#'i mustnt flinch in the face of pain' so the stanza has a foundation

[silverskye13]

I do be kinda bonkers nutso over RnS and I lobe poetry so..... RNS POETRY BASED OFF OF THE LAST CHAPTER AND FROM HELSKNIGHTS POV!!! (Plus a helsknight Doodle)

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Through flesh thine dagger breaks.

I mustn't flinch in the face of pain.

For I know my friend may cause death.

You hath protected yourself in panic.

I wonder what you had been put through.

For I know that the harm is not from our world.

The dagger back in your hands.

I send you to prevent rust.

For I know you don't want to, you must.

Pouding radiates through the house.

I rush in to more panic.

For I know you need help.

Wrapped in my shadow of strength.

I let you rest.

For I know that later, you must recall the pain.

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#redstone and skulk #submission #artemfluid #putting my commentary in the notes because i want your work to stand alone #firstly [excited noises] YOU WROTE A POEM #AH. AH. POETRY. POETRY IN MY INBOX. #I love the staggering structure #every stanza has a different count of syllables #it feels like someone off-balance someone trying to offer comfort when they have no idea what they're doing #especially near the end #the first two stanzas are so solid #they feel like he at least knows a little of what hes doing #'i mustnt flinch in the face of pain' so the stanza has a foundation #and then the second panic and offering protection and the syllables progress #also the doodle <3 #thank you for the submission!