#meanwhile. i think this should’ve been four separate books so i can delve into the story mkre

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doesn’t help that the romance for two, maybe three, of these pov characters confuses me. where did we get that spark? why are we feeling emotions for each other?? i’m not sure what’s going on!!!

#alloromantics is this how romance works for you guys 😭 #there’s no buildup! no scenes w chemistry that makes me believe in more than an initial attraction! PLEASE #the issue w this book is also that there’s four separate pov charas and each have their convenient love story #meanwhile. i think this should’ve been four separate books so i can delve into the story mkre #than simply having events being told to me to sum up what happened during the other three chara pov scenes #i’d believe in the unfolding of the story more if i could SEE what’s happening!!! #i didn’t know what the drama of one character’s pov was because I KEPT HAVING IT CUT AWAY #found out on page 250 when i should’ve maybe found out on page 75. #aughhh it bothers me a bit. there’s so much good here! why’d you spread out your writing across four povs!! #they aren’t even woven together!!!! #memorie.txt #.bookthoughts