#thewritingissoallovertheplace

[readerwithsalt]

God I’m crying bc I was so DISAPPOINTED WITH WILLS CHARACTER and THE WRITING in this book. I’m on chapter 30 AND I HATE IT SO MUCH. Why did they have to make Will so burdensome. This quest and plot didn’t even allow Will to really shine as a character. It’s almost like he has to force himself to like Nico. Like Nico is so sweet and stuff and then you just have Will over here bashing on the underworld and darkness every five seconds, saying Persephone is the most beautiful PERSON he’s ever seen right in Nicos face, and complaining every five seconds about walking so much. He also asks Persephone how he’s supposed to LIKE NICO. Like???? 😭 Man fuck this. Nico deserves more. (Wills character deserves more) I’m crying bc i looked forward to it for so long and… I just can’t read the rest right now 😢😢😢😭

I will be making a post on why I feel this way after I finish sobbing and reading it. Just so disappointed with how lame the ‘plot twists’ were, how lame Nyx was?? How lame Tartarus was??? 😭

Cryin’ foreal.

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Rereading this post a week after reading this book and dang, I was really spiraling 😭😭😭🤣🤣

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