#writing jim be kind and sympathetic to henry is like [windows error noise] huh?

[reikunrei]

btw over the last week i was working on editing my creelarke fic molt just to be more up to my current standards and i might post the revised version tmrw :] wanna give it one more read-through to see if i wanna tweak anything else but aaahhh i played around w some scenes i wasn't super happy with anymore and like it a lot better now

#i didnt change any of the plot really. i did adjust some background details tho #but like. nothing actually Changed that's of huge import to the story or w/e #i mean. that's a lie BUT LIKE i just mean that all the beats are the same #adjusted some characterizations n stuff too.. now that i'm more comfy in their characters/relations to others #sidenote: it's really weird writing hopper and henry interacting in this au #bc if tfs is anything to go by. jim was a relentless bully to others and to henry #but in here it's like. even hopper wouldnt have had it in him to bully a little girl so like #writing jim be kind and sympathetic to henry is like [windows error noise] huh? #let's just not unpack how he might be a weird transphobe. we can approach that whenever i write my part 2 lol #i say things