#i did not expect the ending BCJSJV

[lume-nosity]

its two things both 150 words

ok this is the first one a short story

Leo awoke with an enormous feeling of panic. Cold and scared, he searched for his friends, only to notice that he was in the Arctic tundra. He cries knowing all of this could've been avoided if he had listed to his father's warning. Leo was instructed not to go inside the garage, his father warned him "once you open the door you'll be teleported to different places". Leo had the fantastic idea to adventure around the world before his father returned from out of town. As he slowly opened the door to the garage, an exhilarating feeling began to tingle all over his body as beams of light emitted from his dad's teleportation device. It's getting darker and dangerously colder he knew he would have to start a fire before he freezes to death, and suddenly he hears crunching in the snow. Scared he grabs a lighter from his pocket and lights a stick and searches around only to see it's a dog, a brown and white husky with light blue eyes. The husky starts to snarl and growl at Leo, Leo reaches his hand into his pocket and pulls out a bag of chips. "Maybe I could give this to the dog?" Leo thought to himself as he opened the bag and threw it at the husky, The husky opened his mouth and dropped a map. Leo looks at the map confused he asks the dog if he wants him to help look for his owner the dog nods and barks happily. "Ok we'll set out in the morning," said as he began to make a small campfire. Leo wakes up to the dog barking, and he felt something breathing on him, still half asleep he tries to pet whatever is breathing on top of him only to see it's a polar bear towering over him getting ready to eat. Leo shoots up and tries to run away but the bear is faster and drags his arm into a cave. The bear threw him on the ground and then left the cave growling at Leo. Finally, having the chance to assess his arm, Leo felt that it was bleeding and had gashes, to stop the bleeding Leo ripped apart the fabric from his shirt sleeve to tie around his arm. Looking around Leo still doesn't see the bear anywhere, the husky came into the cave to search for Leo, and after finding him the dog jumped on him happily and started to lick his wounds. He starts to explore the cave only to find a secret opening. He enters the opening to see shimmery gold and jewels, Leo brilliantly thought to himself to take some of the jewels hugging the dog who he called 'chip' he touched one of the jewels and incredibly ended up back in his father's garage. He wakes up to chip licking his face and wagging his tail, he sees that he's back home, so he runs into his bedroom to shower and deal with his wound he knew his father would be furious when he returned and found out what he had done.

i passed with 100% its bad but i passed so

okay now this is such an adorable story omg 😭 i’ll read your other one later, but i’ll say my thoughts on this nice story

i like how in the beginning you jumped right into the story with how leo woke up in beads of sweat along with being alone and paranoid like ‘oh shit oh fuck i should’ve listened to my dad’ but leo is a curious one, so who could blame him? and plus his dad’s out of town so yeah he’d be bored and decide to snoop around the garage.

i also like how when leo sees a random husky as he got isekai’d there, he decided to give it some chips. there was mutual agreement to help find its owner, but at the ending, the twist is that the dog’s owner was really leo. or, the dog got isekai’d with leo when they came into contact with the jewelry??? i’m going with option one because it’s cute and a good twist imo

vv cute story, you should be a writer frfr!

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