Writer Journal Entry
{MONDAY, CHRISTMAS DAY 2017}
And now, my gift to you, dear readers:
I may not have finished the chapter-by-chapter outline for Book Two just yet, but I do have: a complete breakdown of Book One, and the part-by-part outline as a whole complete.
I present the latter to you now! (Spoilers ahead; presented as-is with original wording)
BOOK I: DESPERATION
PART I: UPROOTED
—Kidnapped, arrival in Prox, deciding to join culture
PART II: ASSIMILATION
—Learning Proxan history and culture; some training
PART III: IDENTITY
—More training, question identity
PART IV: SANCTUM
—Return to Vale (chosen, part ways, travel, disorientation, raid, confrontation, fleeing)
PART V: IMIL
—Journey north, getting Jenna on board, preparations, sibling interaction, arrival
PART VI: MERCURY
—Mercury Lighthouse
PART VII: TRAILS
—River rafting, Bilibin Barricade, reunion, mountain travel, landslide
PART VIII: VISIONS
—Lama Temple, Lamarkan Desert, Kalay
PART IX: EMPIRE
—Karagol Sea, Tolbi roads, tales of Tolbi, Gondowan Gate
PART X: STARCROSSED
—Suhalla Desert, meeting Sheba, getting to know Sheba
PART XI: CORNERED
—Learn they are being pursued, desperation, Gates, Lalivero
PART XII: CHAOS
—Confusion on how to enter Venus Lighthouse takes an entire book (Part)
PART XIII: VENUS
—Venus Lighthouse
BOOK II: SACRIFICE
PART XIV: SHIPWRECKED
—Start of Piers, Briggs, and Trdent subplots (Ends with Briggs boss fight, first attempt)
PART XV: STRANDED
—Air’s Rock, Garoh, Mikasalla, return to Madra
PART XVI: SEAWORTHY
—Boss fight (Briggs), conclusion of Piers subplot, seeing Karst again, Great Gabomba
PART XVII: HUNTED
—Aqua Rock, Tundaria, Taopo Swamp, Yallam, Garoh (final time)
PART XVIII: DESTINY
—Izumo, Gaia Rock, boss fight: Serpent, celebration and recovery
PART XIX: LEGACY
—Ankhol Ruins, boss fight: Avimander, conclusion of Briggs subplot, Trident repaired
PART XX: LEMURIA
—Sea of Time, Boss fight: Poseidon, entering Lemuria (humorous alternative Kraden dialogue due to a sarcasm fail on Felix’s part), news of Piers’s mother, grieving, palace, fountains, revelation/confirmation Weyard is eroding, etc.
PART XXI: PROPHECIES
—Shaman Village, Trial Road, Boss fight, Contigo, Anemos Ruins
PART XXII: JUPITER
—Jupiter Lighthouse
PART XXIII: RETURN
—Magma Rock, Loho, Northern Seas, Kalt Island, Northern Reachers, Prox
PART XXIV: MARS
—Mars Lighthouse
PART XXV: HOME
—Emotional recovery, funerals, recognition ceremony, leaving Prox, journey to Vale
PART XXVI: EXILE
—Discovery Mt. Aleph is gone, learn of survivors, official reunion, disorientation, uneasiness, betrayal, fleeing into exile
—T.
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