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jiminiesfavouritecolourisblue · 28 days

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Hi, dear Blue, I saw your post and Rushed over! Coincidentally I reread the first three chapters of the CEO series before work today because it is a masterpiece! So I have fresh thoughts on them rn. Hope this helps motivate you even a little🥰💜

Chapter 1: Complaint

Ah the first part of what has become an Absolute Masterpiece!

From the first chapter I was hooked, obsessed, and addicted. This particular part was what really got me excited for the series-

“Did you get hurt, angel?” Jimin says softly. Tears definitely start to well up in your eyes as you look towards him. Taehyung let’s go of your chin to caress your cheek as a tear drops and he wipes it away. Namjoon’s eyes darken, they know for absolute fact you could do no wrong but unless they wanted HR to come visit they needed to resolve this in house. He knew that bitch was lying through her teeth about their favourite girl, but they needed you to tell them what actually happened so they could get rid of her without any mess. “We can’t help you baby girl if you don’t tell us,” he says, hoping it would elicit something out of you.“You guys are the problem,” you say through a sob, and your arms come to cover your face as more tears shed down your face. Their hearts sink at your words, Taehyung frowns at you, his dark eyes disappearing to look at you with sadness.

I've reread this one more times than I care to admit lol including thrice just today. One thing I noticed immediately and really loved was that you were careful to mention everyone, even if they didn't get a ton of dialogue you made sure to mention their thoughts or actions.

Chapter 2: Mediation

Aka Jimin's chapter. You know an author understands how to write Jimin when I can literally hear Filter in my mind while reading his parts. Our Blue is truly amazing🤩💜💜💜

All of the boys feel thoughtfully written as well. Jin who's calm and gentle but we all know he's just as if not more dangerous than the rest, Joon is the epitome of calm before the storm as well as the storm itself, you do NOT want to be on his bad side, Yoongi ever done with everyone's sh*t and probably wants to fire the rest of the building on the daily, except for Y/N of course who brings out his secret not so little soft side and the cutestgummy smile known to man, our Sunshine Hobi whose dark side is just as scary as his bright side is cheerful,,,, mad Hobi is honestly so attractive though,,,, and I love watching the Maknaes be petty towards Suran (or anyone really lol) and protective and clingy with Y/N🥰😂

Chapter 3: Resolution

The Dinner Date! It was such a cute chapter, short and sweet and has me grinning like a schoolgirl with a crush everytime I read it. Once again you go above and beyond making sure all the boys get a fair amount of attention while still making Y/N feel like the main character. I love being able to watch the character grow and really related with the anxious self thought in the first part of the chapter. Oh to have seven boyfriends to boost my self-worth at any time😍 Y/N is definitely living the dream right now.

P.S. Sorry this ended up so long hehe my bad.

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Why are you apologising 😭 this was exactly what I needed 💜🥺 I have a really hard time balancing the characters and the storylines but at the heart of all my stories I think the characters are central and I forget that sometimes 🙃 I also always forget about chapter 2 and 3 🤣 and then when I reread to check continuity I’m like … I wrote this? When? 🤦🏽‍♀️

Lovely you are literally such an angel, and I’m keeping you forever; genuinely if you leave me I’ll riot and go on strike 😤 no pressure 😁

I’m so determined to finish the next chapter today, I’ve got one more scene to write and then it needs editing

#THE FIRST THREE CHAPTERS WERE SOFT I NEED TO BRING BACK THE SOFTNESS #ceo au ask #my favourite people in my ask box makes my week #especially when they write essays about something I’ve written #😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 excuse me while I go cry #screenshot this and Imma put it in my motivation album #archive

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feelbokkie · 11 months

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Okay, I finally came upon some free time today! Love the new theme and pfp! You post so much too! I legit had to go back and fix this message before sending it since you posted LR14 while I was typing this lmao.

I'm glad Changbin and Hyunjin officially ended the bet in and are just genuinely spending time with Y/n (but I still believe they're way too late with that...like, it's still gonna blow up in their faces I'm afraid) and that Cerberus is getting signed! The second bet boys need to stop though!!! 😩 Seungmin is the main menace in there but I'm so disappointed with Minho being cool continuing the second bet even AFTER he saw Y/n struggling emotionally??? (Also Jisung has to get himself together, he seems to be struggling himself from his tweets lmao)

Also, how is LR going to end in a WEEK!?! I'm so excited/anxious about how it's all gonna go down 😣 Still holding out for Felix physically fighting people 😤

"Please Don't Care About Me It's Okay" was also so good! I also really hate crying in front of other people. It's why I think I'm so awkward comforting people who are crying since I assume they also don't want to be seen crying, but I also can't leave someone alone if they're crying unless they ask me to (but they always ask me to stay 😭)

-👻✌️

P.S.

Your SKZ shelf looks great! You'll eventually need a second shelf though since they release so much music! I'm jealous since I'm a relatively baby Stay so I'm working backwards to get the older albums 😔

I'm trying to rest more (I'm actually using my comp hours to leave work early today 👍) but I'm in one of the worst states for air quality because of the wildfires rn so my asthma is acting up 🫠 I'm hoping it doesn't look like the apocalypse again this afternoon like yesterday. The sky was so hazy and orange and everything smelled like smoke, but the superintendent refused to cancel school 🙃

I tried to answer this during my break but I was taking too long, but I’m home now!

Thank you! I feel like a change and here we are! And yeah, i’ve been posting like crazy but I think it’s mostly rambles and LR. I inly uploaded early so I could read comments while on break at work lol. I also gave up writing for 3 years before starting Feelbokkie so I think the reason why I’m posting so much is because I repressed my creativity for so long and unfortunately it everyone else’s problem now😅

Seungmin is an absolute menace with the bet I think he just wants to watch the world burn. And as far as I know, I say as if I didn’t write the damn thing, Min doesn’t know that the reason why Y/n shut down is because of the bet. Felix doesn’t even know that because he’s choosing to trust Hyun and Bin when they said there’s no bet going on. Hyunjin vaguely knows it’s because of the bet. He knows that she spiraled because she felt bad for sleeping with both him and Bin but he never put 2 and 2 together. As far as Min knows, she was just sad. But if he realized that it was because of how Hyun and Bin were messing with her, he would have shut that shit down immediately. As for Ji, idk what his problem is. He’s just taking over as leader for baboracha I guess.

And yeah, last night I did the math and if I post a chapter a day it should end by Wednesday. I’m going go try to finish it up today and schedule the posts but we’ll see. Just try to mentally prepare for the last 6 chapters.

I hate crying period, let alone in front of other people. It’s so bad that when my oldest brother died this past December I don’t think I cried. I was like Y/nnine in chapter 12 basically, just worse off, until something totally unrelated happened the week before I posted my first post on here and lost it. I cried in front of my mom and nieces and nephews. It wasn’t pretty. I’m so bad at comforting ppl too (which is shy I don’t write as much fluff I think)

Thank you! I have 5 more albums coming next week and then I should have at least one of every album, including the Japanese ones so I should be good until next comeback. But I have all the Korean albums rn. I’m a baby stay too! (although am I even that anymore with the amount of content I’ve made?) i’m just really bad with saving money 😅

You deserve to leave work early! Take a break! And I get the air quality thing. It’s (almost?) wildfire season here so Imm going to have to start wearing a double mask out to avoid getting an asthma attack. (i say almost with a question mark bc I saw a smokey the bear billboard today on my way to work but I’m not entirely sure). They never cancel schools when there’s a fire over here unless the campus is on fire. Last year the mountain right next to campus was on fire and we still had class. And my school is in mountains. Literally one gust of wind and it would have been over. 😩

#feelbokkie answers #👻✌️ anon #LR press tour

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harm0nianecterepassus · 2 years

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The Right Thing to Do “live commentary” - Part I of the “Rights and Wrongs” series, by LovesBitca8

Here we go again! I have decided to go for this series next. I originally was going to go ahead and read The Auction (ovaries still growing to required size to read Manacled) but i found out that it’s part three of a series??? I’m not sure if it’s 100% necessary to read the two before? (TRTTD and ATWT) so if anyone would be so kind to clarify, thanks in advance!

Anyways, as it says The Auction is part three, my brain can no longer go ahead and just read it- i have to go in order now 😤. So yeah! Let’s crack on, shall we? I have already done a “live commentary” about The Fallout and DMATMOOBIL, i didn’t do one on Isolation but i wish i did, it was perfection, btw. Anyways this is not a “proper” review or critique, just my thoughts while reading, and i don’t even know why i’m writing like i have an audience waiting for me to do this again lol the delusion ~ i will pin this to the top of my profile and update by editing the same post, so yeah! And now without ACTUAL further adue…

Day one: i’m really enjoying this fic so far! I’m on chapter 9, and it feels really “fresh” and “young”, probably bc it’s only a year and a half after the war and the characters are just becoming young adults. It’s always funny to read how they go straight into working for the Ministry and don’t really take a few years to “go to college” lol. It’s nice and a bit more fast-paced, shorter chapters and relatively open descriptions of places and people, which i too appreciate, so my mind can kind of “create” and work around it to imagine the world and ppl around the story. It’s a very nice change of style, and i have just read the reference for The Auction! So clever, i wonder if the author was already thinking about / writing that fic by this time? Anyways, less than a week til i go back to school and won’t have much time to read :( so i will happily destroy whats left of my eyesight to finish this fic before sunday hehe… been thinking about getting a Kindle! I found out you can read fics on there too! (I’m so NOT knowledgeable on this front lol) any suggestions about it?

Day three: chapter 25! We are making good progress! I’m liking how things are going, pretty interesting twist of events! I’m finding it a teenzy bit hard to get ober Lucius Malfoy being “civil” towards hermione, and sometimes Draco’s behavior is a bit too “casual” with other people and colleagues for my brain to comprehend, i guess I’m used to him still a bit cold towards the general public, just because he is more reserved and weary in general. The rest is fitting just fine! I like the bit of banter between ginny, hermione and harry! I’ve never really been a *huge* fan of Ron, be it on the books or the movies, i just think our girl could do SO much better than ending up with him… she pretty muchwas his mom throughout their entire relationship (ok, enough ranting, that’s a topic for another time, sorry to all the romione fandom). Anyways, what i wanted to get to with that last idea, was that i rrally like the trio with Ginny instead of Ronald lol sorry Ron!

I just reached the a/n where the author says there’s alteady three chapters drafted for The Auction! Exciting! We’ll update soon!

Day four: ok, i’m getting a bit annoyed with Hermione’s attitude at work. Like, why would you talk back at your BOSS like that? Doesn’t matter what’s happening between them, you don’t disrespect the person who gave you the chance to do something of your career. I get it, he “used her name” or whatever (it doesn’t even mean anything, if she didn’t bite the bait, he would be left embarassed in front of people like Walter), but dude: the man’s your boss! Why does she act like she’s making him a favor? You want out of you thing with Lucius? TELL DRACO! Is not your responsibility to keep the company afloat, is your damn savior complex, draco is right. Lol i’m getting all worked up here, because this plot is slowly but surely annoying me a little bit. It’s not that hard to work things out, there’s no “real threat” for them and the “right thing to do” isn’t really a huge thing. Am i getting this wrong? I’m very practical and this arrengement of sorts is just too much trouble when things could be very easy!!?????? And seriously, Draco could just freaking tell her to stop being unprofessional and rude in front of others, because she’s!! And he needs to just be the boss…

Well, that’s all for this update!

Day five: I’ve finished! 36 chapters later, the first part of the series is finished. I feel like it was a pretty good, quick read! Pretty entertaining, it made me laugh quite a few times, and was an overall nice story. I feel there were a few plotholes that i would’ve liked to see resolved: like the actual classes being of more critical use or having more of a significance throughout the story, and to go deeper into Lucius plan, maybe? The repercutions of his stabbing plan, maybe a bit more of how H’s career moved forward, ginny and harry’s wedding, ron pretty much disappeared from the story and i thought he would have made a good conflict point. I would have loved a more high-stakes conflict between d and h and their relationship, though. I do feel the ending was a bit rushed, or maybe i’m getting used to the SLOW burn dhrs hehe, but yeah, an overall fun, quick, romantic story! Would recommend this to any first-time dramione reader. I would personally give it a 3 out of 5 stars. Now we move onto the next! I don’t know if i’ll be commenting on Dracos POV. If something gets my attention, i guess i will, but i’m so excited to get to The Auction! Moving on!

#dramione fandom #harry potter #draco malfoy #dramione #hermione granger #dramione fanfic #hermione x draco #ao3 harry potter #fanfiction #harry potter fandom #dhr fanfiction #dhr #dramione fan #the right thing to do #lovesbitca8 #the right and wrong series #the auction #all the wrong things

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khaleesiofalicante · 1 year

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I loved that last chapter. Everything about it. I love soft Mavid soooooo much! Loved the scene where David just ran his hands over Max! 🥺

I know you said the next chapter was going to be their first date and first kiss. Which I’m soooo excited about!

But what I want to know is do we get to see the scene where Max takes out Mallory and Logan bc after this chapter I’d like to see her punished! 😂😭😤

Amazing job again. I don’t know what I’m going to do after you finish this story! Wait patiently (impatiently!) for the next one!! 💙

Thank youuuuuu 💙

We won't actually see the scene with Mallory and Max because I didn't want to write it and Max actually doesn't remember it. But I'd recommend you to read the scene from lbaf where he kills her because it is definitely satisfying :)

I'm already putting together (in my head lol) the plot of the next mavid fic and I'm so excited for you to read it!

#IALS

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halfblood-princes-crown · 2 years

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elanon again and jsut finished reading book two!!

some thoughts (other than the important ones) I couldn’t put in my other ask is here

I’ll just get this out of the way, my ao3 original story thing has a new summary and new prologue BUT i will be changing the prologue again soon, to a much better one ☝️

Editing is hard but we push and push

chapter one might be two to three weeks later

moving along,

Salazar Slytherin I dont know if it’s confirmed he started the classism or not, but he did say the basisilks will kill whoever is unworthy sooo I think that that guy is a real family man 💀

‘I’m not gonna specify what I mean by unworthy because my family is always right!’

anyways Harry is either desperate for approval or just a very ambitious guy like ‘my arm is broken and i could die if we don’t guve up the match’ and he WINS goddamn

Also the foreshadowing is insane frl

(about tom)

“maybe he killed mrytle” -ron

AND IT TURNS OUT HE KILLED MYRTLE

also no one suspecting snape? understandable

I really wish there was more done with the parasel tongue

i understand why the teachers went to evacuate instead of rescue first because it did say ‘her body will lie in the chambers’ and no one knows where it is with barely any rumors to hint (except Myrtle but everyone was freaking out)

so I can tell why they sent Lockhart to ‘fetch the body’ while evacuating everyone else

also how did tom know about Aragog?

😳😳😳😳😳

Hagrid voldemort ex best friends real???

also tom sounds like a fucking loser

cant even talk to the principal 🙄🙄

IM ACTUALLY SO EXCITED FOR THE THIRD BOOK

thats all! Tell me if u want updates on that

Have an galactic day 🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌

HEEYYYY 😌 congrats on finishing

Can’t wait to see the update on the prologue!

Yes, editing is hard but we must persevere! 😤

AH can’t wait until you post the chapters 🤩

Salazar 🤔 I’ve seen so many metas on his intentions and none of them stuck to memory 😭 next time you update I’ll hopefully have an answer about that

Imma go with ambitious 🧐 Harry had a lot of ambition! Another good Slytherin trait if I do say so myself 😌

AND YES! I LOVE some good foreshadowing! That’s one of the reason why I read/watch things multiple times, because I look for foreshadowing that I might have missed the first time

The parseltongue! I agree, they should have really did something more with that 🤩 that would have been epic

Yea, the best method is evacuate first in most situations. Like you said, nobody knew where it was so the best option was to get the rest of the children to safety and then figure something out

platonic Tom x Hagrid! Snap snap people! Make it happen 🤌🏽

Not you calling Tom a loser, I’m dead 💀😭 pls

And OFC I want updates! I want updates until you finish the WHOLE series. I’m dedicated to your dedication

Have euphoric day ✨

#ELA anon

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wonunuu · 2 years

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*googles* how to buy y/n a dog that won’t leave her and comfort her when she’s sad???👩🏻‍💻👩🏻‍💻 no but seriously y/n you need to talk to someone about ur feelings don’t hold it back😭😭 I will also personally kick Jeonghan butt when he shows himself again I wonder tho if we get to meet Jun in the next chapter?? He seems like a nice guy and since he got y/n a job he’s in my good book for now…

On another note can I just say that my fingers and wrists are hurting from knitting this past week… I’m knitting two different scarfs to two of my friends and one needs to be done before December and the other before the 29th of December… and since I’m working as well I’m on a tight schedule and I have to sit and knit during my days off to make sure I meet my own deadlines🥲

Also also! Next weekend I’m flying back to England to finally graduate/have my uni graduation ceremony on the 16th of November!! It was supposed to be this July but got pushed back due to covid and I’m so excited yet a bit nervous to fly back and finally graduate with all my friends😬👩🏻‍🎓💕

omggg hi emmy!!!! 🙈🙈🙈

yn needs a comfort pet 😔😔😔 frr yn, you have friends for a reason!! i genuinely fear for jeonghan’s safety hahshsjs everyone wants to physically hurt him 😭😭 i would give a spoiler but i actually forgot what happens next chapter hahaha so you’ll have to wait 🤣

awee that’s so sweet 😤 your friends are lucky to have you honestly,, but ahh take things easyyy! make sure you squeeze in breaks in your tight schedule. we dont want emmy overworking herself 😖😖 you can do this i believe in you!!

WOW THATS SO EXCITING AHH CONGRATS!!!! you’ve made it!!! don’t be nervous too much!! you can only graduate how many times in your life!! have fun with your friends and enjoy every second of it!!! omg im truly wishing you all the best and best of luck out there!!! i’ll be cheering you from where i am hehe. GO EMMY ✊❤️

#moonlit willow #wonunuu asks

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ficsforeren · 3 years

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Ok but that last chapter was heart-wrenching in so many ways. Damn this new chapter was an angsty one.

Fucking knew it that Porco had feelings for Pieck. But poor thing is subjected to hearing Pieck moan someone else’s name. Also isn’t he in his mid 20’s like the reader and Eren? How many of his ex’s did him dirty? I mean if his argument is that he’s too young to be committed, idk Porco but maybe you were so young then that your past partners weren’t ready for how amazing you are🤷🏻‍♀️

Also oh my god the reader getting fucking hate comments. It really is sad how possessive fans get of idols/celebrities. I mean I guess it does take a certain maturity to recognize that there’s more to their lives than what they show the public. But still, it’s so awful to send hate to the reader when she was just out and about with Eren. I know the reader is technically us, but I’m so proud of her for doing the mature thing and not fighting fire with fire. Personally I talk a lot of shit and I’m too much of a wimp to actually fight. But when push comes to shove, if anyone was a bitch to me, I can definitely be the bigger bitch once I reach that point 😂😂

Ok and now onto my baby Armin. AWWWWW getting a physical copy of a book we didn’t have. He’s so thoughtful. And he seems like a popular model. Wouldn’t the reader also be getting hate or maybe paparazzi would be following her around since she seems to be well acquainted with not only one of the hottest musicians out there but now a big time model? Aww I hope Armin gets his happy ending since it’s inevitable the reader ends up with Eren. Right? Please tell me the happy ending involves us ending up with Eren.

I think a while back you replied to my long-ass reblog (super sorry for that word vomit again) but I feel like the angsty ending is either Eren giving up his music career or him just handing over the song writing reigns to the company after he ends up with Mikasa because (Y/N) is no longer his muse.

And then last point I want to address is I can’t believe Eren wouldn’t tell us about him shooting an MV with Mikasa. It’s not actually his fault either. And I mean I guess we’re not exclusive but oh my god I was hard broken reading the last two paragraphs. How Pieck is suggesting to go back to being friends with Eren. And also the way you described the feeling of being hollow instead of crying. God everything was just hitting (Y/N) all at once with missing Eren, then getting threatened by his fans, and then the insecurity and jealousy over seeing how intimate Eren was with Mikasa in the MV even though she knew he was just doing his job. And how there’s going to be more jobs like this to come. It really does wear away at your self-esteem.

Yikes for the next chapter. How is Eren gonna take it once he sees Armin around you with how he reacted to you being so excited to see Floch perform…? Eren was right about to knock Jean’s two front teeth out for flirting with the reader.

Poor baby Armin. Have courage, my love.

And poor baby Eren. please for the love of god just speak up and tell the reader of your undying love directly. DIRECTLY AND TO OUR FACE PLEASE! No more hinting at it. Say “I love you more than anything in this world, (Y/N). You’re everything to me and more.” Please don’t tell me once Y/N starts hanging out more with Armin that Eren will sleep with Mikasa. I don’t think my heart could handle that.

And a couple final notes. How did Provo’s date with that other co-worker from a different floor go? Why is Jean following you on Instagram? Why isn’t Reiner following you on Instagram? That’s kinda cold in my opinion. Is it because the reader and Eren don’t go to church enough??? 😤😂😂

Will we get to see more interactions between the reader and Christa? I mean she did say she wanted to be our friend… And Connie as a YouTuber is such an interesting concept. I feel like you would have to do an article on his rise to fame and then him investing on the side and becoming a multi millionaire by accident.

Just wanted to remind you that you’re an amazing writer, Kana. Like this chapter made me so mf sad and also excited to see where you take the rest of this series.

But please remember these things. Please don’t ever feel pressured to pump out works as fast as possible. Your health should always be your first priority. And you’re super super talented and thank you so much for sharing this story with us.

THIS MESSAGE OMG

dude you're the best i swear like how long did it take you to write this long ass message? I FUCKING LOVE EVERY WORD YOU PUT IN THANK YOU SO MUCH

okay now let me answer your questions

yes porco is 25/26 years old in this fic. he has dated three times before, and they all left him because, in their words, "I feel like you're getting too attached? and no, Porco, I'm not seeing him, he's just a co-worker--could you stop being so unreasonably jealous all the time?!" i feel like his character is a bit similar to eren, but a bit more aggressive sometimes. he's more possessive too. but he's learned his mistakes and he's a precious little baby boi okay i love him

armin's not a big time model. he doesn't have his face shown everywhere like Eren. he doesn't even have social media accounts, never made one. he only got the job as one of those ferragamo's models because his dad has something to do with it behind the scenes. he's so different in real life than how he is in front of the cameras too so he's almost unrecognizable. he's going to quit his modeling job once his contract is over because what he wants to do in life is actually to become a writer.

and yes the reader will end up together with eren because this is an eren x reader fic lol but will they be happy together? hmm... we'll see...

your prediction about eren giving up his music career or writing songs about mikasa? close, but no, baby.

you'll get to see y/n asking eren "why didn't you tell me anything about the mv?" in the next chapter so you'll see his response then

eren's gonna be so jealous, yes, but friendly reminder here, eren is actually quite fond of Armin. he's one of the few people eren enjoys having conversations with. he finds armin to be genuine and kind. he considers him as a friend, though he wouldn't admit it out loud.

please read the beginning of chapter 7 again to see eren's POV. there's a reason why he can't say "I love you, i want to be with you, please be with me," he's too afraid of making decisions.

porco's date with the cute girl went well. they had sex, but that's just about it cause he's not into relationships.

reiner doesn't have IG account, or twitter. Jean is the only one in empire who does.

aww man i would love to bring historia back into the story but i don't know where to fit her in. i'll think about it

connie as a youtuber hahaha yeah i remember you mentioned that. I have some ideas but i don't think i'm gonna add him into the story (cause this is already too long 😭😭😭) but we'll see

THANKS SO MUCH for this message, love, as well as these sweet compliments you gave me! you made me so happy! i look forward to seeing you in my inbox again!

#take care of yourself baby!#have a great weekend!#you're so precious I LOVE YOU #the last song #The Last Song Canon

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dingdongitsbees · 2 years

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omg… chapter 19 actually had me near bawling because of the ending… i’m so excited for the next chapter, but please take your time and don’t overwork yourself !! but seriously the way you write ‘black-eyes susan’ with such detail and attention makes it that much more immersive and even more heartbreaking. i love the way you changed up the original story of the star-crossed lovers from district 12; your creativity with the story never fails to blow my mind. the whole thing with the titan servant has me hella intrigued. i just started reading friday but that’s all i’ve been thinking about since then ahaha. i’m kind of hoping some of the story goes in the same direction as the original hunger games series ONLY BECAUSE i don’t know how much more heartbreak i can handle bruh 😭😭 i’ve gotten so attached to the main cast idk what i’d do if anything happened to levi lmao. each chapter always has me hanging on the edge of my seat ahhh

anyways, i hope you get some rest and have a good rest of your day/night! you’re seriously such an amazing and skilled writer and i’m so incredibly glad i discovered your work :))

ah thank you so much! the ending was certainly a bit of a doozy huh 💀

and yeah i certainly do need a better structure of writing these chapters 😭 i end up not writing for a month and then jamming it all out in a couple of days which is Not Good for several reasons so im hoping to stretch my writing out a bit so i end up happier with the result as well 🤝😤

but yes thank you! i am trying my best to change it up a bit so it isnt as predictable though of course for the plot to work at all i need to keep some things but i hope i can at least put it in a different flavour

but yes that means things should ~kinda~ go the same direction as the original so you can get some consolation there 😌

and yeah the main cast... everyday im debating how many to kill... and how is always the best part hehe

but thank you again for reading! hope you enjoy where it's going :)!

#is this enough death #everyday im like even though people will already be mad at me for who i will end up killing #but ive also got a bunch of non death related scenes which will also fill in the pain gaps...#yall ready for more flashbacks! :D #i love using yall even though im australian #askers: saturn #black eyed susan #personb asks

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khaleesiofalicante · 2 years

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So, last week was busy. But I’m finally done with exams!! And next week is the last of the semester so we are already just wasting our time by being there. We aren't doing shit and the assigments that we have dont really have a value for our grades, so they are crazy if they think I care about them :)

Today I finished watching a series with my sister called "The summer I turned pretty", and god I am so bisexual!!! Its just... They are all... AJGDKSJD

Do you ever see someone sooo pretty you are almost angry by it?? But in awe?? That was me through the whole series😂

Anyway, now I need to catch up to Stanger Things and I am fucking terrified :) my cousin (the only one in my family that watches it) literally called me and asked me if I had watched it already lmao. Now I need to do it or she is gonna kill me.

But good news is that on the meantime, she is going to watch Heartstopper!!! My purpose in life is to make everyone watch it and I am doing a great job😌

I didn't have time to read this chapter. Again. The homophobia returns smh😤 Its late, but I dont really wanna go to sleep, so instead I will write something for a little bit ;) I've been getting inspiration for many scenes, so here is a little snippet:

"You know what they say, science never sleeps!" He said, as he got back to working on some weird object on the table.

"But common sense certainly does," muttered Asher, and then he added louder. "Are you sure this isn't going to explode?"

"Well, I'm 70% sure it won’t, but you never know!" Einar replied.

He waited for the sarcastic tone, but it never came. He even looked... Excited?

"That is a joke, right?" Please let it be a joke!

"Umm, yeah, Let's go with that." He did seem a bit worried now, but he was still focused on the thing between his hands.

What had he gotten himself into? And what was that sound that came from the now clock-looking object?

"Maybe there is actually a very valid reason they don’t let spells and science mix." The other boy pointed out in a casual tone, as if it wasn’t a really cryptic thing to say at this exact moment!

I'm hoping I can find more time to get to work on this after my semester ends!!

Byeee!! See you soon, love!!💚 And plesee take care!!! 20k chapters are only legal if you do something nice for yourself too. I dont make the rules😌

Noahhhhhh.

Congratulations on finishing and surviving your exams! What a bad bitch you are!

I finished Stranger Things. Let me know your thoughts 👀

I saw your ask and started watching The Summer I Turned Pretty. I don't like it much (not my kind of show) But I'm in ep 05. I had an off day so I decided to stay in bed and binge a show. So thank you for the recommendation and push <3

I loved your snippet so much. I see that Asher carries the brain cell in the group? Must be protected at all costs!!

#noah boo thang

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