MAD. I have so many things i love abt your fics.
in no order:
The panick from elotes when he sees charlie die from dehydration and he decides āfuck emotional maturityā !!!!! OH GOD ITS SO GOOD
I think CONSTANTLY about when charlie was like āyou dont have to call me slime, it isnt, like, reservedā and they talk and etoiles goes āoh and you can say my name rightā and slime goes WHAT. Oh god i think abt it like daily and have a giggle
In fake it till you make it when charlie is calling etoiles all the nicknames and antoine just pretends like nothing is happening ā¤ļøā¤ļø
on the topic of fitymi, THE KISS GLASS FACTORY SCENE. RENT FUCKING FREE. The way you wrote it and then THE COPS KNOWING LMAOOO IT DIDNT WORK. Roier chanting āmi dinero!ā Bc he won the bet is CHEF KISS
when etoiles casually kisses charlie and leaves, philās reaction when he realizes is GOLD KKKKK. āIs that why charlie has been blowing up my phone?ā And etoiles going āi kissed and now i am tellingā AGH
The intro (?) scene to immi where etoiles is just like āits okay its okay its okay he doesnt need items, hes really doing just fineāā so he doesnāt rip charlies armor off where hes standing is HILARIOUS
āHe is here. He is ravenousā then charlie dying to eater of suns was my favorite bc ITS SO IN CHARWCTER LMAO. HE WOULD.
How etoiles breaks a million avocados as baghera pulls out all the arrows from charlie. You can //feel// the need to protect coursing through his veins and poor bro has to make dinner
How youve written TWO scenes where etoiles brain fails upon imagining charlie in eyeliner. I KNOW WHAT YOU ARE (i am too)
Not a apecific scene, but the (in immi) motif of charlie not feeling like enough so he always has to bring //something//.
GOD THE ENTIRE MOST RECENT CHAPTER OF IMMI. STAN FERAL HYBRID. STAN THEIR ONE SAFE PERSON. HAHAIXHSNAJAJJSUXIXIWWNKEODOEPQPEI
The immi scene where etoiles tells charlie about the bug :(
God how //unserious// charlie is about being hurt (and probably etoiles but they have different ways of unserious). Its so true to his character but i still wanna just SHAKE HIM so he doesnāt crack jokes //while heās bleeding out//
The scene where etoiles rushes charlie back. It feels so rushed but not like you wanted to get it over with, justā¦ like everything is a blur to etoiles while hes doing this. Like he remembers the steps he took but not what he felt when he took them. (Also how he gives himself five seconds to scream into a pillow. Felt that. STAN.)
Him asking for two cookies from phil bc he is āfading fastā and when phil shows up he pretty much (albiet accidently) tunes oht phil bc he //cant look away from charlieā//
That stupid fucking cod elotes put in the barh idk if it has a name but I have a love/hate relation with it. I wonder if they kept it.
āIts not a waste with youā KILL ME THEYRE IN LOVE
When etoiles tells him to say if he feels hurt, then charlie starts crying and e is like āeh! Im so sorry what did i do you didnt say anythingāā and charlies like eueuue youre so nice
Charlie purringā¦ yesā¦ YESSSā¦. (Love it when anything and everything hybrid purrs š)
āMy cucumberā ā¦.
When charlie pretends to be etoiles boyfriend to get into the hospital (fitymi) and the nurses are like uh this guy named charlie- and elotes goes āhehehehhhh yeahh charlie. Heās my broā and the nurses take that as dating (BECAUSE WHAT ELSE IS IT????)
sorry tjis was so long i just had a chance to rant abt your writing and BY GODS NAME DID I TAKE IT
ši hope you fee better
DUDE ššš
This is the best thing Iāve ever read. People always comment on chapters and fics in that moment they read them usually, so Iām always curious what sticks with people weeks later, what occupies their brain again and again long after readingā¦
Reading all this had me smiling so fucking big it Hurts oh my good you are so sweet dude
To answer your question: Charlie kept the cod Paul! It lives in the little pond he has in the greenhouse. It was supposed to be mentioned during the birthday chapters, but I reworked a lot of content and it not longer fit nicely so I just took it out for now. The feesh will be seen againā¦
The nicknames in fake it were my favorite part. I got like three sentences in and was likeā hold on Ideaā
And yeah Charlie giving things to Ćtoiles in immi, that comes a personal habit. Qcharlie has been broken down time and time again that this amount of unwavering kindness feels illegal to accept. Heās had to pay the price for so much, so sure this too right? Ćtoiles wants to shake him <3
YEHAHHH THE NAME THING IN IMMI!!! Man I needed a way to ween Ćtoiles into calling him Charlie that was just causal cause thatās Boring, and I wanted to acknowledge the face that irl, ccChatlie didnāt know how to pronounce his name at first either lmao
i like Charlie in eyeliner, sue meā¦.
One of my favorite chapters might just be A Bandage. From the other islanders to the cooking to karaokeduo to the Chittering!!!!! Idk that one holds a special place in my heart <3
Also fun fact: I had like, 4 other fake dating scenarios I jotted down for fake it but I was worried the fic would turn into immi which also started as a 5+1 so I scrapped some ideas and kept a it short and sweet. kinda regret it and wish I could rewrite it but I still like what it turned in to
Man reading my own work through your comments is really nice. Gives me a better appreciation for what Iām creating haha
Thank you sm for all this, it means a lot and itās never too long trust me <333
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