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During my first lot of placement this year, students were asked to do a small research assessment on their favourite animal. The students were asked to write a piece of writing to be stuck on a poster that then had facts written around the page with pictures/drawings. As students were beginning to write sentences the idea was for students to start writing about something they love and has meaning to them. This foundation student’s piece of work has an area that could 🐝👍🏻according to 6️⃣ to 1️⃣traits is 📝conventions. Within the 📰the 👨🏻‍🎓has throughout used capital letters in his writing instead just of at the start of the sentence ❌. He could of also used more punctuation such as ❗️ and full🛑so his sentence isn't so long and adds emotions ❤️😢😘😊 to his 📝. Finally as some words are 👓words that the 👨🏻‍🎓could of checked ✔️the spelling of some of his words.

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