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Free Writing, Exercise/Application page 40-41, April 14, 2018

Exercise Work on this activity with a partner. Imagine that you are writing essays on the given topics below. For each one, discuss how will you modify your purpose and tone to match the audience specified in the parentheses.

1. The benefits of having a pet First Grade Children: Purpose: To entertain As a writer having a reader in a first grade, I will entertain him/her through visual aids that conveys the benefits of having a pet. Tone: Joyous Parents Purpose: To inform Informing the parents about the benefits that the family can get in having a pet Tone: Matter of fact

People who prefer cleanliness Purpose: To persuade Motivate them that cleanliness may feel us relaxed and comfortable but pet gives joy and relieve stress. Tone: Humorous

2.The reason why it is more fun in the Philippines

Foreign tourist Purpose: To persuade Advocate Philippines through the use of blogs or any media that may attract Foreign tourist. Tone: Proud

Local Tourist Purpose: To persuade We can brochures, magazine,or flyers as media to motivate local tourist. Tone: Proud

Tourism Officials Purpose: To explain Explain why it is more fun in the Philippines through enumerating things that could support the statement why it is more fun in the Philippines Tone: Sincerity

3. The advantages of commuting

People who drive cars Purpose: To persuade We can motivate private drivers to commute instead of using cars so that we can reduce the pollution in the environment. Tone: Hopeful

Government Officials Purpose: To explain Having a government official as a commuter is very rare, though they can always try it. To reduce pollution and save a little money. Tone: Respect

Regular Commuters: Purpose: To entertain I’m sure regular commuters know the advantages of commuting. So as a writer, I’ve decided to entertain them through creative way of writing that may convey humorous joke about commuting. Tone: Humorous

Chosen general Subject: Summer Vacation

Audience: Readers (most specially students)

Purpose: To inform

Tone: Grateful

Point of view: First Point of View

Second Pre-writing Strategy: Brainstorming

           Summer Vacation

*Hot                      *Nights out

*Outing                 *Summer Jobs

*Freedom             *Bar Hopping 

*Relax                   *Malling

*Family Bonding   *Hiking

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 ASPECTS OF SPEECH Historical Context https://youtu.be/cz54rGo5oeU Cultural Context “I would rather have a country run like hell by Filipinos than a country run like heaven by the Americans, because however bad a Filipino government might be, we can always change it.” -Manuel L. Quezon https://youtu.be/663otOvJVGU Political Context Manuel L. Quezon says that Filipinos fight for their country with dignity even though the army was not that strong. He sees the Philippines as a nation that gives unity to the people, can stand independently, a nation that is tough that can pass through all the challenges that they encounter on their way, and a nation where strength is success and weakness is failure. As Manuel L. Quezon says “The strength of the nation is strength of its people.” Philippines strength varies to the strength of Filipinos. This strength can be built on character. For the past forty years, we gain prosperity in agricultural aspect and human resource providing manpower generously. Filipino youth are enjoying the blessing of liberty, the independence which they have done nothing to have. Due to the wrong adaptation of foreign customs, smartness wass shown to the. but impoliteness too. They didn’t realize that courtesy is a perfect fruit of culture and civilization, for it embrace all the values and in turn nourish and enhance them all. These youths should support , a liability in the social structure, but became burden because of idleness.We should be productive citizen of this nation.In order to attain economic and social advancement.Social code is also needed in allow to general role. Every Filipino should make a change that everyone would benefit— the poor, the rich, and the middle class of this society. Every official in the government should ensure every Filipino people to join. Every Filipino people is a part of existential movement through success. https://youtu.be/ITsFFnht8Do

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Compare and Contrast

Book vs Movie 

Divergent is written by Veronica Roth, it talks about 5 different factions. It was published on April 25, 2011, and was released as a movie on March 21, 2014. As you've done reading as well as watching, you will spot some little difference between the two. In the book, Edward was stabbed in the eye with a knife by Peter while this scene in the movie was left out. In the movie, after Tris lose a fight with Peter, she was told to leave the faction but in the book, nobody told her to do so. The visiting part was not in the movie. However, book and movies, main conflict remain the same. Settings generally the same with book and movie.

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Classification

Writing Activity

Dear Ms. X,

Meliodas Company has been developing three Tetsuya's Papaya Soap since 2013. Having based ourselves on the features demanded by large companies, we have created innovative, black soap that is now available to small and medium-sized companies

Ku papaya - One type of Tetsuya papaya soap use to those who want to be flawless. 

Ru papaya- One type of Tetsuya papaya soap use to those who have itchy skin. 

Ko papaya-  One type of Tetsuya papaya soap use to eradicate  acne and pimples

Our keen knowledge of the Soap Industry has helped us to develop solutions that answer the need of today's client. These solutions allow you to:

Increase customer satisfaction

Increase productivity

See how Meliodas Company Tetsuya's Papaya Soap can optimize your Department. I invite you to contact us today so that we can discuss in details how we can help you.

Thank you for the interest you have shown in Meliodas Company

Sincerely 

Meliodas Y

Meliodas Company

Konoha Palace

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Cause and Effect

Typhon Yolanda

Yolanda is a one of the super typhoon ever recorded in PAGASA. The PAGASA warn the people from Tacloban and was forced to flee their homes. But still, there are some people who choose to stay in their homes not minding the given warning. As the typhoon, landfall in Tacloban, powerful winds, and floodwaters from the typhoon flattened homes. It damages properties, devastated the crops, took hundreds of lives and some are missing.

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Paragraph using Definition

Psoariasis

·         Psoriasis is a common skin condition that speeds up the life cycle of skin cells. It causes cells to build up rapidly on the surface of the skin. The extra skin cells form scales and red patches that are itchy and sometimes painfulCommon signs and symptoms are: red patches of skin covered with thick, silvery scales, small scaling spots (commonly seen in children) dry, cracked skin that may bleed,itching, burning or soreness, thickened, pitted or ridged nails and swollen and stiff joints. There are several types of psoriasis. These include: Plaque psoriasis, most common form, plaque psoriasis causes dry, raised, red skin lesions (plaques) covered with silvery scales. The plaques might be itchy or painful and there may be few or many. They can occur anywhere on your body, including your genitals and the soft tissue inside your mouth. Psoriatic arthritis. In addition to inflamed, scaly skin, psoriatic arthritis causes swollen, painful joints that are typical of arthritis. Erythrodermic psoriasis. The least common type of psoriasis, erythrodermic psoriasis can cover your entire body with a red, peeling rash that can itch or burn intensely. Pustular psoriasis. This uncommon form of psoriasis can occur in widespread patches (generalized pustular psoriasis) or in smaller areas on your hands, feet or fingertips.Inverse psoriasis. This mainly affects the skin in the armpits, in the groin, under the breasts and around the genitals. Inverse psoriasis causes smooth patches of red, inflamed skin that worsen with friction and sweating. Fungal infections may trigger this type of psoriasis.Guttate psoriasis. This type primarily affects young adults and children. It's usually triggered by a bacterial infection such as strep throat. It's marked by small, water-drop-shaped, scaling lesions on your trunk, arms, legs and scalp. Nail psoriasis. Psoriasis can affect fingernails and toenails, causing pitting, abnormal nail growth and discoloration. Psoriatic nails might loosen and separate from the nail bed (onycholysis). Severe cases may cause the nail to crumble.  It is a chronic disease that often comes and goes. The main goal of treatment is to stop the skin cells from growing so quickly.

(https://www.mayoclinic.org/diseases-conditions/psoriasis/symptoms-causes/syc-20355840)

  posted: February 17, 2018 ( 10: 53 am)

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Descriptive Paragraph

Racuh a Payaman

   http://jonas.ph/blog/2015/09/11/50-reasons-why-visiting-batanes-should-be-in-your-bucket-list/3/

 For me, it’s a place of calmness. A place that mesmerizes me every single bit. Racuh a Payaman was hailed as Marlboro Country in the town of Batan in Batanes. An island that is enough to represent the whole archipelago of the Philippines. An exceptional beauty. As you walk in a hilly terrain, the clear blue sky will enlighten you with its satisfying brightness that adds beauty in the island. A trail to its green hill will pleasure you that only nature can afford to give. After satisfying your heart with the grand and gracious beauty of Diura beach. You may rest and sit in hills while embracing the cool fresh air and you could see the Tayid Lighthouse crested on the opposite hill competing with attention. A cone-shaped islet also catches the attention of tourist admiring the view. The almost never-ending rolling hills. The view of the ocean. The scenery of a rugged coast. This place is truly amazing, so what are you waiting for? Visit Racuh a Payaman in Batanes.

Photos are taken from Jonas.ph

posted: February 17, 2018 (10:33 am)

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Writing Activity

Comparison and Contraction

Living in Big City or Staying in Village

  If I were to choose between living in a big city or staying in village , I would rather stay in a village. Although they are both places where people can live , they are completely contrast with each other when it comes to the way of living.      Living in big city is some what hassle. Cars beeps and engines noise serves your alarm clock every morning . People were rushing through the terminal early morning to ensure that they wouldn’t be late to their works and classes. Polluted air seems to rattle your ribcage,  however , living in cities also a big advantage. There are much better employment avenue than towns. Better educational and medical facilities are also available in cities.In comparison, in village the cockrow serves your morning alarm clock. People live in an open. atmosphere. They get fresh air and sunlight and inhale more oxygen which they get from trees.Then you will hear the wind breeze, dogs bark and birds tweet

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Writing Activity

Problem- Solution

( Sending business proposal to a client )

Meliodas Company has been developing Tetsuya's Papaya Soap since 2013. Having based ourselves on the features demanded by large companies , we have created innovative, black soap that is now available to small and medium-sized companies.

Our keen knowledge of the Soap Industry has helped us to develop solutions that answer the need of today's client. These solutions allow you to:

Increase customer satisfaction

Increase productivity

See how Meliodas Company Tetsuya's Papaya Soap can optimize your Department. I invite you to contact us today so that we can discuss in details how we can help you.

Thank you for the interest you have shown in Meliodas Company

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Writing Activity

Clipped Narration

I felt nervous and the same time happy as he walk towards mine. But this happiness fade, as he pass me by.

Paced Narration

A guy wearing gray pants paired with white shirt and an ID around his neck, walk slowly towards mine. My heart was jackhammer that seemed to rattle within my ribcage. My face became bright and my eyes were sparkling knowing that inch by inch he will reaches mine. But I was like a deflated balloon as he pass me by. I turn my back, to look at his way, there was a girl smiling and waving at him.

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