turned around.
“Oh, nothing, it’s just…” She looked down at the grief seed in her hands. Her wish had really come true. “I’m so glad you two are getting along like this.”
She couldn’t help but let a relieved tear stream down her cheek.
“Flutters… Are you… Are you crying…?”
She quickly wiped her face.
“Oh, don’t mind me. That was just… A really scary battle. I think i’m still a little shocked.”
“This calls for a celebratory Make-Fluttershy-Feel-Better PARTY!!!!!” Pinkie jumped out from behind them.
Amidst all the laughter, Twilight couldn’t help but feel like she was forgetting something.
“WE’RE GONNA BE LATE FOR SCHOOL!!!”
Meanwhile, In Canterlot High, Sunset Shimmer sat alone in her chemistry class. It’s not like her attitude had earned her many friends, so usually she just sat with Twilight.
As she quietly resented her friend for not telling her she wouldn’t come in today, the door opened with a loud bang.
“I’M SO SORRY I’M LATE!!!!!”
“Twilight!”
“Ah, Ms. Sparkle! We thought you wouldn’t be able to join us today. Please, take your seat.” Despite the young student’s evident stress, the teacher smiled calmly as she said that. Still, Twilight couldn’t help but feel embarrassed as she stumbled toward the table where Sunset was.
“Where were you?” she whispered. “I was worried!”
“I, um… I had ebola.” Twilight blurted out.
“What?!”
“S-Sorry. That’s the excuse I came up with in case someone asked. I found a witch on my way here.”
“Oh, that thing we saw the other day?”
“Yeah, but…” Looking over at the soul gem ring on her right hand, she felt a pleasant warmth flow through her body. “I found… others.”
“Others?”
“Magical girls. Like me!”
“Huh?”
“They actually study here at Canterlot as well! Isn’t that wonderful?”
Sunset felt like her stomach had jumped out of a 12 story building.
She’d always known that, despite her special treatment of Twilight, she still wasn’t exactly the bestest friend ever. She’d tease her a lot, and occasionally her own anger would get the best of her. It wasn’t a surprise that Twilight would want to replace her eventually.
“Yeah, that’s…. great.”
Sunset had always been better off alone. Friends will only make you vulnerable and bring you along when they go down. But now that she had come face to face with this ultimatum, she…
“Sunset? Are you okay?”
She looked up at Twilight’s worried face. Her hand was gently placed on top of her own. Sunset cursed herself for letting her guard down so easily, but now that she had experienced true friendship, it was just too hard to let go of.
“C…” Her pride made her words heavy. “Can… I… Come along… With you… guys… Next time…?”
Twilight’s expression of worry quickly turned into one of excitement.
“Of course! I’ll introduce you to everyone!”
Oh boy.
Somehow, Sunset felt like introductions wouldn’t be needed.
When the last bell rang, Sunset was impatiently waiting at the front doors of the school. When they opened, Twilight appeared accompanied by five other girls.
“Alright everybody, as I was saying, this is my best friend…”
Uh oh.
“Sunset Shimmer?!” The five of them exclaimed in an unpleased tone.
“Hey… guys.” She awkwardly scratched the back of her head, trying to avoid eye contact as much as possible.
“Oh? You already know each other?” Twilight excitedly said, oblivious to the situation.
“Do we?!” Applejack crossed her arms.
“It’d be hard not to.” Rainbow Dash added in an agressive tone.
Hidden behind her, Fluttershy asked.
“Twilight, are you really friends with…. That girl?”
“Huh?” She looked around, confused. “Wait, am I missing something?”
“Listen, guys, I…” Sunset tried to explain herself.
“Frankly,” Rarity cut her off. “We don’t need to listen to anything you have to say!”
“Yeah! Twilight, don’t you know Sunset is the biggest, most meanest meanie of all meanies?” Pinkie backed up the rest of her friends.
“What? But I…” Twilight couldn’t understand what was happening.
“I’ve changed, okay, gosh dang it !”
Sunset Shimmer’s voice echoed through the campus.
When she realized what she’d done, she quickly covered her mouth with her own hands in embarrassment.
“I-I mean…”
The looks on the other girl’s faces were of the disgust she already knew. But Twilight’s eyes, covered in tears, almost made her lose balance for a second.
“Frankly, If this is all you had to show us, I think we’d best take our leave.” Rarity picked her bag up and turned around, with the others following behind her.
Soon, they had all left, but Twilight stayed.
Sunset tried to swallow her own embarrassment.
“Aren’t you going with them…?”
“No way! Sunset, listen…”
She held her hands up, looking closely into her eyes.
“If anyone knows you’ve changed, it’s me. You’re a wonderful person, and an amazing friend. You just have to prove it to them!”
“Prove…”
“Don’t worry, I’ll help you. I’ll always be with you, all the way. Cause that’s what friends are for!”
Sunset let go of Twilight’s hands, wiping her face.
“Yeah… Thanks, Twi.”
“Alright! Then, for today, I’ll go back to my own house and create the best, most foolproof friendship plan ever! Just you wait, soon, everyone will be happily hunting witches together!”
Twilight clumsily skipped away, and Sunset was left alone in the campus.
She couldn’t help but wonder if someone like her could truly make friends.
She had already failed once before.
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magicamicitia · 15 days
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I found the Tumblr!!! Im so hyped for this story man
I’m glad!
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magicamicitia · 20 days
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Volume One, Chapter 3
“I know what I have to do.”
The Labyrinth seemed to have extended itself throughout the entire maze, twisting its formerly logical and patterned architecture into an incomprehensible display of chaos. The six girls and Kyubey stuck together as they dived deeper into the madness surrounding them. A sudden noise from the bushes startled Twilight.
“Ah-!”
The others followed her gaze. Applejack reloaded her musket, ready to attack.
“Stay back, y’all. I got this.”
“No way!” Rainbow Dash quickly shoved the other girl aside, almost causing her to misfire. “You had the last one, this one’s all mine!”
“Rainbow, don’t you dare-!”
Before she could finish giving her words of advice, Rainbow Dash was already advancing towards the unknown creature. With a pirouette in the air and a landing kick, she tore down the leaves to find a small winged monster biting her leg, as if it had been waiting for her to attack.
“Ack! What the what? Get off me!” She violently shook it around, but the creature only tightened its grip.
Applejack regained her composure.
“Don’t move, I’ll handle it!”
“DON’T MOVE?! Easy for you to say! Do you want this thing to gobble me up?!” Rainbow whined as she kept stumbling around, fighting off the familiar.
“If you keep hoppin’ like that, I’ll end up shooting your leg off!”
“I didn’t ask for your help!”
Retaining balance for a split second, Rainbow Dash slit through the monster with her blade. It let out a tiny shriek as it dissolved onto the ground.
“There, see? Easy as pie!” She dusted off her hands in a confident manner, But Fluttershy couldn’t help but point out;
“Rainbow… the bite mark…”
“Huh?”
She looked down at her legs, but it was too late. Small vines had sprouted from the injury, lifting her upside down.
“Woah!”
“Rainbow!” Yelled Twilight.
“I’m fine, I’ll handle it!” She looked at the nervous newbie. “Go on without me!”
“Are you sure…?”
“Yeah!”
“I’ll stay here and help you…” Fluttershy offered. “It’s probably safer if I don’t go close to the witch anyway.”
Applejack nodded and turned to the rest of the group.
“Let’s get goin’!”
The remaining four girls wandered deeper into the Labyrinth, Kyubey strutting close after them. The presence of magic became stronger and stronger…
A loud cackle echoed through the surroundings.
“The witch!” shouted Rarity.
“It knows we’re here!” Kyubey warned.
Descending from the skies, a snake-like monster plunged directly towards them.
“Look out!”
Applejack shot the witch’s head, diverging it’s route and causing it to crash. The monster groaned horrifically as it tried to get back up.
“Oh no, you don’t!”
With the snap of a finger, Rarity chained the monster down with silk threads.
“Pinkie!”
“You got it!” She giggled, raising her weapon towards the witch.
“It’s… PARTY TIME!”
A loud cannon shot followed by a loud explosion fired onto the head of the monster. But when the smoke cleared…
“That thing…” Rarity murmured.
Twilight readjusted her glasses to make sure she wasn’t seeing things.
“It’s still… alive?”
Almost as if it were mocking them, the witch let out an even louder laughter, and proceeded to dive towards the girls.
“Stay back!”
Twilight brought out her shield, and with her magic, summoned a barrier to block the enemy’s path. Moving too fast to stop now, it crashed like a bird against a glass window, disorientedly shaking on the ground.
At that moment, Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy walked in.
“Are you guys okaaay?!” shouted the magical girl.
Her voice brought the witch back to its senses, and as it laid eyes on easy human prey, the creature advanced towards the poor girl, trapping her with its tail before she could react.
“Aaaahhh!!!!” she wailed.
“Fluttershy!”
The witch shook her around with a mocking chortle. Rainbow Dash, furious, leaped into the air.
“Give me back my friend!”
She slashed the witch’s tail, causing Fluttershy to fall. Rainbow quickly caught her and safely landed back on ground. The witch, however, howled in pain, now directing its attention to the offender. Once again, Applejack threw it off it’s balance with a gunshot to the head.
“That thing’s skull’s as tough as a darn boulder! We oughta get it from somewhere else!”
“Maybe you’re just not very good at aiming!” Rainbow Dash shouted as she ran back and forth dodging the witch’s attacks.
“What’d you say?!” She shot again as if trying to prove a point.
“Stop it, you two.” Rarity intervened. “Can’t you see you’re falling under its influence? Keep it together!”
As each one of them launched attacks from their side of the battlefield, Fluttershy desperately attempted to crawl away from the fight, sobbing.
“Fluttershy! Are you okay?” Kyubey ran to her aid.
“Please… Make it stop… I’m so… scared…”
“It’s no use.” The small fairy shook its head. “With the way they are now, these five can never hope to defeat Unausgeglichenheit.”
“Unaus… What?”
“The witch of Discord thrives on the disharmony of others. If they keep fighting each other, they’ll just die. You’d better leave if you don’t want to end up like that too.”
“What? No! I can’t just let them die!” She quickly sat up. “Kyubey… How do I help them?”
The Incubator stared deeply into her eyes.
“If you’re ready… I know there’s something you truly wish for, isn’t there? You haven’t had the courage to say it yet, but deep within your heart… You know what you have to do.”
A cold drop of sweat slid down her cheek.
Fluttershy remembered all of those days when Rianbow Dash angrily came to her about another fight with Applejack. All the conflicts she had to fix for her. All the arguments, all the yelling… It made her friend miserable, and it made her miserable. She always wanted to help, but never knew how.
But now, not only could she relieve that pain, but she could also save her best friend’s life.
As a child, Rainbow Dash was the one who stood up and saved her.
Now, it was her turn.
The spark of determination ignited within her very soul.
“Kyubey… I wish… I wish my friends would stop fighting all the time.”
In the battlefield, Unausgeglichenheit spun and dived in for another attack. The magical girls were already exhausted, having used up a considerable amount of their power. Twilight struggled to lift her shield again, but a flying spark emerged within the darkness and knocked the witch back against a wall, wailing in agony.
The girls looked for the source of their saving grace, and were shocked to lay eyes on none other than…
“Fluttershy!” They all exclaimed.
But Fluttershy wasn’t looking at them. Her eyes dead set on the witch, who, despite struggling, picked herself up again.
She moved her sights to Rainbow Dash.
“Rainbow! Please, stop being so stubborn! I know you want to prove yourself, but this a deadly battle, not a sports competition! Please, let us protect you!”
A pink thread appeared connecting their hearts.
“And, Applejack… You don’t have to fight for all of us! We’re your friends, you can rely on us as much as we can rely on you!”
Another thread sprung to life.
“Twilight,” This time, she reached out her hand. “I know you’re scared. Believe me, I am too. But when you have friends fighting by your side, I promise you’ll feel invincible!”
Fluttershy’s words consumed her entire body. As she took her hand, Twilight felt like they were one. Her other hand was grabbed by Rarity, and Pinkie joined in on the other side.
All together, the six magical girls united to deal a final blow.
Fluttershy held onto Twilight’s hand, as the two of them floated forward. With a magical synergy flowing through them, they knew exactly what they had to do.
“Connect!”
Their intertwined hands shaped a fusion of their weapons - A giant slingshot. The remaining girls channeled their own magic to help them increase their power.
“March Equinox!” The two of them said in sync, as if an instinct long dormant had finally awoken inside them.
A beam of light traveled directly towards the witch, who shrieked and crawled desperately, but to no avail.
In a blinding ignition, the witch eroded into nothingness. The labyrinth around them began to crumble, and soon, nothing was left but a small, black egg.
A magical girl’s most prized possession.
A Grief Seed.
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magicamicitia · 20 days
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I was thinking Asteria's Familiars would be space themed versions of Spike and Owlicious. Sunset would looks like a burning plucked chicken, a sad parody of her phoenix imagery. Maybe her familiars would be humanoids in togas laughing at her (A reference to Plato claiming humans are akin to birds, and Diogenes claims that a plucked chicken is a man.)
woah, the sunset one is brutal… i love it!
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magicamicitia · 20 days
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TwiSet be having the MadoHomu experience rn XDD
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magicamicitia · 20 days
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other ideas for familiars
Aintoinette’s familiars could be mannequins that mimic whoever is around them (and have pointy needles and pins)
Iris’s familiars could be similar to Patricia’s, with them having running shoes and being incredibly fast
And Asteria could have familiars that resemble her friends
Thank you for the suggestions! I really appreciate your input!
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magicamicitia · 23 days
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I imagine Diane’s minions to be rocks with party accessories on
you’re right! xD
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magicamicitia · 26 days
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Volume One Masterpost
started: March 25 2024
last update: April 15 2024
Volume One, Chapter One
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Volume One, Chapter Three
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WARNING: Mentions of suicidal/intrusive thoughts.
Volume One, Chapter Two
“You’re not alone anymore.”
Beep.
Beep.
Beep.
Click!
Sunset Shimmer once again woke up to the sound of her alarm clock, and carried on with her morning routine as normal. However, the memories of the previous afternoon refused to leave her thoughts.
She was aware of the existence of magic in other worlds, but… This one wasn’t supposed to be one of them. So what’s up with all of this? Magical girls? Witches? A talking cat-with-bunny-ears freak? It was weirder than anything she’d ever seen in any other world. Apparently, humans like her weren’t supposed to be able to see witches like she did. Sunset figured her background as a magic interdimensional traveller could explain that abnormality.
Whatever this all meant, she hoped Twilight knew what she was doing.
“I have no idea what I’m doing!” Twilight Sparkle skipped nervously around her room.
“Don’t worry!” the small white creature, who referred to itself as ‘Kyubey’, carefully groomed its fur in a corner. “If you ever need any help, you can always ask me.”
Twilight couldn’t help but roll her eyes.
“Yeah, that’s real reassuring. The last time I asked for your help, You-“
Her train of thought was crudely interrupted by a knock at the door.
“Sweetie?” Her mother’s voice called. “Are you okay in there? You’re gonna be late if you don’t come out soon!”
“Shoot! I’d better get going!”
She left her home in a hurry as to avoid being late, despite her family’s attempts to tell her she still had twenty minutes until her usual time of departure. With a half-eaten sandwich in her hands and a trusty Kyubey over her shoulders, she was surely ready for another day as a high school student AND magical girl!
Huh?
Twilight Sparkle suddenly felt a strange weight on her chest. looking down at the soul gem ring on her finger, she noticed it emitted a strange glow.
“What’s all this now?”
“Your soul gem is reacting to magic,” kyubey answered. “There must be a witch nearby! We have to go after it!”
“NOW?! I can’t go after a witch NOW! I couldn’t even finish off the last one, and if I take too long fighting it… I’ll be…”
She gulped, terrified.
“…TARDY!!!”
“Twilight! You’re a magical girl now, the future of humanity relies on you battling witches!”
“I know, I know… But… Like, can’t you do it or something?”
“Unfortunately, there’s nothing I can do about witches in their physicial form. But once you defeat the witch, I can collect its grief seed and make sure it never comes back!”
“Ughhhh!!! Fine, I’ll do it, I’ll do it…”
Her soul gem’s magic led her to a beautiful hedge maze just outside an ancient history museum.
“Wow… this place looks so peaceful. Odd spot for a witch to make its lair.”
“You’re right, Twilight. Usually, witches will try to hatch in locations where they can collect the despair of nearby victims. But this maze is a total ghost town…”
“Well, then that must mean this one doesn’t feel like it needs any extra power, huh?”
“Yes. We’d better get ready; we’re about to enter the labyrinth, quite literally.”
As Twilight moved towards the center of the maze, she could feel reality around her become more and more distorted. But she noticed a strange consistency among the chaos.
“These patterns… these creatures… This is the same witch from yesterday!”
Kyubey backed up against Twilight’s legs, looking for refuge. “Looks like we got real lucky then. If we had decided to fight it then, with a human tagging along, things would have gotten real dangerous.”
Twilight spared no time - casting her magical power, she transformed into her magical girl self and barged through the horde of familiars with her shield. The familiars, however, laughed at her futile attempts. Their torn bodies sewed themselves back together to take on another form.
“P…Principal Celestia…?” Twilight felt an enourmous weight fall onto her shoulders.
“Twilight Sparkle,” said the mirage. “What are you doing here, when you should be at school? You used to be such a good student…”
“U-Used to be? No, no, I still am! In fact, I was on my way back-“
“It’s too late for that now. You’ve already been expelled from Crystal Prep, do you want me to expel you from Canterlot High as well? That won’t look good on your records.”
“No! I wasn’t expelled! Candace just thought it would be better for me if…”
Her legs were shaking.
“I… I’m… You’re not supposed to be here!”
Mustering up her strength, Twilight attacked the illusion of Celestia with everything she had. The familiars, however, simply dissolved themselves while laughing, leaving Twilight to fall to the ground, crying and defeated.
“What’s happening… Why am I… So weak…?”
The laughter around her turned to chants.
“End it!”
“What good is a magical girl who can’t fight a witch?”
“End it!”
“Give up your soul gem and feed us!”
“End it!”
“End it!”
“End it!”
Her vision was starting to get blurry. Why did she accept this awful offer in the first place?! She didn’t have what it took to be a magical girl at all!
Oh,
That’s right…
The reason was…
“Hold on tight, sugarcube!”
From the skies, a mysterious sillhouette came down to Twilight’s aid. Once it landed, she was surprised to see another magical girl, just like her!
Well, maybe her clothes were a little different. Very country. And instead of a shield, this girl took out five mint-condition flintlock muskets from her stylish cowboy hat. With the aim and confidence of a professional, she took down the monsters without missing a single shot. Then, she whipped her hair around, adjusted her hat, and turned to a baffled Twilight on the ground.
She smiled and reached out her hand.
“You alright over there?”
Before she could even say anything, four other girls made their way to Twilight and the mysterious magical girl.
“AJ, no fair! You said this one was mine!” A feisty girl with rainbow-colored hair rushed in first, clearly very upset.
“Oh, darling, please, that was clearly not the witch. You’re making a scene for no reason.” Added a purple-haired girl dressed in gorgeous modern-victorian couture.
“Wait,” said the multicolor girl. “Who’s that one over there?”
“I-I’m… Twilight… Twilight Sparkle…” She clumsily adjusted her glasses and got up.
“Pleasure to meet ya, Twilight.” The girl with the muskets smiled. “Name’s applejack.”
“I’m Rainbow Dash!” the spunky girl added.
“My name is Rarity, but you may call me Miss Rarity if you’re a fan.”
“Oh, I’ve heard your name before! You’re like, a prodigy star of the design world, right?”
“You’re quite right, darling! And those two over there are Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy.”
“W…Woah… So, you’re all magical girls…?”
“ALMOST all of us. Flutter can’t seem to come up with a wish, so we just drag her along as moral support.” Rainbow Dash cut in with a sarcastic tone.
“Rainbow, don’t say that!” Applejack reprimanded. “Don’t you worry, sugarcube. I know how scary it is to fight them mean witches all by yourself, but you’re not alone in this no more. We got your back!”
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magicamicitia · 27 days
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Will we get more witch designs?
Yes!
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magicamicitia · 28 days
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hi my friends and i just stumbled across this au on tiktok and now i'm suddenly wanting to read everything and draw all of the girls,,,, aa thank you for this au!!!! i love it
thank you, your support means so much to me! if you do end up drawing them, id love to see it!
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magicamicitia · 29 days
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OMG I love this AU! Anyways, I followed you on TikTok as The_Ultimate_Pizza_God
hello! i’m glad you like it!
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magicamicitia · 1 month
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I hope this isn’t too big a spoiler or anything but will the characters get doppels like in Magia record or with it be more like the main show?
since doppels only exist because of the magius, i don’t think it would make sense for them to be a thing in this au. Perhaps in some kind of spin-off the cutie mark crusaders could take the roles of the magius or something and create doppels XD now that’s something to think about…
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magicamicitia · 1 month
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Can't wait for the first chapter to come out! I also can't wait to start drawing fan art too!
thank you! can’t wait to see it!
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magicamicitia · 1 month
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Volume One, Chapter One
“I’m a magical girl!”
The clock striked at four.
Sunset Shimmer stared into the distance, and she saw nothing but darkness. Tightening the grasp on her sword, she swallowed the anxiety inside her.
The clock striked at five.
Her vision was blurry, and she could feel tears falling onto her face. Who was crying? She felt like she wanted to cry too.
The clock striked at six.
Sunset could feel herself being carried away by someone. Away from the darkness. But she felt like they were going the wrong way. She catches a glimpse of a crystal school before it disappeared into the night.
The clock striked at seven.
An alarm rang;
Beep! Beep! Beep!
Sunset Shimmer opens her eyes, trying to understand her surroundings.
“Huh…? A dream?”
Beep! Beep! Beep!
“Alright, I get it! Geez, can a girl not have a nightmare in peace anymore?!” She shouts while angrily pressing the off switch on the alarm clock.
She stops for a moment, trying to recall what she saw in her slumber. But the memory of it has already faded away. She shakes her head to free herself from the trance, and gets out of bed.
Today is the start of her second semester at Canterlot High.
After a long shower, Sunset heads to her kitchen to make some breakfast before going to school. She decides to turn on the news while cooking, a habit she grew living alone in this strange world for so long.
“Breaking News; yesterday, and around four-thirty in the morning, the prestigious Crystal Prep Academy suffered a mysterious terrorist attack that killed twenty-seven employees and injured thirty more while on their night shift. Authorities urge civilians to stay away from the building, as smoke clouds are still present. The police has not yet found a culprit, and specialists have so far failed to identify what caused the explosion that destroyed the entire building.”
Sunset quickly turned around at the sound of those words.
“Crystal prep? Isn’t that the school Twilight was transferred from? I wonder if she’s doing okay… I should send her a text.”
She reached for her phone, but before she could unlock it, the numbers on the screen caused her to stop.
“SEVEN FORTY?! Dang it, I’m gonna be late!”
Picking up her things in a rush, Sunset quickly tumbled out of the house, silently scolding herself for not paying attention to the time.
At the front doors of Canterlot High, a young girl nervously adjusted her glasses, staring at the floor.
“Twilight!” Someone called out.
The girl looked up, recognizing the familiar voice.
“Sunset!”
The two friends ran to each other enthusiastically.
“Wow, I haven’t seen you all summer break! You look tired, have you been partying a lot?” Sunset said with a sarcastic tone.
Twilight seemed startled by that comment.
“Huh? Ah, no… I was just… Studying, is all.”
“Hah! Of course you were, ya big nerd. Oh, on another note, um… have you heard? About, you know…”
The smile on Twilight Sparkle’s face vanished.
“I have.”
“Is your brother… Okay?”
“He’s... Healthy. He was at home when it happened, but we heard Cadance was in the hospital today, and he hasn’t taken it well. None of us have.”
“Ah, that’s gotta be rough. I know how important she is to all of you.”
“Yeah, well… we’re managing. I’m sure she’ll be okay.”
They both stared at the ground in awkward silence for a few seconds, until Twilight shook her head and began,
“Never mind that. Sulking too much is gonna affect our studies on our first day! You- We’re okay and that’s what matters. Let’s head in, right?”
“Oh,” Sunset relaxed a bit. “Yeah yeah, let’s go.”
As they walked in, she couldn’t help but notice Twilight seemed to be acting off. Sunset knows her friend has a tendency to bottle things up to not worry other people, and all this stress must have been getting to her. A thought crossed her mind.
I should buy Twi a snack later to cheer her up.
As the bell rang at the end of the day, Sunset Shimmer sent her friend a message to meet her in front of the Sugarcube Corner Bakery, confident that some cupcakes and coffee could help her back to her old self. She had to be careful though, as one of her classmates, Pinkie Pie, was often seen around there, and Sunset wouldn’t want other people seeing this side of her…
“Huh?”
Why did she have a ‘side’ in the first place?
Why push others away like that?
There was a reason. An important reason. What was it again? Her head hurt thinking about it…
“Wait, where am I?”
Sunset looked around, realizing she had taken a wrong turn in the midst of her thoughts. Now in an old empty street instead of the colorful commercial disctrict.
“Well, this place is creepy. I should go back… What the-!”
Turning around, the scenery around her changed again. And wherever she went, it kept morphing… and twisting… and turning into something even more bizarre and nonsensical. A sense of dread overwhelmed her.
“I gotta get out of here NOW!”
But no matter how much she tried, Sunset felt like she was stuck running in place. Odd figures seemed to laugh at her struggle, and she cursed everyone and everything she could think of until she tripped and fell down onto the ground.
The figures slowly approached her in her weakened state, like predators carefully preparing an attack on their prey. Sunset, despite her confusion, shakingly got up and entered a fighting stance, even though she knew she had no way of fighting those things. Suddenly, a streak of light cut through the air, dismembering the monsters.
The girl searched puzzled for the source of her salvation, and her eyes laid on a familiar figure.
“Twilight?!”
The awkward nerdy schoolgirl she knew had a determined look in her eyes, with a dazzling outfit and a bladed shield which she yielded with an uncanny familiarity. Upon hearing her friend’s call, she turned around and her expression changed into the smile she was much more acquainted with.
“Sunset! Are you alright?”
“I am physically, but… What the hell is going on here? What are you wearing? Since when do you fight?! What are these things?!?!”
“I-I’ll explain everything, I swear! But we have to run, now!” She took her puzzled friend’s hand and guided her away from the mysterious labyrinth.
Once they reached an open and non-weirded-out area, Sunset took a few seconds to catch her breath before asking;
“What the hell was that?!”
Twilight panted.
“That was… Well…”
“A witch’s labyrinth!” A third voice added.
Sunset looked down. Her eyes widened to the size of a tea saucer.
“Is that. A talking cat.”
The nerdy girl smiled awkwardly.
“Um… Ahaha…”
“Twilight.”
“…Yeah?”
“What exactly… Are you?”
“Well…” she scratched her chin. “I’m a magical girl!”
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magicamicitia · 1 month
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I love your au! I always thought Madoka Magica had such potential for cool crossovers! I never would have thought to use MLP characters, and I am so excited to see what you have in store!
I’m glad to hear that! hopefully you’ll enjoy the story! :)
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